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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

Do u like my story

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Rohan

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Oy yara update

Update posted bro
 

Rohan

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Thanks for supporting xman bhai.

Vaise beech beech mein gayab ho jate ho aap itne dino ke liye.

Next update posted xman bhai

 

Rohan

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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
tiger to poori tarah se roma par flat ho gaya hai,
roma ko yaha iss lockate ne hi pahuchaya tha,
bhai aapne jis tarah se lockate ke sajivata ka varnan iss kahani me kiya hai uss se ye lockate bhi iss kahani ka abhinn ang ban gaya hai,
behad hi amazing update bhai


Thanks for supporting jitu bhai

Magar aaj apka bohot chota comment aya.


Next update posted
 

Rohan

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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
kaal ne hi sunaina ke mata pita ko mahaveer aur anya rakshasho se bachaya hai,
kaal ko dekhte hi aur mahakaal ke baare me sunte hi mahaveer aur uske sathi rakshasho ki dar se haalat kharab ho gayi,
aur kaal unhe shahar 2 ke rohan ke bangale par le aaya hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update,
and sorry bhai ki itne dino se samay ke abhav me aur kuchh problems ki vajah se review nhi de paya


Thanks for supporting bhai
 

Rohan

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Wonderful story hai bhai

Pehle muje apka opening dekke aisa laga alex bhai ki story ko copy kar rahe ho kyunki waha per bi opening aise hi thi isliye me itne din tak isko nahi pada ta per pichle hafte aise hi nazar gumarahata koi update nahi a raha ta kisi story me to apke thread pe dekha to kahani kuch or to fir me pehle se padna start kiya abi abhi katam kiya sare updats padke bahut acha

Muje lagta hai ye itni dhamakedhar story hai to aap iski 1st chapter ko thoda jaldi jaldi katam ki ho muje or bi ummid thi ki sunaina kuch or hacking karegi or rohan ke paas to talewaar nahi ta uski raksha to prerana kar rahi ti na fir achanak kaha se agaya rohan ki hatho me talwaar

Kya isse pehle rohan talwaar hasil kar chuka tha ?

Thanks for supporting bhai.

Welcome to the pyaar ki had paar thread :celebconf::congrats:

Ha iske 2 update jarur alex bhai ki story se milte hai
Agar yeh or vo dono story alag hai.

Aap ek baar padkar apna review jarur dena.

Mujhe asha hai ki apko yeh story pasand aaegi.

Apke comment bohot jyada interasting hote hai.

Mein kabse soch raha tha ki aap mere thread mein bhi apna review do

Keep supporting bhai
 

Rohan

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Bhai uodate 10 tak padha hu. Aisa lag raha h ki ye kisi story ka copy samjh me nahi aa raha h ki aage .padhu ya na padhu...


Any suggestions about further update


Sajid bhai yeh story kisi ki bhi copy nahi hai.
Haa iske first 2 update alex bhai ki story se jarur milte hai .

Magar vo story alag hai or yeh story alag hai.

Aap khud ek baar story pado fir khud soch kar apko jaisa bhi lage apna review do.

And most welcome to the pyaar ki had paar thread :congrats::celebconf::celebconf:


Asha hai ki story padne mein apko interesting lagegi or story padkar apko maza aaeya.

Aap apna review jarur dena ki apko yeh story kesi lagi
 

Rohan

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Mujhe bhi same starting lagi par aapka comment dekh ke mai bhi aage ka padhne ja raha hu


Asha hai ki apko yeh story achi lagegi
 

Rohan

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Bhai age pado maine bi aise hi aocha tha per aisa hai nahi ye alag hai wo alag hai sirf 46 updates hi hue index me bi hai ek padlo baki tumari marzi per ek baat kehta hu ye story bi bahut achi hai

Thanks for supporting bhai

Mujhe acha laga ki apko yeh story pasand aa rahi hai
 
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