Ajay chauhan
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Ankit bhai please iske baad ek incest story banana pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
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Bhai apki story bahut dumdar hai. Kisine kaha ki apko iske liye award milna chahiye wo bhi bilkul sahi kaha hai. Bus end accha nahi laga. Ankit ko marna ant me wo bhi juhi ke haatho wo sahi nahi laga. Wo bhi itne jaldi jabki wo apni family ke sath sahi se wakt bhi nahi bita paya. Isme apne raksha and juhi ke roll ke sath galat kiya ankit ko mar kar kyunki ankit ki maut unke liye kisi saza se kam nahi hai.
Is story ke kuch point highlight karna chahunga.
1) jab ankit sanju ke ghar jata hai to wo kisi ko baat karte sunta hai uske khilaf. Wo kya sunta hai aur kuan bate kar raha tha wo bataya nahi aur sunne ke bad bhi befikar rehta hai rajni n comp. Ke sath
2) bus me ankit aur jiya ko kaun pakad ta sex karte wo nahi bataya gaya jabki baat me ankit sabke sath sex karta hai.
3) start Raksha ankit se naraz kis baat pan hoti hai aur achanak se ek dam se use pyaar karne lagti hai wo bhi bataya gaya nhi
4) najma ka kya hua aur jiya juhi kaise chuti wo bhi bataya nahi gya.
5) sumi wasim ko msg kar ke bulati hai aarti ke ghar par us time mobile phone nahi hote the.
6) akram shabnam aur sadiyan ko wasib ka sach bta deta hai kyunki use unki udasi nahi dekhi jati lekin jiya aur ruhi ko nahi jabki sabse zyada dukh juhi ko hota hai. Yhi parul aur anu ke sath bhi hau hai
7) isme lagbhag sabhi aurto ko randi kyun portrait kiya gaya. Jaha sabhi kam nikalne ke liye sex ka hi sahara leti hai jabki unke pas itna paisa to hota hi hai ki wo gunde kharid sake. Richa aur rajni ke to bahut sare sex scen bina matlab ke hai. jab bhi aurato ko unki betiya sex karte pakad leti hai to ek bhi ladki sawal nahi puchti apni ma se balki unka sath deti hai ye ek chij common hai story me.
Koi dumdar female lead nhi.
8) rajni pramod vinod ka character samjh nhi aya bar bar ache bure dikhai diye.
9) jab boss ki entry hoti hai tab bahut sare chote suspens aye wo kab explain kiye gye wo pata nhi chala. Deepa aur vinod ke marne ka scen thik we explain nhi kiya gaya.
10) school jane wali 14 15 saal ki anu parul DJ ke sath milkar itna planning ploting kaise kar sakti.
11) ankit ke pass dj ke mms hote hai to wo blackmail kyun nahi karta jaise manu ko kiya.
12) ankit sonam aur manu ko propose karta hai pasand karta hai lekin age jake ye dono character side me chale jate hai. Supriya ka bhi chota scene dikhaya gya.
13) ankit ko moksh kaise mil gaya jabki wo apna kam nikal ne ke liye aurto ko pata kar mms banata aur unke husband ko blackmail karta. Varma couple usi ki wajah se mare. Aur soni ki wife ko sabak sikhane ke liye khud sex karta hai and sanju and raftar ko karna bol deta hai.
14) ankit ko bahut si story ka sach azad se paata lagana hota hai lekin wo bhi nhi dikhaya gaya.
15) iska alternative end hota to wo kya hota. Ankit kisse shadi karta
And last me Thanks for the great story.
I appreciate you dedication and story writing skills.
Is story ke kuch point highlight karna chahunga.
1) jab ankit sanju ke ghar jata hai to wo kisi ko baat karte sunta hai uske khilaf. Wo kya sunta hai aur kuan bate kar raha tha wo bataya nahi aur sunne ke bad bhi befikar rehta hai rajni n comp. Ke sath
2) bus me ankit aur jiya ko kaun pakad ta sex karte wo nahi bataya gaya jabki baat me ankit sabke sath sex karta hai.
3) start Raksha ankit se naraz kis baat pan hoti hai aur achanak se ek dam se use pyaar karne lagti hai wo bhi bataya gaya nhi
4) najma ka kya hua aur jiya juhi kaise chuti wo bhi bataya nahi gya.
5) sumi wasim ko msg kar ke bulati hai aarti ke ghar par us time mobile phone nahi hote the.
6) akram shabnam aur sadiyan ko wasib ka sach bta deta hai kyunki use unki udasi nahi dekhi jati lekin jiya aur ruhi ko nahi jabki sabse zyada dukh juhi ko hota hai. Yhi parul aur anu ke sath bhi hau hai
7) isme lagbhag sabhi aurto ko randi kyun portrait kiya gaya. Jaha sabhi kam nikalne ke liye sex ka hi sahara leti hai jabki unke pas itna paisa to hota hi hai ki wo gunde kharid sake. Richa aur rajni ke to bahut sare sex scen bina matlab ke hai. jab bhi aurato ko unki betiya sex karte pakad leti hai to ek bhi ladki sawal nahi puchti apni ma se balki unka sath deti hai ye ek chij common hai story me.
Koi dumdar female lead nhi.
8) rajni pramod vinod ka character samjh nhi aya bar bar ache bure dikhai diye.
9) jab boss ki entry hoti hai tab bahut sare chote suspens aye wo kab explain kiye gye wo pata nhi chala. Deepa aur vinod ke marne ka scen thik we explain nhi kiya gaya.
10) school jane wali 14 15 saal ki anu parul DJ ke sath milkar itna planning ploting kaise kar sakti.
11) ankit ke pass dj ke mms hote hai to wo blackmail kyun nahi karta jaise manu ko kiya.
12) ankit sonam aur manu ko propose karta hai pasand karta hai lekin age jake ye dono character side me chale jate hai. Supriya ka bhi chota scene dikhaya gya.
13) ankit ko moksh kaise mil gaya jabki wo apna kam nikal ne ke liye aurto ko pata kar mms banata aur unke husband ko blackmail karta. Varma couple usi ki wajah se mare. Aur soni ki wife ko sabak sikhane ke liye khud sex karta hai and sanju and raftar ko karna bol deta hai.
14) ankit ko bahut si story ka sach azad se paata lagana hota hai lekin wo bhi nhi dikhaya gaya.
15) iska alternative end hota to wo kya hota. Ankit kisse shadi karta
And last me Thanks for the great story.
I appreciate you dedication and story writing skills.
Shikari_golu
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Dost....aapke sawaalon ke jawaab to ankit hi de payga....jab bhi wo xf par aayga....par main kuch janta hu...jo aapko batana chahuga...
Ye story ankit ne XP par start ki thi...aur sirf ek sex story ki tarah start ki thi....jisme sex hi sex main tha...aur fir kisi ke kahne par usme thoda suspence dala...i mean ek story banane ki kosis ki....
lekin fir XP band ho gai...aur story latak gai....aur fir jab 3 saal baad ankit ne xf par aa kar story finish karne ka socha...to story badalne lagi...aur pichhli story ka bahut kuch rah gaya....
Uski xp par jo story thi...wo yaha saayad 281-282 updates me copy-paste ho gai thi....uske baad ka content naya hai....isliye bahut kuch miss ho gaya...aur update 283 se jo aap padhege...usme saayad jyada kuch miss nhi hua....
Aur ek baat aapne sahi kahi...ki ankit ko moksh kaise mila....to mere hisaab se usne jo kiya...usi ki wajah se use jawani me mout mili...isme moksh kaha mila...bechara apni family ke sath hi nhi rah paya....
Aap soch rahe hoge ki maine ye sab kyo bola...to aapko bata du ki main aur ankit real life frnd hai bachpan se........aur us waqt hum room mate v the jab ankit ne XP par likhna start kiya tha....aur haa...usi ko dekh kar maine likhna seekha aur xp par likha aur ab yaha bhi....
Aap agar xp par ye story padhte...to saayad aapke paas itne swaal nhi hote.....fir bhi....i really appriciate ur reading skill....aise readers kam hi milte hai....jo dil se aur bareeki se sab read kare.....
Baki ankit ko boluga...ki wo aa kar aapke doubts clear kare....ok...
Bhai Ankit Bhai koi new story likhne waale hai kya bahot din ho Gaye isliye pucha
Shikari_golu
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Saayad kuch likhna start to kiya tha....but fir lockdown ki wajah se ghar me hi hai ...to saayad hold par dala hai....
Ek suspence-thriller hai...bas itna pata hai....but yaha kab layga....ye nhi janta...
Bro or koi jagah bhi likhte hain kya Ankit bhai
Shikari_golu
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Nhi...but uska ek novel publish hone wala hai...saayad diwali tak....aur usme kya likha hai...ye to usne mujhe v nhi bataya.....dekhte hai kaisa rahega....
Konsi jagah novel hai kiss topic pe hai bro
Shikari_golu
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Wo novel publish karane ke mood me hai dost....thriller hi hoga....uska best topic...