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Romance Pyaar Kii Asi Bhi Ek Kahaani ( Revenge + Love )
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Update 4:
Mr. Goyal: agar location confirm h tho mere hisab se tum logo ko turant niklna chaie aur plan ko execute krne ko bolte h par sath main kud ka dhyan rakhne ke liye bhi bolte h kyuki wo bhi jante the ki ye shakas kitna khatarnak h.
(Par in logo ko ky apta tha jiska ye log shikar karne ja rhe h wo kud ek shikari hain)
ab aage:
Dusri tarf:
Ek bade se hotel kuch log baithe h aur unke bich kuch chal raha h.
Payal: ye pagal ab kaha gayi?
Ridhi: yahi hogi kaha jaegi tujhe pata tho h uska.
Payal: kya yaar? Ab har baat usko batani jruri h ki khaa ja rhe h ya kya kar rhe hain.
Ridhi: tu tho janti h na ki usse kitna pyar krti h, uske liye tho wo he uska sab kuch h.
Payal: ha janti hu wo bhi tho iss pagal ko leke possessive rhta h.
Itne main koi nike piche aata hain jor se Payal ke marta h, Payal piche mudke dkhti h uss shaks ko jiski ankhon m gussa hota h aur Payal ko wo bolti h.
Short intro:
Ruhani: age 19 yrs. Abhi college mai M.Sc ke final year main hai. Chulbuli aur nekdil hai, kisi se bhi jaldi ghul mil jati hai. Ek shakas se bhut jada pyaar karti hai bachpan se he. (wo koun h ye story main aage pata chalega).
Payal aur Ridhi: ye dono Ruhani ki best friend h dono Ruhani ke sath he padthi h bachpan se he. Ruhani ke liye dono behane he h .
Ruhani: kya bola tune mujhe pagal aah?
Payal: aur kya bolu tujhe tu he bata?
Ridhi: ha Payal sahi bol rhi h tu apne uss ko har baat kyu batai h ki kab soi kab uthi kab kya kiya?
Payal: agar yahi haal raha tho jab kisi se pyaar karegi tab bhi apne use bategi.hehehe
Ruhani: ho agya tum dono ka aur meri marji main usse ko kuch bhi batau aur ha main kisi se pyaar nhi krne wali.
Payal: ha ha hum jante h madam kis se pyaar krti h hum tho bhul he gaye the.
Uski baat sunke Ruhani blush krne lagti h Payal aur Ridhi bhi hasne lagte h aur iss Tahar masti majak karna shuru kar dete h.
Back to real side:
Aishani aur uski team apna plan complete karne m lage the aur jab plan complete ho jata h par yaha ek dikhat ye thi ki sher ka chara kon Banega kyuki agr inka plan leak hota h tho sabse phale uski ki jaan jaegi baki sab tho nikal sakte h par uska niklna namumkin tha kyuki jitna inhone uss shakas ke barde main pata kiya tha uske mutaabik wo kisi pe reham tho nhi karta.
Aishani bhut sochti h par wo bhi apni team ke kisi bhi memver ki jaan khtre m nhi dal sakti thi isliye wo ye sab kud krne ki sochti h aur apni team ko bulati h usnko sab samjati h ki kisko kya krna h aur jab lasty m sab puchte ki bail ke gale m ghanta kon bandega tab wo kud ka naam leti hain.
Rahul: kya tum pagal ho?
Aishani: kyu kya hua?
Rahul: ye plan tumara h aur tum kud he mout ke muh m jana chati ho?
Mansi: ha Aishani Rahul thik kah raha h.
Aishani: iske ilawa koi aur rasta nhi h aur m apni team maise kisi ko bhi khatre main nhi dal sakti aur jab plan mera h tho mujhe he ye karna hoga and more discussion.
Iske baad koi kuch nhi bolta aur sab apne apne kaam m lag jate h, Aishani Mr. Goyal ko call krke sab bata deti h aur usko jane ka batati h.
Kuch time bad Aishani aur uski team bhi nikal jati h apne mission ke liye jaha inko kud nahi pata inke sath kya hone wala h.
Dusri Traf:
Ruhani kuch pareshan se ho gayi thi use kuch samj nhi aa rha ha ki uske sath esa kyu aur kya ho raha h, use iss trah dkh ke Payal aur Ridhi bhi pareshan hog ye aur use puchne lagte h:
Payal: kya hua Ruhani?
Ruhani: pata nahi kyu ajib sa dar lag raha h.
Ridhi: dar! Aur tujhe tu janti nhi tu kon h aur tu kise pyar krti h.
Ruhani: (pyaar ki baat sunke sharma jati h par dikhati nhi) ha ha main janti hu sab tu jada na bol.
Ridhi: lagta h isse iss baat kar dar h khi use koi aur na le ude ya usko kisi aur se pyar ho jae.
Ridhi ki baat sunke Ruhani ka chehra rone wala ho jata h aur wo rona wali he hoti h, use dkh kar Ridhi aur Payal bhag kar usi tarf jati h aur usko gale laga leti h.
Ridhi: are are roo ku rahi h? main tho majak kar rahi thi.
Ruhani: pls esa majak mat kra kar tu jnati h na main use kitna pyar karti hu uss, uske alwa kisi aur ke bare m soch bhi sakti.
Payal: acha baba ab nhi bolte par agar Ridhi ki baat sach hui tho?
Ridhi: aur kya aur tune bhi tho abhi tak use kuch bola bhi nhi h?
Rihani inki baat sunke thodi dar jati h aur sochti h ye dono sach he bol rahi h, wo kud bolna bhi chati thi sab kuch par darti thi agar usne apna pyaar Kabul kiya tho wo shakas bura na maan jae aur use chor kar na chala jae.
Ridhi: use hilate hue kya sochne lagi?
Ruhani: par main bolu kaise?
Payal: ha ye tho schne wali baat h?
Ridhi: ek idea h?
Ruhani: (kush hote hue) ha ha batana jaldi?
Payal: dkho dkho kitni jaldi h usske niche ane ki.
Payal ki baat sunke Rdihi bhi hasne lagti aur Ruhani sharma jati h aur blush krne lagti h fir wo Ridhi se bolti h:
Ridhi: kyu na tu wha he chali jae.
Ruhani: use kya hoga?
Payal: agar tu wha jaegi tho har time uske paas rh paegi aur koi bhi dusri uske paas nhi aegi samji pagal.
Ruhani: agar main usse puchugi ki main waha aana chati hu tho wo mana kar dega.
Payal: usko batane ki jarurt nhi h surprise de usko aur waha jake bold io ki tu ab wapis nhi jaegi.
Ruhani: aur tum dono bhi mere sath chalogi.
Ridhi: yaar hum kya karge wha pe.
Ruhani: kyu tum bhi apne ghar chai jana aur kya?
Payal: ha ye sahi rahega.
Ridhi: fir ye final raha ki hum wapis jaege.
Ruhani ye sunke kush ho jati h aur dono ke gale jag jati.
Radhi: Ruhani hum wo nhi h jo itni jor se gale laga rhi h.
Ridhi itna bolke bagne lagti h aur Ruhani uske piche marne bhagti h, inka hasi majak uhi chata rahta aur teeno apni packing bhi shuru kr dete h.
Ek police station main koi chair pe baitha h aur usko charo traf se police aur kuch logo ne gher rakha h aur esa lag raha h jaise ki usko marne aae h sare par uss shakas ke chare par ek smile h jisse dkh kar kuch log dar bhi rahe h.
Koi kuch bolta usse phle bhut se bodyguards jinhone black suit phna hua tha aur unke hath high tech guns thi wo sab andr aate sab logo ko gher lete h, wo shas hasne lagta h. unsabko dkhkar baki sab police walo ki guns niche ho jati h.
Wo shakas angdai lete hue utha h aur apna sar ha m hilata hua bhar nikal kar dkhta h ki uski tarf ek gadiyo ka kafla aa rha h, wo kafla usse samne rukta h aur ek bodyguard aake gate kholta h aur wo usme baith jata h aur kafla nikal jata h.
Jab wo thoda dur jata h tho piche se goliyon ka shor hota h aur wo samj jata h ki police station ka kabirstan ban chuka hoga. Wo yahi soch raha tho h tabhi usko ek call ati jo uske he khas admi ki thi jiska naam ranga hota h:
Ranga: bhai apko pakadne ke liye Raw ek team bana raha h.
Shakas: acha!
Ranga: ha bhai mujhe bhi abhi pata chala h aur apun ne apko call laga di.
Shakas: Ranga tujhe abhi pata chala h, mujhe tho tab ka pata h jab iss team ko banae ki sochi thi.
Ranga: bhai! Apne bataya kyu nhi, ab tak tho unko apun aur apun ke chokare unn log katam kar chuke hote.
Shakas: unko marna tho chutki ka kaam h, tu tension na le aane de unko mere paas, unko esi mout dunga ki kisi bhi desh ki dubara himmat nhi hogi jo esa dubara karne ki soche bhi.
Inti baat karne ke baat wo shakas call cut kar deta h aur ek file open karta h aur usko padke jor jor se hasne lagta h aur bolta h.
WELCOME TO HELL MISS. AISHANI AND TEAM.
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Nice update..!!
Toh uss shaks ko pakadne ke liye aishani aur team ne plan bana liya hai aur aishani khud chara banane wali hai..!! Ruhani kisi ladke se pyaar karti hai par abhi tak boli nahi..lekin ab uske doston ke kehne pe woh uske paas ja rahi hai apne dil ki baat kehne..!! Uss shaks pehle se hi pata hai ki aishna aur team usse marne aarahi hai..ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..!!
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Thanks bro
Game kisi h aur koun khel raha h ye tho aage pata chalega sath bane rahie.
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Mega Update 5:
Ranga: bhai! Apne bataya kyu nhi, ab tak tho unko apun aur apun ke chokare unn log katam kar chuke hote.
Shakas: unko marna tho chutki ka kaam h, tu tension na le aane de unko mere paas, unko esi mout dunga ki kisi bhi desh ki dubara himmat nhi hogi jo esa dubara karne ki soche bhi.
Inti baat karne ke baat wo shakas call cut kar deta h aur ek file open karta h aur usko padke jor jor se hasne lagta h aur bolta h.
WELCOME TO HELL MISS. AISHANI AND TEAM.
ab aage:
Real side:
Aishani aur uski team nikal chuke the apne mission ke liye aur pura yakeen tha ki wo apna mission complete krege, par iss baat se bekabhar ki unpe koi najar rakhe hue h.
Jaise he police station ke kand wali khabar Mr. Goyal tak punchti h wo iss khabar ko sun ke pareshan ho jate h aur wo Aishani ko iss khbar ke bare m batana chate the par tab tak wo log apni manjil ke liye nikal chuke the.
Aishani aur uski team lambe safar ke bad Munich puchte h aur apne hide out ki tarf nikal jate ab unka sabse pehla kaam tha uss shakas ke bare main jada jankari ikhata karna aur wo dikhta kaise h uska real name kya h ye pata karna.
Aishani sab ko aaj ka din rest aur ghume ka bolti h aur kal se kaam start krne ko khti h, sabhi uski baat ko maan lete kyu sab thake hue bhi the aur Munich ki kubsurti ko dkhna bhi chate the.
Puri team nikal jati h ghumne, Munich main thoda bhut ghumne ke bad ye log ek ache se restaurant main lunch krne jate h aur wha jaise apna lunch ka order deke wait karne lagte h aur aapas m bat chit shuru krte h tabhi Priya ka dhyan ek news pe jata h jisme bata ja rha tha ki kaise ek police station kabristan m badal gaya aur wo sabko news dkhne ko khti h, news m bataya ja rha tha ki ye kaam Mafia king ka h usko wha girftar krke rakha gaya tha aur jisne bhi Mafia king ko dkha h wo aaj tak jinda nhi bacha siwae uske logo ke.
Iss news ko dhkar kar Aishani ki puri team tension m aa jati h kyuki unka plan bhi kuch esa he tha ki unne usske kafi karib jana h. Aishani sabko shant rhne ke liye khti h par dar tho usse bhi lag raha tha. Aishani janti thi agar kuch bhi galat hua ya usko inke plan ki jara si bhi bhanak lagi tho kya najam hoga.
Wo log lunch kar firse ghumne nikal jate h aur sara din ghom kar apne hideout pe aake rest krte kyuki sab jante the kal se unko bhut kaam karna h.
Sub uthke sab apne kaam par lag jate h, Aishani Riya ko uss shakas ki last location dunde ko khti h aur kud bhi uske bare m dunda shuru kar deti h. Thodi der m Riya uski last location dund leti h jo ki ek bar ki hoti h aur Aishani ko batata h.
Aishani: tho iski last location ke hisab se ye ek bar m h.
Riya: ha jis number ko trace krte hue hum yaha aae uske hisab se tho yhi h uski last location.
Aishani: fir tho hume yaha jana chaie.
Masni: par ye trap bhi ho skata h kyuki jisse ko nhi dund saka ko itni asani se hume kaise mil sakta h.
Aishani: ha ye bhi ho skata h, par ye he humari last hope h jiske sath hume chalna hoga.
Rahul: tho kya kre fir? Kyuki yaha tak aaeh tho ab piche nhi hat sakte.
Aishani: ha Rahul sahi kah raha h.
Mansi: fir ab bina plan kiye waha jana bhi katre se khali nahi h.
Aishani: (kuch sochte hue) Priya kya tum esa antidote bana sakti ho jisse hum par kisi bhi trah ka koi drug ya alcohol kam na kar sake.
Priya: ha bana tho sakti hu par uske kuch side effect bhi hine.
Aishani: kaise side effect?
Priya: jaise ki kamjori aana, sar ka bhari hona etc etc.
Aishani: koi baat nhi itna tho jhel he skate h tum banao aur Riya uss bar ke cctv hack krke dkho kuch milta h kya. Rahul aur Mohit tum dono uss baar ke aas paas jake dkho kuch milta h ya nahi aur Mansi tum sir se contact karo aur hume weapons kaha se milege pata karo aur main uss police station ke paas jake pata karti hu kuch mile.
Aishani ke kaam batane ke bad sab usme lag jate h, Riya uss bar ke cctv ko hack krti h aur usko milta h wha pe weapons, money aur bhut se galat kamo ki dealing hoti h. Rahul aur Mohit bhi uss bar ke bare main pata akrta jaha une pata chalta h ki ek special type ka bar jaha sirf couple he ja sakte h aur uske ander jane ka bhi ek special code h.
Priya bhi apne kaam m lagi hui thi aur wo bhi sham tak antidot bana leti h aur Mansi bhi Mr. Goyal se baat krke weapons ke baare m pata kar leti h.
Aishani bhi wapis aa jati h uske hath kuch nahi lagta siwae iske ke waha par bhut si gadiyan aai thi jinke nikale ke baad he wo hadsa hua.
Wapis aake Aishani sabse unke kaam ke bare m puchti h tho sab bata dete h aur Priya bhi batati h ki antidot ke asar katam hone ke tursnt bad he chakar aa skata h.
Sabki baat sunke Aishani uss bar m ka sochti par usse waha janke ke liye code chaie tha jo itni asani se nhi milne wala tha wo Rahul ko bolti h ki uss code ke bare m kuch pata chala ya nhi h.
Rahul: nhi Aishani par agar hum aas pass aur puchtach kare tho kuch baat ban sakti h.
Aishani: thi h Rahul tum aur Mohit ko jo thik lage karo par kisi ki najar m mat aa jana. Aur haa apni identity ko chupa ke rakha ki tum dono fighter ho.agar kisi ko pata chala tho… you know what I mean.
Rahul: ha Aishani hum jante h tum tension mat lo sab dkhte h kya hota h.
Mohit: agar kisi ko kuch khilna pilana bhi pada tho bhi dkhlenge. hehehe
Mohit ki baat sunke sab ko hasi aa jati h aur kaam pe lag jate h.
Mohit Aur Rahul uss bar ke paas jate h aur kuch logo ko dundne lagte h jisse unko uss code ke bare m pata chale, tabhi uske paas ek shakas aata h aur bolta h.
Shakas: kya hua kya dund rhe ho?
Mohit: tumse matlb apna kaam karo.
Shakas: DEN m jane ka code jana chate ho?
Rahul: DEN?
Shakas: uss bar ka naam h.
Rahul: tum kon ho aur ye hume kyu bata rhe ho?
Shakas: kuch nhi bas thodi kamai ho jae bas liye
Mohit: kitna chaie?
Shakas: 1000 dollars
Rahul: bhut jada h!
Shakas: code chaie tho itna he dena padega manjur ho tho bolo nhi tho aur mil jaege mujhe.
Mohit: wait karo thodi der.
Shakas: okay.
Mohit thodi dur jake Aishani ko call karta h aur sari baat batata h, Aishani usko paise dene ko bol deti h aur sath m husiyar rhne ko bhi bolti h.
Mohit: thik h hume manjur h.
Mohit usko 1000-dollar deta h aur code le leta h aur code tha “Mesha”. Par wo shakas sath m ye bhi batata h ki code sirf aaj ke liye h kal code change ho jaega, Code leke dono hide out aa jate aur puri team ko batate h, unke jane ke bad wo shakas apna mask uatarta h aur jor se hasta h aur apni car m baith ke chala jata h.
Aishani aur team sham ke time tyar hote h aur nikal jate h bar ki traf (jaha unka koi inzar kar raha hota h), ye logo do pair m waha jate h kyuki waha sirf couple entry he allowed the Aishani-Rahul Priya-Mohit, Mansi aur weapons ke sath standby pe rhne ko khte h aur Riya ko cctv pe najar rkhne ko khte h.
Ye log code batake bar m enter krte h aur uske ander ka mahol dkhne lagte h, thodi der m Priya sab ko ishara karti h ki samne dkho, samne ko gang milte h aur kuch bags exchange krte h.
Par dono gangs m bahas shuru ho jati h aur firing shuru ho jati jise wha bagdhad mach jati aur log bhar bagne lagte h Rahul, Mohit, Priya tho bhar aa jate h par Aishani ander he fas jatiu kyuki wo washroom m thi jab firing shuru hui, par jab wo washroom se nahr aati h bagdhad dkh ke gabra jati h.
Isi bagdhad m uspe bhi fire ho jata par tabhi usko koi leke niche baith jata aur goli uss shakas ke lagti h aur wo Cheech padta h par wo shakas apna dard bhul kar Aishani ka hath padkta h aur bhar ki traf bhagne lagta aur safely Aishani ke sath bhar aa jata h.
Aishani ko dkh ke puri team uski aur bagi aati h aur puchti h ki kya wo thik h. jispe Aishani khti h wo theek h, par uske sath jo shakas tha wo gutno pe baith jata h, sabki najar uspe jati kyuki usne abhi bhi Aishani ka hath pakda hua tha, Usko dkh kar Aishani da dil tadaf uthta aur uski akhno se aau nikalne lagte h.
Mohit ki najar uske jakam par jati h aur wo bolta h:
Mohit: are isko tho goli lagi h?
Aishani: kya?(aur uski arm ko dkhne lagti h)
Mohit: ha
Aishani: hume isse hospital leke jana chaie.
Rahul: nhi Aishani agar hum kahi jate h tho ho skata h ki hum uski najro m aa jae aur humara mission fail ho jae.
Priya: (Rahul ko kohni marte hue) ha Aishani Rahul thi h raha h humpe koi dikat na aa jae hum log tho yaha ghumne aaya h.
Unki baat ko sunn raha wo shakas bolta h:
Shakas: aap logo ko mujhe kahi lejane ki jarurat nhi h mujhe bas ek kinfe chie aur usko garam krne ke liye fire.
Riya: acha aap uska kya karege?
Shakas: main apke sawalo ka jawab bad m de dunga abhi mujhe bhut pain ho rha h please.
Uski baat sunke Mohit aur Rahul knife aur lighter leke aate h, par yaha ek baat thi Aishani uss shakas ko he dkh rahi thi aur ro rhi thi Priya bhi usko bade gaur se dkh rahi h.
Wo shakas knife ko leta h aur usko garam krke apni arm se goli nikale lagta aur jab goli nikal jati h tab Aishani kio pata nhi kya hota h aur apni dress fadke uske jakam pe bandne lagti h, uski ye harqat dkh ke sabhi shaock ho jate aur Rahul thoda chid jata h.
Apni dress uske jakham ke band eke bad Priya Aishani ko hita h tab uske samj aata h usne abhi kya kiya aur embers feel krne lagti h. thodi der bad jab wo shakas normal hota h tho Aishani usko thanks bolti h.
Aishani: thank you so much mujhe bachane ke liye.
Shakas: its okay, par aap logo ko yaha kabhi nhi dkha?
Sabhi log relax ho jate kyuki unhe lagta ki usne Rahul ki baat suni.
Mansi: hum sab log yaha ghume aaye h.
Shakas: par aap log DEN m, mera matlb iss bar m kaise?
Mohit: wo iss bar ke bare m yaha ke logo se suna that ho aa gaye.
Aishani: waise aap yaha kaise?
Shakas: main ek officer hu aur yaha aaj ki deal ko expose krne aaya tha kuch karta usse phle he ye sab ho gaya.
Aishani: waise aap naam kya h?
Shakas: mera naam……
(kya naam h uss shakas ka aur Aishani ke maan m kya chal raha aur Rahul ko chida aur Ruhani kis ke pyaar karti h so much confusion h re baba, janne ke liye sath bane rahie)
Nice update..!!
Aishani aur team Munich pohach Gaye hai..unhone apna kaam bhi suru kar diya..unko location bhi mili ek pub ki..waha ka code kisi anjan aadmi ne unhe bataya bhi paise ke liye..aishani ko kisi Shaqs ne goli lagne se bhi bacha liya..aur aishani ne usse dress fad ke Patti bhi ki..lagta hai rahul aishani ko like karta hai isliye usko jalan ho rahi hai uss shaqs se..uss shaqs ne apna kaam bhi bata diya waha ghusne ka..Aisa lag raha hai jaise yeh sab kisi plan me faste chale ja rahe hai..ruhani kis Shaqs se pyaar karti hai..aishani ko bachane Wale ka naam kya hai..kaun hai jo woh mafia king Jo aishani aur team ke liye trap rach Raha hai..bahot sare questions hai..ab dekhte hai unke answers kaise milte hai..!!
Bhai aur ek sawal abhi kahani past me chal rahi hai na..!!