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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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Jaguaar

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Bhai twist ne to bahot bayanker tabahi ladi. Jo hum ankit ko villan samj rahe the who. Or uska ye rup puri update main hero nikla.
Our neha to mastermind nikli
Super bro. Ab mera dimag bolta hai neha ne pakka koi bada kand ker ne wali hai pakka
Dekhte hai aapki iss soch ka kya hota hai
 
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Jaguaar

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nice update ..ankit kyu nafrat karta tha ab pata chala ..
par baadme uski nafrat khatm ho gayi thi dadaji aur kulpandit ki baate sunke ..

sabse badi gunahgaar to neha nikli jisne apne dosto ke saath milke aryan ko ghar se nikalne ki planning ki thi ..
Thank you
 
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Jaguaar

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Update 55
Neha jab yeh sunti hai toh uski halat aisi hogyi ke kaato toh khoon nhi.
Rashmi: Kya matlab isne ghar se nikalne ka plan banaya thaa. Isko toh galatfehmi hogyi thi.
Ankit: Jii nhi koi galatfehmi nhi hui thi. Aapki iss shareef beti ne apne dost ke saath plan banake yeh sab kiya tha.
Tu mujhe bata kya Aryan tere kamre mein aaya thaa.
Neha: Haa.
Ankit: Woh aake kaha pe khada tha aur kya kiya tha. Sach sach batana warna abhi tere uss dost ko yaha pe bulake launga aur dono ko jaalsaaji ke case mein andar karwaunga.
Neha: Darr se kaanpte hue aur rote hue. Bhai kamre mein aaya tha but woh darwaze pe hi khada tha usne toh apni nazre pe unchi nhi ki thi.
Ankit: Toh tujhe kyo laga woh tere saath jabardasti karne aaya thaa.
Neha: Maine jhoot bola tha. Usne toh mujhe dekha bhi nhi tha. Maine hi apne dost ke saath milke aisa plan banaya tha. Ussdin ghar mein koi nhi thaa bas woh aur main thi. Maine dekha woh apne kamre se nichhe aaraha hai toh maine jaldi se apne dusre mobile se apne iss mobile mein call kiya tha. Aur mujhe pata tha woh jarur mobile dene aayega. Aur jaise hi woh aaya maine woh jhoota natak kiya tha.
Rashmi aur Vikram jab yeh sunte hai toh unko vishwaas hi nhi hota unki beti ne unke saath itna bada dhokha kiya tha.
Rashmi ne usse thappad marna start kardiya.
Rashmi: Kyo kiya tune aisa kisliye kiya. Teri baato mein aake maine bhi usse kitna kuch kaha tha kitna maara tha.
Neha: Rote hue. Mujhe maaf kardo maa dad. Mujhse galti hogyi. Mujhse yeh sehan nhi horaha tha ke humare bich ek gunhegaar reh raha hai. Isiliye maine yeh sab kiya. Mujhe maaf kardo. I am sorry.
Rashmi: Mat keh mujhe maa. Tere mein aur uss Sheetal mein kya fark reh gaya. Usne paiso ke liye kiya tha aur tune self satisfaction ke liye. Aaj mujhe pata chal gaya main kabhi ek achhi maa nhi ban saki.
Neha: I am sorry maaa. Mujhe maaf kardo. Main gusse mein pagal hogyi thi. Dad please mujhe maaf kardijiye.
Vikram: Tune koi chotti galti nhi ki hai. Tune Aryan ke upar ek ghinona ilzaam laga diya tha jo usne kabhi kiya hi nhi tha. Ankit tujhe kaise pata chala ke isne jhoot bola tha.
Ankit: Aaplogo ko toh apne bete pe bharosa nhi thaa but mujhe thaa. Aaplogo ko shayad nhi dikha hoga but mujhe dikha tha jab aaplog behrami se usse maar rahe the tab iss ghatiya ladki ke chehre pe hasi thi. Ussi waqat mujhe ispe shakk hogya tha aur tab maine isspe nazar rakhi. Aur yeh apne room mein jaake apne dost se plan ke failure aur success ki baate kar rahi thi jo maine sunn liya tha. Aur ussi raat ko maine Aryan ko sab bata bhi diya tha.
Neha jab yeh sunti hai ke Aryan ko sab pata hai toh uska rona aur tezz hojaata hai.
Ankit: Apne yeh magarmach ke aansu bahana karo. Tum sab ek tarah ke hi ho. Tumlogo ko toh tadpa tadpa ke maar dena chahiye. Aree insaan ke liye sabkuch uski family hoti hai. Aur aaplog toh family kya insaan kehlane ke laayak nhi ho.
Aryan ne mujhe bola tha main kabhi bhi apni sachhai naa batau par aaj mere sabra ka bandh toot gaya aaplogo ki iss jhooti mamta aur pyaar ka dhong aur iss ghatiya ladki ki nautanki dekh kar. Achha hai maine kabhi bhi tujhe apni behen nhi manna tujh jaisi behen jiski bhi ho usko toh doob marna chahiye.
Chalo Ragini mera inlogo ke saamne dum ghut ta hai.
Phir Ankit Ragini ko leke waha se apne kamre mein aagaya aur waha baith ke apne Ragini ke gale rakh rone lagta hai.
Ragini: Aap ne mujhse wada kiya tha naa aap devarji ko leke kabhi bhi udaas nhi honge.
Ankit: Kya karu Ragini. Mera bhai kitni takleef mein raha hai yeh main mehsoos kar sakta hu. Kyoki usne bhi wohi saha jo maine saha tha. Infact usne mujhse bahot bahot zyaada saha. Aree jab usse hawas ka pujari aur bhi naa jaane kya kya kaha jaaraha tha naa tab maine apne aap ko bahot mushkil se control kiya. Aur jis din maine apne chote bhai ko maara thaa usdin shayad mujhse badnaseeb koi na hoga. Harwaqat usse nafraf kiya aur jab usse meri sabse jyaada jarurat thi main uske saath naa thaa.
Tumhe pata hai akele mein woh kitna rota tha mujhse lipat kar. Aur ab jab inlogo ki yeh dikhawe wala pyaar aur mamta dekhta hu naa toh mere dil mein inke liye sirf nafrat bhar jaati hai. Yeh toh achha hai dadaji ne apne hisse ki thodi si property Aryan ke naam kardi thi. Jisse use koi problem naa ho.
Ragini: Sab thik hojayega. Ab sab se pahle humhe unse milna hogaa.
Ankit: Tum thik kehti ho. Hum kal hi college jayenge aur unse milenge. Itne saal baad main apne bhai se milungaa aur ab toh usne shaadi bhi karli.
Ragini: Chaliye fresh hojaiye. Phir dinner karne chalte hai.
Ankit: Mujhe bhuk nhi hai Ragini.
Ragini: Aise kaise bhuk nhi hai. Agar aapne aaj khana nhi khaya toh kal main devarji se bol dungi ke aap aayedin khaana nhi khaate.
Ankit: Achha achha thik hai chalta hu.
Phir Ankit fresh hokar nichhe aata hai. Aur dinning table pe baith ke chup chap khaane lagta hai.
Rashmi: Humhe maaf karde betaa. Humse galti hogyi.
Ankit: Aaj tak galti ke alawa aaplogo ne kiya kya hai. Jab tak bhai aaplogo ko maaf nhi karegaa mere paas maafi ki koi umeed mat rakhna. Main yaha reh raha hu. Wohi bahot hai. Aur mujhse baat karne ki koi bhi jarurat nhi hai.
Phir Ankit apne kamre mein chala jaata hai.
Neha: Maa. Bhaiyaa bhi bhai ko samajte the. Sirf hum hi the jo bhai ko naa samaj paaye.
Rashmi: Mujhe toh teri shakal bhi nhi dekhni par galti teri kaha hai galti toh meri bhi hai aur shayad meri parvarish mein hi koi kami reh gayi thi. Pata nhi pichle janam mein aisa kaunsa paap kiya tha jiske saza mein mere dono bete humse nafrat karte hai aur beti aisi ke shakal dekhni bhi nhi chahiye.
Neha yeh sab sunke rone lagti hai.
Aaj Ankit ki sachai ko sunn Vikram ko bhi rona aagaya thaa. Usne humesha Ankit ko bhala bura kaha tha Aryan ko leke. Par usse kya pata tha Ankit yeh sab jaanmuzz ke kar raha tha itni beizaati seh raha tha sirf apni bhai ko leke aur uski beti ne bhi wohi ghatiya harqat ki hai.
Soniya ne Aryan ko phone karke bata diya tha ke Ankit ne aaj apne itna purana sabra ke baand ko todd diya hai. Aur apni sachai bata di.
Idher Aryan ghar pahonch ta hai aur thodi der baad dinner karke ke room mein aata hai tabhi usse Soniya ka call aata hai aur usse Ankit ke baare mein bolti hai. Phir thodi der baate karke call cut kardeti hai.
Tabhi Meera room mein aake pichhe se Aryan ko hug karleti hai.
Aryan: Kya baat hai aaj tumhare iraade nek nhi lagrahe.
Meera: Mere iraade toh bilkul nek hai.
Phir Aryan usko saamne se hug karleta hai.
Aryan: Kal shayad humko bhaiyaa aur bhabhi se milna hai. Bhaiya ne aaj apni sachai unlogo ke saamne boldi.
Meera: Chalo achha hai. Mera bhi bahot mann tha bhaiya aur bhabhi se milne kaa.
Tabhi Ritika bhi room mein aati hai.
Ritika: Kya baat hai didi mere bina hi start hogye yeh galat baat hai.
Meera: Aree toh tu bhi aaja sharma mat yeh humare hi pati hai.
Ritika bhi hasti hui Aryan se lipat jaati hai.
Phir Aryan dono ko utha kar bed pe leta deta hai aur unke paas let jaata hai. Meera aur Ritika usse bilkul chipak jaati hai.
Aryan unko kiss karte hue. Aaj gudiya se milke kaise laga.
Meera aur Ritika uske seene mein apna sirr rakh. Bahog achha laga. Thodi natkhat hai. But bahot pyaari hai.
Aryan: Meri gudiya hai hi aisi. Aisa lagta hai jaise uska bachpana abhi start hi hua hai.
Ritika: Haa sahi kaha tumne. Waise aaj maaji baba mom dad aur Yash ka call aaya tha.
Aryan: Haa mujhse bhi baat hui thi. Bahot miss karrahe hai humhe.
Meera: Miss toh hum bhi bahot kar rahe hai.
Aryan: Kuch din baad unse mil ke aayenge.
Ritika: Sach mein.
Aryan: Bilkul. Chalo ab so jaate hai. Kal phir se college mein unlogo ko bardaash karna hogaa. Maine Sameera ji se bola tha humara addmission kahi aur karwa de. But unhone bola saare colleges ki seat booked hochuki hai.
Meera: Sehan karlenge. Chalo so jao.
Phir dono so jaate hai.
 
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