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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

  • Haa

    Votes: 93 96.9%
  • Naa

    Votes: 3 3.1%

  • Total voters
    96
  • Poll closed .

Nevil singh

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Update 51
Neha jab washroom mein aati hai aur apni maa ko rote hue dekhti hai toh woh tension mein aajati hai.

Neha: Kya hua maa aap ro kyo rahe ho. Kisine kuch bola kya. Please chup ho jaiye bataiye mujhe kya hua.

Rashmi: Uske gale lag ke rote hue. Aryan isi college mein hai. Meri hi class mein main mili usse.

Neha: Khushi se. Sach mein maa. Kaha hai woh kaisa hai woh. Usne baat ki aapse.

Rashmi: Maine usse uski family ke baare mein pucha. Toh usne bataya woh anath hai uski family mar chuki hai. Meera aur Ritika ki family hi uski family hai.

Neha jab yeh sunti hai toh uske aansu nikalne lagte hai. Usne Aryan ke saath jo jo kiya tha woh sab usse wapas yaad aane laga.

Neha: Main milungi usse. Main baat karungi. Mera bhai mujhse jyaada naraz nhi reh sakta abhi kaha hai woh.

Rashmi: Abhi toh class mein hogaa. Tum recess mein milna. Main ghar call karke bolti hu.

Phir woh dono waha se chale jaate hai.

Idher class mein Aryan ko bahot gussa aarah thaa. But woh kuch kar nhi sakta thaa. Usne khud ko bahot control kiya hua thaa. Phir ek ek karke saare teachers aate hai aur intro leke chale jaate hai.

Recess mein yeh log Canteen mein jaate hai. Waha jaake ek table mein baith te hai. Tabhi waha Neha aake Aryan ke gale lag jaati hai.

Aryan ko yeh sehan nhi hotaa woh Neha ko apne se durr karta hai ek jhatke mein aur ek thappad laga deta hai.

Aryan: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhse gale lagne ki.

Neha ko iski umeed nhi thi ke uska bhai usko maar bhi sakta hai. But phir bhi woh maar ko sehan kar leti hai.

Neha: Bhai please mujhe maaf karde. Humse bahot badi galti hogyi hai. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Aryan: Apni jubaan ko lagam do. Main koi tumhara bhai nhi hu. Mujhe nafrat se iss sabd se iss rishte se. Aur mujhe koi shock nhi hai kisi ka bhai banne ka. Kyoki main ek hawas ka pujari hu kahi maine tere izaat pe haath daal diya toh.

Neha chillake aur rote bolti hai. Bhaiiiiii. Please mujhe maaf karde. Mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi hai. Maine tujhe kitna rulaya kitni takleef di. Maine tujhpe bharosa naa kar uss ghatiya ladki pe kiya. Meera Ritika tum bolo naa isse mujhe maaf karde.

Meera: Naa main aapko janti hu aur naa janna chahti hu. Mere liye mere pati hi sab hai. Woh jinse rishta rakhte hai mere liye wohi rishtedaar. Aur woh jinse nafrat karte hai unse main bhi nafrat karti hu.

Ritika: Aur aapke liye achha yehi hoga humse durr rahe. Kyoki mere pati jinse nafrat karte hai hum unki shaksiyat se bhi nafrat karte hai.

Neha: Aise mat bolo Meera Ritika. Itne saal main tadpi hu isse milne ke liye. Main maanti hu mujhse bahot badi galti hogyi. Par please mujhe maaf kardo.

Tabhi waha Sheetal aajati hai.

Sheetal: Please Aryan meri galti ki saza tum inhe mat do. Please inhe maaf kardo.

Jab Meera Ritika Sheetal ko dekhti hai toh uska para high hojaata hai. Toh woh dono sidha Sheetal ko thappad laga dete hai.

Meera: Teri himmat kaise hui meri pati ke mamle mein bolne ki. Man toh kar raha hai tujhe jaan se mardu.

Ritika: Par mere pati ne mujhe rokaa hua hai. Isse pahle ke main kuch galat kardu nikal jaa humari nazro se durr.

Aryan: Choro Meera Ritika. Inn jaise logo se baat nhi karni chahiye. Yeh shareef log hai. Aur mujh jaisa hawas ka pujari agar inke saamne raha toh inki izaat pe khatra hai aur kya pata thodi der baat tumdono ke upar bhi koi ilzaam laga de.

Neha jaise hi yeh sunti hai woh Aryan ko marne ke liye apna haath uthati hai. Tabhi Meera aur Ritika uska haath pakad leti hai aur ek ek thappad laga deti hai.

Meera: Khabardaar agar mere pati pe haath uthane ki sochi toh.

Ritika: Agar agli baar yeh khayal bhi man mein laaya toh yeh haath tumhare jism mein nhi dikhega. Yeh bol woh Neha ka haath jhatak deti hai.

Phir Aryan Meera Ritika aur Rishi waha se nikal ke dusri jagah baith jaate hai.

Neha abhi bhi waha khade hoke ro rahi thi. Woh bhi gusse mein Sheetal ko thappad maar deti hai.

Neha: Dekha sirf teri wajah se woh aaj mujhse kaise baat kar ke gaya. Jiss bhai ne kabhi mujhe nazre utha kar nhi dekhi usne aaj mujhe thappad bhi maara. Aaj woh mujhse sirf nafrat karta hai. Sirf teri wajah se. Nikal jaa meri nazro se durr isse pahle main tujhe jaan se maar du.

Sheetal bhi waha se rote hue chali jaati hai. Usse ab waha ruka nhi jaata isiliye woh apne ghar chali gayi.

Neha bhi rote hue Rashmi ki taraf chali jaati hai.

Aryan ko itna gussa aaraha thaa ke agar koi abhi usse panga leta toh woh usko jaan se maar deta.

Tabhi College mein Minister apne bete ko maarne wale ko maarne aata hai. Aur saath mein gunde bhi laata hai. Woh aake Aryan ko khojta hai.

Woh ladki jisne Aryan se baat ki thi woh yeh dekh leti hai isiliye woh canteen mein jaati hai.

Ladki: Meera ji Ritika ji woh Vicky ke papa aaye hai Aryan ji ko maarne ke liye. Aur saath mein gunde bhi laaye hai.

Meera: Thik hai Thank You inform karne ke liye.
Phir woh ladki waha se chali jaati hai. Aur Meera Aryan se bolti hai. Chalo tumhare gussa shant karne ka samaan aagaya.

Rishi: Matlab.

Ritika: Chalo khud samaj jaoge.

Phir woh charo bhi waha aate hi jaha wohlog the.

Vicky bhi wahi khada tha. Woh Aryan ko dekh kar.

Vicky: Dad woh dekhiye yehi hai woh jisne mujhe maara thaa. Aur woh ladkiyan yeh mujhe chahiye.

Minister: Tu chinta mat kar beta. Aaj yeh ladka abhi marega. Aur yeh ladkiyan sirf teri hogi.

Aryan Meera ko apna mobile deta hai aur PM ke secretary ko call lagake iss Minister ka suspension order pe sign karne ko bolte hai. Aur jab dusri baar missed call jaaye tab isko woh suspension order ki news mil jaani chahiye.

Meera PM ke secretary ko call karke sab kuch karne ko kehti hai.

Minister ko dekh kar Rashmi aur Neha bhi darr jaate hai kyoki unko bhi khabar mil chuki thi Aryan ke subah ke kaand ko leke. Isiliye woh Vikram ko call karke sab batate hai aur college mein bulate hai.

Minister: Toh tu hai woh jisne mere bete ko maara aur mere baare mein bhi galat bola.

Aryan: Haa main hi hu woh. Mujhe laga tu apne bete ki galti ko sudharega usse saza dega. But woh toh tere hi nakshe kadam pe chal raha hai.

Minister: Ladke tune bahot badi galti ki hai mere bete ko maar ke. Aaj tu yaha se zinda nhi jaayega. Ayee jao re usko maar ke uss ladki ko utha lao.

Aryan: Minister main tujhe chorr deta tere gundon ko maarne ke baad. Par tune inn ladkiyon pe apni nazar deke achha nhi kiyaa.

Phir sabhi gunde Aryan ko marne aate hai. Aryan toh pahle se hi gusse mein thaa. Isiliye usne full power ke saath sabse saamne wale gunde ko laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai. Yeh dekh baaki gunde wahi rukh jaate hai.

Woh gunda wahi padha rehta hai. Ek jan jaake usse dekhta hai toh woh chillake bolta hai yeh ab zinda nhi hai.

Aryan: Tumlogo ke paas aakhri mauka hai. Jo jo zinda rehna chahte ho chale jao. Iss mantri ki baat sunke tum apni jaan gawa baithoge. Tumhare marne ke baad tumhare parivaar walo ko naa yeh mantri dekhega aur naahi uska yeh ganda khoon Vicky.

Kuch gunde jinhe apne parivaar ki chinta thi woh wahi se durr hojaate hai. Par jo log reh gaye the unhe naa toh apne parivaar ki chinta thi aur naahi apni.

Jo log abhi bhi khade thee ab unke paas Aryan jaata hai aur unsab ko baari baari maarta hai. Kisi ke pet mein kisi ke seene mein toh kisi ke sirr mein. Yeh sab dekh waha khade sabhi log darr se Aryan ko dekhne lagte hai. Rashmi aur Neha ko aise dekh rahi thi jaise woh kisi ajoobe ko dekh rahi thi. Yeh sach tha ab Aryan unke liye kisi ajoobe se kam nhi tha.

Rashmi aur Neha jaldi se Meera aur Ritika ke paas jaake unhe Aryan ko rokhne ko kehte hai.

Neha: Meera Ritika usse roko warna woh undono ko bhi maar dega.

Rashmi: Haa beta roko use.

Meera: Mrs. Rashmi Malhotra and Ms Neha Malhotra apne kaam se kaam rakhiye humare beech naa aaye aur humse rishta jorne ki koshish bhi naa kare.

Ritika: Yaha humara rishta usi se hai jisse humare pati ka rishta hai. Aur apna yeh drama kahi aur jaake kare. Yeh bol Meera aur Ritika waha se jaake kahi aur khadi hojati hai. Rashmi aur Neha ka sir wahi jhukk jaata hai.

Aryan Minister aur Raghav ke paas jaake khada hota hai.

Aryan: Tujhe lagta hai subah ki maar se kuch samaj nhi aaya thaa isiliye tune wapas mere se panga liya aur woh bhi galat time pe jab mera gussa apni seema todd chuka thaa kuch ghatiya logo ki wajah se.

Yeh baat Aryan thoda zorr se bolta hai jisse Rashmi aur Neha sunn leti hai. Jo ke unke liye hi tha.

Nice update bhai
 

Nevil singh

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Update 52
Aryan: Tu apni baap ki minister ki post pe uchalta hai naa toh aajse balki abhi se tera baap naahi minister hai aur naahi koi vip abse woh ek comman man hai.

Aryan pichhe ghum Meera ko dekh kar kuch ishara karta hai.

Minister: Kya halwa hai kya. Tu bolega aur main minister nhi rahunga.

Tabhi minister ko ek call aata hai. Minister call receive karta hai. Saamne se usse jo sunai padhta hai usse uske pairon tale zameen hi khisak gayi thi. Uske chehre ke bhav hi badal gaye the.

Minister: Mujhe maaf kardo beta. Main nhi jaanta tha tum kaun ho. Please mujhe meri minister ki post wapas kardo. Main wada karta hu aaj ke baad koi bhi galat kaam nhi karunga aur mere bete ko bhi sudhar dunga. Yeh kehke woh Vicky ko ek thappad marta hai aur bolta hai jaldi se iske pair padh aur maafi maang. Warna tujhe yehi zinda gaar dungaa.

Vicky bhi sakte mein aagya aakhir uske baap ko aisa kya hua jisse woh itna darr gaye ke woh Aryan se maafi maangne lage aur usse bhi maangne ko bol rahe hai.

Aryan Minister se durr hatt kar bolta hai. Agar tune aur tere iss bete ne sirf mujhse panga liya hota toh tujhe maaf bhi kardeta. Par tumdono ne apni ghatiya nazar meri jaan pe daali hai. Iski saza toh milegi. Teri saza hai teri post ka jaana aur tere bete ki saza hai usne jis haath se meri jaan ko chua woh haath ab kisi kaam ka nhi rahega. Jiss dimaag mein meri jan ko leke bure khayal aaye woh dimaag ab barbaad hoga. Aur jis jubaan se isne galat bola woh jabaan bhi jayegi.

Aryan ne sabse pahle uske haath ko toddd diya jisse woh chikne laga phir uski jubaan ko nikal kar kaat deta hai jisse waha khoon khoon hojaata hai phir apne dono haatho se uske sirr mein maarta hai jisse woh wahi girr jaata hai.

Aryan: Ab yeh zinda toh rahegaa par ek laash ki tarah ab nikal yaha se aur agar phir mere se panga lene ki sochi toh yeh din yaad karlena.

Tabhi waha police aur Vikram aajate hai.

Vikram Aryan ko dekh kar thoda bhavuk hojaata hai par waha padhe laashon ko dekh woh bhi ghabra jaata hai. Policewale aake minister ko salute maarte hai.

Aryan: Ab yeh minister nhi raha jo tum isse salute mar rahe ho. Ab yeh ek comman man hai.

Police: Yeh sab kisne kiya.

Aryan: Maine kiya.

Police: Ab tumhe kaun bachayega. Ab toh tujhe lambi lagegi.

Vikram: Inspector yeh mera beta hai aur yeh sab isne self defense mein kiya hai iss ex minister aur bete ne mere bete aur bahuon se badtameezi ki aur usse maarne aaye the.

Aryan: Mr. Vikram Malhotra. Aap apni yeh rishtedaari apni jeb mein rakhe. Main anath hu aur mujhe anath hi rehne de. Mujhe apna beta banane ka dikhawa karne ki koi jarurat nhi hai. Aur agli baar mujhe apna beta aur meri biwiyon ko apni bahu kehne se pahle 1000 baar soch lijiyega. Warna main yeh bhul jaunga ke aap mere se umar mein bade hai.

Vikram: Par beta. Abhi woh itna hi bol paaye ke Aryan ne saamne padhi ek gunde ki laash mein puri taqat se laat maarta hai. Jisse uske dono side ki pasliyan toot jaati hai.

Iske baad Aryan inspector ke paas jaake saari baat batata hai. But inspector bhi corrupt tha. Usne socha agar woh isko jail mein deta hai toh ex minister se kuch income karlega.

Inspector: Chahe jo bhi hua ho. Tune kanoon ko apne haath mein liya hai aur minister sir ke bete ko bhi maara hai.

Minister: Isko leke jao aur isko itna torcher karna ke iski halat maut se badtar hojaaye.

Inspector: Aap chinta naa kare sir. Yeh ab kabhi bhi bahar nhi aayega. Aap Vicky baba ko hospital le jaaye.

Aryan: Lagta hai tu kabhi sudhrega nhi. Yeh toh kya mujhe koi bhi jail mein nhi rakh payega.

Inspector: Main bhi dekhta hu kaun tujhe bahar nikalta hai.

Aryan: Tu bhi aaj apni naukri ko khoyega. Meera Ritika jara car leke police station aajana Rishi ko le aana saath ghar chalenge.

Meera: Thik hai tum jao hum abhi aate hai.

Phir Inspector Aryan ko leke Minister Vicky ko leke aur Meera Ritika aur Rishi chal dete hai inspector ke pichhe.

Vikram Rashmi aur Neha ke paas jaata hai toh Rashmi aur Neha usse lipat kar rone lagti hai.

Rashmi: Aapne kuch kiya kyo nhi. Woh log usse le gaye.

Neha: Haa dad aap bhai ko bachaiye.

Vikram: Tumlog chinta mat karo main abhi police station jaata hu aur ek vakeel ko leke uske bail order ke saath. Par main uske uss harqat se shock hu.

Rashmi: Usne humsab ka gussa unlogo pe nikala hai. Ab woh hum sab se sirf nafrat karta hai. Woh toh humari shakal tak nhi dekhna chahta. Aakhir humne galti bhi toh itni badi ki hai. Aap jaiye aur usse lekar aaiye.

Vikram waha se ek vakeel ko le kar police station ke liye rawana hota hai.

Idher Aryan ko police ki jeep mein dhaal ke police station le jaaya jaata hai.

Woh station pahonchte hai jaise hi woh andar jaane lagte hai tabhi uss inspector ke mobile mein ek call aata hai jisse sunn ke paseene nikal ne lagte hai. Aryan uske haath se mobile leke sirf ek baat bolta hai abhi ke abhi iska suspension mujhe chahiye aapke saath yeh bol woh phone cut kar deta hai.

Inspector: Mujhe maaf kardijiye sir. Main nhi jaanta tha aapki pahonch itne upar tak hai. Please mujhe maaf karde. Mujhse galti hogyi.

Aryan usko ek thappad maarta hai jisse uske daant tak hil jaate hai.

Aryan: Tujhe pahle hi kaha thaa. Par tujhe toh kutto ki gulami karni hi pasand hai naa toh aaj se tu wahi kar.

Phir waha khade hawaldar ko bol ek chair mangwata aur 4 thanda bhi.

Tabhi waha Meera Ritika aur Rishi aajate hai.

Ritika: Chale ghar.

Aryan: Chalte hai. But abhi yaha pe maine kisi ko milne ke liye bulaya hai. Usse milke chalte hai. Aao tumlog baitho. Hawaldar waha pe teen aur chair rakh deta hai. Thanda bhi aajata hai. Aryan ek khud leke baaki 3 Meera Ritika aur Rishi ko deta hai.

Rishi: Bhai tu kaun hai. Aur yeh sab kaise kar raha hai. Mujhe toh kuch samaj nhi aaraha hai.

Aryan: Tu yeh sab chorr aur thanda pi. Main tujhe toh kya kisi ko bhi iske baare mein nhi bata sakta.

Rishi: Par.

Aryan: Bola na thanda pi.

Rishi phir chup chap thanda peene lagta hai.

Police Station mein sabhi log yeh sab khade hokar dekh rahe the. Aur woh inspector bas khada tha.

Tabhi waha Vikram aata hai apne lawyer ko leke.

Vikram dekhta hai Aryan,Meera, Ritika aur Rishi waha baithe thanda pi rahe hai.

Vikram inspector ke paas jaata hai jo sir jhukaye khada thaa.

Vikram: Inspector yeh lo mere bete ke bail orders isko chorr do.

Aryan jab Vikram ke muh se " Mere Bete" sunta hai toh uska para high hojaata hai woh thande ko wahi fekk inspector ko bulake ek thappad maarta hai jisse issbaar uske daant toot jaate hai.

Vikram samaj jaata hai Aryan ne inspector ko kyo maara.

Inspector apne toote hue daant ko haath mein leke Aryan ko dekhta hai toh Aryan bolta hai agar kisine mujhse rishta banane ki koshish ki tera yehi haal karunga. Ab inspector bhi samaj jaata hai. Isiliye woh Sorry sir bolke waha se Vikram ke paas aata hai aur bolta hai sir aap chup rahiye warna Sir mujhe maar maar ke mere saare daant todd denge.

Tabhi waha Commissioner aata hai.

Commissioner pahle jaake Aryan se maafi maangta hai aur Inspector ko bulake usse suspend karta hai.

Aryan: Commissioner Sir thank you aap mere ek bulawe pe yaha aaye.

Commissioner: Sir. Aapke liye mujhe special orders mile the seniors se. Aana toh tha hi. Ab aap jaa sakte hai aur yeh mera number hai agar koi bhi problem ho toh kabhi bhi call kar sakte hai.

Aryan: Thank You sir.

Yeh bol Aryan waha se jaana lagta hai tabhi Vikram bolta hai

Vikram: Beta kya tum humhe maaf nhi kar sakte. Hum maante hai humse bahot badi galti hui. Please humhe maaf kardo aur ghar wapas aajao. Tumhari maa aur didi hardin sirf tumhare liye roti rehti hai. Please humhe maaf kardo aur ghar aajao.

Meera aur Ritika jab yeh sab sunti hai toh apna sirr pitt leti hai. Inspector jab yeh sab sunta hai toh woh darr se kaapne lagta hai.

Aryan gusse se sidha Vikram ke paas jaata hai but usse kuch bolta nhi. Woh paas khade inspector ko dekhta hai jo darr se kaap raha tha.
Aryan usko ek zordaar thappad maarta hai jisse woh behosh hojaata hai. Commissioner bhi yeh dekh shock hojaata hai.

Aryan phir waha se nikal jaata hai. Commissioner hawaldaar ko bol inspector ko hosh mein laata hai.

Commissioner: Vikram ji yeh toh wahi hai naa jiske tasveer aapne mujhe di thi. Aur tumhe usne kyo maara tum toh kuch bole bhi nhi.

Vikram: Haa yeh wahi hai. Aur isse meri wajah se maara hai. Par aap yaha kaise.

Commissioner: Mujhe mere senior ka call aaya thaa ke kisi ne Mr. Aryan ko arrest kiya hai aur usse jald jald bahar nikalna hai. Phir maine inspector ko call karke isse unhe chorne ko kaha aur tab unhone mujhe kaha ke iske suspension order leke khud yaha aan hai. Isiliye main yaha. Par aap yaha kaise.

Vikram: Abhi jo yaha se gaya hai naa woh mera chota beta hai aur woh ladkiyan meri choti bahuyen hai.

Commissioner: Toh aap usse maafi kyo maang rahe the. Aur usne aapki wajah se isse kyo maara.

Vikram: Kuch saal pahle humse ek bahot badi galti hogyi thi jiski saza aaj tak hum bhugat rahe hai. Aur maine jab usse maafi maangi aur beta kaha toh usne mera gussa ispe nikala.

Commissioner: Main samjha nhi.

Vikram: Choriye. Main chalta hu.
Yeh bol Vikram waha se nikal jaata hai ghar ki taraf. Ghar pahonch ke woh dekhta hai Rashmi aur Neha ghar mein hi hai.

Fine update mitr
 
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