Jason carter
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Sir apne to sketches k sath ched chad ki hai lagta hairaahu tha to .. magar dormant tha .. ketu ke aate he active ho gaya .. aur bechare .. Pandit ji furrrrrr
Lekhak mahoday k hi vichar the ki vo shadi k baad gaon jayega and vanvaas 4 saal ka kaata tha pahle wala jo ki engineering k liye gaya tha and vo 2000-2004 ka samay hoga bhai jiHi bhai log khaa hoo aaj billi mahraj boht khush hyn too socha khani ko ly k kuch jankari dydi Jay yhaa sabko lagta hy k arjun k dehli jany k abhi koi chances nhi a k dada ji ki baat koi nhi many ga pr zra socho kya ho agr rekha ji khud arjun k dehli jany baat kardyn sab k samny oor krishna b ha bool dyn
Arjun ny Jo thapr mara hy larky ko mujhy too next day k naahty ki table py kand hota nazr aa rha hy ritu oor rekha ji aamny samny
1 (hint rekha ji arjun ko ly k pehly hi pryshan hyn opr sy arjun ka sanjeev bhiya ki party sy dyri sy Ana oski shamat aany wali lagti hy rekha ji k hath )
Ary bhai yh kab bola arjun Jay ga prr 1 jhtka too mily Ga arjun koLekhak mahoday k hi vichar the ki vo shadi k baad gaon jayega and vanvaas 4 saal ka kaata tha pahle wala jo ki engineering k liye gaya tha and vo 2000-2004 ka samay hoga bhai ji
Baki aap behtar jante hain
Aur meri English ki dikkat ho rahi hai Munivar.Menaka!! Menaka is quite an interesting name in itself, and I think the none of your characters in the story are not just some random named characters, they are very well thought, if not all then atleast some of them are.
oh! wait a minute ... wooowww! it's a very well thought provoking story now after reading your comments I can only guess , initially your story is incest based but I think in foreseeable future it will be taking some uncontemplating parabola turn which is going to blow our minds off.
And if I am correct, you are only typing the matter because it's all already prepared, you are sparkling it with spices like (humour, romance, suspense, hate, sorrow, violence, revenge, friendship) and what not.
oh i think it's going to be bonkers with all the mayhem that will be going to happen.
Aye Aye Captain! you just commence the voyage because we all are on board.
Bhai yeh kaunsa bench hai.Aage wale ya Peeche ka?Mujhe bi chahiye ye wale sketches . Mereko bi dekhne hai. Kaha par milenge.