Romance Psycho Lovers

[RagVi Singh]

Episode 15 posted.
Let me know — did it hit… or miss?

 

[Raj_sharma]

RagVi Singh baby sleeping

 

[RagVi Singh]

RagVi Singh baby sleeping

Yesss

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Episode 14 – Sector 9

Ek aur murder
Apan soch raha hai ki agar anamika darling ne aisi story na likhi hoti to kya aisa koi sanki killer paida hota?? Kya kisi ke pichhwade me aisa karne/karwane ki chull hoti?? To kya ye kahna chahiye ki is sabki responsible apan ki anamika darling hai?? Bole to wo chhokri jo every time calm rahti hai? Bole to sundarta ki wo moorat jise kisi bhi situation se jhaanth barabar bhi fark nahi padta?? Bole to zero attitude rakhne wali wo hottyyy jisne is update me pahli baar apan log dikhaya ki wo smile karna bhi jaanti hai?? Agar kisi ne aisa socha to apan uski cuteness laal kar dega Wo Arnav ka khuleaam murder kar de tab bhi apan uske favour me rahega...bcoz of she is my darling

Well, is story ko sabse badi khubsurti ye hai ki update ke start hote hi lawda tension bhi start ho jata hai. Short words me create kiye scenes sab kuch clearly feel karwa dete hain ki lawda kya chal rela hai ya kya hone wala hai...siway is baat ke ki apan ki darling ka dil apan ke liye dhadak rela hai ya us jhathuhe arnav ke liye

Waise, agar kavya ki entry na hui hoti to anamika darling ko smile dekhne ko na milti, aisa is liye kyoki kahi na kahi uske aane se anamika thoda insecure to hui hai aur isi insecurity ki vajah se do teen baar apne real character ke oposite ja kar usne bina matlab ka reaction diya hai joki iske pahle wo sochti bhi nahi thi. Bole to fully controlled and calm me rahne wali ladki zara si baat par insecure hone jaisa react karne lagi...aakhir tumhe ye kya ho gaya hai baby

Aur ye jhathuha arnav...apan ki darling ko apne sath le jane se mana kar raha tha, bole to anamika ko chavanni....chavanni..naam kahi sunela hai apan....kaun bola raha tha kise bol rela tha ....areeee yaad aaya Shivani guptaa ko... Apna scoda bol rela tha chavanni.. Khair...to apan bol raha tha ki jhathuha arnav apan ki darling anamika chavanni bhar ka attitude dikha raha tha...hatt lawda Matlab had hai yaar...saari duniya jaanti hai ki bhaav khane wala kaam sirf ladkiya karti hain...but yaha ye lawda kha rela tha, lagta hai upar wala mala khisak gayla hai iska

Khair apne ko kya...Bole to apan to khush hai ki iske aise behaviour se ghanta anamika patne wali nahi hai, utla isi ka kalyaan hone wala hai...(Remember...present me kya haalat hai uski )

Idhar satkele killer ne ek aur murder kar diyela hai...ya ye kahe ki suicide karwa diyela hai. Matlab had hai yaad....kisi ki mentality ka kaun aise faayda uthata hai yaar?? Waise kahna to nahi chahiye par agar ye mahaan kaam hai to aise mahaan kaam karne par lawda kaun itrata hai be

Beshak saari maanav jaati ka kalyaan kar do ya karwa do but apan ki anamika darling ko badnaam to na karo yaar...kitti masoom hai wo...kitti calm hai...sapne me cheenti tak ko nahi maar sakti aur tum saale jhathuhe uska character kharab karne par tule ho, hatt bsdk

Upar se lawda koi clue tak nahi chhoda apne khilaf, baaki sab chhod diya..but sirf ye ki murder suicide prove ho, kya hai ye Matlab yaar kya chahte ho tum....Arnav aur Anamika ka taanka nahi bhidne dena chahte??? Fir to thik hai...yahich chahta hai apan

Waise apan ko maza tab aaya jab uska msg aaya

He was only the first.

Pause.

Phir ek aur line aayi.

I’m curious how the second one will behave.

Room suddenly bahut zyada silent ho gaya.

Arnav ne phone slowly pocket mein rakh diya.

Bole to tabiyat se maarne pe tula hai banda...aur ye baat anamika darling bhi samajh reli hai but wo kar bhi kya sakti hai.... afterall she is innocent

Note:- Achha laga ki Raghu darling ne is update me thoda hinglish font use kiya, warna to angreji hi angreji jhaad reli thi chhokri, bole to angrejan ban gayli thi. Halaaki apan ko angreji se problem nahi hai but apan ka kahna hai ki hinglish me likhne se aap properly cheezo ko feelings ke sath bata paate ho aur logo samajh aaya hai to wo zyada connect hote hain..Anyway update was amazing as always...aur story ko thoda jaldi end karo kyoki apan next month se yaha nazar nahi aayega

 

[RagVi Singh]

Episode 15 – Fracture Point​

Sector 9 ka apartment ab sirf ek crime scene nahi lag raha tha, balki ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ne cheezein khatam nahi ki thi… balki carefully conclude ki thi, jaise har movement, har pause, har silence pehle se decide ho.

Kavya gloves pehne hue victim ke paas khadi thi, uski nazar body ke placement par thi, angle par thi, aur uske tone me wohi clinical certainty thi jo hamesha hoti hai jab cheezein uske hisaab se samajh aa rahi hoti hain, “Entry clean hai, koi struggle nahi, koi forced movement nahi… psychological push ho sakta hai, lekin end decision uska khud ka hai, this is assisted suicide.”

“Not assisted.” Anamika ki awaaz loud nahi thi, par usme ek ajeeb sa finality tha, jaise woh argue nahi kar rahi ho, sirf correct kar rahi ho, “Directed.”

Kavya ne seedha uski taraf dekha, “Same thing.”

“Same outcome,” Anamika ne dheere se jawab diya, uski aankhen room ke corners ko scan kar rahi thi, jaise woh insaan nahi, pattern dekh rahi ho, “Different author.”

Arnav dono ke beech khada tha, bina kuch bole, lekin usse feel ho raha tha ki yeh simple disagreement nahi hai, yeh control aur interpretation ka clash hai, aur dono apni jagah se hilne wale nahi hain.

“Let’s stay with evidence,” Kavya ne thoda edge ke saath kaha, “Speculation se case solve nahi hota.”

“Pattern se hota hai,” Anamika ne bina uski taraf dekhe reply diya.

Kavya ne exhale kiya, irritation control karte hue, “Tumhe har jagah pattern dikhta hai.”

“Tumhe jahan dikhta hai wahan ignore kar deti ho,” Anamika ne seedha bola, aur iss baar usne uski taraf dekha, ek second ke liye, bas utna hi ki baat land ho jaye.

Atmosphere tight ho gaya, aur Arnav ne us tension ko aur stretch hone se pehle cut kiya, “Laptop.”

Bedroom me ab bhi wahi stillness thi, jaise room ne resistance kiya hi nahi ho, jaise usne jo bhi hua use accept kar liya ho, Arnav ne system dubara open kiya, same files, same entries, same tone… lekin iss baar Anamika closer aa gayi, bina hesitation ke, bina permission ke, jaise woh already iss jagah ka part ho.

“Scroll,” usne quietly kaha.

Arnav ne next entry open ki.

He says pain repeats. It doesn’t end. It passes on.

Line simple thi, lekin uska effect simple nahi tha, Anamika ke fingers bilkul still ho gaye, koi dramatic reaction nahi, koi visible crack nahi, par Arnav ne notice kiya — uska focus shift ho gaya tha.

“Next,” usne kaha.

He told me control isn’t taught. It’s inherited.

Is baar reaction aur subtle tha, lekin irreversible, jaise kisi ne ek locked door ke andar se latch hila diya ho.

“Anamika?” Arnav ne dheere se bola, par usne jawab nahi diya, uski nazar screen par nahi thi ab, woh kahin aur thi, andar.

Kavya ek step aage badhi, “You’ve heard this before?”

Pause lamba tha, lekin toot gaya, “Yes.”

Ek word, lekin usme weight tha.

“Where?” Kavya ne push kiya.

Anamika ne aankhen band nahi ki, na hi usne nazar hatai, bas usne answer delay kiya, jaise woh decide kar rahi ho ki kitna bolna hai, “Jab koi cheez tumhe baar-baar sikhayi jaati hai… it stops sounding like an idea… it becomes a rule.”

Arnav ne dheere se poocha, “Kisne sikhaya?”

Is baar silence aur heavy tha, aur phir bina build-up ke woh line girti hai jo room ko change kar deti hai, “My mother.”

Kavya ka expression instantly shift hua, “That’s a serious conclusion based on phrasing.”

Anamika ne uski taraf dekha, calm, lekin ab woh calm surface jaisa nahi tha, uske neeche movement thi, “Yeh phrasing nahi hai.”

“Language repeat hoti hai,” Kavya ne counter kiya.

“Exact language repeat nahi hoti,” Anamika ne seedha jawab diya, phir ek chhota sa pause, aur woh line jo sirf Arnav ke liye nahi, poore scene ke liye turning point ban gayi, “This isn’t imitation… this is memory.”

Arnav ka focus us par fix ho gaya, “Tum keh rahi ho ki jo bhi yeh kar raha hai… woh tumhari mother ko jaanta hai?”

Anamika ne sirf ek chhota sa head tilt kiya, “Main keh rahi hoon ki jisne yeh banaya hai… woh usse connect hai.”

Kavya ne turant reject kiya, “Ya tum apni past ko iss case me insert kar rahi ho.”

“Ya tum usse ignore kar rahi ho kyunki woh fit nahi hota,” Anamika ne bina volume badhaye bola.

Ab yeh argument nahi tha, yeh exposure tha, aur Arnav ne usse yahin rok diya, “Enough.”

Silence wapas aaya, lekin iss baar woh stable nahi tha, fractured tha.

Anamika peeche hati, distance create karte hue, jaise usse suddenly space chahiye ho, “I need to go.”

Kavya instantly react hui, “No, you don’t, tum ab iss case ka part ho.”

“Exactly,” Anamika ne calmly kaha.

Arnav uske paas aaya, “Where?”

Usne jawab nahi diya, sirf usse dekha, aur woh enough tha, kyunki Arnav samajh gaya ki woh us jagah ja rahi hai jahan woh khud bhi interfere nahi kar sakta.

“Yeh safe nahi hai,” usne last attempt kiya.

“Safe kab tha?” usne seedha poocha.

Aur uss moment me Arnav ke paas do options the — stop her, ya trust kare… aur usne dusra choose kiya, usne pocket se apni car keys nikali aur uski taraf badha di, “Take it.”

Kavya ne disbelief me uski taraf dekha, “Arnav—”

Lekin usne usse ignore kiya, “Go.”

Anamika ne keys li, unki fingers ek second ke liye touch hui, cold, controlled, lekin usme ek unsaid tension tha jo dono ne acknowledge nahi kiya, aur bina kuch bole woh nikal gayi.

Door band hua, aur uske baad room ka balance shift ho gaya.

“You just let her walk into something we don’t understand,” Kavya ne kaha.

“She wasn’t staying,” Arnav ne seedha jawab diya.

“That’s not procedure.”

“That’s reality.”

Kavya ne usse dekha, thoda zyada dhyaan se iss baar, “You’re not objective.”

“No,” Arnav ne bina hesitation ke kaha.

Aur uske baad woh dono wapas kaam par aa gaye, kyunki ab ignore karna option nahi tha, Meera ko bulaaya gaya, laptop open hua, files spread hui, aur Kavya ne structured tone me start kiya, “Let’s strip this down — victim vulnerable, external influence, repeated language, emotional conditioning.”

“Target?” Meera ne poocha.

“Not the victim,” Arnav ne bina delay ke kaha.

Kavya ne uski taraf dekha, “Then who?”

Pause chhota tha, lekin heavy, “Anamika.”

Room quiet ho gaya.

“Why her?” Meera ne softly poocha.

Arnav ne socha, phir dheere se bola, “Because she doesn’t react the way she’s supposed to.”

“Controlled psyche,” Meera ne add kiya.

Kavya ne connect kiya, “So this isn’t about hurting her…”

“It’s about testing her,” Arnav ne complete kiya, phir ek aur line jo aur dark thi, “Or recreating her.”

"and what profit she can get from this" kavya ne doubt express kiya

Silence deeper ho gaya, aur iss baar kisi ne usse break nahi kiya.

Jab woh wapas Arnav ke apartment pahuche, door unlocked tha, lights off thi, aur andar ka stillness normal nahi tha, Arnav ne dheere se andar step liya, “Anamika?” lekin koi response nahi aaya, room waise hi tha, lekin presence missing thi.

Kavya ne dheere se kaha, “She didn’t come back.”

Arnav ne jawab nahi diya, kyunki usse already pata tha.

Uska phone vibrate hua, aur bina kisi doubt ke usne screen dekhi — unknown number.

Usne message open kiya.

You let her go.

Uska grip tighten hua.

Next line aayi.

Good.

Pause deliberate tha.

Phir last message screen par appear hua.

Now she’s not yours to observe… she’s mine to finish.

Aur iss baar silence wapas nahi aaya.

Kyuki iss baar… game shift ho chuka tha.

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stay tuned
next episode soon

 

[RagVi Singh]

Week main kitne update ayenge

Happy birthday

And congratulations for new Journey of XF...

Awesome starting please keep writing

I hope story disappointing nahi hogi

Congratulations and best of luck

और जो भी लिखना, व्यूज और रिव्यूज के चक्कर में मत लिखना, बस दिल से लिखना।

Ye kya bawasir hai RagVi Singh
1 bhi update nahi aya abhi tak?

Nice ones Raghvi.. finally likhna start to kiya dobara se.. excited to see how it unfolds..
Keep writing

Padhne ke baad jab maine laptop se nazar hataai, toh kamre mein ek ajeeb sa sannata tha. Bilkul waisa hi sannata jiske baare mein Arnav apne sessions mein baat karta hai. Aapne shuruat mein ek sawal poocha tha: "Agar pagal hi pyar kar le toh?" Iska jawab aapne shabdon se nahi, balki us 'disinfectant ki smell' aur 'perfectly aligned cushions' ke zariye diya hai. Khamoshi ka yeh saundarya shaastra likhna kisi aam kalam ke bas ki baat nahi. Cheekhein toh koi bhi kaghaz par utaar sakta hai, par sannate ko itna deafening bana dena sach mein kamaal hai.

Main hamesha sochta tha ki thriller aur dark romance ke beech ki boundary kahan khatam hoti hai. Aapki kahani padhne ke baad samajh aaya ki wo boundary Anamika ke high heels ke neeche kabki dab kar toot chuki hai. Yeh kahani ordinary lovers ki nahi hai. Yeh unki kahani hai jo apni khamoshi ko ek doosre ki bhasha mein translate karna jaante hain.

Arnav ka character apne aap mein ek walking contradiction hai. Ek aisa forensic expert jo maut mein bhi symmetry dhoondhta hai. Arnav duniya ko apne clinical lens se dekhta hai, par Anamika us lens par padi ek aisi dhool ban chuki hai jise woh saaf nahi karna chahta.

Aur sach kahun toh Arnav ki thodi si aisi haalat dekh kar ek halki si hasi bhi aati hai. Bechara apni forensic lab mein baith kar junoon aur obsession ko test tube mein daal kar measure karne ki koshish kar raha hai. Use lagta hai har cheez ka logic hota hai, par jab pyaar pagalpan ban jaye toh DNA aur blood spatter ki reports fail ho hi jaati hain.

Ab aate hain Anamika par. What a wonderfully terrifying creation she is! Jab society us par ungli uthati hai aur media trial shuru karti hai, toh woh maafi nahi maangti. Saadat Hasan Manto ne ek baar kaha tha, "Main society ke kapde nahi utaarta, woh to pehle se hi nangi hai." Anamika ka kirdar bilkul yahi karta hai. Log uski kitabon se isliye darte hain kyunki unhein unme apna aks dikh jata hai. Uski "I don't mind discomfort, it makes people honest" wali line seedha literature ke kisi classic piece ki tarah hit karti hai.

Aapka writing style bilkul ek sharp scalpel ki tarah hai. Koi extra emotional drama nahi, koi unnecessary rona dhona nahi. Jis tarah se aapne 'The Violence of Quiet' ko portray kiya hai, woh mind blowing hai. Aksar pop culture mein obsession ko bahut loud aur tacky banakar dikhaya jata hai, jahan log kaanch todte hain ya cheekhte hain. Par aapne dikhaya ki asli obsession kitna disciplined hota hai. Woh perfectly banaye hue bed, neatly aligned printer paper aur ek cup coffee mein chhipa hota hai.

Episode 9 aate aate aapne kahani ko jis naye mod par lakar khada kiya hai, usne aage kya hoga, yeh sochne par majboor kar diya. "Pain is inherited" ek aisi line hai jo kisi bhi reader ko andar tak hila sakti hai. Woh teesra insaan jo Anamika ke aesthetic ko chura raha hai, usne is psycho romance ko ek dark existential chess game mein badal diya hai.

Friedrich Nietzsche ne ek bahut mashhoor baat likhi thi, "And if you gaze long enough into an abyss, the abyss will gaze back into you." Arnav ke case mein toh bechare ke saath tragedy yeh hui ki abyss ne usse personally WhatsApp message karke chhedna bhi shuru kar diya hai!

Ek writer ke taur par aapki sabse badi jeet yeh hai ki aapne apne readers ko ek moment ke liye bhi comfortable nahi hone diya. "This story does not seek your comfort" sirf Anamika ki website ki line nahi thi, yeh aapka apne readers ke liye ek khula challenge tha. Aur aap us challenge mein poori tarah jeeti hain. Aapne humein uss forensic lab ki thandak aur uss green room ki suffocating tension dono mehsoos karwayi.

Keep writing, you are really good at it.

@RagVi Singh​

Iss logic se chale toh mere me kitne reactions hone chahiye?

Babe, sabse pehle to ye kahna padega ki last update me jo maine tujhe point bola tha, us par tune dhyan diya. Is update me usme improvement bhi clearly dekhne ko milli hai. Ye dekhkar achha laga ki tum readers ke reviews aur feedback ko value karti ho.

Ab update ki baat karein to update kaafi interesting tha. Shuruwat hi ek ajeeb si khamoshi se hoti hai, jo instantly feel karwa deti hai ki aage kuch important hone wala hai. Wo jo silent opening hai wo story ka mood set kar deti hai.

Arnav aur Anamika ki convo bhi kaafi natural thi. Faltu koi dialogue baazi nhi. Anamika ka shaant rahna aur situation ko samajhna fir decision lena uske strong character ko dikhata hai. Arnav usse rokne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Anamika ka bina argue kiye seedha bol dena ki agar koi uske ghar tak aa chuka hai, to wo is kahani ka hissa ban chuki hai. It shows ke wo in sab ko leke kitni serious hai. Aur phir Arnav bhi maan hi jaata hai — waise bhi bechare ladke zyada der tak mana nahi kar paate.

Waise Kavya bhi ek reason ho sakti hai jis wajah se Anamika Arnav ko akele nahi jaane dena chahti. Pata nahi dono milkar kya kar jaaye. Aur haan, aaj ye bhi pata chal gaya ki Anamika baby smile bhi karti hai. Mujhe to laga tha ye bhi tumhari tarah bas sada sa muh bana ke hi ghoomti rahti hai.

Sector 9 ka description bhi tumne kaafi achha diya hai. Purani buildings, narrow galiyan aur thoda dark sa environment — ye sab story ko aur mysterious bana dete hai. Aisi psychological ya suspense stories me location ka description bahut important hota hai. Jab ham us jagah ko visualize kar pata hai, to poora scene aankhon ke saamne zinda ho jaata hai.

Apartment wala scene update ka sabse strong part tha. Wahan ek jawan ladke ki dead body padi hai. Wrist par gahre aur precise cuts. Chehra bilkul shaant. Room me koi tod-phod nahi. Ye sab dekhkar clearly feel hota hai ki ye koi simple suicide nahi hai. Lagta hai jaise kisi ne usse mentally us point tak push kiya ho. Aur sach kahun to aisa real life me bhi hota hai. Koi kisi ko directly nahi maarta — pehle dheere-dheere uske dimaag me ghusta hai, uski soch ko influence karta hai. Phir ek waqt aisa aata hai jab insaan khud hi ye sochne lagta hai ki shayad ye uska apna decision hai. Ye angle story ko aur jyada dark aur psychological bana deta hai.

Phone messages wala part bhi kaafi impactful tha. Victim aur unknown person ke beech jo conversation hoti hai, usse clear ho jata hai ki koi dheere-dheere uske dimaag ko manipulate kar raha tha. Jo log manipulate karte hain, wo aise hi kaam karte hain. Pehle insaan ko special feel karwate hain, uske akelepan ka fayda uthate hain. Phir dheere-dheere usse apne control me le aate hain. Aur sabse dangerous baat ye hoti hai ki ye sab itna smoothly hota hai ki saamne wala insaan samajh hi nahi pata ki wo kisi aur ke influence me aa chuka hai.

Sabse shocking moment tab aata hai jab phone ki gallery me Anamika ki photos aur interviews milte hain. Isse pata chalta hai ki victim usse lekar obsessed tha. Ye twist kaafi achha tha, kyunki yahi se Anamika directly is case se connect ho jaati hai.

End wala part bhi kaafi strong tha. Jab unknown person Arnav ko message karta hai aur uski habits tak predict kar leta hai, tab Arnav ko samajh aa jata hai ki uspar nazar rakhi ja rahi hai. Waise ye baat shayad Anamika ko pehle se pata thi, lekin usne Arnav ko bataya nahi. Isse ye bhi clear ho jata hai ki ye koi normal criminal nahi hai. Ye banda logon ko observe karta hai, unhe samajhta hai aur phir unke dimaag se khelta hai.

Mirror par likhi line aur us unknown person ka last message ye hint dete hain ki ye sirf shuruwat hai. Aage shayad aise aur bhi cases aane wale hain.

Baaki overall tum bahut achi likh rahi ho. Story dheere-dheere build ho rahi hai, lekin tension lagataar bani rahti hai. Aur sabse interesting baat ye hai ki yahan killer kisi weapon ka use nahi kar raha. Wo sirf apne ideas, manipulation aur psychological control se logon ko apne jaal me phasa raha hai. Ye concept story ko aur bhi disturbing aur engaging bana deta hai.

Teri writing, pacing aur dialogues sab on point hain. Ab bas next episode ka wait rahega.

Good luck RagVi Singh

Hehe!!!! I cant take the names unfortunately as it will against the policy. And thanks for ur confirmation that u wont leave this story in middle.

RagVi Singh baby sleeping

Ek aur murder
Apan soch raha hai ki agar anamika darling ne aisi story na likhi hoti to kya aisa koi sanki killer paida hota?? Kya kisi ke pichhwade me aisa karne/karwane ki chull hoti?? To kya ye kahna chahiye ki is sabki responsible apan ki anamika darling hai?? Bole to wo chhokri jo every time calm rahti hai? Bole to sundarta ki wo moorat jise kisi bhi situation se jhaanth barabar bhi fark nahi padta?? Bole to zero attitude rakhne wali wo hottyyy jisne is update me pahli baar apan log dikhaya ki wo smile karna bhi jaanti hai?? Agar kisi ne aisa socha to apan uski cuteness laal kar dega Wo Arnav ka khuleaam murder kar de tab bhi apan uske favour me rahega...bcoz of she is my darling

Well, is story ko sabse badi khubsurti ye hai ki update ke start hote hi lawda tension bhi start ho jata hai. Short words me create kiye scenes sab kuch clearly feel karwa dete hain ki lawda kya chal rela hai ya kya hone wala hai...siway is baat ke ki apan ki darling ka dil apan ke liye dhadak rela hai ya us jhathuhe arnav ke liye

Waise, agar kavya ki entry na hui hoti to anamika darling ko smile dekhne ko na milti, aisa is liye kyoki kahi na kahi uske aane se anamika thoda insecure to hui hai aur isi insecurity ki vajah se do teen baar apne real character ke oposite ja kar usne bina matlab ka reaction diya hai joki iske pahle wo sochti bhi nahi thi. Bole to fully controlled and calm me rahne wali ladki zara si baat par insecure hone jaisa react karne lagi...aakhir tumhe ye kya ho gaya hai baby

Aur ye jhathuha arnav...apan ki darling ko apne sath le jane se mana kar raha tha, bole to anamika ko chavanni....chavanni..naam kahi sunela hai apan....kaun bola raha tha kise bol rela tha ....areeee yaad aaya Shivani guptaa ko... Apna scoda bol rela tha chavanni.. Khair...to apan bol raha tha ki jhathuha arnav apan ki darling anamika chavanni bhar ka attitude dikha raha tha...hatt lawda Matlab had hai yaar...saari duniya jaanti hai ki bhaav khane wala kaam sirf ladkiya karti hain...but yaha ye lawda kha rela tha, lagta hai upar wala mala khisak gayla hai iska

Khair apne ko kya...Bole to apan to khush hai ki iske aise behaviour se ghanta anamika patne wali nahi hai, utla isi ka kalyaan hone wala hai...(Remember...present me kya haalat hai uski )

Idhar satkele killer ne ek aur murder kar diyela hai...ya ye kahe ki suicide karwa diyela hai. Matlab had hai yaad....kisi ki mentality ka kaun aise faayda uthata hai yaar?? Waise kahna to nahi chahiye par agar ye mahaan kaam hai to aise mahaan kaam karne par lawda kaun itrata hai be

Beshak saari maanav jaati ka kalyaan kar do ya karwa do but apan ki anamika darling ko badnaam to na karo yaar...kitti masoom hai wo...kitti calm hai...sapne me cheenti tak ko nahi maar sakti aur tum saale jhathuhe uska character kharab karne par tule ho, hatt bsdk

Upar se lawda koi clue tak nahi chhoda apne khilaf, baaki sab chhod diya..but sirf ye ki murder suicide prove ho, kya hai ye Matlab yaar kya chahte ho tum....Arnav aur Anamika ka taanka nahi bhidne dena chahte??? Fir to thik hai...yahich chahta hai apan

Waise apan ko maza tab aaya jab uska msg aaya

Bole to tabiyat se maarne pe tula hai banda...aur ye baat anamika darling bhi samajh reli hai but wo kar bhi kya sakti hai.... afterall she is innocent

Note:- Achha laga ki Raghu darling ne is update me thoda hinglish font use kiya, warna to angreji hi angreji jhaad reli thi chhokri, bole to angrejan ban gayli thi. Halaaki apan ko angreji se problem nahi hai but apan ka kahna hai ki hinglish me likhne se aap properly cheezo ko feelings ke sath bata paate ho aur logo samajh aaya hai to wo zyada connect hote hain..Anyway update was amazing as always...aur story ko thoda jaldi end karo kyoki apan next month se yaha nazar nahi aayega

episode 15 posted guys
do check n give ur valuable feedback

 

[RagVi Singh]

tumhra review padhke lagta hai story se zyada tum khud hi ek alag character hai is universe ka

Ek aur murder
Apan soch raha hai ki agar anamika darling ne aisi story na likhi hoti to kya aisa koi sanki killer paida hota?? Kya kisi ke pichhwade me aisa karne/karwane ki chull hoti?? To kya ye kahna chahiye ki is sabki responsible apan ki anamika darling hai?? Bole to wo chhokri jo every time calm rahti hai? Bole to sundarta ki wo moorat jise kisi bhi situation se jhaanth barabar bhi fark nahi padta?? Bole to zero attitude rakhne wali wo hottyyy jisne is update me pahli baar apan log dikhaya ki wo smile karna bhi jaanti hai?? Agar kisi ne aisa socha to apan uski cuteness laal kar dega Wo Arnav ka khuleaam murder kar de tab bhi apan uske favour me rahega...bcoz of she is my darling

Anamika ko blame karna band kar do
Agar kisi ki story likhne se log aise act karne lage na, toh duniya me har writer criminal ban jata.
Anamika inspire nahi karti… woh sirf andar jo already toot raha hota hai usse reflect karti hai. Difference samajho

Aur haan… tum usko “innocent” bol rahe hona…
bas wahi sabse dangerous part hai
Kyuki jo log bahar se calm hote hain, woh andar se kya carry karte hain… woh sabko nahi dikhata.

Well, is story ko sabse badi khubsurti ye hai ki update ke start hote hi lawda tension bhi start ho jata hai. Short words me create kiye scenes sab kuch clearly feel karwa dete hain ki lawda kya chal rela hai ya kya hone wala hai...siway is baat ke ki apan ki darling ka dil apan ke liye dhadak rela hai ya us jhathuhe arnav ke liye

Waise, agar kavya ki entry na hui hoti to anamika darling ko smile dekhne ko na milti, aisa is liye kyoki kahi na kahi uske aane se anamika thoda insecure to hui hai aur isi insecurity ki vajah se do teen baar apne real character ke oposite ja kar usne bina matlab ka reaction diya hai joki iske pahle wo sochti bhi nahi thi. Bole to fully controlled and calm me rahne wali ladki zara si baat par insecure hone jaisa react karne lagi...aakhir tumhe ye kya ho gaya hai baby

Anamika insecure nahi hui…

woh react hui
aur uska react karna hi problem hai.

Kyuki woh ladki jo har situation ko dissect karti hai…
agar woh bina soche react kare, toh matlab kuch andar disturb hua hai.

Aur Kavya…
woh sirf police nahi hai…
woh mirror hai.
Anamika ko log dekhte hain…
Kavya usse samajhne ki koshish karti hai.
Difference bada hai.

Aur ye jhathuha arnav...apan ki darling ko apne sath le jane se mana kar raha tha, bole to anamika ko chavanni....chavanni..naam kahi sunela hai apan....kaun bola raha tha kise bol rela tha ....areeee yaad aaya Shivani guptaa ko... Apna scoda bol rela tha chavanni.. Khair...to apan bol raha tha ki jhathuha arnav apan ki darling anamika chavanni bhar ka attitude dikha raha tha...hatt lawda Matlab had hai yaar...saari duniya jaanti hai ki bhaav khane wala kaam sirf ladkiya karti hain...but yaha ye lawda kha rela tha, lagta hai upar wala mala khisak gayla hai iska

issse safety krna bolte hai. Arnav ko anamika ki fikr hai isliye nhi le ja rha

Khair apne ko kya...Bole to apan to khush hai ki iske aise behaviour se ghanta anamika patne wali nahi hai, utla isi ka kalyaan hone wala hai...(Remember...present me kya haalat hai uski )

Idhar satkele killer ne ek aur murder kar diyela hai...ya ye kahe ki suicide karwa diyela hai. Matlab had hai yaad....kisi ki mentality ka kaun aise faayda uthata hai yaar?? Waise kahna to nahi chahiye par agar ye mahaan kaam hai to aise mahaan kaam karne par lawda kaun itrata hai be

Beshak saari maanav jaati ka kalyaan kar do ya karwa do but apan ki anamika darling ko badnaam to na karo yaar...kitti masoom hai wo...kitti calm hai...sapne me cheenti tak ko nahi maar sakti aur tum saale jhathuhe uska character kharab karne par tule ho, hatt bsdk

Upar se lawda koi clue tak nahi chhoda apne khilaf, baaki sab chhod diya..but sirf ye ki murder suicide prove ho, kya hai ye Matlab yaar kya chahte ho tum....Arnav aur Anamika ka taanka nahi bhidne dena chahte??? Fir to thik hai...yahich chahta hai apan

killer random nhi ek psycho ki trh hai usse pasand hai shayd yeh sab
balki uske game ka centre arnav nhii .... anamika hai

Waise apan ko maza tab aaya jab uska msg aaya

Bole to tabiyat se maarne pe tula hai banda...aur ye baat anamika darling bhi samajh reli hai but wo kar bhi kya sakti hai.... afterall she is innocent

yepp he is playing with both lets see how arnav gonna find the killer

Note:- Achha laga ki Raghu darling ne is update me thoda hinglish font use kiya, warna to angreji hi angreji jhaad reli thi chhokri, bole to angrejan ban gayli thi.

Arre hinglis hi use kr rhi hu bs voh toh kabhi kabhi ho jata hai

Halaaki apan ko angreji se problem nahi hai but apan ka kahna hai ki hinglish me likhne se aap properly cheezo ko feelings ke sath bata paate ho aur logo samajh aaya hai to wo zyada connect hote hain..

yup ik now font hinglish hi rhe ga

Anyway update was amazing as always...

thnks for ur valuable support

aur story ko thoda jaldi end karo kyoki apan next month se yaha nazar nahi aayega

i will try btwn story last stage me hi hai

 

[RagVi Singh]

Episode 14 ka review kaafi intense hai. Yeh episode story ko ek procedural crime thriller se shift karke ek psychological cat-and-mouse game mein badal deta hai.

mene phle bhi kha tha yeh psychology hai yeh story kab ka 'case solve kro aur ghar jao' wali stage cross kr chuki hai

Yahan kuch key points hain jo is update ko standout banate hain:
1. The Chilling Atmosphere
Sector 9 ka description—purani buildings, damp smell, aur wo khamoshi—ek perfect noir setting create karta hai. Lekin asli impact bathroom ke scene se aata hai. Bina kisi struggle ke, ek "arranged" suicide scene dikhana yeh sabit karta hai ki antagonist physical violence se zyada mental manipulation par focus kar raha hai.

yep uska game pura psychological hai voh obsessed hai

2. The Power of Words (Ideas as Weapons)
Episode ka sabse strong point hai "The Unknown" ka tarika. Woh kisi ko maar nahi raha, balki unhe "convinvce" kar raha hai.
> "Someone didn’t kill him. Someone convinced him."

Anamika ka yeh observation bohot gahra hai. Yeh dikhata hai ki killer ek Psychological Groomer hai jo logon ki loneliness aur insecurities ko weapon ki tarah use kar raha hai.

haan killer maar nhi rha convince kr rha hai aur yeh hi sbse dangerous part hai joh anamika feel kr rhi hai

3. Arnav vs. The Invisible Observer
Arnav ka "predictable" hona uske liye ek bada khatra ban gaya hai. Jab message aata hai ki "You observe the room before the body," toh reader ko bhi wahi paranoia feel hota hai jo Arnav ko ho raha hoga. Killer sirf crime scene par nahi hai, woh Arnav ke dimaag ke andar baitha hai.

arnav ka predictable hona usse weak bana rha hai Aur jo message tha “you observe the room before the body”—woh sirf taunt nahi tha… woh ek reminder tha ki koi usse usse zyada jaanta hai jitna woh khud ko jaanta hai.

4. Anamika’s Calmness
Anamika ka character aur bhi zyada mysterious hota ja raha hai. Apne hi ghar mein intruder hone ke baad aur ab apni hi photos ek dead body ke paas dekhne ke bawajood uska "calculation" aur "calmness" dikhana interesting hai. Kya woh waqayi victim hai, ya is complex story ki ek hidden key?

Kyuki uska calm hona normal nahi hai… aur abnormal bhi openly nahi hai.
Woh react nahi karti… woh process karti hai.
Aur kabhi-kabhi jo log sabse zyada samajh rahe hote hain… woh ya to solution hote hain… ya biggest risk.

5. The Mirror Message
"Stories don’t end. They multiply."
Yeh line ek ominous warning hai. "He was only the first" wala message suggest karta hai ki yeh ek Serial Suicide Chain ho sakti hai.

yupp bilkull yeh ek announcement hai

Final Verdict:
Yeh episode action se zyada tension par heavy tha. Dialogues crisp hain aur pacing fast hai. Ending ne ek bada sawal chhod diya hai—Second target kaun hai?

next target already select ho chuka hai aur bs tumne miss kr diya

Best Moment: Arnav aur Unknown ke beech ka real-time text exchange.
Anamika ki zoom-in balcony wali photo.

Wahi real fight hai. Physical kuch bhi ho, end game wahi decide karega.

Agla episode decide karega ki Arnav apni "predictability" ko kaise todta hai taaki woh is invisible dushman ko pakad sake.

next update already posted

Nicely updated

thnks for ur support stay tuned

 

[RagVi Singh]

Babe, sabse pehle to ye kahna padega ki last update me jo maine tujhe point bola tha, us par tune dhyan diya. Is update me usme improvement bhi clearly dekhne ko milli hai. Ye dekhkar achha laga ki tum readers ke reviews aur feedback ko value karti ho.

ohh thnks for ur reminder i will try to write in hinglish

Ab update ki baat karein to update kaafi interesting tha. Shuruwat hi ek ajeeb si khamoshi se hoti hai, jo instantly feel karwa deti hai ki aage kuch important hone wala hai. Wo jo silent opening hai wo story ka mood set kar deti hai.

meri puri story silence based hi hai jisse dhamaka krne me ease hota hai

Arnav aur Anamika ki convo bhi kaafi natural thi. Faltu koi dialogue baazi nhi. Anamika ka shaant rahna aur situation ko samajhna fir decision lena uske strong character ko dikhata hai. Arnav usse rokne ki koshish karta hai, lekin Anamika ka bina argue kiye seedha bol dena ki agar koi uske ghar tak aa chuka hai, to wo is kahani ka hissa ban chuki hai. It shows ke wo in sab ko leke kitni serious hai. Aur phir Arnav bhi maan hi jaata hai — waise bhi bechare ladke zyada der tak mana nahi kar paate.

arnav ka concern sirf anamika ki safety ko lekhr hai as usse nhi pata how dangerous it is but as anamika is quite stubborn voh jyda mana nhi kr skta

Waise Kavya bhi ek reason ho sakti hai jis wajah se Anamika Arnav ko akele nahi jaane dena chahti. Pata nahi dono milkar kya kar jaaye.

may be or maybe not

Aur haan, aaj ye bhi pata chal gaya ki Anamika baby smile bhi karti hai. Mujhe to laga tha ye bhi tumhari tarah bas sada sa muh bana ke hi ghoomti rahti hai.

kya mtlb ??? me toh hamesha hi happy go lucky rhti hu

Sector 9 ka description bhi tumne kaafi achha diya hai. Purani buildings, narrow galiyan aur thoda dark sa environment — ye sab story ko aur mysterious bana dete hai. Aisi psychological ya suspense stories me location ka description bahut important hota hai. Jab ham us jagah ko visualize kar pata hai, to poora scene aankhon ke saamne zinda ho jaata hai.

mene bhi same krne ka try kiya isse scene intense ban jata hai n tabhi hum situation ko samaj pate hai

Apartment wala scene update ka sabse strong part tha. Wahan ek jawan ladke ki dead body padi hai. Wrist par gahre aur precise cuts. Chehra bilkul shaant. Room me koi tod-phod nahi. Ye sab dekhkar clearly feel hota hai ki ye koi simple suicide nahi hai. Lagta hai jaise kisi ne usse mentally us point tak push kiya ho. Aur sach kahun to aisa real life me bhi hota hai. Koi kisi ko directly nahi maarta — pehle dheere-dheere uske dimaag me ghusta hai, uski soch ko influence karta hai. Phir ek waqt aisa aata hai jab insaan khud hi ye sochne lagta hai ki shayad ye uska apna decision hai. Ye angle story ko aur jyada dark aur psychological bana deta hai.

brainwash issi ko khte hai
yeh reality se hi inspire hai jaha log apne fayde ke liye manipulate krte hai iss level tak ki saari awareness katm ho jati hai jisse hum real world me bhi dekh sskte hai

Phone messages wala part bhi kaafi impactful tha.

voh killer ka influence batata hai victim pr

Victim aur unknown person ke beech jo conversation hoti hai, usse clear ho jata hai ki koi dheere-dheere uske dimaag ko manipulate kar raha tha. Jo log manipulate karte hain, wo aise hi kaam karte hain. Pehle insaan ko special feel karwate hain, uske akelepan ka fayda uthate hain. Phir dheere-dheere usse apne control me le aate hain. Aur sabse dangerous baat ye hoti hai ki ye sab itna smoothly hota hai ki saamne wala insaan samajh hi nahi pata ki wo kisi aur ke influence me aa chuka hai.

yeh bahut dangerous hota hai even we can't imagine the level of manipulation that influence the thoughts, decision

Sabse shocking moment tab aata hai jab phone ki gallery me Anamika ki photos aur interviews milte hain. Isse pata chalta hai ki victim usse lekar obsessed tha. Ye twist kaafi achha tha, kyunki yahi se Anamika directly is case se connect ho jaati hai.

and yeh ab bahut jyada personal bhi ho gya hai and killer ab random nhi choose kr rha
sabse important hai voh game khel rha hai
Aur game ka centre Arnav nahi hai…
Anamika hai.

End wala part bhi kaafi strong tha. Jab unknown person Arnav ko message karta hai aur uski habits tak predict kar leta hai, tab Arnav ko samajh aa jata hai ki uspar nazar rakhi ja rahi hai. Waise ye baat shayad Anamika ko pehle se pata thi, lekin usne Arnav ko bataya nahi. Isse ye bhi clear ho jata hai ki ye koi normal criminal nahi hai. Ye banda logon ko observe karta hai, unhe samajhta hai aur phir unke dimaag se khelta hai.

Mirror par likhi line aur us unknown person ka last message ye hint dete hain ki ye sirf shuruwat hai. Aage shayad aise aur bhi cases aane wale hain.

i think arnav ka predictable hona usse weak bana raha hai. killer strong hai , controlled and mistake nhi kr rha jisse arnav ko clue nhi mill rha.......
aur Wahi real fight hai. Physical kuch bhi ho, end game wahi decide karega.
but we can't understimate arnav wait n watch how he gonna solve it

Baaki overall tum bahut achi likh rahi ho. Story dheere-dheere build ho rahi hai, lekin tension lagataar bani rahti hai. Aur sabse interesting baat ye hai ki yahan killer kisi weapon ka use nahi kar raha. Wo sirf apne ideas, manipulation aur psychological control se logon ko apne jaal me phasa raha hai. Ye concept story ko aur bhi disturbing aur engaging bana deta hai.

hmmmm bilkull killer without weapon use kiye apne influence sab kuch deal kr rha hai. yhi usko dangerous bana rha hai

Teri writing, pacing aur dialogues sab on point hain. Ab bas next episode ka wait rahega.

next update already posted tum hi soye hue ho

Good luck RagVi Singh

thnks for ur support
stay tuned

 

[vihan27]

Episode 15 – Fracture Point​

Sector 9 ka apartment ab sirf ek crime scene nahi lag raha tha, balki ek aisi jagah jahan kisi ne cheezein khatam nahi ki thi… balki carefully conclude ki thi, jaise har movement, har pause, har silence pehle se decide ho.

Kavya gloves pehne hue victim ke paas khadi thi, uski nazar body ke placement par thi, angle par thi, aur uske tone me wohi clinical certainty thi jo hamesha hoti hai jab cheezein uske hisaab se samajh aa rahi hoti hain, “Entry clean hai, koi struggle nahi, koi forced movement nahi… psychological push ho sakta hai, lekin end decision uska khud ka hai, this is assisted suicide.”

“Not assisted.” Anamika ki awaaz loud nahi thi, par usme ek ajeeb sa finality tha, jaise woh argue nahi kar rahi ho, sirf correct kar rahi ho, “Directed.”

Kavya ne seedha uski taraf dekha, “Same thing.”

“Same outcome,” Anamika ne dheere se jawab diya, uski aankhen room ke corners ko scan kar rahi thi, jaise woh insaan nahi, pattern dekh rahi ho, “Different author.”

Arnav dono ke beech khada tha, bina kuch bole, lekin usse feel ho raha tha ki yeh simple disagreement nahi hai, yeh control aur interpretation ka clash hai, aur dono apni jagah se hilne wale nahi hain.

“Let’s stay with evidence,” Kavya ne thoda edge ke saath kaha, “Speculation se case solve nahi hota.”

“Pattern se hota hai,” Anamika ne bina uski taraf dekhe reply diya.

Kavya ne exhale kiya, irritation control karte hue, “Tumhe har jagah pattern dikhta hai.”

“Tumhe jahan dikhta hai wahan ignore kar deti ho,” Anamika ne seedha bola, aur iss baar usne uski taraf dekha, ek second ke liye, bas utna hi ki baat land ho jaye.

Atmosphere tight ho gaya, aur Arnav ne us tension ko aur stretch hone se pehle cut kiya, “Laptop.”

Bedroom me ab bhi wahi stillness thi, jaise room ne resistance kiya hi nahi ho, jaise usne jo bhi hua use accept kar liya ho, Arnav ne system dubara open kiya, same files, same entries, same tone… lekin iss baar Anamika closer aa gayi, bina hesitation ke, bina permission ke, jaise woh already iss jagah ka part ho.

“Scroll,” usne quietly kaha.

Arnav ne next entry open ki.

He says pain repeats. It doesn’t end. It passes on.

Line simple thi, lekin uska effect simple nahi tha, Anamika ke fingers bilkul still ho gaye, koi dramatic reaction nahi, koi visible crack nahi, par Arnav ne notice kiya — uska focus shift ho gaya tha.

“Next,” usne kaha.

He told me control isn’t taught. It’s inherited.

Is baar reaction aur subtle tha, lekin irreversible, jaise kisi ne ek locked door ke andar se latch hila diya ho.

“Anamika?” Arnav ne dheere se bola, par usne jawab nahi diya, uski nazar screen par nahi thi ab, woh kahin aur thi, andar.

Kavya ek step aage badhi, “You’ve heard this before?”

Pause lamba tha, lekin toot gaya, “Yes.”

Ek word, lekin usme weight tha.

“Where?” Kavya ne push kiya.

Anamika ne aankhen band nahi ki, na hi usne nazar hatai, bas usne answer delay kiya, jaise woh decide kar rahi ho ki kitna bolna hai, “Jab koi cheez tumhe baar-baar sikhayi jaati hai… it stops sounding like an idea… it becomes a rule.”

Arnav ne dheere se poocha, “Kisne sikhaya?”

Is baar silence aur heavy tha, aur phir bina build-up ke woh line girti hai jo room ko change kar deti hai, “My mother.”

Kavya ka expression instantly shift hua, “That’s a serious conclusion based on phrasing.”

Anamika ne uski taraf dekha, calm, lekin ab woh calm surface jaisa nahi tha, uske neeche movement thi, “Yeh phrasing nahi hai.”

“Language repeat hoti hai,” Kavya ne counter kiya.

“Exact language repeat nahi hoti,” Anamika ne seedha jawab diya, phir ek chhota sa pause, aur woh line jo sirf Arnav ke liye nahi, poore scene ke liye turning point ban gayi, “This isn’t imitation… this is memory.”

Arnav ka focus us par fix ho gaya, “Tum keh rahi ho ki jo bhi yeh kar raha hai… woh tumhari mother ko jaanta hai?”

Anamika ne sirf ek chhota sa head tilt kiya, “Main keh rahi hoon ki jisne yeh banaya hai… woh usse connect hai.”

Kavya ne turant reject kiya, “Ya tum apni past ko iss case me insert kar rahi ho.”

“Ya tum usse ignore kar rahi ho kyunki woh fit nahi hota,” Anamika ne bina volume badhaye bola.

Ab yeh argument nahi tha, yeh exposure tha, aur Arnav ne usse yahin rok diya, “Enough.”

Silence wapas aaya, lekin iss baar woh stable nahi tha, fractured tha.

Anamika peeche hati, distance create karte hue, jaise usse suddenly space chahiye ho, “I need to go.”

Kavya instantly react hui, “No, you don’t, tum ab iss case ka part ho.”

“Exactly,” Anamika ne calmly kaha.

Arnav uske paas aaya, “Where?”

Usne jawab nahi diya, sirf usse dekha, aur woh enough tha, kyunki Arnav samajh gaya ki woh us jagah ja rahi hai jahan woh khud bhi interfere nahi kar sakta.

“Yeh safe nahi hai,” usne last attempt kiya.

“Safe kab tha?” usne seedha poocha.

Aur uss moment me Arnav ke paas do options the — stop her, ya trust kare… aur usne dusra choose kiya, usne pocket se apni car keys nikali aur uski taraf badha di, “Take it.”

Kavya ne disbelief me uski taraf dekha, “Arnav—”

Lekin usne usse ignore kiya, “Go.”

Anamika ne keys li, unki fingers ek second ke liye touch hui, cold, controlled, lekin usme ek unsaid tension tha jo dono ne acknowledge nahi kiya, aur bina kuch bole woh nikal gayi.

Door band hua, aur uske baad room ka balance shift ho gaya.

“You just let her walk into something we don’t understand,” Kavya ne kaha.

“She wasn’t staying,” Arnav ne seedha jawab diya.

“That’s not procedure.”

“That’s reality.”

Kavya ne usse dekha, thoda zyada dhyaan se iss baar, “You’re not objective.”

“No,” Arnav ne bina hesitation ke kaha.

Aur uske baad woh dono wapas kaam par aa gaye, kyunki ab ignore karna option nahi tha, Meera ko bulaaya gaya, laptop open hua, files spread hui, aur Kavya ne structured tone me start kiya, “Let’s strip this down — victim vulnerable, external influence, repeated language, emotional conditioning.”

“Target?” Meera ne poocha.

“Not the victim,” Arnav ne bina delay ke kaha.

Kavya ne uski taraf dekha, “Then who?”

Pause chhota tha, lekin heavy, “Anamika.”

Room quiet ho gaya.

“Why her?” Meera ne softly poocha.

Arnav ne socha, phir dheere se bola, “Because she doesn’t react the way she’s supposed to.”

“Controlled psyche,” Meera ne add kiya.

Kavya ne connect kiya, “So this isn’t about hurting her…”

“It’s about testing her,” Arnav ne complete kiya, phir ek aur line jo aur dark thi, “Or recreating her.”

"and what profit she can get from this" kavya ne doubt express kiya

Silence deeper ho gaya, aur iss baar kisi ne usse break nahi kiya.

Jab woh wapas Arnav ke apartment pahuche, door unlocked tha, lights off thi, aur andar ka stillness normal nahi tha, Arnav ne dheere se andar step liya, “Anamika?” lekin koi response nahi aaya, room waise hi tha, lekin presence missing thi.

Kavya ne dheere se kaha, “She didn’t come back.”

Arnav ne jawab nahi diya, kyunki usse already pata tha.

Uska phone vibrate hua, aur bina kisi doubt ke usne screen dekhi — unknown number.

Usne message open kiya.

You let her go.

Uska grip tighten hua.

Next line aayi.

Good.

Pause deliberate tha.

Phir last message screen par appear hua.

Now she’s not yours to observe… she’s mine to finish.

Aur iss baar silence wapas nahi aaya.

Kyuki iss baar… game shift ho chuka tha.

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stay tuned
next episode soon

Babe romance bolke khoon kharaba dikha rahi hai. Paap lagega tujhe. Anamika ki smile ke alawa kuch nhi dekha. Hame chuna laga rahi hai.

Chalo review start karte hai...
Shuruwat se hi jo crime scene ka vibe tha wo normal investigation jaisa bilkul nahi lag raha. Aisa lag raha tha ki killer bas maar nahi raha… wo har cheez plan karke kisi adhuri kahani ko puri kar raha hai.

Mere liye Kavya aur Anamika ke bich jo spark dikha wo is episode ki sabse badi cheez thi. Dono hi apni jagah sahi hai aur yehi cheez frustrating bhi hai aur interesting bhi. Ab Kavya ka policiya dimag saboot pe focus karta hai to Anamika pattern pe trust kar rahi hai. Ab jab 2 alag type ke log honge to unke sochne ka nazariya bhi alag hoga. Arnav bechara pees raha hai dono ke bich.

Laptop wali entries ne to game hi change kar diya… ab ye kahani puri tarah se Anamika se jud chuki hai. Uska apni mother se connection, ye to unexpected tha yaar. Ab ye killer aur Anamika ki mother ka kya scene hai ye to aage pata chalega but ye wala twist kamal tha. Vese ye Anamika ki maa bhi to ho sakti hai kyunki Anamika ki back story ka hame nhi pata. Ye scene ka buildup bahut ache se kiya tune.

Vese Arnav neutral hai, wo naa Kavya ki side le raha hai aur naa Anamika ki aur yahi shayad uske liye acha tha. Nahi to bechare ke sath kuch bhi ho sakta tha . Vese Arnav ne Anamika ko apni car keys deke ye to dikha diya ki use Anamika par pura bharosa hai. Use pata hai ke isme risk hai fir bhi usne Anamika ko nhi roka. Ab ye sirf ek emotional decision hai yaa usne kuch socha hai ye to aage pata chalega but mujhe to ye risky lag raha hai. Vese Kavya ka sochna bhi sahi hai, kya yaha Anamika ko akela jaane dena jaruri tha ?

Aur jab wo last msg aaya, iska mtlb hai wo msg wala Banda sab kuch dekh raha hai. Use inke har ek movement ke baare me pata hai. Ye kaha hai se leke kya karne wale hai sab pata hai use. Jese ye sab kathputliya hai uske liye aur wo inhe apne hisab se nacha raha hai. Ab target to Anamika hai but wo use marna nhi chahta. Aise lag raha hai jese wo kuch janna chahta hai, jese uska test le raha ho. Aur ye Anamika pata nhi kaha gayi hai. Ye ladkiya bhi pata nhi ese time me kyu khud ko Tees maar kha samajh leti hai. Are kisi ko sath le jaati but nhi. Ab ye kaha gayi hai ye to next update me hi pata chalega.

Ye wala update kafi engaging tha. Pace bhi acha tha aur jo twist aaya wo bhi kamal tha, totally unexpected n ending bhi achi thi. Bole to perfect tha.
Ab Anamika ki maa ka in sab se kya connection tha ye sab dekhna dilchasp hoga.
Good luck darling RagVi Singh

 

[TheBlackBlood]

tumhra review padhke lagta hai story se zyada tum khud hi ek alag character hai is universe ka

Har koi apne aapko dusre se alag aur unique samajhta hai, baaki apan to hai hi yeda