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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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Kalyansurya

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Enigma bhai apni kahani ke 900 page pura karne pe bhut bhut subhkamnaye
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Ash Mishra

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Enigma bhai 900 update ki bahut badhai Lekin bhai apse ek shikayt hai hero ki family sab jagah ati jati hai pr hero to kanhi bhi ni ata jata thoda ghar Se bahar nikalo thoda ghumao use family hi sabkuch nhi hoti or kahani main apne ek jagh likha tha ki umed Singh ne Arjun ko apna duttak putra mana hai to jara wanha bhi lijao hero ko uske apne gawon bhi to le kr jao please
 

Mahesh007

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Enigma sir ji kahani jitni update ho chuki he uske bare me koi sabal nahi he jo the bo me pahle hi bata chka hu jo koi bade sabal nahi the
Sir ji 1st index bahut piche he plz update kaarba de
2nd update ka aaj din he update do ge kya
3rd sabal tha ritu aur alka me kuch duri najar aane lagi he kya bat he
4th menka ka arjun se koi sedha sambad ladai ke bad nahi ho paya
5th jo sabal he unka jabab bad me milega abhi kahani ke liye uchit bhi nahi he
6th sir ji arti ka bhi kuch saf nahi ho paya he jo sayd kirsna ji ke ane ke bad ho
7th sir ji prejant story ke anusar lagta he jo bhi bhuchal aane bala he bo lata aur ruchi ki bajah se ho sakta he
Sir ji inme se sirf index ko update kar bana hi pramukh he thanks
 

Tony stark

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AB AATE HAIN ASAL BAAT PAR, IS KAHANI ME VIDHWA MAHILAON KI LIST THODI LAMBI HAI, LEKIN INME KUCH KHAS HAIN, JAISE KI MENKA, RENUKA AUR MANJU, JINKI PATION KI HATYA KI PICHHE RAMESHWAR JEE KE PARIWAR KA HATH HAI, ISE HATYA KI JAGHA VADH KAHNA JADA UCHIT HOGA

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MAIN BHI KUCH SAWALON ME ULJHA HUA HUN, 2010 KA EK UPDATE AAYA THA, JISNE EK SAWAL PAIDA KAR DIYA KI ARJUN KA PAHLA PYAR KON HAI, IS SAWAL NE MUJHE BHI SOCHNE PAR MAJBUR KAR DIYA, YAHAN TAK KI MAIN IS KAHANI KO PHIR SE PADH RAHA HUN, AGAR ARJUN KE BACHPAN KI BAAT KI JAYE TO RITU, ALKA AUR PREETI SURUWAT SE SATH HAIN, AUR IS UMAR ME PYAR KA MATLAB BHI PATA NAHI HOTA BAS EK LAGAW HOTA HAI, KAHANI ME THODA AAGE BADHTA HUN TO ALKA PEHLI GIRL FRIEND BANTI HAI, AUR JAB ARJUN MADHURI DIDI KE SAMPARK ME AATA HAI TO WO MADHURI KO APNA PAHLA PYAR KEHTA HAI, PHIR HOLI KE DIN SHAM ME RITU KO APNA PAHLA PYAR SWIKAR KARTA HAI, AGAR SAMPURN KAHANI KA MANTHAN BHI KARUN TO 2 NAAM SAMNE AATE HAIN, RITU AUR PREETI, AB INME SE KISI EK KI BHI ANDEKHI ARJUN BHALE HI KAR SAKE LEKIN MAIN NAHI KAR PAUNGA, AUR KAHANI KE ANT TAK YE SAWAL RAH HI JAYEGA, KI PEHLA PYAR KON ?

ISI TARHA RENUKA KA VIDHWA HONA YA TALAK SHUDA HONA, DONO HI SAHI HAI BAS ISE SAMJHNE KA NAZARIYA ALAG ALAG HAI, MAIN TO ISI BAAT SE KHUSH HUN KI RENUKA APNI NAI ZINDAGI ME KHUSH HAI

KAHANI ME SUSPENSE LANA, KUCH KIRDARO KO PARDE ME RAKHNA, DOUBLE MEANING BAATE LIKHNA, EK ACHHE KAHANIKAR KI KHASIYAT HOTI HAI, JO KI Enigma SIR ME KUT KUT KAR BHARI HUI HAI

AB HAL PHILHAL KI BAAT KARTE HAIN, 100 SE JADA UPDATE HO GAYE HAIN, LEKIN KUCH UPDATE PAHLE TAK HUM SHANKAR AUR NARENDAR KI JODI KO DEHTE AA RAHE HAIN, HUME KABHI AABHAS BHI NAHI HUA KI YE 2 NAHI 4 HAIN, SHANKAR, NARENDAR, UMED AUR ARJUN SINGH, UMED KA ZIKRA HUA BHI HO LEKIN ARJUN SINGH KA ZIKRA KABHI HUA HI NAHI

HUME TO YE BHI PATA NAHI THA KI KABHI NARENDAR KO EK BETA BHI HUA THA, Enigma SIR ACHHI TARHA SE JANTE HAIN, KI PATHKO KO KAHANI KE SAMMOHAN ME KAISE BANDH KE RAKHNA HAI

Enigma SIR MAIN BAHOT JADA PADHA LIKHA INSAN NAHI HUN, MAINE TO APNA SCHOOL BHI PURA NAHI KIYA, ISLIYE SHAYAD APNI BAATON KO KEHNE ME SAHI SHABDON KA CHAYAN NAHI KAR PATA HUN, ISLIYE AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKH DIYA HO TO MAFI CHAHUNGA

ABHI KE LIYE SIRF ITNA BATA DIJIYE KI KOMAL DIDI KE MANN ME KYA CHAL RAHA HAI ?

DHANYAWAD !!!!
 
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KUCH BHI LIKHNE SE PAHLE MAFI CHAHUNGA, MAIN Professsor SAHEB SE PURI TARHA SEHMAT HUN, INKI IS KAHANI ME JITNI ACHHI PAKAD HAI SHAYAD HI KOI READER KI HOGI, INKE KAHANI KO LEKAR JO BHI POINTS HOTE HAIN, CHAHE WO CHHOTE HON YA BADE, APNI BAAT KO SABIT KAR HI DETE HAIN

AB AATE HAIN ASAL BAAT PAR, IS KAHANI ME VIDHWA MAHILAON KI LIST THODI LAMBI HAI, LEKIN INME KUCH KHAS HAIN, JAISE KI MENKA, RENUKA AUR MANJU, JINKI PATION KI HATYA KI PICHHE RAMESHWAR JEE KE PARIWAR KA HATH HAI, ISE HATYA KI JAGHA VADH KAHNA JADA UCHIT HOGA

HAMARE LEKHAK SAHAB 10 SIR WALE RAWAN KI TARHA SOCHTE HAIN, MAIN Enigma SIR KO RAWAN KEH RAHA HUN TO KRIPYA KOI BHI READER NARAZ NA HON, KYUNKI RAWAN BAHOT GYANI PURUSH THA

KAHANI KI JARURAT SAMJHE YA BAHAW, WRITER SAHAB NE MENKA, RENUKA, MANJU KO 3 ALAG ALAG SHRENI ME RAKHA HAI, JAHAN MENKA KO PURN ROOP SE VIDHWA, MANJU KO PURN ROOP SE SUHAGAN RAKHA HAI WAHIN RENUKA KO BICH KI SHRENI ME RAKHA GAYA HAI, NA HI VIDHWA AUR NA HI SUHAGAN, INHE TALAK SHUDA KI UPADHI DI GAI HAI

MAIN BAKI READERS KI BAAT SE BHI SEHMAT HUN, ASAL ME HAMARE CHALAK WRITER SAHAB KUCH VISHYON PAR PARDA DALE RAKHTE HAIN, JIS SE SABHI READERS APNE HI VICHARON ME ULJHE RAHTE HAIN

MAIN BHI KUCH SAWALON ME ULJHA HUA HUN, 2010 KA EK UPDATE AAYA THA, JISNE EK SAWAL PAIDA KAR DIYA KI ARJUN KA PAHLA PYAR KON HAI, IS SAWAL NE MUJHE BHI SOCHNE PAR MAJBUR KAR DIYA, YAHAN TAK KI MAIN IS KAHANI KO PHIR SE PADH RAHA HUN, AGAR ARJUN KE BACHPAN KI BAAT KI JAYE TO RITU, ALKA AUR PREETI SURUWAT SE SATH HAIN, AUR IS UMAR ME PYAR KA MATLAB BHI PATA NAHI HOTA BAS EK LAGAW HOTA HAI, KAHANI ME THODA AAGE BADHTA HUN TO ALKA PEHLI GIRL FRIEND BANTI HAI, AUR JAB ARJUN MADHURI DIDI KE SAMPARK ME AATA HAI TO WO MADHURI KO APNA PAHLA PYAR KEHTA HAI, PHIR HOLI KE DIN SHAM ME RITU KO APNA PAHLA PYAR SWIKAR KARTA HAI, AGAR SAMPURN KAHANI KA MANTHAN BHI KARUN TO 2 NAAM SAMNE AATE HAIN, RITU AUR PREETI, AB INME SE KISI EK KI BHI ANDEKHI ARJUN BHALE HI KAR SAKE LEKIN MAIN NAHI KAR PAUNGA, AUR KAHANI KE ANT TAK YE SAWAL RAH HI JAYEGA, KI PEHLA PYAR KON ?

ISI TARHA RENUKA KA VIDHWA HONA YA TALAK SHUDA HONA, DONO HI SAHI HAI BAS ISE SAMJHNE KA NAZARIYA ALAG ALAG HAI, MAIN TO ISI BAAT SE KHUSH HUN KI RENUKA APNI NAI ZINDAGI ME KHUSH HAI

KAHANI ME SUSPENSE LANA, KUCH KIRDARO KO PARDE ME RAKHNA, DOUBLE MEANING BAATE LIKHNA, EK ACHHE KAHANIKAR KI KHASIYAT HOTI HAI, JO KI Enigma SIR ME KUT KUT KAR BHARI HUI HAI

AB HAL PHILHAL KI BAAT KARTE HAIN, 100 SE JADA UPDATE HO GAYE HAIN, LEKIN KUCH UPDATE PAHLE TAK HUM SHANKAR AUR NARENDAR KI JODI KO DEHTE AA RAHE HAIN, HUME KABHI AABHAS BHI NAHI HUA KI YE 2 NAHI 4 HAIN, SHANKAR, NARENDAR, UMED AUR ARJUN SINGH, UMED KA ZIKRA HUA BHI HO LEKIN ARJUN SINGH KA ZIKRA KABHI HUA HI NAHI

HUME TO YE BHI PATA NAHI THA KI KABHI NARENDAR KO EK BETA BHI HUA THA, Enigma SIR ACHHI TARHA SE JANTE HAIN, KI PATHKO KO KAHANI KE SAMMOHAN ME KAISE BANDH KE RAKHNA HAI

Enigma SIR MAIN BAHOT JADA PADHA LIKHA INSAN NAHI HUN, MAINE TO APNA SCHOOL BHI PURA NAHI KIYA, ISLIYE SHAYAD APNI BAATON KO KEHNE ME SAHI SHABDON KA CHAYAN NAHI KAR PATA HUN, ISLIYE AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKH DIYA HO TO MAFI CHAHUNGA

ABHI KE LIYE SIRF ITNA BATA DIJIYE KI KOMAL DIDI KE MANN ME KYA CHAL RAHA HAI ?

DHANYAWAD !!!!
Well @Tonystark that is the beauty and efficiency of a prolific writer.Just go with flow brother.
 

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KUCH BHI LIKHNE SE PAHLE MAFI CHAHUNGA, MAIN Professsor SAHEB SE PURI TARHA SEHMAT HUN, INKI IS KAHANI ME JITNI ACHHI PAKAD HAI SHAYAD HI KOI READER KI HOGI, INKE KAHANI KO LEKAR JO BHI POINTS HOTE HAIN, CHAHE WO CHHOTE HON YA BADE, APNI BAAT KO SABIT KAR HI DETE HAIN

AB AATE HAIN ASAL BAAT PAR, IS KAHANI ME VIDHWA MAHILAON KI LIST THODI LAMBI HAI, LEKIN INME KUCH KHAS HAIN, JAISE KI MENKA, RENUKA AUR MANJU, JINKI PATION KI HATYA KI PICHHE RAMESHWAR JEE KE PARIWAR KA HATH HAI, ISE HATYA KI JAGHA VADH KAHNA JADA UCHIT HOGA

HAMARE LEKHAK SAHAB 10 SIR WALE RAWAN KI TARHA SOCHTE HAIN, MAIN Enigma SIR KO RAWAN KEH RAHA HUN TO KRIPYA KOI BHI READER NARAZ NA HON, KYUNKI RAWAN BAHOT GYANI PURUSH THA

KAHANI KI JARURAT SAMJHE YA BAHAW, WRITER SAHAB NE MENKA, RENUKA, MANJU KO 3 ALAG ALAG SHRENI ME RAKHA HAI, JAHAN MENKA KO PURN ROOP SE VIDHWA, MANJU KO PURN ROOP SE SUHAGAN RAKHA HAI WAHIN RENUKA KO BICH KI SHRENI ME RAKHA GAYA HAI, NA HI VIDHWA AUR NA HI SUHAGAN, INHE TALAK SHUDA KI UPADHI DI GAI HAI

MAIN BAKI READERS KI BAAT SE BHI SEHMAT HUN, ASAL ME HAMARE CHALAK WRITER SAHAB KUCH VISHYON PAR PARDA DALE RAKHTE HAIN, JIS SE SABHI READERS APNE HI VICHARON ME ULJHE RAHTE HAIN

MAIN BHI KUCH SAWALON ME ULJHA HUA HUN, 2010 KA EK UPDATE AAYA THA, JISNE EK SAWAL PAIDA KAR DIYA KI ARJUN KA PAHLA PYAR KON HAI, IS SAWAL NE MUJHE BHI SOCHNE PAR MAJBUR KAR DIYA, YAHAN TAK KI MAIN IS KAHANI KO PHIR SE PADH RAHA HUN, AGAR ARJUN KE BACHPAN KI BAAT KI JAYE TO RITU, ALKA AUR PREETI SURUWAT SE SATH HAIN, AUR IS UMAR ME PYAR KA MATLAB BHI PATA NAHI HOTA BAS EK LAGAW HOTA HAI, KAHANI ME THODA AAGE BADHTA HUN TO ALKA PEHLI GIRL FRIEND BANTI HAI, AUR JAB ARJUN MADHURI DIDI KE SAMPARK ME AATA HAI TO WO MADHURI KO APNA PAHLA PYAR KEHTA HAI, PHIR HOLI KE DIN SHAM ME RITU KO APNA PAHLA PYAR SWIKAR KARTA HAI, AGAR SAMPURN KAHANI KA MANTHAN BHI KARUN TO 2 NAAM SAMNE AATE HAIN, RITU AUR PREETI, AB INME SE KISI EK KI BHI ANDEKHI ARJUN BHALE HI KAR SAKE LEKIN MAIN NAHI KAR PAUNGA, AUR KAHANI KE ANT TAK YE SAWAL RAH HI JAYEGA, KI PEHLA PYAR KON ?

ISI TARHA RENUKA KA VIDHWA HONA YA TALAK SHUDA HONA, DONO HI SAHI HAI BAS ISE SAMJHNE KA NAZARIYA ALAG ALAG HAI, MAIN TO ISI BAAT SE KHUSH HUN KI RENUKA APNI NAI ZINDAGI ME KHUSH HAI

KAHANI ME SUSPENSE LANA, KUCH KIRDARO KO PARDE ME RAKHNA, DOUBLE MEANING BAATE LIKHNA, EK ACHHE KAHANIKAR KI KHASIYAT HOTI HAI, JO KI Enigma SIR ME KUT KUT KAR BHARI HUI HAI

AB HAL PHILHAL KI BAAT KARTE HAIN, 100 SE JADA UPDATE HO GAYE HAIN, LEKIN KUCH UPDATE PAHLE TAK HUM SHANKAR AUR NARENDAR KI JODI KO DEHTE AA RAHE HAIN, HUME KABHI AABHAS BHI NAHI HUA KI YE 2 NAHI 4 HAIN, SHANKAR, NARENDAR, UMED AUR ARJUN SINGH, UMED KA ZIKRA HUA BHI HO LEKIN ARJUN SINGH KA ZIKRA KABHI HUA HI NAHI

HUME TO YE BHI PATA NAHI THA KI KABHI NARENDAR KO EK BETA BHI HUA THA, Enigma SIR ACHHI TARHA SE JANTE HAIN, KI PATHKO KO KAHANI KE SAMMOHAN ME KAISE BANDH KE RAKHNA HAI

Enigma SIR MAIN BAHOT JADA PADHA LIKHA INSAN NAHI HUN, MAINE TO APNA SCHOOL BHI PURA NAHI KIYA, ISLIYE SHAYAD APNI BAATON KO KEHNE ME SAHI SHABDON KA CHAYAN NAHI KAR PATA HUN, ISLIYE AGAR KUCH GALAT LIKH DIYA HO TO MAFI CHAHUNGA

ABHI KE LIYE SIRF ITNA BATA DIJIYE KI KOMAL DIDI KE MANN ME KYA CHAL RAHA HAI ?

DHANYAWAD !!!!
Bahot he sahi shabdo ka prayog kiya hai bhai. Ye bhi baat saamne aati hai ke aap kahani ko padhne ke sath he harek sanvaad aur charitra ko samajh rahe hai.
3 kirdaaro ka aapne sahi vishleshan kiya hai jaisa ki main khud dikha raha. Manju, Menaka aur Renuka ke beech jo samajik farak hai woh aisa he banaya gaya hai.

Narinder aur Shankar ki pehli dono santaan agar dekhe toh samaan umar ki hai. Teesra bacha jaha Arjun aur woh ladka jo bach na paya wo bhi aas-pas he paida hue honge. Kyonki krishna ji ne bhi doodh pilaya tha Arjun ko jo batata hai ke us samay Krishna ji stann-paan karane me saksham thi.
Punjab me ek jagah ye bhi bataya gaya tha ke Arjun 8 mahine ka tha tab usko in mahila ne Krishna ji ke sath dekha tha. Afsana ki ammi ji ne aisa kaha tha. Fir Chandro devi ne bhi jikar kiya tha aisa he kuch. Baaki ye baat aur khul kar saamne aayegi 10 May ke baad.
Fir aate hai Arjun Singh par. In janaab ka jikar hua toh saamne aaya inka sambandh aur pyaar baaki teeno se. Lekin ye kahani sunane wala wahi vyakti hoga jo Arjun ke janam ke baad hui sthiti bhi saaf kar sake. Narinder, Shankar toh aisa karne nahi wale. Rameshwar ji kuch aisa sochenge bhi nahi kyonki itihas poora batana padega toh 5 log bachte hai peeche. Chandro Devi, Kaushalya ji, Purnima ji, Krishna ji aur Madhulata.
Aakhri baar ke Komal ne aisa kya dekha aur sawaal kya tha?
Arjun ko abhi khulkar batana padega Madhu bua ke sath uska sambandh aur jo usne unki behtar zindagi ke liye kiya.
Wo kaise shabdo ka aur kathan ka chunaav karta hai wo bhi jaruri hoga. Sawal se aur sawaal nikal sakte hain kyonki komal didi uski badi behan hai. Alag naam saamne na aa jaye Arjun is liye bach raha hai.

Next update aaj raat milega dosto aur index update bhi kar dunga.
 
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