• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

  • Haa

    Votes: 93 96.9%
  • Naa

    Votes: 3 3.1%

  • Total voters
    96
  • Poll closed .

Jaguaar

Well-Known Member
17,679
60,552
244
Update 53
Rashmi: Kya hua mera beta kaha hai woh aapke saath nhi aaya.
Vikram: Woh mere saath nhi aaya. Woh waha se chala gaya. Aur ab woh humara pahle wala Aryan nhi raha. Usko bachane ke liye khud commissioner aaya thaa jisko uske seniors ne specially call karke Aryan ko bachane ke liye bola tha.
Neha: Haa dad aapne sahi kaha bhai ab koi normal insaan nhi hai. Usne hi minister ko suspend karwaya.
Vikram: Aur woh ab humse sirf nafrat karta hai. Maine usse maafi maang ghar chalne ko bola toh usne gussa ho inspector ko aisa maara ke woh behosh hogya.
Rashmi: Main mere bete ki bina zinda nhi rahungi. Agar woh nhi aaya toh main apni jaan de dungi. Shayad yehi mere karmo ki saza hogi.
Neha: Nhi maa. Aisa kuch nhi karna. Abhi bhi humare paas ek raasta hai. Hum Soniya ko bolke bhai ko yaha pe bula sakte hai.
Meenakshi: Par woh nhi manegi.
Neha: Chachi humhe usse manana hogaa. Agar woh bhai ko bolegi toh bhai uski baat ko inkaar nhi kar payega. Aur agar ek baar bhai yaha aagaya toh hum uski nafrat ko pyaar mein badal denge.
Rashmi: Soniya kaha hai. Main khud usse baat karungi.
Meenakshi: Woh toh school mein hai. Aur woh aaj apne kisi friend ke ghar jaane wali hai isiliye raat ko hi aayegi.
Vikram: Thik hai usse aane do hum baat karte hai.
Idher Aryan, Meera Ritika aur Rishi car se Soniya ke school ke bahar aajate hai. Thodi der mein Soniya ki school ki chutti hoti hai toh woh Raj ke saath bahar aarahi hoti hai. Soniya Raj ko ghar jaane ko bolti hai. Raj usse puchta hai woh kaha jaa rahi hai toh woh usse bol deti hai woh apne friend ke ghar jayegi aur raat ko aayegi. Raj bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.
Aryan bhi Soniya ke saamne aata hai. Soniya Aryan ko dekh uske gale lag jaati hai.
Soniya: Aap aagaye bhaiya. Kaise hai aap.
Aryan: Ab gudiya ne bulaya hai toh aana hi padegaa. Aur main bilkul thik hu.
Soniya kisi ko dhund rahi thi.
Aryan: Kya hua gudiya kisse dhund rahi ho.
Soniya: Woh bhabhiyan kahi dikhayi nhi de rahi hai.
Aryan: Aree woh car ke andar hai. Jao car mein jaake baith jao.
Aaj Aryan ek 4 seater ki car leke aaya tha.
Soniya daud ke car ke paas jaati hai aur car ka door kholti hai jaha Rishi pahle se tha.
Soniya: Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai. Aur meri bhabhiyan kaha hai.
Abhi kuch bolta uske pahle hi.
Hum yaha hai gudiya.
Soniya unki awaaz sunn uss taraf dekhti aur jhatt se uss taraf jaake unke gale lag jaati hai.
Soniya: Hii bhabhi. Main hu Soniya Malhotra. Aryan Malhotra ki chotti behen. Aap kaisi hai.
Dono: Hi Soniya. Hum ekdum fit hai tum kaisi ho.
Soniya: Parso tak toh thik nhi thi par kal se ekdum fit hu. Achha aap dono mein Meera bhabhi kaun hai aur Ritika bhabhi kaun hai. Tabhi Aryan Soniya aur baaki sabke liye thanda le aata hai.
Soniya: Thank You bhaiyaa.
Phir Aryan car start karta hai. Aur apne ghar ki taraf badha deta hai.
Meera: Yeh hai Ritika aur main hu Meera.
Soniya Meera ki godd mein sote hue. Aur bataiye bhabhiyon bhaiya aapko pareshan toh nhi karte naa. Agar kare toh mujhe batana main thik kardungi.
Meera uske sirr ko sehlate hue. Nhi gudiya tumhare bhaiya bilkul pareshan nhi karte. Agar karenge toh sabse pahle tumhe hi batayenge.
Aryan: Aree yeh kya baat hui. Mile 10 mins nhi hue aur meri chugli suru kardi.
Soniya: Aap chup chap gaadi chalaye. Humari baate naa sunne.
Rishi: Chorr de bhai. Tu isse nhi jitt sakta.
Soniya: Kuch kaha aapne Rishi bhai.
Rishi: Nhi gudiya. Maine kaha kuch kaha main toh isse gaadi tez chalane ko keh raha hu.
Soniya: Phir thik hai. Bhabhi aapteeno ki shaadi kab hui.
Meera: Bas kuch waqat pahle hi hui hai.
Soniya: Oo achha. Waha aaplog kya akele rehte the.
Ritika: Aree nhi waha humare maa baba hai naa. Hum unke saath hi rehte thee.
Soniya: Aur bhai ka accident kaise hua jisse unka chehra hi badal gaya.
Ritika: Yeh toh humhe bhi nhi pata yeh toh humse milne ke pahle hua thaa humne kitna pucha batao. Par batata hi nhi.
Soniya: Choro unko.
Aryan: Achha beta bhabhiyan kya mili bhaiyaa ko hi bhul gaye.
Soniya has deti hai.
Aise hi baat karte karte yeh log ghar aajate hai.
Soniya aur Rishi toh sirf ghar hi dekh rahe the.
Soniya: Bhaiyaa yeh aapka hai.
Aryan: Haa gudiya. Tumhe pasand aaya.
Soniya: Bhaiya bahot pasand aaya. Jaha main rehti hu yeh toh usse bhi bada aur khubsoorat hai.
Rishi: Haa bhai sach mein bahot khubsoorat hai. Tu hai kaun bhai.
Aaj mujhe bahot kuch dekhne ko milraha hai. Yeh baat usne dheere se kahi thi.
Aryan: Chalo andar chalte hai.
Phir woh charo andar aate hai. Soniya sidha jaake hall mein padhe sofa pe baith jaati hai.
Meera: Chalo pahle fresh holo. Phir khaana khayenge.
Soniya: Okk bhabhi. Phir Soniya apne bag se kuch kapde nikalti hai.
Meera aur Ritika usko leke apne room mein jaati hai.
Soniya: Bhabhi yeh aapka room hai.
Meera: Haa gudiya.
Soniya: Bahot khubsoorat hai.
Phir woh washroom mein jaake fresh hoti hai. Phir Meera aur Ritika bhi jaati hai. Jab dono bahar aati hai toh dekhti hai Soniya unke dressing table pe baith ke makeup karrahi hoti hai.
Soniya: Bhabhi aap aagayi. Chaliye nichhe chalte hai.
Phir woh log nicche aate hai. Jaha Aryan aur Rishi baate kar rahe the.
Meera Ritika aur Soniya bhi wahi join karte hai.
Rishi: Bhabhi yeh toh batayega nhi aap hi batao. Yeh sab kya hai aur kaise hai.
Meera: Tumne bataya kyo nhi.
Aryan: Aree kya batau samaj nhi aaraha hai. Tumlog hi bata do.
Meera: Kya tum dono ne AMR Group of Companies ka naam suna hai.
Soniya: Wahi company naa jiske bahot saare business hai. Aur abhi India ke top mein world ke top 5 mein hai.
Meera: Haa wahi company.
Rishi: Toh iss company se kya.
Ritika: Kya tum iss AMR se kuch guess nhi kar paaye. Gudiya kya tum bhi nhi kar paayi.
Soniya aur Rishi ekdusre ko dekhte hai aur shock se ek saath bolte hai.
Dono: Kya hum jo soch rahe hai wahi kya.
Meera: Haa tum jo soch rahe ho wahi sach hai.
Soniya: Iska matlab India ki top company AMR group of companies yaani Aryan Meera Ritika group of companies.
Aryan: Haa.
Rishi: Par kaise bhai.
Aryan: Mumbai mein mere accident ke baad jab mera chehra change hua phir mujhe gym jaane ka bahot shock chadha. Isiliye maine gym start kardi aur body banai. Phir mujhe underground fight ke baare mein pata chala. Main woh dekhne gaya toh mujhe usme interest hua toh main bhi ladne laga. Jisse mere paas bahot paise jama hua. Phir maine Stock Market mein invest kiya jiska mujhe bahot achha refund mila. Phir humne humare dost ki madad se ek company kholi. Aur aaj woh company hi India ke top mein hai. Aur tumlogo ko shayad yakeen nhi hoga. Main Ritika aur Meera aajtak sirf 4-5 baar hi office gaye hai woh bhi boss ke haq se nhi as a friend.
Aur yeh company ko aaj top mein karne ka pura haq humare usi dost ko jaata hai. Aur usi ne humara addmission iss college mein karaya aur yeh ghar ko khareeda hai. Par tumlog iss company ke baare mein kisi ko kuch bhi nhi bataoge.
Soniya: Waah bhaiya kyaa baat hai. Aap toh Mumbai jaake ekdum hi badal gaye. India ke top company ke owner ho. Aur yeh baat kisi ko pata hi nhi hai. Waise aapke uss dost ka naam kya hai.
Aryan: Sameera ji.
Soniya: Kya hum unse mil sakte hai.
Meera: Par woh toh Mumbai mein hai apni maa ke saath.
Soniya: Oookkk.
Ritika: Par tum chinta mat karo woh aane wali hai abhi kuch din mein humse milne fab tumse bhi milayenge.
Soniya: Thank You bhabhi bol Ritika ke gale lag gayi.
Meera: Chalo ab khaane khaate hai.
Phir sab khana khaate hai.
Khaana khane ke baad Rishi ghar chala jaata hai kyoki uski maa ghar pe akeli thi.
 

Sumit@379

Member
187
723
93
Update 53
Rashmi: Kya hua mera beta kaha hai woh aapke saath nhi aaya.

Vikram: Woh mere saath nhi aaya. Woh waha se chala gaya. Aur ab woh humara pahle wala Aryan nhi raha. Usko bachane ke liye khud commissioner aaya thaa jisko uske seniors ne specially call karke Aryan ko bachane ke liye bola tha.

Neha: Haa dad aapne sahi kaha bhai ab koi normal insaan nhi hai. Usne hi minister ko suspend karwaya.

Vikram: Aur woh ab humse sirf nafrat karta hai. Maine usse maafi maang ghar chalne ko bola toh usne gussa ho inspector ko aisa maara ke woh behosh hogya.

Rashmi: Main mere bete ki bina zinda nhi rahungi. Agar woh nhi aaya toh main apni jaan de dungi. Shayad yehi mere karmo ki saza hogi.

Neha: Nhi maa. Aisa kuch nhi karna. Abhi bhi humare paas ek raasta hai. Hum Soniya ko bolke bhai ko yaha pe bula sakte hai.

Meenakshi: Par woh nhi manegi.

Neha: Chachi humhe usse manana hogaa. Agar woh bhai ko bolegi toh bhai uski baat ko inkaar nhi kar payega. Aur agar ek baar bhai yaha aagaya toh hum uski nafrat ko pyaar mein badal denge.

Rashmi: Soniya kaha hai. Main khud usse baat karungi.

Meenakshi: Woh toh school mein hai. Aur woh aaj apne kisi friend ke ghar jaane wali hai isiliye raat ko hi aayegi.

Vikram: Thik hai usse aane do hum baat karte hai.

Idher Aryan, Meera Ritika aur Rishi car se Soniya ke school ke bahar aajate hai. Thodi der mein Soniya ki school ki chutti hoti hai toh woh Raj ke saath bahar aarahi hoti hai. Soniya Raj ko ghar jaane ko bolti hai. Raj usse puchta hai woh kaha jaa rahi hai toh woh usse bol deti hai woh apne friend ke ghar jayegi aur raat ko aayegi. Raj bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Aryan bhi Soniya ke saamne aata hai. Soniya Aryan ko dekh uske gale lag jaati hai.

Soniya: Aap aagaye bhaiya. Kaise hai aap.

Aryan: Ab gudiya ne bulaya hai toh aana hi padegaa. Aur main bilkul thik hu.

Soniya kisi ko dhund rahi thi.

Aryan: Kya hua gudiya kisse dhund rahi ho.

Soniya: Woh bhabhiyan kahi dikhayi nhi de rahi hai.

Aryan: Aree woh car ke andar hai. Jao car mein jaake baith jao.

Aaj Aryan ek 4 seater ki car leke aaya tha.

Soniya daud ke car ke paas jaati hai aur car ka door kholti hai jaha Rishi pahle se tha.

Soniya: Aap yaha kya kar rahe hai. Aur meri bhabhiyan kaha hai.

Abhi kuch bolta uske pahle hi.

Hum yaha hai gudiya.

Soniya unki awaaz sunn uss taraf dekhti aur jhatt se uss taraf jaake unke gale lag jaati hai.

Soniya: Hii bhabhi. Main hu Soniya Malhotra. Aryan Malhotra ki chotti behen. Aap kaisi hai.

Dono: Hi Soniya. Hum ekdum fit hai tum kaisi ho.

Soniya: Parso tak toh thik nhi thi par kal se ekdum fit hu. Achha aap dono mein Meera bhabhi kaun hai aur Ritika bhabhi kaun hai. Tabhi Aryan Soniya aur baaki sabke liye thanda le aata hai.

Soniya: Thank You bhaiyaa.

Phir Aryan car start karta hai. Aur apne ghar ki taraf badha deta hai.

Meera: Yeh hai Ritika aur main hu Meera.

Soniya Meera ki godd mein sote hue. Aur bataiye bhabhiyon bhaiya aapko pareshan toh nhi karte naa. Agar kare toh mujhe batana main thik kardungi.

Meera uske sirr ko sehlate hue. Nhi gudiya tumhare bhaiya bilkul pareshan nhi karte. Agar karenge toh sabse pahle tumhe hi batayenge.

Aryan: Aree yeh kya baat hui. Mile 10 mins nhi hue aur meri chugli suru kardi.

Soniya: Aap chup chap gaadi chalaye. Humari baate naa sunne.

Rishi: Chorr de bhai. Tu isse nhi jitt sakta.

Soniya: Kuch kaha aapne Rishi bhai.

Rishi: Nhi gudiya. Maine kaha kuch kaha main toh isse gaadi tez chalane ko keh raha hu.

Soniya: Phir thik hai. Bhabhi aapteeno ki shaadi kab hui.

Meera: Bas kuch waqat pahle hi hui hai.

Soniya: Oo achha. Waha aaplog kya akele rehte the.

Ritika: Aree nhi waha humare maa baba hai naa. Hum unke saath hi rehte thee.

Soniya: Aur bhai ka accident kaise hua jisse unka chehra hi badal gaya.

Ritika: Yeh toh humhe bhi nhi pata yeh toh humse milne ke pahle hua thaa humne kitna pucha batao. Par batata hi nhi.

Soniya: Choro unko.

Aryan: Achha beta bhabhiyan kya mili bhaiyaa ko hi bhul gaye.

Soniya has deti hai.

Aise hi baat karte karte yeh log ghar aajate hai.

Soniya aur Rishi toh sirf ghar hi dekh rahe the.

Soniya: Bhaiyaa yeh aapka hai.

Aryan: Haa gudiya. Tumhe pasand aaya.

Soniya: Bhaiya bahot pasand aaya. Jaha main rehti hu yeh toh usse bhi bada aur khubsoorat hai.

Rishi: Haa bhai sach mein bahot khubsoorat hai. Tu hai kaun bhai.
Aaj mujhe bahot kuch dekhne ko milraha hai. Yeh baat usne dheere se kahi thi.

Aryan: Chalo andar chalte hai.

Phir woh charo andar aate hai. Soniya sidha jaake hall mein padhe sofa pe baith jaati hai.

Meera: Chalo pahle fresh holo. Phir khaana khayenge.

Soniya: Okk bhabhi. Phir Soniya apne bag se kuch kapde nikalti hai.

Meera aur Ritika usko leke apne room mein jaati hai.

Soniya: Bhabhi yeh aapka room hai.

Meera: Haa gudiya.

Soniya: Bahot khubsoorat hai.

Phir woh washroom mein jaake fresh hoti hai. Phir Meera aur Ritika bhi jaati hai. Jab dono bahar aati hai toh dekhti hai Soniya unke dressing table pe baith ke makeup karrahi hoti hai.

Soniya: Bhabhi aap aagayi. Chaliye nichhe chalte hai.

Phir woh log nicche aate hai. Jaha Aryan aur Rishi baate kar rahe the.

Meera Ritika aur Soniya bhi wahi join karte hai.

Rishi: Bhabhi yeh toh batayega nhi aap hi batao. Yeh sab kya hai aur kaise hai.

Meera: Tumne bataya kyo nhi.

Aryan: Aree kya batau samaj nhi aaraha hai. Tumlog hi bata do.

Meera: Kya tum dono ne AMR Group of Companies ka naam suna hai.

Soniya: Wahi company naa jiske bahot saare business hai. Aur abhi India ke top mein world ke top 5 mein hai.

Meera: Haa wahi company.

Rishi: Toh iss company se kya.

Ritika: Kya tum iss AMR se kuch guess nhi kar paaye. Gudiya kya tum bhi nhi kar paayi.

Soniya aur Rishi ekdusre ko dekhte hai aur shock se ek saath bolte hai.

Dono: Kya hum jo soch rahe hai wahi kya.

Meera: Haa tum jo soch rahe ho wahi sach hai.

Soniya: Iska matlab India ki top company AMR group of companies yaani Aryan Meera Ritika group of companies.

Aryan: Haa.

Rishi: Par kaise bhai.

Aryan: Mumbai mein mere accident ke baad jab mera chehra change hua phir mujhe gym jaane ka bahot shock chadha. Isiliye maine gym start kardi aur body banai. Phir mujhe underground fight ke baare mein pata chala. Main woh dekhne gaya toh mujhe usme interest hua toh main bhi ladne laga. Jisse mere paas bahot paise jama hua. Phir maine Stock Market mein invest kiya jiska mujhe bahot achha refund mila. Phir humne humare dost ki madad se ek company kholi. Aur aaj woh company hi India ke top mein hai. Aur tumlogo ko shayad yakeen nhi hoga. Main Ritika aur Meera aajtak sirf 4-5 baar hi office gaye hai woh bhi boss ke haq se nhi as a friend.
Aur yeh company ko aaj top mein karne ka pura haq humare usi dost ko jaata hai. Aur usi ne humara addmission iss college mein karaya aur yeh ghar ko khareeda hai. Par tumlog iss company ke baare mein kisi ko kuch bhi nhi bataoge.

Soniya: Waah bhaiya kyaa baat hai. Aap toh Mumbai jaake ekdum hi badal gaye. India ke top company ke owner ho. Aur yeh baat kisi ko pata hi nhi hai. Waise aapke uss dost ka naam kya hai.

Aryan: Sameera ji.

Soniya: Kya hum unse mil sakte hai.

Meera: Par woh toh Mumbai mein hai apni maa ke saath.

Soniya: Oookkk.

Ritika: Par tum chinta mat karo woh aane wali hai abhi kuch din mein humse milne fab tumse bhi milayenge.

Soniya: Thank You bhabhi bol Ritika ke gale lag gayi.

Meera: Chalo ab khaane khaate hai.

Phir sab khana khaate hai.

Khaana khane ke baad Rishi ghar chala jaata hai kyoki uski maa ghar pe akeli thi.

Awesome update 👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 congratulations 300 page's...
 
Top