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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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Billi420

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Likh raha hu bhai. Is bhaag me sanvaad (dialogue) bahot hai toh break le le kar likhna padd raha hai. Yakeen maaniye ke agar neend bhi aati hai toh waha bhi kahani ke kirdaar pareshan karne lagte hai.

Baaki likhne se pehle scene ko khud dohrana bhi ek julm he lagta hai. Jaha thodi si galti hui aur poora scene fir se likhna padta hai. Jaise jaise ye kahani aage ja rahi hai curiosity, character impact aur palpitations hone lagi hai.

Dekhte hai abhi kitna likh paunga lekin aadha bhaag likh kar tehalne nikla hu. Mahol sahi raha toh 1 baje tak update nahi toh 11 baje 2 beer aur update kal dopahar 1 baje.
Bhai jo b krna bta dyna nhi too raat aankbi mn hi Jay gi ???
 

aka3829

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Likh raha hu bhai. Is bhaag me sanvaad (dialogue) bahot hai toh break le le kar likhna padd raha hai. Yakeen maaniye ke agar neend bhi aati hai toh waha bhi kahani ke kirdaar pareshan karne lagte hai.

Baaki likhne se pehle scene ko khud dohrana bhi ek julm he lagta hai. Jaha thodi si galti hui aur poora scene fir se likhna padta hai. Jaise jaise ye kahani aage ja rahi hai curiosity, character impact aur palpitations hone lagi hai.

Dekhte hai abhi kitna likh paunga lekin aadha bhaag likh kar tehalne nikla hu. Mahol sahi raha toh 1 baje tak update nahi toh 11 baje 2 beer aur update kal dopahar 1 baje.
Matbal yo se ak aaj mahara ullu bnaan ko puro 2 soch rakhyo he. Koi na kadi hathe chadyo fer batawa ak more kikar bana kare he.
 

Tinkuram

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Bekrari se intezar hai. Agar confirm kar panye to achi neend ho jayegi nahi to sote hue bhi update ka intezar rahega aur app ke bataye samay ke aas-pass neend jarur khulegi taki update check ho sake aur agar aaye to para ja sake.
 

Enigma

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Bhai jo b krna bta dyna nhi too raat aankbi mn hi Jay gi ???
Matbal yo se ak aaj mahara ullu bnaan ko puro 2 soch rakhyo he. Koi na kadi hathe chadyo fer batawa ak more kikar bana kare he.
Bekrari se intezar hai. Agar confirm kar panye to achi neend ho jayegi nahi to sote hue bhi update ka intezar rahega aur app ke bataye samay ke aas-pass neend jarur khulegi taki update check ho sake aur agar aaye to para ja sake.

Badi atchi baat kahi Billi420 bhai.tabhi kehta hu tumhe atchi samajh hai.

aka3829 bhai mor bana lena lekin sach keh raha hu ke mausam aur halat kharab kar rakhi hai. Main vatanukulan ka aadi nahi hu aur abhi mausam me umas ke sath ghutan bahot hai. Likh raha hu jaise taise lekin 9:30 pe khana banaunga. Fir frank aur stray dogs ka time. Baarish hui toh update poori likhunga lekin filhal faand fati hui hai.

Tinkuram bhai 11 baje tak reply dunga update ke liye. Adhura likhna bura lagega sabhi ko. Is kahani me aaj ka din lamba aur jaruri hai.
 

Ahsan00

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Likh raha hu bhai. Is bhaag me sanvaad (dialogue) bahot hai toh break le le kar likhna padd raha hai. Yakeen maaniye ke agar neend bhi aati hai toh waha bhi kahani ke kirdaar pareshan karne lagte hai.

Baaki likhne se pehle scene ko khud dohrana bhi ek julm he lagta hai. Jaha thodi si galti hui aur poora scene fir se likhna padta hai. Jaise jaise ye kahani aage ja rahi hai curiosity, character impact aur palpitations hone lagi hai.

Dekhte hai abhi kitna likh paunga lekin aadha bhaag likh kar tehalne nikla hu. Mahol sahi raha toh 1 baje tak update nahi toh 11 baje 2 beer aur update kal dopahar 1 baje.


Sir ap such main dil jeeta liye hai yaqeen kre apki story parhna ka liye bar bar online ata ho. Ap ko kitna bhi thanks bola na kum he lga ga jo ap itne mehnat se likha rhe ho. Thanks alot sir. Sada khush rho aabad rho humesha. :claps::claps::claps::claps:.
 

aman rathore

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Badi atchi baat kahi Billi420 bhai.tabhi kehta hu tumhe atchi samajh hai.

aka3829 bhai mor bana lena lekin sach keh raha hu ke mausam aur halat kharab kar rakhi hai. Main vatanukulan ka aadi nahi hu aur abhi mausam me umas ke sath ghutan bahot hai. Likh raha hu jaise taise lekin 9:30 pe khana banaunga. Fir frank aur stray dogs ka time. Baarish hui toh update poori likhunga lekin filhal faand fati hui hai.

Tinkuram bhai 11 baje tak reply dunga update ke liye. Adhura likhna bura lagega sabhi ko. Is kahani me aaj ka din lamba aur jaruri hai.
Besabri se intazar rahega bhai,
 

Iron Man

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Badi atchi baat kahi Billi420 bhai.tabhi kehta hu tumhe atchi samajh hai.

aka3829 bhai mor bana lena lekin sach keh raha hu ke mausam aur halat kharab kar rakhi hai. Main vatanukulan ka aadi nahi hu aur abhi mausam me umas ke sath ghutan bahot hai. Likh raha hu jaise taise lekin 9:30 pe khana banaunga. Fir frank aur stray dogs ka time. Baarish hui toh update poori likhunga lekin filhal faand fati hui hai.

Tinkuram bhai 11 baje tak reply dunga update ke liye. Adhura likhna bura lagega sabhi ko. Is kahani me aaj ka din lamba aur jaruri hai.
Ok .
Intzar hai
 
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