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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Update 18

Fir sahil ke papa jo bolte hai use sunkar sahil ke tote,( parrot), panchi, kauye ( crow) sab ood jate hai.
Or shocked or sharam se lal sab kuch ho jata hai....,...................

Ab aagee.....

Chalo chalte hai hero ke pass

Agli subha .........

5 baje

Jesi hii rahul ki neend khulti hai to dekhta hai ki uski teeno bhan usse chipak kar so ( sleep) kar rahi hai......
Teeno ke legs rahul ke upar hai or rahul se chipakkar so rahi hai.
Or rahul ka lund nisha ke chut ( pussy) ke pass hai.
Yeh dekh kar rahul shoked ho jata hai.
Or dheere se vaha se nikal kar bahar jogging or apni excercise ke liye nikal jata hai or karib do gante ke baad aakar bathroom me chale jata hai.
Tabi
Un teeno ki neend bhi khul jati hai.
Or teeno ek dusre ko dekhne lagti hai.

Payal ( dono se) : tum dono yaha kiu aai or rahul kaha hai.

Is par ruchi bolti hai.

Ruchi : payal didi hame der lag raha tha to hum bhi yaha aa gaye.

Payal ( dono se) : acha thik hai magar rahul kha hai.

Tabi
Samne se rahul nahakar bhar aa jata hai.

Rahul ( teeno se) : tum teeno yaha kya kar rahi ho. Or me to shopping.................

Tabi

Nisha bolti hai.

Nisha : bhaiya hum shopping me gaye the aap us aauraat ko bachane ke liye bhage or us aauraat ko bacha liya.
Fir aap behosh ho gaye the to hum aapko ghar le aae.

Rahul : vo auraat khon thi.

Ruchi : koi aadmi aa gaya tha shayad uska husband hoga vo usse le gaya.
Rahul : tum teeno is bed par

Payal : vo tum behosh the to hume der lag raha tha or maa ( mala bua) bhi ghar me nahi thi to hum ek saath so gaye.

Rahul : or payal mere hoth ( lips) par yeh cut kese gaya.

Is baat par teeno ek dusaro ko dekhte hai.
Tabi
Ruchi : iska to mujhe nahi pata is bare me shayad payal didi ko pata ho.

Payal ( mann me) : kahi mere kiss ke bajese to nahi cut gaye par mane to bas chuma tha fir yeh hoth ( lips) cut kese gaya.

Tabi
Nisha : haa bhaiya hame nahi pata.
Tabi
Payal : vo.......vo.....

Ruchi maze lete hue.

Ruchi : haa didi bolo na.

Payal : vo jab tu behosh hua tha na to mujhse galti se mera hath ( hand) tere hoth par lag gaya jisse tera hoth ( lips) cut gaya.

Rahul : or us auraat ke piche to gunde pade the na.
Unka kya hua.

Is baat par teeno ek dusre ko dekhne lagti hai.

Tabi.

Ruchi : bhaiya vaha par mahakaal aa gaya tha or usne us sab gundo ki bohot pitai ki.

Rahul : acha chalo tum teeno bhi tyaar ho jao bua ( mala) bhi aati hogi.
Or mujhe bhook bhi lagi hai.

Teeno jaldi se tyaar hone apne apne kamre me chali jati hai.

Tabi rahul ka phone bajne lagta hai.
Maine dekha koi naye number se call aya tha. Maine call receive kia.

Main : hello
Dusre taraf se : hello rahul

Main : jii aap khon

Dusri taraf se : main rani

Main : hadbadakar gaya ....aunty aap kaise phone kia.

Rani : woh beta tumne aaj invite karna tha aaj dinner ke liye.

Main : dinner par kiu.

Rani : woh sonam ke papa chahate hai ki tumse mile.

Main : aunty aaj nahi aa pauga kiuki abhi bua ghar par nahi aayi hai main apse kal ( tomorrow) dinner par aa jauga.

Rani : ok beta rakhti hue magar kal pakka aa jana.

Main : ok aunty

Phir maine phone cut kar diya
Main sochne laga haay sonam se miluga mann maan muskurane laga.
Main aisa kiu kar raha tha vo mujhe khud hii nahi pata chala.

( Bhai ek baat clear kar du abhi rahul ko sunaina ke bareme kuch bhi nahi pata hai. Or rahul ko na apni shaktiyo ke bare me pata hai. Aage ane wale update me pata chalega.)

Tabhi mujhe yaad aya are address toh liya hii nahi. Maine firse call kiya

Main : hello aunty

Ladki : suriilii awaaz ......ji main sonam

Main woh sonam ji main sirf yeh kehne ke liye phone kia tha ki aadress toh liya hii nahi.

Sonam : koi baat nahi aab le lijiye.

Main : ji boliye.

Phir maine address le liya.

Main : jii uncle aab kaise hai.

Sonam : jii aab thik hai.

Main : chalo aab rakhta hoon

Phir maine call rakh dia.

Vahi....

Nisha & ruchi apne kamre me tyaar hone chali gai.
Or dono tyaar ho rahi thi ki tabi vaha vaha prerna aa jati hai.

Prerna : to dono ne bohot maza kia raat me or payal ko bhi fasane ki soch rahi thi.

Ruchi : yamraj wali didi aap dekh rahi thi.

Nisha ( mann me) : kahi ye bhaiya ko na bta de agar bata diya to hamara postmotem pakka hai.

Prerna : or kya vese apne bhaiya ke rasilee hoth ( lips) chuskar maza to bohot aya hoga.

Nisha : hai yamraj wali didi bohot maza aya.

Tabi
Nisha ko pata chalta hai ki vo kisse bol rahi hai.
Achanak se bolti hai.
Nisha : vo......vo....

Prerna ( haste hue) : haaa bolo kyaaaa

Ruchi ( sharmate hue) : yamraj wali didi nisha to bas aise hii bol rahi hai humne to bas ek halki si kiss ki thi bas.

Prerna : jhoot mat bolo tum mujhse kuch nahi chupa sakti kiuki tume pata hai main khon hue.

Ruchi ( mann me) : yeh kahi hame blackmail to nahi karegi ab.

Prerna : meri pyari ruchi bhan tension mat lo me tume blackmail nahi karugi.
Or madad bhi kar sakti hue.
Ruchi shocked.
Nisha shocked

Ruchi ( ghabrate hue) : tumne meri mann ki baat kese jani.

Prerna : you know who i am ( yeh English bhi kaise hoti hai dharti ke lok ki...)

Nisha ( mann me) : yeh to mann ki bhi baat padh leti hai isko to baad me dekhugi abhi to dosti hii karni padegi.

Prerna : dekh lena baad me magar mujhe se dosti karne me tumara fyda hai.

Richi ( bade pyaar se) : yamraj wali didi vo to aise hii bol rahi hai hum to apke dost hii hai.

Nisha ( mann me) : yamraj wali didi se pucho ki sunaina ka kya chakkar hai bhaiya sunaina ka naam kiu le rahe the behoshi ki halat me bolti to aise hai ki hame sab pata hai ab dekhti hue ki ye sunaina ke bare me kese batati hai.

Nisha : yamraj wali didi hame ek baat karni hai.

Prerna ( muskurate hue ) : mujhe pata hai tum didi ke bare me puchna chahati ho.

Ruchi : khon didi

Prerna : me sunaina ke bareme bol rahi hu. Me unhe didi bolti hu.

Ruchi ( mann me) : yeh to mere bhaiya ko fasa rahi thi vo kaam tha ki ab iski didi bhi aa gai.
Abhi aae nahi hai to bhaiya behoshi ki halat me bhi uska naam le rahe the
Jab aaegi to lagta hai dhamaka macha degi.

Kahi mere bhaiya ko husmse chiin na le.
Or yeh ab yamraaj wali didi bolegi mane tumari mann ki baat pad lie.

Is baat par prerna bohot jor jor se hasne lagti hai.

Prerna ( mann me) : jaise mere rohan ne chaha tha yeh vesi hii hai. ( Rahul ke punar janam ka Naam rohan tha. )

Prerna ( mushkurate hue) : ek baat batau sunaina didi ki.

Nisha : kyaa
Vo hamare bhai ko chinkar lee jaegi.

Prerna : tension mat lo vo tumare bhaiya ko tumse nahi chinegi.
Ruchi & Nisha bolti hai chalo bach gaye.

Fir
Prerna bolti hai.

Prerna : balki tumare bhaiya ose fasa lege dekha neend me kese naam le rahe the. ( Yeh baat prerna ne haste hue kahi)
Dono ek saath : kyaaaaa
Prerna ( mann me) : abhi inko sab kuch batane ka time nahi aya hai.

Prerna ( dono se) : are me to mazak kar rahi thi. Tumare bhaiya apni bhano ke alawa kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakte chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.
Matlab kuch bhi.

Or prerna kuch or bhi bolne wali hoti hai.

Tabi achanak se ruchi bolti hai.

Ruchi : tum to gai yamraj wali didi kiuki tum hamari bhan nahi ho or sunaina bhi nahi..

Or dono hasne lag jati hai.
Hahahahhahhaha

Is baat par prerna bhi hasne lag jati hai.
Hahahahahahahahah

Or dono hairan ho jate hai.
Fir
Prerna apni baat pura karti hai.

Prerna : mane sirf is dharti lok ki baat ki thi.
Ki is dharti lok me mera rohan apni bhano ko chorkar kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakta or vo chahe to bhi nahi.
Magar me dharti lok ki nahi hue.

Or dono ruchi & nisha ka muh utar jata hai.

Nisha : aap sunaina didi ki ek baat batane wali thi na wo bhi bata dijiye kahi hamara firse popat na ban jaye.

Prerna : jyada kuch nahi bataugi sunaina didi ke bare me.
Hai ek baat jarur bataugi ki unse bachkar rehna kiuki agar tum natkhat or setan ho to vo bhi thodi natkhat hai or tumare lok me kya bolte hai us chiz ko haaa.
Vo information technology ki bhi baap hai.
Thoda bachkar rehna.

Dono ek sath : haa haa hum apna plan bana lege.
Fir aise hii thodi der teeno me baat hoti hai or prerna vaha se chali jati hai.

Fir
Ruchi ( nisha se) : nisha kuch karna padega

Nisha : haa ruchi koi plan banana padega.

Fir dono aise hii baat karte hue niche aa jati hai kiuki unko school jo jana tha.

Vahi.....

Rahul ke kaamre me





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Update 19

Mega update

Nisha : haa ruchi koi plan banana padega.

Fir dono aise hii baat karte hue niche aa jati hai kiuki unko school jo jana tha.

Vahi.....

Rahul ke kaamre me

Aab aageeeeee.....




Rahul bohot khus tha ki vo sonam se milega.
Tabi
Piche se payal tyaar hokar aati hai
Rahul ke kamre me
Payal dekhne me aaj bohot khubsurat lag rahi hoti hai
Or aaj payal ne salwar ( suit) pehna hota hai.
Or usme bohot hii cute & hot lag rahi hoti hai......
Rahul payal ko dekhne me hii kho jata hai....
Rahul ko aise ghurte dekh payal thoda sarmajati hai.
Or
Tabi
Payal ko apna first kiss yaad aa jata hai.
Jab usne rahul ke sath kiya tha.
Or sharam se paani paani hone lagti hai.
Or payal bhi kho jati hai rahul ki neeli aakho me.
Tabi
Piche se
Mala ( bua) aa jati hai.
Or mala bua bolti hai.
Mala bua : jaldi se niche aa jao niche khana ready hai.
Isse ke sath dono harbara kar bolte hai.
Maa , bua aap kab aai
Is par mala bua bolti hai.
Mala bua ( dono se) : vo kaam thoda jaldi khatam ho gaya isliye jaldi aa gai.

Rahul : bua vese aap gai kha thi apne hame bataya bhi nahi tha ki kha ja rahi ho.
Tabi
Payal bolti hai

Payal : haa maa apne bataya bhi nahi tha.

Mala bua : vo thoda kaam tha na to apne friend ke pass. Gai thi.
Dono acha bolte hai.
Or mala bua niche chali jati hai.

Fir payal rahul se bolti hai.

Payal ( rahul se) : rahul vo ladki hai na jiske papa ko humne bachaya tha na kya naam tha us ladki ka
Haa sonam
Uska aaj birthday hai
Me jab form submit kar rahi thi to mane
Date of birth deki thi.

Rahul to bohot khus ho jata hai.

Rahul : payal fir to hume kuch karna chahiye. Kiuki abhi vo apne papa ke accident se ghusri hai.
Shayad bohot udas ho.

Payal : haa magar kya
Bechari ladki to bohot achi hai.
Or usse uske papa ke dukh se bhi nikal na chahiye.

Rahul : payal ek kaam karo usko coffee shop me bulao.
Baki me dekh luga
Usko call kar lena.

Payal : magar mere pass to number nahi hai.

Rahul : abhi uski mummy ka call aya tha aaj dinner ke pass liye par mane kaal (tomorrow ) ke liye bol diya tha.

Us number par call karke baat kar lo.

Fir mein payal ko wo number deta hue jiss number par mujhe call aya tha.

Payal sonam se call karke usse baat karne lagti hai.

Or main niche aa jata hu
Or niche ate hue me bhi ek call karta hue.

Apne dosto ( ram ) ko

Rahul : hello

Ram : kya baat hai badi jaldi tuje meri yaad aa gai. Acha bta tujhe kuch kaam tha kya.

Rahul : haa yaar tujhe mera ek kaam karna hai.

Fir me ram ko saara plan bta deta hue or aise hii thodi baat karke

Phone cut kar deta hue. Or break fast ke liye chair par baith jaya hue.
Or tabi payal aa jati hai.

Or vo bhi breakfast karne lagti hai.

Tabi
Mala bua : beta college me addmission to karwa liya hoga.
To college kabse jana hai.

Tabi
Payal bolti hai.

Payal : haa maa admission to ho gaya hai.
Or college 45 days ke baad start hoga.

Tabi
Payal rahul se bolti hai.

Payal : rahul 10 baje ke liye bola hai.

Or main haa me gardan ( neck) hila deta hue.
Or chori der baad
Nisha & ruchi school ke liye nikal jati hai.
Or vahi
Mahakaal ki news ane lagti hai ki

Kese usne un gundo ko mara or jo sab vaha hua batane lagte hai.

Tabi

Mala bua bolti hai.

Mala bua : lagta hai ye mahakaal bohot khatarnak hai tum bachkar rehna thik hai.

Or payal & rahul haa me sir hila dete hai.

Or aise hii baat thori der tak karte hai.

Or 10 bajne wale hote hai to main or payal bike me baith kar nikal jate hai coffee shop ki taraf ....


Aaj bhi payal mere se chipak kar baithi hue thi.
Or
Aaj mane bolne ka soch hii liya
Or bike par hii payal se bola

Rahul : payal tu mujhse itna chipak kar kiu baith ti hai.

Tabi
Payal meri baat puri hone se bolta pehle bolti hai.
Payal : tujhe kuch problem hai.
Haa mujhe lagta hai tujhe kuch problem hai.
Main tumko aachi nahi lagti.
Jabi to mujh se door jane ki baat kar rahe ho.
Mujh se door jana chahate ho bolo na.

Rahul ( mann me) : BC yeh kya drama hai mane to bas itna hii pucha ki mere se itna chipak kar kiu baithi hai.

Bhar log dekhege to kya kahege

Magar isne to itna lamba chora bhasaan suna diya or kharcha pani lekar mujh par chad gai
Puri sonali didi ki tarha banti chali jaa rahi hai.
Bhagwaan bacha le mujhe.........
Or agar mane or kuch bola to or koi bhasaan suna degi isliye chup rehne me hii acha hee
Magar abhi kya Bolu.

Payal nam aakho se.

Payal : bolo na ab bolte kiu nahi.

Rahul : payal vo........vo........vo...

Payal : bol na rahul bol.

Rahul : vo tumare hath ( hand) me vo ring hai na vo mujhe chub rahi thi isliye bol raha tha.
Ki thoda apna hath ( hand) piche kar lo.

Payal khus hokar

Payal : to aise bolo na....

Fir hum coffee shop pohoch gaye....

Or mane dekha ki sonam coffee shop ke bhar hii khadi thi.
Or mujhe dekhkar bohot khuss lag rahi thi......

Main me subha hii is coffee shop me ek table book kar diya tha. Or aaj coffee shop me bahot kam hii log the....

Ham jakar jaha maine table book ki thi vaha par baith gaye.
Mere ek taraf payal baith gayi or dusari taraf sonam thi.

Or payal ne waiter ko 3 coffee ka order de diya. Main ne waiter ko ishara kar diya .
Jo subha cake .Ka order diya tha wo lane ke liye kaha. Apne dost ram se bolkar sara plan kar diya tha.

Magar sonam mujhe hii dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Payal : sonam baat kar ab chup kyu hai .
Ab to tumare papa bhi thik hai. To thoda khus ho jao.

Rahul : haa sonam tum kuch pareshan lag rahi ho bolo koi baat hai.

Sonam ( udas hokar ) : kuch nahi


Rahul : muze nahi lagta kuch to baat hai kya meri vajase problem hai.

Sonam : nahi nahi

Payal : rahul sonam ko tumse kuch puchna hai mujhe phone par bol rahi thi.

Rahul : kya puchna hai ( kya baat ho sakti hai iske papa bhi thik hoge subha sonam ki mummy ne bataya tha.)

Sonam : main bolati hu.

Payal : haa puch lee koi madad ki jarurat hai to rahul madad kar dega.

Rahul : haa pucho na sonam kya puchna hai.

Sonam tezi se saas lete hue or uska dil bohot tez dharak raha tha.

Sonam : kya tumari kohi .....

Rahul : kya meri
koi books chahiye hai kya.

Sonam : kya tumari kohi GF hai

Payal ( gusse me) : kya pucha tune.

Rahul : payal usko apni baat to puri karne do.

Rahul ( sonam se) : meri kohi GF nahi hai.

Sonam : kyu kabi koi mili nahi

Rahul : muze gf banane me kohi interest nahi hai.


Sonam : aisa kiu kahi khas vaja

Rahul ( mann me) : Yeh puchna kya chahati hai. Hum ek dusare ko to thik se jante bhi nahi bas pehli bar kal dekha hai vo bhi iske papa ke accident me.

Payal ( mann me) : yeh kalmuhi mere rahul se puchna kya chahati hai.

Or payal gusse me sonam ko dekh rahi thi.

Rahul : pahale tum batao ki tumne yeh sawal kyu puch rahi ho.

Meri bat sunkar payal ke face pe chamak aa gayi.

Sonam : muze tum bohot ache lagte ho
I LOVE YOU RAHUL.

Payal buri tarha se shocked
Main bhi shocked.


Chalo chalte hai sunaina ke pass............

Fir sahil ke papa jo bolte hai use sunkar sahil ke tote,( parrot), panchi, kauye ( crow) sab ood jate hai.
Or shocked or sharam se lal sab kuch ho jata hai....,...................



Nishant ( mushkurate hue) : tujhe bohot pata hai ki vo innocent hai. Kahi tum usse pasand to nahi karne lage.
Beta me bhi khufiya agency ka cheif hue saari khabar rakhta hu.

Is baat par sahil sharmane lagta hai.

Or rahi baat detail ki to haame pata to hona chahiye ki yeh kha rehti hai or khon hai.

Sahil ( mann me) : kya me sach me sunaina ko pasand karne laga hue .
Magar itni jaldi kese......
Or iski vo nili eyes kitni badi hai or khubsurat bhi.
Or itni intelligent hai ki pucho mat
Or har problem kitni jaldi solve kar deti hai.
Uska dil kitna saaf hai or har kisi ki madad karne ko tyaar ho jati hai.
Vo kisi or ke liye itna kar sakti hai to apno ke liye kitna karegi.
Mere liye kitna karegi jab me usko
Apne pyaar ka izar karuga.

Tabi
Nishant : sahil kha kho gaya.

Sahil harbarate hue.

Sahil : kuch nahi dad.

Tabi
Piche se ek aadmi nishant se bolta hai.

Aadmi ( nishant se) : sir abhi khabar aai hai ki desh 2 me bohot bada dhamaka hua hai or puri building kuch minute me hii khatam ho gai.

News me bataya gaya hai ki usme Karin 500 antankwadi the par unke boss ka koi pata nahi chal paya hai.

Nishant ( aadmi se) : thik hai or pata lagao koi or information mile to shayad ye vahi hai jisne hamare computer ko hacked kiya tha.

Mujhe puri information chahiye.

Aadmi ( nishant se) : ok sir me puri kosis karuga or hamare ghufiya logh is kaam me lage hue hai.

Or vo aadmi apne kaam me lag jata hai

Nishant fir sahil se bolta hai ki chal mujhe bhi ghar ke liye nikar na hai.

Thodi der rukh me bhi tere sath ghar ki taraf chalta hue.

Or kuch ghate tak sahil ke papa kuch kaam or baat karte hai
Tabi kisi ka call par baate karte hai or uske baad nikal jate hai.
Ghar ki taraf.

Rastee me

Nishant car me baithe hue sahil se puchta hai.

Nishant ( sahil se) : beta mujhe btao us sunaina ke baare me sab kuch.

Fir sahil saari baat apne papa ko bta deta hai ki kese sahil sunaina se mila.
Kese usne college ka server hack karke roma ki madad ki.
Or kese traffic signal hack karke un ladko ko hospital pochaya.

Uske piche ke karan ( bajaya) bhi or roma ke bare me bhi.

Nishant kuch sochne lagta hai fir sahil se bolta hai.

Nushant ( sahil se) : thik hai beta ab tum jao or ghar bhi aa gaya hai. Hum baad me baat karege .
Abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Or sahil apne ghar nikal jata hai
Or apne room me chala jata hai.

Or apne room me jate hii sahil bed par let jata hai.
Or sunaina ke bare me sochne lagta hai.
Sahil ( mann me) : kya sach me main sunaina ko like karne laga hu. Papa ne aisa kiu kaha ki me sunaina ki like karta hue.

Jab papa ne sunaina ko mamuli ladki kaha jab mujh itna gussa kiu aya.

Mein kal hii sunaina ko apne pyaar ka izar karuga.
Or aise hii sahil sunaina ke baare me sochte hue kab so ( sleep) jata hai pata hii nahi chalta.

Vahi........

Ek shaks apni chair par baitha hota hai

Tabi dusara shaks bhagte hue ata hai or us baithe hue shaks ke pass ata hai.

Or vo shaks 2 bahot ghabraya hua hota hai.

Shaks 2 ( shaks 1 se) : robert sir gajab ho gaya.

Robert : kya ho gaya or jo kaam mane karne ke liye diya us kaam ka kya hua.

Ghabrate hue shaks 2 bolta hai.

Shaks 2 : vahi to batane me yaha aya hue.

Robert : itna ghabra kiu raha hai.

Shaks 2 : robert sir jo hacking boss ne ki thi or us hacking me jo boss ne protocol banaye the
Kisi ne usse tor diye or yahi nahi jaha se humne hacking ki thi.
Achanak
Us building me dhamaka hua or hamare saare aadmi mare gae.

Robert puri tarah se shocked ho jata hai.

Robert : kyaaaaa.

Shaks 2 : haa sir me bhi hairaan hue ki aisa kese ho sakta hai.

Ek thandi saas lekar robat bolta hai.

Robert : dekh peter tere ko koi galat femi hue hogi.

Peter : robert sir mujhe koi galat femi nahi hue hai.

Robert gusse me

Robert : aabe saale tuje pata hai na vo hacking boss ne ki thi or us hacking ko to puri duniya ka koi bhi desh nahi tor paya.
To is desh me khon aa gaya

jisne yeh karnama kar diya.

Peter : mujhe pata nahi.
Vahi pata lagane ki kosis kar raha hue.

Tabi piche se ek or shaks bhagte hue ata hai.

Shaks robert se bolta hai.

Shaks ( robert se) : sir gazab ho gaya.
Sir gazab ho gaya.


Robert : pata hai muze bhanchod dimak mat kha or yeh bata ki us aaurat ka kya hua.
Shaks : sir apko kese pata chala .

Robert ( shaks se ) : abhi abhi pater ne bataya ki kisi ne pehli baar hamara hacking protocol thoda hai.

Shaks : kyaaaaaaa
Boss ka hacking protocol duniya ka koi bhi desh nahi tor paya.

Robert gusse me

Robert ( shaks se ) : abe tu kiu hairaan hai yeh bata ki us aauraat ka kya hua.

Robert ko gusse me dekhkar us shaks ki gand phat jati hai.

Vo shaks or jyada ghabra jata hai.

Shaks ( darte hue ) : Robert sir vo....

Robert : ab batayega bhi tuje pata hai agar vo kaam nahi hua to boss hamari gand fad dege or usko kha fekege vo mujhe bhi nahi pata.

Shaks : Robert sir hum us aauraat ko nahi pakad paye.

Robert gusse me

Robert ( shaks se) : ab teri gand me kisne danda de diya.

Shaks : sir vaha kou mahakaal aa gaya tha jisne hamare saare aadmiyo ko khatam kar diya.

Robort kuch sochte hue.

Robert : ye vahi mahakaal hai na jisne sung lee lu ko mara tha.

Shaks : haa sir ye vahi mahakaal hai.

Robert : saare gundo ko bol do or pata lagao us mahakaal or us hacker ke bare me jisne boss ka protocol tor diya or yeh kaam jaldi hona chahiye.

Agar boss ko thoda sa bhi pata chala to tume pata hai hamare sath kya hoga.

Robert : Peter tum us hacker ka pata lagao or mahaveer tum us mahakaal ka pata lagao.
Saalo tum dono rakshas ho tumare pas itne shaktiya bhi hai unko bhi use kar lo.
Unko kya gand me dalo ge.

Or dono mahaveer or peter nikal jate hai or chal dete hai india ki taraf.

Vahi
Robert : duniya ka koi insaan nahi bana jo hamari hacking tor sake.

Fir kuch sochte hue.

Robert : kahi isme us insaan ka hath ( hand) to nahi.
Fir robert thoda sa muskura deta hai.

Or ek call karta hai.

Robert : hello rakshas leader

Fir vo usse kuch baat karke phone cut kar deta hai.

Vahi

Sunaina..............


Bhai update bohot jaldi type kiya hai kiuki mere pass time nahi tha to spelling nahi check ki.
Or fever bhi hai.
Itne din se update nahi diya tha to aaj mane mega update de diya shayad isse un sab update ki kasar puri ho jae.

Ab subha hiii dekhuga.

Update agar aapko acha lage to comment me jarur batana.

Like , comment or vote karo agar yeh story pasand aae to.
Apna review jarur Dena.

















Dekhte hain ki Sahil ke pyar ki naiya Kahan tak chalti h:hehe: aur ye robert ki entry hui dekhte hai kon hai ye aur yska Rakshas leader
 
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Kal raat me mega update ke sath aaj chota sa update bhi de dita

Or ek call karta hai.

Robert : hello rakshas leader

Fir vo usse kuch baat karke phone cut kar deta hai.

Vahi

Sunaina..............

Ab aageeeeee.............

Jab sunaina nishant ke office se bhar nikalti hai.
Or bhar nikalti hai.

Raaste me
Sunaina ko kisi ladki ki jor jor se cheekne ki awaz kano me sunai padi.........

Jaise hi sunaina ne awaz ki disha me nazar doudayi to sunaina ko kuch bhi nahi dikha.......
To sunaina ne socha shayad hacking rokne ki tension ke kaaran mere kaan baj rahe hai........
Thodi der me phir se wahi chillane ki awaz sunaina ki kaano par paadi to sunaina ko confirmed ho gaya ki kuch to baat hai.

Tabhi mujhe ek van me ek ladki jhakti nazar aayi jise koi khich kar kisi ne turant ander kar liya...
Or sunaina ne jaldi se apni scooty us van ki taraf dourane lagi.

Or
Car jakar ek jungle me bani building par rukh gai.

Or usme se ek aadmi us car me se us ladki ko nikal kar..

Upar le jane laga.
Or sunaina ko us ladki ka muh nahi dekh paya.
Or dekhti hai ki us building me bohot saare gunde hote hai.
Jo guns liye khade hote hai.
Or sunaina yeh dekhkar shocked ho jati hai.
Ki is jungle ki building me itne saare gunde kya kar rahe hai.
Kya is sab ke bareme police ko nahi pata, forests department ko nahi pata.
Jab
Vo aadmi us ladki ko le ja rahe hote hai to
Vo ladki bohot ro ( carry) rahi hoti hai.
Or usko lagta hai ki koi uski is lachari ko nahi sun raha.

Or aadmi
Us ladki ko gasitte hue us ladki ko building me le jata hai.

Sunaina ( mann me) : ab me kya karu kese bachau us ladki ko kya nishant uncle ko call karu.
Ya police ko call karu
Agar police ko call kiya to shayad ho sakta hai ki vo bhi in logo se mile ho.
Itne saare log yaha guns ke sath hai or police ko pata na ho aisa ho nahi sakta.

Nishant uncle ko hii call karti hue.

Or sunaina Nishant uncle ko call karne lag jati hai.
Vahi call par

Nishant : hello

Sunaina : uncle me sunaina

Nishant : khon sunaina

Sunaina : uncle mujhe itni jaldi bhool jae jisne us hacking ko roka tha.

Nishant : ha ha beta bolo kese phone kiya.

Sunaina nishant ko puri baat bta deti hai.

Nishant : beta tum ghabrana maat me abhi kuch logo ko vaha bhejta hue.

Sunaina : uncle jaldi karo.

Nishant : beta thoda to time lagega.

Sunaina : thik hai uncle par jaldi ane ki kosis karna.

Tabi
Sunaina dekhti hai building se bohot saari ladkiya niche aa rahi hai.

Sab ladkiya ro ( carry) rahi hai.

Sunaina ( mann me ) : lagta hai in ladkiyo ko kahi or le jaya ja raha hai.
Ab me kya karu nishant uncle ko ane me abhi kuch time hai.

Ab kya karu
Yeh log in sab ladkiyo ka kya karege mujhe bhi nahi pata.

Lagta hai mujhe us gagets ko istemaal karna hii hoga.
Magar vo abhi tyaar nahi hai.
Kya karu.

Fir
Sunaina sochti hai jo hoga dekha jaiga magar me un ladkiyo ko jarur bachaugi.

Tabi
Sunaina apne bag se koi chiz nikalti hai or uska button on karti hai.

Jese
Hii button on hota hai
Tabi vo chiz aakar lene lagta hai.

Or ek robot samne khada ho jata hai.

Tabi
Sunaina robot se

Sunaina : tume in sab logo ko rokna hoga

Robat haa me gardan hila deta hai.

Or robot un sab lago ke samne aa jata hai.

Or ussi ke piche sunaina bhi aa jati hai.

Tabi
Sunaina ( gundo se) : un sab ladkiyo ko Chor do nahi to acha nahi hoga.

Yeh robot tume nahi chorega.

Tabi

Gunda 1 : khon hai to or yaha kese aai.

Gunda 2 : agar aa hii gayi hai to isko bhi pakad lo
Isko bhi hum boss ke pass le gaege.

Gunda 3 : nahi taar isko hum boss ke pass nahi dege.
Isko to hum apne pass rakhege dekh kitna mast maal hai.
Isko ragarne me maza ata aaega.

Gunda 4 : ha bhai sach kaha tune dekh ek dam doodh jesa colour hai isko dekhte hii me garam hone laga hue.

Sunaina ( gusse me) : tum aadmi bas ladkiyo ko havas ki hii nazar se dekhte ho.
Or unko kuchalna chahate ho.
Aaj tum sab maroge or kisi or ladkiyo par apni gandi nazar dalne ki kosis nahi karoge.

Sunaina robot se bolti hai maaro in sab ko.

Robot apne haath ( hand) ko shape change karke apne hath ( hand) ko gun bana leta hai.

Or vo gunde bhi un sabke liye tyaar ho jate hai or vo sab ek professional killer bhi the or sab
Achanak se chup jate hai.
Koi ped ( tree) par chup jata hai to koi van ke piche chup jate hai.

Or robot ko abhi bhi sunaina ne sahi tarike se tyaar nahi tha
To isliye vo idhar udhar firing karne lag jata hai.

Tabi
Ped ( tree) ke
Upar se ek aadmi us robot par khud jata hai.
Or baki gunde us robot par firing kar dete hai.

Or yeh baat vo robert shamaj nahi pata kuchi der me uske purje dhile ho jate hai.

Or kuch hii der me vo khatam ho jata hai.

Or us robot ke saare purje alag ho jate hai.

Tabi

Gunda 1 ( sunaina se) : yeh kis ko pakad kar laai hai yeh to do minute bhi tik nahi paya.

Gunda 2 ( gusse me) : ab to me yahi iska in sab ladkiyo ke samne bich jungle me ek ek karke iska balatkar karege.

Gunda 3 : haa agar isme bohot aag hai aaj iski saari aag thandi kar duga.
Bohot der se mera lund machal raha hai.
Or sab gunde sunaina ko pakad lete hai.

Or bich jungle me sab ladkiyo ke samne sunaina ko lita dete hai.

Tabi
Un ladkiyo me se ek ladki un gundo se bolti hai.

Ladki : please sunaina ko chor do bhagwaan se daro
Bhagwan tumko kabi maaf nahi karega

Tabi
Sunaina us ladki ko dekhte hii shocked ho jati hai.

Kiuki vo ladki or koi nahi roma thi jise vo van me daal kar building me le ja rahe the.

Gunda ( roma se ) : tujhe bhi apna yaha balatkar karvane hai kyaa.
Chup chap vahi kadi reh nahi to aaj hum is ladki ka balatkar to karege hii sath me teri bhi gand phad kar char kar dege apne lund se.

Roma ( gusse me) : tumari mout itni bhayanak hogi ki tumari rooh bhi kaap jaegi.
Or tum tadap tadap kar maroge.

Gunda 2 : khon karega humko tu maregi.

Or saare gunde tezz tezz hasne lagte hai.

Gunda 3 : isko bhi pakad lo pehele is ladki ( sunaina) ka balatkar karege pir aaj is ladki ( roma) ko bhi chodege.

Or sab gundo ne sunaina ko to pakad to rakha hii tha.

Tabi
Gunda leader : sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) dal kar jese hii uske kapade ko phadne ke liye hath ( hand) dalta hai

Vese hii sunaina ke muh se kuch nikal jata hai bohot tez
Sunaina : rohaaaaaaan
Babaaaaaaaaa
Dekhte hai kese bahate ho sunaina aur baki girls ko
 
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Mega update

Tabi
Gunda leader : sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) dal kar jese hii uske kapade ko phadne ke liye hath ( hand) dalta hai


Vese hii sunaina ke muh se kuch nikal jata hai bohot tez
Sunaina : rohaaaaaaan
Babaaaaaaaaa


Chalo chalte hai. Hero ki taraf..........

Payal shocked
Rahul shocked

Rahul ( sonam se ) : yeh to Mere liye achi bat hai. Par main kabi GF nahi banane vala.

Sonam : kyu .kya main buri hu.

Rahul : tum bohot achi ladki ho. Tumare nature acha hai. Tum dikne me khubsurat ho, shamjdar bhi lagti ho.

Sonam : pir bhi main tume pasand nahi hu .
Kyu ?

Payal ( gusse me) : tume shamaj nahi aa raha kya rahul ne mana kiya.

Rahul : payal chup ho jao.

Rahul ( sonam se) : kyu ki main ek ladki se pyar karta hu. Or vo bhi muze pyar karti hai.
Par usne ek ghatna ke baad muz par vishwaas nahi kiya or muze chor diya ( yeh pyaar wali baat apko jab pata chalegi jab rahul ka hostal wala flashback shuru hoga)
Isliye main ne decided kiya hai ki main kabhi kisi ladki ke sath sirf friendship ke alawa kuch nahi sochuga pyaar to bilkul hii nahi.

Meri baat sunkar payal gussa bhi thi. Or khus bhi
Gussa isliye ki pehle rahul kisi or se pyaar karta tha. Or khus isliye ki maine sonam ko mana kar diya.

Sonam ( udas hokar ) : kohi nahi muze acha laga ki tum ne zut bolkar mera dil nahi dukaya.
Or mera galat istemal nahi kiya.
Muze acha laga ki tum ne muze sach sach bata diya.

Thodi der ham chup chap baite rahe . Pir sonam ne chupi thodi.

Sonam : kam se kam ham friend to rah sakte hai.

Rahul : haa, ham hamesha friend rahege.

Sonam : thanks.

Rahul : abhi thanks ke liye samay hai.

Sonam : kyu

Payal ( thoda gusse me) : kiuki abhi tak coffee nahi aayi hai.

Payal ki bate sunkar ham hasne lage mahol thoda sa halka ho gaya.
Par sonam bahar se hasne ka natak kar rahi thi.
Or under se ...................mera dil bhi sonam ki tarha tuta hua tha. Jo aaj or jada tut gaya.

Sonam : abhi tak coffee nahi aayi.

Rahul : aaa jayegi.

Rahul : wo dekho waiter aa raha hai.

Payal mera plan shamaj gai ki me sonam ka birthday manana chahata hue.

Payal ko yeh acha laga ki mane sonam ko mana . Kar diya.
Isliye pir mazak me payal bolti hai.
Jisse sonam ko koi dukh na pahoche or sanam thoda khus ho jaye.

Payal : par ye waiter ke hath ( hand) me to cake hai.
Hamne to coffee order ki thi.

Sanam shamaj jati hai or pir bhi anjaan banne ka natak karti hai.

Sonam ( mann me) : aaj mera birthday hai or aaj mere pyar ka aant ho gaya.
Ek taraf lag raha hai ki cake mere liye aaye.
Or dusari taraf lag raha hai ki waiter cake fake de.

Sonam : shayad kisi ka birthday hai.

Waiter hamare taraf aa raha tha.

Payal muzhse isharo me puch rahi thi ki kya main ne order kiya hai.

Rahul ne isharo me payal ko haa kaha.

Waiter hamare table pe cake rak kar chala gaya.
Sonam or payal cake ki taraf dekhne lagi.

Sonam ka dil jo mere vajase tut gaya tha.
Wo kam se kam cake dekh kar fir se jud jaye.
Cake ke upar sonam ka naam likha tha.
Cake par 17 candle lage huye the.

Fir sonam ne cake ki taraf dekha fir meri taraf .
Main sonam ki taraf dekh kar smile kar di . Sonam shamaj gayi ki cake main ne order kiya hai.

Rahul : happy birthday sonam
Or sonam ke sath handshake kuya.

Rahul (mann me) : agar muze pata hota ki sonam muze propose karne vali hai to main yaha aata bhi nahi.
Magar pata nahi kyu dil ko bohot sakun milta hai. Sonam ko dekhkar.
Aisa lagta hai ki me barso sa pyaar karta hue sonam se.
Magar jo us ladki ne mere sath kiya uske baad me ab fir pyaar nahi kar pauga.

Sonam : thanks.

Sonam ( mann me) : ek taraf mera dil thoda or dusari Taraf mera birthday mana kar muze khusiya de rahe ho.
Tumare isi nature se muze.................................................................................. Aaj meri maa or papa ke siwa kisi ne muze birthday wish nahi kiya . Meri maa or papa ke baad tum pahele ho jisne muze wish kiya.
Tum ek taraf muze kahate ho ki hum friend rahege or ek taraf tum muze itni khusiya dete ho.

Sonam : tume kese pata chala ki aaj mera birhthday hai.

Rahul : payal ne jab tumara form jama kar rahi thi to usne tumari date of birth dekh liya tha.

Sonam : to is tara pata chala tume ( meri choti choti bato ka dyan rakate ho or kahate ho ki main tumse pyaar nahi kar sakta. )

Payal : haa maine hii rahul ko bataya tha ki tumara birthday hai.
Or kuch plan bana raha tha.
Par yeh cake order ke bareme muze kuch pata nahi tha.

Sonam : yeh cake rahul ne order kiya hai

Payal : haaa.

Sonam : fir se thanks rahul. ( Dekho payal ke bajaye tume mera birthday manaane ki jada fikar thi)

Payal : thanks ko maro goli pahale cake kat lo nahi to thodi der me candle gayab ho jayegi.
Sonam ne candle buza di .
Humne sonam ko birthday wish kiya
Pir sonam ne cake cut kar diya.
Sonam ne payal ko cake khilaya.

Rahul : muze kab khilogi.

Fir
Sonam ne muze bhi cake khilaya or main ne sonam ko.
Jab main sonam ko cake khila raha tha.
Tab sonam ne apni aakhe ( eyes) band kar li.
Or mera hand se cake aise kha rahi thi ki iske bad wo khana khana chor degi.

Uske face ko dekhkar bhi yahi lag raha tha ki wo is pal ko dil se mahsus karna chahati hai.

Cake khane ke baad sonam ke aakho ( eyes) me chamak aa gayi uske face pe ronak thi.
Aisa lag raha tha ki use sab kuch mil gaya.

Payal : yeh tera birthday gift hai.

Sonam : thanks , vaise iske kya jarurat thi.

Payal
Achanak se pata nahi kya bol deti hai.

Sonam : tu chup chap le, yeh rahul ki pasand hai. ( Payal ne sonam ko chidane ke liye aisa kaha).

Sonam : thanks ( rahul tum.....)

Fir main ne sonam ka hand pakad liya.
Sonam meri taraf dekhne lagi ki main kya karne wala hue.

Payal bhi sochne lagi ki main kya karne wala hue.

Sonam ki aakhe to bohot kuch baya kar rahi thi. Ki wo kya soch rahi hai.
Maine jaldi se apne pocket se ek watch nikal Karen sonam ke hand pe laga di.
Fir main ne hand chor diya.

Sonam ko laga ki main hand pakad kar........................................

Payal ko pata tha ki main ne sonam ke liye watch li hai.
Agar main sonam ko watch nahi deta to payal muze pareshan karti or watch dene se sonam ab mere bare me kya sochegi . is baat se main der raha tha.
Kahi yeh fir se.....................

Sonam watch ko dekhne lagi sonam ko watch pasand aayi
Payal bhi watch dekhne lagi.

Sonam ne payal se nazar bachakar watch ko kiss kar liya .
Main sonam ke taraf dekhne laga


Sonam meri taraf dekh kar sharma gai.

Rahul ( mann me) : yeh maine kya kiya watch dene se to sonam..............

Muze kuch sochna hoga
Kahi yeh kuch galat na shamaj le.

Sonam : yeh to bohot sunder watch hai.

Payal : aakhir li kis ke bhai ne hai. ( Payal yeh bat bol kar sonam ko bata rahi thi ki rahul kya hai.
Sonam rahul ke liye nahi bani hai)

Tabi
Payal dekhti hai ki cake khane ke time uske upar kuch cake gir gaya tha.
Jisse uske kapade gande ho gaye the.


To vo rahul ko bolkar.
Apne kapade saaf karne coffee shop ke washroom me chali gayi.

Ab table par sirf sonam or rahul the
Sonam kabi meri taraf dekh rahi thi to kabi cake ko.

Fir
Pata nahi kiu
Maine ( rahul) ne cake ka tukada utakar sonam ki taraf badaya.
Sonam khus ho gai ki use main dubara cake khila raha hue.

Or
Sonam ne khusi ke sath cake kha liya.

Sonam : thanks rahul.

Rahul : sirf thanks , party chahiye ( sonam se picha chudane ke liye mere dimag me ek idea aaya)

Sonam : kal dungi party jab tum kal mere ghar aaoge. Mummy or papa se milne.

Rahul : party sirf muze chahiye. Party me sirf main or tum hoge.

Sonam : payal kiu nahi vo bhi to meri friend hai

Rahul : main party me tume pyaar karke birthday gift dena chahata hu.

Sonam : main kuch shamaji nahi.

Rahul : jaise tumne mere liye hue gift ko pyaar kiya vaise.

Sonam meri baat par sharma jati hai.

Rahul : kya muze ek din ke liye pyaar karne dogi ( muze pata tha ki is baat se sonam ko bura lagega main usse chudai ke liye bol raha tha.
Or aise bolne se sonam ko acha nahi lagega or sonam muze bhul jaegi)

Sonam : main kaise.......
Tumne to kaha ki .........
Main tumari Gf nahi hu........
Fir kaise........

Rahul : kya pyaar karne ke liye gf banaya jana jaruri hai.
Kya ek friend ki tara nahi kar sakte.

Sonam : agar tum mere Bf hote to main mana nahi karti....

Rahul : to kal ke liye main tumara bf ban jata hue. Or tum ek din ke liye.meri gf ban jao.

Sonam : tum pagal ho gaye ho .
Main aisa kese ........
Tum mere pyaar ka mazak uda rahe ho.

Rahul : tum khud socho agar thodi der pahale main tume haa kiya hota to tum meri gf hoti
Pir kal tumare sath pyaar karke bol deta ki ab hum break up karte hai.
To fir.

Sonam : par main.....................

Rahul : main bas ek din ke liye tume gf banakar pyar karna chahata hue......

Agar tum bhi yahi chahati ho to kal watch pahan kar yahi coffee shop me aana same time nahi to watch fek dena.

Rahul ( mann me) : chalo sonam ki baat se pata chal gaya ki ab wo muze bhul jayegi.
Or meri di huyi watch bhi fek degi.
Jisse mein usko yaad aao aisi kahi chiz uske pass na ho.
Or main use bar bar ek din ki gf banne ko keh kar yeh dika raha tha ki
Main sirf sharir ka bhuka hu.
Par ye baat muze pata hai ki me yeh kiu kar raha hue.)

Tabi
Payal bhi aa gai washroom se...........

Or fir
Humne bacha hua cake bhi finish kar liya.

Or
Main payal ke sath ghar ke liye nikal gaya.

Rastee me....

Rahul ( mann me) : Pata nahi kiu muze pecheni mahsus ho rahi thi .
Jese koi mera naam le raha hai.
Muze yaad kar raha hai.
Khon jo sakta hai.

Mahadev uski madad karna. ( Yeh baat mane dil se kahi)

Tabi


Payal : rahul ek baat puchu.

Rahul : haa pucho.

Payal : tumne kha tha ki tum ek ladki se pyaar karte ho.
Yeh kab hua tha mujhe to pata nahi.

Rahul : jab me hostel me rehta tha .
Jab ki baat hai yeh. Or haa me abhi bhi pyaar karta hue.

Payal ( mann me) : mujhe lagta hai rahul mujhse pyaar nahi karta
Or ab mujhe lagta hai ki vo mujhe ab pyaar nahi karega.
Mujhe is bike se khood kar mar ( dead) jana chahiye kiuki me rahul ke bina nahi jina chahati or rahul mujhse nahi kisi or se pyaar karta hai.
Ek baar pahele puri baat puch leti hue.
Fir faisla karna thik rahega.

Payal : kya main jaan sakti hue ki vo khon thi.

Rahul : main tume batata hue par kisi ko batana mat or sonali didi ko to bilkul bhi nahi.

Payal : nahi bataugi.

Rahul : uska naam divya tha.

Payal : ek baar bataya to tha tumne uska naam jab tum hostel me the. Kya yeh vahi hai.

Rahul : haaa.

Payal ( udas hokar ) : tum ne to kaha tha ki usne tume chor diya tha.

Rahul : haa, shayad use yahi sahi laga.....

Payal meri baat sunkar khus ho gayi..

Payal : to fir tum kisi or ke sath pyar kyu nahi karte jaise sonam ya phir ...................

Rahul : ab kisi or ke sath kaise main pyaar kar sakta hue.

Payal : tum jiske sath shadi karoge.

Rahul : pata nahi ya fir me shadi hii na karu.

Payal achanak se bolti hai.

Payal : tum mere bareme kya sochte ho

Rahul : main shamja nahi.

Payal baat ko shamalte hue.

Payal : mera matlab hai kya tum muze friend nahi samaj the.

Rahul : payal tunme or sonali didi ne mere liye jo kiya hai vo duniya ki koi ladki nahi kar sakti.
Tum or sonali didi to mere liye sab kuch ho.
Duniya ki sabse best friend bhi.

Payal : fir bhi tumne muze nahi bataya divya ke bareme.

Rahul : muze khud nahi pata tha ki muze divya se pyaar ho gaya hai.
To tumko kya batata.
Jab pata chala ki wo muze kitna pyaar karti hai.
To tab tak der ho gayi thi.

Payal ( udas hokar ) : kya tum divya se itna pyaar karte ho.

Rahul : haa divya se me bohot pyaar karta hue
Par apni sisters se jyada nahi. Or

Payal ( khushokar ) : or

Rahul : meri bhan meri zindagi hai.
Or tum meri bhan ke sath sath meri sabse achi friend bhi to ho.


Payal : sach

Rahul : haa, sach

Payal ne mujhe piche se bohot kas kar gale laga liya.

Payal ( mann me) : rahul ne mujhe sabse acha friend bana liya hai or jald hii muz se pyaar bhi karne lagega.
Or us kalmuhi divya ko bhul jaega.
Kabi vo divya mujhe mili na to uske to me ache se khabar lugi. Agli baar mere rahul ko dukh pohochane se pehle lakh bar soche gi.

Tabi
Payal : par tumne birthday ke din sonam ka dil kiu dukaya.

Rahul : mane use sach batakar friend banaya hai.

Payal : thik hai par ab sonam se door rehna.

Rahul : jo hukum mere aaka.

Payal : or muze friend mante ho to sab bataya karo.
Usse tumara mann halka ho gaega.

Rahul : thik hai aage se sab bataya karuga

Payal ( mann me) : are mane to prerna didi se to pucha hii nahi ki vo rahul ko kese janti hai.
Kahi prerna didi bhi to nahi
Nahi nahi yeh nahi ho sakta.................................................
...
Aaj hii unse ache se baat kar lugi or mujhe sonali didi ke pass bhi to jana hai. Nahi to vo bohot gussa hogi.
Kiuki us raat wali baat ko na batakar
Vo mujh par bohot vishwas karti hai.
Me aaj hii jakar unhe ache se bta dugi or shamja bhi dugi jo prerna didi ne bataya tha.

Isse ke sath hum ghar pohoch jata hue.
Or bike khadi karkar jab ghar me ghusta hue to.
Main fir
Mala bua ke face par pareshani ke bhav dekhta hue.
Or mala bua jo bolti hai me usse shocked ho jata hue.

Chalo chalte hai sunaina ki taraf..............







Rahul ne sonam se pichha to chhuda liya magar usne apni image ko uski nazaron main gira li h ye payal bhi pagal hi h jo bike se kudne ka soch rahi thi wo to achha hua ki kudi nahin warna bina bat ke hath pair tudwa leti :D
 

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Isse ke sath hum ghar pohoch jata hue.
Or bike khadi karkar jab ghar me ghusta hue to.
Main fir
Mala bua ke face par pareshani ke bhav dekhta hue.
Or mala bua jo bolti hai me usse shocked ho jata hue.

Chalo chalte hai sunaina ki taraf.............

Ab aageeee.

Or us locket ki roshni bohot tezz hone lagti hai. Or usme itni garmi nikal ne lagti hai ki jin gundo ne sunaina ko pakad rakha tha or jo gunde sunaina ke gale me hath ( hand) daal rahe the.
Vo teeno kuch hii samay me jal kar ( puri terha se jal jana) rakh jo jate hai.
Samne sirf haddiya padi dekhai deti hai.

Or us roshni ki bajase saari ladkiya achanak behosh ho jati hai.

Or saare gundo ki gand buri terha fat jati hai. Un ki gand se dua nikalne lagta hai.
Or vo sochne lagte hai achanak yeh kya ho gaya.

Or bohot tezz tezz hawaye (air) chalne lagti hai.
Pure jungle me channata ho jata hai.

Or us jungle ka manjhar bohot hii bhayanak ho jata hai.

Or inko ek bohot hi bhayanak aawaz sunai deti hai.

Or samne sher ( tiger ( yeh bhagwam wala tiger nahi hai bhai iska raaj bhi raj lok me pata chalega )
Bohot tezz garajte hue dikai deta hai.

Or us sher ki garajna se pura jungle kaap jata hai.

Vahi

Or aise hii sham ( evening) ho jati hai or nishant or un sabke log us jungle me ghusne ki kosis karte hai magar vo log
Us jungle me ghuss nahi pate kiuki vo bhayanak awaaz unko bhi sunai deti hai.
Un logo ki bhi phat jati hai.
Fir
Bhi kosis karke nishant or unke log us jungle me ghusne ki kosis karte hai or under ghuste hii dubara jungle ke bahar aa jate hai matlab ander ghuss nahi pate

Vahi

Sunaina ka rang ( colour) ek dam kala ( black) pad jata hai.
Or vo sher ( tiger) sunaina ke pass chala jata hai.
Or sunaina us tiger par baith ( sir) jati hai

Or vo sher or tezz garajne lagta hai.

Vo gunde jo sunaina ka balatkar karna chahate the.
Vo sab puri tarha se pagal ho jate hai.
Or unko kuch shamaj nahi ata yeh kya hua.
Ab un sab ghundo ko apna hii balatkar ka der lagte lagta hai.
Apni mout ka der lagne lagta hai.

Inko aisa lagta hai jaise mahakali un gundo ko marne aai ho. ( Magar yeh koi mahakali nahi hai yeh sab us locket ke bajase hai.)

Or saare gunde bhagne ki kosis karte hai.

Magar jaise hii vo gunde bhagne lagte hai.

To saare ped ( tree) un sab gundo ko pakad lete hai.
Or vo bhag nahi pate
Or vo sher ( tiger) aage badne lagta hai.

Tabi
un sab gundo me se kuch apna roop badalne lagte hai. Or jis ped ne unko pakad rakha tha us ped ( tree) ko jala dete hai.

Or apne asli rakshas roop me aa jate hai.

Yeh bohot hii bhayanak rakshas the.

Vase hii sunaina us sher se niche utar jati hai or vo sher .
Tezz dahar ke sath un gundo ko marne lagta hai.
Jo gunde ko ped ( tree) ne pakad rakha tha.
Or vo sher ( tiger) sab gundo ko kacha chaba jata hai.

Bas us sab gundo ki chekne ki awaaze sunai de rehi hoti hai.

Jo rakshas bhag rahe the vo bhagte hue sunaina par vaar karne lagte hai.
Apni shaktiyo se.

Magar unka ek bhi vaar sunaina par koi asar nahi kar pa raha tha.
Yeh dekhte hi saare rakshas shocked ho jate hai.
Ki un rakshas ki saari shaktiya is ladki ka kuch bhi nahi bhigar pa rahi hai.

Or sunaina ke taraf se ek awaz sunai de rahi hoti hai.

Ayi giri nandini, nandhitha medhini,
Viswa vinodhini nandanuthe,
Girivara vindhya sirodhi nivasini,
Vishnu Vilasini Jishnu nuthe,
Bhagawathi hey sithi kanda kudumbini,
Bhoori kudumbini bhoori kruthe,
Jaya Jaya He rakshas mardini , Ramya Kapardini Shaila Suthe...?........


Or jo rakshas leader tha vo apni or saare rakshas milkar apni Puri shaktiyo se ek kawaj ka nirman kar lete hai.

Or raskshas leader apne guru ko bulane lagta hai.

Or jaise hii
Un rakshas ka guru samne us locket ko dekhta hai.
Bohot ghabra jata hai
Or pura sarir kapne lagta hai usko kuch yaad aa jata hai.
Yaad :
bhadr kaal lochanam
pisach, rakshas sarv vinashnam.
Jata kata sharv bhayanakam .
Aasur sarv vinashanam.
Kapal kaal shovanam.
Malika prachand kaalakam
Mahakaal .mahakaal

Or rakshas guru vaha se gayab hone lagta hai.
Tabi
Rakshas leader apne guru ka leg pakad leta hai.

Rakshas leader ( apne guru se ) : guru ji hame bacha lo yeh khon a gaya jis par hamari koi bhi shaktiyo kaam nahi kar rahi.

Rakshas guru ki gand phati hue thi unke muh se ek bhi word nahi nikal raha tha.
Fir bhi rakshas guru bolta hai.

Rakshas guru ( rakshas leader se ) : bhan chod per ( leg) chor mera
Chor mera per ( leg) mere abhi din pure nahi hue hai.

Rakshas leader : guru jii khon hai yeh.

Guru ji : vo...... Voooo locket dekhta tune uske gale me
Pata bhi hai kya hai us locket me.
Or kisne diya tha.
Yeh locket.

Rakshas leader : kya hai gurujii us locket me or kisne diya tha vo locket.

Vahi
Sunaina apne hath ( hand) me trishul ka avahan karti hai or us kawaj par phek deti hai kuch hii jhatke me wo kawaj tut jata hai.
Yeh dekh us rakshas guru ki gand se tatti nikalne lagti hai.

Or rakshas guru us rakshas leader ko dusre leg se ek lath marta hai or rakshas leader samne ja girta hai.

Or vaha se gayab hone lagta hai.
Or jate jate rakshas leader se bolta hai

Rakshas guru : madar chod to suspense me hii mar.

Rakshas leader ko shamaj me hii nahi ata ki jis rakshas guru ne pure shetan lok ko sabse shakti shali banaya.

Jinki shaktiya apar thi jiske aamne koi tik nahi pata vo rakshas guru is locket se ghabra gaya.

Rakshas leader ( mann me) : bhanchod is locket me aisa kya hai.
rakshas guru ki bhi tatti nikal gayi is locket ko dekte hii.
Mere sath kiya hoga.
Is bhanchod robert ne kha fasa diya.
Agar jaan bachi na to is madar chod robert ki gand phar duga.

Tabi
Sunaina un sab rakshas ke samne aa jati hai.
Or uske hath ( hand ) me trishul hota hai.

Or fir ek aawaaz aane lagti hai.

Maharani to bangla tu rati bhavani prano ki raksha karne wali to purn maharani.
Namo namo namo nama.
Shakal jagat tere gon gave yog muni sab dhiyan lagave.
Kaal roop me aao mata ab dukh mujhse saha nahi jata.
Dusto ka shangaar karo maa
Rakshas shakti ka vinash karo maa.
Jai jai jai ambe mahakali jai durge maa shera vali.

Or piche se sher aakar sare rakshas ko mout ke ghat utar deta hai.

Or sunaina vo trishul us rakshas leader ke seene par mar deti hai
Or issi ke sath saare rakshas mar jate hai.

Magar sunaina ka gussa tha ki kam hone ka naam hii nahi le raha tha.
Vo dhiree dhiree saare jungle ko aag lagane lag jati hai.

Tabi
Vo sher ( tiger) ek roop dharan karta hai or sunaina se bolta hai.

Tiger : mata sab rakshas mar gae hai kirpiya karke apne gusse ko sant karo.

Magar sunaina ko to kuch sunai hii nahi de raha tha.
Dubara
Tiger : mata yeh bichara jungle to masoom hai. Isko mat ujaro.

Vahi
Bhagwaan lok me

Mata parvati : mahadev sunaina ko rokiye nahi to yeh puri duniya ka anat ho jaega kiuki

Jaha katle aam macha hai vaha mahakaal khada hai jab vo sampaan hoga vahi bachega
Jiska pyaar anat hoga
Dusro ke prati prem bhao anat hoga.
Jiske ander karuna anant hogi.
Pyaar ki had paar anat hogi.
Jiska nischal prem anant hoga.
Jis ko dusro ke dard ke shamne apna dard kam lagega us dard ke samne uska pyaar anant hoga.
Kiuki ant hii to aaramb hai.

Jisse sunaina . Apne dard ko bhul kar usko un ladkiyo ka dard anant laga.
Jinko un rakshas ne pakad rakha tha.


Mahadev : me kya kar sakta hue priye me apni putri ko kese rokhu .
Mujhe kuch shamaj me nahi aa raha.

Mata parvati : sunaina ko sirf rohan hii rok sakta hai .
Magar uski atma to................................................

Mahadev : magar vo rohan to.................

Mata parvati : to ab kya kare prabhu.

Tabi
Mahadev bolte hai.

Mahadev : ek rasta hai.

Or mahadev us locket ko jo sunaina ke gale me tha usko niche gira dete hai.

Vahi
Dharti lok me

Jaise hii sunaina ki nazar us locket par padti hai.
Vo bohot tez rone ( carry) lagti hai.
Uske rona ( carry) bhi anat tha.
Apne rohan ke khone ka dard bhi anant tha.
Apne rohan ko aag me jalte dekhkar uska dard bhi anant tha.
Or sunaina locket ko apne gale se laga leti hai.
Ab uska pyaar bhi anant tha.
Apne rohan ko aag me jalte dekhkar uske ander ki karuna bhi anant thi.

Or usko kuch yaad ane lagta hai

Jab
Rohan aag me jal raha tha.
To vo kuch bol raha tha.
Rohan : hame is sansaar ( duniya) ki raksha karni hai.
Apne pyaar ki raksha karni hai.
Baba ( mahadev) ke vardaan ki raksha karni hai.
Agar mere jane ke baad agar tum roi ( carry) ya...................

Mein vapas jarur auga apne pyaar liye vapas aauga.

Baba ( mahadev) ke vardan ke liye vapas aauga.
Kya tume me kabi chor kar jaa sakta hue.

Sunaina : nahi kabi nahi.

Rohan : mera to sirf sarir hii jal raha hai.
Magar hamara pyar to dil se hai.
Ja har same tumare seene me dharkata rahega.
Hamara pyaar to atma se hai.
Jo duniya ka koi bhi nahi cheen sakta.

Vada karo sunaina jab tak hum dubara nahi mil jate .
Tum apna dhyan rakhogi
Baba ( mahadev) ke vardan ko kabi tutne nahi dogi.
Kabi apni aapko taklif nahi dogi .
Or hamesha sabse pyaar karogi.
Or...................................
Vada karo sunaina
Vada karo.

Sunaina : me vada karti hue
Me vada karti hue.

Tabi vo yaad khatam ho jati hai.

Or sunaina bohot tezz bolti hai.

Sunaina : rohaaaaan

Or ussi ke sath sunaina behosh ho jati hai.

Or vo tiger vaha se chala jata hai.

Vahi
Mahakaal ka bhi dil tadap jata hai.
Sunaina ka yeh pyaar dekhkar.
Magar vo is jungle me nahi ata.

Vahi
Or pure jungle me charo taraf hariyaari hone lagti hai.
Jo dirashye abhi bohot khatarnak tha.

Uski sundarta bohot bad jati hai .
Or
Vo andera jungle jugno ki roshni se chamakne lagta hai.

Vahi
Nishant apne logo ke sath jungle me ghuss jata hai.

Or saari ladkiyo or vaha pade saare gundo ke died sarir ko dekhkar hairaan ho jata hai.

Or jungle ke andere me un lago ko rakshas ke sarir nahi dikhai dete
( Agar dikai dete to unki rooh bhi kaap jati kiuki vo itne bhayanak the ki koi ek baar dekh le to vahi beshosh ho jae.)


Ek aadmi nishant se
Aadmi : yaha kya hua hoga . Jis jungle me hum ghuss nahi paye.
Jo jungle itna khatarnak lag raha tha .
An iski sundarta utni hii man mohak lag rahi hai.
Jab ki abhi raat hai
Fir bhi.
Fir nishant ke sab log ( agent) vaha par beshosh padi ladkiyo par paani dal kar uttate hai.

Or jaise hii nishant roma ke upar paani dalta hai.
Roma uthate hii sunaina chilane lagti hai............
























Intrasting update bro lekin ek bat kahna chahta hun har update main aap jo location change kar dete h maza kharab ho jata h :banghead::banghead:
 
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Nishant ( kamlesh se ) : tum robert ke aadmi ho iska matlab jo sunaina ne bola tha ki koi us hacker ka jasus hai vo tum the

Ab aageee...

Kamlesh ( mushkurate hue ) : haa mein hii vo shaks tha jisne pure server ki information dusare desh mein pohichai thi.
Or pura server hack bhi karvaya tha

Kamlesh ( sunaina ki taraf dekhte hue ) : magar is ladki ( sunaina ) ne mera sara plan fail kar diya

Kamesh ( mushkurate hue ) : ab mein sunaina ko robert ko dekar mein unka dil jeet luga jisse mein robert sir ka khas aadmi ban saku

Sunaina ( kamlesh se ) : kamine tune bohot badi galti ki hai mera hand pakadkar

Kamlesh ( rakshaso se ) : pakad lo in sab ko or gasitkar lekar chalo robert sir ke pass

Or sab rakshas nishant or unke sathi ko pakad leta hai

Or ghasitkar robert ke pass le jate hai.

Or rakshas chakra dheere dheere sab logo ko khatam karta hua aage badne lagta hai

Kamlesh ( robert se ) : sir yeh hii hai sunaina jisne us hacking server ko thoda tha.

Robert ( kamlesh se ) : wah kamlesh tum ne to mera kaam hii asan kar diya
Tum sunaina ko yaha le aaye.
Or yeh baki logh khon hai

Kamlesh ( robert se ): sir yeh nishant hai hamare ghufiya agency ka chief or yeh baki sab is nishant ke agent.

Nishant ( chillate hue ) : saale kutte dhokebaaz jis desh ne tuze sahara diya ussi desh ke sine ( chest ) par vaar kiya .

Kamlesh ( haste hue ) : tune abhi mera dhoka dekha kaha hai abhi to bohot kuch hona hai .
Tu muz par chilla raha hai.
Chilla or chilla
Aaj tera murder karke mein is desh par kabza karuga
Koi hume nahi rokh sakta

Sunaina ( chillate hue ) : , tu is desh par kabza karne ka sapna chor de.
Tu kabi is desh par kabza nahi kar payega.

Robert ( sunaina se ) : tune hamare boss ka server thoda hai.
To tu koi mamuli ladki nahi ho sakti jaldi bta khon hai tu.

Sunaina ( robert se ) : mein teri mout hu kamine agar tu apni zindagi bachana hai to bhag ja yaha se nahi to tuze absos hoga ki tune aisa karke koi galti to nahi kardi.

Tabi vaha peter aa jata hai.

Peter ( robert se ) : sir yeh rahi vo auraat ( seema ) jisko aap pakadna chahate the.

Peter ( pareshan hokar ) : Magar sir mujhe aapko kuch baat batani hai.

Robert : peter vo sab baad me batana idhar loa us aauraat ko

Seema ( chillate hue ) : chorde mujhe kamine chor de
Mein tuze kuch nahi btaugi chahe tu meri jaan bhi lee le.

Robert seema ko ek thapad marte hai jisse seema door jakar sunaina ke pass girte hai .

Robert ( seema se ) : agar tu mujhe us ladke ke bareme nahi bataegi to tu aaj jarur meregi.

Robert seema se :
Apne choro taraf nazre ghumakar dekh yaha tuze yaha koi nahi aa sakta bachane.

Or jald hii yeh pura desh khatam ho jaega or hamare kabze mein hoga


Or seema charo taraf nazre ghumakar dekti hai

To seema ka dil bhi dehal jata hai kiuki charo taraf hahakar macha hota hai
Or mayasur apni shaktiyo se sab jagah tabahii macha deta hai
Or rakshas chakra har masum logo ko khatam karne wala hota hai.

Or yeh sab itni tezzi se ho raha hota hai ki kisi ko kuch shamaj nahi aa raha hota hai .

Tabi seema ki nazar sunaina par padti hai or sunaina ko dekhkar puri tarha shocked ho jati hai.

Seema ( sunaina se ) : sonam beti tu yaha tum to rahul ke sath gai thi na life ke full maze thread par.

Sunaina bhi sonam naam sunkar shocked ho jati hai.

Sunaina ( seema se ) : khon sonam aunty mein to sunaina hu
Sunaina

Seema bhi puri tarha shocked hote hue bolti hai .

Seema : tum sunaina ho

Sunaina : haa aunty mein sunaina hu

Seema : iska matlab tum zinda ho par tum to pull se niche gir gai thi na.

Sunaina ( mann mein ) : aaj mere sath yeh kya ho raha hai .
Bilkul shamaj nahi aa raha aaj to mujhe jatke par jhatke mil rahe hai.

Sunaina : mein pull se niche gir gai thi isse apka kya matlab hai.

Jaise hii seema kuch bolne wali hoti hai

Tabi

Robert ( dono se ) : lagta hai tum dono mujhe kuch nahi bataoge.

Tabi
Robert peter se bolta hai khatam kar do in dono ko hum us ladke ko baad me dhoodh lege.

Robert ( mann me ) : yeh mahaveer abhi tak aya kiu nahi.

Or jaise hii peter sunaina ko apni talvaar se marne wala hota hai.
Tabi
Sunaina achanak se chillate hue bolti hai.

Sunaina ( chillate hue ) : rohaan rohaan

Or vaise hii peter ko koi takkar marta hai
Or peter urta hua bohot door jakar girta hai ....



Bhai aaj bohot thak gaya hu isliye update nahi de raha tha par apne itne comment kiye to ek bohot chota se update de diya .

Next update mein yeh sara scene bhi khatam ho jaega
Or kal ek maha mega update de duga


Or pyaar ki had paar chapter 1 bhi complete ho jaega .
 

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Nice update
 
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