Incest Pyar di jarurat

[Khaihra]

 

[Vicky Singh1111]

Sirra bai khichi chal kam

 

[Amanpreet Sarliwala]

UPDATE

 

[Khaihra]

ਭਾਊ ਖਿੱਚ ਕੇ ਰੱਖ ਕੰਮ ਦੇਸੀਮਾਨ ਵਾਂਗੂ

 

[RDX]

Update

 

[Kabira1987]

Superb story

 

[Deepgill1313]

Gajjan hun sidha ho k khad geya te usne picho kamal da palla b theek kar ditta c. Kamal ne hun akhan khol ale duale dekhea k koi usnu dekh ta nahi reha c. Kamal di pajami andhar nicheo ta usdi fuddi hun cho rahi c jisnaal patta de vichkar usnu pajami bhijan da ehsaas ho reha c te picheo bund te hun gajjan da veeraj naal usdi bund di daraar vich chipchapahat feel ho rahi c. Kuj der baad kamal di sass usnu bulaundi a te oh dove mitti kad bahar aa jandia. Kuj khaan peen to baad dove sass nuh ghar nu vapis aun lagdia. Ta achanak usdi sass kamal di bund nu dekh boli- putt aa ki lagg geya piche? Kamal jad piche dekhdi a ta gajjan de veeraj da gillapan hun usdi kurti de palle te b dikhan lagga c . Kamal anjaan jehi ban boli- pta ni mummi othe baithe c shayad othe kuj lagg geya hove. Kamal di sass - acha putt naale ah edda de suit na payea kar , edda ethe ajj saara pind c, eh change nahi lagde. Kamal hun sharminda jehi ho - theek a mummi g, par eh nava savaya c te jaldi vich paa aayi. Raaste vich jaandi kamal hun tak garam c puri, jidda gajjan kuj time pehla usnu shad k geya c. Par hun vapis aunde time mundea di nazra hun usde shareer te vakhra asar shad rahia c. Kyu k aunde time oh sharminda ho rahi c te neevi paa k tur rahi c . Par hun oh dhaun chak k confidence naal apne lakk nu hila hila turdi c jive munde usnu ghoor rahe c. Mele vich baaki aurata de haalat te usnu apne haalata vich b fark dikhea. K kive baaki aurata ghund kadd firdia c te saaf dissda c k kinna dabba k rakhde hone ohna nu ghar vich. Te ohda pati jo usnu kinni freedom de reha c, te job b karn de reha c. Te apni wife di hot figure nu sharm de maare lukoun di koshish nahi karda c.bal k usnu confidence dinda te support karda c k oh apni body te sharminda na hove bal k proudly showoff kar loka nu jalaave. Raste vich ohna nu fer numberdar gajjan takkreya. Othe ta hanere vich usne chehra hi dekhea c te chitti dhadi dekh usdi umar da andaza lagayea c. Par hun jad usne dekhea ta oh hor b hairan hoyi. Kyu k oh java hi buzurg c , mushkil naal soti naal tur reha c kubb paa k. Par kamal ne kuj der pehla usdi latta vichale lamakdi daang da josh dekhea c.so kamal us baare soch muskraun laggi. Kamal di sass gajjan kol fer ruk gayi te galla maaran laggi. Kamal ne b jhuk gajjan baabe de pairi hath lagaye te os time hi hawa de bulle naal usda chadra thoda hill geya. Te jhuk k vaapis uthdi kamal di nazar usdia latta vichale lamakde 7 inch lambe kaale laude te payi , jis vicho thoda time pehla hi aje kamal ne paani kadhea c te jisvicho nikle veeraj da gillapan hun b kamal di kurti de pichle palle to sukkea nahi c. Gajjan baba kamal di sass nu- bhai karma vaali ae jo eenni sohni nuh mili ae tainu. Kamal babe de muho apni tareef sun khush ho rahi c. Kuj der baad oh fer chal payia ghar nu. Ghar aa k kamal sidha apne bedroom vich aayi. Davinder betha intzar hi kar reha c ghar ohna de vapis aun da jive. Davinder excited ho- kive reha fer mela? Kamal muskra k- vadia c Davinder- bass vadia c? Karea koi halaak fer gabru? Kamal eh sun sharma k muskra payi te mann vich sochan laggi- gabru da ta pta ni par ikk 70 saala de baabe da kamm jarur kar aayi. Kamal sharmaundi hoyi boli - mainu ki pta? Tuc jaa k puch aayo pind valeya to. Davinder hasda hoea- pind vaalea dia ta akha taddia reh gayia honia. Kamal muskra k sir maardi hoyi bathrum vall jaan laggi. Davinder di os time nazar usdi kurti de palle te payi jo picho java bund de center vicho hun tak gilla c gajjan de veeraj naal. Davinder- ah picheo suit gandha b ho geya , lagda sachi kise di qismat khul gayi ajj ta. Kamal eh sun java kachi ho gayi te jhuth boldi hoyi- tuc jyada na bolo, eh ta othe chah dhulli hoyi c,othe beh gaye c galti naal. Ehna keh oh andhar chali gayi.kamal hun luko rahi c jo mele vich hoea kyu k oh kive dassdi k os naal ki hoea. Haa j osnu eh pta hunda k osda gharwala eh sab sun gussa nahi hou ulta swaad laina chahunda ta shayad oh dass b dindi. Davinder nu ta par eh soch k hi swaad aa reha c k jinni bomb ajj kamal ban k gayi c. Saare pind de mundea nu behaal kar aayi hou. Davinder nu internet te hot wife baare padh k hi bahut excitement feel bundi c, te hun jado ajj pehli baar usne kamal nu usroop vich dekhea ta usda lunn saver da bethan da name hi nahi lai rha c. Jinna oh is baare sochda c k mele vich sab usdi gharwali di bund us tang pajami vich dekh k apnia akha tattia kar gaye hone, ohna usda lunn hor sakht ho reha c. Kamal ne bathroom vich ja apne kapde utaare ta usda shareer agg di bhathi waang tap reha c. Kamal ne sab to pehla apni pajami nu pichle passeo dekhea. Ta othe gajjan de lun cho niklew chipchipa paani laggea hoea c. Kamal ne dove hatha vich fadd pajami apne nakk kol leja sungan di koshish kitti. Ta usnu gajjan babe de veeraj vicho aundi sugandh bahut madhosh kar rahi c. Kamal ne fer ikk ungle naal uppro uppro veeraj saaf karea te fer pta ni ki ayea usde mann vich, k usne oh gajjan babe da veeraj apni pajami to saaf kar pehla ta apnia sakht tania hoyia mummea dia dodia te lagaya te baaki apne mummea te masal leya.te edda kardi hoyi de usde bulla te ajeeb muskrahat c. Ustime kamal eh soch rahi c k eh bahut special cheej kitti hai usne. Kyu k 70 saal de baabe de lunn vicho ehna maal kadd leyayi c oh. Islayi b usnu eh sab excite kar reha c. Islayi kamal usnu waste na karde hoe apni hikk te laga laindi ae. Fer oh top te pajama pa apni gilli pajami bathroom vich paani di baalti vich dob dindi ae. Kyu k oh nahi chahundi c k davinder di nazar usdi latta vichalo bhijji pajami te jaave. Bathroom vicho nikal oh davinder nu kehan laggi- tuhanu pta mummi boldi c k ahh kidda da suit payea. Davinder- acha? Fer Kamal- mai dass ditta k tuhade munde ne zidd kar k pavayea. Davinder eh sun ghabra k- yaar mere sir sutt ditti tu gall? Kamal hassdi hoyi - ha tuhade sir hi suttni c, tuc hi ta bhejeya c. Davinder hun samj geya k oh mazak kardi aa te hun oh bhaj k kamal nu jaffi paa k bed te khichda . Kamal niche ja rahi c apni sass naal roti di tyari karn. Davinder dia baaha vich bed te girdi hoyi- shaddo ki karde o? Davinder usde uppar aunda hoea- kuj ni Laini aa teri. Kamal- nahi mai nahi kamm karna hun, fer raat nu. Davinder usdi gall ansuni karda hoEa dhakke naaal usdA top chak usde mumme nange kar lainda. Kamal samj gayi c k hun oh usde mummea nu Pavega.kamal usnu rokan lagdi aa fer kyu k oh nahi chahundi c k davinder usde mumme chunge , kyu k othe usne hune gajjan da veeraj malea c. Par davinder dhakke naal usde mumme ghutda hoea aapna muh paunda hoea- jad di tu gayi a ohda da lunn beth nahi reha, do min lagne aa. Davinder de bull apni dodia to laggn to pehla kamal usnu rokdi hoyi- acha chal fer naha lain do. Davinder - kyu Kamal- oh mai samaadha to aayi aa, edda karna maadha hunda. Par davinder usdi gall ansuni karda hoea - chal aive veham na kar jyada. Ehna keh oh apne bull kamal de nipples te rakh chusan lagda. Kamal de nipples te lagea veeraj gajjan babe da ,davinder de muh ch jaa reha hunda te jisda swaad usnu b bakbaka lagg reha hunda. Kamal nu vichare davinder te tars aa reha hunda par usnu eh funny b lagg reha hunda. Davinder da muh jive besuada ja hunda ta usda dhyan duje passe b jaanda. Te othe b oh nipple nu b gilla gilla dekh oh puchda- ahh ki lagaya hoea tu ? Kamal eh sun uchi uchi hasan lAgdi aa te davinder di galL te pyar naal hath ferdi hoyi- kuj ni lotion lagayea c, kyu swaad nahi? Davinder -nahi swaad aa par eh kidda da lotion a kinna chip chipa ae? Kamal eh sun fer ni apni smile rok paundi te boldi aa- bass bahut mehnga lotion ae tuc hun par menu pta rehan ta dena nahi saara saaf kar javonge. Ehna keh oh davinder da sir fadd fer apne mummea te dab laindi a. Davinder b hun apni gharwali di hikk te lagea gajjan babe de bakbaka jeha veeraj reej laa k jeeb naal saaf kar jaanda. Kamal lagataar muskara rahi c eh dekh dekh. Jaane anjaane vich hi bhave , par ajj aje pehla kadam c kamal nu hotwife banaun da, te pehle din hi kamal ne sab to gandhi cuckold fantasy puri kar ditti c jo ikk husband soch sakda. K apni hotwife di fuddi cho nikal rahe beganne mard de veeraj nu chat k saaf karna .kamal ne b ove ikk budhe da veeraj usnu apne mummea te laga k chata ditta c. Kamal ne fer davinder da lunn fad aapni fuddi te set karea te davinder pehla hi bahut josh vich hunda. Te jive hi oh dheka maarda lunn tilak k andhar jaanda kyu k kamal di fuddi gajjan ne ungle fer fer mele vich gilli kar rakhi c. Davinder eh dekh kamal nu puchda- kamaal ae, ajj bahut garm hoyi firdi ae pehla hi. Kamal apnia latta khol usde lakk te lapet usnu agle dheke layi apni fuddi vall khichdi hoyi- bass ajj kall mai garm hi rehndi aa saara time. Kamal de muho eh sun davinder khush hoea- oh ta mainu pta k meri jaan tu bomb aa poora. Ehna keh oh tez tez dheke maar usdi fuddi maran lagda.niche payi kamal mann vich sochdi , haye mere bhole husband tere ale bomb nu hun saara pind vajjaun nu firda. Apne daddy di umar to b vadda gajjan baba b tere is bomb nu ajj vjja geya c laghbhag. Shaam nu ajj davinder bahut khush c, kyu k usne jive padhea c usdi wife hotwife banan vaale saare box tick kar rahi c. te ajj pehle din usdi wife ne usnu nirash nahi kitta c. Par is da nateeja eh c k hun kamal pind vich charcha da visha ban gayi c . Vaise ta hmesha to hi usdia galla c par ajj jo mele vich jaa k oh agg laga aayi c mundea de dila vich oh hun bujhan vaali nahi c. Shaam time davinder khet vall gedha maaran jaanda. Jot da khet b naal hi c ta jot ustime pathe vadd reha hunda. Davinder nu oh dooro dekh ssa bullunda. Jot uchi awaaz vich - ssa veere Davinder ajj khush c te oh b ajj khide mathe usda jawaab dinda. Jot eh dekh hairan hunda . Davinder agge ja k motor te beth jaanda te jot nu dekh usde dimag vich kaafi khyal aun lagde aa. Kyu k is sab di shuruaat hi odo hoyi c jad usne pehli baar kamal nu jot naal dekhea c. Te kamal kive jot di tareef kardi c te fer raat nu jidda kamal di fuddi cho pehli baar paani Da chashma futteya c.usdin to baad hi usnu apni simple te loyal wife di hotness dikhi c. Te usdin to baad hi eh fantasy us andhar paida hoyi c. Usto bina usnu savere kamal ne taahna b maaryea c k oh usdi har gall manndi hai par oh usnu rokda c jot naal gall karn to b te ladh da b c usdin. Te hun davinder samjda c k kamal nu j oh proper hotwife bana k apni fantasy da swaad laina chhunda ta sab to pehla kamal nu begaane marda naal khulna paina thoda. Kyu k hun tak oh sirf davinder naal hi rahi c te viah to baad ta hun aa k bahar nikli jado oh teacher laggi. Te davinder eh b jaanda c k jot oh munda jisnal kamal easily khulegi. Kyu k usne apni wife dia akha vich chamak dekhi c jot de baare gall kardea. Te jot di wajah naal jo kamal de andhar ikk vakhri energy b aayi c. Usne hun jot nu involve karn da mann bana leya c bethe bethe. Te fer jado jot thak haar k motor te paani peen ayea ta davinder ne usnu bula leya. Davinder- oye aja araam karlai garmi bahut aa. Jot b hairan hunda kyu k eh aam gall nahi c k davinder ne usnu bulayea c. Jot - bass veere kaam khatam jaa k nahaunde aa. Davinder- oye behja do min , gall karni a jaruri tere naal. Jot- haa g veere dasso Davinder-yaar mai ta tera shukriya b nahi kitta usdin da. Jot- acha kis layi veere? Davinder- yaar usdin tu apni bhabi nu naal lai ayea c. Nahi vichari othe khadi rehndi. Jot - lai veere eh b koi gall a? Oh ta mera farz c, mai kidda bhabi nu othe college ikalla shad k aa sakda c. Davinder- yaar nahi fer b jive apni bandi nahi c, ta b tu ... Jot davinder di gall katt da hoea- nahi veere bhave daddy ohne ladh paye choti choti gall te, par mai ta tuhanu apna hi samjheya hamesha. Jot ehna bhola ban k eh sab keh reha c k davinder nu sachi ykeen b ho geya c. Davinder- fer ta yaar tu bahut changa sochda, mai aive tere baare galt sochda reha. Jot- acha veere? Ki galt sochde c? Davinder mann vich apne ehi k tu meri janaani thrugh zidd kaddan nu firda. Davinder hun gall taalda hoea- shad yaar oh ta purania galla c . Mai ta hun agge da sochda k shadiye hun puraania galla te eh dushmani shad ikathe ho jayie. Jot eh sun khush hunda hoea- ah ta veere tu mere dil di gall keh ditti, asi oh path karaya te mai ta aap daddy nu keh reha k bhog te taaya g de parivaar nu bula lao. Par oh darde aa k taye ne mann na nahi . Davinder - nahi nahi tu bheji , edhro daddy nu mai aap hi mana lau. Jot khush hunda hoea- bass fer set a kamm. Agle din jot da daddy saver nu davinder ohna de ghar betha hunda te kamal ohna layi chah bana rahi hundi a jado Davinder khush hoea uskol aunda. Kamal ta jaandi b nahi c k kaun ae islayi oh davinder nu puchdi a - eh kaun a? Kamal ta edda samjdi c k koi pindo banda ae. Davinder hasssda hoea- tu guess kar Kamal - mai ki guess kara? Sarpanch ae pind da? Davinder smile karda- nahi eh jot de daddy aa, matlab chacha g. Kamal eh sun hairan reh jandi te khush ho- eh kive hoea? Davinder - bass ho gaya , tu hi kehndi c k teri gall nahi mannda, lai mann layi teri karvati dushmani khatam. Apa kall nu jot k ghar jaana bhog te, tyari karla. Kamal di ta khushi da thikana nahi rehnda oh khush ho davinder nu jaffi pa baahan vich ghut laindi ae. Usnu hun davinder te boht hi jyada pyar aunda te oh khush ho pyar naal othe hi usdia galla chumdi a.kyn k davinder ne usdi gall mann jo kitta c oh koi choti gll nahi c. Kamal khush hoyi chah fadaun jaandi a te jot de daddy de pairi pa ssa bulaundi . Next day jot de ghar khulle vehde vich tent lagge hoe c te saare rishtedar bethe kirtan sun rahe c. Jado davinder usde mummy daddy te kamal aunde a matha tekan. Jot de chehre te chamak aa jaandi a apni bhabi kamal nu dekh. Kamal ne ikk uchi g satin di kurti paayi hoi c neele rang di te niche gulabi rang da garaara jeha c khulla. Kamal ne vaal straight kar khulle shadde hoe c te pink rang de dupatte naal sir dhakea hoea c. Kamal matha tek k aa k. Beh gayi c jot de sahmne hi. Jot ne apni dhudh vargi bhabi nu dekh smile kardea sir jhukaya . Ta kamal ne b motia varge dandh dikha us vall smile kitti. Jot marda ta bahut c kamal te par aj oh jinni sohni lagdi c ajj usnu dekh jot nu ishq hon lagga c . Dopehr de time tak saare door nedhe de rishtedar chale gaye c te hun davinder te ohdi maa, jot te usdi maa te bas kamal , panjo jaane bethe galla maarde c . Jot di maa kamal nu- chal putt tuc aa gaye, aah jot ne ta pagal kitta peya c saanu. Roj kehnda c taaya taayi ohna nu bulao, tuhade chakkar vich mai apne veere de viah b nahi jaa sakea te hun bhabi nu b ni bula sakda. Eh sun kamal di sass boldi-acha? Jot di maa- haa g bhen g, eh ta vaala karda ehna da. Te menu lagda apni bhabi da ta kuj jyada hi karda. Eh sun jot sharma k neevi paa lainda te kamal usnu sharmaundea dekh khush ho rahi c. Davindr betha bass kamal de chehre de hi haav bhaav dekh reha c. Jot di maa da jawab dindi kamal di sass boldi - chal eh ta hunda hi a saare deora nu vaddi bhabi da pyar aive hi aunda hunda. Jad mai viah k aayi c eh jot da daddy odo mere bina roti b nahi khaanda hunda c. Jot di màa hun davinder di maa nu tichar kardi hoyi- mere hath di roti taahio swaad nahi lagdi ,bhabi de hatha da swaad muh laggea jo hoea. Ohna dia tichra chaldia rendia te davinder jot kol betha usnu shed da double meaning gall kehnda- haa b sunlai, tu b dekhna bhabi da swaad? Jot ne dhyan naal sunea nahi c kyu k oh sahmne bethi kamal di khoobsurti vich khoyea hunda te oh ikk dum puchda -ki veere Davinder- mai keha j tu bhabi de hatha di roti khaani hou ta aa jeya kar. Jot- acha theek a verre. Jot di maa te kamal di sass ehi galla kar rahia c k jot di wajah naal hoea eh sab. Par hun davinder bolda- nahi chachi j deor ehna tarsea c bhabi layi ta kamal ne b bahut keha ,jot dia tareefa kardi rehndi c. Eh sun kamal davinder nu ghoordi aa k ki lodh a eh sab dassn di. Par davinder nu swaad aa reha hunda. Jot di maa davinder nu kehndi- ha putt apni kamal othe hi padhaundi ae jot ohna de college vich. Davinder haami bharda hoea- haa g haa g. Jot di maa hun kamal nu- putt padh da nahi eh, tu dhyan rakhea kar ehda. Davinder- chachi g hun ta apne jot nu dhyan rakhna chaida apni bhabi da Davinder ne fer double meaning gall kahi c par kise ne matlab galt nahi samjheya. Kuj der baad kamal uthdi a te jot nu bulaundi hoyi- aaja jot ghar ta dikha mainu. Ehna keh oh jot nu lai fer shat te chali jaandi a. Davinder eh dekhda reh jaanda te usnu par vadia lagda kamal nu jot de nedhe aunda dekh hun. Shat te kamal jot de sahmne khadi c te jot hun apni bhabi de husan te dullda hi jaa reha c.jinna oh kamal nu dekhda c. Kamal akhir usnu bulaundi hoyi- hun khush aa tu? Jot- haa bhabi tuhade kehan te veere ne eh sab kitta? Kamal- haa g Jot eh sun khush ho- mainu ta sachi usdin college vich jad tuc mana karta c k tuhanu bulayea na kara, mainu ta lagea bas hun kade nahi .... Kamal smile kardi hoyi- haa mai keh ta ditta c par fer tera udass chehra dekhea ni geya . Ta fer tere veere nu keha k eh dushmani hi khatam kare, taa k mera ikko ikk pyara deor udass na rahe apni bhabi to bina. Jot khush hunda kamal vall pyar naal dekhda bas kuj ni bol paunda. Kamal usnu shed di hoyi- ki hoea yakeen nahi aa reha? Jot- nahi bhabi, tuc ajj sachi sohne bahut lagg rahe ho. Kamal eh sun hasan lagdi aa te boldi - acha? Hassdi jot nu oh hor sohni lagdi c. Jot - haa g bhabi Kamal- thek a theek a, jyada tareefan karn di hun lodh ni tainu b bhabi impress ho jau. Jot- kyu? Kamal- kyu. K ikk ta menu apni tareef changi ni lagdi te duja tere to mai pehla hi bahut impressed aa, hun hor kinna k karenga? Jot eh sun mann vich sochda k aje ta bhabi bahut impress karna jinna time tuc deor nu fuddi ni dinde, ohna time lagea rehna mai ta. Osto baad kaafi der gallan karn to baad aye. Davinder khush c kamal nu jot naal khullda dekh. Te eh sab dekh usde lunn da haal behaal hi c. Te raat nu davinder ne kamal nu kodhi karea hunda te oh usdia baaha piche modh k lAggea hoea c dheke maaran. Kamal nu b ajj davinder da josh feel ho reha c k ajj oh jyada hi josh vich ae . Davinder akhir swaad naal dheke maarda hoea- kive laggea ajj fer.? Kamal b swaad naal us agge kodhi ho usde dhekea nu sehndi hoyi- bahut vadia ,khush a mai k tuc meri khushi layi eh sab kitta. Davinder josh vich- haaye meri jaan teri khushi layi ta duniya edhar udhar kar dau. Kamal akhan band kar swaad naal- aah acha? Davinder- ha tainU raani bana k rakhna Kamal eh sun hassdi hoyi- haa fer mai b tuhadi har icha poori karungi. Davinder- pakka? Kamal- haa kade parakh k dekh lao. Davinder fer dheka maar usdi fuddi vich lunn dhakda hoea- acha fer ki kehnda c jot ajj ,bahut khush lagda c Kamal de muh te smile aa gayi jot da name sun- haa g vichara bahut khush c ajj ta Davinder fer dheka maarda hoea- acha uppar ki karn nu lai k geya c? Kamal swaad lai rahi c apni chudayi da par davinder dia galla vich b usda pura dhyan c te oh jawaab dindi- ohne ki karna c? Bass galla karda c , tareefan karda c. Davinder akhan band kar kamal nu jot naal soch hor josh vich aa dheka maarda hoea- acha ki kehnda c? Kamal davinder de dheke sehndi hoyi- aähh, haaye bas kehnda c k bhabi sohni bahut lagdi aa usnu. Davinder eh sun hor josh vich aa dheka maarda hoea- aaho saala bhabi te dullea firda. Eh gall da ta kamal nu b pta c k sach aa kyu k pehle din jive usne scheme laayi c kamal de nedhe aun layi. Par hun oh davinder dia galla da jawaab istarh de rahi c kyu k oh davinder da josh dekh samj rahi c k ajj oh jot nu apnia dirty talks vich involve karna chahunda c. Te kamal nu ta asal vich b jot baare soch ikk vakhra surror chadan lagda c. Islayi oh b hun naale khud swaad lai rahi c te naale davinder nu swaad dindi hoyi jot baare khul k bol rahi c. Kamal akha band kar not naal chat te bitaye pall yaad kardi, jive jot tarsea nazra naal usnu dekh reha c, oh sab yaad kardi masti vich aa- aah aah, ohne te dhulna hi c jad ohnu bhabi hi enni bomb milli aa . Davinder hun full mood vich aa reha c jive usde dhekea di speed vadh rahi c te oh akhan band kar- ha eh ta hai fer shat te ohne udaayi swaah koi k nahi? Kamal hun swaad naal apnia ungla naal apna shola masaldi hoyi- haaye vichara mere mumme chungan layi tarsea peya menu lagda, meri hikk to akha ni chak reha c.

ਲਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਸਟੋਰੀ ਹੈ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਅਗਲੇ ਭਾਗ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ

 

[preetgwl92]

SAWAD A GEYA JNE BAS AWE HI RAKH KAM

Thank you

 

[preetgwl92]

ਲਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਸਟੋਰੀ ਹੈ ਬਹੁਤ ਵਧੀਆ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਹੈ ਅਗਲੇ ਭਾਗ ਦੀ ਉਡੀਕ

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