Tony stark
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BHAOT KHUB BHAI, AAPKA REVIEW PADH KE DIL KHUSH HO GAYA, AAJ MAINE IS UPDATE PE KOI COMMENT NAHI KIYA, LEKIN AAPKE REVIEW NE MAJBUR KAR DIYAKaam-Krodh-Kukarm ye aise trikaal hai ki manushya inke bas me ho jaye toh usko Rakshash ban-ne se fir bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakte. Janam se har vyakti kisi safed panne ki tarah kora hota hai....
Enigma bhai ye aapne arjun ke apne ghar walo ko mafi dene( hostal ke issue pe) ke badh quote kiya tha... jab arjun hostal se vapis aaya tha toe ekdum Nischal tha, par khud ki hi behno or tayiji ki kamagani ne us safed panne pe trikal ka nanga chera khich diya hoe jaise...abh arjun ke har rishte main kisi n kisi vajah se sex involve hoe hi jata hai... kya ye jarurat se jyada hi vyabhichar nahi hai... ek ache mitra ke rup mein arjun ka Anu se sharirik karib aana kya thik hai...?
Arjun ka lakshya apno ko khush rakhna hai, par kya bahar muh marne par voh apno koe unka hisse ka samai de paa raha hai...preeti ki galti thi usne arjun koe nahi bataya tha jaane ka, par arjun ne bhi toe uske hisse ka samay bahar ke logo ko diya tha..., or phir bhi krodit hoe kar usne preeti ko galati soch kar, mansik tanav liya or hospitalize hoe gaya, kya ye ghar valon pe uska atyachar nahi tha........ or Ritu di or Komal ke hisse main kitna samai aaya hai (hospital ke alawa) .. ?
kya nanihal se aa kar arjun ne Rekha ji se ek baar bhi poocha ke voh apne breast pain ka kya kar rahi hain... uska faraz nahi tha maa ke stano ko choos kar unko aaram dilana... ? (voh baat alag hai ki abhi shq kar ji aa gaye hai, par unke aane se pahle, arjun ki apni mata ji ke prati lapravahi nahi thi kya
Usne ek acha kam kiya jo bua ko unka sach bataya, par anu koe time de kar voh apno ka hak nahi chin raha kya.....?
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