Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Asif khan]

Oy yara update

 

[X MAN]

Waiting

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
tiger to poori tarah se roma par flat ho gaya hai,
roma ko yaha iss lockate ne hi pahuchaya tha,
bhai aapne jis tarah se lockate ke sajivata ka varnan iss kahani me kiya hai uss se ye lockate bhi iss kahani ka abhinn ang ban gaya hai,
behad hi amazing update bhai

 

[Jitu kumar]

Update 46
Fir sunaina apni ek eye brow upar karke locket se puchti hai.

Flashback
Sunaina ke mom dad yaha kese aae.

Ab aageee.......

Jaise hii vo rakshas rinky ka blouse fadne ke liye apna hand age badate hai.

Tabi

Samne vaha ek shaks khada ho jata hai.

Or us shaks ko dekhte hii vo rakshas apna hand piche kar lete hai.

Us shaks ka bhi poora sarir dhaka hua hota hai.

Mahaveer ( us shaks se ) : khon hai be tu.

Or vo shaks apni garden un kapdo se bahar nikalta hai.

Or mahaveer hairaan ho jata hai.

Mahaveer : kaal hu yaha par.

Kaal : haa mein

Mahaveer : matlab agar tu yaha hai to rohan bhi yaha hoga.

Kaal : haa rohan bhi yahi hai.
Jisko tera abhi peter dhoondne gaya hai.

Mahaveer pura shocked hokar bolta hai.

Mahaveer : matlab rohan hiii mahakaal hai.
Vo mahakaal jisse pura sehtan lok thar thar kapta hai.
Or jisne pure sehtan lok ko ek jhatke mein hii khatam kar diya tha.
Or jisse pura patal lok dehsaat mein tha.

Kaal : haa yeh vahi mahakaal .
Jiska ant hii aramb hai.

Or kaal rinky ko uski saari deta hai.
Magar rinky to koi putla bani hue thi.
Rohan ka naam sunte hii.

Rinky ( kaal se ) : kya yeh vahi rohan hai.
Jisse meri beti sunaina pyaar karti hai.

Kaal : haa yeh vahi rohan hai.
Tabi

Suresh : or yeh rohan hii mahakaal hai iska kya matlab hai.

Kaal : iska matlab yeh hai ki jisse tumari beti pyaar karti hai .
Vahi
Kaalo ka bhi kaal hai vo

Jisko pura raaj lok mahakaal ke naam se janta hai.
Or baki ke dusman bhi mahakaal ke naam se kapne lagte hai.
Or apna sir jhuka lete hai.
Jo ke raaz hai jiska ant hi hua hai ek naya itihas ka arabh karne ke liye.

Jabki tumari beti sunaina usko rohan ke naam se janti hai.

Is baar dono rinky or suresh shoked hoker

Suresh : matlab rohan hii mahakaal hai.
Jisko sunaina bachpan se pyaar karti hai.
Or jisko sunaina dilo jaan se chahati hai.

Kaal : bachpan se nahi punaar janam se .


Rinky or suresh to sadme
Mein the hii

Or un rakshasho ko jab pata chalta hai ki yeh vahi mahakaal hai jisne rakshas lok ko khatam kar diya tha.
To unki to vo khof nak nazara yaad kar kar hiii unki atma bahar ane lagti hai.
Or vo mout ka tandav jisse sab ki rooh tak kaap gae thi vo baat yaad aa jati hai.

Rinky (kaal se ) : ek baar sunaina ne jab TV mein mahakaal ki news sunni thi to mujh se bola tha ki
Maa mein is mahakaal ko janti hue.
Pata nahi kiu magar mahakaal ko dekhkar yeh mehsus hota hai.

Rinky ( rote hue ) : magar us pagli ko kya pata tha ki vo jis mahakaal ko dekh rahi hai vo vahi rohan hai jiske pyaar ke liye vo bohot tersi hai.
Or yeh punar janam ka kya matlab hai.

Kaal : vo sab aapko mein baat mein bata duga.

Kaal ( mahaveer se ) : tune yeh sab karke bohot badi galti kardi re mahaveer ( gusse me )

Mahaveer kaal ke leg par girte hue

Mahaveer ( kaal se ) : mujhe maaf kardo kaal bas ek baar ( yeh baat mahaveer ne girgirate hue kahi ).

Kaal ( mahaveer se ) : tune bohot badi galti kar di mahaveer.

Mahaveer kaal ke leg chumte hue.

Mahaveer : ab mujhe pata chal gaya ki rakshas guru apna boriya bister lekar kaha gayab ho gae.
Mein bhi yaha se gayab ho jao ga.
Bas ek baar mujhe maaf kar do.

Kaal : tum sabko maafi chahiye
To vo maafi to sirf rohan de sakta hai .
Bulau usko.

Rohan ka naam sunte hii sab rakshas kisi bikhari ki tarha kaal se bheekh magne lagte hai.

Sab : hum par daya kar baba
Hum par daya kar baba.
Rohan ke ane se pehle hum. khud marna pasand karege baba.
Hum par daya kar baba.
Hum ko maaf kar do baba.

Or kaal kisi ki ek bhi baat nahi sunta or ek jhatke mein saare rakshas or mahaveer ko khatam kar deta hai .

(KAAL MAFI NAHI MOUT DETA HAI.)

Mahaveer ( marte hue ) : apne itna upkar kar diya ki rohan ke hatho marne se bacha liya .
Agar hum bach bhi jate to bhi mahakaal ( rohan ) hume kahi se bhi dhoondkar zinda jamin me jhad deta .
Or hamare sir ( head ) ke sath bat ball khelta.
Shayad hamare karam hii aise the jo hume tumare hath se mout mili kaal

Mahaveer rinky or suresh se maafi mangte hue.

Mahaveer : apko humne bohot dhukh diye eske liye maaf kar dena .
Hum mazboor the.
Robert ka hatho.
Or aapki beti sunaina bohot kismat vali hai jo usko rohan mila


Or saare rakshas rinky or suresh se apni is harkat ki maafi mang kar mar jate hai.

Vahi door rohan apni aakh band kare yeh sab dekh raha tha.

Rohan : Sala pata nahi yeh rakshas itna sareef kese ban gaye.
Or sath sath meri tarif bhi kar di.

Vahi sunaina ke ghar me

Kaal ( suresh se ) : jaldi karo hume yaha se jaldi nikalna hoga.

Or kaal suresh ke pass vo bomb laga dekhta hai to usme sirf 1 minute bacha hota hai.
To kaal tezi se us bomb ko nikal deta hai
Is jaldi ke chakkar mein suresh ki watch bhi niche gir jati hai.

Or kaal suresh or rinky ka hath pakad kar

Rahul ke shahar 2 wale farm house mein teleport ho jata hai.

Or sunaina ka ghar bomb ke dhamake se udd jata hai.

Rinky (kaal se ) : yeh kiska bangla hai.

Kaal : , abhi mujhe jana hoga
Aap yaha reh sakti hai
Or yaha aapko koi bhi nukshan nahi pohocha sakta hai.

Rinky : par yeh kiska ghar hai.

Kaal ( mushkurate hue ) : aapke damad rohan ka.

Sorry bhai aage ka bhi update likha tha magar sala achanak net chalna band ho gaya or aage likh hii nahi paya sara update kharab ho gaya

Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
kaal ne hi sunaina ke mata pita ko mahaveer aur anya rakshasho se bachaya hai,
kaal ko dekhte hi aur mahakaal ke baare me sunte hi mahaveer aur uske sathi rakshasho ki dar se haalat kharab ho gayi,
aur kaal unhe shahar 2 ke rohan ke bangale par le aaya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update,
and sorry bhai ki itne dino se samay ke abhav me aur kuchh problems ki vajah se review nhi de paya

 

[Raguhalkal]

Wonderful story hai bhai

Pehle muje apka opening dekke aisa laga alex bhai ki story ko copy kar rahe ho kyunki waha per bi opening aise hi thi isliye me itne din tak isko nahi pada ta per pichle hafte aise hi nazar gumarahata koi update nahi a raha ta kisi story me to apke thread pe dekha to kahani kuch or to fir me pehle se padna start kiya abi abhi katam kiya sare updats padke bahut acha

Muje lagta hai ye itni dhamakedhar story hai to aap iski 1st chapter ko thoda jaldi jaldi katam ki ho muje or bi ummid thi ki sunaina kuch or hacking karegi or rohan ke paas to talewaar nahi ta uski raksha to prerana kar rahi ti na fir achanak kaha se agaya rohan ki hatho me talwaar

Kya isse pehle rohan talwaar hasil kar chuka tha ?

 

[Sajid111]

Bhai uodate 10 tak padha hu. Aisa lag raha h ki ye kisi story ka copy samjh me nahi aa raha h ki aage .padhu ya na padhu...


Any suggestions about further update

 

[Sajid111]

Wonderful story hai bhai

Pehle muje apka opening dekke aisa laga alex bhai ki story ko copy kar rahe ho kyunki waha per bi opening aise hi thi isliye me itne din tak isko nahi pada ta per pichle hafte aise hi nazar gumarahata koi update nahi a raha ta kisi story me to apke thread pe dekha to kahani kuch or to fir me pehle se padna start kiya abi abhi katam kiya sare updats padke bahut acha

Muje lagta hai ye itni dhamakedhar story hai to aap iski 1st chapter ko thoda jaldi jaldi katam ki ho muje or bi ummid thi ki sunaina kuch or hacking karegi or rohan ke paas to talewaar nahi ta uski raksha to prerana kar rahi ti na fir achanak kaha se agaya rohan ki hatho me talwaar

Kya isse pehle rohan talwaar hasil kar chuka tha ?

Mujhe bhi same starting lagi par aapka comment dekh ke mai bhi aage ka padhne ja raha hu

 

[Raguhalkal]

Bhai uodate 10 tak padha hu. Aisa lag raha h ki ye kisi story ka copy samjh me nahi aa raha h ki aage .padhu ya na padhu...


Any suggestions about further update

Bhai age pado maine bi aise hi aocha tha per aisa hai nahi ye alag hai wo alag hai sirf 46 updates hi hue index me bi hai ek padlo baki tumari marzi per ek baat kehta hu ye story bi bahut achi hai

 

[Raguhalkal]

Mujhe bhi same starting lagi par aapka comment dekh ke mai bhi aage ka padhne ja raha hu

Pado bhai bahut achi story hai muje 1st chapetr thoda jaldi katam kiya hai aap bi deklo or comment karo jisse rohan bhai bi samajke 2 chapter thoda lamba le chale

 

[Sajid111]

Pado bhai bahut achi story hai muje 1st chapetr thoda jaldi katam kiya hai aap bi deklo or comment karo jisse rohan bhai bi samajke 2 chapter thoda lamba le chale

Ha bhai aage ka padh raha hu interesting hote ja raha hai story....