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Thriller Punarjanam

Story kaise honi chahiye

  • Thrill, Sex,

    Votes: 3 20.0%
  • Romantic, Thrill,

    Votes: 2 13.3%
  • Romantic, Revenge, Thrill, Sex

    Votes: 8 53.3%
  • Revenge, Bloodshed, Thrill, Sex

    Votes: 4 26.7%

  • Total voters
    15

ravi14061984

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Update 3 A

Tabhi aakash se ek tabij aayi

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or ek chote bache ke gale mai chali gayi sabhi aaschary se ye dekh rahe the or bol rahe the ye ladka to subedaar Raam Singh ka beta h or isne apne jiwan ke 6 saal mai he tabij paa liya. Sachmuch ye ek mahan yodha sabit hoga.

Tabij ke bhi alag alag category thi ji ek se lekar 9 tak mai divide th. Jaha no 1 kamzor satar ka jabke 9 no ko sabse saktishali mana jata tha.

Logo mai is baat ke kana didi hone lagi ke ye bhut he talented or bhagyshali Bacha tha. Jisne 4no ke tabij hasil ke thi. Nischye he bhagwan ne kisi udeysh ke liye isko yaha beja gaya h.

Tabhi bhid se ek lambi muchoo wala 6feetuncha insan nikal kar dorte hue us bache ke pass aaya ye subedaar Raam singh tha. Wo chilate wo bolne laga bhagwan tera lakh lakh shukr h jo tune mere bete ko is layak samjha. Wo aage bola aaj raat ko aap sabhi ko mere ghar pe raatri bhoj ka aamantran h sabhi ko.

Tabhi aasmaan se fir garjana hui or fir kuch ladke ladkio ko pavitra tabij mil gaye. Is baar mile tabijo mai sabse adhik 10 se kam ke kishor or kishori the sabse kam umar subedaar Raam singh ke bete ke the jiske tabij ke rank bhi sabse achi thi.

Jin logo ne Pavitra tabij prapt kiya unke samajik sithi achi nhi thi. We kul aabadi ke 10% the. Pavitra tabij milne ke baad unmai is baat ke asha jagi ke ab unke sath bhed bhav nhi hoga. Unko bhi barabri ka huq milege.

Jo log pavitra tabij nhi pa sake unke under bhari nirasa thi kai roo rahe the kai apni kismat ko koos rahe the.

Puja khatam hone wali thi jawan ke antim aahuti di jane wali thi lekin abhi tak Daksh ko pavitra tabij nhi mila tha. Daksh ka man udas hone laga usne khud se kaha ab tabij milna impossible hai.

Us ab samany jiwan jina padega.use raha jiwan uchit hokar jina padega. Lekin Yashodhara ko asha the ke koi chamtkaarhoga or Daksh ko kam se kam itni shakti to mil jayegi jisse wo healthy life bita sake.

Puja sampat hui or Yashodhara ke asha nirasha mai badal gayi. Is bich Daksh apni angoothi ko niharte hoye apni kismat ko siwkarne laga.
 

ravi14061984

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Update 3B



Tabhi aakash mai fir jordaar aawaj huo or ek pavitr tabij Daksh ke gale mai aa gayi. Daksh romanchit hua or Yashodhara ke or dekhte hue chilaya—Maa Maa tabij mil gayi .



Ab tak pure samaroh mai kis ne ye ghor nhi kiya tha ke Daksh bhi waha maojod hai. Lekin Daksh ke chillane se sab ka dhuyan uske taraf chala gaya.



Devdutt or uske 6th Rajkumar bhai ko apne aakho pe bhrosha he nhi ho raha tha.



Devdutt bola ye kaise possible hai?

Yashodhara ne ghoom ko Daksh ko dekha Aakhirkaar Daskh ne tabij paa liya. Wo uske pass daur ke gayi or khushi ke aasho ko sath apne bête ko gale laga liya. Or apne aakho se aansho ko bathe hue bola.



Ab Daksh healthy rahega mera beta healthy rahega .

Tabhi Rajye ka mantra aaya or usne kaha badhi ho Daksh Rani ne aapko aamntirt kiya hai. Taki vektigat roop se tabij ke smicha ke ja sake.



Ye sun kar Yashodhara ke chehre pe sanka ke badal aa gaye mano kuch galat hone wala ho. Wo budbudai Rani Rani
 

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Update 4



Rani yani Rajmata ek bhut bade singhasan pe baithi hui thi, or unhone ek golden color ke sari pahni hui thi.


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Rajmata kafi bujurg ho thi. Lekin Daksh ko wo kafi khubsurat lag rahi thi. Or aisa isliye tha qke Rajmata ne khud ko yog or different type ke medicine ka use kar khud ko kafi young and healthy rakha tha.



Jaise he Daksh or Yashodhara singhasan ke samne jakar avivawan ke liye juke. Rani ne Rajporohit se pucha- Porohit jee, Rajkumar Daksh ne jo Bhariav Baba ka pavitra tabij prapt kiya hai, uska kya mulankan hai? Uski Mahima kitni hai?





Waise to Bhairav ke puja samaroh ke dekh bhaal khud senanayak Malik karte the. Par is baar kuch kisam ke yogansno or dhayan ke liye ekantwash kar rahe the, or isliye ye kaam Rajmata ke jimme aa gaya tha.





Rani ke sawal ko sunkar Rajpurohit ne apna sir hila diya. Uske hath mai ek purani jadui kisam ke kitab thi. Usmai bhut se mantro ke sath Bhairav ke tabij ka mulyankan or uske koti ke jhach kais eke jaiye ye likha tha.

Rajpurhoit ne kitab khol kar usmai Daksh ke tabij ke pahchaan karne laga. Lekin jaisa tabij Daksh ko mila tha waise tabij ka koi detail waha nhi tha.



Rani ne tab Daksh ko ajib najro se dekha or laparhwahi bhare andaaj mai kaha agar pavitra pustak mai is jaise tabij ka jiar nhi h. to aisa lagta hai ke Rajkumar Daksh ka tabij kisi koti ka nhi hai. Isko Zero koti ka mana jaye. Aisa pahli baar nhi hua hai. Bhut pahle bhi aisa kai baar hua hai.



Averge chamta wale veero ko aise tabij mili thi pahle bhi. 8th Rajkumar Devdutt bhi pass he tha. Usne bich mai tokte hue tanj kasate hue kaha Humara 9th bhai Daksh abhi 16 year ka ho gaya h is lihaj se usko bilkul sahi tabij mili hai. Bhudha tota pose nhi manta. Daksh babu ab kya khakar yoddha banoge. Rani bhi Devdutt se sahmat thi.





Rani ne apna sir hilya or aadesh diya Rajpariwaar ke or se anya yoddhao ke liye jitna mumkin ho rasad, khane pine ka saman or Shakti vardhak Raktprash zindgi bhar ke liye diya jaye . Rajkumar Daksh ke chmata simit hai is liye unhe Raktprash ke sirf ek ghara diya jaye. Mujhe lagta hai unke pachan Shakti bhi aise nhi h ke wo adhik Raktprash pacha kar use Shakti mai badal paye or rajye ke hit mai kaam kar sake.



Rani ne jis Raktprash ke baat kar rahi thi wo asal mai ek Shakti badane wala drink tha jismai bhut sare rishiyo , Vedho , Acharyo ke khun se Chawanprash ke tarah banaya jata tha. Raktprash mai jadui sakhtiyo ko badhane ke takat hoti thi.



Jo bhi tabij prapt karta yoddhaves karta tha wo bina Raktprash kea age kuch hasil nhi kar pata tha.





Rani ke is aadhesh se Yashodhara hairan rah gayi, uske much ke haav vaaw badal gaye the. Yashodhara ne sakht lahje mai kaha- Ranije ye baat sach h ke pavitra tabij parapt karne ke baad pahla year bhut important hota h. Yaad kijiye jis year 7th Rajkumar ne pavitra tabij hasil kiya usko 12 ghare Raktprash diye gaye the wo bhi saal bhar ke liye . Mere Daksh ko ek ghara q diya ja raha hai?



Yashodhara ke is baat ka rani ke pass karara jawab tayar tha. Unho ne kaha 7th Rajkumar jab apne janam ke 3 saal mai the tabhi unho ne 7th rank ka tabij prapt kiya tha. Is buddhu Daskh ke tolna us jaabaaz se ksie ke ja sakti hai.
 
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