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Fantasy Pyar-Gum Ya Khushi

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Kiran kitchen main ja kar chay bana rahi thi aur meri bechain najren Ruhi ko dhoond rahi thi. Sayad Kiran upar kuch bhool aayi ho isliye Kiran bhagte hue upar chali jati hai.

Abhi main kuch soch raha tha ki samne se Ruhi chay lekar aati hue dikhi. Main aah bharte hue socha ......... Kash, Ahhhhh!

Wo mujhe chay de kar chali gayi aur uske piche-piche meri najar gayi. Main gaur se usi ore dekhta raha bina palken jhukayen. Main us ore lagatar dekh raha tha kitni der pata nahin.

Tabhi mere mobile ring baji aur mera dhyan bhang hua. Main call dekh kar ascharya main par gaya.......


Mere mobile par ring hoti hai aur mera dhyan bhang hota hai aur call dekh kar main ascharya main par Jata hoon.....

Ye call meri mom ka tha main soch main par jata hun ki abhi abhi to inhe main kitty party main chor kar aaya hun itni jaldi phone kyon kar rahi hai.

Main call uthakar..... Hello maa

Mom...... Kanha hai betu ghar nahin pahuncha

Main....... Maa abhi to main niche hi baitha hun nikla kanha ghar ke liye

Mom- Ascharya se beta 1/2 ghatna ho gaye abhi tak ghar nahin gaya Mrinal intzar kar rahi hai.

Main....... Thik hai maa abhi ja raha hun (bare udas man se)

Mom....... Ruk upar aa pahle phir jana

Main dhime kadam se upar ki ore badhte hue mom ke pas pahuncha.

Upar jab pahuncha to Roy aunty ne mujhse kaha

" Rahul tumhari mom bata rahi thi tumhe market jana hai apni sis ke sath to Ruhi ko bhi sath lete jao wanha Ruhi ko bhi apne liye kuch kharidna hai."

Itna sun ne ke bad to mere dil main jaise khushi ki lahar daur gayi aur rah rah film ka dailog yad aa raha tha...

"Jab aap kisi ko siddat se chahte ho to puri kaynat use Milane main lag jati hai"

Main yahi sab soch raha tha ki Roy aunty ne Ruhi ko bulaya aur taiyar hokar mere sath market jane ke liye kahne lagi. Par Ruhi ko dekh kar aisha lag raha tha ki wo mere sath nahin jana chahti.

Ruhi Roy aunty ki bat ko talte hue......... "Massi main Kiran ke sath sam ko market chali jaungi".

Roy aunty......... Abhi kuch der pahle to Kiran se lar rahi thi ki tujhe urgent market jana hai, ab sam ko bol rahi hai jana hai kyon kya hua.

Ruhi ne jab itna suna to wo jhep gayi aur najren nichi kar boli

"Masssi mujhe kiran ke sath jana hai main akele confuse ho jati hoon kya lun kya na lun (jhut)".

Roy aunty ruk abhi........ Kiran-Kiran ........ Kiran-yes mom

Roy aunty ........ Ja dono bahan taiyar ho ja Rahul abhi apni sis ke sath market ja raha hai tum dono bhi chale jao.

Kiran yes mom bolkar Ruhi ko bhi sath le jati hai man to uska bilkul bhi na tha par ab koi rasta bhi nahin bacha tha.

Main man hi muskate hue niche car main aa gaya. Kuch der baad dono bahne taiyar hokar niche aayi. Unko aate dekh mera dhyan Ruhi ki ore jata hai aur main apne aap ko use dekhne se nahin rok pata hoon dekhna kya main to use lagatar Ruhi ko ghoorte ja raha tha.

Is samay wo single dress main upar se lekar niche gutno tak frock type red colour dress main kisi apsarase kam nahin lag rahi thi.

Main lagatar use dekhe ja raha tha tabhi kiran ne mujhe tokti hue........ "Phir se outlook dekhne lage kya".

Main harbdarate hue..... kk kya.

Kiran....... maine poocha phir se ghar ki outlook dekh rahe the?.

Main jhepte hue bola........ "Nahin main to apne 12tn ke result ke bare main soch raha tha (jhut)".

Kiran aage mere sath driving seat par aur Ruhi piche baithi.

Kiran baithte hue mujhse poochi......... "Tum to dist. topper the na 10th main to tumhe kab se result ki chinta hone lagi".

main Kya bolata ab phir bhi maine kaha .......... "Chinta kyon na ho ek marks se 1st position se 2nd par aa sakta hoon"

Aur phir isi tarah se hum bate karte Mrinal ko lene ghar pahunch gaye.

Jab main car se utra to pahli bar Ruhi ne meri taraph normal najaron se dekhi ho sakta hai topper ki baat ko jankar.

Hum ghar pahunche to Alisha hall main baithi thi. Us se Mrinal ke bare main poocha to pata chala ki wo apni saheli Sonal ko lene gayi hai.

Plan kuch aisha tha ki main mom ko drop kar ghar se Mrinal ko pick karunga phir Sonal ke ghar jana tha aur wanha se market but main late ho gaya to Mrinal pick karne chali gayi.

Alisha ne jab kiran ko dekhi to us se bate karne lagi aur aane ke bare main pooch ne lagi. Wo dono bat kar rahe the tabhi mere kano main pahli bar Ruhi ki awaz aayi..... "Washroom kanha hai".

Main ati prasan pahli bar Ruhi ki awaz suni badi surili aur manmohak awaz thi.Maine use washroom tak le gaya wanha se aane ke bad maine poocha....

"Kuch tea ya coffee chalegi".

Mere is tarah poochne se pahli bar Ruhi ne smile ke sath jawab di..... "Ji nahin"

Par use dekhne ke baad to jaise mera dimag hi kam na kare phir poocha..... khana lagaun kya?

Mere itna bolte hi wo hasne lagi sach kahoon to use haste dekh aisha laga ki jaise mere upar phoolon ki barish ho rahi hai, background music baj rahe hai, sara mahol tham chuki thi bas kewal Ruhi main hi halchal najar aa rahi thi. Main chup chap khara dekh raha tha.

Ruhi meri chuppi todte hue

Ruhi chuktki bajati hue........ "Hello kanha kho gaye Rahul sir"

Main......... Kahin nahin bas tumhe haste dekh raha tha

Ruhi apni hansi ko rokti hue ...... Main saf saf bata dun ki is tarah kisi ka ghorna mujhe acha nahin lagta

Maim.......... Sorry

Ruhi......... Ok but aage se dhyan rakhna

Main....... Waise Ruhi kya main ek bat pooch sakta hoon

Ruhi apne aap main kuch badbadti hue chid kar........ Haan ! Poocho

Main......... Kisi bhi khoobsorat prakritik soundrya ko dekhne main kya burai hai

Ruhi.......... Normal way main samjhi nahin

Main............ Suppose bahut khoobsorat manmohak panchhiyon ka jhaund khule aasman me urr rahi hai, ya kisi dal par baith kar uski sobha bdha rahi hai. kya karogi ?
 
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Main Mrinal ke piche..... Chhoti-Chhoti sun to chhoti

Wo bina kisi jawab ke ek shop ke andar gayi main bhi sath-sath andar gaya aur piche wo teeno hasne lage kyonki ye ladies undergarment shop thi. Main ghuste hi dekha aur chup chap bahar khara ho gaya.

Mrinal janti thi ki main bahar khada hoon to wo jan bhujh kar late lagayi karib 45 min intzar ke baad bahar aayi.

Main piche-piche.......Chhoti sun to sun le, meri bat bhi na sunegi......

Tabhi Sonal piche mere pas aayi boli...... "Bhaiya restaurant main jao hum sab wanhi pahunch rahe hain".

Main restaurant main intzar karta raha karib ek gahnte bad sab wanhi pahunche. Main chinta main banki char hanste hue aur Mrinal muh phulaye.

Sabhi ne khane ka order diya humlog round table par baithe the main, mere left Alisha uske left Kiran phir Ruhi phir Mrinal aur phir Sonal.

Maine chupke se sonal ko wanha se uthne ka ishara kiya wo uthi to main Mrinal ke bagal main baith gaya.

Mujhe apne bagal main baitha dekh Mrinal Sonal par jor se boli

"Tujhe main yanha baith ne ko bola to tu wanha kya kar rahi hai".

Sonal ko thoda bura laga to maine ishare se sorry kaha aur baitne ko bola. Sonal yun to Mrinal ki best friend thi par thi humari pyari guriya. Sonal ki is sansar me uske maa ke alwa bus humra pariwar hi uski duniya thi.

Main chhoti-chhoti bol kar uske kandhe par hanth rakha to usne mera hanth jhatak kar achanak se rone lagi. Sab ye dekh kar chauk gaye to Alisha Di ne sabko chup rahne ka ishara kiya.

Main bare hi prem se uske sar ko apne sine se lagate hue, pyar se puchkarte hue uske aanshu ponche. Wo abhi bhi ro rahi thi maine gale laga kar Mrinal ko chup karaya.

Jab bhi gussa hoti use jabtak pyar se na manao manti hi nahi thi. Mujh se pyar bhi bahut karti thi isliye kisi ki bat buri lage ki na lage lekin main yadi jor se bol doon to bardast nahi kar pati thi. Ab tak hamara khana bhi aa chuka tha sab khane lage kewal Mrinal ko chhor kar.

Maine poocha...... choti ye kya hai. Kuch na boli Mrinal main samajh gaya.

Maine kaha aa idahar aa aur main khilane laga apne hath se aur wo khane lagi.

"Ahhhhh! Dil ko sukun Mila"

Ki chalo mamla yanhi settle hua ki tabhi sonal bhi apna roya sa banawti muh lekar mujhe dekhne lagi. Main....... Haan pata hai chal la apna muh kohl, phir usko bhi maine apne hanthon se khilaya.

Khane ke bad hum sab aapas me baaten kar rahe the ki tabhi Mrinal ne wo bola jo main kabhi soch bhi nahin sakta. Aur Mrinal to Mrinal hai ruthi rahe to mera stayanash aur khus rahe to bhi.

Marinal ki baten sun main to bilkul socked ho gaya.......
 
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It is also my favorite story plz complete this story.... i need it.... and waiting for all updates.... plz send as soon as possible
 
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It is also my favorite story plz complete this story.... i need it.... and waiting for all updates.... plz send as soon as possible
bhai nain11ster ne bhi is forum ko join kiya hua hai.......... ek story bhi shuru ki.......... lekin fir gayab hain us story ke bhi kuchh update dekar.......

mein chahta tha ki is story ko wo hi post karte .......... vaise mere pas complete hai...........doc format me copy ...........

agar in bade famous writers ka yahi raha to........ xp ki lagbhag sabhi completed famous stories ka data hai mere pas............me post karna shuru kar dunga
 

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Main Mrinal ke piche..... Chhoti-Chhoti sun to chhoti

Wo bina kisi jawab ke ek shop ke andar gayi main bhi sath-sath andar gaya aur piche wo teeno hasne lage kyonki ye ladies undergarment shop thi. Main ghuste hi dekha aur chup chap bahar khara ho gaya.

Mrinal janti thi ki main bahar khada hoon to wo jan bhujh kar late lagayi karib 45 min intzar ke baad bahar aayi.

Main piche-piche.......Chhoti sun to sun le, meri bat bhi na sunegi......

Tabhi Sonal piche mere pas aayi boli...... "Bhaiya restaurant main jao hum sab wanhi pahunch rahe hain".

Main restaurant main intzar karta raha karib ek gahnte bad sab wanhi pahunche. Main chinta main banki char hanste hue aur Mrinal muh phulaye.

Sabhi ne khane ka order diya humlog round table par baithe the main, mere left Alisha uske left Kiran phir Ruhi phir Mrinal aur phir Sonal.

Maine chupke se sonal ko wanha se uthne ka ishara kiya wo uthi to main Mrinal ke bagal main baith gaya.

Mujhe apne bagal main baitha dekh Mrinal Sonal par jor se boli

"Tujhe main yanha baith ne ko bola to tu wanha kya kar rahi hai".

Sonal ko thoda bura laga to maine ishare se sorry kaha aur baitne ko bola. Sonal yun to Mrinal ki best friend thi par thi humari pyari guriya. Sonal ki is sansar me uske maa ke alwa bus humra pariwar hi uski duniya thi.

Main chhoti-chhoti bol kar uske kandhe par hanth rakha to usne mera hanth jhatak kar achanak se rone lagi. Sab ye dekh kar chauk gaye to Alisha Di ne sabko chup rahne ka ishara kiya.

Main bare hi prem se uske sar ko apne sine se lagate hue, pyar se puchkarte hue uske aanshu ponche. Wo abhi bhi ro rahi thi maine gale laga kar Mrinal ko chup karaya.

Jab bhi gussa hoti use jabtak pyar se na manao manti hi nahi thi. Mujh se pyar bhi bahut karti thi isliye kisi ki bat buri lage ki na lage lekin main yadi jor se bol doon to bardast nahi kar pati thi. Ab tak hamara khana bhi aa chuka tha sab khane lage kewal Mrinal ko chhor kar.

Maine poocha...... choti ye kya hai. Kuch na boli Mrinal main samajh gaya.

Maine kaha aa idahar aa aur main khilane laga apne hath se aur wo khane lagi.

"Ahhhhh! Dil ko sukun Mila"

Ki chalo mamla yanhi settle hua ki tabhi sonal bhi apna roya sa banawti muh lekar mujhe dekhne lagi. Main....... Haan pata hai chal la apna muh kohl, phir usko bhi maine apne hanthon se khilaya.

Khane ke bad hum sab aapas me baaten kar rahe the ki tabhi Mrinal ne wo bola jo main kabhi soch bhi nahin sakta. Aur Mrinal to Mrinal hai ruthi rahe to mera stayanash aur khus rahe to bhi.

Marinal ki baten sun main to bilkul socked ho gaya.......
Efforts dene ke liye bhut 2 thank u ...Yh meri favorite romantic story rhi he ...Bhut khubsurat trike se is ko lika gya he ...Thank u again phir yaad krane ke liye
 

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bhai nain11ster ne bhi is forum ko join kiya hua hai.......... ek story bhi shuru ki.......... lekin fir gayab hain us story ke bhi kuchh update dekar.......

mein chahta tha ki is story ko wo hi post karte .......... vaise mere pas complete hai...........doc format me copy ...........

agar in bade famous writers ka yahi raha to........ xp ki lagbhag sabhi completed famous stories ka data hai mere pas............me post karna shuru kar dunga
Jrur bhai ydi apke pas data he to plz share kriye platform pr taki hm jese khi readers bhi us data me bsi rachana ka lupt uta ske ...Plz
 
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bhai ye story xform pr bhi aapko mil jayegi......pdf section m to already ye h hi
 

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Hello Everyone :hello:
We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of Xforum "The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC)..

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Iske baare Mein thoda aapko btaadun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kissi bhi prefix ki short story post kar shaktey ho jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words takk ho shakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap Iss contest Mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa Rupp dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko pura Xforum dekhega ye ek bahot acha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories k liye kyunki USC Ki stories ko pure Xforum k readers read kartey hain.. Or jo readers likhna nahi caahtey woh bhi Iss contest Mein participate kar shaktey hain "Best Readers Award" k liye aapko bus karna ye hoga ki contest Mein posted stories ko read karke unke Uppar apne views dene honge.

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