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Incest Pyaar - 100 Baar

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Hello Guys, Aap sablog soch rahe honge ki is story ko kya hua or kyun iske readers baar baar ban horahe hain?

Ye sab suru hua advertising ki wajah se jo Xforum mein bilkul bhi allowed nahi hai, Pehle humne sabko warn kiya bahot baar message karke bhi or thread k Uppar publicly bhi lekin kuch users fir bhi nahi maane or unhone Xforum k users ko private chat apps k links k dwara invite karna suru kardiya ye bhi Xforum par bilkul allowed nahi hai kyunki ye privacy policy ko violate karta hai. Uske baad kuch users ban hue toh baaki gaali dene lage again jo allowed nahi hai issliye majburan humein kai users ko ban karna padda.

Or ab wohlog apne groups mein simple readers ko bulaake unse apne kaale kaam karwa rahe hain jaise unke links ko promote karna wagairaah . Hum aapse anurodh kartey hain ki unki baaton mein naa aaein warna aapko permanently ban kardiya jaaega agar aapko aise koi contact karta hai toh usko report kijiye yaa Mujhe pm kijiye baaki hum dekhlenge.Humara humessa he motive rehta hai Xforum k jarriye logon ko entertain karna jo hota rahega. Hum kuch mandbudhi waale logon ko hajaaron logon k manoranjan mein khalal nahi daalne denge.

Thanks.

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Hello guys, many of you must be wondering what happened to this story and why the writer and the readers are keep getting banned?

Lets clear all these things now. All this started because of advertising, which we don’t allow on XForum. We warned them first but they didn’t listen to us, instead they stared inviting the members through private chat app links. Which are also not allowed since it violates the privacy policy.
We request you to stop all these activities otherwise you may get banned. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me or any other staff memeber.Our Motive here is Entertaining you guys and that's what we are doing from day 1 and we won't let some idiots ruin thousands of people's Entertainment.

peace!
 

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Dhanyawad ki aapne mujhe is layak samjha. Warna me to wo is forum ke writro me us reader ke naam se mashur hu jo writer logo ki majboori nahi dekhta bas update mangta rehta he. Sach keh raha hu ki yaha kai writers mere bare me achhi soch nahi rakhte khas taur par wo jinaki story muje achhi lagti he aur me baar 2 unse update ki maang karta rehta hu

Lo ji Aka bhai aapka to direct recruitment ho gaya hai. Main to kehta hu aap apne naam se pehle Dr. shabd ka prayog karna start kar do. Dr. Aka3829 the specialist.
 
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Ati uttam Prabhu. Matlab agar Maine kabhi koi kitab likhi toh ek baat confirm hai. Aap uski proof-reading karoge Bhai. Feedback ke sath he aapke question marks bahut kuch keh dete hai.
Baat bilkul sahi ki aapne ki abhi Rameshwar ji ka poora kirdaar nahi bataya Gaya. Takriban 40-50 updates ke baad aayega 'Mahakaal' naam se update. Koi 4-5 bhaag me. Wahi vistar se 1934 se 2004 ki kahani hogi.
Ek aur jaruri baat ki kahani me pyaar ke barabar he khoon aur jurm bhi hai.
Tabhi Mera anumaan hai ke 450 update jayenge.

hmmm... 450 updates... so iska matlab hai ke aaka pura project pipeline process mein hai. Har scene ka overview aapne pehle se hi design kiya hua hai. bas usko detail mein expand kar ke its 'n' bits ke saath pesh kar rahe hai. Good, very very Good.
Admire your work bro.
 
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Pariwar ye wo sabd he jiske paas hota he wo apne aap me ek raja hota he aur jo ise ek sath bandh kar rakh sake to use raja se bada mana jata he. Kyuki usane raka bankar raaj bhogne ke sath hi tapasya bhi ki hoti he usi pariwar ko ek sath rakhne ke liye. Pandit ji bhi wahi the. Jinhone apna raaj bhi bhoga aur fir tapasya bhi ki use ek sath rakhne ke liye. Shankar unka wo sastra he jise unhone waise hi sambhalna chaha jaise krishan jinne apne sudarshan chakra ko aur shiv ji ne apne teeare netra ko. Kyuki unhe pata tha ki jab bhi ye sastra chalega to tabhahi hi layega aur dusmano ka safaya kar dega jaise gujjaro ke pariwar ke mardo ka kra. Pandit ji ke periwar ka jo bhi varnan sunaya wo abhi adhura laga mujhe. Aur last ki line se to thoda sa ghabra bhi gya jab ajay ne bataya ki aaj kal Sanjeev shankar ji ki jaga kaam kar raha he aur usame dono ka mishran he apne chacha aur dada 2no ka.
Lekin unhone abhi picture ke sirf usi kirdar ko dekha he jo parde par samne aa gya he. Abhi to asli SHER jise dada jj ka anushasan aur dadi ke ladoo tayyar kar rahe he wo samne hi nahi aya he. Ha wo baat alagbhe ki abhimanhyu ne usaki ek jhalak dekh li he. Sanjeev bhai bhale hi un 2no ka mishran ho lekin Arjun wo khud un dono se 4 kadam aage he kyuki usake paas kuch aisi chheje bhi he jo sanjeev bhi ko nahi mili he. Jaise shastri ji ka gyaan, sabhi behno aur preeti ka atma ki gehrayi se pyaar, dadi ke ladoo aur sabse jyada khud par sayanm. Fir chahe kaisi bhi paristhiti kyu na ho. Aur aaj to shashtri ji ne usake gyaan chaksu aur khol diye Nar Nayaran ka rahasya bata kar aur use adhunik jeevan se jod kar. Ab dekhna ye he ki in sab bato se abhimanyu aur anupam ko kuch akal ayi ya nahi.
To madhuri ka is pariwar walo ke sath ab kuch mahino ka hi he. Aur ek naya sadasya bhi sath hi ayega bhi yani sanjeev ki biwi. Ab wo kaisi he uska nature kaisa he ye to baad me hi pata chalega. Alka aur ritu ka to ek hi lakshya lagta he jisame preeti unke sath he. Madhuri ne to bua ke dil ki baat kar di unse agle bachhe ke bare me puch kar. Tai ji aur rekha ji ki baato se lagta he ki gao me bhi shankar ji ne kuch kaand kiya he jise unhone dekh liya he. Ab tai ji unhe samjha rahi he ki jaise shankar ji ne usake sath kiya he wo bhi kisi dusare aur bharose wale ke sath pyaar kar le. Kahi wo rekha ji ko sanjeev ke sath to nahi jodna chahti lekin fir mujhe suru ka wo update yaad ata he jaha sanjeev arjun ko kisi randi ke paas le gya tha jaha khud us randi ne sanjeev ko arjun ke samne chota sabit kar diya tha.
Bua ke sath sote hue arjun ko to kuch bhi dhyan nahi raha kam se kam apni is biwi ke sath sote hue apni un 3 biwiyon ke bare me soch leta jisame se ek jamse bond ki nani he. Khair ritu ne apne dimag ka istemal karte hue preeti ko akele hi is situation ko sambhalne ko kaha.
Waiting 4 next update

Fir se cheer - haran! :angry:
waise to aapme bhi SAAND ki CHODU GANG wale saare gun hai jaise - Ungli karne ka;), aur review bhi theek thaak se, kaam chalau se likh lete ho :o (that was my sarcasm and humour)... he he.
but bhai aapne itni jaldi Sanjeev bhiya ke character ke liye jo approach rakhi, i think wo theek nahi hai. i mean itni jaldi abhi hume unke character ko judge nahi karna chahiye, what i believe is that he has many layers to his character. I think what he actually is, wo kisi ko bhi dikhate nahi hai, aur jo log unke baare mein andaaza laga rahe hai - he is much more than that - from outside he looks so simple, composed and laid back guy.

Muzhe to kabhi - kabhi lagta hai ke unhe shayad iska bhi aabhas hai ki Arjun kya - kya karta firta hai. Arjun ghar mein sabse chota hai iss liye sabka dhyaan uss par jyada rehta hai. Fir Aapne Arjun ke baare mein kaha ki asli sher to abhi ubhar ke saamne nahi aaya wo abhi taiyaar ho raha hai. par mere khyaal se jis stage se Arjun gujar raha hai aur jaise sanskaar aur bado ki chaanv mein hai, uss sab se pehle Sanjeev bhi gujara hoga, hai to aakhir dono phool ek hi bageche ke, dono ko seechne wala maali bhi ek hi hai.

abb aage chal kar dekhte hai kahani mein kya mod aata hai - Enigma bhai ne kya - kya socha hua hai in sabke liye.

Par kuch bhi kaho review jhakkas diya hai...... ladka cha gaya hai. :celebration:
mera dimaag to abb bhi uss textile wale point par atka hua hai - jo aapne last review mein bataya tha... exceptionally superb.
 
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Enigma bhai aaj wala update to wakai mein eye opener tha. Erotic part to aap likhte hi itna mast ho ke kehne hi kya, but apart from all that jo build up aap create karte ho vo avismarniya hai. Asli mazaa hi uss build up mein aata hai... aur jis tarah se aap situation ko create karte hai.....oye hoye! bas pucho mat --- dil garden - garden ho jata hai. Main to ye soch kar tajjub mein hu ke aap iss sabko likne se pehle iss par kitna soch vichar karte honge ya phele kiya hoga. ..gajab yaar..

kabhi - kabhi to sab kuch bilkul saccha sa lagta... ya shayad ye hi karan hai ke main iss kahani ko itna samay deta hu...

love your work bhai...
 
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Fir se cheer - haran! :angry:
waise to aapme bhi SAAND ki CHODU GANG wale saare gun hai jaise - Ungli karne ka;), aur review bhi theek thaak se, kaam chalau se likh lete ho :o (that was my sarcasm and humour)... he he.
but bhai aapne itni jaldi Sanjeev bhiya ke character ke liye jo approach rakhi, i think wo theek nahi hai. i mean itni jaldi abhi hume unke character ko judge nahi karna chahiye, what i believe is that he has many layers to his character. I think what he actually is, wo kisi ko bhi dikhate nahi hai, aur jo log unke baare mein andaaza laga rahe hai - he is much more than that - from outside he looks so simple, composed and laid back guy.

Muzhe to kabhi - kabhi lagta hai ke unhe shayad iska bhi aabhas hai ki Arjun kya - kya karta firta hai. Arjun ghar mein sabse chota hai iss liye sabka dhyaan uss par jyada rehta hai. Fir Aapne Arjun ke baare mein kaha ki asli sher to abhi ubhar ke saamne nahi aaya wo abhi taiyaar ho raha hai. par mere khyaal se jis stage se Arjun gujar raha hai aur jaise sanskaar aur bado ki chaanv mein hai, uss sab se pehle Sanjeev bhi gujara hoga, hai to aakhir dono phool ek hi bageche ke, dono ko seechne wala maali bhi ek hi hai.

abb aage chal kar dekhte hai kahani mein kya mod aata hai - Enigma bhai ne kya - kya socha hua hai in sabke liye.

Par kuch bhi kaho review jhakkas diya hai...... ladka cha gaya hai. :celebration:
mera dimaag to abb bhi uss textile wale point par atka hua hai - jo aapne last review mein bataya tha... exceptionally superb.
Tarif ke liye sukriya. Mene sanjeev ke bare me jo bola he usake liye kuch points batata hu.
1 Unme kisi kaam ko karne ki jald bazi he. Wo arjun ko dheere 2 bhi to pyar ka path pada sakte the lekin jaldi bazi me use us randi ke paas le gaye lekin waha unaki hi ek tarah se beizati ho gayi jisake liye unhone arjun se mafi bhi maangi thi.
2 jab ssadi me ritu par humla hua tha tab bhi unhone arjun ko pakad kar kaha tha ki tujhe fir se bahar bhej denge jabki bade bhai ke naate unhe khud dhyan rakhna chahiye tha ki unka pariwar kaha he aur sab thik he ki nahi dusri baat unhe bhi us ladke ko marna chahiye tha kam se kam ek thappad to marte hi.
3 unhe ek saal pehele pata chal gya tha ki unka rista ho chuka he fir bhi wo us randi ke paas jate he yani khud par sayam nahi he. Arjun ka Rakhi wala scene yaad he na usane sirf uske manjil tak pahuchaya khud par control rakh kar.
Aur mahashay aapka reviw nahi aya abhi tak is update ka. Aur mera hasma to achha he lekin writer sahab ne wada kiya tha 2 baje update dene ka aur me pehli baar 2 baje tak jaga tha use padhne ke liye. Lekin neend bhi kharab hui aur update bhi nahi mila.
 

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Fir se cheer - haran! :angry:
waise to aapme bhi SAAND ki CHODU GANG wale saare gun hai jaise - Ungli karne ka;), aur review bhi theek thaak se, kaam chalau se likh lete ho :o (that was my sarcasm and humour)... he he.
but bhai aapne itni jaldi Sanjeev bhiya ke character ke liye jo approach rakhi, i think wo theek nahi hai. i mean itni jaldi abhi hume unke character ko judge nahi karna chahiye, what i believe is that he has many layers to his character. I think what he actually is, wo kisi ko bhi dikhate nahi hai, aur jo log unke baare mein andaaza laga rahe hai - he is much more than that - from outside he looks so simple, composed and laid back guy.

Muzhe to kabhi - kabhi lagta hai ke unhe shayad iska bhi aabhas hai ki Arjun kya - kya karta firta hai. Arjun ghar mein sabse chota hai iss liye sabka dhyaan uss par jyada rehta hai. Fir Aapne Arjun ke baare mein kaha ki asli sher to abhi ubhar ke saamne nahi aaya wo abhi taiyaar ho raha hai. par mere khyaal se jis stage se Arjun gujar raha hai aur jaise sanskaar aur bado ki chaanv mein hai, uss sab se pehle Sanjeev bhi gujara hoga, hai to aakhir dono phool ek hi bageche ke, dono ko seechne wala maali bhi ek hi hai.

abb aage chal kar dekhte hai kahani mein kya mod aata hai - Enigma bhai ne kya - kya socha hua hai in sabke liye.

Par kuch bhi kaho review jhakkas diya hai...... ladka cha gaya hai. :celebration:
mera dimaag to abb bhi uss textile wale point par atka hua hai - jo aapne last review mein bataya tha... exceptionally superb.
Tarif ke liye sukriya. Mene sanjeev ke bare me jo bola he usake liye kuch points batata hu.
1 Unme kisi kaam ko karne ki jald bazi he. Wo arjun ko dheere 2 bhi to pyar ka path pada sakte the lekin jaldi bazi me use us randi ke paas le gaye lekin waha unaki hi ek tarah se beizati ho gayi jisake liye unhone arjun se mafi bhi maangi thi.
2 jab ssadi me ritu par humla hua tha tab bhi unhone arjun ko pakad kar kaha tha ki tujhe fir se bahar bhej denge jabki bade bhai ke naate unhe khud dhyan rakhna chahiye tha ki unka pariwar kaha he aur sab thik he ki nahi dusri baat unhe bhi us ladke ko marna chahiye tha kam se kam ek thappad to marte hi.
3 unhe ek saal pehele pata chal gya tha ki unka rista ho chuka he fir bhi wo us randi ke paas jate he yani khud par sayam nahi he. Arjun ka Rakhi wala scene yaad he na usane sirf uske manjil tak pahuchaya khud par control rakh kar.
Aur mahashay aapka reviw nahi aya abhi tak is update ka. Aur mera hasma to achha he lekin writer sahab ne wada kiya tha 2 baje update dene ka aur me pehli baar 2 baje tak jaga tha use padhne ke liye. Lekin neend bhi kharab hui aur update bhi nahi mila.
 
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Aacharya ji ki bhi vaapsi ho gayi hai.. aur unhone aate hi Arjun ko gyan ka paath bhi dena shuru kar diya hai jo acchi baat hai. Jiski abhi Arjun ko jarurat hai jo aage chal kar kaam aayegi.
Baki rameshwar ji ke aate hi aaj se Arjun ki gaadi wapis patri par aa gayi hai... doodh aur laddoo se subha shareer ki jarurat puri hui aur Acharya aur Rameshwarji ki seekh se Arjun ke dimaag ki jarurat bhi poori ho gayi.

Ghar ki in saari ladkiyon ka to kehna hi kya --- aafat hai. ye to CHAK DE ki 'vanar sena' se bhi do kadam aage hai.

Preeti ka Arjun ke prati kitna samarpan hai ye isi baat se samjha ja sakta hai ke wo khud ki bua ko apne hone wale pati ke saath sharirik samband bhi manjoor hai. Aur apna pyaar bhi baaki ladkiyon ke saath baatt rahi hai. Preeti ka kad to Rekha ji se bhi jyaada ucha hai, jaha Rekha ji apne pati Shankar ji ki kaargujariyon se dukhi hai aur aansu bahati rehti hai wahi bechari Preeti sab kuch mon rehte hue sab ki kushi ke liye Arjun ko dusro ke saath bhi dekh kar kush hai. Par Preeti utni hi jyaada possesssive bhi hai apne sher ke liye, kyon ki Arjun ki shaadi kisi aur ke saath hone ki baat par sherni ke tarah bhadak bhi gayi thi itne logo ke saamne, beshak hi wo baat mazak mein ki gayi ho. Preeti ne ye baat bhi saaf kardi ke wo kisi bhi kimat par Arjun ko nahi chodegi yaha tak ki agar uski Maa bhi saath na de to. par lagta hai shayad isne apni maa 'Greek Goddess' se baat bhi ki hui hai jaisa uski baato se 'aabhas' hua.

Ghar ki aurato ki bhi majboori kitni hoti hai, na bechari bahar ja sakti hai, na apne dil ka dukhda kisi se baatt sakti hai. Aur saath hi saath apne patiyon ki galtiyon ko sehti bhi hai aur unpar purdah bhi dalti hai aur iss sabke bavejood apne patni dharm ka palan karte hue pativrata bani rehti hai. Aadmi to samaaj ke niyamo ko apne hisab se tod - marod leta hai, kintu ek stri ko ghar ki, samaaj ki, pariwaar ki sabhi jimmedariyon ke anukul apna jivan jina hota hai. Ek aurat ko patni ka bhi dharm, bahu ka bhi dharm, maa ka bhi dharm, putri ka bhi dharm, behan ka bhi dharm, bhabi hone ka, daadi hone ka, saasu maa hone ka bhi dharm nibhana padta hai. itni saari jimmedariyon ka bojh utha ke chalna kisi aam aadmi ke bas ki baat nahi ye to ek mahan divyaroopi devi hi kar sakti hai. Aur iska jita jagta udharan hai Rekha ji, jo bechari ek seedhi - saadhi si ladki ek police officer ke ghar ki bahu ban kar aayi, jiska pati use pyaar to karta hai kintu purntya samarpit nahi hai. Aur kuch aisa hi haal Lalita ji ka bhi hai kyon ki unke pati bhi apne chote bhai ki tarah aiyaash na ho par kabhi - kabhi to wo bhi apne pati dharm ka nirvah nahi karte, agar aapko yaad ho to holi par dono bhai apne piyakkad dosto (chawla, sangwan) ke saath bahar chale gaye the. kismat ki dhani bechari Lalita ji ko to Arjun ka pyaar mil gaya, anjaane mein hi sahi. Par bechari Rekha ji to majboor hai, ghar ki choti bahu hone ke saath - saath 3 - 3 baccho ki maa hai, aur jiska jallad sa Ravan jaisa pati ho vo bechari to kuch aisa karne ka soch bhi nahi sakti. Abb aage chal kar hi pata clale ga ki Rekha ji ko kiska pyaar naseeb hota hai. iss sab par to keval lekhak ji hi prakash daal sakte hai.

Arjun ka pyaar pa kar to Renuka ji bhi apni sudh - budh kho baithi hai, ve to apne se aadhi umar ke ladke ka sang milne se uske jaisi hi masoom si nasamzh baachi si ban gayi hai.
bhala ho Alka ka ke usne Ritu aur Preeti ko Arjun ka dhyaan dilaya, nahi to koi aur bhi dekh sakta tha aur jis tarah kamre ke andar ve Arjun se bel ki tarah lipti si soi hui thi, agar koi unhe is roop mein dekh leta to ghar mein bhari kalesh ho jana tha. Par ye mera niji anumaan hai ke shayad Alka ko pata tha aur issi liye uska indirect way mein Ritu ko Arjun ko dhundne ke liye kaha tha. kyonki jitni shatir james bond jasoos wo hai usse dekh kar to nahi lagta ke usne iss baat ka pata na laga liya ho.

Abb baat karte hai in do Gadho ki (Abhimanyu aur Anurag). Ajaypartap aur Vijaypartap ne jo vakya sunaya hai Rameshwar ji se sambandhit, ke kaise unke dono beto ne katle aam macha diya tha. Aur to aur char logo ke shareer to shat - vikshat halat mein bilkul rond diye the jinka sirf sir he pehchan ne ke liye choda tha. aur kasie 16 aadmiyon ko kaat daala tha jisme ki 3 mantri bhi the. Anurag ki to aise baat hi sunkar phat gayi, par lagta hai ye baat shayad iss chutiya Abhimanyu ke samjh mein nahi aa rahi, ye dhaar le ke baithega. Ab jo bhi hona hai wo to ho ke hi rahega, samajhdaar ko ishaara kafi hota hai, jo ki AjayPratap aur VijayPratap ne kar diya hai aur aisi kisi bevekoofi na karne ki salah bi di hai. Jis tarah Mahabharat mein Duryodhan ko Pitamaha Bhism, Aacharya Drron, Kripa charya, Vidur Kaka, Mata Gandhari, yaha tak ki Shakuni ne bhi aur antt mein khud Shri Krishan ne bhi samjhaya tha ke tum galat marg ka anusaran kar rahe ho, aur tumhe apne bhaiyo Pandavo se shanti se samjhota kar lena chahiye, isime kul ki bhalai hai, par vo nasamaj nahi mana aur apne saath - saath apne kul ka bhi sarvnaash karwa baitha. kuch aisa hi haal Abhimanyu ka bhi hoga agar isne kuch bevakoofi ki to.

Kehne ko to Arjun ke pita Shankar Doctor hai par lagta hai ve logo ki timardari kar ne se jyada unki khatiya bakhed dete hai.:lol: Waise dono baap - bete hai ek dum sher ke patthe, Shankar bhi aur Arjun bhi, kyon ki dono hi to gusse mein pagal ho jaate hai, dono hi rasiya hai ladkiyon ke maamle mein, aur dono se hi logo ki phati bhi hai... yaha tak ki khud Rameshwar ji bhi apne manjhle saputr Dr. Shankar se darte hai aur wahi Arjun ne jitno par bhi haath saaf kiya hai un sabki to lanka lag jati hai, Arjun se to bechare Col. saab bhi abb tak khauf khate hai, jab unke sar par chote se Arjun ne paathar raseed kar diya tha. muzhe nahi lagta ke agar galti se bhi Col. saab ko Renuka aur Arjun ke baare mein agar future mein pata laga to ve Arjun ko kuch keh payenge, ve to bechare darryaye abb bhi Arjun ko 'mera baccha - mera baccha' keh ke kush rakhte hai.

Hai yaar Doctor saab bhi kamal ke jaha jaate hai wahi kuch na kuch kaand kar aate hai, iss baar gaanv gaye to waha bhi kisi aurat ki baja aaye, jiska pata Lalitha ji aur Rekha ji ko bhi lag gaya hai. Wo kaun aurat thi ye to shayad aage story mein pata lagega, par itna pakka hai ke iss baar doctor saab ke iss kadam ne Rekha ji ko andar se bilkul tod diya hai, ab iska aage chal kar kya parinaam nikalta hai. ye to aage ke updates mein hi pata lageaga.

Par Enigma bhai aapne bhi kamal kar rakha hai yaar har baar ek se badh kar ek jabardast romanchkari aur romance se bharpoor update pelte ja rahe ho. jaise ki ek sunar motiyon ki maala mein moti peerota hai bilkul waise hi aapne bhi ek ke baad ek update mein har situation ko itni kushalta se peeroya hai ke yeh maatr erotic kahani na hokar balke ek upanyaas ka roop leti jaa rahi hai. Aur aapki ek acche lekhak ke taur par ye aapki pratibapurn shaili ko alankrit karti hai.
 
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mera review kaisa laga iske baare mein shrimaan Enigma ji aapne karun tippaniyon ke dwara is par apne vichaar vyakt karna.

kya karu majboori hai .....Aka bhai ne apne cheer - faad wale dhaansu reviews de kar reviews ka level itna high kar diya hai ke muzhe bhi maidane jung mein apne rath ko aage badhana padh raha hai..... lets go to war :armyman: ...he he ...abb dekhte hai jalne ki bu kaha se aati hai. ;)

ha ha .... aka bhai serious mat ho jana yaar kyon ki dono bhai almost padosi hi hai (Roorkee aur Meerut). :happy: ___mera Bharat mahan.. he he.
 
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