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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
tiger to poori tarah se roma par flat ho gaya hai,
roma ko yaha iss lockate ne hi pahuchaya tha,
bhai aapne jis tarah se lockate ke sajivata ka varnan iss kahani me kiya hai uss se ye lockate bhi iss kahani ka abhinn ang ban gaya hai,
behad hi amazing update bhai
Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
kaal ne hi sunaina ke mata pita ko mahaveer aur anya rakshasho se bachaya hai,
kaal ko dekhte hi aur mahakaal ke baare me sunte hi mahaveer aur uske sathi rakshasho ki dar se haalat kharab ho gayi,
aur kaal unhe shahar 2 ke rohan ke bangale par le aaya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update,
and sorry bhai ki itne dino se samay ke abhav me aur kuchh problems ki vajah se review nhi de paya
Wonderful story hai bhai
Pehle muje apka opening dekke aisa laga alex bhai ki story ko copy kar rahe ho kyunki waha per bi opening aise hi thi isliye me itne din tak isko nahi pada ta per pichle hafte aise hi nazar gumarahata koi update nahi a raha ta kisi story me to apke thread pe dekha to kahani kuch or to fir me pehle se padna start kiya abi abhi katam kiya sare updats padke bahut acha
Muje lagta hai ye itni dhamakedhar story hai to aap iski 1st chapter ko thoda jaldi jaldi katam ki ho muje or bi ummid thi ki sunaina kuch or hacking karegi or rohan ke paas to talewaar nahi ta uski raksha to prerana kar rahi ti na fir achanak kaha se agaya rohan ki hatho me talwaar
Kya isse pehle rohan talwaar hasil kar chuka tha ?
Bhai uodate 10 tak padha hu. Aisa lag raha h ki ye kisi story ka copy samjh me nahi aa raha h ki aage .padhu ya na padhu...
Any suggestions about further update
Mujhe bhi same starting lagi par aapka comment dekh ke mai bhi aage ka padhne ja raha hu
Bhai age pado maine bi aise hi aocha tha per aisa hai nahi ye alag hai wo alag hai sirf 46 updates hi hue index me bi hai ek padlo baki tumari marzi per ek baat kehta hu ye story bi bahut achi hai