Adultery PYAAR KI BHOOKH ( COMPLETE)

[Ankitshrivastava]

Mujhe to malum hai... Lekin other readers ki tasalli ke liye koi sawal to karna banta hai

Haha.....good bhai....?

well...sawaal to aur bhi the....DJ and atul....hai ki nhi....?

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Bhai mai new reader huu is story ka. 53 tak para . But mine laga app ka hero Ak bhat weak hai. Koi problem slove karne mei bhat der lagata hai. Sab kamm bad mai dekunga kahe kar chor deta hai. Hero thora bhot strong hona chahie. Problem solve karne mai or apni Dusan ko marne mai.

Yei sala AK hero nahi zero hai. Chtiya hai. Avi tak ek vi problem slove nahii kar pai. Gandu. Tharki sala. Keya stori ka hero aisa hota hai. Confuses sala.

Itna gussa...hmm...i think aapko atleast 100 updates tak jana chahiye....tab real story start hogi....

Aur ek baat.....jo main kai baar bol chuka hu...xossip par bhi aur yaha bhi...aur ye baat aap old readers se confirm bhi kar sakte hai....

But aap new hai...to fir se bata deta hu.....

Actually ye story jab start ki gai thi...tab ek sex story hi thi....full-on sex....ek paise wala ladka... aiyaashi karne wala.....

kyoki main yahi likhna chahta tha...ek full-on sex story..bas....

But fir mujhe kuch acche readers mile....unhone bola ki story ko koi sense do....love, thrill etc....

ab love, word se to mujhe jyada intrest hai nhi...mujhe to suspence pasand hai...to maine usi par kaam kiya......

Fir maine saare characters ko jodte huye kuch socha aur ek sex story ko suspence wali story me change kiya....

Isliye aapko starting se yahi lagega ki ankit ek aiyaash, sex ka bhookha insaan hai...iske alawa kuch nhi karta......

To ya to aap aage bade...fir bataaye....ya fir dusre readers ke discus kar le...then...as ur wish.....Kyoki main puri story to bata nhi sakta na.....

Aur ha....ek 18 saal ka ladka achanak se hero nhi ban sakta...infact koi bhi hero paida nhi hota....

Kisi bhi insaan ko hero banata hai waqt aur haalaat......

Abhi aap jaha tak read kiye hoge.....waha to ankit ko apna khud ka sach bhi pata nhi hoga.....ki wo koun hai..uski family me koun hai......isliye bol raha hu ki thoda sabr kare....

Baki story ke baare me aapki jo bhi raay ho....uska main bura nhi manuga....aap bindaas bata sakte ho....

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Ankit bhai main aapse ek baat jaanana chahata hu ki ye jo mohan mara gaya accident me iska murder kisne kiya abhitak pata nahi chala
Jaise ki mohan hi wo shaks hai jisne ak ko uska past jana ne me aur dushmono ka pata karne me help ki
Ak ne kya iss baat ko gaur kiya ki nahi
Abhi tak jitne dushman mare gaye unhone iss baat ka zikr nahi kiya ki inhone mohan ko mara
Aur ye nilam mami kaha se paida hui
Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai abhitak kisi mama mami zikr nahi hua aur to aur abhi alka ki family ko shayad ak janta bhi nahi hai to ye mami kaha se paida hui
Jo do aurat shabnam k sath hai ek richa hai to dusri damini to nahi kyu ki shabnam ne kaha tha tum wohi kaam karo jo hamesha karti matlab chudai
Ab to aise sirf ye hi aurta baki hai damini ya rajni

Kya baat hai bhai...aaj 1st time ye qus dekh kar mujhe bahut khushi hui...

Maine kai baar socha ki koi to mohan ka puche...but saayad use bhool gaye the....

Well...aapne pucha hai to abhi itna hi boluga ki uska katil bhi saamne aayga.....aur uske sath aur bhi kuch aayga.....but abhi nhi....isme kafi time lagega....ok

Aur rahi baat mami ki.....to uske liye aap 1st page par introduction dekh le....

Ankit apne mama-mami ke paas bahut raha hai....baki ka sab kuch aage pata chalega.....

Sabnam ke sath richa ke alawa koun si aourat hai....ye raaj bhi jyada nhi chalne wala...6-7 updates me dekh lena.....

waise aisi aourton me kamini bhi to ho sakti hai....ya fir sumi...hai ki nhi....

Thanks buddy........

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

superb update
sabnam akram ko sadiya ki mout ki jach se alag karna chahti hai.
isliye akram ko apne jism se uska dhyan bhatkna chahti hai.
lagbhag vo kamyaab ho gayi.
rekha ke sath payal ko dekhkar ankit shock ho gaya.
lakin ye neelam mami kon hai.
isse pahle iska jikr kahi par nhi aaya.
atul ankit ko khoj raha hai.
ab ye dj kon hai. uska ankit se kya dushmani hai.

Sabnam , akram ko apni taraf milane ki taiyaari me hai bhai....dekhte hai aage kya karegi.....

Mami ka chapter ab aaya hai...waise mama ke ghar bahut raha hai ak...but ab nbi jata...kyo...??

Ye sab aage aayga....aap 1st page ka intoduction check kare....samjh jayge....

DJ aur ek atul...aur wo mantri bhi....in teeno ka tagda connection hai ankit se....aage dekhiyega....ok

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Kya likhte ho bhai.mazaa aa jata hsi padh ke.. Abhi page 67 par hu.. 2 3 din mai pura khtam kr dunga

Thanks dost....bas hum to kosis karte hai ki kuch mazedaar likh saku.....baki accha ya bura to aap readers hi decide karte hai.....

Sab readers par hai....kisi ko pasand aata hai...kisi ko nhi.....hai ki nhi....

Chaliye....read karte huye batana jaroor....accha ya bura....jo bhi ho...ok


Thanks buddy......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Bhai 1 baat aapki bahot achhi lagi ki aap sabko reply dete ho aur sab k suggestions ko bhi accept karte ho

Are bhai....aap sab ki readers ki wajah se to hum writters hai.....

ab reader ko respect nhi dege to writter kis kaam ke....

waise bhi hum readers ke liye hi likh rahe hai...baki koi award to milne nhi wala....right......

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Ankitshrivastava]

Bhai aapne kitne update read kiye abhi tak......suruwato mode par lagte ho....

well...aage dekhiye....soch badal jaygi.....baki aapki marji.....

Dont mind....main isliye bol raha ki main is story ko Xossip se read kar raha hu....aur ye mefi fav hai....lekin sirf sex scene padh kar nhi.....aahe read kare....fir batana.....

Waise aap aur readers se puch sakte hai ki kya ankit hero banne layak hai ki nhi....ok

Chhod na dost...har reader ki apni pasand hai....

jaroori nhi jo ek ko pasand ho...wo dusre ko bhi ho...so leave it....ok

Thanks buddy.......

 

[Manishac]

Itna gussa...hmm...i think aapko atleast 100 updates tak jana chahiye....tab real story start hogi....

Aur ek baat.....jo main kai baar bol chuka hu...xossip par bhi aur yaha bhi...aur ye baat aap old readers se confirm bhi kar sakte hai....

But aap new hai...to fir se bata deta hu.....

Actually ye story jab start ki gai thi...tab ek sex story hi thi....full-on sex....ek paise wala ladka... aiyaashi karne wala.....

kyoki main yahi likhna chahta tha...ek full-on sex story..bas....

But fir mujhe kuch acche readers mile....unhone bola ki story ko koi sense do....love, thrill etc....

ab love, word se to mujhe jyada intrest hai nhi...mujhe to suspence pasand hai...to maine usi par kaam kiya......

Fir maine saare characters ko jodte huye kuch socha aur ek sex story ko suspence wali story me change kiya....

Isliye aapko starting se yahi lagega ki ankit ek aiyaash, sex ka bhookha insaan hai...iske alawa kuch nhi karta......

To ya to aap aage bade...fir bataaye....ya fir dusre readers ke discus kar le...then...as ur wish.....Kyoki main puri story to bata nhi sakta na.....

Aur ha....ek 18 saal ka ladka achanak se hero nhi ban sakta...infact koi bhi hero paida nhi hota....

Kisi bhi insaan ko hero banata hai waqt aur haalaat......

Abhi aap jaha tak read kiye hoge.....waha to ankit ko apna khud ka sach bhi pata nhi hoga.....ki wo koun hai..uski family me koun hai......isliye bol raha hu ki thoda sabr kare....

Baki story ke baare me aapki jo bhi raay ho....uska main bura nhi manuga....aap bindaas bata sakte ho....

Thanks buddy.......

Whatever my thinking. I always respect your hard work are putting in writing this story. Ok everything now clear to me.

 

[Krish007]

Kya baat hai bhai...aaj 1st time ye qus dekh kar mujhe bahut khushi hui...

Maine kai baar socha ki koi to mohan ka puche...but saayad use bhool gaye the....

Well...aapne pucha hai to abhi itna hi boluga ki uska katil bhi saamne aayga.....aur uske sath aur bhi kuch aayga.....but abhi nhi....isme kafi time lagega....ok

Aur rahi baat mami ki.....to uske liye aap 1st page par introduction dekh le....

Ankit apne mama-mami ke paas bahut raha hai....baki ka sab kuch aage pata chalega.....

Sabnam ke sath richa ke alawa koun si aourat hai....ye raaj bhi jyada nhi chalne wala...6-7 updates me dekh lena.....

waise aisi aourton me kamini bhi to ho sakti hai....ya fir sumi...hai ki nhi....

Thanks buddy........

Ha bhai aapne index me likha hai
Wo baat darsal ye hai ki maine is story ka index xp pe patha tha tab se Sare character dimagh me fit hai
Jaha tak maine padha alka ki family to alka aur akash se naraz hai na jo alka aur aakash ne bhag kar shadi ki thi ali hi akela tha jisne inki madat ki thi aur to aur abhi kuch din pahle ak ne zuti mout ki khabar failaye ki wo mara hai
Tab bhi mama ki family ya mousi ki family nahi ayi aur aap ne first page likha hai ki ak apni har chutti me mama mami ke pass jata hai to inki sulah kab hui

 

[Ghostrider20]

Sexy,erotic n suspence bhara story hai....
Mun ek baat puchna hai bro...apne abhitak mohan ke baremai kuch nehi likha aur manu wo to jaise gayeb hi hogayi ho...