Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[Rayder555]

Accha update tha bhai

 

[Rocky2602]

Waiting

 

[Mr.SAM]

Nice update bro

 

[XLNC]

A quite@Firefox420 for nearly 20 hours after the update means something massive.I feel it in my bones.Is it the quiet before the tornado about to hit Mr Butterfinger?

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

bahut khub tarannum mein aa gaye ho, abhi pura update nahi pada beech beech mein jhalkiyan padi hain, ye bachcha log bahut aage nikal gaye hain aur ab fat padi hai ki sach samne aane par kya bawal uthega...love and respect for dada makes them halt their proceedings, lekin kya sach samne aane se ruk paayega, aur Shankar ki fati padi hai Ritu aur Arjun ki sameepta ke karan, raasta bhi khojliya, Umed Ritu ka dharam baap ban jaayega ...ye apni soch rahe, hoga kuch aur hi...

 

[firefox420]

lo jo lo to aakhir apne chitrkaar launde ne dhamaake daar entry maari hai 18 ki raat ko .. update ko dekh kar to yahi lagta hai ki chorra kayi dino se bhara hua baitha tha .. accha hai kalakaar ko to bahana chahiye hota hai .. kisi na kisi bahane wo apna dard/gum/khushi/harsh nikaal he leta hai .. jo ki jaroori bhi hai ../..

nihaayti shareef addayatan tha .. sirf Maadhuri didi wale episode ko aur aakhir ke Baagdi aur uske chele-chapaato wale kukarmo ko chhod kar ../..

halwaaiyo ki 407 ki awaaz se humare thaanedaarji aur thaanedaarni ji ki aankh khul gayi .. magar retired SP sahab ko raat ke andhere mein apne pauto ke jaane ka bhi bhaan bhakoobi tha aur saath mein in dono miya biwi ki nekdili aur saaf charitr ki parakaashta ka pramaan isi baat se saaf dikhta hai ki ghar mein shaadi ke dauraan roj ka roti-paani ke liye aaye dharam vishesh ke pramukh halwayi Asgar se inhone koi bhed-bhaav na karte hue usko sehej bhaav se uska satkaar kiya .. jo ki Pandit ji ki khaasiyat hai aur yahi inko Vyakti-Vishesh banati hai ...

Dr. Dang .. Oh fuck! sorry sorry Dr. Shankar aur inke moohbole bhai Umed singh aur inke saale sahab chhura-baaz Rakesh Sharma ji ka kaam to adhura he reh gaya .. par ab ye nahi paheli nikal kar saamne khadi ho gayi hai .. aur kahani ke 163 addayatan likhe jaa chuke hai .. magar abhi tak ye gutthi nahi suljh paayi hai ki Pandit ji ke Sansar ke vipaksh mein jo kaurvo ki sena khadi hai uska asal mein senapati kaun hai .. kabhi Sarang to kabhi Lajwanti to kabhi Damyanti urf rajkumari Anamika Singh ya fir Madhulata singh ya Bindu urf Shabnam ki maa Bindiya Mirza hai .. ya fir iss chakrvyuh ko rachne wale Dronachary koi aur hai ../..

aaj Baagdi aur uske hatte-katte dosto ki jo fajihat hui uske sutrdhaar to asal mein ye Maruti Zen mein savaar hokar aayi 4 fuljhadiya thi .. bas shukrr raha unki nazar us burke mein kaid bandh-ghobi par nahi padi .. warna ye to saare paagal ho jaate .. khair jab ye 60 KM se jab Jasleen ki jhalak paakar he peeche-peeche yaha tak aa gaye to uske liye inki galti itni bhi nahi nikaalni chahiye .. aakhir kyon ye pagal ladkiya itni subha punjab se nikli .. jo subha ke 10-10:30 baje he Haryana ke XXXX sheher mein aa gayi .. ab inki galtiyo ke chalte bechare ve dil ke haare Baagdi aur uske gurge lapete mein aa gaye .. aur unki kismat itni kharaab ki chadhe bhi to Lucky Arora ke hatte .. ye to pakka inka tel nikal dega .. kyonki iske saath Sanjeev hai aur in sabke upar apne Dr. Dang sorry Dr. Shankar hai (BC lomad marega kya .. saale baar-baar Dr. ko cched raha hai .. katwayega apna) ../..

waise Dr. Shankar se yaad aaya .. ye khud to bechare uljhe hue rehte he hai .. ek to inke gale Madhulata naam ki aafat ghali hui hai .. wahi dusri aur inki priye saputri v bhaavi Dr. Ritu Sharma ne apne baap ki indirectly li hui hai .. Ritu ke maamle mein to swargiye Vaidji ki sapurtri apni thanedaarni ji bhi majboor hai to fir Dr. Shankar bhi kya kar sakte hai .. ye to khud bechare dil ke haare aur samaaj ke taane-baane se pare hai .. magar aaj inhone apni bechaini ke asal kaaran ko apne langaotiya bhai Umed singh se batla kar unke dimaag ke tote bhi uda diye hai .. par jaisi Umed singh ji se umeed ki jaa sakti thi .. unhone aisi soch se pare aisaamajik kuriti ka bhi hal apne param mitrr Shankar ji ko bhi sujahaya .. ki kaise wo Ritu ya Arjun ko apna naam de kar iss samasya se paar paa sakte hai .. khair abhi to iske liye samay hai .. ye to niyati aur samay he batla sakta hai ki bhavishye ke garab mein kya chhipa hai ../..

waise muzhe ab kucch logo ka reaction aur unke manobhaav dekhne hai .. jab unka parichay/saamna punjab se aayi Aarti/Arjun ki sakhiyo se hoga .. khaas kar purduh mein chhupe gulab ki kali ka .. jab Afsaana se Preeti/Ritu/Komal/Alka/Manju/Aakansha ka hoga .. khair khatre mein to aur bhi kayi paatr aayenge .. par khaas inke manobhaav dekhne honge .. sabse jyaada to muzhe Afsaana aur Preeti ki jugalbandi dekhni hai .. kyonki Sanjeev/Maadhuri ki shaadi he yeh nirdhaarit karegi ki Arjun ka pehla pyaar aur Inayat ki maa kaun banegi ../..

waise aaj pyaar 100 baar ke pages par alta-palti karte waqt ek rochak DP dekhne ko mili .. XLNC bhai aapke he ek aur bhai-bandhu yaha aa gaye hai .. bina daanto wale ../..

kambakht dekho .. samay ki maar .. har roz daily internet ka package ka kam se kam 800-900 MB waste jaate hai .. magar aaj main thoda pyaar baatne chala to satyanaash ho is sasure Airtel ka ki mera daila Quota he khatam ho gaya .. ab kal tak intezaar karna padega is review ko post karne ka .. tab tak kaise mera dil lagega .. agar main apne unglimal bhai ke saath apne vichaaro ka aadaan-pradaan nahi kar paunga .. aur na he mast-mast si comments padh paunga ../..

chalo lekhak ji aaj ke liye itna he .. mast likha to padh kar maza bhi khoob aaya .. aur ye update kahi se bhi cchota nahi tha .. ab agle ka intezaar rahega .. itne aap apni kamar kaso .. idhar main apni kasta hu .. ghane din ho gaye the review likhe hue .. to ab karunga thoda-thoda likhna shuru firse ../..

waise ek special wali guzaarish hai .. waise dekha jaaye to kehne ki jaroorat hai to nahi .. kyonki aap khud he isko karne mein apni poori jaan jhok doge .. magar fir bhi ye meri iltiza hai ki jab wo cchann aaye jab Preeti aur Afsana ka saamna ho ya intro ho aapas mein to wo pal bahut he sanjeedgi ke saath v bahut he tafseel aur vistaar ke saath usko pesh karna .. bas meri to abhi se un cchano ki kalpana karke pet mein gudgudi si hone lagti hai .. make it a memorable moment .. that would be THE prominent highlighted and edgy scene .. just like the Arjun singh's death episode and roshan mattu head chopping/Slicing scene ../..

bye-bye Babes ..

Poorn-Viraam

 

[firefox420]

Comprehensive.Vibrant.Brilliantly weaved.

yaar aapka badhiya hai .. 4 shabd pel do .. kaam ho gaya .. yaha hum kohlu ke bail ki tarah lage pade rehte hai .. jab jaa kar apne beloved Butterfinger ji ki tasalli hoti hai .. us-se kam to ye bhi tond maar dete hai ...

waise jitni kurafaat apne Enigma bhai yaha karte hai agar iski 1% bhi doctorni sahiba ke samaksh kare to .. pak-ka inki kamar mein na ek belan dhar ke de to baat rahi .. aur yaha hamare samaksh aisi baate phodenge ki Arjun sharma bhi sharma jaaye ../..

 

[XLNC]

yaar aapka badhiya hai .. 4 shabd pel do .. kaam ho gaya .. yaha hum kohlu ke bail ki tarah lage pade rehte hai .. jab jaa kar apne beloved Butterfinger ji ki tasalli hoti hai .. us-se kam to ye bhi tond maar dete hai ...

waise jitni kurafaat apne Enigma bhai yaha karte hai agar iski 1% bhi doctorni sahiba ke samaksh kare to .. pak-ka inki kamar mein na ek belan dhar ke de to baat rahi .. aur yaha aate he Arjun sharma ban jaate hai ../..

Munivar kshmasva.Parantu main aap jaisa gyaani nahi hu.Main sirf padhta hu aur apna vivran us lekh ke baare mein likhta hoon.Aap to lekh ka atioch vishleshan,pratadna, prashansa aur mrityutar(Post Mortem) sahej, swabhavik aur sunder rup mein karte hai.
Maine kuch tippni ki to suraj ko diya dikhane jaise hoga.
Aur Arjun Sharma yaha to sabka antarng mitr(Alterego) bana hai.
Aise hi kripa dhristi banaye rakhe Munivar.Aapke kop se koun bacha hai bhala?

 

[firefox420]

Munivar kshmasva.Parantu main aap jaisa gyaani nahi hu.Main sirf padhta hu aur apna vivran us lekh ke baare mein likhta hoon.Aap to lekh ka atioch vishleshan,pratadna, prashansa aur mrityutar(Post Mortem) sahej, swabhavik aur sunder rup mein karte hai.
Maine kuch tippni ki to suraj ko diya dikhane jaise hoga.
Aur Arjun Sharma yaha to sabka antarng mitr(Alterego) bana hai.
Aise hi kripa dhristi banaye rakhe Munivar.Aapke kop se koun bacha hai bhala?

just an ending note ..

kisi ka bhi mooh kaise band karna hai .. ye to koi aap se seekhe .. ye comment 3 baar padhna padha pehli baar mein to sar ke upar se nikal gaya .. kucch samajh mein aaya kucch pakad mein aaya .. khair asal antrang mitrr(alterego) to apne butterfinger urf unglimal urf chitrrkaar sahab urf lekhak ji (abe bas kar) urf Enigma bhai hai ../..

par saath mein aapke comments padh kar bhi chehre par muskaan aa jaati hai ../..

 

[tabishqureshi]

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