Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

[Yash420]

bhai aapko jo acha lage ya bura lage aap mujhse khulkar keh sakte ho ..bas ek baat hai jisse main humesha dur rahta hun woh hai jab samne koi or na ho tab uski baat ..or us topic per main bachta hun kuch kehne se ...jaisa aapne kaha ki or author log ignore kar dete hain ,,,bhai main koshish karta hun kabhi kisi or ki baat me na padun aapko agar mera koi udpdate acha lage toh aap kehdo na lage toh khulkar kehdena mujhe bura nahi lagega balki aage or kaam karne or aapke negative ko positive me badalne me mazza aayega ...yeh mera manna hai ...or apna funda saaf hai ...criticism se aapko sikhne ko agar mile toh isse acha kya hoga bhala??per criticism sirf hum apni jhel sakte hain bhai usme jo samne hai nahi uska kya kar sakte hain ...toh plz dusre ki baat se mujhe dur rakhna bhai baaki mujhe jitna criticize karo chalega ...

Bhai aap sach main mahan ho yaar yeh Dil se keh Raha hoon Bhai logon Ka pehchan Hume bhi hai
or Bhai Sorry mere comment ke liya
Bhai aap jesa Dost main khona Nahi Chahta

 

[Rohit1988]

Update please

 

[Ashu1345]

bhai baat yahan moral ki thi hi nahi aapne pucha tha toh bata diya ki koi ek person bhi agar isse sahi samjhega ya kisi or ko samjha sakega toh yeh moral apni jagah maine uske liye likha tha ...or baat rahi ego ki toh bhai yahan ka koi bhi regular friend yeh aapko khud bata dega ki main ego jaisi cheez per khud ko dur rakh leta hun ego or humra 36 ka nahi 66 ka aankda hai...bhai ek baar khud sochna konsa writer chahega ki uska regular reader dost silent reader ban jaye ya story per naa aaye ulta hum toh chahte hain ki har silent reader bhi regular reader ki tarah reaction de kahani me koi kami lage toh khulkar kahe per yahan kami jo aapne kahi maine bhi maan li socha tha moral se kisi ek ko bhi sahi path mil sake toh acha hoga per aapne toh is baat ko hi ego samjh liya bhai ...

nahi bhai aisa nahi hai yeh baat ego ki kabhi thi hi nahi or maine kabhi koshish ki hai kabhi kisi bhi reader ko offend feel ho warna har kisi ko reply nahi deta ...per aap is baat per bhi ego ya kuch or le aaoge toh bhai apne ko har reader se judna acha lagta hai ..isme ego jaisa kuch nahi hai ...insaan hun jab jaisa feel karta hun waisa likhta hun ...apne ko toh critism ki habbit hai ...usme naya kuch nahi hai ...per iske chalte aap ise ego na samjho kahani aap sabke liye likh raha hun ...

or yahan main thoda greedy hun apne har dost ko lekar (main reader ko dost hi manta hun) main kisi ko silent nahi choadna chahta ache se pado or enjoy karo bhai ...kahani aap sab ke liye hai ...jahan lage moral bore kar rahe hain thoda skip kardena ..kahani real life se inspire hai toh jab jo samjh me aata hai likh deta hun usme aapko agar moral laga toh sorry bhai per . jab jaisi feeling ho or waisa na likhun toh woh bemaani hoga ...jo sahi nahi hai ...
i believe also in u ...u also get my point ...and i also believe that ur more smart person then u show ur self...u also think about my side & also feel into putt ur feet into my shoes when u can understand what was my adject point on that time..

kahani per sath bane rahena ...

bade bhai kaise ho
Sorry yrrr thoda shedule busy chal rha hai isliye thoda silent ho gya waise bhi comment kr ke mtlb nhi kyuki ye story hi aisi ki kami niklane layak kuch nhi hai jub upd6 padta hu speachless ho jata hu
Ab rahi baat ego ki to bhai ego har bande me hota hai mere me bhi hai app me bhi hai
But har koi bina mtlb ka dikhata nhi
Main Krishna bhagwan ko follow krta hu to mujhe Santi (Santi bole to wo wali Santi nhi silence wala Santi) jyada pasnd hai jaha tk main janta hu writer ko bhi yahi pasnd hai to ego ki baat na ho to achaa hai baki Bhai ye story ke top list me hai or bade bhai Kanu ki entry kro jldi

 

[Narayan14]

Waiting

 

[Pappu roy]

Intzaar nahi ho raha hi bhai
Updated please Bhai

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Update

bas kuch der main kar raha hun update ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Ham to aapke kayal hai aap aage badhe vaha bhi ham aapke sath khare dikhege aap likhte rahe ham aapka picha karte rahege
Aap aapne hisab se likhe bass usme mashala thora kam sakhe hame chatpata pasand par abhi Corona ka time hai to hajme ki bhi parvah Karni parti hai

dil se thanks bhai aapko ...mujhe piche chalne se jada sath me rehnewale bhai jada ache lagte hain ...or aage akele badne ka kya faida jab sapke sathi dost hi piche reh jayen toh bhai ...agar main aage badunga toh mera har dost mere sath chahiye mujhe ache se samjh lo chahe lalchi kaho ya kuch or per akele manzil per hone ka kya faida jab sathi sath na ho toh sath chalne ki aadat daal lo dost ...
kyuki hum jara manmoji insaan hain ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

bahut aachee update hai last mai suspense rakhna bhi aachaa idea raha

bas sab aapse hi sikh raha hun guru ji...bas aapke samne hum kuch nahi hain...?????
bas apni nazar banye rakhna aap ..taki kahin aapke is fan se kahin koi chuk na ho paye ...??????

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Bhai waiting for update

bas bhai kuch der or sabko reply kar dun uske baad update hi post kar rha hun...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Ok bhai

Mitti dalo is baat p.. Let's continue Story.. Wait rahega next update ka

bas kuch der me post hi kar raha hun bhai...