Veere toda pappu hor Shera da role clear Karo kon driver te kon cleaner. Last part vich pappu driver si te Shera cleaner. Nice & hott update. Old times golden times.
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Ha papu aaje cleaner aa. Nava nava aya shere kol driveri sikhan. Jive k phela hunda si nave nave di changi kutte khani karde c
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ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਅਗਲੇ ਭਾਗ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕTe edar 9 k waje raat nu jad Shera uthea ta Rajdeep da chera te ode lak di madak aaje vi odia akhan samne aundi payi si.
Eh vi shukar si k ohne es vaar door nahi jana si 2 din de which wapsi ho jani si....
Oda lun aaje vi akadea piya si Pura... nikaln da time hon wala si par dimag ode ch sex chadea hoya si...
Akhir ohne fer Papu nu awaj mari ta papu uth piya....jad Shere nu nanga hath ch lun fadi dekhea ta bolea" ki hoya ustaad ji gyi nahi dimag ch oh kbootri....
Ena keh ohne tel di botal chaki te shere wal kar diti te apna pajma khud hi bina behas kite ya kuch bole khud hi utarn lag piya....
Ohnu pata si Shere kolo bina thanda hoye gaddi chalni nahi te load time naal puchnaa nahi.
Shera eh dekh hasde hoye lun te tel laga ode piche aa gya te odi bund te tel laga apna kam karn lag piya..
Bus fer ki si agle 30-40 minute papu di khoob rail banai ohne wakhre wakhre pose laga k. Ik ta oh suta uthea si es layi pure josh ch si te lun vi jada akad ch si. Maar maar ghase ohne papu di tatti kad diti si par rukea odo jad oda kam hoya. Maja ohnu Pura aya si kuki ik ta papu ha jawan duja bund odi moti si es layi jama kudia wargi lagdi si.
Truck cho utare ta kol hi motor chaldi payi si dona ne naha k gaddi apne raste pa layi....
Shera: tu bacha liya nahi ta sala gaddi chalni nahi si...
Papu hasde hoye" koi na ustaad ji...tusi vi bus khyaal rakheo....
Shera: tu fikar na kar tenu top da driver bana k pejo.....
Papu: hanji...aap dekh lao thanu ik vaar vi mana kar k thanu gussa dilea hove main...
Shera: ha pantdra waise ha tu bhut bibba munda...gharwali wang khyaal rakhda....tera warga pattu kade nahi milea.
Papu eh sun kush ho gya...ohnu ik ta driveri sikhan da lalch si duja ohnu pata si papu gharo bhut sokha jameen kafi aa te driveri oh shonk layi karda si. Nasha ohne sirf sharb da kita si ya kade kade kala maal shak lenda c.
Kher edar Sawere chano Sukhdev de gharo sidhi khet wal nu nikal gyi....kudrati kise di najar nahi payi ode wal.phela oh udar chali gyi jithe janania tatti karna jandia si.
Raste ch hi ohnu apne aand gwand dia janania mil gyia. Kise nu koi shak nahi piya si eh dekh chano ne vi sukh da sah liya si. Par jive hi Chano te baki janania khet puchiaa te saria tatti beth gyia ta Chano de lal chitad dekh ohde kol bethi janani boli" lagda paji fer kaim ho gya.....
Chano: ohnu ki hona kaim hi aa...
Guwandan: nahi par aaj kal tere piche jada hi piya....ki gal raat fer kuti....
Chano: ena k ta chalda rehnda apne wal ya bakia wal dekh chitad lal ta saria de ne.
Ena sun saria hass payia te bolia" ha eh gal ta ha...waise vi jad tak tasaali naal hath na lage hon sanu need vi kheda aundi....
Te edar Harry pheli vaar ch hi kafi time laga gya c apni masi naal...
Masi bhali kush si ode kolo chudwa k..bade din baad ene tagde lun di ragar ohne apni fuddi ch mehsoos kiti si...ode bhanje da lun ha hi ena hard si k jad odi fuddi naal ragar k andar bhar hunda piya si ta malo mali oda swad naal moot nikal gya si...
Kher jad oda pani nikal gya ta oh side te lama pe gya te uper dekhn laga...hun ode dimag ch jheda sex da bhoot chadea hoya si oh utar gya si.
Ohnu ajeeb jiha mehsoos hunda piya si....ohne dekhea odi masi aaje vi sidhi akhan band kar k lami payi hoyi si.
Kuch der baad jad akha kholi ta boli" hmmm hanji puttar ji pe gyi thand....
Harry kuch nahi bolea ta masi ode uper apna patt rakh odi hikk te hath ferdi boli" bhut wadia karda tu.... pheli vaar ch hi ena time laga lita nahi ta ena time laganaa sokha nahi...
Harry: hanji masi ji....bus tusi jive dasde gye main kari gya....
Masi: ha ghabra na tenu sab sikhaa k pejo gi main.... dum tere ch Pura tenu sikhan ch jada time nahi lagna.
Ena bol oh harry de lun nu fer toh hilan lag payi....harry vi apni masi de sarir naal khedan lag piya....kam ta sara khtam kar hi liya si ohna hun koi fikar nahi si ohna nu....
Kafi der jad eda hi khed de rahe kade Harry ode mumme khich dinda te kade fuddi ch bund nu khol k gor naal dekhn lag penda....te ungli which pa dinda.
Jad Surinder kaur ne dekhea Harry fer tyar aa ta boli" chal aaja hun naha layia...garmi ayi payi pasine naal sarir chip chip karda piya.
Harry hasde hoye" par masi garmi naal swad hor aunda piya si tere andar mera lul tilak tilak k warda piya si.
Surinder kaur hasdi hoyi ode thapad maar" kidaa harami aa boln lage bhora sharm nahi karda.
Harry: sharm ch ki rakhea.....
Surinder: ha waise eh wadia gal aa teri....
Harry: ku....
Surinder: tere masad di sharm nikalde ta ene saal lag gye... phela ta oh sare kapde vi nahi utarda hunda si bus salwar utar k kam kar lenda si apna...
Harry: ha par masad aa tagda aaje vi... raat kafi awajaan aundia payia si....
Surinder: ha raat teri maa kafi kuti tere masad ne....tenu ta odo hosh vi nahi si.
Harrydo ta masi tu behall kita piya si. Eve ik dum sare kapde utar tu lami pe gyi....jhatkaa ta lagna hi si...
Surinder: aage toh jhatka nahi lago sara kuch sikhaa k pejo...
Aaje gallan hi karde paye si k ene nu Harry di maa roti le k aa gyi....dona masi bhanje nu motor te bane pani wale challe ch nange dekh" lagda kar dita kand tusi dona ne...
Surinder: tu badi jaldi aa gyi....
Balwinder kaur hasdi hoyi" time bhut ho gya...chalo nikalo bhar pani cho hun...
Harry ta sharm naal pani ch betha riha par odi masi ik minute ch nangi pani cho bhar nikal ayi te boli" aja putt koi na...eh kutti de jan toh baad karde aa sharn na kar aja. Sher ban tu hun munda nahi banda ban gya aaj toh....te bande sharm nahi karde hunde...
Apni masi de eh bol sun Harry nu thoda honslaa Aya te oh vi pani cho nanga bhar nikal Aya...apne putt da motta lul dekh Balwinder kaur nu vi bada maan jiha mehsoos hoya k oda putt vi kise galo ghat nahi..ik gal da maan hor vi si k jis umar ch hun oda putt si ode hisab naal lun kafi tagda si odi behan de munde jeete de lun nalo....
Te fer kise purane yaar da soch ohnu kambni jahi chidd gyi te oh apni chuni ohnu dinde boli" aah le meri chuni nu dhoti wang ban le....
Harry ne chuni apne lak naal ban lai ta Surinder kaur ne ohnu roti pa k de diti te khud vi khan lag payi....
Harry ne dekhea odi maa aaje vi khadi si oh dono ta thale hi bethe hoye si ik tarpal te....
Harry: tusi vi beh jao kha lao roti....
Balwinder: nahi main gharo kha k ayi aa....tusi khao dono.
Harry: beth ta jao fer ki eda khade ho....
Surinder hasdi hoyi" putt tere masad ne bethn jogi chadea nahi ehnu....
Eh sun Harry" ha raat awajaan ta kafi aundia payia si...
Balwinder: roti kha chup chap.
Harry: le tusi ta eda karde jive main phela kade dekhea nahi.
Balwinder fer kuch sochdi apni salwar da nala khol khol godea tak kar ode wal mud gyi te bund jama apne putt de muh aage kardi boli" le dekh le kush aa hun...
Harry ne dekhea odi maa de chitad te patt lal kite paye si ohde masad ne....
Harry ne muh aage kar apni maa de chitad chum laye te bolea" ik gal ta ha janania de lal surkh chitad bhut sohne lagde.
Balwinder kaur apne putt nu jan buzz k josh dilande boli" Teri maa de chitad ta phela Tere masad ne te fer tere wade pra ne lal kar laye tu apni masi naal aaje eve chol mohl karn hi laga hoya....
Harry: filar na Karo thuda hi putt aa....
Balwinder kaur ene nu roti wale bartan ikethe kar bandi boli" acha chal fer aaj kar le masti kal sawere apa wapis pind jana nahi ta eve tera peo gussa Karo ga...
Surinder kaur eh sun kuch nahi boli...te Harry ne vi jhedi chuni apne lak naal bani si oh utar apni maa nu de diti...
Balwinder kaur jande boli" main aape daal bana lao gi tusi aram naal sham di dhar kad k aa jayeo.
Ena bol oh wapis pind wal chali gyi....
Surinder kaur nu roti kha thodi susti pe gyi si par Harry josh ch si oh bolea" masi aaja andar fer 2 ghante so lava ge odo tak dhar da time ho jao.
Ena sun odi masi bina bole andar chal payi....
Andar aunde hi oh kandh te hath rakh jhuk gyi te boli" chal aja phela hath naal maar....fer tenu dasdi jutti naal kive kuti di....
Harry: le ede ch ki aa...eh kheda aokha kam.
Surinder kaur hasdi hoyi" putt eda vi dhang hunda....nahi ta janani paj jao gi.. janani dard ch swad ta lendi aa par odo jad ode andar aag lagi hove.. thandi janani kade eda nahi kardi...
Harry eh sun masi de piche aya te fuddi ch ungli pa bolea" samj gya masi ji....waise tere andar ta aag lagi payi....pani tera eve nikalda piya jive moot karta hove.
Ena keh ohne sataak karda thapad maar dita..harry jawan si te masi umar ch odi maa nalo wadi..es layi sarir vi thoda jada wadda si odi masi da...
Harry sawd sawd ch pata nahi kini der laga riha na ta masi ne rokea ohnu...oh ta odo rukea jad oda hath dard karn lag piya...odo tak masi de chitada nu ohne surkh lal kar dita si....
Jaldi naal masi di jutti chak bolea" jada nahi bus 5-7 marnia bus....
Surinder kaur vi apne toh kite ghat umar wale naal kar k aaj swad lendi payi si....kacha kela kha aaj ohnu vi khoob maja aya si...apne bhanje di pheli malai ode hi andar gyi si. Ohnu eve laga jive oh fer jawan ho gyi hove....
Es layi oh kuch nahi boli te oh hass vi payi jad 5-7 da keh Harry ode kafi maar gya....odia akha cho pani aa gya si hun tak.... Harry ne jad dekhea masi de chitada da rang ta maa nalo kite Jada lal karta ohne es layi jutti thale rakh ohne naal hi apna lun masi di fuddi ch dhak dita.
Rondi Surinder kaur di Maje naal siskari nikal gyi jad nanga lun odi fuddi ch ragar kha pura andar wadd gya.... ohne maje naal apni lattan hor khol layia te hor jhuk gyi te Harry ode lak nu fad ghase marn lag piya..
Fuddi gilli si te upero ohne lun te thuk dita si es layi fach fach dia awajan naal kamra goonjda piya si....lun malo mali tilak tilak andar janda piya si. Surinder kaur da pani ik vaar nikal gya c par harry ode lak nu fad eve ghase marda piya si jive ode andar aap hi wadd jao. Ena josh wala lun bhut time baad dekhea si ohne....
Kher jad Harry da pani ode andar nikalea ta odo tak oh bhut thak gyi c. Lattan kambdia le oh manji te nangi hi lami pe gyi te Harry vi bhar pishab kar ode naal aa lama pe gya....
Dona di need Odo tuti jad bharo awaj ayi kise di....ohna jaldi naal kapde pa laye te bhar aye ta jeeta kam karda piya si.
Ohnu dekh Surinder kaur nu jama fark nahi piya....te ohnu boli" kado aya tu...
Jeeta: ho gya ghanta k....main majaa nu charaa vi pa dite aa hor thodi der nu dhar kad laeo.
Jeeta ne vi sari umar apni maa nu kafi bandea thale dekhea si....es layi hun vi jad ohne apni maa nu apne chote pra naal nangi payi dekhea ta ohnu koi dukh ya gussa nahi aya....ha thoda harain si kuki odo maa ode pra de uper apna patt rakh lami payi si...maa apni de lal hoye patt te chitad dekh oh apne aap nu bolea" eh vi Patto ghat nahi.phele din hi eh kam karta..
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Nice but Shere drive to young rajdeep di jodi bnaoTe edar 9 k waje raat nu jad Shera uthea ta Rajdeep da chera te ode lak di madak aaje vi odia akhan samne aundi payi si.
Eh vi shukar si k ohne es vaar door nahi jana si 2 din de which wapsi ho jani si....
Oda lun aaje vi akadea piya si Pura... nikaln da time hon wala si par dimag ode ch sex chadea hoya si...
Akhir ohne fer Papu nu awaj mari ta papu uth piya....jad Shere nu nanga hath ch lun fadi dekhea ta bolea" ki hoya ustaad ji gyi nahi dimag ch oh kbootri....
Ena keh ohne tel di botal chaki te shere wal kar diti te apna pajma khud hi bina behas kite ya kuch bole khud hi utarn lag piya....
Ohnu pata si Shere kolo bina thanda hoye gaddi chalni nahi te load time naal puchnaa nahi.
Shera eh dekh hasde hoye lun te tel laga ode piche aa gya te odi bund te tel laga apna kam karn lag piya..
Bus fer ki si agle 30-40 minute papu di khoob rail banai ohne wakhre wakhre pose laga k. Ik ta oh suta uthea si es layi pure josh ch si te lun vi jada akad ch si. Maar maar ghase ohne papu di tatti kad diti si par rukea odo jad oda kam hoya. Maja ohnu Pura aya si kuki ik ta papu ha jawan duja bund odi moti si es layi jama kudia wargi lagdi si.
Truck cho utare ta kol hi motor chaldi payi si dona ne naha k gaddi apne raste pa layi....
Shera: tu bacha liya nahi ta sala gaddi chalni nahi si...
Papu hasde hoye" koi na ustaad ji...tusi vi bus khyaal rakheo....
Shera: tu fikar na kar tenu top da driver bana k pejo.....
Papu: hanji...aap dekh lao thanu ik vaar vi mana kar k thanu gussa dilea hove main...
Shera: ha pantdra waise ha tu bhut bibba munda...gharwali wang khyaal rakhda....tera warga pattu kade nahi milea.
Papu eh sun kush ho gya...ohnu ik ta driveri sikhan da lalch si duja ohnu pata si papu gharo bhut sokha jameen kafi aa te driveri oh shonk layi karda si. Nasha ohne sirf sharb da kita si ya kade kade kala maal shak lenda c.
Kher edar Sawere chano Sukhdev de gharo sidhi khet wal nu nikal gyi....kudrati kise di najar nahi payi ode wal.phela oh udar chali gyi jithe janania tatti karna jandia si.
Raste ch hi ohnu apne aand gwand dia janania mil gyia. Kise nu koi shak nahi piya si eh dekh chano ne vi sukh da sah liya si. Par jive hi Chano te baki janania khet puchiaa te saria tatti beth gyia ta Chano de lal chitad dekh ohde kol bethi janani boli" lagda paji fer kaim ho gya.....
Chano: ohnu ki hona kaim hi aa...
Guwandan: nahi par aaj kal tere piche jada hi piya....ki gal raat fer kuti....
Chano: ena k ta chalda rehnda apne wal ya bakia wal dekh chitad lal ta saria de ne.
Ena sun saria hass payia te bolia" ha eh gal ta ha...waise vi jad tak tasaali naal hath na lage hon sanu need vi kheda aundi....
Te edar Harry pheli vaar ch hi kafi time laga gya c apni masi naal...
Masi bhali kush si ode kolo chudwa k..bade din baad ene tagde lun di ragar ohne apni fuddi ch mehsoos kiti si...ode bhanje da lun ha hi ena hard si k jad odi fuddi naal ragar k andar bhar hunda piya si ta malo mali oda swad naal moot nikal gya si...
Kher jad oda pani nikal gya ta oh side te lama pe gya te uper dekhn laga...hun ode dimag ch jheda sex da bhoot chadea hoya si oh utar gya si.
Ohnu ajeeb jiha mehsoos hunda piya si....ohne dekhea odi masi aaje vi sidhi akhan band kar k lami payi hoyi si.
Kuch der baad jad akha kholi ta boli" hmmm hanji puttar ji pe gyi thand....
Harry kuch nahi bolea ta masi ode uper apna patt rakh odi hikk te hath ferdi boli" bhut wadia karda tu.... pheli vaar ch hi ena time laga lita nahi ta ena time laganaa sokha nahi...
Harry: hanji masi ji....bus tusi jive dasde gye main kari gya....
Masi: ha ghabra na tenu sab sikhaa k pejo gi main.... dum tere ch Pura tenu sikhan ch jada time nahi lagna.
Ena bol oh harry de lun nu fer toh hilan lag payi....harry vi apni masi de sarir naal khedan lag piya....kam ta sara khtam kar hi liya si ohna hun koi fikar nahi si ohna nu....
Kafi der jad eda hi khed de rahe kade Harry ode mumme khich dinda te kade fuddi ch bund nu khol k gor naal dekhn lag penda....te ungli which pa dinda.
Jad Surinder kaur ne dekhea Harry fer tyar aa ta boli" chal aaja hun naha layia...garmi ayi payi pasine naal sarir chip chip karda piya.
Harry hasde hoye" par masi garmi naal swad hor aunda piya si tere andar mera lul tilak tilak k warda piya si.
Surinder kaur hasdi hoyi ode thapad maar" kidaa harami aa boln lage bhora sharm nahi karda.
Harry: sharm ch ki rakhea.....
Surinder: ha waise eh wadia gal aa teri....
Harry: ku....
Surinder: tere masad di sharm nikalde ta ene saal lag gye... phela ta oh sare kapde vi nahi utarda hunda si bus salwar utar k kam kar lenda si apna...
Harry: ha par masad aa tagda aaje vi... raat kafi awajaan aundia payia si....
Surinder: ha raat teri maa kafi kuti tere masad ne....tenu ta odo hosh vi nahi si.
Harry
Surinder: aage toh jhatka nahi lago sara kuch sikhaa k pejo...
Aaje gallan hi karde paye si k ene nu Harry di maa roti le k aa gyi....dona masi bhanje nu motor te bane pani wale challe ch nange dekh" lagda kar dita kand tusi dona ne...
Surinder: tu badi jaldi aa gyi....
Balwinder kaur hasdi hoyi" time bhut ho gya...chalo nikalo bhar pani cho hun...
Harry ta sharm naal pani ch betha riha par odi masi ik minute ch nangi pani cho bhar nikal ayi te boli" aja putt koi na...eh kutti de jan toh baad karde aa sharn na kar aja. Sher ban tu hun munda nahi banda ban gya aaj toh....te bande sharm nahi karde hunde...
Apni masi de eh bol sun Harry nu thoda honslaa Aya te oh vi pani cho nanga bhar nikal Aya...apne putt da motta lul dekh Balwinder kaur nu vi bada maan jiha mehsoos hoya k oda putt vi kise galo ghat nahi..ik gal da maan hor vi si k jis umar ch hun oda putt si ode hisab naal lun kafi tagda si odi behan de munde jeete de lun nalo....
Te fer kise purane yaar da soch ohnu kambni jahi chidd gyi te oh apni chuni ohnu dinde boli" aah le meri chuni nu dhoti wang ban le....
Harry ne chuni apne lak naal ban lai ta Surinder kaur ne ohnu roti pa k de diti te khud vi khan lag payi....
Harry ne dekhea odi maa aaje vi khadi si oh dono ta thale hi bethe hoye si ik tarpal te....
Harry: tusi vi beh jao kha lao roti....
Balwinder: nahi main gharo kha k ayi aa....tusi khao dono.
Harry: beth ta jao fer ki eda khade ho....
Surinder hasdi hoyi" putt tere masad ne bethn jogi chadea nahi ehnu....
Eh sun Harry" ha raat awajaan ta kafi aundia payia si...
Balwinder: roti kha chup chap.
Harry: le tusi ta eda karde jive main phela kade dekhea nahi.
Balwinder fer kuch sochdi apni salwar da nala khol khol godea tak kar ode wal mud gyi te bund jama apne putt de muh aage kardi boli" le dekh le kush aa hun...
Harry ne dekhea odi maa de chitad te patt lal kite paye si ohde masad ne....
Harry ne muh aage kar apni maa de chitad chum laye te bolea" ik gal ta ha janania de lal surkh chitad bhut sohne lagde.
Balwinder kaur apne putt nu jan buzz k josh dilande boli" Teri maa de chitad ta phela Tere masad ne te fer tere wade pra ne lal kar laye tu apni masi naal aaje eve chol mohl karn hi laga hoya....
Harry: filar na Karo thuda hi putt aa....
Balwinder kaur ene nu roti wale bartan ikethe kar bandi boli" acha chal fer aaj kar le masti kal sawere apa wapis pind jana nahi ta eve tera peo gussa Karo ga...
Surinder kaur eh sun kuch nahi boli...te Harry ne vi jhedi chuni apne lak naal bani si oh utar apni maa nu de diti...
Balwinder kaur jande boli" main aape daal bana lao gi tusi aram naal sham di dhar kad k aa jayeo.
Ena bol oh wapis pind wal chali gyi....
Surinder kaur nu roti kha thodi susti pe gyi si par Harry josh ch si oh bolea" masi aaja andar fer 2 ghante so lava ge odo tak dhar da time ho jao.
Ena sun odi masi bina bole andar chal payi....
Andar aunde hi oh kandh te hath rakh jhuk gyi te boli" chal aja phela hath naal maar....fer tenu dasdi jutti naal kive kuti di....
Harry: le ede ch ki aa...eh kheda aokha kam.
Surinder kaur hasdi hoyi" putt eda vi dhang hunda....nahi ta janani paj jao gi.. janani dard ch swad ta lendi aa par odo jad ode andar aag lagi hove.. thandi janani kade eda nahi kardi...
Harry eh sun masi de piche aya te fuddi ch ungli pa bolea" samj gya masi ji....waise tere andar ta aag lagi payi....pani tera eve nikalda piya jive moot karta hove.
Ena keh ohne sataak karda thapad maar dita..harry jawan si te masi umar ch odi maa nalo wadi..es layi sarir vi thoda jada wadda si odi masi da...
Harry sawd sawd ch pata nahi kini der laga riha na ta masi ne rokea ohnu...oh ta odo rukea jad oda hath dard karn lag piya...odo tak masi de chitada nu ohne surkh lal kar dita si....
Jaldi naal masi di jutti chak bolea" jada nahi bus 5-7 marnia bus....
Surinder kaur vi apne toh kite ghat umar wale naal kar k aaj swad lendi payi si....kacha kela kha aaj ohnu vi khoob maja aya si...apne bhanje di pheli malai ode hi andar gyi si. Ohnu eve laga jive oh fer jawan ho gyi hove....
Es layi oh kuch nahi boli te oh hass vi payi jad 5-7 da keh Harry ode kafi maar gya....odia akha cho pani aa gya si hun tak.... Harry ne jad dekhea masi de chitada da rang ta maa nalo kite Jada lal karta ohne es layi jutti thale rakh ohne naal hi apna lun masi di fuddi ch dhak dita.
Rondi Surinder kaur di Maje naal siskari nikal gyi jad nanga lun odi fuddi ch ragar kha pura andar wadd gya.... ohne maje naal apni lattan hor khol layia te hor jhuk gyi te Harry ode lak nu fad ghase marn lag piya..
Fuddi gilli si te upero ohne lun te thuk dita si es layi fach fach dia awajan naal kamra goonjda piya si....lun malo mali tilak tilak andar janda piya si. Surinder kaur da pani ik vaar nikal gya c par harry ode lak nu fad eve ghase marda piya si jive ode andar aap hi wadd jao. Ena josh wala lun bhut time baad dekhea si ohne....
Kher jad Harry da pani ode andar nikalea ta odo tak oh bhut thak gyi c. Lattan kambdia le oh manji te nangi hi lami pe gyi te Harry vi bhar pishab kar ode naal aa lama pe gya....
Dona di need Odo tuti jad bharo awaj ayi kise di....ohna jaldi naal kapde pa laye te bhar aye ta jeeta kam karda piya si.
Ohnu dekh Surinder kaur nu jama fark nahi piya....te ohnu boli" kado aya tu...
Jeeta: ho gya ghanta k....main majaa nu charaa vi pa dite aa hor thodi der nu dhar kad laeo.
Jeeta ne vi sari umar apni maa nu kafi bandea thale dekhea si....es layi hun vi jad ohne apni maa nu apne chote pra naal nangi payi dekhea ta ohnu koi dukh ya gussa nahi aya....ha thoda harain si kuki odo maa ode pra de uper apna patt rakh lami payi si...maa apni de lal hoye patt te chitad dekh oh apne aap nu bolea" eh vi Patto ghat nahi.phele din hi eh kam karta..
Bai vese ta tu boht experienced writer aa te mai ta tainu ki suggestion de skda tu khud hi boht expert aa writing ch prr yrr eh jutti ya thappad nal bund laal krn wala part hun thoda boring hon lgg gya… teri hrek kahani de almost hrek update ch hi hunda eh ajkal.. pls ehde wal thoda dhyan de.. baki as usual teri story ghaint aa
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