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Fantasy Pyaar Ya Nafrat ( Completed)

Story achhi hai aur aage likhna chahiye

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Jaguaar

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Zaberdast bahot shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Chalo yeh achcha ho gaya family poori ek ho gayi nafrat khatam ho gayi
Ab dekhte h Suraj malhotra ki maut ka nanga naach
Behtareen shaandaar
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Update 71
Agle din plan ke mutabik Aryan ne Ankit ko ek jagah ka address msg kardiya aur unko waha laane ko bola.

Ankit aur Ragini bhi plan ke mutabik unko waha le jaane lagte hai.

Neha: Bhaiya bhabhi bataiye naa aaplog humhe kaha le jaarahe hai.

Rashmi: Haa beta bolo naa.

Ragini: Bas kuch waqt rukh jaaiye aaplogo aaj bahot kuch milne wala hai.

Kuch der baad woh log Aryan ki batayi jagah pe aajate hai.

Wohlog ek ghar ke andar aate hai. Ghar mein puri tarah se andhera tha. Tabhi waha ek projector chalta hai jisme Vikram Rashmi aur Neha ki Aryan ke saath Happy Moments ke tasveer dikh rahi thi.

Woh teeno yehsab dekh ke pahle toh shock hote hai phir jaise jaise projector aage chalta hai waise waise unki aankho se aansu girne lagte hai. Unko Aryan ke saath bitaye har ek pal yaad aane lagta hai. Usme Aryan ki unke saath bachpan se lekar 17 saal tak ki har tasveer thi.

Achanak se lights onn hoti hai aur unke saamne Aryan Meera aur Ritika khade the. Waha khade sabhi ke aankho mein aansu the.

Aaj Rashmi se control nhi hota woh jaake Aryan ke pairon mein girne lagti hai toh Aryan usko pakad ke apne seene se laga leta hai.

Aryan: Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai Mummy. Yeh sab karke mujhse ek aur paap mat karwaiye. Pahle hi bina wajah aaplogo se nafrat karke aaplogo se badtameezi karke ek paap karchuka hu. Mujhe maaf kardijiye mummy main ek achha beta nhi ban saka.

Rashmi: Kya bola tune mujhe. Wapas bol. Taras gayi hu tere muh se yeh sabd sunne ke liye. Please beta wapas bol.

Aryan: Mummy Mummy Mummy.

Rashmi rote hue Aryan ke seene se lag jaati hai. Aryan bhi unko seene se laga ke rone lagta hai. Aaj kitne saal baad maa bete gale mile the. Unka rona rukh hi nhi raha tha. Waha khade sabhi ke aankho mein aansu the.

Rashmi: Aryan mera beta. Mujhe maaf karde beta main ek achhi maa nhi ban paayi. Mujhe apne bete pe bharosa karna chahiye thaa. Mujhe maaf karde. Yeh bol woh wapas rone lagti hai.

Aryan: Nhi mummy isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi thi. Woh haalaat hi aise hogye the. Aap mujhe maaf karde maine aap ke saath bahot badtameezi ki. Kya kya nhi kaha aapko. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Rashmi: Nhi beta tune kuch galat nhi kiya tha. Maine jo kiya tha uski yahi saza thi. Tu maafi mat maang. Yeh keh ke wapas uske seene se lag jaati hai.

Neha: Bhaii kya mujhe maaf nhi karegaa.

Aryan: Didi. Yeh bol woh apne baahe faila deta hai.

Neha rote hue daud ke aati hai Aryan ke seene se lag jaati hai.

Neha: Tere muh se yeh didi sunne ke liye taras gayi thi. Mujhe maaf karde bhai. Main bahot buri hu. Maine tujhe kitna maara kitna rulaya. Aur sabse bada paap toh yeh kiya maine tujh par kitna ghinona ilzaam lagaya. Mujhe maaf karde bhai.

Aryan: Nhiii didi. Aisa naa bolo. Aap meri sabse achhi didi ho. Aur aapne kuch nhi kiya tha. Aur aap bhi mujhe maaf karde maine aapke saath bahot bura kiya. Aapko kitna kuch bola aur toh aur aapko maara bhi tha. Please mujhe maaf karde didi.

Neha: Nhi bhai. Tune bilkul sahi kiya thaa mujhe maar ke. Agar tune mujhe pahle hi maara hota toh shayad yeh din naa aata.

Yeh kehke dono bhai behen ek dusre ke gale lagke rone lagte hai.

Phir Aryan waha se Vikram ke paas jaata hai jiske aankho mein bhi aansu thee.

Aryan: Papa. Aryan ne itna hi bola tha ke Vikram ne usse jhatt se gale laga liyaa.

Vikram: Mujhe maaf karde mere bete. Main ek achha baap nhi ban saka. Ek baap apne bachho ka saath kabhi nhi chorta. Par maine toh tera saath uss waqt chora jiss waqt tujhe sabse jyaada jarurat thi. Mujhe maaf kardee.

Aryan: Nhi papa. Aap bade hai. Aap aisa naa bolee. Aaplogo ne koi galti nhi ki thi. Yeh sab toh humhe alag karne ke liye kisine sajish ki thi. Aur woh usme kamyaab bhi hogya. Isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi thi. Aap mujhe maaf karde. Maine apne papa ke saath badtameezi ki. Jab maine aapke saath badtameezi ki tabhi aapko mujhe maarna chahiye thaa mujhe chote bade ka fark dikhana chahiye thaa. Mujhe maaf kardijiye papa.

Rashmi: Kya kaha kisi ne Sajish ki thi humhe alag karne ki.

Aryan: Haa mummy. Aur bahot jald main usko uske kiye ki saza dungaa.

Vikram: Kisne kiya yeh kaam beta. Main usko chorunga nhi.

Aryan: Abhi mujhe shak hai papa par bahot jald mujhe saare proof mil jaayenge.

Vikram: Woh kaun hai.

Neha: Mr. Suraj Malhotra.

Aryan: Didi aapko kaise pata.

Neha: Bhai yaha pe sab hai sivaay unke. Aur unko tere ghar chorne ka koi dukh nhi thaa. Tere nafrat karne se koi fark nhi padha.

Vikram: Kyaa yeh sab Suraj ne kiyaa hai.

Aryan: Maine kaha naa papa mujhe shak hai.

Rashmi: Toh kya Meenakshi bhi.

Aryan: Pata nhi mummy unka kuch keh nhi sakte. Isiliye unke saamne main aaplogo se nafrat hi karunga. Kyoki agar woh innsab ke pichhe hai toh shayad wapas kuch kar sakte hai.

Rashmi: Ab humse aur sehan nhi hogaa betaa. Hum ab tere se durr nhi reh sakte.

Vikram: Aryan sahi bol raha hai Rashmi agar humhe humesha saath rehna hai toh humhe yeh karna hi hogaa.

Aryan: Meera Ritika yaha aao.

Meera aur Ritika waha aate hai sabse pahle toh dono Rashmi Vikram aur Neha se haath jodd ke maafi maangte hai. Kyoki inndono bhi unke saath bahot badtameezi ki thi.

Rashmi aur Neha toh dono ko gale laga leti hai aur Meera ko congratulate bhi karte hai.

Ankit: Kyaa ab mujhe bhi thoda sa maa papa aur behen ka pyaar aur maafi milegi.

Teeno Ankit ko gale lagate hai.

Rashmi: Vikram aaj humara parivaar pura hogyaa. Humhe mere bachhe wapas mil gaye. Humhe dada dadi banne ka sukh mila.

Vikram: Sahi kaha Rashmi. Aur innsab se humhe ek sikh bhi mili. Humesha pahle apno par vishwaas karna chahiye. Warna rishte tootne mein time nhi lagta.

Aryan: Mummy aaplog Meera ka dhyaan rakhiyegaa. Kyoki hosakta hai humare bachhe ko nuksaan pahochane ki koshish kar sakta hai.

Neha: Jo mere bhatije ya bhatiji ki taraf aankh utha kar dekhega usko wahi jaan se maar dungi.

Ragini aur Ritika: Sahi kaha jo humare bete ko takleef dega usko chorenge nhi.

Rashmi: Tum chinta mat karo beta hum humare khandaan ke warish ka aur bahu ka pura khayal rakhenge.

Aryan: Bas aaplog kuch din tak iss nafrat ke natak ko sehan kijiye bahot jald sach sabke saamne aajayega.

Ankit: Chaliye ghar chalte hai. Papa aap maa aur Neha ko leke jaaiye. Main Ragini ke saath aata hu.

Vikram: Thik hai. Chalo.

Phir sablog ghar ki taraf nikal padhte hai.

Ghar pahonch sab pahle ki tarah hi behave karte hai bas issbaar Rashmi aur Neha Meera ka kuch jyaada hi dhyaan rakhte hai.

Meera: Mummyji pahle hi innlogo ne itna khilaya hai aur ab aaplog bhi wahi kar rahi hai.

Rashmi: Meera iss haalat mein bachhe ko taqat uski maa se hi milti hai. Tum jitna apna khayal rakhogi bachha utna fit rahega isiliye chup chap khao. Aur Ragini Ritika tumlog kab good news de rahe ho.

Ragini aur Ritika: Mummyji humne aisa kuch socha nhi hai abhi tak.

Rashmi: Aree toh jaldi socho.

Meera: Khaate hue. Haa jaldi socho phir aaplogo ke saath isse bhi jyaada karungi main.

Sablog hasne lagte hai. Tabhi waha Suraj Malhotra aajata hai. Jisko dekhte hi sabki aankho mein gussa utar aata hai. Sabse jyaada toh Rashmi Neha aur Aryan ke. Par woh control karte hai.

Raat ko khaane ke baad sab apne apne kamre mein chale jaate hai.

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Update 71
Agle din plan ke mutabik Aryan ne Ankit ko ek jagah ka address msg kardiya aur unko waha laane ko bola.

Ankit aur Ragini bhi plan ke mutabik unko waha le jaane lagte hai.

Neha: Bhaiya bhabhi bataiye naa aaplog humhe kaha le jaarahe hai.

Rashmi: Haa beta bolo naa.

Ragini: Bas kuch waqt rukh jaaiye aaplogo aaj bahot kuch milne wala hai.

Kuch der baad woh log Aryan ki batayi jagah pe aajate hai.

Wohlog ek ghar ke andar aate hai. Ghar mein puri tarah se andhera tha. Tabhi waha ek projector chalta hai jisme Vikram Rashmi aur Neha ki Aryan ke saath Happy Moments ke tasveer dikh rahi thi.

Woh teeno yehsab dekh ke pahle toh shock hote hai phir jaise jaise projector aage chalta hai waise waise unki aankho se aansu girne lagte hai. Unko Aryan ke saath bitaye har ek pal yaad aane lagta hai. Usme Aryan ki unke saath bachpan se lekar 17 saal tak ki har tasveer thi.

Achanak se lights onn hoti hai aur unke saamne Aryan Meera aur Ritika khade the. Waha khade sabhi ke aankho mein aansu the.

Aaj Rashmi se control nhi hota woh jaake Aryan ke pairon mein girne lagti hai toh Aryan usko pakad ke apne seene se laga leta hai.

Aryan: Yeh aap kya kar rahi hai Mummy. Yeh sab karke mujhse ek aur paap mat karwaiye. Pahle hi bina wajah aaplogo se nafrat karke aaplogo se badtameezi karke ek paap karchuka hu. Mujhe maaf kardijiye mummy main ek achha beta nhi ban saka.

Rashmi: Kya bola tune mujhe. Wapas bol. Taras gayi hu tere muh se yeh sabd sunne ke liye. Please beta wapas bol.

Aryan: Mummy Mummy Mummy.

Rashmi rote hue Aryan ke seene se lag jaati hai. Aryan bhi unko seene se laga ke rone lagta hai. Aaj kitne saal baad maa bete gale mile the. Unka rona rukh hi nhi raha tha. Waha khade sabhi ke aankho mein aansu the.

Rashmi: Aryan mera beta. Mujhe maaf karde beta main ek achhi maa nhi ban paayi. Mujhe apne bete pe bharosa karna chahiye thaa. Mujhe maaf karde. Yeh bol woh wapas rone lagti hai.

Aryan: Nhi mummy isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi thi. Woh haalaat hi aise hogye the. Aap mujhe maaf karde maine aap ke saath bahot badtameezi ki. Kya kya nhi kaha aapko. Please mujhe maaf karde.

Rashmi: Nhi beta tune kuch galat nhi kiya tha. Maine jo kiya tha uski yahi saza thi. Tu maafi mat maang. Yeh keh ke wapas uske seene se lag jaati hai.

Neha: Bhaii kya mujhe maaf nhi karegaa.

Aryan: Didi. Yeh bol woh apne baahe faila deta hai.

Neha rote hue daud ke aati hai Aryan ke seene se lag jaati hai.

Neha: Tere muh se yeh didi sunne ke liye taras gayi thi. Mujhe maaf karde bhai. Main bahot buri hu. Maine tujhe kitna maara kitna rulaya. Aur sabse bada paap toh yeh kiya maine tujh par kitna ghinona ilzaam lagaya. Mujhe maaf karde bhai.

Aryan: Nhiii didi. Aisa naa bolo. Aap meri sabse achhi didi ho. Aur aapne kuch nhi kiya tha. Aur aap bhi mujhe maaf karde maine aapke saath bahot bura kiya. Aapko kitna kuch bola aur toh aur aapko maara bhi tha. Please mujhe maaf karde didi.

Neha: Nhi bhai. Tune bilkul sahi kiya thaa mujhe maar ke. Agar tune mujhe pahle hi maara hota toh shayad yeh din naa aata.

Yeh kehke dono bhai behen ek dusre ke gale lagke rone lagte hai.

Phir Aryan waha se Vikram ke paas jaata hai jiske aankho mein bhi aansu thee.

Aryan: Papa. Aryan ne itna hi bola tha ke Vikram ne usse jhatt se gale laga liyaa.

Vikram: Mujhe maaf karde mere bete. Main ek achha baap nhi ban saka. Ek baap apne bachho ka saath kabhi nhi chorta. Par maine toh tera saath uss waqt chora jiss waqt tujhe sabse jyaada jarurat thi. Mujhe maaf kardee.

Aryan: Nhi papa. Aap bade hai. Aap aisa naa bolee. Aaplogo ne koi galti nhi ki thi. Yeh sab toh humhe alag karne ke liye kisine sajish ki thi. Aur woh usme kamyaab bhi hogya. Isme aaplogo ki koi galti nhi thi. Aap mujhe maaf karde. Maine apne papa ke saath badtameezi ki. Jab maine aapke saath badtameezi ki tabhi aapko mujhe maarna chahiye thaa mujhe chote bade ka fark dikhana chahiye thaa. Mujhe maaf kardijiye papa.

Rashmi: Kya kaha kisi ne Sajish ki thi humhe alag karne ki.

Aryan: Haa mummy. Aur bahot jald main usko uske kiye ki saza dungaa.

Vikram: Kisne kiya yeh kaam beta. Main usko chorunga nhi.

Aryan: Abhi mujhe shak hai papa par bahot jald mujhe saare proof mil jaayenge.

Vikram: Woh kaun hai.

Neha: Mr. Suraj Malhotra.

Aryan: Didi aapko kaise pata.

Neha: Bhai yaha pe sab hai sivaay unke. Aur unko tere ghar chorne ka koi dukh nhi thaa. Tere nafrat karne se koi fark nhi padha.

Vikram: Kyaa yeh sab Suraj ne kiyaa hai.

Aryan: Maine kaha naa papa mujhe shak hai.

Rashmi: Toh kya Meenakshi bhi.

Aryan: Pata nhi mummy unka kuch keh nhi sakte. Isiliye unke saamne main aaplogo se nafrat hi karunga. Kyoki agar woh innsab ke pichhe hai toh shayad wapas kuch kar sakte hai.

Rashmi: Ab humse aur sehan nhi hogaa betaa. Hum ab tere se durr nhi reh sakte.

Vikram: Aryan sahi bol raha hai Rashmi agar humhe humesha saath rehna hai toh humhe yeh karna hi hogaa.

Aryan: Meera Ritika yaha aao.

Meera aur Ritika waha aate hai sabse pahle toh dono Rashmi Vikram aur Neha se haath jodd ke maafi maangte hai. Kyoki inndono bhi unke saath bahot badtameezi ki thi.

Rashmi aur Neha toh dono ko gale laga leti hai aur Meera ko congratulate bhi karte hai.

Ankit: Kyaa ab mujhe bhi thoda sa maa papa aur behen ka pyaar aur maafi milegi.

Teeno Ankit ko gale lagate hai.

Rashmi: Vikram aaj humara parivaar pura hogyaa. Humhe mere bachhe wapas mil gaye. Humhe dada dadi banne ka sukh mila.

Vikram: Sahi kaha Rashmi. Aur innsab se humhe ek sikh bhi mili. Humesha pahle apno par vishwaas karna chahiye. Warna rishte tootne mein time nhi lagta.

Aryan: Mummy aaplog Meera ka dhyaan rakhiyegaa. Kyoki hosakta hai humare bachhe ko nuksaan pahochane ki koshish kar sakta hai.

Neha: Jo mere bhatije ya bhatiji ki taraf aankh utha kar dekhega usko wahi jaan se maar dungi.

Ragini aur Ritika: Sahi kaha jo humare bete ko takleef dega usko chorenge nhi.

Rashmi: Tum chinta mat karo beta hum humare khandaan ke warish ka aur bahu ka pura khayal rakhenge.

Aryan: Bas aaplog kuch din tak iss nafrat ke natak ko sehan kijiye bahot jald sach sabke saamne aajayega.

Ankit: Chaliye ghar chalte hai. Papa aap maa aur Neha ko leke jaaiye. Main Ragini ke saath aata hu.

Vikram: Thik hai. Chalo.

Phir sablog ghar ki taraf nikal padhte hai.

Ghar pahonch sab pahle ki tarah hi behave karte hai bas issbaar Rashmi aur Neha Meera ka kuch jyaada hi dhyaan rakhte hai.

Meera: Mummyji pahle hi innlogo ne itna khilaya hai aur ab aaplog bhi wahi kar rahi hai.

Rashmi: Meera iss haalat mein bachhe ko taqat uski maa se hi milti hai. Tum jitna apna khayal rakhogi bachha utna fit rahega isiliye chup chap khao. Aur Ragini Ritika tumlog kab good news de rahe ho.

Ragini aur Ritika: Mummyji humne aisa kuch socha nhi hai abhi tak.

Rashmi: Aree toh jaldi socho.

Meera: Khaate hue. Haa jaldi socho phir aaplogo ke saath isse bhi jyaada karungi main.

Sablog hasne lagte hai. Tabhi waha Suraj Malhotra aajata hai. Jisko dekhte hi sabki aankho mein gussa utar aata hai. Sabse jyaada toh Rashmi Neha aur Aryan ke. Par woh control karte hai.

Raat ko khaane ke baad sab apne apne kamre mein chale jaate hai.

Nice update
 
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