Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

[Billi420]

Apny Enigma bhaiya ki class too aysy khali hy aaj jesy carona kaal mn school oor shopping mall's khali thy art naliko nikamo online classes samjh k ajaya kro dill laga ryhta hmara b

 

[Krishu89]

Waiting for नएक्स

 

[Dmahi19]

Engima bhai jaldi jaldi updates do warna Raja Chouhan Bhaishabh jeetne waale hain ...... Mein bhi aapki tarah unka fan hun haar jeet lekar mat maniye ....... Aap the best writer hain bhai.

 

[Dmahi19]

For me The Best Writer of this forum.....
1) Engima bhai
2) Raja Bhai
3) Angad Bhai
4) Shikari- Golu Bhai
5) Casinar Bhai
6) vj4u Bhai .........

Yeh mera personal view hai, mujhse poocha gaya meine rating ki..... Aur next month change bhi ho sakti hai updates ke post hone ke hisaab se.....

 

[Raghav1997]

Enigma Bhai pehli baar kisi story me itna khatarnak introduction dekha he thoda confuse ho gaya hu, hope ke Update padhte hue clear ho jaye mujhe... Baki to jis tarah se intro likha he us se pata chalta he ki story well planned he.

Aap niraash nahi honge iski gurantee hamari hai

 

[firefox420]

Engima bhai jaldi jaldi updates do warna Raja Chouhan Bhaishabh jeetne waale hain ...... Mein bhi aapki tarah unka fan hun haar jeet lekar mat maniye ....... Aap the best writer hain bhai.

Raja chouhan bhai ki likhne ki bhasha saral hai iss liye padhne waale waha jyaada hai...

magar Enigma bhai ki likhne ki shaili bhinn hai.. kayi baar to pramod shashtri ji wali baate sar ke upar se nikal jaati hai.. unko samjhne aur unka asal marm jaanne ke liye 2-3 baar wo particular conversation padhni padhti hai.. main shuruaat se he is kahani se juda hu.. magar abhi bhi poorntya inki shabdavali aur lekhan shaili ke anusaar abhyast nahi ho paaya hu...

baakiyo ka to main nahi kehta.. magar jo muzhe laga wo bataya.. aur same yahi funda anandsngh12 bhai ki Saand ke saath bhi tha.. simple language aur full choda-chadi ke saath bakchodi.. most readers ko yahi padand hai.. anyatha kamdev99008 bhaiya ki moksh: trishna se tushti tak.. bhi sabhko pasand aaye.. magar ghuma fira kar likhne wali ucch darje wali kahaniya sabke gale nahi utarti...

 

[MR SINGH]

Raja chouhan bhai ki likhne ki bhasha saral hai iss liye padhne waale waha jyaada hai...

magar Enigma bhai ki likhne ki shaili bhinn hai.. kayi baar to pramod shashtri ji wali baate sar ke upar se nikal jaati hai.. unko samjhne aur unka asal marm jaanne ke liye 2-3 baar wo particular conversation padhni padhti hai.. main shuruaat se he is kahani se juda hu.. magar abhi bhi poorntya inki shabdavali aur lekhan shaili ke anusaar abhyast nahi ho paaya hu...

baakiyo ka to main nahi kehta.. magar jo muzhe laga wo bataya.. aur same yahi funda anandsngh12 bhai ki Saand ke saath bhi tha.. simple language aur full choda-chadi ke saath bakchodi.. most readers ko yahi padand hai.. anyatha kamdev99008 bhaiya ki moksh: trishna se tushti tak.. bhi sabhko pasand aaye.. magar ghuma fira kar likhne wali ucch darje wali kahaniya sabke gale nahi utarti...

Kamdev bhai ka toh 50 update ke baad bhi family tree hi pata nahi chala . Kon kiska kya lagta hai.

 

[Dmahi19]

Raja chouhan bhai ki likhne ki bhasha saral hai iss liye padhne waale waha jyaada hai...

magar Enigma bhai ki likhne ki shaili bhinn hai.. kayi baar to pramod shashtri ji wali baate sar ke upar se nikal jaati hai.. unko samjhne aur unka asal marm jaanne ke liye 2-3 baar wo particular conversation padhni padhti hai.. main shuruaat se he is kahani se juda hu.. magar abhi bhi poorntya inki shabdavali aur lekhan shaili ke anusaar abhyast nahi ho paaya hu...

baakiyo ka to main nahi kehta.. magar jo muzhe laga wo bataya.. aur same yahi funda anandsngh12 bhai ki Saand ke saath bhi tha.. simple language aur full choda-chadi ke saath bakchodi.. most readers ko yahi padand hai.. anyatha kamdev99008 bhaiya ki moksh: trishna se tushti tak.. bhi sabhko pasand aaye.. magar ghuma fira kar likhne wali ucch darje wali kahaniya sabke gale nahi utarti...

Bhai meine toh yahan tak dekha hai ki apni 5 favorite tag karke log jhoote badde comments maar ke nikal jaate hain..... Par wahan aap ya aapki story favorite nahi ho do tarafa gaali sa dikhta hai na unka na apne baap ka. Matlab aap keh raho paani peene ki jagah jal granh bolna ucch koti ki bhasha hai
Aur Kya Bhai mein apne favorite writer ko blind support nahi kar sakta sirf sabdhon me, bahot saare fans toh t-shirt par Pyar baar likha kar aur haath par tatoo banwakar bhi ghoom rahein hain unko aap kuch nahi kehte.

 

[Enigma]

Rameshwar ji chauke is liye the kyonki unhone is baat ki aashanka nahi thi ki Arjun iss baat ka bhi pata laga lega .. aur dusra wo Arjun ko Rajgharane aur uss se jude raaz aur Rajgharane ke shahi aur unke nafarmaan mulajimo ke pachde se door rahe .. kyonki unhone saare jeevan is vishay se judi har baat ki vajah se zillat, aur bahut se apne priye aur khaas logo ko khoya tha .. Arjun Singh ki mrityu bhi isi kaale makkadjaal ki unsuljhi upaz thi .. par shayad wo Arjun ko iss sabse door rakhne mein aisafal he saabit hue ../..

aur Damyanti urf Anamika ke vishay mein unko bahut pehle se he pata tha .. bas kabhi iss baat ka zikr nahi hua .. jiska pata aage chal kar sabke saamne aa jaayega ../..

well agar lekhak ji ka iss comment par reply na aaye to samajh jaana ki .. mera teer achook tha aur sahi nishane par laga ../..

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waise Pushpak ke vishay mein maine pehle he kaafi vistaar se baat ki thi .. pichle review mein .. aur jaisa mera anumaan tha .. waisa he kucch unka kirdaar bhi hai .. seedha/saccha/virla/duniya daari ke lafdo se anbhigya .. aur uska parmaan aaj ke addayatan mein dekhne ko mila .. dono pariwaaro ke aapsi matbhedo ko darkinaar karte hue .. seedha Rameshwar ji ki chowkhat par dastak dedi .. magar yaha Pushpak ko dekhkar Shankar ji ka utawlapan kucch atpata sa laga .. kyonki Kumar Pushpak ka vyaktitv jaisa hai iska bhaan apne Dr. sahab ko to hoga he magar fir bhi wo chote kuwar sahab ke saamne ad gaye the .. magar yaha saari shanka Rameshwar ji ne door kar di .. Pushpak ji ko apne saath baitha kar aur chai pilwa kar .. aur saath he ye bhi jaahir kar diya ki unka pautrr kitna khaas hai .. ye bhi saaf darshadiya .. aur ho bhi kyon na .. aakhir Arjun unka abhimaan hai ../..

khair wo sab chhodo .. asal ke mudde par aate hai .. waha dusre ghar par jo dhamaal ye aafat ki pudiya karne wali hai .. iska kisi ko andaaza bhi nahi hai .. shayad khaas kar khud in ladkiyo ko bhi nahi .. aur waha unn gaaye ki khor ke paas jaroor koisi gaaye jaroor hari hoyegi .. desi ya vilayeti .. iska pata nahi ../..

purane ghar ke aage ke chabutre par in sab adhedo ne khushti ka akhada jama kar khoob mazaa lagwaya sabhi ka .. aur Arjun ka to pata he tha .. magar Sanjeev aur Inder ji uss chot ka kaaran jaan gaye .. khair agle update mein .. jyaada kucch to nahi hoga .. magar in shaitaan ki naaniyo ki bakar-bakar sun-ne ko milegi .../..

well on my behalf .. muzhe bhi jyaada mach-mach nahi karne ka .. bole to no nonse bakwaas .. only kaam ki baat .. aur aaj review isliye jaldi diya .. kyonki apne dear Hiss-Hiss bhai thoda impatient ho jaate hai .. so inki baat maane hue .. review ko aaj he post kar deta hu .. although review - viview kucch nahi hai .. sirf more than necessary gossip hai ../..

For the first time, as a writer of this story I'm replying and I confirm what firefox420 said is 100% true. Rameshwar Pandit was well aware of Damyanti aka Anamika. Arjun se Pandit ji ko itni aage pahuchne ki aasha nahi thi. Aur yahi wajah hai ki unhone ab aakhiri muthbhed ke liye khud ko tayaar karna shuru Kar Diya.
Arjun ne khud he sabko khatre me daal diya hai itna sab pata laga kar. Dushman apni apni jagah se nikal Kar ab kaha se humla karenge aur unke nishaane par kaun kaun hai iska utna andaaja khud Arjun Sanjiv ko bhi nahi hai.
Shadyantra ka saamna khud Ajju nahi kar paya tha jabki uska group jyada majboot tha Arjun Sharma se.
Pushpak ne waise bhi ek na ek din aana he tha aur Anamika ki wajah se ye sab kuch jaldi ho gaya bas.
Bahot si bareek bareek ghatnaye aisi hai jinki pehli nazar me khaas wajah nahi dikhti aur aisa lagta hai ki ye sab ekdum hua aur usme wo vyakti waqt ki wajah se shaamil hua. Aisa hai nahi kyonki parakhna aur kshamta ki jaanch bhi jaise unme shaamil hai.

Ab as a reader/unglimal
Anamika ka aise jana bahot kuch adhoora chhod gaya. Maniram Ka kissa Kya ho sakta jisne saarang ko he bebas Kar rakha apni behan Laajwanti ko saamne rakh Kar?
Rajasthan me he Reshma aur Laajwanti laut aayi thi par kyun? Jabki wahi toh Saarang hai.
Pushpak ne Rameshwar ji ko raja keh Kar sambodhit Kiya tha Arjun ke saamne. Aur wo adrishya rishtey Kya ho sakte hai aur kiske sath?
Personally mera ek doubt hai aur wo juda hai Col Puri se. Is laxman ka bhi jarur koyi bahut he gehra raaj hai.

 

[Enigma]

Bhai meine toh yahan tak dekha hai ki apni 5 favorite tag karke log jhoote badde comments maar ke nikal jaate hain..... Par wahan aap ya aapki story favorite nahi ho do tarafa gaali sa dikhta hai na unka na apne baap ka. Matlab aap keh raho paani peene ki jagah jal granh bolna ucch koti ki bhasha hai
Aur Kya Bhai mein apne favorite writer ko blind support nahi kar sakta sirf sabdhon me, bahot saare fans toh t-shirt par Pyar baar likha kar aur haath par tatoo banwakar bhi ghoom rahein hain unko aap kuch nahi kehte.

Ye sala tattoo aur t-shirt print ka idea gazab Diya hai bhai .
Pyaar bar t-shirt he launch Kar dete. Har main character ke portrait wali.