Adultery PYAAR KI BHOOKH ( COMPLETE)
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Bro, as always jabardast update, S ki kahani bohot sad hey, last mey Azzad ko marney ka usko pastawa bhi hey, AK k sath uski kaam pehley bohot strong tha lagta hey agey bhi strong hoga q ki aapni beti ko jo wada kiya hey.
Parul ka bhi kuch samaj nahi aaraha hey, phone pey to kisi aur k sath baat karrahi thi, dekhtey hey agey kya wo rony k sath pyear karahi hey ya game khel rahihey.
sanju aur akram to samaj sey parey hey, dekhtey hey agey kon kistaraf hey.
Suppi hmm to hamara hero ki life mey bhi sachcha pyear aya tha, kya wo sirf accident tha ya kuch locha hey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
Parul ka bhi kuch samaj nahi aaraha hey, phone pey to kisi aur k sath baat karrahi thi, dekhtey hey agey kya wo rony k sath pyear karahi hey ya game khel rahihey.
sanju aur akram to samaj sey parey hey, dekhtey hey agey kon kistaraf hey.
Suppi hmm to hamara hero ki life mey bhi sachcha pyear aya tha, kya wo sirf accident tha ya kuch locha hey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
NawTDoggy
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Amazing writing skills. Jitna tareef karo wo kum hai. Story mei itne twists and turns hain ki bas agle update ka besabri se intezaar rahta hai.
Hats off bro , 4 ur thought & hard work
S ki kahani ko kya joda hai, wah, sach me mazedaar
S se kafi kuch pata chala, rekha mousi nikli, gunde ke chakkar me gai thi to fir saxena ki biwi, ye kya majra hai bhai
Renu kis soch me hai, kya parul aur rony ke liye ya kuch aur
Parul aur rony, pyaar hua koi nhi, but lagta hai ki, kuch to galbad hai ankit, kuch to gadbad hai
Sanju aur akram, lagta hai akram ke mind se kuch chhed-chaad hui hai, aur sanju ka bhi kuch locha laga mere ko, dekhte hai aap kise kaha fit karte ho, filhaal to sanju sabnam ki baja raha hai
Supriya, lagta hai ye ankit ka saccha pyaar thi, par mar gai, par kaise, kya wo ek accident hi tha ya isme bhi kuch funda hoga
Aur sipriya ki chhoti si jhalak ne hi aankhe nam kar di dost, i wish aage jab suppi ki kahani aaye to sad mood na ho, kuch mazedaar ho .ok
S ki mulaqat ankit se kaise hui , kya ye aage pata chalega, ek pura scene, ?
aur mujhe lagta hai ki abhi bhi S picture me aayga, koi raaj aur bhi hoge aur wo ankit ka sath dega , right ?
Baki kua bolu, aapki soch aur likhne ka tareeka, iske liye mere paas to word nhi, bhale hi koi kuch bhi bole, aapki skill mere liye best hai
Ek sex story ko ek hot thriller bana diya, gajab bhai , gajab
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Hmm....aakhirkaar S ki kahani dikha hi di....good....ab AK , rekha ke piche jayga...
Supriya....iska kuch part aur hai kya....ya itna hi....
Sanju aur akram to mujhe naatak karte dikh rahe hai....kyoki ankit ne jo bola usse doubt hua...tamasha suru...right
parul dhokha degi....ya fasegi....kahinl sabnam ki chaal me to nhi fas rahi...aur rony majboor me sath ho...ye intresting hoga
Renu ka abhi kuch pata nhi chal raha....use wo kaam diya tha wo kya tha....mujhe to bata de.....
Chalo....aage dekhte hai...ab to har update ke sath aisa lagta hai ki mujhe jo bataya tha sab bekaar ho gaya...yaha to kuch alag hi dikh raha....
Koi na bhai......keep going.....
Supriya....iska kuch part aur hai kya....ya itna hi....
Sanju aur akram to mujhe naatak karte dikh rahe hai....kyoki ankit ne jo bola usse doubt hua...tamasha suru...right
parul dhokha degi....ya fasegi....kahinl sabnam ki chaal me to nhi fas rahi...aur rony majboor me sath ho...ye intresting hoga
Renu ka abhi kuch pata nhi chal raha....use wo kaam diya tha wo kya tha....mujhe to bata de.....
Chalo....aage dekhte hai...ab to har update ke sath aisa lagta hai ki mujhe jo bataya tha sab bekaar ho gaya...yaha to kuch alag hi dikh raha....
Koi na bhai......keep going.....
kamdev99008
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ankit bhai..................S ki kahani..............is mahakatha ka sabse mahatvpurn bindu laga mujhe.....................
ye pahla character hai jo dil se positive hai ankit ke liye.................
aur iske dwara hi is kahani ke sare raj khulte jayeinge......................aisa mujhe lagta hai
shabnam ka bhi salman se koi rishta to nahin........................
rekha ka to clear kar hi diya
sanju aur akram abhi bhi suspicious hain...................ki
wo ankit ke sath hain ya uske khilaf
...........................meri nazar mein
dekhte hain aage
Shikari_golu
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Bilkul sahi kaha bhai........
S ne jo bhi kiya....sahi ya galat.....wo uski life thi....saayad jawani ka josh...pyaar ki nakaami......ammi ki bewafaai....biwi ka khona......beti se judaai....sayad ek sath gussa foot pada....aur Aazaad ko marne nikal gaya.....
Aur fir wo beti bhi gujar gai.....bahut bura laga yaar......kafi jhela hai isne.....
Aur saayad yahi aage kuch dhamaka kare ...dekhte hai.....
NawTDoggy
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@THE_PHENOM bhai
Hats off bro , 4 ur thought & hard work
S ki kahani ko kya joda hai, wah, sach me mazedaar
S se kafi kuch pata chala, rekha mousi nikli, gunde ke chakkar me gai thi to fir saxena ki biwi, ye kya majra hai bhai
Renu kis soch me hai, kya parul aur rony ke liye ya kuch aur
Parul aur rony, pyaar hua koi nhi, but lagta hai ki, kuch to galbad hai ankit, kuch to gadbad hai
Sanju aur akram, lagta hai akram ke mind se kuch chhed-chaad hui hai, aur sanju ka bhi kuch locha laga mere ko, dekhte hai aap kise kaha fit karte ho, filhaal to sanju sabnam ki baja raha hai
Supriya, lagta hai ye ankit ka saccha pyaar thi, par mar gai, par kaise, kya wo ek accident hi tha ya isme bhi kuch funda hoga
Aur sipriya ki chhoti si jhalak ne hi aankhe nam kar di dost, i wish aage jab suppi ki kahani aaye to sad mood na ho, kuch mazedaar ho .ok
S ki mulaqat ankit se kaise hui , kya ye aage pata chalega, ek pura scene, ?
aur mujhe lagta hai ki abhi bhi S picture me aayga, koi raaj aur bhi hoge aur wo ankit ka sath dega , right ?
Baki kua bolu, aapki soch aur likhne ka tareeka, iske liye mere paas to word nhi, bhale hi koi kuch bhi bole, aapki skill mere liye best hai
Ek sex story ko ek hot thriller bana diya, gajab bhai , gajab
Bahut bariya review diya aapne. Isse na kewal write ko protsahan milta hai balki readers ko bhi kafi clarity milti hai. Update ka ek ek point bahut accha se review kiya aapne.
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Sunyy2803
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Bhai
apki story muje achi lagne lagi he
kya kuch nahi tha is story mei
bus kuch Q. Mind me aa gaye to socha
Aapse puch lu
1=Kya abhi bhi akram or sanju ankit ke
dost he kya vo shirf ankit ke kahne pr chal raha he
2=kya kabi richa sudhr sakti he ya uski beti usko sudhar saktihe
3=kya s(salmaan /sourab) ki kahani koi
twist layegi
4=rekha vo us daldal me kese phas gai
5=neelam mami ka to mujje lagta he ki rekha use bhalake le gai he
apki story muje achi lagne lagi he
kya kuch nahi tha is story mei
bus kuch Q. Mind me aa gaye to socha
Aapse puch lu
1=Kya abhi bhi akram or sanju ankit ke
dost he kya vo shirf ankit ke kahne pr chal raha he
2=kya kabi richa sudhr sakti he ya uski beti usko sudhar saktihe
3=kya s(salmaan /sourab) ki kahani koi
twist layegi
4=rekha vo us daldal me kese phas gai
5=neelam mami ka to mujje lagta he ki rekha use bhalake le gai he