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Mujy lagta hy nelam ko dhondny mn madad kar sakti heen arjun ki bina pori baat janyNa bhai. Filhal toh isme khud Shankar aur Inder tak shamil nahi ho paaye hai. Radhika ko is sabme nahi shamil kiya jayega.
Gajab update bhai
Dhanyavaad dosto. Aaj thoda samay se update diya hai toh aap sabhi se baatchit bhi kar pa raha huHame app ka ya surprise pasand aya engima bhai
Fantabulous update
Ho sakta hai lekin chance kam hai bhai. Arjun agar kisi ki madad lega toh pehla naam hai Shalini bua, dusra Sanjiv aur agar jyada khufiya raha toh Sanjay. Sushila ko prakhyat bhaiMujy lagta hy nelam ko dhondny mn madad kar sakti heen arjun ki bina pori baat jany![]()
Prabhu Abhi itna khus na ho rat ka update Baki hai AbhiDhanyavaad dosto. Aaj thoda samay se update diya hai toh aap sabhi se baatchit bhi kar pa raha hu![]()
Waiting bade bhai. Aur ek baat hai jo kehni chahunga ki pure version mein bhi is update ko aise hi jagah dena . Thodi cutting kar lena magar jo feelings wale scene hai unhe aise hi rehne dena.bahut dhanyawaad aapka.Shukriya sardar ji. Jo socha hai wo jald he manch par jaahir karunga. Itne saral saral update ke baad thodi jigyasa badhaai hai filhaal lekin jald 50 sawaal jarur khade honge. Dhanyavaad itne pyaar bhare lafzon ke liye
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Na bhai bilkul nahi likhne wala aaj main. Ghar pe kal raat bhi akela tha aur aaj bhi. Lekin aaj nahi laptop uthane wala.Prabhu Abhi itna khus na ho rat ka update Baki hai Abhi![]()
Sardar ji clean version shuru hota hai Arjun ke boarding school se. Aur waha se wo 12 khatam karke ghar aata hai ek saal sirf pariwar me rehne. Waha har baat jyada gehraai se kahi gayi hai aur har drishya bhaavna anusaar. 1973-74 ke prasang bhi khul kar bataye gaye hai jis se charitro ka saaf pata chale. Kehne ko toh is kahani ke 98 update usme shamil honge lekin 67 sex scene ki jagah gehre vartalaap, Mann ka dwand, har sadasya ke sath wo vibhinn ster ka aatmiya judaav aur gehraai se ek bade jaal ko khanglne ki pehli koshish. Tag line bhi toh yahi hai ki 'bhavishya ke kuch sawaalon ka jawaab ateet me tha. Aur wo samay se peeche chal diya bina khatre ki pehchan kiye'Waiting bade bhai. Aur ek baat hai jo kehni chahunga ki pure version mein bhi is update ko aise hi jagah dena . Thodi cutting kar lena magar jo feelings wale scene hai unhe aise hi rehne dena.bahut dhanyawaad aapka.![]()
Maine to apne bhaiyo ko yahi bhej diSardar ji clean version shuru hota hai Arjun ke boarding school se. Aur waha se wo 12 khatam karke ghar aata hai ek saal sirf pariwar me rehne. Waha har baat jyada gehraai se kahi gayi hai aur har drishya bhaavna anusaar. 1973-74 ke prasang bhi khul kar bataye gaye hai jis se charitro ka saaf pata chale. Kehne ko toh is kahani ke 98 update usme shamil honge lekin 67 sex scene ki jagah gehre vartalaap, Mann ka dwand, har sadasya ke sath wo vibhinn ster ka aatmiya judaav aur gehraai se ek bade jaal ko khanglne ki pehli koshish. Tag line bhi toh yahi hai ki 'bhavishya ke kuch sawaalon ka jawaab ateet me tha. Aur wo samay se peeche chal diya bina khatre ki pehchan kiye'
Rajkumar ji ka ekakipan, Shankar ka khud ko jaanboojh vyst rakhna, Inder ki anidra (insomnia), Kaushalya ji ka bhavishya ke liye sakratmak hona aur dhero prasang jinhe yaha sahi se bayaan na kar paya. Bematlab kirdaar jarur kuch kam honge aur baaki sabse jaruri hissa hoga 'jiwan ka chhata tatva' jo Arjun aur Aacharya ji ke beech rahega. Takriban 18 drishya sirf un dono ke hai pehle bhaag me.
Ye baat batana reh gaya tha
Apne he kuch kareebi bhaiyon ne mujhe kuch mahine pehle iske liye protsahit kiya tha ki kya main iska asal Swaroop likh sakta hu? Wo kahani jo mere dil me hai aur jisko main dimaag se tadka nahi laga raha? Mera jawaab tha ki mool kahani?
Toh unhone bhi yahi poocha. Uski wajah thi ki ye kahani wo apne kareebi ko Uphaar dena chahte hai. Waise he kuch aur bhi bhai the jinhone yahi maang rakhi aur unhe sab sanvaad, rishtey, rehasya aur prem darshan he chahiye tha. Isliye maine pakad bann jaane par saral bhaag likhna shuru kiya jo shaya is se kahi jyada he kathin laga mujhe![]()