Adultery Pyaar Nafrat or Kismat

[Ayush2017]

Awesome update bro

Par apne bachpan ki yaadein jaldi hi khatm kar di. Mujhe laga tha ki ye kam se kam 6 -7 update aur aayege. Jise manu ka characters ko aur achhi tarah samjha ja sakta tha.

Par koi nahi aapne jo bhi kiya soch samjha kar hi kiya hoga.

 

[urc4me]

Waiting for next

 

[WolverineAS]

Hi bhai bahut accha laga apki story padh kar achi story hai...

Waiting for next....

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Waiting for the update

 

[Tiwari_baba]

Are updatewa de do bhai kahe itna late ho

 

[Dr. Zeus]

Awesome update bro

Par apne bachpan ki yaadein jaldi hi khatm kar di. Mujhe laga tha ki ye kam se kam 6 -7 update aur aayege. Jise manu ka characters ko aur achhi tarah samjha ja sakta tha.

Par koi nahi aapne jo bhi kiya soch samjha kar hi kiya hoga.

thanks bro.....

thanks for ur support ....

bro aaj nahi toh kal bada karna hi tha kar diya bhai ...usme koi kuch bhi kahe influence feel nahi kiya ...jo plot tyaar kiya tha usi base per kahani chal rahi hai ....woh toh thoda bussy rehta hun aajkal bro ...nahi toh regular update dekar kahani me bahut kuch or dikha diya hota ...khair aap khud ache writer hain bhai aapki kahani behtareen kahani hai ...aap behtar samjhte hain per aapke hone se bhi himmat milti hai bhai ...thanks dilse thanks


thanks for reading & staying with us ...

 

[Dr. Zeus]

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Hi bhai bahut accha laga apki story padh kar achi story hai...

Waiting for next....

Waiting for the update

Are updatewa de do bhai kahe itna late ho

thanks bro's

thanks for ur support ...dear bro's update hi likh raha hun ...time lagega abhi or ...
pata nahi ashu bhai kahan hai apne gabbar or shambha liye ...???

thanks for reading & staying with us ...

 

[Ashu1345]

thanks bro's

thanks for ur support ...dear bro's update hi likh raha hun ...time lagega abhi or ...
pata nahi ashu bhai kahan hai apne gabbar or shambha liye ...???

thanks for reading & staying with us ...

Sorry bhai thoda busy chal rha hu
Aaj kl DS business se juda hu to time nhi mil pata bus story padhne ka time milta hai bus
Isliye nhi bol pata hu aaj thoda free hu
To bol raha hu
Bhai achaa laga ki apna manu ab bda ho gaya aap jaisa likh rahe hai super hai maza aa raha hai but bhai manu ka kisi or ke sath sex krna kya sahi hoga i mean apne wife ke alwa
Or baki Bhai maine new poem upload kiya hai jra kamiyan usme se bhi bta Dena

 

[Narayan14]

Waiting

 

[Ashu1345]

Ek baat main mere sabhi reader bhai ko bhi bolunga
Bhai pta hai aap sub ko story bahut psnd hai hona bhi chahiye kyuki ye story baki story bahut jyada different hai but bahut se bhaiyo ko pta nhi kya problem hai
Story ka review dena suggestion dena apka hak hai but writer ko force mt kro ya aisa kuch mt kro ki writer dismotivate ho
Or jisko bhi ye story psnd nhi hai wo ja skta hai or writer bhai kis baat ki jldi hai sadi hone wali hai kya apki jo fast forward kr rahe ho bhai suno subki but sirf apni