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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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Recap..


Sofia mann me “ yeh sab kya hai humare gang me yeh chaar loog kaafi time se the per aaj inka yun murder kuch toh gadbad hai …iska pata jald lagana hoga …kyuki business me boss ko gussa dilana sahi nahi hai ..or yeh toh joker gang (joker mask gang ko joker gang bhi kehte hain)ke sath humari bhi bezzati hai kyuki joker gang humara trademark hai …so kon hai jisne boss ke logon se panga liya hai ???”…..sofia soch me gum thi per uski samjh me kuch nahi aa raha tha …pershaan hokar change karke swimsuit me aayi or woh apne bungalow ke swim pool section me jakar stress free hone ke liye us me kud gayi ..or swimming karne lagi .. ..



Ab Aage.....



Manu ne or heena ke bich me raste bhar koi baat nahi hui …per heena ne raste bhar ache se enjoy kiya manu ka dhyaan sirf driving per tha per heena ka dhyaan sirf manu per tha ..usne aaj 2 saal baad manu ko dekha tha …per jaise usne socha tha manu ab or handsome ho chuka tha …per manu apne dimaag me soch raha tha …ki shahid ne use 2 saal baad pehchana nahi …per heena kya pata who bhi use koi or samjh le …” yeh khayal aate hi manu ne bike side me rok li …heena din chipne ke baad se bas manu ko dekh rahi thi …per dono ke bich me ek khamoshi thi …per heena ne jaise hi bike ruki uska dhyaan tuta …per usne kuch kaha nahi …

Manu ne bike ko road ke side me laga liya tha …uske dimaag me heena ko lekar kuch sawal the ..per shuru kahan se kare use samjh nahi aa raha tha …

Heena ne abhi take k lafz nahi kaha tha …heena ko chup dekhkar manu ne hi kaha heena se ..

Manu ..” hi main rocky yaad hai na …??”

Heena ..” ji aapko jaanti hun main ache se …per uske liye raste me bike rokne ki jarorat kya hui ???

Manu ..” asal me kuch sawal hain jo aapse puchne hain ???”

Heena ..” sawal toh aap ghar jakar bhi puch sakte hain uske liye raste me rukne ki jarorat kya hai ???” heena ne hairani se pucha ..

Manu …” jarorat hai …kya aapke ghar per main apni purani dost se baat kar sakta hun ??”

Heena manu ke muh se dost sunkar hazaar baar kudne jaise hui per uske chehre ki laali or sharam ke sath uske bartaav ne use rok liya …bas apne me simat kar sirf muskura di ..

Manu “ aapne isse pehle kuch alag sa mehsoos kiya mera matlab hai …koi aapka picha kar rha ho ya aisa kuch ??”

Heena ..” nahi aisa toh kabhi hua nahi per aapne aisa kyun pucha ???”

Manu ..” nahi bas aise hi …acha jo yahan hua use aap apne ghar per shahid se na kehna …mera matlab aap samjh rahi hain na …jitna kam shahid ko pata lagega use aapki life utni sukun me hogi …or aage bhi aap is baat ka dhayan rakhna ki …aap aage bhi safe rahen ..”manu ne heena ko samjhate hue kaha …

Heena ne bhi ache bache ki tarah sirf sar hila diya …

Manu ne use bike per bethne ko kaha or jab who bethi toh bike ko wapas road per dauda diya …heena toh jaise Khushi me naach rahi thi ki manu uski safety ko lekar kitna sajag hai …

Per manu mann me soch raha tha …” heena ko bachne ka matlab saaf hai who group ko pata chal jana ki unka koi dushman hai …or yeh baat ab lambi jaa sakti hai …”

Khair manu ne bike ko race di toh heena ne unbalance hone ko hui toh usne man uke khandhe ko pakad liya …manu ne piche dekha or sorry kaha …per heena ne bhi badle me use pakadne ke liye sorry kaha …

Manu “ sorry ki jarurat nahi hai dosti me chalta hai …ab thoda mujhe ya bike thoda kaskar pakad lo kyunki time jada hone laga hai or rasta kaafi hai …”

Heena ne bike ko pakdne ki jagah manu ko pakad liya ..heena ko bhala itne din baad mauka mila tha apne rocky ke sath hone ka bhala bejaan bike ko pakadna use kaise major hota ..usne manu ke bolne ke baad turant hi manu ke kamar se hath nikal kar uske pet ke irad gird pakad liya manu ke kamar me aapne ubhaar gada diye …manu ko uske ubhar kamar per lagte hi ek jhataka sa laga ..kyuki ab use is ubhaar ka asli matlab samjh aa chuka tha …per raste me time or raat ke aane ke chalte uska dhayaan sirf raste per tha …per heena ka dil janta tha …ki manu ke jism se aati mardani Khushbu or uska kasa hua jism kaise heena ko behka raha tha ….uske ubharon me uski nipple kadak ho chuki thi …jo man uke kamar me ache se apni mojoodagi bata rahi thi …per manu ne ab koi reaction nahi diya …or bike ki raftaar bada di …

Bike ki rafter se bhagne ke baad bhi manu or heena ko koi ½ ghanta laga gaya apne ghar aate hue …manu ne town me aate hi bike ko roka or guru ji ko call kiya taaki pata chal sake ki shahid kahan hai …toh guru ji ne bataya ki heena ka call aane ke baad hi shahid apne ghar jaa chuka hai …so manu ne heena ko dekha or usse uska pata pucha …heena ne use pata bata diya ..

Or manu ne bhi uske ghar kea age bike laga di …shahid toh jaise apne ghar ke chatt per hi betha dekh raha tha …usne dur se hi aate hue dekh liya …dono jaise hi gate per knock karne ko hue toh shahid ne gate open kar diya or heena ko apne seene se lag aliya uske aansoo nikalne lage same haal heena ka bhi tha …manu ne dekha yeh dono toh gate per hi rone lage the ..so usne dono ko toka or under chalne ko kaha …

Dono ne uski baat ka matlab samjha or under chal diye …manu ne khud hi gate band kiya …ab aap ise azeeb mano ya manu ka charm ki jo gali raat ghirne se sunsaan ho jaati thi ..woh achanak se manu ko dekhte hi bharne jaise thi ,,,,kyuki ek wajah thi heena ….haan heena ek aisi ladki thi jo na aaj tak kisi ladke ke sath dekhi gayi thi or na hi who raat me ghar se bahar akele jaya karti thi …ameeron me is baat ka matlab jada bada nahi hota ..per kisi chote ilake me ladki kiske sath aa rahi hai or jaa rahi hai isme ladki ke gharwaloon se jada padosiyoon ko dilchaspi hoti hai …

Or manu jaisa handsome ladka raat ghirne per kisi ladki ko apni bike per lekar aaye toh iska matlab padosiyoon ko baat karne ke liye topic de dena …manu ne isi ke chalte heena or shahid ko gate se hataya tha …

Shahid or heena ab rokar normal ho chuke the …shahid utha or manu ke gale laga or thanks kehne laga …

Manu ne apni aadat ke mutabik use thanks kehne se roka ..or chalne ki izazat maangi …is per shahid ne use kamse kam chai pine ko kaha …manu ne heena ko dekha uski aakhon me bhi ek iltza thi chai pikar jaane ki so manu ne bhi haan kaha …uske haan kehte hi heena furti se uthi or kitchen me chali gayi ..

Shahid” bhai kaise sukariya ada karun tumhara har baar jab mujhe koi jariya nazar nahi aata tum saamne kisi farishte ki tarah aa jaate ho madad ke liye or badle me kabhi thanks bhi nahi lete ho yeh baa tachi nahi hai ???” shahid ne finaly narazgi jatate hue kaha ..

Manu ne shanti se mukurakar kaha “ shahid agar gair maano toh beshaq sukriya kar dena main use kubul kar lunga ..per ek baat kahunga maine aapko kabhi gair nahi samjha so ..apno me sukriya thoda acha nahi lagta mujhe ..phir bhi agar aap chaho toh sukriya keh do main samjh lunga main aapka apna nahi gair hun”

Shahid ..” fariste aise hi hote hain pal me apna bana lete hain …acha baba ab sukriya nahi kahunga bas tum gair mat manna hume …kyuki yeh badi saza hogi ki tum jaisa saksh hume gair mane toh ..hhaahah!”

Manu “ bas bhi karo ..yaar kitna formality karoge …acha ek baat suno dhyaan se ???” manu ne kitchen ko dekhte hue kaha jahan heena apne me bussy thi ..uski baat per shahid bhi dhayan dene laga ..

Manu “ dekho heena se jada puch tach na karna ..kyuki usne aaj bahut kuch saha hai ..or saha toh aapne bhi hai ..per kya karen hum mardon ko har haal me mazboot rehna padta hai ..per ek baat ka ho sake toh dhyaan rakhna ..ki heena jitna ho sake kam se kam bahar jaaye ..or agar uske sath koi na koi ho toh jada acha ..hoga ..aap samjh rahe ho na ..???”

Shahid is baat per samjida ho chuka tha ..use manu ki baat samjh aa rahi thi ..”shahid “ haan rocky main samjh raha hun per kya karun main bhi kaam kaazi insaan hun..or heena bhi abhi pad rahi hai ..per main bhi kya kar sakta hun …use akela choadna meri marzi se jada meri mazboori hai …aakhir hum dono hain toh akele hi na …”

Manu “ toh bhai nikaah kar lo usme konsi badi baat hai …kamse kam aapki biwi toh ghar rahegi na apke bahar rehne per or heena bhi akeli nahi rahegi …problem solve ..toh kar daalo nikaah jald se jald..”

Shahid .” rocky kaisi baat karte ho aamijaan ka yeh sapna tha..ki heena ka nikah mujhse pehle ho ..or main bhi yahi chahta hun ..ki heena ka nikah mujhse pehle ho ..verna yaar sab ulta ho jayega ..”

Kya ulta ho jeyga ???” heena ne chai ke sath kai plate ek sath haath me pakad rakhi thi …

Shahid uthne ko hua ..per manu uske uthne se pehle hi heena ke hath se plate lekar table per rakh chuka tha …

Heena “ sahi toh keh rahe hain yeh bhaijaan ab aapko nikah kar hi lena chahiye …kam se kam mujh garib ko toh chain milega rasoi se dekho …kaise nanhi si jaan aapke us khawab ke chalte garami me har roz teeno time jalti hai ..” heena ne bhi maze lete hue kaha …shahid bhi ache se samjh chuka tha ki uska matlab kya hai ..

Shahid ..” suchi me itna jalna padta hai shezaadi sahiba ko haye hum toh bekaar me hi khud ko badshaah samjhne lage the …??”

Heena “ bhaijaan aapko nazar hi nahi aata per agar kalko mujhe kuch hogaya toh …phir mere bhaijaan ka kya hoga yeh sawal toh mujhe jehnnam me bhi chain se rehne nahi dega …bhaijaan aaj maine ….”heena ka dil aaj ki baat ko lekar rone hi wala tha ..per manu ne use bich me hi rok diya …

Manu “ bas bahut hua heena bhi apni jagah sahi hai …toh shahid ab yeh final hua kia ap nikah kar rahe hain or naa ka sawal hi nahi utha ..or agar na kiya toh samjh lunga ki aapko heena ki or meri koi parvaah nahi hai …so tayaar ho jao …nikah ke liye ..”

Shahid “ yaar heena kit oh Mazak karne ki aadat hai ..per tum bhi agar jor doge toh kaise chalega …or khabardaar jo tumne khud ko gair maan tum toh apno se bhi apne ho hum dono ke liye ..”shahid ne heena ko dekhte hue kaha ..jisper heena bhi uska ishara samjh gayi or saram se apni Aankhen jhuka li usne ..

Manu …” toh thik hai tay raha …ki ab aap nikah kar rahe ho kyu sahi hai na heena …isme tum mere sath ho ??..” manu ne Khushi se heena ki taraf hath badate hue kaha ..

Heena ko bhala kya aitraaz hota usne toh furan manu ka hath tham kiya or sar hilakar haan kaha uski muskurahat dekhne layak thi shahid bhi heena ko khush dekhkar bahut khush tha …manu ke hathon me heena ka hath dekhar uska dil bhi khush tha ..

Heena mann me “ aap sirf sath ki baat kar rahe ho main toh pata nahi kabse aapke sath hun or humesha rahungi sirf aapke sath ..meri rooh ke malik heena sirf aapki hai….. hay kitne haq se aaj aapne mera hath thama hai ..” heena ke armaan jaagne lage the ..uski ankhoon me manu ke liye dunia bhar ka pyaar simat aaya tha…per manu sirf shahid se baat karne me laga hua tha…heena ne manu ka hath abhi tak thaam rakha tha …

Shahid ache se dekh raha tha heena ki aankhon me manu ke liye bepanaah mohbbat per isse anjaan manu sirf shahid per dhayan lagye tha ..

Manu ko bhi aab azeeb lag raha tha ki heena ne kaafi der se uska hath thaam rakha tha …or who bhi shahid ke samne ..ab manu ko uncomfortable lag raha tha …shahid or heena toh normal the …

Manu ne ab heena se hath chudane ki koshish ki per heena ne nahi choda …shahid ne aise me call aane ka bahana kiya ..or nikal gaya …

Manu “ heena ji haath choad bhi dijye ab …”

Heena “ aap hi toh sath maanga tha …badi jaldi sath bhi chudane lage aap toh ??”

Manu “ heena baad sath ki hui thi hath ki nahi or sath bina hath thame bhi diya jaa sakta hai …” heena ne is per manu ka hath choad diya …

Heena ne topic badlte hue “ acha toh aapne yeh Ehsaan or acha kiya ki bhaijaan ko nikah ke liye mana liya …verna itne time se main thak gayi thi per bhaijaan ne haan nahi ki …per aap ke kehte toh bhaijaan ne furan haan keh di thanks “

Manu “ isme thanks ki jarorat nahi yeh abhi ke liye jarori hai so jo sahi laga keh diya “ manu mann me “ kyuki ab ho sakta hai tension bad jaye per yeh jarori bhi hai …taaki tum or shahid safe rahen shaadi ki wajah se kuch time tak ristedaron ke aanejaane se dono akele nahi rahoge or unko bhi jaldi se bheed ke chalte mauka nahi milega so tum dono hi safe rahoge ..so shahid ko mannana jarori tha.”

Heena “ are aap kahan kho gaye aap sab khairiyat hai na ji …”

Manu “haan acha ab main chalta hun ..”manu ne kaha …

Heena bhi ab kis bahane se rokti who na beshaq thodi der pehle dominate sa kar rahi thi per ab manu ke jaane ko lekar uske dil me dard ki lakir khich gayi….jaise manu toh har roz wahin rukta hoga …per sala dil ko yeh samjhaye ya bataye kon ….manu ka jaana uske muskurate hue chehre ko achanak se sanjida karne ke liye kaafi tha ….

Heena ne manu ko dekha uski aankhon me who ek tadap thi jo kisi ka dil haila de …per manu ne jaise hi heena ki aankhon me dekha use kuch aisa nazar aaya ki jisne manu dekhna nahi chahta tha …per heena kya jaane ….manu ne muh fer liya ….aage kuch hota …usse pehle hi shahid waapas chala aaya ….usne manu ko khade hue dekha or heena ki aankhon ka dard or manu ka andekha karnewala gesture dekhkar shahid kuch kuch samjhne ki koshish karne laga ….usne heena ko dekha heena ki Aankhen bata rahi thi ki manu shayad jaa raha hai …

(Ab aap kahoge ki aankhon se kaise pata chal jata hai …yaar bhai behan hain bachpan se sath hain so kabhi kabhi bina bole bhi loog ek dusre ka matlab samjh jate hain …so isme koi bada science nahi hai ….)

Shahid “ are rocky aise kaise chal diye yaar thoda mauka or do hume baat karte hain ..”

Manu “ sorry shahid …time jada ho chuka hai …ab or jada nahi ruk sakta aapki behan ab aapke pass hifazat se hai …maine apna wada pura kiya so ab izazat den …(heena ko dekhte hue ) khatir ho chuki hai ab mere khayal me chalna behtar hoga ..ok bye …” shahid kuch or kehta per manu ne uske baad palat kar dekha tak nahi …shahid uske piche gaya bhi per manu badi tezi se nikal gaya …shahid hairan tha …rocky urf manu ne aajtak kabhi aisa bartaav nahi kiya tha …per aaj manu kuch alag sa ho chuka tha …shahid jab tak bahar aaya manu ne bike ko lekar gali ke last tak jaa chuka tha …shahid bas use jaate hue dekh raha tha …who wapas ander aaya toh paya heena ro rahi thi …who use chup karwane laga ..

Shahid mann me “ yeh achanak se rocky ko kya hua ..??”

Shahid or heena ab manu je jaane ke baad Dono apne me ek dusre ko sambhal rahe the …


udhar raste me manu bike per mann me …” kyun har baar wahi feeling aane lagti hai…heena ko dekha toh kyun mujhe us Nisha ki yaad aane lagi …kya bigada tha maine Nisha tumhara jo aaj itne saal baad bhi tumhare naam ko yaad aane bhar se mere dil khoon ke aansoo rone lagta hai …maine toh sirf tumse pyaar kiya tha …bina kisi shart ka bina kisi condition ka ek baar , sirf ek baar mujhe bas keh deti ki tumhe koi or pasand hai …kasam se zindagi me tumhare samne tak nahi padta …per yeh dhookha jo tumne diya hai …aaj tak mujhe tumhe kisi har roz need se jagane wale gande sapne sa lagta hai …kyun kiya tumne Nisha …mujhe tumhare naam se hi nafrat hai …aaj us heena me maine tumhari jhalak dekhi …us masoom ko kya maloom usme aaj maine kis bewafaa ko dekha hai …who bhi kya soch rahi hogi …or kya soch raha hoga shahid mere baare me per unko kya pata yeh dil aaj phir usi dard me hai …jis dard ne hanste khelte insaan ka pyaar per se bharosa utha diya …I hate u Nisha …I still hate u …I hate u until my life …cause u give me that curse who still bleed my heart …aaj tak bharosa nahi hota mujhe pyaar ke naam per kisi ladki per …

dil“ chup saale drame baaz agar pyaar nahi hai toh shabnam ki chut me kya karta hai who sab kya hai ..???”

dimaag…”simple hai hawas …who meri trainer thi ..unko bacha chahiye tha ..or jo kuch mujhe sikhya uske liye aajtak ki gurudakshina mangi thi unhone or chudai se pehle hi unhoone samne magalsutra rakh diya toh shaadi bhi ho gayi matlab ab who meri jimmewari hain ….toh isme pyaar kab or kahan se hua ..yeh bata ???yeh toh sirf ek samjhota hai !!…jo shabnam ne bache ke liye mujhse kiya hai isme pyaar kahan hai khud sochna …?? Main phir bhi use pyaar karta hun per ek jimmedari ki tarah kyuki ab uske gale me mere naam ka magalsutra hai ..or shyad aage uski god me bacha bhi ho ..per kya shabnam khud kabhi dunia ke samne yeh maanegi ki who mere bache ki maa hai …shayad nahi ??toh isme pyaar kaise hua yeh toh samjhota hi hua na ???”

khair manu apne dil dimaag se ladta hua ghar gaya …usne dekha aaj ghar per sabhi so chuke the …bada azeeb tha …manu bhi chupchap bhukha hi so gaya …waise bhi Nisha ka naam yaad aate hi uski bhuk toh wahin heena ke ghar me hi mar chuki thi ..



udhar aaj Nisha apne maami ke sath gum rahi thi …toh achanak se uska dil kisi dard ko mehsoos karne laga …use aisa laga jaise ki pata nahi use kitna dukh hai …apne aap hi Nisha ki aankhone se aansoo nikalne lage ….uski maami bhi hairan thi ki Nisha ko achanak se hua kya hai …per Nisha bich park me bench per bethi roti rahi …

uski maami “ Nisha what happen dear why are u crying dear …abhi toh thik thi yeh kya hua ???”

Nisha rote hue “ pata nahi maami ji achanak se mujhe aisa laga jaise kisine dil ko koi saza de di ho …pata nahi kyun apne aap dil rone laga …mujhe toh pata bhi nahi hai ki baat kya hai bas aise lag raha hai …ki mera kuch hissa ro raha hai …” Nisha ki baat sunkar uski maami bhi hairat me thi …

Yeh wahi time tha jab manu raste me Nisha ko yaad kar raha tha …

Khair kuch der me hi Nisha normal hui ..or dono apne ghar chale gaye …



Agle din manu utha toh usne aaj ajay ko apne samne paya …uski aankh aaj thoda der se khuli thi …so time aaj training ka bacha nahi tha …or ajay abhi tracking suit me tha maltab ajay abhi training se lauta tha ….

Ajay “ bhaiya utha jao aaj aap jada der tak sote rahe so maine bhi nahi uthaya …or mummy bata rahi thi ki aapko unhone kai awaz di thi per aap uthe nahi ..so mummy ne bhi aapko sone diya master se jab kaha toh unhoone bhi kaha ki aaj aap rest kar lo …acha bhaiya mera mobile mila aapki ???”

Manu ne kuch nahi kaha uska mobile nikal kar use de diya ajay bhi khush hua thanks kaha manu ne bhi ajay ke sar per pyaar se hath fera or fresh hone chala gaya …or jab naha kar bahar aya toh usne dekha ajay abhi tak samne betha tha …or ajay use dekhkar muskura diya …matlab saaf tha ajay kal ke baare me jaanna chahta tha …

Manu bhi bed per betha or ek lambi saans li or ajay ko dekha jaise puchna chahta ho ..” kya jaanna hai ??”

Ajay “ bhaiya fight nahi puch raha hun bas who heena haan yahi naam tha uska bas who kon hai yeh jaanna hai ??”

Manu “ usse koi do saal pehle mila tha …tumko rocky naam yaad hai na jab meri fight hui thi tab uska bhai shahid usse mulakat huo thi tab uski help master ke through kit hi …or jab Dehradun gaya tha tab raste me pehli baar usse mila tha …tabhi shahid ne usse milvaya tha bas itni hi jaan pehchan hai …or plz isse jada kuch mat puchna thoda kaam hai so aaj bussy rahunga office bhi dekhna hai …”

Ajay “ waise bhaiya ladki achi hai ???”

Manu muskura kar “ haan achi hai per tumhare hisaab se thodi badi hai so kamse kam umar ke hisab se option thoda kam match hai ..”

Ajay “ are bhaiya mere liye nahi ….mera matlab “

Manu “ mujhe der ho rahi hai ajay or sorry I m not interested with any love affectation right now …so please …” manu ne ajay se kaha or tayaar hone laga …

Ajay mann me “ aap kuch bhi kaho bhaiya kuch toh baat hai usme jo uska naam lete hi aap use bachane chale gaye per abhi aapko dekhkar lagta hai …ki aapko jaise uski kya kisi ladki ki parvaah nahi hai ..per koi baat nahi us upperwale ne bhi koi toh aisi ladki banai hogi jo time aane per aapke dil ko pighlakar wapas insaan bana degi …maine aapko dekha hai …kaise aapne family ke liye khud ke chehre or dil ki Khushi ko kurbaan kar diya hai …jaroor koi wajah rahi hogi verna mera bhai kabhi aise act nahi karta …per aapke jaise insaan ko upperwala bhi jada dukh nahi dega dekh lena ….yeh mera vishvash hai …or heena bhi achi lagi mujhe kaise aapko sab kuch manti hai …per phir bhi aapko uski parvaah nahi hai …aakhir wajah kya hai ??? iska pata lagana hoga ”

Manu tyaar hokar ajay ke sar per pyaar se hath firakar apne office nikal gaya ..



Udhar aaj kahin koi aalishan hotel me bade logon ki party thi jisme desh videsh ke kai bade loog aaye hue the …jisme aaj Mr boss ko represent karne ka kaam Miss Sofia ka tha …Sofia bhi apne naam jaise mehak rahi thi …per Mr boss ke naam se jaise bahut se loog uske samne hi nahi padte the …per aaj jisne bhi sofia ko dekha uska dil bahar nikalne ko tyaar tha …kyuki sofia ne aaj ek black long dress pehna tha …jo uske body fitting ko saaf dikha raha tha ..uske janghon se side me ghutne se thoda sa upper uske dress ka cut dekhkar jaise uski naram or kamsin jism ko jisne dekha uska land or dil dono fadak chuka tha..per sofia bhi jaanti thi ki use chune ka matlab hai Mr Boss se panga …or Mr Boss se panga matlab umar ki lakir ka dunia se mitt jana …per kehte hain na ki jab time kharab ho toh dil or kismat dono maze ache se lete hain …


aise hi kisi ek manchale ka dil aaj sofia per aa chuka tha …yeh koi aam insaan nahi ek raees ki aulaad tha ..jiski pahunch ache se ache minister takt hi …ek ubharta hua businessman tha uska naam tha …Rahul Jaiswal apne baap ka sabse bada beta …uska shock bhi raeeso ka shock ki tarah har roz nayi se nayi ladkiyaan chodna tha …uske shock ka pata is baat se chalta tha ki saale ne apne bodyguard ko choadkar jadatar female staff rakha tha …uske baap ka videshon me business badaane se hi fursat nahi thi …who ek sarif insaan tha ..per uska beta mast chudai ka shokin tha har randi jo shayad sheher me famous ho usse kabhi na kabhi jaroor chudi thi …uski khud ki secretary bhi kai baar uski chudai se apna kai baar abortion karva chuki thi …yeh tha Rahul Jaiswal ka intro ..aage aap samjh chuke honge ki rahul kya pasand karta hai ..

Khair jaise hi party me Sofia ki entry hui toh mostly mard use dekhkar niche dekhne lage ya idhar udhar dekhne lage …kyuki sofia ko kisi ko nazar agar chub jaaye toh khud sofia uska hulya bigaad daalti thi …usper Mr Boss ki representative aise me use dekhna matlab khud ke dil ko tadpana kyuki sofia thi hi itni hot ki use dekhkar dil khud bakhud uske figure ko dekhne ke liye mazboor kar deta tha …or sofia ko kehna ya approach karna matlab saanp ki dum per pair rakh dena …

Or aaj yeh kaam kiya Rahul ne samne se aati hui sofia ko dekhkar uska land sofia ke jism ke har kataav ko dekhkar fadakne laga …dil ki pukaar Rahul ne shyaad hi suni ho per …saale ne aaj tak land ki pukaar ko ansuna nahi kiya tha …so Rahul ka dil ab sofia per aa chuka tha …

Yeh party bhi ameeron ki alag hi hoti hai …aaj party ki jagah thi ek 5 star hotel ka terrace yeh koi 15 maale ki building per party thi…

Or sofia ko dekhkar Rahul uske samne aa chuka tha …rahul ko sofia ke samne dekhkar ek aged businessman ne apne sathi se kaha “ sorry jaiswal saab aaj hum bhi bebas hain aaj aapke bete ka shayad time thik nahi hai …jo aaj aag se khelne chal diya hai …sorry jaiswal saab kaash aapne apne bete per sahi time per dhyaan diya hota “” yeh saksh jaiswal yaani Rahul ke baap ka ek dost tha jo janta sab tha per aaj tak jaiswal ke dosti ke chalte kabhi Rahul ko tak tak nahi paya tha …balki ulta uski galti per bacha bolkar use bachta aaya tha …

Sofia ke samne Rahul “ hello gorgeous kaisi ho ???”

Sofia ne apni aankhon ka mehnga gucchi ka glass thoda tiled karke bade style se Rahul ko dekha …rahul ko dekhkar hi pata chal raha tha ki koi bade baap ki raeesi me pali hui aulaad hai so sofia ne bhi Rahul ke rasta Rokne se body-guards ko Rahul ko hatane se roka ..kyuki Mr Boss ki representative ko har time 25 se 30 body-guard hamesha ghere rehte the …aise me Rahul ka samne se approach matlab aa bell mujhe maar ..

Khair sofia kyuki aaj bahut dino baad party me business ke liye aayi thi ..or aate hi apna mood kharab nahi karna chahti thi …so usne sirf ignore kiya …per ise Rahul ki kismat kaho ya bure time ka uski zindagi me aana …saala usne samjha ki sofia usse impress hai …party me mostly person bhi hairan the ki sofia jo samne se mardon ki nazar tak nahi dekhna chahti per aaj usne samne se Rahul ko jinda choad diya …

Rahul ka ek hum umar sathi “ wah mere sher aaj tune toh kya hath maara hai dekha maine jise aaj tak samne se dekhne ki zurrat kisi ne na ki aaj use tune samne se kitna keh daala main such me aaj tujhe maan gaya mere yaar …” Rahul uski baat per seena fula kar choda ho chuka tha …

Saala har jagah insaan ki gand marwane wale me se aise hi kisi chadane wale kamine ka hath hota hai …

Rahul ander se bahut khush tha …per uski secretary ka kai baar mutt nikalne jaise haal tha …us ladke ke jaate hi usne Rahul ko warn karna chaha..

Secretary “ Rahul sir please aap sofia mam se dur rehna meri ya kisi or ki baat alag hai ..hum toh phir bhi apni wajah se aapke niche pad jate hain per sofia mam matlab mardon ki dushman aap meri baat maano please usse dur rehna ..kyuki aap humare malik hain ..” uski baat sunkar Rahul ko aisa laga jaise thodi der pehle who tarif karne wala jhuntha tha ….bole toh Rahul ne is baat ko apni mardangi per le liya ki sofia usse bhaav nahi degi…

Rahul “ tum bas dekhti jaao aaj farm-house per tumhari gand ke sath is Hasina ka bhi aaj mazza sath lunga …”

Secretary apne dimag me “ saale chutiye main toh paison ke kami ke chalte teri se chudti hun ..per sofia toh aag hai jise mard jaat se hi nafrat hai uske sath chudai ka sapna matlab mout ke sath panja ladana …ek mailk ko agah karna mera kaam tha aage teri kismat …haan bade sir ko inform kar deti hun verna yeh chutiya chut ke chakkar me kahin apni zindagi na haar jaye …”

Usne Rahul ko dekha jo phir se sofia ke samne jaa raha tha …fatfat usne apne bade malik matlab Rahul ke baap ko call kiya per Rahul ki kismat uska number sirf ring ho raha tha …per answer nahi …

Sofia apne body-guards se ghiri ek table per apni secretary Neha Saxena ke sath bethi thi …neha ne Rahul ko aate dekha …sofia ko ishara kiya dekhne ko …

Rahul ko uske body-guard ne rok liya tha …per sofia ne use aane dene ko kaha …Rahul uske samne bade style se aaya or uske samne bade andaaz se hello kiya …

Sofia “ haan kya baat hai dekho jo tum chahte ho main who nahi hun …so kahin or try karo …” sofia ne saaf saaf Rahul ko keh diya …

Rahul ne Neha ko dekha Neha koi 18 saal ki hasin ladki thi jo anath thi use sofia ne hi sahara diya tha …or uski padai ko rukne ke baad bhi shuru karwaya …Neha ke liye sofia hi sab kuch thi …badle me neha bhi sofia ki har jarorat per uske sath hoti thi …neha din me apni classes attend karti or classes ke baad who full time sofia ke sath rehti thi …sofia bhi use kisi choti behan jaisa treat karti thi …kyuki akeli life me dono ladkiyaan sath me thi…or neha janti thi ki sofia upper se chahe kitni bhi sakht ho per neha ki jarorat ho toh sofia bina kuch kahe uski zarorat samjh jaati thi… neha dekhne me achi khasi sundar ladki thi …sofia ki tarah angrezi gori nahi per rang saaf or tikhe nain naksh or uska katil figure 34c 24 36 or 5.8” ka kad kisi ka bhi dil machal de per neha bechari ache se jaanti thi ki loog kaise use dekhte hain toh who mostly fully coverup kapde pehna karti thi jaise formal butt some loosens (dheele pants jisme figure ka pata na chale ) ….so yeh tha Neha Saxena ka Intro…

Rahul ne jab sofia se direct suna toh usne Neha Ko dekha …Sofia” Neha inko zara inki History bata do ..”

Neha apna chasma jo uske padte time humesha laga rehta tha ..thik kiya …

Neha “ yeh hain mr Rahul jaiswal ..jo apne pita Mr jaiswal ke sabse bade bete hain inka blood group ab- hai or jinhoone MBA kiya hai or yeh ek baar 12th me fail ho chuke hain …inka aaj tak koi 45 ladkiyoon ke sath chakkar raha hai …jisme se 19th ladki ne inko na-mard tak keh diya tha …inke back per left side 3 till hain or jinko cats se allergy hai ..or yeh Chinese food pasand karte hain..per jada masale se inka pet aksar kharaab ho jata hai …or “sofia ne hath uthakar Neha ko rok diya ..verna neha or kuch naya bata deti ..

Rahul hairan tha uske gand ke niche tak ke till or uske 19th ladki ke na-mard kehne wali baat toh uske baap tak ko nahi pata per neha or sofia ne uski sare aam dhjjiyaan udda daali thi…rahul bas yahan wahan dekh raha tha …neha ne jitna tez or uche lehze me kaha tha so adhiktar logon ne suna tha …per sofia ke chalte sab muh dabaye hans rahe the …per Rahul ne ise bezzati samjha or sofia ko gusse se dekha ..sofia ne use ignore maar diya ..

Rahul ne neha ko dekha gusse se sofia chasma niche jhukte hue or upper phir se sahi se lagate hue …

Sofia “ sochna bhi mat Mr Rahul Jaiswal hum apne logon ke liye jaan dena or jaan lena ache se jaante hain …agar tumne nazar bhi Neha per uthai toh uske baad …samjhdaar ho “ sofia ne baat adhuri choad di per uska adhura matlab saaf tha …

Rahul gusse me pair patakte hue chal diya …aise me jahan sab hans rahe the …per sofia shant thi …aise me Rahul jab body-guard ke pass se guzara toh unme se kisi ne Rahul ke gand ko dekhkar kaha “ teen tilli “ or sab hasne lage matlab tha Rahul ke teen till…

Rahul sivay gusse me dekhne ke kuch kar nahi sakta tha ..wapas apni secretary ke pass aaya or muft ki drink khinchne laga …

Rahul ne ek sath gusse me kai peg Chadha liye the …aisi bezzati uski aajtak nahi hui thi …so gusse me mehgi kadwi whiskey bhi uska gala or dimaag ko aram nahi de pa rahi thi …

Rahul per nasha haavi tha …samne se sofia ab rest-room ki taraf bad chali thi…secretary ne rokna chaha ..

Rahul “ choad mujhe behanki lodi samjhti kya hai yeh sofia khud ko aaj ise apne land ke niche nahi liya toh Rahul naam nahi mera ..”

Uski secretary “sir kismat or mat ghiso …kismat bhi aakhir kab tak sath degi ..aap jo soch rahe ho who sahi nahi hai meri baat maano or yahan se chalo …jaan hai toh jahan hai …aap chaho toh main or kisi ladki ko arrange kar dungi per yahan kuch mat karna please ..”

Rahul kahan sunta uski yeh baat nashe or bezzati ne uska dimaag or sochne ki halaat badal di thi …use sirf badala dikh raha tha ….

Secretary rahul ko jaate hue dekhkar uske baap ko lagatar call kar rahi thi jo answer nahi ho raha tha ..”kehte hain geedadh (coyote ) ki maut aati hai toh who shehar ki taraf jata hai …aaj dekh bhi liya “

Sofia ke piche who bhi nashe me guss gaya rest-room me kyuki us time neha ke sath the body-guards or neha is time is party me sofia ko aage kya karna hai usme lagi hui thi …or uske kaam me bussy hote hi sofia bathroom me akeli chali aayi thi …

Rahul ne nashe me dekha who ek unisex restroom tha (unisex means mens & females both used )..rahul ne dekha wahan koi nahi tha …kyuki bahar party chal rahi thi …so mostly loog usi me bussy bhi the …so Rahul ne har door ko check kiya wahan sirf ek door close tha …

Rahul ne usper knock kiya …” hey use another one this is occupied “kisi ki awaaz aayi …

Rahul muskura pada. Kyuki yeh awaz thi sofia ki …Rahul ne niche dekha …har gate ke niche half door cut tha jaisa mostly comman washroom me rakha jata hai …taaki agar ander koi ho toh pata chal sake …waise toh 5 star hotels or high society area’s me washroom ke door mostly full hote hain …per yahan shayad terrace ke chalte hoga …

Khair jo bhi ho Rahul ne fir knock kiya ..”thak !!! thak !!!

Sofia “ hey I already said this is bussy so who ever u just search another one …?”

Per knock lagatar hota raha ..per uske baad sofia ne jawab nahi diya ….

Toh Rahul niche saaf farsh per leta or half door se under niche se under sarak gaya ..per under uske soch se alag scene tha …

Sofia western seat per aram se bethi hui cigarette pi rahi thi…jaise hi usne Rahul ko dekha use koi hairat nahi thi …jaise use pata tha Rahul aisa kuch karega …per Rahul ander aaya toh sofia ne bade style se uske muh per dhuan fenka …

Rahul ko khaansi aa gayi who bhi smoker tha ..per abhi nashe me tha …sofia ne uske land ke upper pent ke chain area per apni lambi pencil heel ko rakhkar daba diya …or araam se kash per kash lene lagi ..

Rahul ka dard ke maare bura haal tha … use aisa lag raha tha uske aandoon me ched ho gaya jaise …sofia ne bade style se Rahul ko door open karke thokar marker bahar kar diya or bahar aakar us cigarette ko zamin per fekkar kuchal diya or hath dhone lagi …rahul abhi tak dard me tha …sofia ne use phir se ignore kar diya or bahar jaane lagi …per Rahul ne ab use kaskar piche se under apne seene se laga liya …

Sofia “ bahut hua jada mat uddo Mr Rahul verna …”

Rahul “ verna kya behan ki lodi …tu hai kya bas ek chut or chut ka kaam hai land ko khush karna ..per tu toh aise dikhati hai jaise mard insaan hi nahi hain …saali aaj main tujhe mard ki takat dikha dunga …”Rahul ne gusse se kaha ..per darne ki bajaye hairani ki baat ..



Hihhiiiiiii!!! Nice joke “ sofia hans rahi thi …usne abhi tak Rahul se chutne ki koshish nahi kit hi …

Rahul ne uske chuchi ko chune ki koshish ki …per sofia ne uske hath ko pakda or apne kandhe ke upper se ek slam de diya …hindi me bole toh ek dhobi pachad de diya …rahul zamin per phir se gira hua tha …sofia ne is baar Rahul ko uske main part se pakad liya ….bole toh uska land or aand apne hath me pakad liya or use usi tarah liye restroom se bahar aayi ….

Rahul ka dard ke mare bura haal tha …or jabse sofia ne uske land or aand ko pakad liya tha uske nashe ka aata pata nahi tha …dard me nasha ud chuka tha …

Sofia or Rahul ko aise dekhkar party me ek khamoshi cha chuki thi kyuki mostly loog andaza laga chuke the …body-guard aage aane ko hue per sofia ne sar hila diya unhe rukne ke liye ishara tha …

Rahul “ madarchod choad mujhe saali to take ki chinal choad mere ko saali mujhse panga leti hai “ rahul dard me tha per akad kam nahi hui thi …

Neha dheere se “ yeh gaya kaam se “ neha apne kaam me lag gayi …

Sofia ne Rahul ko ek dhakka diya or phir zameen per tha Rahul …saala chalne me shyaad hi kabhi itna geera ho Rahul pe…per aaj sofia na jaane kitni baar use zamin per gira chuki thi …

Sofia ne chutki bajayi “ click!!!!” ki awaz aayi …

Body-guard “ yes Mam”

Sofia “ naked him “ or body -guard wapas gaya …or saare lag gaye rahul ko nanga karne me kuch der me Rahul bhari party me nanga tha ….

Rahul ab sharminda tha …hota bhi kaise nahi har koi yaahan use jaanta tha …per yeh sab use pehle sochna chahiye tha …

Uski secretary ne sofia ke pair thaam liye “ mam please unko maaf lar dijiye …bahut ho chuka hai …”

Sofia “ dekho maafi ka sawal nahi banta …isko teen baar already ignore kar diya per har baar isne ulta mujhe hi target kiya …or jada maaf kiya toh meri self-respect ki value nahi bachegi …tum khud ek ladki ho kya tum khud bathroom me door ke niche se koi aa jaye tab bhi use maaf kar sakti ho …nahi sorry my dear now no more option …mere boss ka order hai …jo galti kare use saza di jaati hai …or jab galti per saza milti hai so…yeh konsa special hai “ sofia ne saaf kar diya us secretary ko …

Sofia khud uthi or …usne pass me dinner set se knife liya ….or Rahul ke pass gayi or use knife dikha kar …

Sofia “ so Mr Rahul ab tumko pata chala kaisa feel hota hai bina kapde ke,,,teen baar tumko chance diya ignore karna hi meri warning thi per it’s ur bad luck ki tum samjhe nahi …or tumko maaf main karne waali nahi kyuki tumko maaf karna matlab agla Rahul tyaar kar dena ..jo meri aadat nahi hai …so time to move on..”

Rahul darr chuka tha ki ab hoga kiya ….per thodi der me use pata chal gaya …sofia ne uske lode per knife mara …per yeh sala koi sharp knife nahi tha dinner knife tha ..so land kaise kat jata per haan thoda cut lga chuka tha …rahul ka dard ke mare bura haal tha …

Sofia ne apne hath ko apne sar per maara “ ohh ! shit how I forgotten that it’s a dinner knife ..”

Sofia ne body-guard ko dekha jaise uske body-guard ko pata tha …usne apna army type ka Rambo knife fenk diya sofia ki taraf…sofia ne use hawa me catch kiya or pehle wale dinner knife ko fenk diya …

Sofia ne fir se us Rambo knife ko use kiya or ek waar me khaacchhhhhh!! Ke sath Rahul ka land uske jism se alag ho chuka tha …uske jism se khoon zamin per fel chuka tha …uski who secretary Rahul ke katte land ko dekhkar behosh ho chuki thi who gir padi uske hath se mobile gir chuka tha …

Rahul dard me chilla raha tha …kai loog ise dekhkar darr chuke the kai ulti kar chuke the …kisi ne sofia ko itna pehle kuch karte dekha nahi tha ..per aaj sofia ne Rahul ka haal or gender change kar diya tha …

Sofia ne phir se chutki bajayi …or body-guard uske samne tha usko sofia ne kuch kaha …

Uske baad uske body-guard ne Rahul ko apne hathon me utha liya or 15 maale chatt ke corner per le gaye …

Rahul “ aaahhh! Mera sab kuch toh khatam kar diya ab jaan bhi loge meri ???”

Sofia jo ab Rahul ke samne aa chuki thi “ so sorry Mr Rahul kyuki ab aapka menhood bacha nahi so ab aapko bina gender ke jeena acha na lage …u need to thank me ki ab aapko is nakli life se freedom bhi sath me mil jayega ..”

Rahul” matlab loda kaat kar bhi tera guroor kam nahi hua haramjaadi behan ki lodi, madarchod ,,ek baar tu mujhe choad de phir dikhta hun saali kutte tak se tujhe chudwa dunga …aahhhh!”

Sofia “ how sad haan kutte ki zarorat hogi ab kyuki tum toh adami bache nahi …per sorry now time over …”sofia ne ek kick mari or



Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Ki awaz aayi uska matlab tha Rahul us 15ve maale se niche gir chuka tha sofia ki kick se ….

Sofia piche turn hui …thoda zor se boli ”well ladies and gentlemen’s please enjoy ur party ..or haan jise jo karna hai kar sakta hai …filmi warning dena aadaat nahi hai meri …u better know if u done something …I’ll also done after ur something have nice day …”

Or jaate hue sofia ke body-guard ne ek badne ko jo shayad chupke se kisi ko call kar raha tha use shot kar diya …

Or sofia apne sathiyoon ke sath party se chali gayi uske jaate hi us secretary ko hosh aaya …toh usne paya uska mobile ring ho raha hai us mobile per kisi ka call aa raha tha …

Screen per naam flash ho raha tha ……….. MR. Jaiswal …!
:hint:
Nice update bhai
 

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First toh aap ko Dil se Sukriya Jo aap ne apna kimiti wakt Nikal Kai hum logon Ka comment padhte ho
Or Bhai hum se kya sikhna Bhai Jo Lagta hai hum wohi Bolte Hain
Baki jitna din se main story read ker Raha hoon yeh story Mera sab se pasandida kahaniyon main se ek hai
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Sayad aage Jake Kuch chota mota kosis Kar sakoon is forum per ?
Bhai Bhai maine sub notice kiya Sofia mr. Boss ki secretary hai or mr. Boss may be iss story ke villan ho but jaisa Sofia ka character hai sayad aage chal kr usse manu psnd aa jaye
Dr. Zeus bhai we are eagerly waiting for today's update.
Nice update bhai
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Recap..

Or sofia apne sathiyoon ke sath party se chali gayi uske jaate hi us secretary ko hosh aaya …toh usne paya uska mobile ring ho raha hai us mobile per kisi ka call aa raha tha …

Screen per naam flash ho raha tha ……….. MR. Jaiswal …!


Ab Aage.....



Kuch din se manu apne ghar me ek anokha scene dekh raha tha …uske ghar me ek alag sa mahool ban gaya tha …ek alag si khamoshi or yeh khamoshi jaane kya rang lane wali thi …khamoshi jo aajkal Rajinder or Sumitra ke bich se hoti hui saare ghar me apna rang dikha rahi thi …dono ke bich me pehle se hi kai baton ko lekar kuch man mitav ho chuka tha …chahe who jaichand ho ya uska susralwale Rajinder ke liye ghar per kabze ka plan ho …chahe who jai-chand ki saali ka Rajinder ke kharide naye makan me rehna ho kai aisi batain thi jinke chalte kai baar Rajinder or Sumitra me kaha suni hui thi ….per uska asar pehle kabhi pure ghar ko apne zad me nahi laya tha …per is baar kuch toh aisa tha jisne pure ghar me ek alag si khamoshi la di thi….

Ghar ke bade agar pareshan ho toh chote jaane anjaane usse effected hote hai ..chahe kam ya jaada per hote jaroor hain …kyuki ghar ka matlab ek makan se nahi ghar ka matlab usme rehne wale har insaan se hota hai ..chahe who bada ho ya chota …har kisi ka ghar per utna hi haq hota hai jitna kisi bade ka …

Kyuki makan ghar tab banta hai jab usme rehne wale insaan use apne har wish or apne har sapne se use sajate hain ….har kisi ka har emotion hi kisi makan ko ek ghar ki shakal-o-surat deta hai …har kisi ka gussa ho ya har kisi ka khush hona …chahe kisi ek bimaar hona ho ya chahe kisi ka jeeta hua koi chota sa prize har haal me uska effect pure ghar per hota hai ….aise me yeh kehna sahi hoga ki ghar usme rehne wale har insaan se har baar har tarah se prabhavit hota hai ….or ab bhi ho raha tha ….rajinder or Sumitra ek bich ek alag si khamoshi cha chuki thi …jo jaane ya anjaane me pure ghar ko effect kar rahi thi …ajay ne kai baar jaanne ki koshish ki per har baar har baar Sumitra ne ajay ko yeh kehkar taal diya ki “ koi baat nahi hai aisa kyun laga use …baat sirf time jada ghar pe na de pane ki hai or kuch nahi …” ajay samjh chuka tha ki Sumitra jada kuch batane wali nahi or Rajinder toh waise bhi sakht tha ..usse puchna matlab time bekaar karna ….ajay ne uske baad kuch nahi pucha tha …ajay bhi ab bacha toh raha nahi tha …so ghar me yeh khamoshi use bhi dikh rahi thi per bade apne baton se choton ko dur kar dete hain…per unke bich ki koi bhi baat pure ghar per asar daalti hai …yeh baat fact hai …or aisa hi is case me bhi ho raha tha…bade beshaq apni baton se bachoon ko dur rakhne ki koshish me lage hue the ..per asar toh ho chuka tha …chahe kam ya jada per asar tha jaroor …manu toh pehle din se yeh khamoshi mehsoos kar chuka tha per badon ke bich me bolna uske sanskaar nahi the …per pichle kai din se yeh anjaani khamoshi ghar me apni jagah bana chuki thi..

Ajay ne manu ko bata diya tha ki ghar me uski sumitra se kya baat hui thi …or manu is baat ka andesha pehle hi laga chuka tha …ki baat uske maa-baap me kuch hui hai …usne socha baat hai khatam ho jayegi …per yeh kab hogi uske pass bhi iska jawab nahi tha ..

Manu apne business me jahan nayi unchaiyan chu raha tha aajkal … uska restaurant aajkal munafe me chal raha tha or us paise ko usne stock market me invest kiya tha …jiska return bhi acha nahi …chapper fadke hua …jiske baad manu soch me tha aage karna kya hai ..

Manu office me betha tha …ki jass ki entry hui ..manu apni soch me gum tha ..

Jass mann me

“ E dil mat ho bekarar itna ..milti hai chahat dunia me jaroor..


Agar suchi mohbbat agar ho..toh milta bhi hai humsafar bhi jaroor..”


Hay kahan aap dunia me khoye hain …aapke liye toh main hasnkar mar bhi jaun toh gum nahi ..bas ek baar sirf khawhish itni hai …ki aapko meri chahat bas kubul ho jaye ..dunia me bahut se loog hain jo jass ko pasand karte honge ..per jass ke dil, jigar , or uski aatma per sirf ek hi naam likha hai Maanav Singh sirf Maanav mera manu …Love u manu “

Manu ne chonk kar jass ko dekha “ hi jass sorry mujhe laga tumne kuch kaha hai ..sorry maine dhyaan nahi diya ..kaisi ho aao na betho…” samne chair per ishara karte hue kaha manu ne ..

Jass badbadte hue muh niche karke “ kitni baar toh keh chuki hun dil me ki I Love u per samne se kehna ek ladki ke liye ..uff kaise keh dun ki jass koi dunia me kuch bhata nahi hai aapke siva ..” manu ko jada sunai nahi diya per use laga jass ne kuch kaha hai ..

Manu” jass agar thoda sa jor se kehdogi toh shayad sun lun or kuch kar bhi sakhun ??”

Jass “ nahi kuch khaas nahi per aap kuch soch rahe the sorry aapko disturb kiya ho toh ??” mann me “madad kaisi ab toh sirf aap hi ho …or aapke siva koi or kuch kar nahi sakta love u ….”

Manu “ come on kaisi baat karti ho jass tum lagta hai bhul gayi dost pehle ho tum meri aisa sochna bhi nahi bas thoda soch raha tha ..yeh paisa jo profit ka hai uska invest kaise or kahan karun ??”

Jass “ usme sochne jaisa kya hai ???”

Manu “matlab”

Jass manu ke chair ke pass jakar computer me dekhte hue “ simple hai paise ko kaam per laga do who khud ba khud apna return back karega …”

Manu muskurate hue …” jass my dear who toh mujhe bhi pata hai per problem who nahi hai problem yeh hai ki kahan ??”

Jass “ ek suggestion hai agar aap suno toh ???”

Manu “ why u being so official …jass remember that we all are here as an family so …please be free “

Jass “ nahi aisa nahi hai ..acha toh suggestion yeh hai ki kuch or restaurant dekhlo aap or state me usse ek toh kaafi logon ki help bhi ho jayegi jaisa aapki devil’s team ka moto hai or sath me kai loog sudhar bhi jayegne samjh gaye na or profit toh aapke samne hi hai or ho sakta hai ek achi food chain bhi aapki ban jaaye “

Manu “ idea acha hai per ek problem hai ??”

Jass “ who kya ???”

Manu “ har jagah mla se ladne ke liye main superman nahi hun ….hahahahahah!!!”

Jass thoda gusse me “ yeh Mazak nahi hai I m dam serious about this ..or haan aap bhale hi superman nahi ho per mere liye kisi superhero se kam bhi nahi ” jass shayad thodi emotional ho chuki thi …

Manu ne jab jass ko emotional hote hue dekha toh use bura laga kyuki jass bahut strong ladki thi jo akele hi life me survive kar rahi thi..or uski achi dost bhi thi …manu apni seat se utha or jass ko apne seene se laga liya … jass bhi aram se simat gayi uske seene me use manu ke seene se lag kar eka lag sa sukun milta tha …manu ka garam jism jass ko dunia ka sabse safe place feel hota tha ..

jahan logon ki nazar uski jawani ko har inch napa karti thi …wahin manu uske sath uske saare kharche uthane ke baad bhi ek dost ke jaisa feel karwata tha ..manu har pal koshish karta tha ki jass ko dunia me akela pan feel na ho or who har haal me safe rahe …or iska asar jass per hua bhi tha ..jass such me manu ke ass pass safe feel karti thi ..or jab kabhi use manu gale lagata who pal jass ke liye dunia ka sabse khushnuma pal hota tha …isliye kabhi kabhi jass jaankar bhi manu ke samne kuch aisa feel karwadeti thi manu ko ki jass abhi emotionally weak ho gayi hai …manu toh gale lagne me jass ko emotionally support karta tha per jass kai baar support ke naam per manu se chipkne ko ache se feel kar jaati thi …

(Manu ki intention galat nahi thi …per jass ki galti kehna bhi sahi nahi hoga …aap jise pyaar karte ho uske pass rehna or uske sath beetne wala har pal aapke liye kitna eham hota hai yeh toh koi pyaar karne wala ya aapki life ka sabse important person hi aapko bata sakta hai …or jass ki life me rishte ke naam per ab sirf manu hi tha uska sab kuch or aise me agar use pyaar hua bhi toh use galat kahun ya sahi mere liye use judge karna sahi nahi hai yeh decision aap per choad raha hun aage faisla aapka hai jass sahi hai ya galat yeh aap decide kar sakte hain)

Jass aajkal manu ko jab bhi seene se lagti thi uska khud ka seena thos ho jata tha …uske nipple hard ho jaate the ..or kyuki height ka difference tha ..or manu jass ko hug karta toh manu jass ko uske back per hath rub karke safe feel karwane ki koshish karta tha ..safe kitna feel karti hogi jass yeh toh pata nahi per chadti jawani me ek jawan or handsome ladke ke hath uske kamar ko chute hi uska asar jass ki jaanghon ke bich me uski anchui chut me hota uski chut aajkal paani chodne lagi thi ,,,or manu ke seene se lagte hi uska pura jism garam feel karta tha ..jisme uski anchui chuchiyaan ho ya uski kasi hui solid gand jinko dekhkar koi bhi use chune ke liye pagala jaye …



per manu ka intention aisa nahi tha …per use kya pata jass emotional hone ke naam per aajkal manu ko ache se feel karti thi …jass ka jism bhi aab garam hone laga tha …manu uske kamar per hath fer raha tha …jass ki chuchiyan tight ho chuki thi …uske nipple bhi hard ho chuke the …per sports bra pehnne ki wajah se uske hard ho chuke nipple manu ko mehsoos nahi ho rahe the ..jass ki saanse thodi bhaari ho chuki thi ..per manu uske back ko ragad raha tha …jass ki chut ab paani baha chuki thi thodi “ jass ka ab garmi se bura haal tha ..per jass janti thi agar who normal hui toh manu usse alag ho jayega …jo aise me use manjoor nahi tha …jass ne bhi manu ko kaskar apne seene se laga liya tha …uski chuchiyan manu ke mazboot seene me pis rahi thi or hilne se uski chuchi thodi ragad bhi rahi thi …or uska asar uski chuchi se hota hua uski chut per ho raha tha …paani bahut nikal raha tha …manu phir bhi use apne seene se lagye khada uske back ko rub kar raha tha …or jass bhi manu ko or kas rahi thi or thodi ragdai se jass ke muh se ek siski nikali ……sssssshhhhhh aaahhhh!

Or isi ke sath jass ki life ka pehla orgasm hua jo use manu se mil chuka tha … jass ke paani jab nikala toh uske aanhkon kea age kuch pal ka andhera cha gaya …agar who manu ke seene se nahi lagi hoti toh shayad gir jaati kyuki uski taange ab kaamp rahi thi …or kuch pal uske jism ne kuch jhatake khaye …manu ne bhi mehsoos kiya ki jass kuch kaamp si rahi hai …who toh bhala ho us apron ka jo jass ne dress ke samne pehn rakha tha ..verna uski dress ki pant jhanghon se puri gili ho chuki thi …per apron hone ki wajah se gilapan nahi dikh raha tha …jass ke jism ke jhatke dekkar manu ne jass ko alag kiya …jass ki Aankhen band thi orgasm ke chalte toh ..manu ko laga shayad jass ki tabiyat thik nahi hai …use jass ki fikar hone lagi …

Manu ne jass ko office me mojood sofe per lita diya or uske sar per hath rakhkar check karne laga …jass bhi sab dekh rahi thi …manu ko jass ki chinta karte dekh use manu per bahut pyaar aaya ..or jabse orgasm ke baad usne Aankhen kholkar manu ko dekha tha ..uske dil me manu ke liye chahat or jada bad chuki thi …manu uski care me laga hua tha ..jass bhi manu ko khud ke kiye care karte dekhkar khush thi …kamse kam koi toh uska apna use mehsoos ho raha tha …manu ne anjaane me hi sahi orgasm dila diya tha jass ko ..or aisa taar ched diya tha ki jass ke dil me manu ka naam ab amar ho chuka tha …

Manu ne jass ko pani pilya ..jass bhi uthkar beth gayi ..or manu ko kaha who ab normal hai ..manu ne use furan seene se laga liya…jass bhi simat kar uske seene me lipati chali gayi..

Manu “ pata hai main kitna darr gaya tha mujhe kitni fikra ho rahi thi ..tum thik toh ho na..??”jass ko seene se lagaye manu ne kaha ..

Jass “ haan main thik hun jaan kar acha laga ki is dunia me meri fikra karne wala bhi koi hai ..”

Manu ne uske sar per hath mara “ stupid dost ho meri or sochna bhi nahi jab tak dunia me main hun tum akeli nahi ho ..yeh baat ache se samjh lo ..or agar main nahi raha toh baat or hai …”

Jass rote hue ..” upperwala kare tumko meri bhi umar lag jaye …tum ho main hum tumhare bina mera toh wajood bhi nahi ..so aisa kabhi mat kehna ki tumhe kuch ho jaye aisa agar hua toh ek baar mud kar dekhna piche piche main bhi milungi …tumhare sath wahan bhi har haal me rahungi so mujhse picha chudana asaan nahi bachooo..keh deti hun”

Manu ne uske aansoo puche use laga ek dost ki tarah jass ne kaha hai ..per jass ka matlab kuch or hi tha ..uski chahat manu ke liye har pal bad rahi thi ..us per manu ka caring nature jass chahkar bhi nahi bhul paati thi manu ko ..

Manu “ acha baba I M sorry galti hui …per please tum rona nahi kyuki mujhe meri mazboot dost pasand hai rondun ladki nahi …yeh jass nahi hai …”

Jass “ toh tum rulate hi kyun ho ??? tumko pata hai mere pass tumhare alava hai hi kon per phir bhi filmi dialogue marne hai tumko hato ab “ manu se tunkkar jass alag hui ..or bathroom chali gayi …manu bhi hairan sa dekhta reh gaya ..ki jass kaise kab pal me kitne emotion badal rahi hai…

Jass bathroom me ghusi or usne apni dress se apron or apni pent utari …jass ne dekha uski puri jhanghe gili ho chuki thi itna paani baha diya tha uski chut ne ..uski puri panty chut ke samne ke hisse se bheegi hui thi or itni bheegi thi ki agar chaho toh nichod lo ..jass ne jaise hi panty ko dekha uske gore gaal sharam se laal ho chuke the ..muh se sirf itna nikal “ mera hero “ usne apni geeli panty ko utaar kar apne ko saaf kiya or us panty ko ache se sambhal kar rakh liya …or bina panty ke baaki dress pehnkar bahar aayi ..

Manu dekh raha tha jass ko per ab jass ke chahre per sharm ke bhaav the …manu ne bhi jada baat nahi khichi ..or baad me dono me yeh tay hua ki manu ab business me or paisa jo profit ka hai use or restaurant lega sath me stock market me continuously investing jaari rakhega ..jass ko manu ne account or baki kaam de diya jo naye restaurant ke liye tha …or guru bhai per location or land ke liye har jarori baat ki jimmewari de di …or khud chal diya aaj aapne ghar ki oor …



Manu aaj thoda jaldi ghar aa raha tha shaam ka 4.30 ka time tha …raste me usne dekha uske papa Rajinder ki bike rajini ke ghar ke samne khadi thi …

Manu hairaan tha ki time se pehle Rajinder ki bike or who bhi rajini ke ghar ke bahar kaise or kyun khadi hai ??

Rajini ke bache bahar hi khel rahe the ..bache maltab uski teeno ladkiyan sonal tina or mala teeno ghar ke bahar thi ..

manu sochne laga azeeb baat hai …”uska baap rajinder rajini ke ghar me hai ..or bache bahar ..or anil ka time toh abhi duty ka hoga toh aise me rajini or Rajinder kar kya rahe hain under or who bhi akele ..??”

manu ne dekha ki sonam or tina kisi khel me mala ko wahin choadkar kahin or chali gayin …or kyuki sonam or tina badi thi or manu unse kuch puchta toh pakka who is baat ko apni maa rajini se keh deti per mala sabse choti thi so manu ne mala se puchne ka socha

manu ne rajini ki sabse choti beti mala se pucha “ are mala tum bahar kya kar rahi ho ??

mala “ bhaiyaa who na mummy ne hume bahar bhaga diya hai ..uncle jab bhi aate hain mummy hume bahar bhaga deti hain ..or kehti hain ki tum bahar khelo ..mera toh bahar mann bhi nahi lagta …”

manu ne mala ko chocolate di jisse mala khush ho gayi ..per manu ne use kuch or baatain jaani jo sunkar uski hairani or bad chuki thi …manu mala ko chocolate dekar thoda dur chala gaya or wahan apni bike laga kar usne wapas rajini ke ghar ka rukh kiya …

rajini ki gate se jaane ke bjaye manu ne uske ghar ke piche ka raste ka rukh kiya …manu ghar ke piche ek choti si gali me chala gaya …rajini ka ghar mostly company ka diya single story ghar tha …jisme samne se ek hall or uske sath hi joint bedroom tha ….kitchen ke naam per rajini ne hall me hi gas connection liya tha …per saali rajini ko chori se taar daal kar gas ki jagah heter per khana banane me jada maza aata tha ….kyuki ab last uska husband that oh ek guard hi or company ke diye room me kya soch sakte hain aap…

piche ki ek window thi jissse agar koi ander dekhe toh pure ghar ka haal dikhta tha sirf bedroom ko choadkar kyuki bedroom kea age parda laga tha or gate company ne lagwaya nahi or gate company ke diye ghar me lagwana rajini ke liye thik bhi nahi tha …ya jo uski soch nahi thi …

khair manu ne piche ki window se dekha window per rajini ne macharoon ke liye newpaper lagye the jo garmiyoon me machar se jaan bachate the kyuki window badi thi …or usper jaali lagi thi …

manu ne ander dekha toh kuch nazar nahi aya…usne jeb se bike ki key li or window me newpaper me hole kar diya …or kyuki us gali me andhera rehta tha …toh shayad hi pata chale ki usme ched hua ho …

manu ne us ched per nazar laga di …ander dekha ki rajini blouse or petticoat me chai bana rahi thi heter per ….niche beth kar or samne ek chair per uske samne Rajinder betha uski chai ka wait kar raha tha ..

chai ka wait toh bahana tha manu ne dekha uska baap rajini ke jism ko ache se naap tol raha tha …or sabse azeeb baat rajini bhi araam se maze lete hue chai bana rahi thi …manu pehle se jaanta tha rajini apne ghar me mostly blouse or petticoat me rehti thi …jo usne bhi dekha tha per apne khud ke baap ke samne matlab ek paraye mard ke samne yun is tarah rajini ko dekhna or who bhi koi or nahi …khud uska baap Rajinder …manu ke liye azeeb tha ..

manu hairan tha …aisa nahi tha ki under ke haal per use yakin nahi ho raha tha …per Rajinder ka pure kapdon me hona or rajini ka is haal me who bhi full make-up ke sath hona manu ko kuch khatak raha tha …usnea age dekhne ka socha ..

rajini or Rajinder me abhi tak formality thi …per rajini ka jism Rajinder ko apni taraf lalcha raha tha …Rajinder bhi kya kare that oh mard hi na …samne se agar khud chut aakar kahe ki aa chod mujhe toh Rajinder kya kare ???

manu ne notice kiya …ki Rajinder phir bhi chori se rajini ke chuchi ko ghur raha tha ..per jab rajini ne dekha ki Rajinder uski chuchi ko dekh raha hai …usne halke se apna hath chuchi se khujali ke bahane laga diya …rajinder ka haal thoda azeeb ho chuka tha ….

Rajini yahin nahi ruki …usne halke se apna petticoat upper kiya or pindli tak utha liya garami ke naam per …rajinder ke pent me bane tamboo per rajini or manu dono ki nazar thi… per Rajinder ne khud ko control kiya …or isi bich rajini ne petticoat me halke se hath daalkar ….jaangh ko khuja liya …..manu ko side se uski green color ki panty dikh gayi…or samne se Rajinder bhi use ache se dekh chuka tha …uske muh se nikalte pasine or pent ke tamboo ko dekhkar koi bhi bata deta ki Rajinder per rajini ki har harkat kitni bajili gira rahi thi …or kaise Bechara khud ko control kiye tha ..

Rajini…” are manu ke papa aapko toh pasine aa rahe hain lagta hai aapko bhi garmi lag rahi hai …maaf karna gas khatam ho gayi hai …or heter per kaam karna majburi hai..” gas koi khatam nahi hui thi bas use toh Rajinder ko bottal me uttarna tha …

Rajinder pasina puchte hue “ koi baat nahi sonam ki mummy kya kare har garib aadmi ka yahi haal hai …yeh sab toh chalta rehga per kaam toh batao mujhe aapne ek hafte pehle bola tha kaam hai …per itne din se sirf bol rahi ho kaam kya hai ab bata bhi do bache aane wale honge ghar pe …”

Rajini “ manu ke papa kaam toh hai or who kaam sirf aap hi kar sakte ho …aapke siva koi nahi …bas sahi time ka intzaar hai sahi time per keh dungi …or aapko dikkat kya hair oz aapko sirf ghar hi toh jana hota hai ..wahan milta hi kon hoga bachoon ke alawa …sumitra toh kaam per rehti hai ..use toh aapki chinta bhi nahi dekho na kaise aap duble ho chuke hain…” rajini ne uthkar Rajinder ke pet ko hath lagte hue kaha…

Rajinder ne use khud se dur kiya ..” sonam ki mummy thik toh hun or waise bhi Sumitra se mujhe koi shikayat nahi hai ..usne saari umar mera sath diya hai …aaj bhi de rahi hai …yeh aapse jada main jaanta hun ..” Rajinder ne do tuk jawab de diya rajini ko …

Rajini asani se haar mane wali nahi thi …” are manu ke papa aap toh naraz ho gaye mera who matlab nahi tha …ab khud socho aapki biwi ..bahar rehti hai …or time se aapko khana bhi nahi de paati …or aap mujhe garib ko hi galat soch rahe ho …dekho anil Sumitra ko behan manta hai us hisaab se mera bhi toh aapse Rishta hu ana ..phir bhi aap mujhe hi suna rahe ho ..” chai dete hue rajini ne apni pasine ki bonde jo uski chuchi ki ghati tak jaa rahi thi ..use puchte hue kaha …

Rajinder kuch kehna chahta tha per samne dudh se bani chai or mast gol chuchi dekhkar Rajinder ke muh se nikali laar dekhar manu chonk gaya tha …

Rajinder ko tease karne rajini koi kasar nahi choad rahi thi …chahe jaan bhujkar Rajinder ke pass jana ho ya …uske samne pasine ko puchne ke bahane chuchi masalna ho ya petticoat ko hawa ke naam per upper uthana ho rajini ka har waar satik ho raha tha …rajinder ka haal bata raha tha ..ki rajini bas ek baar keh de toh Rajinder use kisi kutiya ki taraah rond dalega ..

Manu apne khud ke baap ke aise dekhkar or rajini ki harkaten dekhkar ache se samjh gaya ..ki kahani kahan se shuru hui hai…rajinder ne jaise taise chai khatam ki or ghar nikal gaya …

Rajini use gate tak choadne aayi …or bahar se hi bye ka ishara muskurate hue kar diya kyuki who thi toh blouse or petticoat me hi ..

Rajinder bhi apne khade land ko liye rajini ko baye karte hue bike lekar ghar chala gaya …rajini wapas ghar me us window ke samne thi jiske piche manu abhi tak khada tha ..

Rajini ne us window ke upper ek chota aaina laga rakha tha …rajinder ke jaane ke baad rajini ne apna make-up saaf kiya tezi se …manu sab dekh raha tha …uske or rajini ke bich me sirf ek diwaar or ek jaali ka anter tha agar wahan newpaper nahi lage hote toh manu rajini ko aaram se dikh jata …

Rajini ne aaine me khud ko dekha or badi aada se khud se kaha “ rajini se aaj tak koi bach nahi saka hai …toh Sumitra kaise bach sakti hai …??”

Manu ke rajini ke muh se apni maa ka naam sunte hi kaan khade ho chuke the…bahut saal pehle ki baat abhi tak uske jehan me tazza thi ..use ache se pata tha rajini uske family ke liye kaisi soch rakhti hai ..per ab target uski maa ke sath uska baap bhi ban chuka tha or manu jaana chahta tha ki yeh sab hai kya ..??



Rajini ne phir se aaine me khud ko dekhte hue kaha “ Sumitra dekh aaj tera pati mere is jism ko kaise bhukhe janwar jaise dekh raha tha …ache se pata hai mujhe kyuki tut oh kaam se thaki haari aati hogi or jab kabhi tera pati tujhe hath lagata hoga toh thakan ke chalte kitna sath deti hogi ??? yeh toh koi chutiya bhi jaanta hoga ..per is sab me Rajinder jaldi mere upper hoga or uske land ke paani se mujhe mera ek sapna nahi do sapne ek sath pure hote nazar aa rahe hain …ek mujhe beta mil jayega ..or dusra tera pati chut ke chalte zindagi bhar ke liye mera gulaam ban jayega or barson purna mera badla bhi pura ho jayega …dekh is chut me (rajini ne petticoat uthakar manu dekh raha tha rajini ne panty pe hath rakhke kaha )…jaldi hi tere pati ka land hoga …or tu kuch nahi kar payegi sivaye rone ke …..haaaahhaahahahah!!”

Rajini ki yeh shaitani hansi sunkar manu sab samjh chuka tha …kia age kya hona hai manu apne dimaag me sochte hue ghar aa chuka tha …

Rajini ka sapna ek teer se do shikar ka pura kya ho payega kya …rajinder such me rajini ke upper hoga …or in sabka Sumitra per kya asar hoga …or manu yeh sab jaannne ke baad kya karega…yeh toh kismat or waqt hi bata sakte hain …
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thanks friends's

Yash420 bro bhai jab bhi aap kuch aage llikhoge toh ...yeh nahi kahunga ki sabse pehle main padunga ...kyuki bhai yeh such nahi hoga ...kyuki kuch din me maine dekha hai ..hum chahe bahut se pre-plan kar len per marzi last me upperwale ki chalti hai ...
so bhai itna jaroor kahunga ki har tarah se padunga zaroor or kisi or ka pata nahi per mera support aapko rahega yeh aapke is bhai ka kehna hai ....ek baar shuru karna jaroor jahan aap ko lage helo chahiye hum hain na aapke liye ...har tarah se ...so best of luck dear bro..

Ashu1345 bhai aapko bas khun kya aap bas bemisaal ho ...har baar aapne mujhe laajawab kiya hai ....kahani me bahut kuch hai ...or suspense bekaar karna meri aadat nahi hai ..kyuki usse aapka maza kharab ho jayega ...per itna jaroor kahunga ..ise aap hint maan sakte ho?? insaan ki zindagi me kya dushman sirf ek hi rehta hai kya ...aage aap samjhdaar hain ..'or haan aapki insta ki id window formatting ki wajah se delete ho gayi hai ..plz send me once more kyuki poem aapki sukun deti hai dil ko ...or suna hai naya bhi likha hai aapne ..so best of luck bhai ..

or Sky07 bro i m just post update any minute

Ajay thanks

nilu12 waise suggestion acha hai ! try karunga thanks



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