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Adultery PYAAR KI BHOOKH ( COMPLETE)

Krish007

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Namaste bhaiyya ji
Pichle update thoda confused tha ki sala ye ankit ke mama ki family to gareeb hai to yeh alka to danveer karn kaise ho gai jo alok ka sara kharcha pani sambhalti thi ab ja ke clear hua
To ate hai iss update pe
Pehli baat lagta hai supi hi ankit ka pyaar to nahi aur aisa to nahi aap inhe bhi poonam ki tarah bich jinda kardo bhai ji aap ka to bharosa nahi kya twist la do ge

Parul kya apni maa ki tarh hi gumrah ho ke apni bhai se naraz ho ke khilaf jaygi kya ak ka hi plan hai jo parul usase dushmani ni ka naatak kare

Sanju ka to maloom nahi lekin ye rajni puri mc hai sali ke samne apne beti ka katil sharad tha fir bhi chup hai yesa kya iski maa chudu thi jo badle ke chakkar me beti ke katil ko jane diya

Richa sali ye to ankit ke dadi ki katil hai fir bhi abhitak zinda kyu hai ye nahi jam raha

S matlab saurabh ya salman jo bhi ho iska past bahot hi kyaa bolu yaaar one side ashiq phir usi apne pyar ke bete ki hipazat karna zindagi tamache khaye
Fir ye shabnam aur salman kya connection yeh to aap hi jane
Par ye point mere dhyan me aaya nahi ki ak ko S saurabh par kaise dought hua ye baat abhi tak clear nahi hui

Alka ki sauteli maa ki shadi karane me koi harichandra ka relative ne force kiya tha damodar ye naam pehle bhi aa chuka hai par kaha yeh damodar ek hi hai ya alag

Raksha ka pata shabnam ko kaise chala aur kuch update pahle raksha ne phone pe kya bataya tha jo abhi tak clear nahi hua

Damini ke beti yo ka intro me naam hai lekin abtak unka role samne nahi aaya
Kya aage jake koi kand karegi

Neelam to thik ak ki mami hai jo rekha ki nazar me aayi payal kaise fasi issme
Rekha jiske sath chudi wo kounsa mama hai ak ka bada ya chota

Abhi kuch episode pahle sujata ne kisi ke sath deal ki thi uski wapsi kab hogi koi property ke details wagaira ki batchit hui thi
Aur sujata aazad se milne ke baad kuch log aazad ko utha ke le gaye wo koun the

Manu kiska ilaz kara rahi hai jo abhitak thik nahi hua

Mere khayal se alka ka pura raz abhitak khula nahi uska katil abhi bhi sabke bich chupa baitha hai

Ali ki family itni aasani se jal kar nahi mar sakti koi suspens chuata ho to bataiye
Rony ka wahi haal na ho jo dharmesh hua tha

Ye ragini kaha gayab hai ye interesting entry ho sakti hai jo abhi tak parde ke piche hai
Jo kabhi aaakash ko pana chahati thi

Shabnam jo bitch bitch me bolti hai ki wo aakash ka pana chahti ab sala ye kab se aakash ko chahti thi
Abhi filhal itna hi fir dimag daudat hu kuch yaad aaya to aapse puchunga
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Ankitshrivastava

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Namaste bhaiyya ji
Pichle update thoda confused tha ki sala ye ankit ke mama ki family to gareeb hai to yeh alka to danveer karn kaise ho gai jo alok ka sara kharcha pani sambhalti thi ab ja ke clear hua
To ate hai iss update pe
Pehli baat lagta hai supi hi ankit ka pyaar to nahi aur aisa to nahi aap inhe bhi poonam ki tarah bich jinda kardo bhai ji aap ka to bharosa nahi kya twist la do ge

Parul kya apni maa ki tarh hi gumrah ho ke apni bhai se naraz ho ke khilaf jaygi kya ak ka hi plan hai jo parul usase dushmani ni ka naatak kare

Sanju ka to maloom nahi lekin ye rajni puri mc hai sali ke samne apne beti ka katil sharad tha fir bhi chup hai yesa kya iski maa chudu thi jo badle ke chakkar me beti ke katil ko jane diya

Richa sali ye to ankit ke dadi ki katil hai fir bhi abhitak zinda kyu hai ye nahi jam raha

S matlab saurabh ya salman jo bhi ho iska past bahot hi kyaa bolu yaaar one side ashiq phir usi apne pyar ke bete ki hipazat karna zindagi tamache khaye
Fir ye shabnam aur salman kya connection yeh to aap hi jane
Par ye point mere dhyan me aaya nahi ki ak ko S saurabh par kaise dought hua ye baat abhi tak clear nahi hui

Alka ki sauteli maa ki shadi karane me koi harichandra ka relative ne force kiya tha damodar ye naam pehle bhi aa chuka hai par kaha yeh damodar ek hi hai ya alag

Raksha ka pata shabnam ko kaise chala aur kuch update pahle raksha ne phone pe kya bataya tha jo abhi tak clear nahi hua

Damini ke beti yo ka intro me naam hai lekin abtak unka role samne nahi aaya
Kya aage jake koi kand karegi

Neelam to thik ak ki mami hai jo rekha ki nazar me aayi payal kaise fasi issme
Rekha jiske sath chudi wo kounsa mama hai ak ka bada ya chota

Abhi kuch episode pahle sujata ne kisi ke sath deal ki thi uski wapsi kab hogi koi property ke details wagaira ki batchit hui thi
Aur sujata aazad se milne ke baad kuch log aazad ko utha ke le gaye wo koun the

Manu kiska ilaz kara rahi hai jo abhitak thik nahi hua

Mere khayal se alka ka pura raz abhitak khula nahi uska katil abhi bhi sabke bich chupa baitha hai

Ali ki family itni aasani se jal kar nahi mar sakti koi suspens chuata ho to bataiye
Rony ka wahi haal na ho jo dharmesh hua tha

Ye ragini kaha gayab hai ye interesting entry ho sakti hai jo abhi tak parde ke piche hai
Jo kabhi aaakash ko pana chahati thi

Shabnam jo bitch bitch me bolti hai ki wo aakash ka pana chahti ab sala ye kab se aakash ko chahti thi
Abhi filhal itna hi fir dimag daudat hu kuch yaad aaya to aapse puchunga
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Sabse pahle....:applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:

Bhai...readers ke aise review nd qus dekh kar dil khush ho jata hai.....good one.....

Well...aapko mama ki gareebi ka to to clear ho gaya...accha hai.....

1 - suppi ja chuki hai...wo jinda nhi....koi twist nhi hoga

2 - parul ke baare me abhi kuch nhi....uske liye intzaar karna hoga...Ok

3 - rajni , sanju, akram, sabnam....inke beech deal hui hai.,...isliye rajni chup hai....aur aage clear hoga ki wo itni shant kyo thi.....ok

4- richa....iski jaan sirf riya ki wajah se bachi thi....par ye apni limit ek baar fir se cross kar gai...ab saja pakki....par dega koun ye waqt batayga.....ok

5 - S ki kahani me abhi kafi kuch baki hai...uska ankit se milna, us par doubt hona...sab kuch detaill me aayga....abhi ankit bhaag gaya tha...isliye baat adhuri rah gai...ok

6 - Damodar , pahle wala alag hoga...waise mujhe yaad nhi aaya...yaad aaye to batana....but ye damodar alag hai....ok

7 - raksha ne us waqt ye bataya tha ki poonam ragini ke paas nhi gai....bas...wo likh nhi paya...aage dikha duga..ok...aur sabnam ko kaise pata chala...ye scene aage aayga....raksha akeli nhi....uske sath bhi koi hai....ok

8 - damini ki beti....saayad aap bhool gaye ki maine bola tha ki abbi damini ka roll baki hai....wo sab aayge.....wait kare thoda.....

9 -
Ab mama, rekha, payal aur neelam....inka ek sath clear hoga....scene likhna suru ho chuka hai inka....or usi scene me aapko sujata ki deal wala bhi mil jayga....gour karna thoda....ok

10 - Aazaad kaha hai..kis ke paas...iska andaza to ho jana chahiye tha...khair....aage aazaad se mulaqat hogi to sab samjh jaoge....

11- manu ke sath jo mareej hai...wo koma se recover kar raha hai.....waise manu bada dhamaka karegi....intzaar kare....

12 - ragini ka jyada bada roll nhi tha..but maine kuch socha hai uske liye....dekhte hai ki dimaag kaha tak jata hai....ok...wo aaygi....kuch special le kar....

13 - ali ki family sach me jali thi....isme koi raaj nhi...ok

Alka - iski kahani ke sath saayad bahut kuch juda hai....kai sawaalo ke jawaab iski jahani se clear ho jayge....mama ki family, nafrat, dushmani, mantri, manu, sabnam, rekha aur DJ ....ye sab alka ki kahani se hi samjh aayge....ok

Sabnam...chalo ye bata deta hu ki sabnam ne akash ko kaha dekha....college me....baki wo khud bataygi...ki wo aisi kyo hai....aur yaha kaise hai...ok

Agar koi sawaal miss kiya ho to batana....aur aise hi sawaal karte rahe...taki main kuch mis na kar saku....ok bhai....

Thanks buddy.......
 

Sunyy2803

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Sabse pahle....:applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:

Bhai...readers ke aise review nd qus dekh kar dil khush ho jata hai.....good one.....

Well...aapko mama ki gareebi ka to to clear ho gaya...accha hai.....

1 - suppi ja chuki hai...wo jinda nhi....koi twist nhi hoga

2 - parul ke baare me abhi kuch nhi....uske liye intzaar karna hoga...Ok

3 - rajni , sanju, akram, sabnam....inke beech deal hui hai.,...isliye rajni chup hai....aur aage clear hoga ki wo itni shant kyo thi.....ok

4- richa....iski jaan sirf riya ki wajah se bachi thi....par ye apni limit ek baar fir se cross kar gai...ab saja pakki....par dega koun ye waqt batayga.....ok

5 - S ki kahani me abhi kafi kuch baki hai...uska ankit se milna, us par doubt hona...sab kuch detaill me aayga....abhi ankit bhaag gaya tha...isliye baat adhuri rah gai...ok

6 - Damodar , pahle wala alag hoga...waise mujhe yaad nhi aaya...yaad aaye to batana....but ye damodar alag hai....ok

7 - raksha ne us waqt ye bataya tha ki poonam ragini ke paas nhi gai....bas...wo likh nhi paya...aage dikha duga..ok...aur sabnam ko kaise pata chala...ye scene aage aayga....raksha akeli nhi....uske sath bhi koi hai....ok

8 - damini ki beti....saayad aap bhool gaye ki maine bola tha ki abbi damini ka roll baki hai....wo sab aayge.....wait kare thoda.....

9 -
Ab mama, rekha, payal aur neelam....inka ek sath clear hoga....scene likhna suru ho chuka hai inka....or usi scene me aapko sujata ki deal wala bhi mil jayga....gour karna thoda....ok

10 - Aazaad kaha hai..kis ke paas...iska andaza to ho jana chahiye tha...khair....aage aazaad se mulaqat hogi to sab samjh jaoge....

11- manu ke sath jo mareej hai...wo koma se recover kar raha hai.....waise manu bada dhamaka karegi....intzaar kare....

12 - ragini ka jyada bada roll nhi tha..but maine kuch socha hai uske liye....dekhte hai ki dimaag kaha tak jata hai....ok...wo aaygi....kuch special le kar....

13 - ali ki family sach me jali thi....isme koi raaj nhi...ok

Alka - iski kahani ke sath saayad bahut kuch juda hai....kai sawaalo ke jawaab iski jahani se clear ho jayge....mama ki family, nafrat, dushmani, mantri, manu, sabnam, rekha aur DJ ....ye sab alka ki kahani se hi samjh aayge....ok

Sabnam...chalo ye bata deta hu ki sabnam ne akash ko kaha dekha....college me....baki wo khud bataygi...ki wo aisi kyo hai....aur yaha kaise hai...ok

Agar koi sawaal miss kiya ho to batana....aur aise hi sawaal karte rahe...taki main kuch mis na kar saku....ok bhai....

Thanks buddy......


Iska matlab manu ke sath jo saks koma me he kya vo ankit ki maa hee. Akla he kya vo
Bhai...ye kya tha...bataoge....

Thanks buddy........

muje nahi pata ke ye kya he but Ashi reply ho gaya bhai vo sirf khali post he
 

NikkuatXF

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Sabse Pahle Ankit ko thanks, ki Readers ke comments aur querries ko achchhe se Padte hai hai reply karte hai. Itni Lambi Kahani likhna sirf ek achchha ewriter hi kar sakta hai. Inki apni life mein Koi badi ghatna huyee, jiske karan Inko kafee lambe samay ke liye Kahani lekhen se door rahanaa Pada...

Ab Restart Karne ke baad kafi mehnat se kikh rahen hai...

Yahan main Akram ke baare mein kuchh kahana chahta hoon... Ab tak story ke hisaab se Ankit ki Mout ki khabar sunkar bhee jo ankit ke katilo kee khoj mein laga, Wo Ankit ke khilaf nahi ja sakta. Jabki wo janta hai ki Ankit ko pata hai ki Sabnam ko Kade ke kaaran MH& mein huye Poonam aur Sonu ke papa ka murder sarad ne kiya hai. Sabnam ke character par sabse pahle shak hone par usne Ankit se Help maangi... thyee...
Jab use Wasim (Sarfraj) aur Anwar ke story Pata chali aur usne wasim ko maar diya, Ankit ne hi use use sab kuchh bhool jane ke liye samjhaya. Sadiya ki lash MH7 mein milne par aur use ek accident batane par koi reaction na dene se, aur sirf sabnam se dhokhe mein sex kar lene se, uske mam mein sabnam ka raz jaanane ki ichchha lagtee hai.. Jo Akram ki samajh se uske liye kaam karte huye pata chal saktee hai. use shak ho gaya hai ki kisi aur aurat ne Shabnam ki jagah li huyee hai...

Ab aage Ankit ji batayege ki Akram gaddar ho gaya hai ya kisi plan ke saath Ankit ke khilaf hone ka natak kar raha hai...

Dekhte hai Ankit ki magical lekhni kya likhtee hai ?

Waiting for Updates....
 

Ankitshrivastava

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Jo bhi apne socha hoga vo bohot hi acha Hoga johi ke cass me abhi to bohot kuch hone vala he esa lagta hei

Ji bhai.....abhi to bahut kuch baki hai....par meri kosis yahi rahegi ki har ek character ko justify kar saku....dekhte hai kosis kitni kaamyaab hogi....

Iska matlab manu ke sath jo saks koma me he kya vo ankit ki maa hee. Akla he kya vo

Ab ye kaise batau ki koun hai......but jo bhi hoga.....wo khas hoga....ok


Sunny bhai.....aapne saayad quote ke andar hi reply likh diya tha...isliye dikha nhi.....

abhi expend kar ke dekha to pata chala.....

Aage thoda dekh kar bhai....ok

Thanks buddy.......
 
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Ankitshrivastava

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Sabse Pahle Ankit ko thanks, ki Readers ke comments aur querries ko achchhe se Padte hai hai reply karte hai. Itni Lambi Kahani likhna sirf ek achchha ewriter hi kar sakta hai. Inki apni life mein Koi badi ghatna huyee, jiske karan Inko kafee lambe samay ke liye Kahani lekhen se door rahanaa Pada...

Ab Restart Karne ke baad kafi mehnat se kikh rahen hai...

Yahan main Akram ke baare mein kuchh kahana chahta hoon... Ab tak story ke hisaab se Ankit ki Mout ki khabar sunkar bhee jo ankit ke katilo kee khoj mein laga, Wo Ankit ke khilaf nahi ja sakta. Jabki wo janta hai ki Ankit ko pata hai ki Sabnam ko Kade ke kaaran MH& mein huye Poonam aur Sonu ke papa ka murder sarad ne kiya hai. Sabnam ke character par sabse pahle shak hone par usne Ankit se Help maangi... thyee...
Jab use Wasim (Sarfraj) aur Anwar ke story Pata chali aur usne wasim ko maar diya, Ankit ne hi use use sab kuchh bhool jane ke liye samjhaya. Sadiya ki lash MH7 mein milne par aur use ek accident batane par koi reaction na dene se, aur sirf sabnam se dhokhe mein sex kar lene se, uske mam mein sabnam ka raz jaanane ki ichchha lagtee hai.. Jo Akram ki samajh se uske liye kaam karte huye pata chal saktee hai. use shak ho gaya hai ki kisi aur aurat ne Shabnam ki jagah li huyee hai...

Ab aage Ankit ji batayege ki Akram gaddar ho gaya hai ya kisi plan ke saath Ankit ke khilaf hone ka natak kar raha hai...

Dekhte hai Ankit ki magical lekhni kya likhtee hai ?

Waiting for Updates....

Thanks bhai...jo hua wo kafi dardnaak tha...but ab sab theek hai....

Aur ye to har ek writter ki duty hoti hai ki readers ke doubt clear kare ya unhe bataaye ki unke qus ka ans kab milega......milega ki nhi....

Aur agar aapne XP par meri story dekhi ho to aapko pata hoga ki mere liye readers hamesha khas rahe hai....

kyoki main yahi manta hu ki readers ke bina writter ki koi value nhi.....bhale hi wo koi bhi writter ho....aur jo aisa samjhte hai ki wo readers se better hai to unhe main bewakoof hi kah sakta hu....

isliye main hamesha readers ke view ka perfact ans dene ka try karta hu....chahe wo accha bole ya bura....kyoki buraai na sun saku to writter kis kaam ka.....right


Ab aate hai aapke sawaal par......

Aapne jo bhi akram ke baare me bola wo sab sahi hsi...akram ko ankit par pura bharosha tha.....par filhaal wo ankit ke khilaaf hai....

kyo....?????

To abhi itna hi batauga ki akram puri bawadaari ke sath apni mom sabnam ke sath hai...aur wo ankit ko apna dushman samjh raha hai....

Aisa kyo aur kaise hua, aur ye sab kaise theek hoga.....theek hoga bhi ya nhi...ya koi marega.....ye aapko aage hi bata pauga....

Filhaal akram to ankit ki jaan lena chahta hai....jald se jald....ok

Baki maine jo socha hai....i hope aapko pasand aayga...par thoda intzaar karna hoga....ok

Thanks buddy.......
 
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Ankitshrivastava

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Bhai apki story mai itne twist hote hai kuch sochna bekar hai bus wait kro aur mazze lo ki kb kya ho jaye

Hahaha.....bhai twist hi to story ki jaan hai na......

Well..twist kitne bhi aaye....but i promis....aapke saare doubt clear kar ke hi story end hogi..,...ok

Tab tak maza le...aur dimaag ko naye twist ke liye taiyaar kar le.....??

Thanks buddy.......
 
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