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Thanxx dostFor completed 100 pages on your story thread.....
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thanxx dost aise hee comment karte raheKaya, Yash, Dr. Meenakshi asmanjas me hai.Rochak. Pratiksha romanchak kahani ke agle rasprad update ki
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UPDATE KI
behad hee utam aalochana ki hai apne aalu jeedr. meenakshi ne ek rishta bana lia hain yash ke saath jo kee ek dr aur patient ke liye sahi bhi nahin hain... kya ho agar unki personal bhawnaye unke judgement ke aare aa jaye toh... bhai ke liye jo protectiveness agar unhe sahi galat faisla lene mein badha daale... khair yash aur miss kaya ke mamle mein toh unhone sahi se sambhal liya aur shayad yahee ek behtar upaay tha,,, akhir yash dobara kaise unse najre mila payega,,, jab bhi dono ek doosre jkee aankhon mein dekhenge,,, tab tab miss kaya ko wahee tashveer yaad aayega aur yash bhi shayad yahee soch ke sharminda mehsoos kare...
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shayad yahee un dono ke rishte ka ant tha jo kee kabhi tha bhi nahin,,, lekin idhar pyar ke mamle mein dr meenakshi bhi confuse ho gayee,,, jab do dil ho aur dono kisi se kam nahin,,, aur pareshani kee baat hain kee yeh dono ko chah raha hain,,, lekin dr, ne kaha wakt do,,, shayad wakt beetne par aur samay saath bitane par shayad yeh dhundh kam ho jaye,,, shayad asli pyar ka matlab tab tak yash ko samajh aa hi jaye,,, rahi baat dil tootne kee toh kisi na kisi ka toh tootega hi,,, shayad isha ka ya phir preeti ka...
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lekin dr ne ek baat kahee iss duniya kee log wakt ke saath badalte bhi hain aur phir jo pyar hain wo dhumil bhi hota hain kya pata wakt ke saath kisi ka pyar kam ho jaye... shayad tab faisla lene mein kathinayee kam ho... lekin behrahaal wo dono ko jawab kya dega,,, ke main confuse hoon aur dono ko date karna chahta hoon... its really complicated...
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yeh hormones deemag ke saath ajeeb khel kehlte hain,,, chand tashveere aur chand shabdo ne achhi bhali kaya madam kee zindagi uthal puthal kar dee,, akhir jo dekh liya usse deeemag se erase kaise kare,, aur akhir baat kar ke wo kya hal nikalna chahti hain,, jahiar hain yash peechhe hatega aur maafi mangega,, shayad kachhi umar kee galtio ka hawala de ke,, aur kuchh had tak usse samajh bhi aa chuka hai kee ab unka aur kaya madam ka koi bhavishya nahin hain,,, aur shayad aise uljhe hue vartaman mein bhi wo saath nahin rahna chahta jahan wo pehle se hi do premikao kee jaal mein uljha hua hain...
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another brilliant update brother...
behad hee utam aalochana ki hai apne aalu jeedr. meenakshi ne ek rishta bana lia hain yash ke saath jo kee ek dr aur patient ke liye sahi bhi nahin hain... kya ho agar unki personal bhawnaye unke judgement ke aare aa jaye toh... bhai ke liye jo protectiveness agar unhe sahi galat faisla lene mein badha daale... khair yash aur miss kaya ke mamle mein toh unhone sahi se sambhal liya aur shayad yahee ek behtar upaay tha,,, akhir yash dobara kaise unse najre mila payega,,, jab bhi dono ek doosre jkee aankhon mein dekhenge,,, tab tab miss kaya ko wahee tashveer yaad aayega aur yash bhi shayad yahee soch ke sharminda mehsoos kare...
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shayad yahee un dono ke rishte ka ant tha jo kee kabhi tha bhi nahin,,, lekin idhar pyar ke mamle mein dr meenakshi bhi confuse ho gayee,,, jab do dil ho aur dono kisi se kam nahin,,, aur pareshani kee baat hain kee yeh dono ko chah raha hain,,, lekin dr, ne kaha wakt do,,, shayad wakt beetne par aur samay saath bitane par shayad yeh dhundh kam ho jaye,,, shayad asli pyar ka matlab tab tak yash ko samajh aa hi jaye,,, rahi baat dil tootne kee toh kisi na kisi ka toh tootega hi,,, shayad isha ka ya phir preeti ka...
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lekin dr ne ek baat kahee iss duniya kee log wakt ke saath badalte bhi hain aur phir jo pyar hain wo dhumil bhi hota hain kya pata wakt ke saath kisi ka pyar kam ho jaye... shayad tab faisla lene mein kathinayee kam ho... lekin behrahaal wo dono ko jawab kya dega,,, ke main confuse hoon aur dono ko date karna chahta hoon... its really complicated...
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yeh hormones deemag ke saath ajeeb khel kehlte hain,,, chand tashveere aur chand shabdo ne achhi bhali kaya madam kee zindagi uthal puthal kar dee,, akhir jo dekh liya usse deeemag se erase kaise kare,, aur akhir baat kar ke wo kya hal nikalna chahti hain,, jahiar hain yash peechhe hatega aur maafi mangega,, shayad kachhi umar kee galtio ka hawala de ke,, aur kuchh had tak usse samajh bhi aa chuka hai kee ab unka aur kaya madam ka koi bhavishya nahin hain,,, aur shayad aise uljhe hue vartaman mein bhi wo saath nahin rahna chahta jahan wo pehle se hi do premikao kee jaal mein uljha hua hain...
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another brilliant update brother...
thanxx dost aise hee comment karte raheAwesome update waiting for the next
Posted broBrother waiting plz update
kya game khel raha hain riyan,,, srishti ka flirt karna bas usse patane tak hi nahin tha,, isse wo yeh jata raha tha kee drishti mein usse koi interest na hain,,, aur puchhe jaane par sirshti gawaah hoti... jahir hain 2500 crore lagana sabhi ko koi chaal lagta,,, ab karan kya hain pyar,, toh usne nakar diya kya talent jo kee usne swikara... lekin puri legal tarike se jisse kisi ko sandeh na ho,, baad mein agar pol bhi khule toh...
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kirti ko apni sachhai bata ke wo dono maa beti mein daraar dalne mein kamyab ho gaya,,, akhir yeh sach wo kaise bata deti drishti ko kee wo uska bhai/bhatija hain,,, jisse usne paiso ke liye uske baap ko chhor ke khud ke sasur ke hi saath hambistar ho gayee thee... kya sochte unke bachhe kee kaisa baap aur maa mili hain jo itni giri hui harkat kar shakte hain kisi ke saath..
aur doosra koi aur karan dirshti ne khud hi nakar diya,, akhir rawaiyaa bhi toh dekhti aayee hain apne pariwar ka,, shabkuchh aaryan ke hi liye ho,, srishti toh settle ho chuki hain khud ka hospital khol ke,,, lekin drishti ka kya,, usse mauka mila aur maa aa gayee taang aarane ...
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pehla mohra toh ghar se nikal gaya,,, lekin srishti shayad ab kareeb hone kee kosis na kare,,, kyunk jaate-jaate jo sach ka aaina dirshti dikha gayee hain uske baad wo khud himmat na kar payegi... lekin idhar jay agar delhi se sach pata laga ke aa gaye toh,,, akhir ronny singh jab itna hi bara business man hain oth delhi mein uska naam toh ho ga hee,,, agar wakai mein unhe sachhai pata chal gayee toh..
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ab dekhte hain lekhak mahoday idhar kya karte hain,,, mujhe lagta hain kaheen uss ronny singh ka koi doosra beta jaroor unhe delhi mein intezar karta hua milega... unhe gumraah karne ke liye...
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brilliant mind game..
Brother waiting for Amazing update
next update kab aayga ?
Update???
thanxx dostWaiting next
Nice updateUpdate no 24
Saam ke waqt yash ground me chakar laga raha tha sabhi student ke sath ke tabhi uske sath Isha running karne lagti hai
Isha:-kaha the subh...
Yash:-tum kab aayi...
Isha:-maine kya pocha hai baato gye
Yash:-thoda kaam tha tumhre papa ne bejha tha
Isha:-yeh papa bhi naa inhe koi aur nhi milta kya kahi bejhne ko
Yash:-chhodo naa kaam jaruri tha iss liye bejha tum gussa chhodo aur meri baat suno
Isha:-haa bolo
Yash:-tum janti ho naa kuch din baad hamre final exam hai aur ham padai nhi kar rahe
Isha:-hammm
Yash:-kyo naa exam time dono pehle padai kare fir college me toh sath hee rehna hai
Isha:-baat tumhri teek hai toh ab sirf padai ki baate kare gye
Yash:-haa ham dono ek dusre ki padai me help kare gye
Isha:-hamm teek hai tum running karo main jakar padhti ho iss baar main hee toper hogi tum nhi
Yash:-har baar main hee hota ho
Isha:-iss baar nhi samjhe bye
Yash bas muskura deta hai wahi Isha bhi muskura deti hai
Isha ke jate hee thodi der sab ke sath exercises karta hai uske baad woh bhi hostel aa jata hai
Thodi der me fresh hone ke baad chl deta hostel se bahar
Phone booth ke pass jakar woh ek number mila deta hai
Thodi der baad call pick ho jati hai
Yash:-hello preeti..
Preeti:-hello yash kaise ho...
Yash:-main teek ho tum kaisi ho
Preeti:-teek ho tum kab aao gye ghar
Yash:-abhi toh exam hone baki hai tumhre bhi toh rehte hoge
Preeti:-hamm main bhool hee gyi thi tyari kaisi chl rahi hai
Yash:-filhal toh kar nhi raha tha par aaj se lag jao gaa
Preeti:-hamm main bhi kar rhi ho par dhyan nhi lag raha
Yash:-kyo kya hua...
Preeti:-hona kya hai bas kuch yaad aa jata hai hamri purni masti kaise ham sath rehte the pata nhi log bade kyo ho jate hai acha tha naa uss waqt ham azad panchi ki tarh udd toh sakte the
Yash:-par bada toh hona hee padta hai naa preeti
Preeti:-mere hath me hota toh kabhi naa hoti
Yash:-hmm yeh sab chhodo kuch waqt ke liye...ache se paper do fir college me masti kare gye naa ek baar fir
Preeti:-main toh kab se intzar hee kar rhi ho ke tum wapas aao aur ek baar fir ham apni duniya me kho jaye
Yash:-haa kyo nhi aur kuch baato naa...
Yash ko badi bechaini ho rahi thi woh phone rakhna chah raha tha par uske hath jaise uski sunn hee nhi rahe the kann toh jaise uss madhur awaj ko sunte hee rehna chahte the
Preeti:-meri suno gye toh yash raat guzar jaye gyi tum hee kuch kaho naa main toh haal-e-wafa keh hee nhi sakti iss phone par jis din tumhe kaho gyi aakho me aakhe daal tumhra didar karte huye kaho gyi jo bhi kehna hai tumse iss kehna hamme gaabra nhi
Yash:-preeti ek baat kaho...
Preeti:-hamm kaho naa
Yash:-tum janti ho mujhe kuch khaas yaad nhi uss bachpan ke bare me jiske har lamhe tum dilo dimag me sajaye huye ho..preeti kabhi kabhi toh khud par hee sharm aa jati hai ke koi mujhe itna janta hai aur main ek hissa bhi nhi janta
Preeti:- toh iss me sharm kaisi hai maine apko chaha toh maine apko apne mann mandir me bassa liya...aapke dil me kuch nhi tha toh apne bhoola diya iss me sharm kyo mehsus karte ho... Tum uss lamhe ko bhula sakte ho par main toh nhi bhooli naa aur fir bhool jane ka yeh matlb toh nhi ke saath hee chhod de kya main yaaad dilo gyi toh tum mera sath nhi doge yaado ko jeene me
Yash:-haa bilkul main har kadam sath duga
Preeti:-bas itna hee toh sath aur yaade chahiye...jab tumhe meri jarurt ho main sath khadi ho jao bina saawal shart ke jab mujhe jarurt ho toh tum khade ho jana kya iss se bhi kuch jada hota hai pyar...
Yash:-preeti tumhri soch bahut alag hai yar main kabhi aisa mehsus nhi kiya kisi aur ke liye
Preeti:-kyoki aap iss duniya ke rango se anjan hai... Yeh khubsurat hai main dikho gyi naa har rang bas jaldi se uss ghosle ko chhod kar wapas ghar aa jao
Yash:-preeti sach keh raha hoo mujhe bachpan yaad nhi par iss preeti ke sath har waqt reh kar kuch naya sunna aur kehna chahta ho bas thode din intzar kar lo ho sakta hai main phone naa karo tyari ke karan..
Preeti:-tum uski parwah maat karo bss mann laga kar tyari karo...6 saal intzar kiya hai maine tumhra fir inn chand lamho ki kya kimat hai
Yash:-tumhe writer hona chahiye
Preeti:-haa agar khanni tum hoge toh khannikar main banne ko tyar ho
Yash:-tum naa....main betab ho tumse milne ko...acha sunno main rakhta ho baki bhi baat karne ko line me hai
Preeti:-teek hai main intzaar karo gyi bye exam khatam kar sidhe ghar aa jana fir sath me tumhre ghar chle gye tumhre mummy se maine baat kar lee hai
Yash:-acha teek hai bye
Preet:-bye subh raatri
Yash muskura kar phone rakh deta hai wahi sabhi ladke aur dukandar yash ko dekh rahe the kyoki uss ne kab se unhe intzar jo karya hua tha par yash unki parwah kiye bina apne hotel me jakar padai karne lagta hai par uski muskan kam nhi hoti jaise kuch khaas mila ho usse
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Suman apne room Me baithi padh rahi thi ke tabhi uska phone bajne lagta hai
Jab dekhti hai toh uss par dr meenakashi likha hua tha woh phone utha leti hai
Suman:-hello dr
Meenakashi;-Suman kaisi ho kya tumhri yash se baat huyi
Suman:-main teek hoo dr par yash se toh meri baat nhi huyi woh hostel me hai naa... Kyo koi baat hai kya dr
Meenakashi:-hamm aaj maine yash ko bulya tha acha sunno ab tumhe yash ke sath relationship rakhne ki jarurt nhi hai
Dr meenakashi ki baat sunn suman hairan ho jati hai usse samjh nhi aata ke aisa kyo kaha meenakashi ne jab ki uss ne hee usse yash se pyar karne ko kaha tha
Suman:-aisa kyo keh rahe ho dr aap..apne hee toh mujhe..
Meenakashi:-main janti ho suman par mujhe kya pata tha ki yash khud dund lega apne liye ladki main toh iss mamle me usse bacha hee samjh rahi thi par woh toh do do girlfriend liye baitha hai toh tum door raho yar nhi toh oh mera dimag kharab kar dega
Suman ko toh yeh sunn kar hee jhatka laga tha ke yash ki do do girlfriend hai woh toh yash ko ek dum masoom samjhti thi par ab uske dimag me sidha zoya ka naam hee aata hai aur iske liye woh apni didi anjali ko doshi manti hai par woh kuch kar nhi sakti hai
Suman:-dr kya uska naam zoya hai...kya usne apko uska naam bataya tha paka zoya hee hogi
Meenakashi:-ab yeh zoya kon hai
Suman:-woh anjali didi ki friend hai yash se kafi badi hai woh toh
Meenakashi:-pata nhi ab yeh ladki konsi baata rahi ho tum vaise mujhe toh usne ek kaa naam isha batya hai toh ek ka naam preeti
Suman ko ek aur jhatka laga woh toh yaha zoya ko gf mann rahi thi par yaha toh isha aur preeti thi preeti ko toh yash mila bhi ek baar tha fir woh kaise gf bann gyi aur yeh isha kab gf bann gyi uski ..suman ko kuch samjh nhi aa raha tha
Suman:-are you sure dr ke yash ki do do gf hai kyoki yash ne batya tha woh preeti se ek baar hee mila tha
Meenakashi:-haa usne batya tha par woh confused hai dono ko lekar isha se toh pyar hai usse toh yeh kiss bhi kar chuka hai haa preeti ko lekar woh thoda doubt me hai
Suman:-kyaa usne isha ko kiss kiya...waha padai kar rahe hai yaa yeh sab main baat karti ho unse
Meenakashi:-nhi nhi tum iss bare me koi baat matt karna uss se....maine toh tumhe mana karne ke liye batya ab agar usse pata lage gaa ke maine tumhe batya hai uski baat toh pata nhi kaise recat kare gya
Suman:-jee dr main usse kuch nhi kaho gyi
Meenakashi:-good ab tum rest karo kismat ki baat hai yash kisi aur ko mila tumse pehle iss me ham kya kar sakte hai
Suman:-jee....
Suman phone cut karte hee phone bed par fek deti hai
Suman:-bhaiya aisa kaise kar sakte hai matlb waha woh padai kar rahe hai yaa kiss kar rahe hai aur woh isha hee mili woh toh bhaiya ke samne kuch bhi nhi bhaiya usse kaise pasand kar sakte hai aur yeh billi preeti yeh toh ek din milli nhi ke hakk jama baithi...mummy aur didi bhi pagal hai jo uska number yash ko de diya sabse pehle toh yahi bigad rahe hai bhaiya ko woh toh masoom hai ab koi ladki samne se akar kuch karne ko kahe gyi toh kon mana kare gaa ab toh raat ho gyi hai kal baat karti ho par dr ne mana kiya ab kya karo ek baar ghar aane do fir dekhti hoo unhe pata nhi kya kya karte hoge...uss chudail ko zinda nhi chhodo gyi... Mujhe itna gussa kyo aa raha hai mere toh bhai hee hai par kaise woh aisa kar sakte hai
Suman apne room me apne aap se kuch kehti toh kuch baat kaat deti uska dimag hee hil gya tha pata nhi woh aisa kyo recat kar rhi thi par woh santt nhi ho paa rahi thi
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Kaya iss waqt apne room me baithi thi uske hath me book thi par naa woh uss kitab ke panne palat rahi thi naa uss me kuch padh rahi thi kyoki 10 mint se woh ussi panne ko khol ke baithi huyi thi
K pati:-kya hua kaya tum kahi khoyi huyi ho jab se aaya ho kahi gum c hoo
Kaya:-hhaaa kya kaha...
K pati:-kya hua tum teek ho naa
Kaya:-oh sorry darling woh kya hai ke mera sar dard kar raha hai thoda sayad iss liye aise behave kar gyi hogi
Kaya badi chalki se jhoot toh bol gyi aur sayad uska pati maann bhi gya par asli baat woh ache se janti thi
K pati:-tumhra sar dard kar raha tha aur tum book leke baithi ho isse rakho pehle main bamm laga deta hoo
Kaya:-nhi nhi Maine dawai lee hai thodi der me teek ho jati ho
K pati:-achi baat hai par book rakho thoda rest karo main coffee le aata hoo
Kaya:-nhi tum ruko agar coffee peni hai toh main bana lata hoo
K pati;-muskura kar) yar kabhi mujhe bhi apni seva karne moka diya karo main abhi aaya baitho yahi
Kaya ka pati kitchen chla jata hai wahi ab Kaya apne aap par gussa kar rhi thi usse acha nhi lag rha tha uske galti ki vajh se uska pati itna kar raha tha aur woh usse itna pyar karta itni parwah karta hai aur woh aise kisi aur ke baare me soch rahi hai
Kaya:-yeh main kya kar rhi thi mujhe door rehna chahiye aisi baate bhi sochna bhi acha nhi hai maine sirf jhoot bola kitni parwah karne lage aur main... Nhi ab main nhi socho gyi kuch... Woh mera student hai bas aur kuch nhi uske mann me galat tha mere mann me nhi
Tabhi uska pati coffee lekar aa jata hai
K pati:darling tumhri coffee iss se acha lage gaa
Kaya:-thanku... Main lucky ho app jitna pyar karne wala pati mila
K pati:-kaya lucky toh main ho jo itni sunder aur samjhdar wife mili hai mujhe i love you
Kaya:-love you to
Kaya apne pati ke sath dher sari baate karti hai uske dimag me jo yash ki baate chl rhi thi woh toh apne pati se baat kar ke hee nikl gyi thi