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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Excellent update bhai.... keep writing
 
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Update 53

Or veer ki halat to nahi thi ki chal sake magar divya ka naam u chillate hue sunkar
Fir bhi kosis karke bahar aa jata hai.

Or bahar ka nazara dekhta hai.


Veer ( sonam se ) : are sonam tum kab aae

Fir

Veer ( bhabhi se ) : are amrita tum itna chilla kiu rahi ho or ro kiu rahi ho or divya abhi tak medicine lekar kiu nahi aae.

Amrita apne ashu pohochte hue.

Amrita ( veer se ) : are aap bahar kiu aa gaye abhi aapko aram karna hai.

Veer : par meri pyari bhan divya abhi tak kiu nahi aaee.

Amrita apne dukh ko chupate hue.

Amrita ( veer se ) : aare aa jayegi aap ander chaliye or aram kariye nahi to divya ko acha nahi lagega ki aap aise bahar aa gaye.

Veer ( amrita se ) : tum thik bol rahi ho amrita bohot fikar karti hai divya sabka.
Meri bhan hamesha khuss rahe
Usko koi bhi takleef na ho bhagwan uska dukh bhi mujhe de dena
Meri pyari bhan divya ko hamesha khussiya dena

Or veer dheere dheere apne cabin me jakar let jata hai.

Amrita ( mann me ) : mein apko kese batau ki divya ab nahi aaegi
Vo abhi coma me hai.
Aap divya se itna pyaar karte ho ki agar aapko bata diya to yeh sadma shayad aap sen nahi kar paoge.
Or na hii rahul

To bhagwaan please yeh baat veer or rahul ko pata nahi chalni chahiye .

Amrita ( veer se ) : ab aap so jao
Apko aram karna chahiye
Nahi to divya ko acha nahi lagega.

Tab tak mein abhi ati hu.

Veer : ab tum kaha jaa rahi ho.
Divya bhi abhi medicine lene gai thi
Kamse kam usko ane do fir chali jana.

Amrita : vo sonam bahar khadi hai.
Kya usko bol du ki mujhe apne patidev ke pass baitna hai.
Isliye baad mein mil lena.

Veer pyaar se.

Veer ( amrita se ) : meri pyari patni jii
Aap jaa sakti ho.
Or jab tak mein so jata hu.


Or veer thodi der so jata hai.
Or fir bahar amrita rote hue bahar aati hai.

Amrita ( sonam se ) : mein abhi veer ko divya ka sach nahi bata sakti kiuki abhi veer is halat mein nahi hai ki yeh baat jhel paye.


Fir sonam or amrita kuch baat karte hai.

Or amrita veer ke pass chali jati hai.
Jab tak veer ki neend bhi dubara khul jati hai.

Veer ( amrita se ) : are meri lado bhan divya abhi tak medicine nahi lekar aae.

Ab amrita veer ko kese bataye ki jiss bhan ko veer apni jaan se bhi jyada chahata hai vo abhi coma mein hai.

Amrita ( veer se dukhi hokar ) : vo veer divya mujhe Medicine dekar america chali gayi.
Kiuki vo rahul ki judaai bardast nahi kar pa rahi thi.
Isliye divya ne socha ki vo america mein hii rehkar apni baki ki padai puri kargi.

Or tumari bhi yeh halat divya se nahi dekhi gayi or divya ne socha ki tum dubara koi ulta seedha kadam ne utta lo isliye usne apni kasam bhi di hai aapko.

Veer ( halki mushkan ke sath ) : yeh ladki bhi na
Pata nahi kitna pareshan hoti hai.
Magar yeh acha kiya ki vo america chali gayi.
Usko rahul ko bhoolne mein asani hogi
Ek kaam karo amrita tum divya ko phone lagao mujhe divya se baat karni hai.

Ab is baat par amrita thoda der jati hai.
Ki ab amrita divya ko phone kaise lagae.

Veer : amrita kya kar rahi ho
Phone lagao divya ko.

Lao mein khud lagata hue phone.

Or veer amrita ke hand se phone cheen leta hai


Or divya ka number dial karne lagta hai.

Tabi
Divya ka phone sonam ke pass hota hai jo ring karne lagta hai.

Sonam apne ashu pohochte hue phone uttati hai.
Or divya ki awaaz mein baat karti hai.

Sonam : haa bhaiya.

Veer : divya tum bina bataye kiu chali gayi pata bhi hai mein kitna pareshan tha.

Sonam : sorry bhaiya mujhe rahul ki vaha bohot yaad aa rahi thi.

Or yeh baat bolkar sonam ke aakho se aashu jalak jate hai.

Or yeh baat veer bhi shamaj jata hai.

Veer ( bohot pyaar se ) : are meri pyari guriya ro rahi hai.

Sonam apne aashu pohochte hue

Sonam : bhaiya mujhe acha nahi laga ki mein apko is halat mein chor kar chali gai.
Mujhe ab apki bhi bohot yaad aa rahi hai.

Veer : koi baat nahi divya
Tu to meri sabse smart bhan hai.
Or vaise bhi mein ab bilkul thik hue
Acha ab mann laga kar apni padai karna or phone karte rehna.

Sonam : jii bhaiya.

Or phone cut ho jata hai or kuch din ke baad veer ko discharge mil jata hai.

Or jab bhi veer ka mann karta hai apni bhan se baat karne ka to phone kar deta hai.

Or sonam divya bankar baat kar leti hai .


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Prerna ko yeh baat to pata chal jati hai ki yeh dibba agar mahakaal ne divya ko diya hai to iske piche koi bohot bada karan hoga.

Magar perna ko yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki is dibbe mein aisi kya chiz hai.

Jiske karan yeh sab hua.

Prerna kuch mantar padhkar is dibbe ke bare mein janne ki kosis karti hai.

Magar jaan nahi pati kiuki

Us dibbe ke charo taraf OM NAAM KE CHAKRA bane hote hai. Jisse na to vo shakti bahar aa pati hai or na hii koi bahari shakti ya mantar us OM NAAM KE CHAKRA ko bina khole ander ja sakti hai.

Prerna shocked ho jati hai ki isme aisa kya hai jo mein bhi pata nahi laga pa rahi hu.

Prerna isse pareshani mein hoti hai ki tabi.

Usme se nikalne wali black roshni sonam ke ander gussne lagti hai.

Jisse sonam ke ander burai , gussa , ersha , nafraat or kali shaktiyo ke bhav utpan hone lagte hai.

Sonam ( bhayanak hasi ke sath ) : hahahahahahaha
Mein hue sabse shaktishali kaal ki bhi swamini tantra mantra ki gamini
Kali shaktiyo ki rani.


Sonam ki baat sunkar prerna bhi shocked ho jati hai.
Ki sonam ko achanak kya ho gaya.

Prerna ( sonam se ) : sonam kesi baat kar rahi ho.
Tumko kya ho gaya.

Sonam hosh mein ate hue.

Sonam : kya hua prerna didi mein ne to kuch nahi bola


Yeh baat sunkar prerna fir shocked ho jati hai.

Prerna : abhi to tum kuch bol rahi thi.

Sonam naa mein garden hilate hue.

Sonam : nahi prerna didi mein ne to kuch bola bhi nahi.

Prerna : kyaaaaa.
Prerna ( mann me ) : yeh ho kya raha hai
Mujhe jald hii pata karna hoga
Mujhe kisi anarth ki anubhuti ho rahi hai.






 

Rohan

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Zabardast tha bhai

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Bro mast update hai par ek update se dil nahi bhara bahut din baad aaya na


Bhai apne bola or mein na karu aisa kabi ho sakta hai


Apke liye mein ne ek or update post kar diya hai


Thanks for supporting bhai
 

Rohan

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Excellent update bhai.... keep writing


Thanks for supporting

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Bhai aap achhe se darsan kigiye hum intzaar karenge...

Thanks viraj bhai for supporting


Aaj do update post kar diye hai.

Padhkar apna review jarur dena
 

Rohan

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Apki story mein ne raat mein puri padh li


Maza aa gaya

Kya likhte ho rohan bhai.:adore::adore::adore::toohappy:

Mein to yeh kahuga ki you r fantastic mindblowing jakaas mazedaar story hai.


Aise story mein ne abhi tak nahi padi.

Apki writng skill kamal ki hai.:bow::bow::party:

Mein to yeh story padh kar apka fan ho gaya hu.


Please is story ko complete jarur karna :pray::pray::pray:.


Late update granted

Please rohan bhai.

Is story ko beech mein mat chorna.


Aise story bohot kam milti hai padhne ke liye.

Mein apka bohot bada fan ho gaya hu

Yeh story padhkar

Mujhe lagta hai isse achi story shayad is par nahi hai.

:hspin:hspin:adore:

Your story loving fan rahul :10::poet::dost::dost:


Thanks rahul bhai
For beautiful comment

And also welcome to pyaar ki had paar thread


Asha hai ki apko meri age ki bhi story pasand aaegi


Keep support bhai
 

Rohan

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Ooe roshni tu bhi yaha but aa pleasant surprise


Mein bhut khus huu apko is side par dekhkar.


Or mujhe acha laga ki apko meri story pasand aae.


 
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