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Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

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aalu

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Bhai story bahot mahol he bole to fadu..... manu ka kirdar bhi mast fit huva he .riston me emotion, pyar sab kuch sahi ja raha......
Even story ka plot bhi mast he... Aur apna hero Manaav toh aur mahol he....
Per bhai thoda confusing he bhai apne itne londiya dal diye ki sala padne wala banda pura cofuse me chala jata he ,sala ab toh me bhi sochne laga hu aur kitni londiya lawonge, isse story me reader ka maja kir-kira ho raha, sala ek hero 10 wife rakhoge to itna maja bhi nhi aayenga, 1 Hero with 1 Heroin 1 more extra is also good but there is too much londiya in the story.... Is sab se main plot bhi side ho raha he..... Bhai mere hisab se do ladkiya jaise Nisha aur Kanika ye dono rahe to bhi chal jaienga... Baki sab se sex releated relation bhi chal jayenga... Socha bhai thoda.... Thoda main plot pe bhi lawo gadi ko
waise sahi kaha aapne bhai kee jyada jogi mat ujar walli baat na ho jaye, lekin zeus bhai ne kuchh socha hi hoga, nisha aur kanika toh hain hee, ab hina aur jass mein bhi pyar walli feeling hain bhai sach mein kaheen itna jyada hone sekaheen naeensafee na ho jaye, kyunki jab itno ko ek doosre ke baare mein maloom hoga toh kitna hurt hogi nisha, jisne toh sirf pyar hi kiya hain manu se, baaki ne toh thoda wasna wala khel bhi shuru kar diya hain jaise train mein hina aur office mein jas.

pata nahin aap kya karte ho lekin jo bhi hoga aap achha hi karoge.
 

aalu

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bhai ek sawal hain aapne story ko incest tag bhi dala hua hain, toh kya incestuous relationship bhi banengi. bhai explain please.

wasie yeh update bahut jabardast thee, yeh uske saath bilkul sahi hua, koi bhi raham matkarna, kameeni paiso ke liye kisis kee jaan lene pe tuli hui hain, saali agar khud ke bachho kee fikar hain toh khud se kyun nahi mehnat karti hain kisi ko maar ke uska jaydad harapne ke kosis kar rahi ho.

abhi toh lagta hain illaj shuru hi hua hain, jagan-suman naam ke in do cancero ka achhe se chemo hoga.
waise bhai kya suman ko shaq nahin hoga kee ghar mein toh abhi bas do hi mard hain ek uska beta jisse usne khud hi need kee goliya khila dee hain aur dusra manu, jisse dudh pilane ke liye usne rakhha tha, kaheen usne na piya ho.

kyunki aur koi toh ghar mein aa hi nahin shakta hain.
waise kanika ke aane mein abhi kitne updates ka intejar hain bhai, waise ek short entry toh apne karayee thee, ab yeh wahee kanika hain ya koi doosri yeh toh na pata, lekin jaise manu khincha chala gaya tha, lagti toh wahee hain.
episode was awesome bhai, abhi jagan ke bhi gand se khun nikalna baaki hain...
 

Dr. Zeus

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Beautiful update bhai
Buhat acha update tha
Mind Blowing Update Bhai
bahad khubsurat update hai mitr
maa ka dil toh aaina hai bhai
manu v kanu toh nischal prem ki aur agarsar ho rahe hai bachpan se hi
excellent update bhai
aakarshak update hai bhai
damdaar update hai bhai
wonderful update bhai
jordaar update hai bhai
Awesome update bro
Awesome fabulous update
Pahle raat main khata khul gaya h
Keep posting
Super ❤❤❤ dear
Waiting for next update bhai
nice update
Jabardasttt update bhai

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Kamaal ki update... thanks bhai..jaldi update dedo..waiting for next update
waise sahi kaha aapne bhai kee jyada jogi mat ujar walli baat na ho jaye, lekin zeus bhai ne kuchh socha hi hoga, nisha aur kanika toh hain hee, ab hina aur jass mein bhi pyar walli feeling hain bhai sach mein kaheen itna jyada hone sekaheen naeensafee na ho jaye, kyunki jab itno ko ek doosre ke baare mein maloom hoga toh kitna hurt hogi nisha, jisne toh sirf pyar hi kiya hain manu se, baaki ne toh thoda wasna wala khel bhi shuru kar diya hain jaise train mein hina aur office mein jas.

pata nahin aap kya karte ho lekin jo bhi hoga aap achha hi karoge.
bhai ek sawal hain aapne story ko incest tag bhi dala hua hain, toh kya incestuous relationship bhi banengi. bhai explain please.

wasie yeh update bahut jabardast thee, yeh uske saath bilkul sahi hua, koi bhi raham matkarna, kameeni paiso ke liye kisis kee jaan lene pe tuli hui hain, saali agar khud ke bachho kee fikar hain toh khud se kyun nahi mehnat karti hain kisi ko maar ke uska jaydad harapne ke kosis kar rahi ho.

abhi toh lagta hain illaj shuru hi hua hain, jagan-suman naam ke in do cancero ka achhe se chemo hoga.
waise bhai kya suman ko shaq nahin hoga kee ghar mein toh abhi bas do hi mard hain ek uska beta jisse usne khud hi need kee goliya khila dee hain aur dusra manu, jisse dudh pilane ke liye usne rakhha tha, kaheen usne na piya ho.

kyunki aur koi toh ghar mein aa hi nahin shakta hain.
waise kanika ke aane mein abhi kitne updates ka intejar hain bhai, waise ek short entry toh apne karayee thee, ab yeh wahee kanika hain ya koi doosri yeh toh na pata, lekin jaise manu khincha chala gaya tha, lagti toh wahee hain.
episode was awesome bhai, abhi jagan ke bhi gand se khun nikalna baaki hain...
Bhai update dedo pls
Jabardasttt update bhai

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thanks bhai ...

sabse pehle toh apne Nevil singh bhai ka phir se welcome ...pyaare mitra aapko yahan dekhkar phir acha laga ..aapki apni story hai ..jo acha lage woh sab aapko hi samarpit hai ..priye mitra ...:respekt:
haan jahan acha na lage woh meri kami hogi ..priye mitra per itna jaroor kahunga pehli story hai meri so story me jahan likha hai sab ke sujaav se hi prerit hokar likha hai ..haan pehle ke likhne me or ab ke likhne me aapko change mile so mitra isko anytha na lena ..kyuki parivartan sansaar ka niyam hai ...or jahan jo bhaav tha wahan wahi bhaav ko pure ekagra chit se likha hai ..per aapka yahan hona hi humare liye medal saman hai..aapka tahe dil se dhanyavaad ..priye mitra ...:thankyou::bigboss1:


Arjun Singh 72 bhai bade din baad aapko dekha ...such me bada miss kiya tha bhai aapko ...or hain khata toh khola jarori tha kyuki manu ke pass time thoda kam hai or jagan ka chapter lamba karna bhi bore kardega so ..jaldi se jagan & suman ko line per lana hai ..baaki bhai aapke support ke liye tahe dil se bada thanks ...:yippi::thankyou:

aalu bhai aapne pucha ki incest ka tag diya hai toh bhai ...aapko maine pehle bhi kaha tha ..please isko galat way main mat lena ..har tag sochkar hi diya hai ...or isko justifie karna mera kaam hai ...bhai thoda toh yakin rakho aapne is dost per ...:allclear:
khair ab aapka dusra sawal ki suman ko manu per shaq hua ya nahi ...toh bhai aapne bilkul sahi point uthaya hai ...iska jawab bhai is update me dene ka soch tha ..so pehle jawab dekar aapka or baaki ke doston ka mazza kharab nahi karunga ...baaki aapke supoort or pyaar ke liye dil se thanks ...:hide1::thankyou:

Yash420 , Rock~Devir , Lallu , Ajay , darkoxx , Govindsonic Bilal jan and urc4me bhai aap sabhi ko dil se thanks ...:thankyou:
aap sabhi ke liye likh raha hun ..is baar thoda socha hua hai alag se ..baaki aapko intzaar karvana chahta nahi hun ..per kaam ke chalte thoda late karna mazboori hai ...per apni taraf se koshish yahi karta hun ki ..aapke intzaar ko bhi bekar na jaane dun ..so aaj raat ko update post hogi ..thand thodi badh gayi hai ..per update thodi garam hai ...so milte hain raat ko abhi zara update per hi kaam kar leta hun ..aaj thoda chutti per hun so aaj aapke liye likhunga ...baaki ek baar phir se aap sabhi ko thanks ...:thankyou:

thanks for reading & staying with us ....
yours
Dr. Zeus
 

Nevil singh

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thanks bhai ...

sabse pehle toh apne Nevil singh bhai ka phir se welcome ...pyaare mitra aapko yahan dekhkar phir acha laga ..aapki apni story hai ..jo acha lage woh sab aapko hi samarpit hai ..priye mitra ...:respekt:
haan jahan acha na lage woh meri kami hogi ..priye mitra per itna jaroor kahunga pehli story hai meri so story me jahan likha hai sab ke sujaav se hi prerit hokar likha hai ..haan pehle ke likhne me or ab ke likhne me aapko change mile so mitra isko anytha na lena ..kyuki parivartan sansaar ka niyam hai ...or jahan jo bhaav tha wahan wahi bhaav ko pure ekagra chit se likha hai ..per aapka yahan hona hi humare liye medal saman hai..aapka tahe dil se dhanyavaad ..priye mitra ...:thankyou::bigboss1:


Arjun Singh 72 bhai bade din baad aapko dekha ...such me bada miss kiya tha bhai aapko ...or hain khata toh khola jarori tha kyuki manu ke pass time thoda kam hai or jagan ka chapter lamba karna bhi bore kardega so ..jaldi se jagan & suman ko line per lana hai ..baaki bhai aapke support ke liye tahe dil se bada thanks ...:yippi::thankyou:

aalu bhai aapne pucha ki incest ka tag diya hai toh bhai ...aapko maine pehle bhi kaha tha ..please isko galat way main mat lena ..har tag sochkar hi diya hai ...or isko justifie karna mera kaam hai ...bhai thoda toh yakin rakho aapne is dost per ...:allclear:
khair ab aapka dusra sawal ki suman ko manu per shaq hua ya nahi ...toh bhai aapne bilkul sahi point uthaya hai ...iska jawab bhai is update me dene ka soch tha ..so pehle jawab dekar aapka or baaki ke doston ka mazza kharab nahi karunga ...baaki aapke supoort or pyaar ke liye dil se thanks ...:hide1::thankyou:

Yash420 , Rock~Devir , Lallu , Ajay , darkoxx , Govindsonic Bilal jan and urc4me bhai aap sabhi ko dil se thanks ...:thankyou:
aap sabhi ke liye likh raha hun ..is baar thoda socha hua hai alag se ..baaki aapko intzaar karvana chahta nahi hun ..per kaam ke chalte thoda late karna mazboori hai ...per apni taraf se koshish yahi karta hun ki ..aapke intzaar ko bhi bekar na jaane dun ..so aaj raat ko update post hogi ..thand thodi badh gayi hai ..per update thodi garam hai ...so milte hain raat ko abhi zara update per hi kaam kar leta hun ..aaj thoda chutti per hun so aaj aapke liye likhunga ...baaki ek baar phir se aap sabhi ko thanks ...:thankyou:

thanks for reading & staying with us ....
yours
Dr. Zeus
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Janab kaha ho
inteha ho gyi intezar ki
kuchh khabar aai na mere yaar ki
hai yakeen bewafa tum nhi
Jamegi jarur mahfil mere dildar ki.

wait kar rahe hai.
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