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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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Sphinx

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The story was going excellent but I want to say something may annoy the readers but this is what i feel.
Since last two updates , i am somehow feeling that story is losing its grip,direction and on the path of becoming TV serial of Ekta Kapoor where story goes on and on and on just for the sake of continuing the serial. This story can maintain its grip , direction and momentum even without adding so many characters in last two updates.The story has already many interesting and strong characters and story can strongly move with adding Minimum Minimum further characters.
Above may be wrong as ultimately only you know how the events will unfold in future but that is what felt .
 

Rajesh Sarhadi

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The story was going excellent but I want to say something may annoy the readers but this is what i feel.
Since last two updates , i am somehow feeling that story is losing its grip,direction and on the path of becoming TV serial of Ekta Kapoor where story goes on and on and on just for the sake of continuing the serial. This story can maintain its grip , direction and momentum even without adding so many characters in last two updates.The story has already many interesting and strong characters and story can strongly move with adding Minimum Minimum further characters.
Above may be wrong as ultimately only you know how the events will unfold in future but that is what felt .
The story is moving according to its title, and when you see it proceed further you will realise it. This is not a short story a lot is yet to come, if you see last few updates, hints of years later too has been given, wherein Shankas was accused as culprit.
 
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