Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

[shabjaila]

yaar agla part likhna ..please mujhe Aryan bahut like hi....

 

[Jaguaar]

yaar agla part likhna ..please mujhe Aryan bahut like hi....

Agle part ke baare mein aisa kuch socha nhi hai. Agar likhta bhi hu toh woh underworld ke base mein hogi. Lekin abhi kuch socha nhi hai.

 

[shabjaila]

superb.... thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks .we wait ....

 

[shabjaila]

huwa to aliens ko bhi lagao.....adveencture hoga...

 

[Jaguaar]

huwa to aliens ko bhi lagao.....adveencture hoga...

Uss tarah ki story likhne mein mujhe bahot problem hoti hai. Main scene ko thik se set nhi kar sakta. Isiliye no supernatural

 

[shabjaila]

ok bhai

 

[Asif khan]

Waise uss story mein jyaada incest nhi hai

Aap chahe toh padh sakte hai

OK bahi try Kro ga agr achi lagi to read Kro ga nahi to nahi

 

[Jaguaar]

OK bahi try Kro ga agr achi lagi to read Kro ga nahi to nahi

Jaisi aapki marzi

 

[Gaandu No 1]

Jaisi aapki marzi

Bhai new story start kar do

 

[Illagle]

Mast story hai bro