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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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  • Poll closed .

Ajay

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Aap Delhi aagye aur apni gudiya se bhi nhi milne aaye kya aap mujhse bhi naraaz hai. But maine toh aapko kuch bhi nahi bola thaa. Aur aapse baat bhi karti thi. Aur aapne shaadi bhi karli. Iski saza toh aapko milegi. Jab aap milenge naa tab main aapse bilkul baat nhi karungi. Aur bhabhiyon ko apne paas hi rakhlungi. Waise meri bhabhiyan bahot sundar hai. Aur kya naam bataya tha. Haa Meera aur Ritika. Meri Meera bhabhi aur Ritika bhabhi

Phir Soniya unteeno ki photo apne saath lekar so jaati hai.

Udher Aryan Ritika aur Meera mall se nikal kar ghar aajate hai. Aryan waha se sidha gym mein chala jaata hai apna gussa utarne. Bunglow ke ek kamre mein gym ka samaan bhi tha.

Aryan waha pe sand bag mein punches maarne lagta hai.

Par uska gussa kam nhi hota. Isiliye usne puri taqat se sand bag mein punch maara. Jisse sand bag phatt gaya.

Sand bag phatne ki awaaz sunke Meera aur Ritika daud ke waha aati hai. Woh dekhti hai Aryan abhi bhi gusse mein hai. Woh sidha jaake uske gale lag jaati hai.

Meera aur Ritika ke gale lagte hi usse hosh aata hai usne kya abhi kya kiya. Toh woh bolta hai.

Aryan: Sorry. Par usse dekhte hi mujhe gussa aagyaa. Woh saari baatein ek film ki tarah meri aankho ke saamne ghumne lagi.

Meera: Main jaanti hu. But please shant hojao. Aur baat ko samjho. Ab humhe yaha pata nhi kab tak rehna hai. Hum jab bhi bahar niklenge tab koi na koi tumhe dikh hi jayega.

Ritika: Isiliye tumhe apne gusse ko control karna hogaa. Warna jitni baar tum unhe dekhoge utni baar tumhe gussa aayega. Aur hosakta hai tum gusse mein kuch aisa kardo jo thik nhi. Hosakta hai jiske liye hum yaha aaye hai woh thik se naa ho.

Aryan: Tum thik keh rahi ho. Ab main apne gusse ko control mein rakhungaa.

Meera: Good boy.

Aryan: Tumdono mujhse ek wada karo. Agar kabhi unlogo ne mujhe pehchan liya. Toh woh tumhe bhi jaan lenge. Aur hosakta hai tumhe mujhe lekar Blackmail kare. Toh tumdono unse kisi bhi tarah ki baate yaa humdardi nhi jataogi. Kyoki tumhara dil naram hai. Woh shayad tumhe hi apna chara banaye. Tumdono sirf gudiya se hi baate karogi. Aur kisi se bhi nhi.

Meera: Thik hai hum promise karte hai. Jab tak tum nhi kahoge hum unme se kisi se kisi bhi tarah ka koi bhi rishta nhi rakhenge. Aur naahi unse baat karenge. Sivaay gudiya ke.

Aryan: Chalo ab so jaate hai kal humhe PM office jaana hai unse milne. Woh uss bomb blast wale case se bahot khush hai isiliye kal humsab se milna chahte hai.

Meera: Yeh toh bahot achhi baat hai.

Phir Meera Ritika aur Aryan sone chale jaate hai.

Meera aur Ritika toh Aryan se lipat kar sogayi thi. Par Aryan ki aankho mein neend nhi thi. Aaj itne saal baad usse wapas wohi sab yaad aaraha tha jab uspe jabardasti karne ka jhootha ilzaam laga tha. Aur uski family ne uspe bharosa naa kar uss jhoothi ladki par bharosa kiya thaa aur Aryan se ek apradhi se bhi bhatar saluk kiya thaa.

ARYAN'S FLASHBACK


Jab Kulpandit ne Aryan ka naam karan kiya tha tab uski kundli banate waqt unke chehre ke bhao badale thee. Jisse dekh kar Aryan ke dada ji ne unhe akele mein pucha tha kya baat hai. Tab Kulpandit ne bola thaa.

Kulpandit: Dekhiye aapke pote ka bhavisya bahot hi ujwal hai. Woh bahot hi bhagyashaali hogaa. Woh harchiz mein pratham hoga. Parantu.

[ Relations Aryan ke respect mein ]

Dadaji: Parantu kya Pandit ji.

Kulpandit: Parantu jab yeh 17 varsh ka hogaa. Tab iske jeevan mein aneko dukh aur kast aayenge. Isse atyant hi pidha sehani hogi. Iske parivaar wale bhi iske virudh hojayenge. Isse nafrat karenge. Par aap iska saath kabhi mat choriyega. Humesha iska sahyog kariyegaa. Chahe kuch bhi hojaaye koi iske baare mein kuch bhi kahe par aap ispe hi vishwaas kijiyega.

Dadaji: Parantu aisa kya hogaa.

Kulpandit: Aisa kya hoga yeh toh main nhi jaanta. Par aisa hoga jarur. Aur iske 18 varsh pe mrityu yog hai.

Dadaji: Kyaaaa. Aisa nhi hogaa. Iska koi toh upay hoga.

Kulpandit: Iska koi upay nhi hai. Yeh iske bhagya mein likha hua hai. Agar yeh uss mrityu se bach gaya tab iska jeevan mein koi mrityu yog nhi hai. Uske baad iski umra bahot lambi hogi aur jeevan ujwal hoga.

Iski jeevan sanginiyan isse atyadhik prem karegi. Inka dampatya jeevan bahot hi kalyan may hogaa. Aur jaise maine pahle bhi kaha thaa yeh jisse bhi mohobbat karega usse toot ke mohabbat karegaa par jisse nafrat karega woh iski nafrat aasani se nhi hata payegaa. Chahe woh iska kitna bhi priy kyo naa ho.

Dadaji: Sanginiyann.

Kulpandit: Haaa iske bhagya mein 2 vivah ka yog hai. Aur dono sanginiyan hi isse atyadhik prem karegi inn teeno ke jeevan mein kabhi koi bhadha nhi aayegi.

Dadaji: Main aur mera parivaar isko humesha apne paas hi rakhenge iske saath aisa kuch nhi karenge.

Kulpandit: Nhi aap aisa nhi karenge. Yeh aapke parivaar ki niyati hai. Unhe yeh sehna hi padegaa. Aur isse unhe ek sikh bhi milegi. Agar apno par bharosa naa kar kisi anya par bharosa karenge toh uska kya parinaam hogaa. Aur aapke parivaar mein ek buri prakriti ka vyakti bhi rehta hai jiska nash aapka pota hi karega. Par uska nash karne ke pahle yeh usse aneko awasar degaa. Agar usne uss awasar ka uchit upyog kiya toh uska nash nhi hoga. Warna uska nash nischit hai. Aur woh vyakti kaun hai yeh main nhi bataunga.

Kulpandit: Ji jaisa aap kahe.

Phir kulpandit waha se chale jaate hai.

Dadaji ko toh unhone tension mein daal diya thaa.

Kuch dino baad dadaji apne lawyer se milte hai aur unke naam pe jo property thi woh Aryan ke naam karne ko bolte hai. Kyoki unhone apna business aur baaki property apne dono beto ke naam pe karke ek galti kardi thi. Isikiye unke naam pe jo property thi woh unhone Aryan ke naam kardi thi. Taaki agar uske 17 varsh ke pahle hi unhe kuch hojaaye toh Aryan ko koi problem naa ho.


Idhar Aryan dheere dheere bada horaha thaa aur sabka ladla banta jaaraha thaa. Neha toh usse ek pal ke liye bhi akela nhi chorti. Rashmi toh uske bina ek pal nhi reh sakti thi. Matlab ab pure ghar ka main attension Aryan hi hogya thaa.

Ankit jo thoda bada thaa. Usse lagta tha Aryan ke aane se sab usse bhul gaye hai. Koi usse ab pyaar nhi karta. Sab Aryan ko hi pyaar karte hai. Neha bhi uske paas nhi aati woh bhi harwaqat Aryan ke paas hi rehti hai.

Yehi chiz se Ankit ke man mein Aryan ko leke ek tarah se nafrat paida hogyi thi.

Aryan thoda aur bada hogya tha. Ab woh chalne aur bolne laga thaa.

Aaj Neha ke school ka first day thaa. Aur woh ro rahi thi. School jaane ke darr se nhi Aryan se itni derr durr rahne ki wajah se.

Neha: Mujhe school nhi jaana. Agar main school chali gayi toh mere bhai ka dhayan kaun rakhega. Uske saath khelega kaun. Aur agar usse kuch hogya yaa usse koi le gaya toh. Nhi main school nhi jaungi main apne bhai ke saath hi rahungi.

Rashmi: Neha tumhara bhai ghar mein hi rahegaa aur usse koi kahi nhi le jayegaa aur humlog hai naa humlog uska dhyaan rakhenge aur uske saath khelenge bhi. Usko koi takleef nhi hogi. Aur tum toh abhi thodi der mein aajaogi. Phir toh tumhara bhai tumhare paas hi rahegaa.

Thodi der samjhane ke baad Neha maan toh jaati hai. But beman se hi school jaati hai. Aur school ki chutti hote hi jaldi jaldi ghar aake sidha Aryan ke paas aur agle din school jaane tak uske paas hi thi.

Ab yehi ban gaya tha Neha ka roj ka routine.

Ek din jab Neha school se ghar aayi tab Aryan ghar pe nhi tha yeh dekh woh rone lagti hai.

Rashmi aur Meenakshi hairaan hojaate hai ke aakhir yeh achanak rone kyo lagi.

Rashmi: Kya hua beta tum ro kyo rahi ho. School mein kisi ne kuch kaha kya.

Neha: Mere bhai ko koi le gaya. Woh ghar pe nhi hai. Yeh keh ke aur jor se rone lagti hai.

Meenakshi: Aree Aryan ko tumhare dadaji mandir le gaye hai.

Yeh sunke Neha chup hoti hai.

Phir jab tak Aryan nhi aajata Neha kuch bhi nhi khaati.

Jaise hi Aryan aata hai toh Neha daud ke jaati hai aur uske gale lag ke rone lagti hai.

Neha: Bhai tu kaha chala gaya thaa. Pata mujhe kitni tension hogyi thi.

Aryan: Didi mein toh Dadaji ke saath ghumne gaya thaa.

Neha: Mujhe laga tujhe koi le gaya.

Aryan: Mujhe kaun le jayegaa.

Neha: Aree woh hote hai naa bad uncle. Wohlog.

Phir yeh log khaane khaate hai.

Ussdin ke baad se agar Aryan ko koi kahi legaya hai toh usse Neha ke school se aane pahle wapas aana hogaa.
Phir kuch time baad Aryan bhi school jaane lagta hai. Dono bhai behan saath school jaate. Ankit bhi inke saath hi thaa. Par yeh dono aapas mein hi rehte. Isse Ankit ki nafrat aur badh jaati hai.

Time bitne laga idher Meenakshi ne bhi 2 bachho ko janam diya. Raj aur Soniya.

Ankit ko laga ab yehlog uske saath rahenge. But woh galat saabit hua.

Raj thoda bewakoof sa thaa. Usko jo jaisa bolta woh waisa hi karta. Apna dimaag bilkul use nhi karta.

Soniya woh toh jaise Aryan ki jaan ban gayi thi. Agar kisi ne usko kuch bol diya. Toh Aryan usse baat tak nhi kartaa.

Aise hi ek din Neha ne Soniya ko thoda daant diya thaa. Toh Aryan ne pure 2 din Neha se baat nhi ki. Jisse Neha ki tabiyat bigad gayi.

Aur same aisa Soniya ka bhi thaa agar kisi ne Aryan ko kuch boldiya toh woh usse baat nhi karti.

Yeh dono ek saath hi sote. Soniya ne Aryan ke kamre ko hi apna kamra bana liya thaa.

Isiliye inndono ko pure ghar mein koi kuch nhi bolta thaa.

Aryan ab class 9 mein tha. Tab uske class mein ek nayi ladki ne addmission liya.

Aryan toh usse dekhta hi reh gaya. Uska naam Sheetal thaa.

Aryan usse muh khole dekh raha thaa. Yeh dekh Aryan ke bagal mein baitha ladka usse bolta.

Ladka: Aryan muh band karle warna makkhi ghus jayegi.

Aryan: Rishi yeh ladki kitni khubsoorat hai.


Rishi Mishra- Yeh Aryan ka best friend hai. Yeh log bachpan se saath hai. Yeh Aryan ke bhai jaisa hai. Iske papa ki jewellery ki showroom hai. Isiliye paise ki kami nhi hai. Inndono ka ek dusre ke ghar aana jaana laga hi rehta hai.

Rishi: Aree usse tadna band kar. Woh dekh teacher tujhe hi taad raha hai.

Yeh sunn Aryan usko taadna band kar deta hai. Par phir bhi chup chup ke usko dekh hi raha hai.

Recess mein Aryan apne khayalo mein hi khoya hua tha.

Neha Aryan ko hila ke.

Neha: Bhai kaha khoya hua hai. Kab se tujhe bula rahi hu.

Rishi: Class mein khoya hua hogaa.

Neha: Class mein kyo.

Aryan Rishi ko gusse se ghurta hai.

Aryan: Nhi di woh kya hai naa next period mein Ma'am oral lene wali hai naa toh usi ke baare mein soch raha thaa.

Rishi: Haa kuch jyaada hi khubsoorat topic ka oral hai.

Neha: Khubsoorat topic. Matlab.

Aryan phir se gusse se ghurta hai toh Rishi usko dekh kar muskura deta hai.

Aryan: Haa di woh kya hai naa chapter mein jo poem hai woh bahot hi khubsoorat hai. .

Neha: Oo Achhaa.
Tabhi recess khatam hone ka bell bajta hai.

Neha apni class mein chali jaati hai. Aryan Rishi ko gusse ghurta hue bola.

Aryan: Di ke saamne kya bol raha tha.

Rishi: Main kya bol raha thaa.

Aryan: Abhi batata hu. Yeh bol woh Rishi ko maarne ke liye uthta hai toh Rishi waha se bhag ke sidha class mein chala jaata hai.

Aryan jab class mein aata hai toh Rishi usko dekh kar muskura raha thaa. Phir class start hoti hai. Aryan ka dhyaan padhai ki jagah Sheetal pe thaa.

Phir school ka time over hojaata hai. Aryan ghar aata hai woh sidha apne room mein chala jaati hai. Waha pe jaake woh Sheetal ke khayalo mein kho jaata hai.

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Nevil singh

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Aise hi 1 din aur guzar jaata hai. Uss din news aati hai PM mumbai aarahe hai aur woh CM aur saare ministers se meeting karne wala hai. Usi din raat ko Krish Aryan ko call karta hai.

Krish: Sir mere aadmi ne bataya hai Mike ek aur bomb blast karne wala hai.

Aryan: Kaha pe.

Krish: Sir yeh Mike usi jagah bomb blast karne wala hai jaha PM CM aur saare ministers meeting karne wale hai.

Aryan: Whatttt.

Krish: Yes Sir. Aur yeh blast woh khud karne wala hai.

Aryan: My God. Humhe isse kisi bhi haal mein rokhna hoga. Main Sir se baat karta hu tum saare aadmiyon ko bolo harjagah nazar rakhe.

Krish: Okk Sir.

Aryan Harish Uncle ko call karke PM se baat karne ko kehta hai. Kyoki woh Raw Cheif thee isiliye yeh unke liye koi badi baat nhi thi.

Harish Uncle PM se baat karke plan cancel karwaate hai but Aryan ne yeh baat secret rakhne ko boli thi. Kyoki agar yeh baat leak hojaati toh woh log plan ko execute nhi karte. Aur Aryan chahta thaa ke woh yeh plan execute karne jaaye aur khud hi pakde jaaye.

Aryan ne sabhi ministers CM aur PM ko toh safe kardiya thaa. But woh usi hotel mein same waisa hi ek function arrange karwata hai aur police walo ko nakli ministers CM aur PM banke aane ko bolta hai.

Aryan jaldi se uss bookie ko call karta hai aur usse Mike ka sketch banwata hai.

Bomb Blast ke ek din pahle Aryan ne boldiya tha woh 1 din ghar nhi aayega Ritika aur Meera ko bhi boldiya tha woh bahot busy rahega isiliye baat nhi ho sakegi. Dono ne koi objection nhi kiya aur unko bhi pata tha matter kitna serious hai.

Function wale din Aryan ne subah se hi Radha ko bolke uss hotel ki jaha meeting hone wali thi waha ke CCTV apne control mein le leta hai aur usse aise dikhane ke liye bolta haj jaise sab kuch live chal raha hai. Aur usse bolta hai cameras mein nazar rakhe aur Mike dikhe toh inform kare.

Kuch der baad Mike hotel ke entrance mein nazar aata hai. Usne apna make up kiya hua tha par Raw Agent ki aankho ko chakma nhi de saka. Radha Aryan aur baaki sabko boldeti hai Mike hotel ke entrance mein hai. Aur uske haath mein kuch hai. Radha uski pic leke sabko bhejti hai.

Aryan: Kiran jald se jald iske haath mein jo hai same to same uske jaisa chiz lao aur usme woh nakli bomb rakh ke do. Avinash bomb squad ko ready rahne ko bolo. Aur Krish apne aadmiyon ko bolo jab tak main waha naa jau usko kisi bhi tarah busy rakhe. Aur Mike ke aadmi jo yaha pe honge unko dhundho aur maar do.

Teeno: Okk Sir.

Phir Kiran Jaldi se Mike ke haath mein jo hai thik waisa hi chiz laati hai aur usme ek nakli bomb rakh deti hai.

Aryan apna getup change karta hai aur ek budhha wala getup le leta hai Mike ke paas chala jaata hai.

Krish ke aadmi Mike ko hotel mein ghusne nhi dete hai woh usse hotel ke gate se durr hi rakhte hai kisi na kisi bahane se.

Phir Mike kaise bhi karke hotel mein entry karne wala hota hai tab Aryan jaanmuzz ke usse takra jaata hai aur Mike ke haath se bomb aur apne haath se nakli bomb girwa dete hai.

Mike: Abee budhhe dekh ke chalna.

Aryan: Aree beta tum bhi toh thoda dekh ke chalo. Itni bhi kya jaldi.

Aryan se yeh niche jhuk ke gira hua samaan uthate hue kehta hai. Aryan ne chalaki se asli bomb apne paas rakh leta hai aur nakli bomb Mike ko de deta hai. Mike woh samaan haath mein leke sabse pahle bomb ko check karta hai jo usse thik lagta hai.

Mike: Haa haa chal ab side ho warna abki baar sidha samshan jaayega.

Aryan: Samshan jaaye mere dushman. Aur thoda tameez se baat karo.

Mike: Ayee budhhe dimaag kharab mat kar chal nikal yaha se.

Aryan: Ha ha bhai chale jaate hai. Keede padhe tujhe.
Yeh bol Aryan waha se nikal jaata hai. Aryan jaldi se waha se nikal ke Avinash ke paas jaata hai jisne bomb squad ko ready hi rakha tha. Bomb Squad bomb ko defuse karne ki koshish karta hai.

Bomb Squad: Sir yeh bomb defuse nhi hosakta. Isko issi tarah banaya gaya hai.

Aryan: Whattt. Agar yeh defuse nhi hua toh saari mehnat bekaar hojayegi.

Bomb Squad: Jaanta hu Sir but yeh defuse nhi hosakta. Haa agar isko iske remote ke range se durr karde toh shayad yeh blast naa ho.

Aryan: Iska range kitna hai aur agar yeh blast hota hai iska effect kitne durr tak hoga.

Bomb Squad: Remote range 2 km. Aur agar yeh blast hota hai toh iska effect sirf iss hotel ke 10 m ke area tak hi hoga.

Aryan: Okk. Radha unn nakli ministers ka jo convoy hai unhe call karo aur bolo jab tak main naa kahu hotel ke paas naa aaye.

Radha: Okk Sir.

Aryan: Avinash iss bomb ko aisi jagah le jao jaha agar yeh blast bhi hota hai toh waha koi naa mare.

Avinash: Okkk Sir.

Aryan: Sambhal ke jaana aur bomb ko durr karke mujhe call karna tabhi woh nakli ministers ko hotel mein bulayenge.

Avinash: Okk sir. Phir Avinash uss bomb ke leke nikal jaata hai. Aryan apna getup change kar Mike ke paas jaake baith jaata hai Mike ne bomb toh rakh diya tha par woh Ministers ke aane ka wait kar raha tha.

Kuch 30 mins ke baad Avinash call karke bolta hai usne bomb ko durr kardiya hai aur agar woh blast bhi karta hai toh kisi koi koi nuksaan nhi hoga.

Phir Aryan Radha ko msg karke bolta hai ministers ko andar aane ko bolo.

Kuch 10 mins baad announcement hota hai Ministers aarahe hai. Yeh sunke Mike waha se jaana lagta hai. Aryan bhi uske pichhe pichhe jaane lagta hai. Mike bomb ke range se durr jaake khada hojaata hai.

Usse lag raha hota hai sab kuch uske plan ke hisaab se hi horaha hai. Par usko kya pata thaa Aryan ne uske plan ko bahot pahle fail karwa diya tha. Aur woh ab bas bewakoof ban raha hai.

Idher jaise hi nakli CM PM aur saare ministers aate hai tabhi Aryan Mike ke paas jaake khada hojaata hai.

Aur jab CM PM aur ministers hotel mein jaate hai tabhi Mike bomb ka remote daba deta hai.

Par usko shock tab lagta hai tab koi blast nhi hota. Usne phir se koshish ki. Par kuch nhi hota.

Tabhi Aryan uske kandhe mein haath rakh kar kehta hai tune Black Beast se badla lene ke liye kitne masoom aur begunaah logo ko maara hai aur aaj phir se wohi karna chahta tha. Tujhe iska inaam toh dena hi hogaa Mike.

Mike: Tu. Tu toh wohi hai naa jo mere paas aake baitha tha. Yaani tu hi hai Black Beast jisne mere bhai ko maara. Aur mera pura dhanda band kardiya. Aaj tujhe nhi chorungaa.

Woh Aryan ko marne wala hota hai tabhi pichhe se Kiran ne usko behosh kardiya.

Aryan: Good Job guys. Now everything is fine. Le jao isko main sir ko bol deta hu.

Phir Aryan Harish Uncle ko call lagata hai.

Aryan: Sir mission pura hua. Sab safe hai aur Mike bhi humare kabze mein hai. Aap CM aur PM ko bol de.

Harish Uncle: Good Job Aryan. Well done. Main abhi unko bolta hai.

Phir Aryan waha se nikal kar base chala jaata hai jaha ab tak Mike ko hosh aachuka thaa.

Aryan: Haa toh Mr. Mike the well known member of India's biggest terrorist organization and brother of Undertaker. Sunna hai tum mujhse milna chahte the. Toh batao kyo milna chahte the.

Mike: Tune mere bhai ko maara mera saara dhandha khatam kardiya tujhe toh main nhi chorungaa.

Aryan: Pahli baat tera bhai death to death match mein mara thaa. Agar tujhe apne bhai se itna hi pyaar thaa toh usse waha khelne nhi bhejta. Aur dusra tere saare dhande India aur uske logo ke liye hanikarak the. Isiliye khatam kardiya. Chal ab sidhe sidhe uss group ke baare mein bolega yaa dusra tarika use karu.

Mike: Tu chahe kuch bhi karle. Tu mujhse kuch bhi nahi ugalwa sakta. Main har tarah ke torcher se trained hu. Mere upar koi torcher kaam nhi aayegaa.

Aryan: Chal dekhte hai. Phir uski team usko 2 din tak torcher karti hai but woh kuch nhi bola.

Udher boss ko yeh mission fail ki jaankaari mil chuki thi. Woh Mike ko phone lagata hai. Tab uska phone switch off aata hai. Woh sochta hai uske darr se woh underground hochuka hai. Woh apne aadmiyon ko call karke Mike ka pata lagane ko bolta hai.

Mast update mitr
 

Jaguaar

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Nice update bhai
Thank you
 
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