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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Update 45

Roma ( mann me ) : yeh to mere par line mar raha hai.

Fir roma ne tiger ko

Ab aageee.........
Roma azzeb bhaw se tiger ko dekhti hue jhooti hasi ke sath tiger se hand milati hae

Roma : nice to meet u

Sunaina : roma tune bataya nahi yeh locket tere pass kese aya meine to usko fek diya tha.
Or tu is mahel mein kese pohochi.

Roma ( itrate hue ) : jab tune is nakrebaaz locket ko fek diya tha.
To meine is locket ko uta liya tha.
Mujhe pata tha ki tu abhi gusse mein hai.
Baad me mera locket kaha gaya bolti firegi
Isliye meine is locket ko uta liya tha.

Sunaina : vo to mujhe pata hai mujhe yeh bata ki tu yaha kese pohochi.

Roma : is locket ke bajase
Jab tune mujhe apne mom dad ka pata lagane ke liye kaha tha.
To meine socha tu bohot tarif karti hai is locket ki to meine socha ek baar puch lu is locket se.
Shayad meri baad sun le or vo khatarnak wala jhatka na de.
Or mere jaise hi is locket se pucha janab ne mujhe vaha se gayab karke yaha is mahel mein pohocha diya.

Sunaina : acha
Magar mere mom or dad us dhamake se kese bache.

Roma : vo sab mujhe nahi pata.
Yeh tume locket hii bataye ga.
Or abhi tumare mom dad so rahe hoge shayad.
Meine jab tumare mom dad ko dekha tha to tumare mom and dad thode pareshan the tume lekar ki sunaina abhi tak kiu nahi aae.
To meine bol diya ki sunaina vahi party se apni ek friend ke pass rukh gai hai.
Subha tak vapas aa jaegi.

Sunaina : magar tume kese pata ki mein subha rak vapas aa jaugi.

Roma : kabi kabi yeh locket bhi mujhe kuch kuch bata deta hai.
Jab tum uske sath asi harkat karti ho.
Yeh locket janab to future bhi dekh lete hai.

Roma : pata bhi hai jitne ghante tum isse door rahi bichara rota raha.
Or us locket se pani nikalta raha.
Bohot shamjaya meine isko magar fir bhi rota raha.

Sunaina locket ko tezz tezz chumte hue.

Sunaina ( locket se ) : itna pyaar karte ho mujhse.
Ab kabi mein galti se bhi aisa nahi karugi.
Ek baar maaf kardo.

Or fir locket thoda chamkta hai fir chamakna band ho jata hai.

Roma : vaise tumne bataya nahi ki yeh tiger tumare sath kese.
Or yeh khon hai tumara.

Sunaina : yeh mera door ka bhai hai.
Bachpan mein iske sath bohot masti karti thi.
Fir mujhe kese karan jana pada
Ab dubara yeh vapas aa gaya.

Tabi tiger kuch bolne wala hota hai to sunaina tiger ko chup rehne ka ishara karti hai.

Roma : acha bhai hai tumara .
Acha sunaina mein chalti hu.
Mummy pareshan ho rahi hogi.
Kiuki meine bola tha ki mein raat me sunaina ke sath uske ghar rukugi.
Magar ab to dohper hone wali hai.
Meri mummy tension kar rahi hogi.
Ab college bhi start hone wala hai to uski bhi thodi tyaari karni hai.

Roma bye karte hue.

Roma : acha sunaina chal byee.
Or tiger jii apko bhi.

Tiger ( mann me ) : , haye kitna piyara jii bola hai
Mein to khayal hii ho gaya.

Or roma vaha se chali jati hai.

Sunaina tiger ko dubara hilate hue.

Sunaina : ,ab vo chali gayi hai janab ab dekhna band karo.

Tiger harbarate hue.

Tiger ( niche garden karte hue ) : nahi mata mein us ladki ko nahi dekh raha tha.

Sunaina ko us harkat par or aise piyare jhoot par hasi aa jati hai.

Sunaina ( haste hue ) : acha thik hai.
Vaise tum mujhe mata kiu bolte ho.

Tiger : iske piche bohot badi kahani hai.

Sunaina : vo kahani bad mein batana
Or yeh dharti lok hai.
Yaha mujhe mere naam se bulaya karo.

Tiger : mata yeh nahi ho sakta .

Sunaina : kiu nahi ho sakta.

Is baat par tiger apni garden niche kar leta hai.

Sunaina : acha thik hai to tum mujhe sister bulaya karo.

Tiger : vo kya hota hai mata.

Sunaina ( gusse me ) : fir mata.

Tiger : maaf karna sister
Magar yeh hota kya hai.

Sunaina ( ghoorte hue ) : abhi to tum bohot english jhar rahe the.
Us ladki ke samne or tume sister ka matlab nahi pata.

Tiger apna sir ghujate hue.

Tiger : sister vo to bas apne aap hii muh se nikal gaya tha.

Sunaina ( haste hue ) : acha thik hai.
Mujhe pata hai tumari feeling.
Vaise sister ko hindi mein bhan bolte hai.
Ab yeh to bol sakte ho na.

Tiger : magar

Sunaina ( gusse me ) : ab isme problem kya hai.

Tiger : koi problem nahi hai.
Thik hai mein apko sister bulauga.

Sunaina tiger ki peeth thap thapate hue.

Sunaina : good boy.

Sunaina : acha tiger mere mom dad bache kese
Us dhamake se

Tiger : yeh baat apko yeh locket bata dega sister
Aap isse se puch lo

Sunaina : acha tume pata hai is locket mein kya hai.

Tiger ( anjan bante hue ) : nahi sister mujhe nahi pata.

Sunaina ( tiger ko ghoorte hue ) : jhooth mat bolo tiger.
Tume pata hai.

Tiger ( udas man se ) : magar sister me apko nahi bata sakta.
Vo sirf malikk ( rohan ) hii bta sakte hai.

Sunaina : kiu

Tiger : kiuki mein vo baat tak batane mein shaksham nahi hu.

Sunaina : kiu shaksham nahi ho.

Tiger : vo to mujhe bhi nahi pata.

Sunaina : acha thik hai.
Lagta hai suspence mein hii jina hoga abhi.

Fir sunaina apni ek eye brow upar karke locket se puchti hai.

Flashback
Sunaina ke mom dad yaha kese aae.



Next update mein

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Super duper update bhai ekdum jhakaas mind blowing & fantastic
Bahut sahi jaa rahe ho bhai aise hi badiya updates dete raho Aage Ka Intezar rahega

Keep going
We will wait for next update

:yourock:


Thanks for supporting siraj bhai


Hamesha ki terha good comment
 

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Sorry bhaii
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Sorry bhaii
Late comment k liye
Bich m fass gya tha vapas aaya hu koshish kar rha hu aache comment de sku
Aap aache writer h fir bhii hamare comment to itni value dete h apka sukargujar hu

Jitu bhaii mere se bhii aache comments dete h halanki m koshish karta hu

Ek bar fir se apse mafi mangta hu koshish karunga ki comment de pauu
Ek south k safer par jana h vha network problem rahta h iss bar agar Shii rha to comment jarur karunga nhii to 22 April ko vapas aaunga uske badd apko koi shikayat nhii milegi


Thanks for supporting bhai
 

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superb update


Thanks for supporting next update posted
 

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Majedar Update bhaii

Sabke mannn to change karke ye dikhna ki mahakal n bachya h Shii tha

Sahil ko bacha liya rohan n ye sunkar sunaina or Nishant dono shok rah gye

Locket Roma k hath se sunaina k gale m chala gya chalo sunaina safe or rohan k karib rahegi

Tiger bhai sahab ko roma passand aa gyii h
Or pyaar bhari harket kar rha h

Tiger or roma ki jodi mast rahegi
Dekhte h aage kya hota h


Bhai age bohot kuch or naya dekhne ko milega iski apne kalpana bhi nahi kari hogi.

Thanks for beautiful comment dosto.

Keep support bhai
 

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Mastt update tha bhaii.....:respekt:
Rohan nd sunaina k pyar se desh2 to jannat ho gyi...:bsanta:.
Sahil ki jaan bacha k accha kia rohan ne...after all ek nirdosh insaan ko kse mrne deta..:countsheep:.bt...hamare viro ki sahadat was quite emotional...:cry2::cry2:.
Locket ka behaviour was funny for roma.:dancing::dancing:..
Apne tiger bhaii to roma p flat ho gye...:firstmove::firstmove:
Convo bw them was Superrrb....:five::five:
Waiting for next..:eekdance:.. Nd...dkhte h tiger ke dil m ghanti ki jga DJ box kbb bjta h..:dj:.


Bhai thanks for beautiful comment

Apne to kamal hii kar diya yaar itna acha comment karke.
Isliye meine bhi ek or update likh diya.:wink:

Yaar apke comment din ba din bohot hii beautiful hote ja rahe hai.

Mera dil khuss ho gaya bhai apka comment dekhkar.

Aise hii beautiful comment karte raho dosto
Aise comment ke liye writer bohot taraste hai.

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Boht achi update thi


Thanks for supporting bhai
 
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