Shay
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What a Story!! Have been a silent reader for a while but your writing is commendable. The way you have kept the hold of the story is wonderful. An inspiration to new budding writers of the forum like me.
Bhai waise sarab to hamne pee nahi par keh sakte hai k agar wakai me jaise feeling is kahani ko padhkar aate hai waisa hi lagta hai to wo to kamaal ka aanand deta haiJitna bhi padho ,jitni bar bhi padho,ye kahani vahi maja deti hai, jaisa pehali bar padh kar milta ho,bhai aisa majo ta bas purani sharab hi de sakti he ,
Subah bahut sar dard hota hai bhai.Bhai waise sarab to hamne pee nahi par keh sakte hai k agar wakai me jaise feeling is kahani ko padhkar aate hai waisa hi lagta hai to wo to kamaal ka aanand deta hai
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