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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

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Something that never happened......
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Tabhi waha Suraj Malhotra haste hue aata hai jisse dekh sabhi shock hote hai. Hosakta hai unhe pahle se pata tha par phir bhi dil mein ek aas thi ke Suraj aisa nhi kar sakta par unki aas toot gayi.

Vikram: Suraj tum yaha aise.

Suraj: Haa bhaiyaaa main. Aur yeh mere hi aadmi hai. Mere hi kehne pe inhone aaplogo ko aise bandha hai. Yeh bol woh zor zor se hasne lagta hai.

Vikram: Par kyo. Hum toh tere apne hai. Phir tumne aisa kyo kiya.

Suraj: Nafrat karta hu main tumse tumhare parivaar se.

Vikram: Par kyo kisliyeee.

Suraj: Batata hu batata hu. Pahle ek jaroori kaam toh pura karlu. Yeh bol woh waha khade kuch aadmiyon ko ishara karta hai toh woh guns nikalke apne kuch saathiyon ko maar dete hai.
Jisse dekh ekbaar wapas sabhi shock hojaate hai.

Suraj: Jyaada shock hone ki jarurat nhi hai. Yeh log uss Black Beast se mile hue thee. Jisne mujhe barbaad kardiya. Mere saare dhandhe aadmi sab khatam kardiyee.

Soniya Meera aur Ritika Aryan ki taraf dekhte hai toh woh shant baitha sab sunta rehta hai.

Suraj: Tumne pucha main kyo nafrat karta hu. Toh suno. Bachpan se lekar aajtak tune mujhse sabkuch chinna hai. Pahle maa baap ka pyaar chinna phir unki attension chinn li.

Phir jab College gaye toh waha pe main jiss ladki se pyaar karta tha tune woh bhi chinn liyaa.

Vikram: Maine kab tera pyaar chinna. Main toh jaanta bhi nahi tha tu kisse pyaar karta tha. Main toh khud Rashmi se pyaar karta tha aur woh bhi mere se.

Suraj: Rashmi. Jisse main pahli nazar mein hi pyaar kar baitha thaa woh tere se pyaar karti thi. Jisko main apni biwi banana chahta tha tune usko meri bhabhi bana diya. Uss din se main tere se nafrat karne laga. Phir papa ne property mein jyaada hissa tere ko diya. Kyo kyuki tu unka layak beta thaa. Par phir unhone meri marzi ke khilaf meri shaadi iss Meenakshi se karwa di jisse maine kabhi pyaar kiya hi nhi. Main toh bas isiliye iske saath tha taaki tujhe aur tere parivaar ko tere sang rehke khatam kar saku. Uss din maine yeh kasam khayi tujhe aur tere parivaar ko barbaad kardunga.

Rashmi: Maine kabhi tumhe uss nazar se nhi dekha. Maine humesha tumhe apna bhai manna tha. Aur mujhe Vikram se pahle din hi pyaar hogya thaa.

Suraj: Isiliye toh mujhe isse nafrat hai. Isne mujhse meri har khushi chinn li. Aur jab mujhe mera pyaar nhi mila aur papa ne bhi mere saath bura kiya toh maine kasam khaayi. Uske kuch din baad maine ek aadmi ko police se bachaya tha tab mujhe pata chala woh India mein terrorists group chalata hai.

Tab mujhe tujhe khatam karne ka aur besumaar daulat paane ka raasta nazar aaya. Maine uss group ko join karliya. Aur maine jisko bachaya tha woh uss group ka head yaani ke boss thaa. Maine uske saath milke bahot se bomb blast terrorists attacks karwaye. Aur dekhte hi dekhte uske marne ke baad main ban gaya uss group ka boss.
Aur ab mere paas paisa tha power tha ab main tujhe khatam kar sakta tha. Par maine socha pahle tujhe barbaad karunga. Phir tadpa tadpa ke maarunga.

Aur tab mera pahla shikaar bana tera bada beta usko tere aur Aryan jo tum sab ki aankho ka taara tha uske khilaaf bhadkaya. Aur kismat se yeh bhadka bhi. Phir mera sabse bada shikaar bana tum sab ki aankho ka taara yaani ke Aryan Malhotra.

Mujhe pata chala mera pyaara bhatija ek ladki se pyaar kar baithaa. Maine uski puri kundli nikalwayi toh pata chala woh ek bahot hi chalu kisam ki ladki hai paiso ke liye aur apne faiydo ke liye Aryan ka use kar rahi hai. Tab maine mere sabse khash aadmi aur yaha ka present local MLA ke bete Rajesh ko uss ladki ke pichhe lagaya aur usko bola uss ladki ko apne pyaar mein phasaye.

Aur iske Birthday wale din maine tum sabko ek aisa drug dilwaya jisse tum sabka dimaag blank hojaaye aur jo tum sab dekho sunno usko hi sach maano. Aur tum sab ke saamne uss ladki ke saath jabardasti ka scene create hua jisse tum sabne dekha aur drug ke asar ke kaaran sach maana aur apne aankh ke taare se nafrat karne lage. Aage uske saath kya hua yeh toh tum sabko pata hi hoga. Tumhara pyaara beta tumhe chor ke chala gaya aur tumsab se ab tak sirf aur sirf nafrat karta aaya hai.

Jab sab ne sachai sunni toh unke aankho se aansu nikalne lagee. Aryan ki aankho mein bhi aansu thee.

Suraj: Aryan mere bhatije tere parivaar wale bekasoor hai unhone toh mere drug ke wajah se tere saath waisa kiya aur plan tha tujhe unse alag karna tujhe innlogo se nafrat karana. Aur dekh mujhe success bhi mila.

Aryan: Tune yeh achha nhi kiya. Meri kya galti thi jo tune mujhe mere parivaar se alag kiya aur main unse nafrat karta raha.

Suraj: Tere sabse badi galti yahi thi tu inka beta hai aur pure parivaar ke aankho ka taara hai.

Aryan: Bas ekbaar mere haath khol de tujhe toh main chorungaaa nhi.

Suraj bas jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Aryan: Mummy Papa Didi Chachi Bua mujhe maaf kardee. Main bewajah aaplogo se nafrat karte aaya aur naajane kitni badtameezi ki. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Rashmi: Aryann mera bachhe. Tu bhi humhe maaf karde. Humhe bhi tere upar bharosa karna chahiye tha. Aakhir main ek maa hokar bhi tere upar bharosa nhi rakh paayi.

Aryan: Nhi Mummy. Isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi. Yeh toh isska kiya dhara hai.

Suraj: Haaa sahi kaha bhatije. Tere ghar se nikalne ke baad toh sab kuch achha hone laga. Mera group jo ab pure India ka sabse bada terrorist organization ban gaya tha. Aur isse world ka number one banane ke liye aur iss duniya pe hukumat karne ke liye mujhe chahiye tha kuch special. Aur mujhe uska pata bhi chala Mumbai ke famous scientist Mr and Mrs Sanjay ek aisa formula bana rahe the jo agar kisi normal human ko lag jaata toh woh super human banjaata. Maine bahot koshish ki usko paane ki iske liye unke bete ko bhi maara par woh formula mere haath nhi laga aur ab toh unhone woh formula banana hi chorr diya. Par mera dhandha bahot jorose chalne laga.

Mere pyaare Vikram bhaiya tumhe pata hai main apna saara illegal dhandha Malhotra Group of Companies ke pichhe hi chalata.

Mera sabkuch bahot achha chal raha tha. Par mere jeevan mein Black Beast naam ka grahan laga. Usne mere saare dhandhe khatam kardiye. Naajaane mere kitne aadmiyon ko maara. Mere kitne plan fail kiye. Mujhe aur mere group ko puri tarah barbaad kardiya usne. Kuch time pahle mujhe pata chala yeh Black Beast toh saala Raw Agent nikla aur yeh Mumbai se Delhi sirf mujhe aur mere group ko khatam karne aaya hai. Tab maine mere kuch aadmiyon ko iske saath lagwa diye. Aur yeh wahi aadmi hai.

Soniya jab sunti hai ke Aryan ek Raw Agent hai toh woh hairat se uski taraf dekhti hai. Uski aankhe badi hogyi. Aryan usko ishare se mana karta hai.

Suraj: Maine badi koshish ki par yeh Black Beast kaun hai yeh pata nhi chal paaya. Maine tujhe barbaad karne ke liye ek aur chaal chali apni pyaari beti Soniya ka kidnap karwaya aur badle mein tujhse company ke 90% shares maange par waha bhi iss Black Beast ne sab khatam kardiya.

Soniya: Meraa kidnap aapne karwaya thaa.

Suraj: Haaa meri pyaari bachhi. Kyoki naa toh main tujhse tere iss bewakoof kamzor bhai aur iss maa se pyaar karta hu aur naahi mujhe koi parwah hai. Main toh bas isiliye saath thaa taaki company ke pichhe apna dhandha chala saku.

Meenakshi: Mujhe toh aapko apna pati kehte hue bhi sharm aati hai. Aapki wajah se mere bachhe aur main innsab ki nazro mein gidd gaye. Didi Bhaiyaa mujhe maaf karde. Mera yakeen kare mera innsab mein koi haath nhi thaa aur Aryan sabse jyaada bada paap toh tumhare saath hua hai hosake toh mujhe aur mere bachho ko maaf kardena.

Rashmi: Nhi Meenakshi isme teri koi galti nhi. Aur humare dil mein tere liye koi bairr nhi.

Aryan: Haa chachi. Mummy sahi keh rahi hai.

Suraj: Yeh family drama dekh kar toh meri aankho mein aansu aagaye. Yeh bol jor jor se hasne lagtaa hai.

Woh Black Beast apne aap ko bada hoshiyaar samajta hai. Usne mere main base pe jaake bahar se aaye terrorists ko maardiya aur uske jagah apne aadmi bheje tumlogo ko bachane ke liye. Par usse ek galti hogyi. Usne aadmiyon ke baare mein thik se pata nhi karwaya usne mere aadmiyon ko hi mere plan mein bhej diya. Aur yeh jo maare gaye yeh sab uske aadmi the. Jinke baare mein humhe pata thaa.

Par aaj sabkuch khatam hoga. Yeh parivaar khatam hoga India mein phir se tabahi aayegi aur toh aur main tumsab ko terrorist bana ke yeh desh chorke humesha ke liye chala jaungaa.

Bas kuch der mein jaise hi Parade start hogi jagah jagah bombs blast hongee. Aur unn bomb blast ka pura credit tumsab ke upar aayega. Yeh bol woh jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Fabolous update dear maza aa gya
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Aryan jaldi se Neha ke kamre mein jaake knock karta hai.

Neha neend mein hi door kholti hai aur apne saamne Aryan itni subah dekh kar shock hojaati hai.

Neha: Bhai tum itni subah sab thik hai naa.

Aryan: Haa didi sab thik hai pahle andar chaliye kahi koi dekh naa le.

Phir Aryan andar aata hai aur Neha ko uska jacket deta hai.

Aryan: Didi aaj Suraj Malhotra ka khel khatam hoga. Aur humsab ko kidnap karega include me and my wifes.

Neha: Kyaaa. Toh bhai humhe police mein bol dena chahiye.

Aryan: Don't worry didi. Aap tension naa lo. Maine sab handle karliya hai. Aap bas yeh jacket chupaka pehen lena. Aur aaj jaisa bhi hota hai hone dena jab aap sabka kidnap hoga toh aisa react mat karna ke aaplogo ko sab pata hai.

Neha: Bhai mujhe darr lag raha hai. Agar kisi ko kuch hogya toh. Upar se Meera ki halat.

Aryan: Didi bola naa tension matlo. Maine sab handle karliya hai. Aur Suraj Malhotra bhi humlogo ke saath hi kidnap hone ka natak karega jab tak humlog uski jagah mein naa pahonch jaaye.

Neha: Thikk hai bhaiii.

Aryan: Main mummy papa aur baaki sabko bhi de deta hu. Aur aap tension bilkul mat lena. Suraj Malhotra lo lagega sab uske hisaab se horaha hai par game maine badal diya hai. Usko range haatho pakad ke maarna hai isiliye yeh natak karna hai. Aur mere aadmi waha hongee woh kisi ko kuch nhi hone denge.

Neha: Thikk hai bhaii. Bas tu sambhal lena. Kisi ko kuch mat hone denaa.

Aryan: I Promise kisi ko kuch nhi hoga aur aajke baad humsab eksaath hongee.

Phir Aryan waha se apne bhaiya bhabhi phir mummy papa ke paas jaake unko bhi jacket deta hai.

Radha: Sir Suraj Malhotra apne room se bahar aaraha hai.

Aryan: Thik hai. Main dekhta hu ab tum call rakh sakti ho.

Aryan jaldi se apne parents ke room se nikal ke kitchen mein chala jaata hai. Suraj Malhotra bhi wahi aata hai. Woh Aryan ko dekh kar hi aag babula hojaata hai. Phir kuch soch kar ek kamini muskaan ke saath puchta hai.

Suraj: Kya baat hai Aryan itni subah subah yaha pe.

Aryan uski hasi dekh leta hai par uski baat ka koi jawaab nhi deta aur waha se nikal jaata hai.

Suraj: Bas kuch ghante aur phir tu humesha ke liye chup hojayegaa yeh bol woh hasta hai. Phir paani leke apni kamre mein chala jaata hai.
Uske jaane ke baad Aryan Soniya ke room mein jaata hai.

Aryan jab Soniya ke room mein jaata hai toh woh dekhta hai woh ek gudiya ko apne seene se laga ke sorahi hai. Aryan ko uski masoomiyat pe bahot pyaar aata hai. Woh jaake usko kiss karke uthata hai.

Soniya: Apni aankhe band karke hi. Kya hua bhaiya abhi kyo uthaya abhi toh subah bhi nhi hui aur aaj toh chutti bhi hai mujhe sone do Good Night yeh bol woh wapas so jaati hai.

Aryan: Gudiya utho tumse jaruri kaam hai. Utho gudiya.

Soniya: Rote huee. Kya baat hai bhaiyaa sone do naa. Bahot neend aarahi hai.

Aryan: Gudiya please meri baat sunlo. Phir so jaana.

Soniya: Apne aankhe khol ke. Boliye kya hua.

Phir Aryan usse sab samjhata hai achhe se. Aur usko uska aur Raj ka jacket deta hai.

Soniya: Bhaiyaa kuch hoga toh nhi naa. Mujhe bahot darr lag raha hai.

Aryan: Aree tum toh meri bahadur gudiya ho aur daro mat. Main hu naa. Main kuch nhi hone dungaa. Aur Raj ko kuch mat batana woh darr jayega bas usse yeh jacket kaise bhi karke pehna dena aur aisa pehnna jisse koi dekh naa sakee. Thik hai.

Soniya: Thik hai bhaiyaa.

Phir Aryan waha se apne kamre mein aata hai toh dekhta Meera aur Ritika uth chuki hai aur baith ke baate kar rahi hai.

Ritika: Kaha gaye the. Aur ghar kab aaye.

Aryan: Bas aajki taiyaari karne gaya tha tumlog kab uthi.

Meera: Hum abhi abhi uthe hai aur kaisi taiyaari. Aur sab kuch thik hai naa.

Aryan: Abhi kuch keh nhi sakte. Bomb squad commandos army apne apne kaam mein lage hue hai abhi tak bas ek bomb hi paaya gaya hai. Baaki ka kuch pata nhi. Aur aaj yaha pe bhi bahot khatra hai.

Ritika: Yaha pee. Yaha pe kya khatra hai.

Aryan phir unhe sab batata hai. Jisse sunn woh bhi thoda tension mein aajati hai.

Meera: Aryan kuch hoga toh nhi naa. Humhe kuch hojaaye parwa nhi par humare bachhe ko toh kuch nhi hogaa naaa.

Aryan: Meera ko gale lagate hue. Nhi Meera kuch nhi hogaa main hu naa main humare bachhe ko aur humare parivaar ko kuch nhi hone dungaa. Tum daro mat. Bas jaisa plan kiya hai waisa hi karna. Baaki sab main sambhal lunga. Aur please tum koi action mat karna. Ritika iska dhyaan rakhna yeh koi action naa kare.

Ritika: Tum tension mat lo. Main didi ka aur humare bachhe ka pura dhyaan rakhungi. Waise nikalna kab hai.

Aryan: Ab yeh toh Suraj Malhotra decide karega. Humhe toh pahle nhi jaane ka natak karna hoga. Aur woh humhe kisi bhi halat mein leke jayega.

Tabhi Aryan ko Kiran ka call aata hai.

Kiran: Sir aur 2 jagah se bombs mil chuke hai. Par Red fort aur uske aas paas ke jagah aur Kutubminar ke waha se nhi milaa.

Aryan: Kiran unko bolo aur achhe se search kare. Agar bombs nhi mile toh sabkuch tabah hojayega. Humari saari mehnat barbaad hojayegi.

Kiran: Woh apni puri koshish kar rahe hai sir. Aur toh aur CBI special police force bhi PM ke order pe humhe join karchuki hai.

Aryan: Thats great. Bas ekbaar saare bombs dispose hojaaye phir iss Suraj Malhotra ko bataunga. Tumlog bhi apna dhyaan rakhnaa. Aur ek medical team ko har jagah appoint karo.

Kiran: Okk sir.

Phir call cut hojaata hai.

Ritika: Aryan tum puri raat nhi soye kuch der so jaao. Tumhare calls hum sambhal lenge.

Aryan: Abhi mujhe neend nhi aayegi Ritika. Jab tak situation normal nhi hojaati.

Meera: Tum sona mat bas kuch der aaram karlo. Maana tumhe takawat nhi hogi. Par phir bhi thoda rest karlo. Calls hum dekh lenge.

Aryan: Thikk hai.

Phir Aryan thodi der aaram karne ke liye bed pe let jaata hai. Uska phone Ritika ne le liya.

Excellent update brother great going
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Aryan puri raat nhi soya tha isiliye bed pe let te hi usko neend aajati hai. Woh thodi der hi soya tha ke waha Soniya aajati hai.

Soniya: Bhaiyaa uthiye subah hogyi hai. Aur bua ki family bhi aayi hai. Uthiyeee.

Aryan jaldi se apni aankhe kholta hai aur uth ke baith jaata hai.

Aryan: Gudiya kitne baje hai.

Soniya: Abhi toh 7 baje hai. Chaliye utha jaaiye bhabhiyon ne nashta bana diya hai.

Aryan: Haaa. Thik hai. Jara apni Ritika bhabhi ko bhejna toh.

Soniya waha se nichhe chali jaati hai. Kuch der baad waha Ritika aati hai.

Aryan: Ritika kya report hai.

Ritika: Saari bhid bhaad wali jagah se Red Fort ke aas paas mein se kuch mile hai. Abhi bhi baaki hai.

Aryan: Thikkk haii. Nichhe kya haal hai.

Ritika: Nichhe Suraj Malhotra kuch jyaada hi khush nazar aaraha hai. Aur usne mummyji aur papaji se abhi abhi bahar ghumne chalne ki baat ki hai. Woh log toh tension mein aagaye par usne jabardasti ready karwa liya hai. Aur usne humlogo ko bhi chalne ko kaha hai. Humne waha pe mana kardiya hai.

Aryan: Good. Sab plan se hisaab se hai. Ab woh gudiya ke through bulwayega. Kyoki usse pata hai main uski baat nhi talunga.
Chalo tumlog woh jacket pehen ke ready hojao. Main bhi ekbaar team se contact karlu.

Phir Aryan jaldi se Kiran ko call lagata hai.

Kiran: Sir main abhi aapko hi call karne wali thi. Maine pahle bhi call kiya tha but Ritika Ma'am ne bola aap so gaye hai maine unhe bata diya tha.

Aryan: Haa usne mujhe bata diya hai. Aage ki kya report hai.

Kiran: Sir Kutubminar se mil chuka hai. Aur koi bhi bomb dispose nhi kiya jaa sakta. Saare bomb uss mumbai wale ki tarah hi hai. Unn sabhi bombs ko yaha se durr lejaya jaaya gaya hai.

Aryan: Okkk. Unko boldena kisi ko kuch nhi hona chahiye. Aur Red Fort ka kya hua aur jaha pe parade hone wali hai.

Kiran: Waha pe bhi khoj jaari hai. Aaplogo ka kya hua.

Aryan: Bas plan ke hisaab se nikalenge thodi der mein. Ab agar kuch bhi pata chalta hai toh mujhe sang sang msg karna. Kyoki jab tak saare bombs nhi mil jaate main kuch nhi kar paunga. Suraj Malhotra ke ek ishare se uske aadmi bombs blast karwa denge.

Kiran: Yes Sir.

Phir Aryan Krish ko call karta hai.

Aryan: Krish humlog kuch der baad yaha se niklenge. Tum apne aadmiyon ko thik se waha pe pahoncha dena aur uss address pe jaake jaal bicha do. Uske aadmiyon ki jagah apne aadmi rakhwa do.

Krish: Yes Sir. Sab ready hai. Main aur Avinash pahle se hi waha jaane ke liye nikal chuke hai. Aapka msg milte hi mere aadmi aaplogo ko kidnap karne ke liye waha pe alert hojayenge. Aur hum yaha unnlogo pe attack kardenge.

Aryan: Thik hai. Sambhal ke koi garbar nhi honi chahiye.

Krish: Yes Sir.

Phir Aryan fresh hoke nichhe aata hai toh Supriya ki family wahi pe thi.

Dipali: Good Morning bhai.

Aryan: Good Morning.

Suraj: Aryan humsab aaj ghumne ke liye jaa rahe hai. Tumlog bhi chalo. Ek achha family time spend hojayega.

Aryan: Mr. Suraj Malhotra aapko family time spend karna hai toh kare aur mujhe apni family mein include naa kare. Meri family mein bas Meera Ritika aur Gudiya hi hai.

Suraj: Soniya tum apne bhaiya ko bolo na. Hum sab jayenge aur yeh log ghar mein achha nhi lagta.

Soniya: Bhaiyaa chaliye naa. Bahot din hogye kahi ghumne nhi gaye.

Aryan: Gudiya tumhe jaana hai tum jao. Par mujhe inn shareef logo ke saath nhi jaana.

Soniya: Agar aap nhi jayenge toh main bhi nhi jaungi.

Aryan: Gudiya aisa nhi bolte. Tum jao naa.

Soniya: Nhiii. Jaha mere bhaiya bhabhi nhi jayenge waha main bhi nhi jaungi.

Ankit: Aryan chal naa. Soniya ki khatir hi chal. Dekh uska chehra kaise utar gaya hai.

Aryan: Thik hai chalta hu ab udas mat ho.

Soniya: Khushi se naachte hue uske gale lag jaati hai.

Aryan: Dheere se uske kaan mein. Kya baat hai meri Gudiya toh bahot achhi acting karti hai.

Soniya bas has deti hai.

Aryan ki haa sunke Suraj ki chehre mein ek kamini mushkan aajati hai. Woh sabki nazre bachake apne unhi aadmiyon ko msg karta hai jinhe kal Aryan ne maara tha.

Aryan yeh dekh kar man hi man hasne lagta hai. Tabhi usko Kiran ka msg aata hai ke Red Fort ka bhi mil gaya hai ab bas jaha pe Parade hona hai waha pe aur Red Fort ke aas paas ke jagah ka baaki hai.

Thodi der mein nashta kar sablog nikalne lagte hai. Sabke chehre mein ek tension thi. Sabki nazre Aryan pe hi thi. Aryan unko ishare se tension lene ko mana karta hai.

Sab log car mein baithne lagte hai. Suraj ke saath Deepak Vikram Meenakshi, Supriya aur Dipali baith gaye.

Aur Ankit ki car mein Ragini Rashmi Neha Meera. Dipali ki jidd thi ke woh Aryan ke saath baithegi isiliye Meera waha unke saath baith jaati hai Aryan ki car mein Ritika Dipali aur Soniya.

Idher Ankit ki car mein sablog tension mein thee.

Meera: Mummyji tension mat lijiye kuch nhi hoga. Aryan sab sambhal lega aur waha Aryan ke hi aadmi bhi honge.

Rashmi: Pata hai beta par ek maa hu tension toh hogi hi.

Meera: Aap sabne woh jacket pehni hai naa.

Sab haa boldeta hai.

Meera: Aaplog kidnap hone ke waqt aisa karna jaise sach mein aapka kidnap hua hai. Aur gun dekh ke dariye ga mat sab nakli hongi.

Neha: Meera bhai yeh aab kaise kar raha hai kaun hai woh.

Meera: Didi Aryan India ka bada businessman hai aur Mumbai mein humare aise bahot logo se jaan pehchan hai. Ek time Aryan ne inki madad ki thi toh bas aaj woh log hi help karne aagaye.

Neha: Achhhaa.

Idher yehlog car se jaarahe the tabhi jungle ka rasta aata hai. Jisse dekh ke Suraj ki aankho mein khushi aajati hai. Aryan ne Krish aur unn aadmiyon ko msg kardiya ke woh log location pe pahonch gaye hai.

Kuch der baad wohlog jungle ke bich mein se jaa rahe the. Tabhi Suraj car rokhta hai kyoki saamne koi aadmi behosh padha tha.

Jaise hi sab woh dekhte hai toh samaj jaate hai ab time aachuka hai.

Sablog car se utar ke uss behosh aadmi ke paas aata hai. Wohlog jaise hi unko check karne wale hote hai tabhi waha Aryan ke aadmi aajate hai aur sabko gher lete hai. Sab plan ke hisaab se darne lagte hai.

Unhone ne Aryan ko pakad ke uske sir mein gun point kardi.

Aadmi: Agar kisi ne bhi koi hosiyaari ki toh isko maar dunga. Chup chap chalo humare saath.

Sab waha se chalne lagte hai. Suraj Malhotra toh khushi se chal raha tha. Par baaki sab ke chehre mein tension thi.

Kuch der baad sablog jungle ke andar bicho bich ek band padhe Godown mein jaate hai. Jaha pahle se hi kuch aadmi guns leke khade thee. Unn sabke chehre dhake hue the. Par Aryan unme se Krish aur Avinash ko pehchan leta hai.

Woh aadmi sabko waha le jaake bandh dete hai.

Vikram: Kaun ho tumlog humhe kyo pakda hai. Kya chahiye tumlogo ko. Aur mera bhai kaha hai.

Aadmi: Humlog kaun hai humhe kya chahiye aur tera bhai kaha hai yeh pata chal jayegaa. Thoda rukh jaaa.

Plan tow abhi sahi ja raha h bas koyi gad bad na ho
Uske tow suraj malhotra ka kia hoga woh tow koyi nahi jaanta
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Tabhi waha Suraj Malhotra haste hue aata hai jisse dekh sabhi shock hote hai. Hosakta hai unhe pahle se pata tha par phir bhi dil mein ek aas thi ke Suraj aisa nhi kar sakta par unki aas toot gayi.

Vikram: Suraj tum yaha aise.

Suraj: Haa bhaiyaaa main. Aur yeh mere hi aadmi hai. Mere hi kehne pe inhone aaplogo ko aise bandha hai. Yeh bol woh zor zor se hasne lagta hai.

Vikram: Par kyo. Hum toh tere apne hai. Phir tumne aisa kyo kiya.

Suraj: Nafrat karta hu main tumse tumhare parivaar se.

Vikram: Par kyo kisliyeee.

Suraj: Batata hu batata hu. Pahle ek jaroori kaam toh pura karlu. Yeh bol woh waha khade kuch aadmiyon ko ishara karta hai toh woh guns nikalke apne kuch saathiyon ko maar dete hai.
Jisse dekh ekbaar wapas sabhi shock hojaate hai.

Suraj: Jyaada shock hone ki jarurat nhi hai. Yeh log uss Black Beast se mile hue thee. Jisne mujhe barbaad kardiya. Mere saare dhandhe aadmi sab khatam kardiyee.

Soniya Meera aur Ritika Aryan ki taraf dekhte hai toh woh shant baitha sab sunta rehta hai.

Suraj: Tumne pucha main kyo nafrat karta hu. Toh suno. Bachpan se lekar aajtak tune mujhse sabkuch chinna hai. Pahle maa baap ka pyaar chinna phir unki attension chinn li.

Phir jab College gaye toh waha pe main jiss ladki se pyaar karta tha tune woh bhi chinn liyaa.

Vikram: Maine kab tera pyaar chinna. Main toh jaanta bhi nahi tha tu kisse pyaar karta tha. Main toh khud Rashmi se pyaar karta tha aur woh bhi mere se.

Suraj: Rashmi. Jisse main pahli nazar mein hi pyaar kar baitha thaa woh tere se pyaar karti thi. Jisko main apni biwi banana chahta tha tune usko meri bhabhi bana diya. Uss din se main tere se nafrat karne laga. Phir papa ne property mein jyaada hissa tere ko diya. Kyo kyuki tu unka layak beta thaa. Par phir unhone meri marzi ke khilaf meri shaadi iss Meenakshi se karwa di jisse maine kabhi pyaar kiya hi nhi. Main toh bas isiliye iske saath tha taaki tujhe aur tere parivaar ko tere sang rehke khatam kar saku. Uss din maine yeh kasam khayi tujhe aur tere parivaar ko barbaad kardunga.

Rashmi: Maine kabhi tumhe uss nazar se nhi dekha. Maine humesha tumhe apna bhai manna tha. Aur mujhe Vikram se pahle din hi pyaar hogya thaa.

Suraj: Isiliye toh mujhe isse nafrat hai. Isne mujhse meri har khushi chinn li. Aur jab mujhe mera pyaar nhi mila aur papa ne bhi mere saath bura kiya toh maine kasam khaayi. Uske kuch din baad maine ek aadmi ko police se bachaya tha tab mujhe pata chala woh India mein terrorists group chalata hai.

Tab mujhe tujhe khatam karne ka aur besumaar daulat paane ka raasta nazar aaya. Maine uss group ko join karliya. Aur maine jisko bachaya tha woh uss group ka head yaani ke boss thaa. Maine uske saath milke bahot se bomb blast terrorists attacks karwaye. Aur dekhte hi dekhte uske marne ke baad main ban gaya uss group ka boss.
Aur ab mere paas paisa tha power tha ab main tujhe khatam kar sakta tha. Par maine socha pahle tujhe barbaad karunga. Phir tadpa tadpa ke maarunga.

Aur tab mera pahla shikaar bana tera bada beta usko tere aur Aryan jo tum sab ki aankho ka taara tha uske khilaaf bhadkaya. Aur kismat se yeh bhadka bhi. Phir mera sabse bada shikaar bana tum sab ki aankho ka taara yaani ke Aryan Malhotra.

Mujhe pata chala mera pyaara bhatija ek ladki se pyaar kar baithaa. Maine uski puri kundli nikalwayi toh pata chala woh ek bahot hi chalu kisam ki ladki hai paiso ke liye aur apne faiydo ke liye Aryan ka use kar rahi hai. Tab maine mere sabse khash aadmi aur yaha ka present local MLA ke bete Rajesh ko uss ladki ke pichhe lagaya aur usko bola uss ladki ko apne pyaar mein phasaye.

Aur iske Birthday wale din maine tum sabko ek aisa drug dilwaya jisse tum sabka dimaag blank hojaaye aur jo tum sab dekho sunno usko hi sach maano. Aur tum sab ke saamne uss ladki ke saath jabardasti ka scene create hua jisse tum sabne dekha aur drug ke asar ke kaaran sach maana aur apne aankh ke taare se nafrat karne lage. Aage uske saath kya hua yeh toh tum sabko pata hi hoga. Tumhara pyaara beta tumhe chor ke chala gaya aur tumsab se ab tak sirf aur sirf nafrat karta aaya hai.

Jab sab ne sachai sunni toh unke aankho se aansu nikalne lagee. Aryan ki aankho mein bhi aansu thee.

Suraj: Aryan mere bhatije tere parivaar wale bekasoor hai unhone toh mere drug ke wajah se tere saath waisa kiya aur plan tha tujhe unse alag karna tujhe innlogo se nafrat karana. Aur dekh mujhe success bhi mila.

Aryan: Tune yeh achha nhi kiya. Meri kya galti thi jo tune mujhe mere parivaar se alag kiya aur main unse nafrat karta raha.

Suraj: Tere sabse badi galti yahi thi tu inka beta hai aur pure parivaar ke aankho ka taara hai.

Aryan: Bas ekbaar mere haath khol de tujhe toh main chorungaaa nhi.

Suraj bas jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Aryan: Mummy Papa Didi Chachi Bua mujhe maaf kardee. Main bewajah aaplogo se nafrat karte aaya aur naajane kitni badtameezi ki. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Rashmi: Aryann mera bachhe. Tu bhi humhe maaf karde. Humhe bhi tere upar bharosa karna chahiye tha. Aakhir main ek maa hokar bhi tere upar bharosa nhi rakh paayi.

Aryan: Nhi Mummy. Isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi. Yeh toh isska kiya dhara hai.

Suraj: Haaa sahi kaha bhatije. Tere ghar se nikalne ke baad toh sab kuch achha hone laga. Mera group jo ab pure India ka sabse bada terrorist organization ban gaya tha. Aur isse world ka number one banane ke liye aur iss duniya pe hukumat karne ke liye mujhe chahiye tha kuch special. Aur mujhe uska pata bhi chala Mumbai ke famous scientist Mr and Mrs Sanjay ek aisa formula bana rahe the jo agar kisi normal human ko lag jaata toh woh super human banjaata. Maine bahot koshish ki usko paane ki iske liye unke bete ko bhi maara par woh formula mere haath nhi laga aur ab toh unhone woh formula banana hi chorr diya. Par mera dhandha bahot jorose chalne laga.

Mere pyaare Vikram bhaiya tumhe pata hai main apna saara illegal dhandha Malhotra Group of Companies ke pichhe hi chalata.

Mera sabkuch bahot achha chal raha tha. Par mere jeevan mein Black Beast naam ka grahan laga. Usne mere saare dhandhe khatam kardiye. Naajaane mere kitne aadmiyon ko maara. Mere kitne plan fail kiye. Mujhe aur mere group ko puri tarah barbaad kardiya usne. Kuch time pahle mujhe pata chala yeh Black Beast toh saala Raw Agent nikla aur yeh Mumbai se Delhi sirf mujhe aur mere group ko khatam karne aaya hai. Tab maine mere kuch aadmiyon ko iske saath lagwa diye. Aur yeh wahi aadmi hai.

Soniya jab sunti hai ke Aryan ek Raw Agent hai toh woh hairat se uski taraf dekhti hai. Uski aankhe badi hogyi. Aryan usko ishare se mana karta hai.

Suraj: Maine badi koshish ki par yeh Black Beast kaun hai yeh pata nhi chal paaya. Maine tujhe barbaad karne ke liye ek aur chaal chali apni pyaari beti Soniya ka kidnap karwaya aur badle mein tujhse company ke 90% shares maange par waha bhi iss Black Beast ne sab khatam kardiya.

Soniya: Meraa kidnap aapne karwaya thaa.

Suraj: Haaa meri pyaari bachhi. Kyoki naa toh main tujhse tere iss bewakoof kamzor bhai aur iss maa se pyaar karta hu aur naahi mujhe koi parwah hai. Main toh bas isiliye saath thaa taaki company ke pichhe apna dhandha chala saku.

Meenakshi: Mujhe toh aapko apna pati kehte hue bhi sharm aati hai. Aapki wajah se mere bachhe aur main innsab ki nazro mein gidd gaye. Didi Bhaiyaa mujhe maaf karde. Mera yakeen kare mera innsab mein koi haath nhi thaa aur Aryan sabse jyaada bada paap toh tumhare saath hua hai hosake toh mujhe aur mere bachho ko maaf kardena.

Rashmi: Nhi Meenakshi isme teri koi galti nhi. Aur humare dil mein tere liye koi bairr nhi.

Aryan: Haa chachi. Mummy sahi keh rahi hai.

Suraj: Yeh family drama dekh kar toh meri aankho mein aansu aagaye. Yeh bol jor jor se hasne lagtaa hai.

Woh Black Beast apne aap ko bada hoshiyaar samajta hai. Usne mere main base pe jaake bahar se aaye terrorists ko maardiya aur uske jagah apne aadmi bheje tumlogo ko bachane ke liye. Par usse ek galti hogyi. Usne aadmiyon ke baare mein thik se pata nhi karwaya usne mere aadmiyon ko hi mere plan mein bhej diya. Aur yeh jo maare gaye yeh sab uske aadmi the. Jinke baare mein humhe pata thaa.

Par aaj sabkuch khatam hoga. Yeh parivaar khatam hoga India mein phir se tabahi aayegi aur toh aur main tumsab ko terrorist bana ke yeh desh chorke humesha ke liye chala jaungaa.

Bas kuch der mein jaise hi Parade start hogi jagah jagah bombs blast hongee. Aur unn bomb blast ka pura credit tumsab ke upar aayega. Yeh bol woh jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

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Update 77
Tabhi waha Suraj Malhotra haste hue aata hai jisse dekh sabhi shock hote hai. Hosakta hai unhe pahle se pata tha par phir bhi dil mein ek aas thi ke Suraj aisa nhi kar sakta par unki aas toot gayi.

Vikram: Suraj tum yaha aise.

Suraj: Haa bhaiyaaa main. Aur yeh mere hi aadmi hai. Mere hi kehne pe inhone aaplogo ko aise bandha hai. Yeh bol woh zor zor se hasne lagta hai.

Vikram: Par kyo. Hum toh tere apne hai. Phir tumne aisa kyo kiya.

Suraj: Nafrat karta hu main tumse tumhare parivaar se.

Vikram: Par kyo kisliyeee.

Suraj: Batata hu batata hu. Pahle ek jaroori kaam toh pura karlu. Yeh bol woh waha khade kuch aadmiyon ko ishara karta hai toh woh guns nikalke apne kuch saathiyon ko maar dete hai.
Jisse dekh ekbaar wapas sabhi shock hojaate hai.

Suraj: Jyaada shock hone ki jarurat nhi hai. Yeh log uss Black Beast se mile hue thee. Jisne mujhe barbaad kardiya. Mere saare dhandhe aadmi sab khatam kardiyee.

Soniya Meera aur Ritika Aryan ki taraf dekhte hai toh woh shant baitha sab sunta rehta hai.

Suraj: Tumne pucha main kyo nafrat karta hu. Toh suno. Bachpan se lekar aajtak tune mujhse sabkuch chinna hai. Pahle maa baap ka pyaar chinna phir unki attension chinn li.

Phir jab College gaye toh waha pe main jiss ladki se pyaar karta tha tune woh bhi chinn liyaa.

Vikram: Maine kab tera pyaar chinna. Main toh jaanta bhi nahi tha tu kisse pyaar karta tha. Main toh khud Rashmi se pyaar karta tha aur woh bhi mere se.

Suraj: Rashmi. Jisse main pahli nazar mein hi pyaar kar baitha thaa woh tere se pyaar karti thi. Jisko main apni biwi banana chahta tha tune usko meri bhabhi bana diya. Uss din se main tere se nafrat karne laga. Phir papa ne property mein jyaada hissa tere ko diya. Kyo kyuki tu unka layak beta thaa. Par phir unhone meri marzi ke khilaf meri shaadi iss Meenakshi se karwa di jisse maine kabhi pyaar kiya hi nhi. Main toh bas isiliye iske saath tha taaki tujhe aur tere parivaar ko tere sang rehke khatam kar saku. Uss din maine yeh kasam khayi tujhe aur tere parivaar ko barbaad kardunga.

Rashmi: Maine kabhi tumhe uss nazar se nhi dekha. Maine humesha tumhe apna bhai manna tha. Aur mujhe Vikram se pahle din hi pyaar hogya thaa.

Suraj: Isiliye toh mujhe isse nafrat hai. Isne mujhse meri har khushi chinn li. Aur jab mujhe mera pyaar nhi mila aur papa ne bhi mere saath bura kiya toh maine kasam khaayi. Uske kuch din baad maine ek aadmi ko police se bachaya tha tab mujhe pata chala woh India mein terrorists group chalata hai.

Tab mujhe tujhe khatam karne ka aur besumaar daulat paane ka raasta nazar aaya. Maine uss group ko join karliya. Aur maine jisko bachaya tha woh uss group ka head yaani ke boss thaa. Maine uske saath milke bahot se bomb blast terrorists attacks karwaye. Aur dekhte hi dekhte uske marne ke baad main ban gaya uss group ka boss.
Aur ab mere paas paisa tha power tha ab main tujhe khatam kar sakta tha. Par maine socha pahle tujhe barbaad karunga. Phir tadpa tadpa ke maarunga.

Aur tab mera pahla shikaar bana tera bada beta usko tere aur Aryan jo tum sab ki aankho ka taara tha uske khilaaf bhadkaya. Aur kismat se yeh bhadka bhi. Phir mera sabse bada shikaar bana tum sab ki aankho ka taara yaani ke Aryan Malhotra.

Mujhe pata chala mera pyaara bhatija ek ladki se pyaar kar baithaa. Maine uski puri kundli nikalwayi toh pata chala woh ek bahot hi chalu kisam ki ladki hai paiso ke liye aur apne faiydo ke liye Aryan ka use kar rahi hai. Tab maine mere sabse khash aadmi aur yaha ka present local MLA ke bete Rajesh ko uss ladki ke pichhe lagaya aur usko bola uss ladki ko apne pyaar mein phasaye.

Aur iske Birthday wale din maine tum sabko ek aisa drug dilwaya jisse tum sabka dimaag blank hojaaye aur jo tum sab dekho sunno usko hi sach maano. Aur tum sab ke saamne uss ladki ke saath jabardasti ka scene create hua jisse tum sabne dekha aur drug ke asar ke kaaran sach maana aur apne aankh ke taare se nafrat karne lage. Aage uske saath kya hua yeh toh tum sabko pata hi hoga. Tumhara pyaara beta tumhe chor ke chala gaya aur tumsab se ab tak sirf aur sirf nafrat karta aaya hai.

Jab sab ne sachai sunni toh unke aankho se aansu nikalne lagee. Aryan ki aankho mein bhi aansu thee.

Suraj: Aryan mere bhatije tere parivaar wale bekasoor hai unhone toh mere drug ke wajah se tere saath waisa kiya aur plan tha tujhe unse alag karna tujhe innlogo se nafrat karana. Aur dekh mujhe success bhi mila.

Aryan: Tune yeh achha nhi kiya. Meri kya galti thi jo tune mujhe mere parivaar se alag kiya aur main unse nafrat karta raha.

Suraj: Tere sabse badi galti yahi thi tu inka beta hai aur pure parivaar ke aankho ka taara hai.

Aryan: Bas ekbaar mere haath khol de tujhe toh main chorungaaa nhi.

Suraj bas jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Aryan: Mummy Papa Didi Chachi Bua mujhe maaf kardee. Main bewajah aaplogo se nafrat karte aaya aur naajane kitni badtameezi ki. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Rashmi: Aryann mera bachhe. Tu bhi humhe maaf karde. Humhe bhi tere upar bharosa karna chahiye tha. Aakhir main ek maa hokar bhi tere upar bharosa nhi rakh paayi.

Aryan: Nhi Mummy. Isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi. Yeh toh isska kiya dhara hai.

Suraj: Haaa sahi kaha bhatije. Tere ghar se nikalne ke baad toh sab kuch achha hone laga. Mera group jo ab pure India ka sabse bada terrorist organization ban gaya tha. Aur isse world ka number one banane ke liye aur iss duniya pe hukumat karne ke liye mujhe chahiye tha kuch special. Aur mujhe uska pata bhi chala Mumbai ke famous scientist Mr and Mrs Sanjay ek aisa formula bana rahe the jo agar kisi normal human ko lag jaata toh woh super human banjaata. Maine bahot koshish ki usko paane ki iske liye unke bete ko bhi maara par woh formula mere haath nhi laga aur ab toh unhone woh formula banana hi chorr diya. Par mera dhandha bahot jorose chalne laga.

Mere pyaare Vikram bhaiya tumhe pata hai main apna saara illegal dhandha Malhotra Group of Companies ke pichhe hi chalata.

Mera sabkuch bahot achha chal raha tha. Par mere jeevan mein Black Beast naam ka grahan laga. Usne mere saare dhandhe khatam kardiye. Naajaane mere kitne aadmiyon ko maara. Mere kitne plan fail kiye. Mujhe aur mere group ko puri tarah barbaad kardiya usne. Kuch time pahle mujhe pata chala yeh Black Beast toh saala Raw Agent nikla aur yeh Mumbai se Delhi sirf mujhe aur mere group ko khatam karne aaya hai. Tab maine mere kuch aadmiyon ko iske saath lagwa diye. Aur yeh wahi aadmi hai.

Soniya jab sunti hai ke Aryan ek Raw Agent hai toh woh hairat se uski taraf dekhti hai. Uski aankhe badi hogyi. Aryan usko ishare se mana karta hai.

Suraj: Maine badi koshish ki par yeh Black Beast kaun hai yeh pata nhi chal paaya. Maine tujhe barbaad karne ke liye ek aur chaal chali apni pyaari beti Soniya ka kidnap karwaya aur badle mein tujhse company ke 90% shares maange par waha bhi iss Black Beast ne sab khatam kardiya.

Soniya: Meraa kidnap aapne karwaya thaa.

Suraj: Haaa meri pyaari bachhi. Kyoki naa toh main tujhse tere iss bewakoof kamzor bhai aur iss maa se pyaar karta hu aur naahi mujhe koi parwah hai. Main toh bas isiliye saath thaa taaki company ke pichhe apna dhandha chala saku.

Meenakshi: Mujhe toh aapko apna pati kehte hue bhi sharm aati hai. Aapki wajah se mere bachhe aur main innsab ki nazro mein gidd gaye. Didi Bhaiyaa mujhe maaf karde. Mera yakeen kare mera innsab mein koi haath nhi thaa aur Aryan sabse jyaada bada paap toh tumhare saath hua hai hosake toh mujhe aur mere bachho ko maaf kardena.

Rashmi: Nhi Meenakshi isme teri koi galti nhi. Aur humare dil mein tere liye koi bairr nhi.

Aryan: Haa chachi. Mummy sahi keh rahi hai.

Suraj: Yeh family drama dekh kar toh meri aankho mein aansu aagaye. Yeh bol jor jor se hasne lagtaa hai.

Woh Black Beast apne aap ko bada hoshiyaar samajta hai. Usne mere main base pe jaake bahar se aaye terrorists ko maardiya aur uske jagah apne aadmi bheje tumlogo ko bachane ke liye. Par usse ek galti hogyi. Usne aadmiyon ke baare mein thik se pata nhi karwaya usne mere aadmiyon ko hi mere plan mein bhej diya. Aur yeh jo maare gaye yeh sab uske aadmi the. Jinke baare mein humhe pata thaa.

Par aaj sabkuch khatam hoga. Yeh parivaar khatam hoga India mein phir se tabahi aayegi aur toh aur main tumsab ko terrorist bana ke yeh desh chorke humesha ke liye chala jaungaa.

Bas kuch der mein jaise hi Parade start hogi jagah jagah bombs blast hongee. Aur unn bomb blast ka pura credit tumsab ke upar aayega. Yeh bol woh jor jor se hasne lagta hai.

Ya kya ayran k jo admi thy in ko mar diya lakin lagya hai aryan k pass koi dosra plan zaroor ho ga dekty hain kya hota hai
 
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