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Bahut sundar samapan.... Pyar ki bhookh... Ka
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Bahut sundar samapan.... Pyar ki bhookh... Ka
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Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
bahad lambe antraal ke baad antata
ish khubsurat kathanaq ko purantya adbhut dhang se samapan kiya gaya.
aakhri update bahut hi sarahaniye hai mitr.
ummid karta hu dost aap ek aur nayi kahani lekar aayen jald hi.
aapki lekhni sach me kamaal ki hai mitr.
सर्वोत्तम समापन किया है आपने l दिल की गहराई से नमन![]()
Bhai love story ya thrill fantasyFantasy.....ek husband-wife ki fantacy chalegi kya ?
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Bhai Maine eke story Ka Bola tha apko Yaad hai kyaAage ka abhi kuch plan nhi....pahle ek kaam khatm karna hai...fir aata hu...ek story hai mind me...use lauga...ok...
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Sabse pahle to sorry ki koi baat nhi.....aapne story pasand ki...itna hi bahut hai....baki comment ke liye koi nhi...
Ab aapki baat....to maine ek flashback likha tha...jisme ankit ka pahle ka sction scene tha aur luch last me bhi....
Par for dimaag ne bola ki action se best hai planning..kyoki DJ ke kabje me apne kai log the....unhe safe kar ke hi action ho pata na....
Aur unhe safe karne ka tareeka magnate chuna..to jyada action ki jaroorat nhi hui...aur fir bomb bhi the na...to rah gaya....
Well...next story me aapki khwahis sabse pahle puri hogi dost...ok...
Aur aapki story ke liye best of luck.....aap likhte rahe....time milne par mulaqat jaroor hogi....pakka....ok..
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Bhai love story ya thrill fantasy
Bhai Maine eke story Ka Bola tha apko Yaad hai kya