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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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  • Total voters
    96
  • Poll closed .

Jaguaar

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Update 47
Sheetal yeh sunte hi. Darrse aur rone lagti hai. Aur Rashmi ke pairon mein girr jaati hai..
Sheetal: Please Aunty police ko naa bulaye. Aap mujhe jo chahe saza de par please police ko naa bulaye.
Rashmi: Vikram aapne suna nhi maine kya kaha. Yaa abb aapko iss ghatiya ladki pe reham aaraha hai.
Vikram turant uske maa baap ko waha pe bulata hai.
Thodi der mein uske maa baap aajate hai.
Sheetal ki maa: Kya hua humhe yaha aise kyo bulaya hai. Aur yeh Sheetal aise ro kyo rahi hai. Kahi aapke uss neech bete ne phir koi harqat toh nhi kardi mere beti ke saath.
Yeh sunte hi Neha aur Rashmi ka paara chadd gaya. Neha ne naa umra ka lihaaz kiya naa kisi aur kaa usne sidhe jaake Sheetal ki maa ko thappad laga diyaa.
Neha ne jaise hi thappad maara waha kuch pal ke liye sannata chaa gaya.
Neha: Mere bhai ne kuch nhi kiya hai. Jo kiya hai teri iss ghatiya ladki ne apne yaar ke saath milke kiya hai.
Phir Neha ne Sheetal ko uske baalon se pakad ke uthaya aur ek thappad laga ke bola
Neha: Chal sab sach bol apne maa baap ke saamne jo tujhe ekdum shareef samajte hai. Unko bata tu kitni badi ghatiya ladki hai jo apne yaar ke milke tune kiya hai. Warna tera woh haal karungi ke tu soch bhi nhi sakti.
Sheetal ne rote hue apne maa baap ko saari sachayi bata di.
Sheetal ke maa baap ka sar sharmindagi se jhukk gaya. Sheetal ke baap ne Sheetal ko thappad maarne start kardiye. Kisine usse nhi rokaa. Ab tak Sheetal ne itne thappad khaa liye the jiske wajah se uska pura chehra laal hogya tha.
Phir Sheetal ke baap ne Vikram ke saamne haath jodd ke maafi maangne lage.
Sheetal ka baap: Sir please humhe aur humari beti ko maaf kardijiye. Isse bahot badi galti hogyi.
Sheetal ki maa ne Rashmi ke saamne haath jodd liye.
Par Rashmi ne Sheetal ki maa ko ek thappad aur maara aur apna muh ghuma liya.
Vikram: Teri beti ne jo kiya uske baad tu kis haq se maafi maang raha hai. Teri beti ki wajah se humne humare bete ke saath janwaro se bhi badtar saluk kiya. Usse apna beta maane se bhi inkaar kardiya.
Aur tu keh raha hai maaf karde
Aaj se tu mere company se nikal diya jaata hai aur jis ghar mein tu aaram se reh raha hai woh ghar bhi company tujhse wapas leti hai. Aur tune apni iss ghatiya ladki ki padhai aur uss ghatiya harqat ke liye jo paise liye the aur aaj tak mere bete ke jitne bhi paise iss ladki ne udaaye hai apne aiyaasi mein woh ek hafte ke andar wapas kar warna tere pure parivaar ko jaalsaaji ke case mein andar jaana hogaa aur teri beti toh abhi ke abhi jail jayegi. Maine police ko bhi call kardiya hai.
Sheetal ka baap: Sir please humhe maaf kardijiye. Meri beti ko police mein mat dijiye woh abhi chotti hai.
Neha: Teri iss ghatiya ladki ne jo kaam kiya hai naa uske liye main usse jaan se mardu. Par phir bhi hum usse police mein de rahe hai.
Thodi der mein hi police aajati hai aur Sheetal ko jaalsaaji ke case mein arrest karti hai aur Rajesh ko bhi jhooti gawayi dene ke jurm mein arrest karti hai.
Sheetal ke baap se uska ghar uski naukri sab le liya jaata hai aur usne apni zameen bhej kar saara paisa bhi chukaya.
Idher ghar ki halat bahot hi kharab thi. Jab Soniya ko pata chala ke Aryan ghar chorr kar chala gaya hai aur woh bekasoor tha. Toh usne bhi ghar walo ko bahot sunaya khash kar ke Neha ko kyoki usne bhi Aryan pe jabardasti ka ilzaam lagaya tha.
Soniya ne pure ghar walo ko boldiya thaa. Agar kisi ne bhi usse baat karne ki koshish bhi ki toh woh bhi ghar chorr ke kahi chali jayegi. Aur aajse woh sab uske liye marchuke ha. Aur Aryan ke liye jo maid rakhi thi ab woh Soniya ke liye ho gayi thi.
Vikram ne Aryan ko khojne ke liye police bhi laga diye thee. Par Aryan ka koi pata nhi chala. Ankit ko toh koi fark hi nhi padhta tha ke Aryan ghar mein hai ya nhi woh apni zindagi maze se guzar raha tha.
Rashmi aur Neha ne toh ro ro ke bura haal karliya thaa. Meenakshi bhi dukhi thi. Par usne apne aap ko sambhal liya thaa. Soniya ne toh jaise sabse rishta hi todd liya tha.
Rishi ko bhi Aryan ke ghar chorne ka pata chal jaata hai. Woh bhi usse har jagah dhundta hai. Par usse bhi kuch pata nhi chalta.
Idher Aryan train se Mumbai aajata hai. Woh pahli baar Mumbai aaya thaa. Isiliye usse yaha ka kuch pata nhi tha. Par woh hoshiyaar thaa.
Aryan ko Mumbai mein pahle toh pareshani hoti hai.
Uske paas dadaji ke diye jo paise thee usse ek ghar rent pe le liya ab usse ek naukri ki jarurat thi. Kuch din toh usse koi naukri nahi milti. Par phir usse ek supermarket mein naukri mil jaati hai. Ab Aryan ki pareshani thodi kam hui thi. Usse reh reh ke ghar ki aur khash kar Soniya ki yaad aarahi thi. Par jab usko apne parivaar ke dwara kiye gaye behaviour yaad aata hai toh uske chehre mein gussa aur nafrat aajati hai.
Ab Aryan ko ghar chore pure 1 month hochuke the.
Ek din Aryan apne kaam se ghar jaaraha thaa tabhi usne dekha raaste mein kuch log ek aadmi aur aurat ko pakde hue hai unke haatho mein gun bhi thi. Sham ka waqat tha.
Aryan unke paas jaata hai aur dekhta hai wohlog unko dhamka rahe thee aur jaan se marne ki dhamki bhi de rahe the.
Aryan ne waha paas pade pathar ko utha kar uss gun wale aadmi ke haath mein maara jisse uske haath se gun girr gayi.
Jab uss aadmi ke gunde yeh dekhte hai toh woh Aryan ko maarne ke kiye aate hai.
Aryan ki thodi body thi. Aur usko ladhna bhi aata thaa isiliye usne unn gundon ko maarna start kiya. Aryan ko ek gunde ne chaku se maarna chaha jisse Aryan ko cut lag jaata hai jisse khoon nikalne lagta hai isse Aryan ko gussa aajata hai aur uss gunde ko maarne lagta hai aur uske haath chaku leke uske gale mein phira diya.
Yeh dekh saare gunde ek saath usko maarne aate hai par Aryan sabko duck kar karke maar deta hai. Phir Aryan unn aadmi aur aurat ke paas jaata hai. Aryan uss gun wale aadmi ko bhul chuka tha.
Aryan: Aap dono thik toh hai naa.
Tabhi woh Aurat chillati hai sambhal keee
Aryan jaise hi pichhe mudta hai tabhi goli chal jaati hai jo sidhe uske seene ke paas lagti hai. Phir sang sang 2 aur goliyan chalata hai woh uske pet mein lagi. Aryan ke haath mein ab bhi woh chaku thaa usne woh chaku sidha uss gunde ke gale mein gusaa diya.
Aryan wahi zameen mein girr jaata hai. Woh aadmi aur aurat usse leke hospital jaate hai.
Hospital mein Dr. Uss aadmi ko jaanta tha.
Doctor: Aree Sanjay ji aap. Aur yeh kaun hai kya hua isse.
Sanjay: Isse goli lagi hai aap jaldi isse bachaiye warna yeh mar sakta hai.
Doctor: Yeh police case hai.
Sanjay: Mujhe pata hai agar yeh bach jaata hai toh main khud police ko bula lungaa. Abhi aap iska treatment kare.
Phir doctor Aryan ko leke OT mein chale jaate hai.
Present
Aryan ki aankho ke saamne yeh sab ek film ki tarah chal raha tha. Uska gussa aur nafrat toh time ke saath badhta hi gaya par formula lagne se woh aur bhi badh gaya thaa.
Meera aur Ritika toh usse lipat ke gehri aur sukoon ki neend so rahi thi. Aryan unke maathe pe ek kiss karta hai jisse dono ke chehre pe ek pyaari si muskaan aajati hai. Phir Aryan bhi unse lipat ke so jaata hai.
Subah jab Meera uthi toh dekhti hai Aryan so raha hai aur Ritika waha nhi hai. Woh bilkul ek masoom bachhe ki tarah lag raha thaa. Meera uske gaal pe kiss karti hai. Aur fresh hone chale jaati hai. Woh aake dekhti hai Aryan bhi uthh chuka tha.
Meera: Aree uth gaye. Achha hai chalo fresh hojao. Ritika ne breakfast bana diya hoga.
Phir Meera nichhe chali jaati hai aur Ritika ke saath breakfast ki taiyaari karne lagti hai.
Thodi der baad Aryan nichhe aata hai aur breakfast karne lagta hai.
Ritika: Tumne abhi tak apna mood thik nhi kiya.
Aryan: Mera mood toh thik hai.
Dono usse ghurti hai.
Aryan: Achha achha ghuro mat. Bas kal raat ko woh sab wapas yaad aagya.
Meera: Humne tumhe samjhaya tha naa.
Aryan: Kya karu. Unlogo ne mere saath jo kiya hai naa woh baar baar mujhe yaad aata hai aur yaha aane ke baad toh jyaada hi aaraha hai.
Meera: Bas kuch din ki hi baat hai. Phir humlog wapas Mumbai chale jayenge. Tum jaldi se apna kaam khatam karo.
Aryan: Hmmm.
Phir Aryan apne team ko call karke woh terrorist group members ki list mangwata tha. Kyo aaj unhe PM se milna thaa. Aur unme aise bahot se log the jiske liye usse special permission ki jarurat padhti jo sirf PM hi de sakte the.
Kuch der baad woh list aajtai hai. Aur Aryan ko Harish Uncle se PM office mein entry karne ka invitation letter bhi mil jaata hai. Sham ko Aryan Ritika aur Meera achhe se ready hoke PMO pahonch jaate hai. Waha pahle se hi unki team aagayi thi unhe bina kisi pareshaani ke entry mil jaate hai.
PM abhi ek meeting mein busy the isiliye unhe waiting room mein baithaya gaya.
Thodi der baad PM ke secretary aate hai aur unhe le jaate hai.
 

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Update 47
Sheetal yeh sunte hi. Darrse aur rone lagti hai. Aur Rashmi ke pairon mein girr jaati hai..

Sheetal: Please Aunty police ko naa bulaye. Aap mujhe jo chahe saza de par please police ko naa bulaye.

Rashmi: Vikram aapne suna nhi maine kya kaha. Yaa abb aapko iss ghatiya ladki pe reham aaraha hai.

Vikram turant uske maa baap ko waha pe bulata hai.

Thodi der mein uske maa baap aajate hai.

Sheetal ki maa: Kya hua humhe yaha aise kyo bulaya hai. Aur yeh Sheetal aise ro kyo rahi hai. Kahi aapke uss neech bete ne phir koi harqat toh nhi kardi mere beti ke saath.

Yeh sunte hi Neha aur Rashmi ka paara chadd gaya. Neha ne naa umra ka lihaaz kiya naa kisi aur kaa usne sidhe jaake Sheetal ki maa ko thappad laga diyaa.

Neha ne jaise hi thappad maara waha kuch pal ke liye sannata chaa gaya.

Neha: Mere bhai ne kuch nhi kiya hai. Jo kiya hai teri iss ghatiya ladki ne apne yaar ke saath milke kiya hai.

Phir Neha ne Sheetal ko uske baalon se pakad ke uthaya aur ek thappad laga ke bola

Neha: Chal sab sach bol apne maa baap ke saamne jo tujhe ekdum shareef samajte hai. Unko bata tu kitni badi ghatiya ladki hai jo apne yaar ke milke tune kiya hai. Warna tera woh haal karungi ke tu soch bhi nhi sakti.

Sheetal ne rote hue apne maa baap ko saari sachayi bata di.

Sheetal ke maa baap ka sar sharmindagi se jhukk gaya. Sheetal ke baap ne Sheetal ko thappad maarne start kardiye. Kisine usse nhi rokaa. Ab tak Sheetal ne itne thappad khaa liye the jiske wajah se uska pura chehra laal hogya tha.

Phir Sheetal ke baap ne Vikram ke saamne haath jodd ke maafi maangne lage.

Sheetal ka baap: Sir please humhe aur humari beti ko maaf kardijiye. Isse bahot badi galti hogyi.

Sheetal ki maa ne Rashmi ke saamne haath jodd liye.

Par Rashmi ne Sheetal ki maa ko ek thappad aur maara aur apna muh ghuma liya.

Vikram: Teri beti ne jo kiya uske baad tu kis haq se maafi maang raha hai. Teri beti ki wajah se humne humare bete ke saath janwaro se bhi badtar saluk kiya. Usse apna beta maane se bhi inkaar kardiya.
Aur tu keh raha hai maaf karde

Aaj se tu mere company se nikal diya jaata hai aur jis ghar mein tu aaram se reh raha hai woh ghar bhi company tujhse wapas leti hai. Aur tune apni iss ghatiya ladki ki padhai aur uss ghatiya harqat ke liye jo paise liye the aur aaj tak mere bete ke jitne bhi paise iss ladki ne udaaye hai apne aiyaasi mein woh ek hafte ke andar wapas kar warna tere pure parivaar ko jaalsaaji ke case mein andar jaana hogaa aur teri beti toh abhi ke abhi jail jayegi. Maine police ko bhi call kardiya hai.

Sheetal ka baap: Sir please humhe maaf kardijiye. Meri beti ko police mein mat dijiye woh abhi chotti hai.

Neha: Teri iss ghatiya ladki ne jo kaam kiya hai naa uske liye main usse jaan se mardu. Par phir bhi hum usse police mein de rahe hai.

Thodi der mein hi police aajati hai aur Sheetal ko jaalsaaji ke case mein arrest karti hai aur Rajesh ko bhi jhooti gawayi dene ke jurm mein arrest karti hai.

Sheetal ke baap se uska ghar uski naukri sab le liya jaata hai aur usne apni zameen bhej kar saara paisa bhi chukaya.

Idher ghar ki halat bahot hi kharab thi. Jab Soniya ko pata chala ke Aryan ghar chorr kar chala gaya hai aur woh bekasoor tha. Toh usne bhi ghar walo ko bahot sunaya khash kar ke Neha ko kyoki usne bhi Aryan pe jabardasti ka ilzaam lagaya tha.

Soniya ne pure ghar walo ko boldiya thaa. Agar kisi ne bhi usse baat karne ki koshish bhi ki toh woh bhi ghar chorr ke kahi chali jayegi. Aur aajse woh sab uske liye marchuke ha. Aur Aryan ke liye jo maid rakhi thi ab woh Soniya ke liye ho gayi thi.

Vikram ne Aryan ko khojne ke liye police bhi laga diye thee. Par Aryan ka koi pata nhi chala. Ankit ko toh koi fark hi nhi padhta tha ke Aryan ghar mein hai ya nhi woh apni zindagi maze se guzar raha tha.

Rashmi aur Neha ne toh ro ro ke bura haal karliya thaa. Meenakshi bhi dukhi thi. Par usne apne aap ko sambhal liya thaa. Soniya ne toh jaise sabse rishta hi todd liya tha.

Rishi ko bhi Aryan ke ghar chorne ka pata chal jaata hai. Woh bhi usse har jagah dhundta hai. Par usse bhi kuch pata nhi chalta.

Idher Aryan train se Mumbai aajata hai. Woh pahli baar Mumbai aaya thaa. Isiliye usse yaha ka kuch pata nhi tha. Par woh hoshiyaar thaa.

Aryan ko Mumbai mein pahle toh pareshani hoti hai.

Uske paas dadaji ke diye jo paise thee usse ek ghar rent pe le liya ab usse ek naukri ki jarurat thi. Kuch din toh usse koi naukri nahi milti. Par phir usse ek supermarket mein naukri mil jaati hai. Ab Aryan ki pareshani thodi kam hui thi. Usse reh reh ke ghar ki aur khash kar Soniya ki yaad aarahi thi. Par jab usko apne parivaar ke dwara kiye gaye behaviour yaad aata hai toh uske chehre mein gussa aur nafrat aajati hai.

Ab Aryan ko ghar chore pure 1 month hochuke the.

Ek din Aryan apne kaam se ghar jaaraha thaa tabhi usne dekha raaste mein kuch log ek aadmi aur aurat ko pakde hue hai unke haatho mein gun bhi thi. Sham ka waqat tha.

Aryan unke paas jaata hai aur dekhta hai wohlog unko dhamka rahe thee aur jaan se marne ki dhamki bhi de rahe the.

Aryan ne waha paas pade pathar ko utha kar uss gun wale aadmi ke haath mein maara jisse uske haath se gun girr gayi.

Jab uss aadmi ke gunde yeh dekhte hai toh woh Aryan ko maarne ke kiye aate hai.

Aryan ki thodi body thi. Aur usko ladhna bhi aata thaa isiliye usne unn gundon ko maarna start kiya. Aryan ko ek gunde ne chaku se maarna chaha jisse Aryan ko cut lag jaata hai jisse khoon nikalne lagta hai isse Aryan ko gussa aajata hai aur uss gunde ko maarne lagta hai aur uske haath chaku leke uske gale mein phira diya.

Yeh dekh saare gunde ek saath usko maarne aate hai par Aryan sabko duck kar karke maar deta hai. Phir Aryan unn aadmi aur aurat ke paas jaata hai. Aryan uss gun wale aadmi ko bhul chuka tha.

Aryan: Aap dono thik toh hai naa.

Tabhi woh Aurat chillati hai sambhal keee

Aryan jaise hi pichhe mudta hai tabhi goli chal jaati hai jo sidhe uske seene ke paas lagti hai. Phir sang sang 2 aur goliyan chalata hai woh uske pet mein lagi. Aryan ke haath mein ab bhi woh chaku thaa usne woh chaku sidha uss gunde ke gale mein gusaa diya.

Aryan wahi zameen mein girr jaata hai. Woh aadmi aur aurat usse leke hospital jaate hai.

Hospital mein Dr. Uss aadmi ko jaanta tha.

Doctor: Aree Sanjay ji aap. Aur yeh kaun hai kya hua isse.

Sanjay: Isse goli lagi hai aap jaldi isse bachaiye warna yeh mar sakta hai.

Doctor: Yeh police case hai.

Sanjay: Mujhe pata hai agar yeh bach jaata hai toh main khud police ko bula lungaa. Abhi aap iska treatment kare.

Phir doctor Aryan ko leke OT mein chale jaate hai.


Present


Aryan ki aankho ke saamne yeh sab ek film ki tarah chal raha tha. Uska gussa aur nafrat toh time ke saath badhta hi gaya par formula lagne se woh aur bhi badh gaya thaa.

Meera aur Ritika toh usse lipat ke gehri aur sukoon ki neend so rahi thi. Aryan unke maathe pe ek kiss karta hai jisse dono ke chehre pe ek pyaari si muskaan aajati hai. Phir Aryan bhi unse lipat ke so jaata hai.

Subah jab Meera uthi toh dekhti hai Aryan so raha hai aur Ritika waha nhi hai. Woh bilkul ek masoom bachhe ki tarah lag raha thaa. Meera uske gaal pe kiss karti hai. Aur fresh hone chale jaati hai. Woh aake dekhti hai Aryan bhi uthh chuka tha.

Meera: Aree uth gaye. Achha hai chalo fresh hojao. Ritika ne breakfast bana diya hoga.

Phir Meera nichhe chali jaati hai aur Ritika ke saath breakfast ki taiyaari karne lagti hai.

Thodi der baad Aryan nichhe aata hai aur breakfast karne lagta hai.

Ritika: Tumne abhi tak apna mood thik nhi kiya.

Aryan: Mera mood toh thik hai.

Dono usse ghurti hai.

Aryan: Achha achha ghuro mat. Bas kal raat ko woh sab wapas yaad aagya.

Meera: Humne tumhe samjhaya tha naa.

Aryan: Kya karu. Unlogo ne mere saath jo kiya hai naa woh baar baar mujhe yaad aata hai aur yaha aane ke baad toh jyaada hi aaraha hai.

Meera: Bas kuch din ki hi baat hai. Phir humlog wapas Mumbai chale jayenge. Tum jaldi se apna kaam khatam karo.

Aryan: Hmmm.

Phir Aryan apne team ko call karke woh terrorist group members ki list mangwata tha. Kyo aaj unhe PM se milna thaa. Aur unme aise bahot se log the jiske liye usse special permission ki jarurat padhti jo sirf PM hi de sakte the.

Kuch der baad woh list aajtai hai. Aur Aryan ko Harish Uncle se PM office mein entry karne ka invitation letter bhi mil jaata hai. Sham ko Aryan Ritika aur Meera achhe se ready hoke PMO pahonch jaate hai. Waha pahle se hi unki team aagayi thi unhe bina kisi pareshaani ke entry mil jaate hai.

PM abhi ek meeting mein busy the isiliye unhe waiting room mein baithaya gaya.

Thodi der baad PM ke secretary aate hai aur unhe le jaate hai.

Very nice update 🙂
 
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