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Shankar Sharma (ek jhalak) - kahani ki shuruaat jab hui thi .. Shankar Sharma ko ek jimmedaar pati, pita, Beta dikhaya gaya tha. phir dheere-dheere jaise kahani aage badhi .. unki bhoomika mein bhi badlaav dikhne laga .. phir uss Shankar se saamna hua jo dosto ke saath masti karta hai aur apne kaam ke prati poorn roop se samarpit hai .. jisko har koi pyaar karta hai, jiska har koi sam-maan karta hai, chahe wo saksh pariwaar ka ho ya fir 'sansar', dosto aur rishtedaaro se alag ho .. Shankar Sharma ji ko ek samaaj sevi ki bhomika mein bhi dikhaya .. ki kaise wo stadium mein Vikas aur Sangwan jaise pratibhavaan khilaadiyo ko aage badhne mein unki nishpaksh sahayta bhi karte hai .. uske baad saamne aayi Shankar sharma ki ek bilkul nayi chavvi .. ek 'Daanav' ki .. jo apne khilaaf jaane wale har us khatre ko jadd se mita deta hai .. jo chook nahi karta .. jo moka nahi deta .. jiska khoofiya tantra bahut he achook hai .. jiski har ek galat gatividhiyo par Gidd si najre rehti hai .. kintu phir amooman jaisa hota hai, jaisa dikhaya gaya hai .. jiske saath jyaada samay vyathith karo .. to saamne aane lagti hai uski khaamiya .. uske charitrr par savaal uthane wale uske karm .. jaise par-striyo se gair-kanooni sambandh .. gair-kanooni gatividhiya mein seh-bhaagita .. svaarth ke liye dusro ka soshan karna .. bagawati vyhvahaar .. ek aisa shaksh jo na accha pati bana .. na accha/saccha premi bann paya .. na pita ke taur par apne baccho ke liye accha udhaaran pesh kar raha hai .. jiska apne maata-pita se vaichaarik matbhed rehta hai .. jo na apni iklauti behen ka prem saarthak kar paaya, jo uspar jaan chhidakti aayi hai saare jeevan .. na he ek nipun shahgird, kyonki apne bhaavesh mein beh kar ye galtiya kar baith-ta hai .. jisko ki uske dost nirantar samjhate rehte hai .. jisko ki jeevan ke har mod par maargdarshan ki jaroorat padti hai, maata-pita se, dosto se, apne bete se .. jiske ki hamesha he saare kaam aise rahe hai ki hamesha usko sahayta ki jaroorat padi hai .. hamesha he apne pita Rameshwar ji ke radar par rehta hai kyonki Shankar ji to 5 saal ke bacche jaise 'bhole' hai .. jo jeevan mein sahi faisla nahi le pata .. jo apne pati/pita hone ki jimmedaariyo ko nibhane mein poorntaya saksham nahi hai .. jo apni jimmedaariyo ko apne swaart, maje aur jidd ke liye aahuti par chadha deta hai .. jisko ki bhavishay mein 'nayak' se 'khalnaayak' bana kar prastut karne ke liye aaj har tarah se uski chhavi ko dhoomil kiya jaa raha hai ...
Rekha sharma - ek stri, ek pativrata, ek grehni, parivaar ki ahem kadi, sabki chaheti, apne gharelu kaam ke prati hamesha he sajag .. ek iklauti Beti - 3 maa/baap ki .. iklauti behen - 4 bhaiyo ki .. maa - 3 baccho ki + 1 beti (maa us bete ki jiske paas Rameshwar ji ki 3/4 property apne maayke se apne Pita Kundanlaal ji ke hisse ki bhi property mili {Sanjeev bhiya aur apni behno ka hissa bhi} - indirectly Rekha ji ko wo sab mila jisko Madhulata ne maanga tha) .. bahu - Kaushalya ji ki .. Patni - Dr. Shankar Sharma ki (jisne shaadi ki raat ko he saaf kar diya tha ki wo kisi aur se pyaar karte hai..magar fir bhi kabhi Patni ke adhikaar se vanchit nahi kiya..na he pyaar se, bas dikhane ka tareeka jor/jabardasti ka hai..par wo to sabhi ke saath he ek samaan he pesh aate hai), gale mein mangalsutrr baandh sakti hai, maang mein sindoor bhar sakti hai, mann chaahe rangeen kapde pehen sakti hai .. ghar se bahar ek patni ke adhikaar se jaati hai, pati ke dosto aur pariwaaro se milne ka adhikaar hai, ek bhyaata ka sa sam-maan milta hai, saath nibhaane ke liye hamesha pati saath mein khada hai, pati na bhi ho to ghar ke baaki sadasya hamesha saath mein khade hai, har dushwaari mein saath nibhane ke liye .. jiss ghar mein bhyaah ke aayi waha jyeth/dewar ki najro mein bhai ki patni hone ka sam-maan praapt hai .. magar wahi iss sikke ka dusra pehlu par bhi dhyaan diya jaaye to nazar aayega ki Rekha sharma .. ek aisi stri jisne pyaar ki kami apne bete ke neeche let kar poori ki .. apne shareer ki icchao ko poora apne bete/beti se karti hai (kam se kam Shankar ji pyaar ke aavran mein bandh kar apni betiyo se to apne shareer ki bhook nahi mitate) .. waise agar gaur farmaya jaaye to Shankar Sharma aur Rekha Sharma mein jyaada farak nahi hai .. Shankar Sharma apne maje ke liye ghar se bahar mooh maarte hai, kyonki unke paas moka hota hai, wo bina nazro mein aaye in sabka luft utha rahe hai, to wahi Rekha sharma ghar ke andar wo maje bete se le rahi hai, ghar se bahar jaa nahi sakti .. kamaal ki baat ye hai ki shrimati ji jyaada bolti nahi, par bete ka bahana le kar pati ke saamne khadi ho gayi thi aur palatwaar bhi kiya .. agar ye chuppi samay rehte aur jaroori kaarno ko dhyaan mein rakhte hue pehle he inpar apne pati Shankar Sharma se baat ki hoti to aaj in dono pati-patniyo mein itna vaichaarik matbhed nahi hota .. jitna pyaar/adhikaar/chinta apne baccho ki karti hai .. us-se jyaada bhi nahi to kam bhi nahi, Shankar Sharma bhi nahi karte .. Rekha ji jitna Arjun ko samjhaane ke liye apni betiyo ka sahara le rahi hai, wahi dusri aur Shankar Sharma har uss chhoti-moti naafarmaaniyo se apne iklaute bete ko bacha kar rakhna chahte hai jiske kaaran uska bhavishaye khatre mein pad sakta hai, chahe uska sudhaar aur accha sochne ke chakkar mein khud bhi kabhi dusro se kataksh jhelne pade, yaha tak ki apni samdhan Romela Puri se bhi .. Rekha sharma apne pati se naa jyaada behtar hai aur na he boori, dono miya-biwi ek he dhaak ki 2 paat hai .. Rekha sharma to aisi sobhaagyeshaali ladki hai jo mooh mein sone ki chamach se dood pene ke samaan hamesha he anukool paristithiyo ke saath pali-badhi .. kya jo ghar ke andar in maa-beto ke beech PYAAR hai agar wo khul kar Kaushalya ji saame aa jaaye to kya tab bhi Rekha Sharma unke liye Madhulata Singh se behtar vikalp hongi ...
Madhulata Singh - ek shaatir stri, ek vidhwa, ek abhagin jisko na to acchi maa mili - jo acchi/nek parwarish de paaye, na accha bhai mila aur na he accha pati aur pariwaar .. marzi ke khilaaf shaadi hui, wo bhi uss shaksh se jisko wo bilkul naa pasnad karti thi .. jyeth bhi aisa mila jo uski majboori ka shoshan kar raha tha .. Sasur Sombir singh bhi aisa na the jisne iss ladki ka kabhi bhala chaha ho .. 2 Saas bhi aisi mili ki ek to chupp laga gayi jab samay tha sahi baat bolne ka aur dusri to khud he neech pravati ki thi, jiske khud ke he karm karaab the .. jiss ladke ko chaha wo mil na paaya, aur jiss tarah mila usme sam-maan nahi tha na he adhikaar, jiski wajah se hamesha he apni sasuraal mein taane khaaye aur heen bhaawana ke chalte durvyehwahaar aur dikkaar bhari nazro ka saamna karna pada hoga, izzat to kya he milti .. beta paida hua wo bhi maansik roop se saksham nahi .. jis-se bhavishaye mein kuch hitt milna to door ki baat hai, balke hamesha uska karne mein he zindagi guzaarni padegi .. kabhi koi dost bhi aisa na mila jo sahi maargdarshan kar sake .. dost to khiar bahut door ki baat hai jab maa aur bhai he apne swaarth ke liye apno ka shoshan karne mein sankoch na karte ho to waha behtari ki gunjaaish he kaha reh jaati hai .. Ek pita the jo acche maargdarshan kar sakte the, kintu ladki hone ke kaaran aur ghar mein maa/maayke walo ka dabdaba hone ke chalte unki nek niyati se Madhulata vanchit he reh gayi .. agar pariwaar, parwarish aur paristithi acchi mili hoti to aaj jo Munni sabke saamne hai shayad wo aaj aisi na hoti .. bacchpane mein kuch galtiyon ke chalte Munni ka poora jeevan he savaalo ke ghere mein ghira raha aur bhoot v vartmaan ke dukho ka kaaran bhi hai .. jab har taraf se aadmi itna ghir jaaye to wo chhat-patahat mein kuch galat nirnaye bhi le leta hai .. aur jiska saara jeevan dusro ki wajah se prabhavit raha ho aur hamesha anchaha he prapt hua ho .. to wo vyakti kaha se accha bann sakta hai .. aur jin acche logo ka sang alp samay ke liye praapt bhi hua to unse haalato aur ashubhchintako ki nek niyati ke chalte door kar diya gaya .. aaj jeevan ke jiss mod par Madhulata khadi hai, agar kuch aise he haalat Rekha sharma ko mile hote to wo bhi Kaushalya devi ki parchaai aur unki chaheti bahu na bann paati .. Madhulata ke beras jeevan mein pati/premi se wo pyaar na haasil hua jo usne apne khwaabo mein darkaar ki hogi, jab kismaat kharaab ho to beta bhi Ravinder jaisa mandbhuddhi aur beti jo nazaaz milan se paida hui wo bhi apni maa ka sahara na ban saki, kya pata agar uska saccha pyaar mila hota to uske sahare aaj ki Munni ko kuch raato ke liye Lata Sharma nahi ban-na padta, shayad wo Madhulata singh he rehkar apni beti mein apna 'sansar' basa leti .. Madhulata singh urf Lata sharma urf Munni ki kismat he kaanto ki sej par saja kar mili hai ...
Kaushalya Devi - pati..parmeshwar jaise .. raja ke khaas Munshi ke bade bete Thanedaar Rameshwar Sharma ji .. jinka khud peehar bahut majboot raha hai .. phir aage chal kar pati ka rutba aur unke sang se mile 4 pyaare aur kaabil bacche .. aur aise he unke jeevan saathi .. ye dridhnishchayi, aatmvishwash se bharpoor, apne time ki padhi-likhi aur prakhyaat vayidh pita ki laadli honhaar putri Thanedaarni ji hamesha he thaath-baath se rahi aur aise he inke liye paristithiya bhi anukool rahi .. jo kabhi samay ka pahiya galat disha mein ghooma bhi to inhone apne badd-bole pann aur khari-jubaan v apni chaturaai se har paristithi aur har uss kadi ko bahut he ekaki adhikaar se apne vash mein rakha .. inki sabse badi wajah bebaki pane ki rahi inke pati-parmeshwar ji ki chuppi .. ek to ve imaandaar aur upar se kanoon ke daayre mein bandhe hue hadd se jyaada samaajik vyakti .. bahut si baar Kaushalya ji ke bebaki pane ki wajah se bahut he pechida kaam chutkiyon mein nipat gaye, par kayi baar inke tej vyvahaar ki wajah se kuch kaam bigde bhi hai .. jaise ki us din Madhulata/Shankar ke rishte ke baat karne ke dauraan inke gusse aur adiyal pane ki wajah se wo matter solve hote-hote reh gaya .. khuddari hona acchi baat hai magar kabhi-kabhi stithi ko gherai se samajhne mein inse bhi galti hui aur us din ki wajah se aaj tak inka pariwaar aur inke shubhchintak bhi uska khaamiyaja bhugat rahe hai .. agar us din Kaushalya ji apni 'main' ko thodi der ek taraf rakh kar Madhulata se khul kar baat karti ki wo aisa kyon keh rahi hai aur agar aisa tha to usne pehle kabhi Shankar se aisi baate kyon nahi kahi, to wo jhamela usi din sulajh gaya hota .. har kisi ko dudharu gaanye he acchi lagti hai chaahe uski heek mein 2 kohni maar do magar wo kuch na kehne wali he gaanye sabko pasand aati hai, chaahe koi kitna bhi adiyal aur dumdaar aadmi ho wo seeng maarne wali markhani bhains se bachta he hai .. kyonki Kaushalya ji ki tarah Madhulata bhi unki he tarah mooh-fat aur bebaki se baat kehne wali jeedaar ladki thi .. jo kabhi bhavishye mein unke saamne bhi khadi ho sakti thi kisi androoni kaleh ko lekar .. jo unke 'sansar' mein daraar padne ka kaaran ban sakta tha .. to inhone bhi Madhulata ke maamle mein jyaada paanv daalna sahi nahi samjha .. waise inhone bhi to Rameshwar ji ke pushtaini ghar se alag apna 'sansaar' basaaya .. khair ye baat to baad ki hai .. waise ghar ke andar bhi jo mahol hai aisa to nahi ho sakta ki inhe uski bhanak na ho .. asal mein kya chal raha hai beshak uspar inhone gaur na kiya ho, magar kuch to andesha to inhe bhi hai ...
Rameshwar Sharma - Pakistan mein apne pratibhawaan Munshi pad par sthapit pita ke yaha janme Rameshwar ji seedhe sacche aur hamesha he samaaj ke kalyaan mein sahyog dene waale ye maha-atma hamesha he satye ke maarg par chale .. chahe uske liye inhe kitni bhi badi keemat kyon na chukaani padi ho .. Inhone apne jeevan mein bahut kucch kamaya aur paaya magar inke liye uski inki nazro mein inke maan-pratishtha ke aage koi keemat nahi .. aur iss baat se inki dharam-patni Kaushalya ji bhi bakhoobi parichit hai, isi liye ve bhi hamesha usi daayre mein bandh kar rahi hai aur chali hai aur apne baccho aur pariwaar ko bhi usi daayre mein baandhe rakha .. shayad isi liye Rameshwar ji apni dharampatni ji ka itna sam-maan karte hai aur hamesha he isi liye apne samaksh inko bhi har fainsle mein barabar mein baithate hai .. Rameshwar ji ka abhimaan sada he inke baache aur pariwaar rahe hai .. par inki jaan apne manjhle putrr Shankar sharma aur beti Madhu sharma mein basti hai .. beti to hamesha he pita ki ladli hoti hai, aur wo bhi sabhi bhaiyo ki iklauti aur sabse chhoti .. magar Shankar Sharma se inka lagaav apne putrr ke bhole mann aur uske saaf-suthre vichaaro ki wajah se raha hai .. aur kahi na kahi inko uske bhole pann aur uspe suhaga Shankar ke ghusse ki wajah se darr bhi sataye rehta hai .. inko apne bete ke liye isi baat ki chintaa satati rehti hai ki kabhi inka ye seddha-saache bhole mann wala beta kabhi kisi bhaavesh mein behkar koi galat kadam na utha le .. jiska udharan inhone Madhulata se jude masle mein dekh liya tha .. kuch aabhaas inko pehle se bhi tha, shayad isi liye inhone pehle he Madhulata ke vishay mein pata lagte he agli subha-subha Ishawar singh ji ki haweli par jaana he munasib bhi samjha tha .. aur kahi na kahi pur-jor koshish ki thi ki kuch bhi karke Madhulata ke balak-mann ki hatt ko talaa jaa sake, jiski wajah se inhone apne gale ki mala bhi utaar kar madhulata ke saamne rakh di thi .. jab ki waha itne log shaamil the .. lekin inhone apni izzat ko daanv par rakh kar wo kadwa ghoont bhi pee liya ki kya pata aisa karne se Munni maan jaaye .. kyonki jo kucch hua .. shayad uska aabhaas Rameshwar ji ko pehle he tha, Shankar Sharma ko lekar inki chinta vyarth nahi thi, magar honi ko kaun taal sakta hai, hua bhi wahi jo koi bhi nahi chahta tha, keval kuch naa samajh garam khoon wale naujawaano ke, jinki samajh taakat-bal, paise ki garmi aur jawani ke josh ke ahenkaar ki chaadar mein dhaki hui thi .. lekin inhone samajhdaari dikhate hue apne paute Arjun Sharma ko iss sab se door rakhne ki bhar-sak koshish ki, lekin na chahte hue bhi aaj ghoom phir kar kahani wahi jaa chuki hai jaha ye kadapi nahi chahte the .. kyonki inki aanko ke saamne kayi pariwaar uss badle ki aag mein jhulse the .. aur uski tapas aaj bhi sabko jala rahi hai .. uss bure daur mein inhone apne bete Shankar se bhi ajeej bhateje Arjun Singh ko khoya, 4 dosto ko khoya aur 2 pairwaaro se dushmanagi bhi hui .. Daleep ji ke pitaaji ne khud goli khaa kar Rameshwar ji ko bacha liya tha .. shayad isi baat ka ehsaan aaj bhi inka pariwaar maanta hai, aur har tarah se Manju/Menaka ke liye khada bhi hai .. waise Thanedaar ji ko shayad uss kangan ke swaami ka abhaas hai isi liye unhone usko chhupa ke rakha hai aur apni dhaampatni ko bhi nahi dikhaya ki wo dekhte he pehchaan lengi .. kya pata wo kangan inki dharampatni ne he apne haatho se kisi ko pehnaya ho ya bheint kiya ho .. aur shayad isi liye Rameshwar ji kaal ke garb mein dabe un kaale panno ko kholne se katra rahe hai .. kyonki seedha ilzaam/ aarop-pratyarop karne se baat bhi bigad sakti hai aur iss shaanti ko bhangg karna ve bilkul nahi chahte .. bas sahi samay ke intezaar mein hai ki kya pata samay ke anuroop sahi disha nikal aaye .. aur itne saalo se jo nangi talwaar inke hiteshiyo ke upar latki hui hai wo hat jaaye .. ek to inhone bahut kuch dekha hai aur bahut kuch saha hai aur khoya bhi hai .. lekin hamesha har pareshaani ka samadhaan chupp reh kar nahi kiya jaa sakta .. kabhi-kabhi chupp rehna kisi anhoni ko badhawa bhi de jaata hai .. shayad inki ye chuppi he bhavishaye mein pariwaar ke tootne ka kaaran bhi ban sakti hai .. jiski ke humne 2 jhalak dekhi bhi hai ...
Arjun Sharma - kahani ki shuruaat hui bina age bataye hue .. iski badi behen Ritu thi 19 saal ki aur ye nawabjaade unse 3 saal chhote .. magar shayad site ke rules and regulations ke chalte lekhak ji ko kahani mein aage chal kar Aru ki age 18 saal batani padi .. aur Ritu ho gayi 20 saal ki.. ye launda bhi hai ajeeb he shakshiyaat .. kabhi to 80 saal ke budhe aadmiyo se bhi gheri baate aur samajhdaari dikha jaata hai aur kabhi-kabhi 15 saal ke nausikhiye udd-dand balak ki paribhasha ko sarthak kar deta hai .. ab jitni mehnat iss ladke ko nikhaarne mein ho rahi hai .. shayad itni mehnat to kabhi Ram ji ne apne chhote bhai laxman ko samjahne mein bhi nahi ki hogi .. kyonki jitne mahapurusho ki dekh-rekh mein Arjun pal-badh raha hai .. agar itni mehnat ke baad bhi bhavishaye mein ye koi aisi galti kar baith-ta hai ya ye usko nazar-andaaz kar deta hai aur uska khamiyaza poore pariwaar aur iss-se jude sabhi priye logo ke jeevan par padta hai to un sab logo ki seekh aur mehnat par paani fir jaayega .. jo itne saalo se Arjun Sharma ko ek poorn saadhit vyaktitv mein gudh kar uska skaaratmak paritoshik chahte hai .. Arjun sharma ko har koi uska kareebi usme Arjun Singh ki jhalak aur usko Ajju banta hua dekhne ki chah rakhte hai .. magar kahi na kahi ve us anjaan darr se bhi grasit hai jiska Ajju prapt hua tha .. shayad Umed Singh ne isi liye apne bhole ki santaan ke dattak pita bhi bane aur Arjun ko Rameshwar ji ke saath mil kar har tarah se ek kumhaar ki tarah iss kacche mann ke jeev ko thok peet ke sahi aakaar mein dhaalne ki koshish mein lage rehte hai .. darte bhi hai kahi koi chook ho gayi to shayad ve iss bacche ke mann par galat prabhaav na chhod jaaye .. shayad isi liye sabse jyaada Arjun sharma ke pita Shankar sharma ji ko apne iklaute bete ki chinta satati rehti hai .. aur kahi na kahi ve khud bhi usme apne Ajju ko dekhte bhi hai .. shayad apne bete ko dekh kar uski sacchai ko dekh kar unka mann us unhoni ke liye khudd ko doshi bhi thehraata hai aur uske liye pachtawa bhi hota hai .. shayad isi liye ve Arjun sharma ko har waqt chhoti-chhoti baato par gher lete hai .. par koi bhi uss 'bhole' pita ke mann ko padh nahi paata ki wo kya sochta hai apne putrr ke liye, yaha tak ki unki patni bhi kahi na kahi unko he apne putrr se bichadne ka kusoorwaar samajhti hai .. Arjun-Ritu ke liye bhi ve isi liye jyaada pareshaan dikhayi dete hai kyonki unhone khud ka aur Madhu ke saath jaisa unka jeevan raha hai .. ve nahi chahte ki aaj ki bachpane aur bhaavo mein beh kar bhavishaye ke liye apna rishta mein daraare na daal le .. khair ye to samay he batayega ki samay ke garbh mein kya chupa hai .. manushye chahe kitna bhi haath-payr maar le, lekin honi ko koi nahi taal saka hai .. Arjun abhi chhota hai .. tez hai, bado ki baato ka anusaran bhi karta hai, jyaada chanchal chitt ka bhi nahi hai, jo bhaavo mein bheh kar kuch ulta seedha kar jaaye ya keh jaaye, kintu kahbi-kabhi pariwaar ke sadasyo ko lekar apna aapa kho deta hai .. jiska koi galat faayda bhi utha sakta hai ...
Umed Singh - 2 payro par chalti firti ek Army batallion .. jo ek baar kisi ko apna target bana le to uska kaal nishchit he hai .. lekin dil ka saccha aur shareer ka daitya sa saadhe 6 feet ka ye manushye hamesha se aisa nahi tha .. agar iss kahani mein kisi ne sab se jyaada kuch aur kisi ko khoya hai to wo Umed singh he hai .. kyonki inhone sirf apne aazeez bhaiyo ko he nahi balke apne pita aur apni Maa Purnima je ki mamta ko kho diya hai aur un sabse bhi badi cheez jo inhone khoyi hai wo hai inke mann ki shaanti .. jisme sirf inke dushman he nahi balke sabse jyaada ye khud ko jalaate aa rahe hai .. kyonki Arjun Singh urf Ajju sirf inka chhota bhai he nahi balke inka sabse pakka dost bhi tha .. jo inka purak tha .. inki maa ki aankho ka tara tha aur inke pita ka gumaan tha .. shayad apne bhai ko khone ke peeche ye sabse jyaada khud ko he kasoorwaar mante aaye hai .. kyonki inke pita ka sab kucch chhod kar chale jaana aur 24 kamro ki haweli ka suna pada hona sab kuch inke dono chhote bhaiyo ki akasmaat maut ke kaaran hua .. lekin kya kabhi Gajju urf medi urf Umed singh ji ne apne mitrr Shankar sharma se iss vishay par baat nahi ki hogi .. kya inhone kabhi sanjha nahi kiya hogo ki Ajju aakhir waha karne kya gaya tha .. kya shankar ji ne apne bhai/dost medi urf Gajju ko nahi bataya hoga ki inhone he Ajju ko Madhulata ko laane ke liye bheja tha aur inka he school mein milne ka plan tha .. Shankar Sharma ji ki aankho par to Madhulata ke prem ki pardi padi hui hai .. par kya Medi urf Umed singh ne in sab baato par gaur nahi farmaya hoga .. aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki inke 2-2 bhai maare gaye ho .. magar inhone uski koi jaanch padtaal na ki ho .. jo aadmi kisi anzaan ladki ke saath jor-jabarjasti ke liye ek kukhyaat neta ko goli maar sakte hai aur itne bade pahuche hue bahubali corporator Avdhesh mishra jaise ucchi pahuch rakhne wale aadmi tak se bhidne tak ko taiyaar ho sakte hai to ye kaise maana jaaye ki inhone kabhi uss aur dhyaan na diya ho .. ho sakta hai ki inse inke pita ya maa ne vachan liya ho ki hum log pehle he apne 2 beto ko kho chuke hai aur hum apne baaki ke 2 baccho ki jindagi khatre mein nahi daalna chahte .. aur Ajju ki kasam dekar Umed singh ji ke haath baandh diye ho .. par khud na sahi Shankar Sharma ne bhi kya koi baat na ki hogi .. waise inke khaas khatarnaak kutte ke khulne ke peeche inki behen Shaalini singh ho sakti hai .. kyonki ghar ke baaki sadasye Ajju ki maut ko lekar baat na karte ho .. magar Ajju ki maut ka jimmedaar ye Shankar sharma ko maanti ho ya inhone Ajju ko uss raat phone par Shankar se baat karte hue suna ho Madhulata se school mein milne wali baat ko lekar aur isi liye inhone Shankar sharma se badla lene ke liye he apne bhai ke itne khukhaar kutte ko khula chhod diya tha ...
Dharamveer Sangwan - Haryana ke #### sheher ki jaani-maani hasti .. jinke sheher mein kayi naami giraami hospital chalte hai .. ye khud ek Vikhyaat peshewar Doctor hai .. jinka khud ka beta bhi Peshe se ek Doctor hai aur in mahashay ne ek bala ki khoobsoorat aur bahut he down to earth Russian bala se vivah kiya hua hai, jis-se inko ek putri bhi praapt hai .. magar inki naafarmaaniyo aur aiyaashiyo ke chalte filhaal ve apne maata-pita ke paas apne desh Roos gayi hui hai aur unhi ko manane aur laane Shankar sharma ke param mitrr Param Sangwan gaye hue hai .. waise inki apne dost ki tarah kuch extra co-curricular activities mein bhi interest rehta hai shayad usi jeene ke tareeke ke kaaran inke apne rishte mein daraar paida hui .. magar jald he sab kuch wapas patri par lautne wala hai .. waise chhote Sangwan se jyaada kaabil-e-tareef inke pita Dharamveer Sangwan ji ki shakshiyat hai .. ye Mahamaanav sirf apne kaarye-shetr mein he nahi apitu dusre vibhaago mein bhi bahut he kushal aur nipun hai jaise ki nishana saadhne mein aur apne shahgrido ko sahi disha-nirdesh pradaan karne mein aur unke neeji samasyaao/kaaryo mein badh-chadh kar bina kisi laag-lapet ke poori tarah se madad karne mein .. ek tarah se ye Shankar Sharma ke Dattak pita he hai .. kyonki ye apne putrr Param Sangwan se bhi jyaada Rameshwar ji ke chahete putrr Doctor Shankar sharma ko apna jyaada pyaara beta maante hai .. aur inki madad sirf Shankar Sharma he nahi balke unke pariwaar ke har sadasyo ke liye he ye sadaiv taiyaar rehte hai .. jaise ki Rameshwar ji ke paute ki ek phone call par bina apni jaan/rutbe ki parwah kiye .. area ke jaane-maane kukhyaat badmaasho ko dharashayi karne mein sabse aage khade the ...shayad inki jaan-pehchaan Shankar sharma se pichle 25-26 saalo se hai .. jab se ki Shankar sharma ne inke neeche apni dactari ki training li thi .. magar jo vartmaan mein Rameshwar ji ke pariwaar ke saath samasyaaye ghat rahi hai .. us vaastavikta se ye bhi poorn roop se anbhigye hai ...
Sanjeev Sharma - Thanedaar Rameshwar sharma ji ke bade paute aur peshe se IPS officer jo ki ek Bima karmchaari ki aad mein khufia taur par apne kaam ko anzaam dete hai aur ghar ke baahar hone wali har chhoti moti gatividhiyo par inki poori pakad rehti hai .. shayad isi liye Rameshwar ji ne apne bade paute ko taiyaar karke Police mahakme mein daala tha .. bahvishye ko dhyaan mein rakhte hue .. lekin in janaab ka jyaada tar samay apne pariwaar ke khilaaf galt gativeediyo ko niptaane mein he jaata hai .. ye policiya kaam kam karte hai .. shayad iske peeche Rameshwar ji ke Policiya dost IG kapoor ki meherbaaniyo ke chalte .. waise in bhaisahab ne apne chhote bhai ko baahar ka raasta to dikha diya tha .. jisko udharan ke taur par le kar inke anuj ne bakhoobi sabse pehle inki maa-behno par he vaastavik gyaan ko saakar karte hue usme nipunta haasil ki
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waise ghar mein itni saari ladkiyah hai Rameshwar ji ke aur har ek ladki ki eham bhoomika hai .. shuruaat mein Arjun ko pyaar sabse pehle Maadhuri didi se mila .. baad mein sab ne apne tareeke se Arjun ko aur khud bhi pyaar ka ehsaas karwati rahi hai magar hamesha se he ek behen Arjun ki parde ke peeche rahi ya uspar kisi ne bhi jyaada dhyaan nahi diya .. kyonki hamesha se he Alka/Ritu he chaaye rehti hai ya Komal didi ka ehem kirdaar nazar aata hai .. punjab wale updates se pehle Priyanka aur Aarti didi dono ka he jikrr sirf ghar ke kaam karne ko lekar he hua, kabhi koi khaas baato ya koi khaas kaam mein unka jyaada hastcchep karte nahi dikhi .. ab punjab se aane ke baad bhi ikki-dukki baar he jikrr hua .. waise Tara ka company ki party ko lekar aur aaj shaadi mein Arjun ke saath baate karte hue dikhaya hai ya fir ek jhalak Madhulata par tanz kaste hue .. lekin ek ladki aur bhi hai ghar mein jisko sirf kitabo mein ya sone ke time he dikhaate hai .. Rupaali didi .. umar mein Arjun Sharma se badi hai aur padhai mein bhi tez hai .. bilkul apni Bua Kaushalya ji ki tarah .. bas jyaada bolti nahi ya kabhi dikhaya nahi .. Rishte se to ye Arjun ki bua lagti hai magar umar aur bina maa-baap ki iss bacchi ko Shankar ji aur Rekha ji ne gaud liya hai .. Ritu ki umar ki hai aur Shankar ke azzez mama shree ki iklauti beti bhi .. jinse Shankar Sharma ji ka bahut he ghera yaarana tha .. jinhone apne bhanje ko Madhulata singh ko bhaga le jaane ke liye kaha bhi tha aur agar jaroorat bhi padti to sahayta bhi karte .. apni behen aur Jija ke fainsle ko nakaarte hue .. inko sab jaankaari thi apne bhaanje ki aur uski prem-kahani ki bhi .. Shankar ji ki shaadi kyon nahi ho paayi ye bhi bakhoobi pata hoga aur kaun-kaun iss-se juda hua tha .. Ajju urf Arjun Singh ko bhi acche se jaante honge aur uske saath kiya hua ye bhi inko bahut acche se pata hoga .. magar kabhi bhi lekhak ji ne uss aur jyaada parkaash nahi daala .. Rupali ke saamne kabhi bekhayaali mein ya aam taur par apne aur pane bhaanje ke kisse sunate hue Madhulata aur Ajju ka bhi jikrr kiya he hoga .. kya Rupaali didi ghar mein aisi saksh nahi hogi jo Arjun ko sab kuch bata rahi hogi .. jitna bhi usko pata hoga ...
Madhulata ki shaadi Sheela devi ke bete Rishab se kyun ki gayi ye abb jaa kar saaf hua kyonki uss samay to Daleep singh ko Rameshwar ji ne unke pita ka badla lene se rok diya hoga .. aur uske kucch dino baad he Shankar-Umed-Narinder ne milkar sabko maar diya tha .. magar Daleep singh ji ke mann mein wo pehle ki chingaari aaj bhi jal rahi hogi .. kyonki Rishab ka baap shayad Fateh singh he tha .. jiski wajah se Shankar ji ne usko Sheela devi ko gaud dilwaya tha .. magar Menaka ke bade bhai Bheem bhi poora neech vyakti tha aur wo hamesha se he sabhi galat kaamo mein Sheela devi ki madad karte aaya tha .. Daleep ji ko us samay jo sujha ya sahi laga badla lena ke liye to unhone apni beti ka he prayog kiya .. shayad unpar nazar rakhne ke liye ye sab kiya gaya tha aur dusra Rishabh ko sudhaar kar rakhne ke liye bhi Shankar Sharma aur Daleep ji ki mansha rahi hogi .. kintu dono mein se koi bhi kaam sahi se nahi ho paaya .. aur behcaari Manjubala ki zindagi kharaab ho gayi aur wo Shaadi ke kuch dino baad he Rishabh ki bewaa bann gayi .. aur iss sab ke liye Saroj mausi kyon taiyaar hui kyon ki wo bhi iss pachde se anjaan to na hogi .. jab rishta hua to unke saamne sawaal to uthe honge aur unhone uspar aapatti bhi jataayi hogi .. to kya sirf Shankar ji ke kaaran he ve chupp laga gayi thi .. bahut se kaamo ko karne mein Shankar ji aur unke saathi samajhdaari se aur nipunta se kaam lete hai .. magar yaha iss bacchi ki zindagi kharaab karne mein aur uske aage ke jeevan par sada ke liye kalank lagaane mein ve doshi he tehraye jaayenge .. kayi baar acche kaam ko anzaam dene ke liye agar mansha buri hai to uska parinaam bhi galat he nikaalta hai ...
Shaadi mein Tara ko lekar Madhulata singh ka iss baat par chowkna ki Tara Madhu sharma ki beti hai .. kya lata Sharma bhi iss raaz se waakif hai ki Tara Shankar sharma ki beti hai ...
Shaadi mein Madhulata ka kayi baar chowkna .. aur Shankar Sharma ji ki ladkiyon ko dekh kar aur unki baato se chowkana laazmi hai .. shayad unko intne logo ka andesha nahi hoga ki Rameshwar ji ke pariwaar mein itne log hai aur ye Shankar sharma ki chauthi(4) beti kaha se aa gayi .. shaayad kal ko Madhulata singh ke liye Rameshwar ji ke pariwaar mein naye nishane mil gaye hai .. aane wale samay mein Shankar Sharma ke liye sabko bacha kar rakhna aur unki suraksha ka dhyaan rakhna aur bhi mushkil hone wala hai .. kyonki ek baar ko Madhulata in ladkiyon ko apna nishana na banaaye magar shaadi mein aur log bhi sam-milit the aur unki nazro mein itni saari ladkiya aayi bhi hongi aur kisi bewakoof ne to jaahir bhi kar diya ...
waise Shabnam ko lekar Arjun ko isme ghaseetna wo bhi itna jaldi theek nahi hai .. jab itne log pehle se he iss kaam se jude hue hai to Arjun ko isme ghusana Rameshwar ji ke khud ke nirnaye ko he khaariz karta hai ...
Waise Arjun ke vishay mein jaankar Madhulata singh ko apni kismat par malaal to aa raha hoga ki agar wo uss samay apni maa aur Chandar ki baato mein aakar Rameshwar ji ke saamne apni sharte na rakhti to aaj wo khud apne pyaar Shankar Sharma ki patni hoti aur Arjun jaisa unka beta hoga aur wo Rameshwar ji ke ghar ki bahu bhi hoti .. par baad mein pacchtaaye haut kya jab chidiya chug gayi khet ...
Shayad Madhulata ki kismat mein ek talaakshuda ban-na he likha tha .. shayad unki kismat mein ek manddbuddhi ki abhagin maa ban-na likha tha .. kyonki Vinaash kaale vipreet buddhi
ek baat aur kya Daleep ji CID mein hai ye baat sabke saamne khuli hui hai .. ya ve bhi Sanjeev/Lucky ki tarah khufiya taur par kaam karte hai .. ya bas ye twist hum Readers ko ghumane ke liye abhi tak chhupa kar rakha gaya tha ...
Bhupender Singh aur Sanjeev sharma uss ID caller ke vishay mein kya jaankaari haasil kar paate hai .. kyon ki Mandhulata ji bhi itni chokas to hai ki wo jaldi se kisi no. se jaldi London direct call nahi karengi .. waise wo kisi aur ka phone bhi apni call route karne ke liye use kar sakti hai like haryana se UP call karke unse apni call forward karwa sakti hai ya aise he kisi aur ke through ...
waise kayi baar lekhak ji ne iss baat ko lekar prashan bhi kiya hai ki Annu Walia ke pita ka Shankar Sharma ji se kya rishta hai ya inki aapas mein ya jaan pehchaan hai .. to kya .. ye sirf mera andaaza hai ki Annu walia ke Pitaji aur punjab mein Narinder ji ke padoshi Gurdeep ke maata/Pita ki koi rishtedaari aapas mein ho ya fir Jassi ki family se .. shayad bhai-bhai ya fir jija-saale .. shayad Annu walia ke pitaji ke madad se Narinder Sharma ko waha settle karya gaya ho Punjab ke us aadhunik sheher mein ...
agar aisa hai ki Annu walia ki family ki jaan-pehchaan waha kisi in 2-3 family se hai to iska pata Sanjeev/Madhuri ki shaadi mein saamne aa jaayega ...
waise london se yaad aaya .. Annu walia aur uska bhai wahi london mein he to hai aur uski bhabi to wahi ki local resident bhi hai .. kuch na kuch madad to Annu ki taraf se bhi ho sakti hai ya fir already ho chuki hai ...
waise Shankar Sharma ji aur unke saathiyo ka England jaane ka bandobast ya fir Arjun ka england jaane ka bandobast khud Arjun ne university ke VC se setting bana kar kar diya hai .. shayad Annu walia ki madad se ye sab hua hai ya fir Sandeep ke pitaji Dharampaal ji ki madad se, kyonki wo University mein ve horticulture dept mein research dept. mein faculty hai .. chalo jis bhi kisi ki madad se ye sab hua .. aakhir Dharmvir sangwan ji ko England mein aane-jaane ka practice aur educational purpose se permit mil chuka hai .. to Bindu urf Bindiya tak pahuchne mein ab inhe jyaada pareshaani nahi hogi .. par waha inki pakad aisi nahi hogi jaisi ki yaha par hai .. shayad isme inki madad Muskaan kar sake .. par ye sab hoga .. Sanjeev/Maadhuri ki shaadi ke baad .. jiska matlab 2+ hafte aur us-se pehle Narinder sharma bhi apni patni ke saath wapas apne desh apne sheher laut aayenge .. aur unki kya khun-nas hai Bindiya ke saath aur kyo wo pehle bhi Sombir singh ki haweli par nahi jaate the .. iska pata chalega .. shayad kuch aage aane wale addayatano ke maadhyam se .. ab hoga asli khel shuru .. kyonki apne Bhole Shankar ji akele padd rahe the .. kyonki abhi tak unka hasta-muskarata unse 2 inch lamba bhai pichle 25 saalo se unke saath nahi tha .. lekin ab inki team ka asli mohra .. iss 'luka chippi' ke khel mein shaamil hone wala hai .. phir unke aane par he iss kahani se jude kayi 'Aavran' hatenge wo bhi ek saath .. bas tab tak ke liye shaadi ka intezaar rahega ...
lekin jab tak Sanjeev/Maadhuri ki shaadi ka number nahi aata .. tab tak Babita ke 44'' ke doodh khaali hote hue dekhte hai .. aur kaya pata saath mein Akshara ki bhi suhaagraat apni badi behen ke saath he bann jaaye .. kya pata kab kiske taare buland ho jaaye .. kyonki kiski kismat mein kya likha hai ye to upar wala ya lekhak ji he jaante hai ...
Aaj ki in muthbhed mein kaun haara kaun jeeta ye to aane wala samay he batayega .. lekin jo bhi parinaam nikal kar saamne aaye .. Enigma bhai ke saath hum kuch khadoos paathakgan to judd he chuke hai .. iss pyaar ke sagar mein gaute lagane ke liye ...
waise yaha ek baat gaur farmaane wali ye bhi hai ki Rabhubir Singh aur Sombir singh ke paiwaaro mein aapas mein bhi paariwaarik ganisht-tha thi fir bhi Umed singh ji ki behen Shaalini singh yaha Sombir Singh ya Rammehar ki haweli par koisi bhi shaadi mein sam-milit hone nahi gayi .. aur na he apni beti ko bheja .. aisa bhi nahi hai ki Shaalini singh ko alag se nyote ki jarorat thi .. aur jaha khud unke bhai aur Maa/bhabi sab itne badh-chadh kar sab maanglik shubh kaaryo mein hissa le rahe the .. ve waha koi si bhi shaadi mein shareek nahi hui .. kya karan raha hoga .. kya koi purana matbhed .. ya fir apne bhi Ajju ko lekar unke dimaag mein koi baat hai jiske chalte ve in dono pariwaaro ki khushiyo mein shareek hone nahi gayi ...
lekhak ji ek to aapse haath jod kar guzaarish hai ki Lalita ji ki jab kahani ki shuruaat mein se sexual entry kari thi wo raat ke samay mein nangi he baathroom se baahar apne kamre tak chali aayi thi aur raat ko paani peene Arjun se unka saamna ho gaya tha to unka wo nangi ghoome wala scene edit karke dobaara se likh do .. wo jabasrjasti wala scene lagta hai .. maine ek baar pehle bhi aapko chetaya tha .. magar aapne upke vishay mein kuch kaha nahi tha .. dekhlo bhai kahani aapki hai .. aur main padh bhi chuka hu .. par fir bhi chahta hu ke wo hissa kahani ka sahi se likha jaaye ya kuch aur dhang se likho jo ki kahani ke kirdaaro ke charitr se mel khaaye ... sirf ek 2 adhyaay he to kaat kar dobara se likhna hai .. itna likhte ho to thoda samay nikaal kar usko bhi theek kar do .. aur ab ye muzhe se mat poochna ki update no. kaun sa tha .. kyonki ye to muzhe bhi yaad nahi ki kaunsa tha .. shayad Professsor bhai aapki koi madad kar sake .. iss kaam mein unki expertise hai
waise aaj ke iss update mein ek baat pata chali ki Romela ji bhi poori adiyal hai .. ye bhi seedha Shankar jo ki Rishte se inke sambandhi hue unse he seeng ladane baith gayi thi .. shayad inko Dr. sahab aive he nazar aa rahe hai .. dusro ki dekha-dekhi wo bhi inpar chadh rahi thi .. lekin agar unhe ye pata ho na ki asal Shankar Sharma kaun hai to unke gol se greek beautiful face ki hawa nikal jaaye .. kyonki jis 'beast' ki photo dekh kar wo aahen bharti hai ye mahashye us 'beast' ke super-'beast' dad hai .. time-time ki baat hai aaj sab mil kar Shankar ji ko gherne mein aur unki kamiya nikaalne mein lage hue hai .. warna apne cheer-faad Chikitsak itna kaha kisi ki sunte hai .. waise inhone Shankar ji ka sample to dekh he liya hai 'baby-beast' ...
waise aaj Romela Puri bhi apni samdhan ke saath unke shayan-kaksh mein he vishraam farmaane wali hai .. aur wo bhi Rekha ji ki to nighty bhi khatarnaak wali hai .. aaj ya to Shankar ji ghayal honge ya fir Arjun ki hawaiya udne wali hai .. in Gol chehre wali Oomorfi ko dekh kar .. waise muzhe taras apne Dr. sahab par aa raha hai .. inke nakshatr waise he galat kaksha mein mandra rahe hai .. aur agar aisa kuch hua to paka unke taboot mein keel thukne wala kaam ho jaayega ... "Jai ho Bhole Bhandari"
Kuch khaas 1-2 comments jinko padhne ke baad hassi aayi aur manoranjak bhi thi
bhai mere khayaal se yaha missing name mein Menaka singh ya fir Rupali didi ho sakti hai ...
mere hisaab se aaj ke liye ye wali hai .. "Comment of the Day"
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Arjun singh (ajju) ki hatya ke peeche khuch logo ka chupp reh jaana, Shankar Sharma ko sacchai se avgat na karana, baat ko chhupa kar rakhna, Shankar ghar ka sadasye tha aur seedha-seedha iss Madhulata ke rishte waale masle se jude hue the .. Kaushalya ji aur Poornima ji ka ahenkaar aur Rameshwar ji aur Raghubir ji ki chuppi aur Ishawar Singh ji ki laachari he iss sab jhamele ka kaaran bani .. kahi na kahi Madhulata ne apne pyaar(shankar) par bharosa kar ke he ye baazi kheli hogi, kyonki usko kahi na kahi apne pyaar par vishwaas hoga ki wo kuch bhi karke uski Shaadi Fateh ke bhai se nahi hone dega .. jisko usne dilo jaan se chaha, jis par usne aitbaar kiya, jisko usne apna komaarye saup diya, jiske liye wo saari duniya se lad jaati, aaj bhi lad rahi hai, beshak usko haasil karne ka raasta galat akhtiyaar kiya ho .. par disha heen ko to tinke ka sahara he bahut hai, chahe usko paane ke liye mansha nek na ho par prayojan to pyaar pana he hai - apna pyaar haasil karna .. sabko pyaar chahiye .. kisi ko Pariwaar ka, kisi ko pati ka, kisi ko Maa ka, kisi ko baccho ka .. kisi ko samaaj se maan, sam-maan, prathista aur pyaar .. par chahiye to PYAAR fir chaahe wo 100 baar mile ya ek baar .. par chahta har koi PYAAR he hai .. sirf PYAAR !! .. par kya sabko mil paata hai PYAAR .. kya Shankar Sharma ko mila .. Kya Rekha Sharma ko mila, pati se .. kya Madhulata ko mila, premi se .. kya Madhu Sharma ko mila, Bhai v Pati se .. Renuka ko mila, Manjubala ko mila, Lalita ji ko mil paya, Saroj bhabhi ko mila, Bimla devi ko mila, Hemani ko mila, Vinita ko mila, Sangita/Anita maami ko mila, Bindiya/Guddi/Susheela ko patiyo ka kya mil paya, Akshara/Anupama ki maa ko mil paya, Savita/kaajal ko, Poorvi/Geeta ko, kya Annu Walia aur Charu Singh ko, Nusrat jaha ya Zubeida ko, Param sangwan aur unki beti/patni ko, Umed Singh aur Shalini singh ko, bhai ka .. Purnima ji, Chandro devi aur Sitara devi ko Beto aur patiyo ka, Daleep singh ji ko Pita ka, Bhuppi ji ko bete ka, Muskaan ko maa ka, Inder Sharma ji ko Patni ki sehatmand hone ka aur Pariwaar/bhai ke saath ka .. Krishna ji ko bete ka, .. aur kya ARJUN SHARMA ko mil paya PYAAR, agar mila to phir 'PYAAR - 100 BAAR' kyo ...
Kya aapko mil paya Pyaar .. 100 baar nahi .. sirf 1 baar .. agar mila to kya aap santusht hai .. us PYAAR se .. padhiye, aanand lijiye, vichaar kijiye aur fir batayie .. kya PYAA ......
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