Akil
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nai kahani ki aapko bahut bahut badhai dostmain koi writer nahi hun per kuch dil main aaye toh likh deta hun dostoon....
aap sabhi ka sath or aapki pasand or na pasand ko dhayaan me rakhkar likne ki koshish karunga,,
kahin koi galti ho toh plz aap sabhi se request hai,,,bata dena or aap sabhi ka suggestion or view batate rahiyega...
or haan story ka yeh plot kaisa laga plz batana zaroor,,,agar pasad aaye toh reply zaroor karna mere liye har ek ka view maayne rakhta hai..
chahe woh story ka silent reader hi kyu na ho...
ek baat or agar aap sabhi ka sath milega toh,har roz koshish karunga ek ya do update dene ki ...baaki sab aapke upper hai..![]()
sarthak v atulye paryash mitrthoda sa pre-face bhi hai as trailer most of story ,,,,aapko agar pasand aaye toh plz batana ,,,aap sabhi ki pasand or na pasand ko consider kiya jayega ,,,,,or sabse zaroori story ka updated aap loogo per nirbhar hai agar aap loogo ko pasand aayi toh kosish karunga har roz ek ya do update dene ki ......
baaki sab aap sabhi per nirbhar hai achi lage toh batana na achi lage toh bhi bindass bata dena....
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parsanshniye shabd bhaiPyaar Nafrat or Kismat …
Kehne ko toh yeh teen shabd ya teen lafz hain, per insaan ki puri dunia in teen shabdoon ke jaal ke irad girad gumti rehti hai.
Pyaar :-- yeh woh lafz hai jo kehne ko dunia ka sabse khubsurat lafz hai, kisi ko agar pyaar hota hai, toh uska bas ek hi sapna hota hai, ki jise woh pyaar kare use uska pyaar mil jaye. Pyaar ke mayne har kisi ke liye alag alag ho sakte hain , jaise kisi ko kisi apne ka hone ka ehsaas pyaar hai,kisi ke liye kisi apne ka hona pyaar hai,kisi ko apne pyaar ko khush rakhna hi pyaar hai.
Ek bache ki kilkari se lekar kisi ke chale jaane tak har insaan pyaar se ghira hua hai,,,
Nafrat :--- yeh woh lafz hai jisi apni alag dunia hai,iski apni ehmiyat hai,ab aap sochenge nafrat se bhala kisi ko kya mil sakta hai , toh jawab aap khud de sakte hai, nafrat woh lafz hai jo har kisi insaan ke andar hota hai,bilkul pyaar ki tarah ,yeh woh lafz hai jo kisi ko kisi se bhi or kahin nhi ho sakta hai,nafrat insaan ko woh takaat deti hai,jiske karan insaan jiwan me kabhi kabhi bahut uchai tak chala jata hai,ya phir dunia ki sabse ghari khaiyoon tak,nafrat aap ko ek competition me jeet ne ke liye ya zindagi me jeetne ki woh takaat de deti hai,jo syaad hi koi desake….
Kismat :--yeh woh lafz hai jiska hona or na hona har insaan ke liye alag maayane rakhta hai,kehte hai kismet insaan ko kuch bhi bana deti hai,,raja ko rank ,or rank ko raja. Kismet har kisi insaan ki zindagi me alag alag tarah se kaam karti hai,kismat ka matlab har insaan ke liye matlab rakhta hai,jahaan koi kismat ko khub kosta hai,toh koi bure se bure hai me bhi apni kismat se pyaar karta hai.kismat ki kahaani bhi azab or gazab hai.yeh sunti hai sabki per karti hai apne mann ki yahaan is dunia se us dunia tak kismat ka khel azab niraala hai,,
Har jagaah kismat ko alag alag tarah se kaha jata hai kisi ke liye jinda bachna kismat hai,toh kisi ke liye sahi mout milna kismat hai,har koi kismat ka dhani hai or har koi kahin na kahin kismat ka maara hai…
Toh yeh hai is kahaani ke who teen shabd jinka is kahaani me ahem kirdaar hogga …
Super fabulous update
Keep posting
Nice update bhai
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Nice update bhai and I have a small request for you, please speed up the details, so that sooner we can see the lady love of mannu. Please बंधु मेरे प्रिय writer ये छोटा सा निवेदन है ।
Nice update bhai
Jaichand ke bare mein jaisa socha tha vesa hi usne kiya but yeh kya naya siyapa pe gya bro uski saali khudki maut mari hai ya......
Vrinda ka lagta story mein aage bhi role hai dekhte hain yeh kya role portray karti hai
Maanu ka chachera chacha ek criminal hai toh kabhi na kabhi uska Maanu se aamanaa samana ho sakta dekhte hain aisi sthiti kabhi aayegi ki nahin
Party mein lagta hai kuch ghotaala hai hunevaala
So nice update bro
Maja hi aa gaya
अति उत्तम अपडेट
Awesome update bro
Aji kamaal kar diya huzoor aapne to
Bhai wah full maza aaya update me
1. Mild deo kis brand ka hai ye btao
2. Bhai sahab kahani me ek aur nyi nayika ki entry kRa hi di aapne.
Aaj ginti ho hi jaye manav singh ki nayikao ki:-
Nisha
Shabnam
Kannu
Jinko bachaya tha ve do ladkiya gundo ki bahan aur sali
Vo ladki jiska operation bhi karaya aur KidnappSe bhi bachaya
Jass
Vrinda
Nita ji (ye to khair maa ke roop me aai hai)
Aane wale samay me sophiya madam Se bhi Mulakat ho hi jaye.
Baki aap dekhlo list ko update karo.
Love you bhaiya ji
Waiting for the next update.
Waiting for next update..........
Aaj update doge ki?
Umda update. Waiting for next update
Awesome updates
Waiting for next update
Waiting bhai
Bhai Maine abhi kafi update padh cuka hi ye story bahut alag aur Achi bhi so aap aise he likhte rahiye
Bhai gajab ki story h Aap ki
waiting for next update
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Waiting bhai
Intejar hai agle update ka
Waiting bhai
Bhai update dedo 3 din ho gaye hai
Intazaar
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Kamaal ki story hai Bhai kya manu ne apni family ke liye security lga rakhi hai apni gair maujudgi me? Jabarjast sandar update bhai
Intazaar
भाई last update ko 6din ho gaye besabri se intzar hai plz update ASAP
Dr. Zeus are you ok or fall ill again. bhai take care of your health and if your are not ill then just inform us about how long we've to wait.
nai kahani ki aapko bahut bahut badhai dost
sarthak v atulye paryash mitr
Waiting bhai
Dr sahab update ka besabri se intjar haa
Dr. Saheb kya aap bhi Manu ke saath Delhi chale gaye? Waiting for next