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Romance Pyaar Kii Asi Bhi Ek Kahaani ( Revenge + Love )

Vihaan_arya

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Pyaar Kii Asi Bhi Ek Kahaani

Ye meri iss platform per pheli story h. ye complete story meri imagination per depend krti hain. Agar likhne main koi galti ho tho maaf karna. Aur agar ye kisi aur story se match hoti hai tho sirf ek ittefaq hoga.

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Vihaan_arya

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Update 1:
Ek Alishan bangle ke ek room ko koi leta hua h jiske muh pe oxygen mask, hath main drips aur paas main bhut si machines h aur sath mai doctor aur nurses bhi baithe hai, unlogo ke paas ek ladki bhi kadhi h jiske face pe tension saaf saaf dikh rahi h.

Room ke bhar bhut se garuds khade h bangle ki chat pe do snipers, bangle ka compound bhi gaurds jinke paas latest guns h se bhara hua h, kahne ko full on security h, gate pe metal detector security guards, security itni tight h ki koi parinda bhi par nhi mar sakta.

Dur kahi RAW ki ek kufiya jagah pe ek special meeting ke liye logo ko bulaya jata h, sabhi log jald baji main waha puchte h aur meeting room main baithe yahi soch rhe h ki ye meeting kyu bulai gayi h, itne mai meeting room ka door open hota h aur ek Raw head ander aata h jisko dkh ke sab log kadhe ho jate h, wo Raw head sabhi ko baithne ke liye bolta h aur meeting shuru karte h.

Agent 1: kya baat h sir? Aap thode tension m lag rhe h?

Agent 2: ha sir aur ye itnji jald baji main meeting bulai h apne?

Raw head: Wo abhi bhi jinda h.

Agent 1: koun jinda h sir?

Agent 2: agar aap uski baat kar rhe h tho!

Raw Head: ha main uski ki baat kar raha hu.

Agent 5: ye kaise ho sakta h usko tho usne maar diya tha na?

Raw head: ye baat hum bhi jante h

Agent 4: uski mout ki video tho hum sab ne dkhi thi aur hum logo ne he tho usko jamin mai dafnaya tha.

Tabhi meeting room ka door open hota h aur ek ladki ander aati h aur puchti h kya hua? Sab itni tension m kyu ho?

Agent 4: wo…wo…. Wo

Ladki: kya wo wo laga rakha h sahi se bolo?

Agent 5: wo abhi… wo abhi?

Ladki: saaf saaf bolo kya hua h jo ese hakla rhe ho sab? Sir aap he bataiye kya baat h?

Raw head: Wo abhi jinda h jiske liye sabhi pareshan h.

Ladki: nhi esa nhi ho sakta use tho maine kud apne hatho se mara h aur mera hatho se marne wala aaj tak koi nhi bacha aur na he kabhi marne ke baad wapis aaya h.

Raw head kuch nhi bolte aur wo ek video play krte h samne ki badi si screen pe.​
Ek shakas dikh raha h jiska muh aur kapde mithi se bahre hue aur uske muh se khoon nikal h aur wo kud ki video record kr rha h.

In Video:

Shakas: mujhe ese jinda dkh kar tum logo ko harani tho ho rahi hogi main janta hu, tum logo ko kya laga ki main mar chuka hu, mujhe marna itna assan nhi jitna tum logo ne socha tha (baat krte hue uske muh se khoon bhi nikal raha h) ye baat tum log jano ya na jano par wo bhut achi tarh se janti h, thik h ek game tumne khela h ek main khelta hu main mere ghar pe rahunga shayad whi mera ilaz bhi hoga agar dum ho tho aa jana, tum mera address nhi jante ho par wo janti h mere bare main sab kuch aur ha Raw head kah dena use aa rha hu main.

(kon h wo shakas aur esa kya kiya tha usne jo Raw uske piche padi h aur kon h wo ladki jiske bare main wo shakas bol rha tha)
 

Vihaan_arya

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Update - 2
In Video:

Shakas: mujhe ese jinda dkh kar tum logo ko harani tho ho rahi hogi main janta hu, tum logo ko kya laga ki main mar chuka hu, mujhe marna itna assan nhi jitna tum logo ne socha tha (baat krte hue uske muh se khoon bhi nikal raha h) ye baat tum log jano ya na jano par wo bhut achi tarh se janti h, thik h ek game tumne khela h ek main khelta hu main mere ghar pe rahunga shayad whi mera ilaz bhi hoga agar dum ho tho aa jana, tum mera address nhi jante ho par wo janti h mere bare main sab kuch aur ha Raw head kah dena use aa rha hu main.

Itna keh ke wo shakas video band kar deta h aur behosh ho jata h, tabhi ek helicopter uske sir ke upper se niklta h aur paas ke khali maidan m utar jata jisme se ek ladki aur kuch bodyguards utarte h aur uss shakas ko leke nikal jata h.

aage:

Meeting room:

Iss video ko dkhne ke baad sabhi ke hosh udd jate h khas kar uss ladki ke kyuki wo janti thi agar wo jinda bach gaya h tho un sabki life khatre main h aur bhut se logo ki bhi jinhone in sabki madat ki thi kyuki uss shakas ka gussa sirf usne dkha tha.



Short Intro:

Mr. Goyal: Raw head (inka jada role nhi h story main isliye sirf naam he likh raha hu)

Agent 1: Rahul: 26 yrs old ek fighter har tarah ki fight janta h muscular body, apne man ki karta h, apni team ke liye kahi bhi kisi se bhi bhid jae.

Agent 2: Mohit: 28 yrs old martial arts expert esi koi martial arts nhi jo ye nhi janta siwae kuch ke jo bhut rare h, har waqt un arts ko kojta hrta h

Agent 3: Priya: 28 yrs oldye ek doctor h jisse special issi team ke liye appoint kiya gaya h, ye kafi serious type ki h.

Agent 4: Riya: 25 yrs old ye Priya ki choti behan h ye ek hacker h, kisi bhi chij ko hack kr skati h bhut he chulbuli h baate ekdum bacho jaisi karti h.

Agent 5: Mansi: 25 yrs old ye ek sniper h jise bachpan se he shooting ka shonk tha isne bade hokar bhi yhi sikha.

Team Leader: Aishani: 25 yrs old, ye ek field ya planning expert h, bala ki kubsurat h jo kaam baki pancho karte wo sab ye akeli bhi kar sakti h, par ye jada show off nhi krti puri team ko sumbalti h, Dil bhut komal hai, friendly nature, kisi se bhi ghul mil jae, attitude sirf attitude walo ke smne dikhati h.



Rahul: ab kya kare sir?

Mr. Goyal: abhi kuch mat karo, kuch time ke underground ho jao.

Mansi: esa kyu sir?

Riya: ha sir hum log Raw ki best team h humne use maar diya tha.

Mr. Goyal: (bich m tokte hue) Par wo jinda h mara nhi.

Mohit: Sir hum log usse iss baar maar kar he rahege, hum fir kuch plan banalege par ese chup kar nhi rahenge kyu Aishani.

Aishani jo kuch soch rahi thi: ha ha kyu nhi iss baar wo jinda nahi bachega.

Priya jo video dkhne ke baad kab se Aishani ko dkh rhi thi aur uske hao baow se kuch samjne ki koshish kr rhi thi.

Mr. Goyal: thik h jo bhi karo soch samj kar karna, meeting dismiss.

Sab log bahar jane lagte h Priya Aishani ko rok leti aur sabse bolti h ki usse kuch kaam h Aishani se wo dono bad ma aa jange. Uski baar sunke sabhi log apne apne quarter ki taraf nikal jate h.

Aishani Priya ko sawaliya nijro se dkhti h aur puchti h:



Aishani: kya hua Priya mujhe uh kyu roka?

Priya: tun hi janti maine tumhe kyu roka?

Aishani: (jiski akhon main aasu aane wale the) nhi main nhi janti?

Priya: fir ek baat sach sach bata kon h wo?

Aishani: Kon – kon h? main samji nhi?

Priya: acha chal fir rhne de chlte h.

Aishani bhag kar jati h aur Priya ke gale lag kr jor jor se rone lagti h, Priya uske sar ko sahlate hue:

Priya: main janti hu tujhe aur usko bhi aur tum dono ke bich ke riste ko bhi, main ye bhi janti hu tujhe kushi bhi hui h ki wo jinda par dar bhi h kahi wo hum sab ko….

Aishani jaldi se Priya ke muh pe hath rakh deti h aur apni gardan na main hilati h aur bolti h:

Aishani: nhi esa kuch nhi hoga main usse iss baar jarur katam kar dungi.

Aishani ki baat sunke Priya sirf muskura deti h par kuch nhi bolti aur wo Aishani ko lekar bhar aati h aur uske Quarter tak chor ke apne quarter aa jati aur sochne lagti ki, Kya yhi niti thi Aishani aur uss shakas ki, aur fir usko bhi tension hone lagti h ki ab aage kya hoga.



Agle din se insab ne plan banana shuru kiya ke kaise usko maara jaege par Aishani ke mutabik usko uske ghar main jake marna impossible h kyuki wha sequrity bhut tight rhti h usko chuna bhi mushkil hoga aur uske sath wo ladki bhi hogi iss liye isnko kuch aur he plan krna hoga, issi trah plan krte krte inko 1 month ho jata h aur in sab ke mobile pe ek msg ata h.

Message: bhukha sher aur bhut der baad aaya tufaan dono khatarnak hote h.....
 

tpk

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Update 1:
Ek Alishan bangle ke ek room ko koi leta hua h jiske muh pe oxygen mask, hath main drips aur paas main bhut si machines h aur sath mai doctor aur nurses bhi baithe hai, unlogo ke paas ek ladki bhi kadhi h jiske face pe tension saaf saaf dikh rahi h.

Room ke bhar bhut se garuds khade h bangle ki chat pe do snipers, bangle ka compound bhi gaurds jinke paas latest guns h se bhara hua h, kahne ko full on security h, gate pe metal detector security guards, security itni tight h ki koi parinda bhi par nhi mar sakta.

Dur kahi RAW ki ek kufiya jagah pe ek special meeting ke liye logo ko bulaya jata h, sabhi log jald baji main waha puchte h aur meeting room main baithe yahi soch rhe h ki ye meeting kyu bulai gayi h, itne mai meeting room ka door open hota h aur ek Raw head ander aata h jisko dkh ke sab log kadhe ho jate h, wo Raw head sabhi ko baithne ke liye bolta h aur meeting shuru karte h.

Agent 1: kya baat h sir? Aap thode tension m lag rhe h?

Agent 2: ha sir aur ye itnji jald baji main meeting bulai h apne?

Raw head: Wo abhi bhi jinda h.

Agent 1: koun jinda h sir?

Agent 2: agar aap uski baat kar rhe h tho!

Raw Head: ha main uski ki baat kar raha hu.

Agent 5: ye kaise ho sakta h usko tho usne maar diya tha na?

Raw head: ye baat hum bhi jante h

Agent 4: uski mout ki video tho hum sab ne dkhi thi aur hum logo ne he tho usko jamin mai dafnaya tha.

Tabhi meeting room ka door open hota h aur ek ladki ander aati h aur puchti h kya hua? Sab itni tension m kyu ho?

Agent 4: wo…wo…. Wo

Ladki: kya wo wo laga rakha h sahi se bolo?

Agent 5: wo abhi… wo abhi?

Ladki: saaf saaf bolo kya hua h jo ese hakla rhe ho sab? Sir aap he bataiye kya baat h?

Raw head: Wo abhi jinda h jiske liye sabhi pareshan h.

Ladki: nhi esa nhi ho sakta use tho maine kud apne hatho se mara h aur mera hatho se marne wala aaj tak koi nhi bacha aur na he kabhi marne ke baad wapis aaya h.

Raw head kuch nhi bolte aur wo ek video play krte h samne ki badi si screen pe.​
Ek shakas dikh raha h jiska muh aur kapde mithi se bahre hue aur uske muh se khoon nikal h aur wo kud ki video record kr rha h.

In Video:

Shakas: mujhe ese jinda dkh kar tum logo ko harani tho ho rahi hogi main janta hu, tum logo ko kya laga ki main mar chuka hu, mujhe marna itna assan nhi jitna tum logo ne socha tha (baat krte hue uske muh se khoon bhi nikal raha h) ye baat tum log jano ya na jano par wo bhut achi tarh se janti h, thik h ek game tumne khela h ek main khelta hu main mere ghar pe rahunga shayad whi mera ilaz bhi hoga agar dum ho tho aa jana, tum mera address nhi jante ho par wo janti h mere bare main sab kuch aur ha Raw head kah dena use aa rha hu main.

(kon h wo shakas aur esa kya kiya tha usne jo Raw uske piche padi h aur kon h wo ladki jiske bare main wo shakas bol rha tha)
very nice
 

tpk

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Update - 2
In Video:

Shakas: mujhe ese jinda dkh kar tum logo ko harani tho ho rahi hogi main janta hu, tum logo ko kya laga ki main mar chuka hu, mujhe marna itna assan nhi jitna tum logo ne socha tha (baat krte hue uske muh se khoon bhi nikal raha h) ye baat tum log jano ya na jano par wo bhut achi tarh se janti h, thik h ek game tumne khela h ek main khelta hu main mere ghar pe rahunga shayad whi mera ilaz bhi hoga agar dum ho tho aa jana, tum mera address nhi jante ho par wo janti h mere bare main sab kuch aur ha Raw head kah dena use aa rha hu main.

Itna keh ke wo shakas video band kar deta h aur behosh ho jata h, tabhi ek helicopter uske sir ke upper se niklta h aur paas ke khali maidan m utar jata jisme se ek ladki aur kuch bodyguards utarte h aur uss shakas ko leke nikal jata h.

aage:

Meeting room:

Iss video ko dkhne ke baad sabhi ke hosh udd jate h khas kar uss ladki ke kyuki wo janti thi agar wo jinda bach gaya h tho un sabki life khatre main h aur bhut se logo ki bhi jinhone in sabki madat ki thi kyuki uss shakas ka gussa sirf usne dkha tha.



Short Intro:

Mr. Goyal: Raw head (inka jada role nhi h story main isliye sirf naam he likh raha hu)

Agent 1: Rahul: 26 yrs old ek fighter har tarah ki fight janta h muscular body, apne man ki karta h, apni team ke liye kahi bhi kisi se bhi bhid jae.

Agent 2: Mohit: 28 yrs old martial arts expert esi koi martial arts nhi jo ye nhi janta siwae kuch ke jo bhut rare h, har waqt un arts ko kojta hrta h

Agent 3: Priya: 28 yrs oldye ek doctor h jisse special issi team ke liye appoint kiya gaya h, ye kafi serious type ki h.

Agent 4: Riya: 25 yrs old ye Priya ki choti behan h ye ek hacker h, kisi bhi chij ko hack kr skati h bhut he chulbuli h baate ekdum bacho jaisi karti h.

Agent 5: Mansi: 25 yrs old ye ek sniper h jise bachpan se he shooting ka shonk tha isne bade hokar bhi yhi sikha.

Team Leader: Aishani: 25 yrs old, ye ek field ya planning expert h, bala ki kubsurat h jo kaam baki pancho karte wo sab ye akeli bhi kar sakti h, par ye jada show off nhi krti puri team ko sumbalti h, Dil bhut komal hai, friendly nature, kisi se bhi ghul mil jae, attitude sirf attitude walo ke smne dikhati h.



Rahul: ab kya kare sir?

Mr. Goyal: abhi kuch mat karo, kuch time ke underground ho jao.

Mansi: esa kyu sir?

Riya: ha sir hum log Raw ki best team h humne use maar diya tha.

Mr. Goyal: (bich m tokte hue) Par wo jinda h mara nhi.

Mohit: Sir hum log usse iss baar maar kar he rahege, hum fir kuch plan banalege par ese chup kar nhi rahenge kyu Aishani.

Aishani jo kuch soch rahi thi: ha ha kyu nhi iss baar wo jinda nahi bachega.

Priya jo video dkhne ke baad kab se Aishani ko dkh rhi thi aur uske hao baow se kuch samjne ki koshish kr rhi thi.

Mr. Goyal: thik h jo bhi karo soch samj kar karna, meeting dismiss.

Sab log bahar jane lagte h Priya Aishani ko rok leti aur sabse bolti h ki usse kuch kaam h Aishani se wo dono bad ma aa jange. Uski baar sunke sabhi log apne apne quarter ki taraf nikal jate h.

Aishani Priya ko sawaliya nijro se dkhti h aur puchti h:



Aishani: kya hua Priya mujhe uh kyu roka?

Priya: tun hi janti maine tumhe kyu roka?

Aishani: (jiski akhon main aasu aane wale the) nhi main nhi janti?

Priya: fir ek baat sach sach bata kon h wo?

Aishani: Kon – kon h? main samji nhi?

Priya: acha chal fir rhne de chlte h.

Aishani bhag kar jati h aur Priya ke gale lag kr jor jor se rone lagti h, Priya uske sar ko sahlate hue:

Priya: main janti hu tujhe aur usko bhi aur tum dono ke bich ke riste ko bhi, main ye bhi janti hu tujhe kushi bhi hui h ki wo jinda par dar bhi h kahi wo hum sab ko….

Aishani jaldi se Priya ke muh pe hath rakh deti h aur apni gardan na main hilati h aur bolti h:

Aishani: nhi esa kuch nhi hoga main usse iss baar jarur katam kar dungi.

Aishani ki baat sunke Priya sirf muskura deti h par kuch nhi bolti aur wo Aishani ko lekar bhar aati h aur uske Quarter tak chor ke apne quarter aa jati aur sochne lagti ki, Kya yhi niti thi Aishani aur uss shakas ki, aur fir usko bhi tension hone lagti h ki ab aage kya hoga.



Agle din se insab ne plan banana shuru kiya ke kaise usko maara jaege par Aishani ke mutabik usko uske ghar main jake marna impossible h kyuki wha sequrity bhut tight rhti h usko chuna bhi mushkil hoga aur uske sath wo ladki bhi hogi iss liye isnko kuch aur he plan krna hoga, issi trah plan krte krte inko 1 month ho jata h aur in sab ke mobile pe ek msg ata h.

Message: bhukha sher aur bhut der baad aaya tufaan dono khatarnak hote h.....
super zabardast update
 
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