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Mast update bro

Dusre ka pta na chla abi pada situation mast descript kr rhe ho

Bro y aatma mani ka samjh nhi aaya yr ek to vo mahakal ne dya dusra usse om ka kavach hona fir b black power nikali us dibbe se

Or ab usne apna asar dikhna suru kr diya h



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Prerna : kyaaaaa.
Prerna ( mann me ) : yeh ho kya raha hai
Mujhe jald hii pata karna hoga
Mujhe kisi anarth ki anubhuti ho rahi hai.


Ab aaaggeeee

Tabi
Vaha rani a jati hai

Rani ( sonam se ) : sonam yeh tumare hath mein kya hai


Sonam ( rani se ) : pata nahi mom

Rani : sonam mujhe dikao mein dekhti hu yeh kya hai.

Or rani jaise hii us dibbe ko touch karti hai to rani ko bohot tezz ka zataka lagta hai

Or vo zataka itna tezz tha ki rani us zatake se behosh ho jati hai.

Sonam is dibbe ko vahi rakh deti hai

Or maa chillate hue rani ke pass jati hai.

Sonam : abhi itna sab hua ab dubara apko kya ho gaya

Or sonam rani par pani chidakti hai.

Jisse rani dubara hosh mein aati hai.

Rani hosh me ate hue

Rani : yeh ho kya raha hai mere ghar me mujhe kuch shamaj nahi aa raha
Kabi yaha rakshas a jate hai
Kabi yeh dibba mujhe zatake de deta hai
Yeh sab akhir mere sath kiu ho raha hai.

Vahi

Rahul dard mein karra raha hota hai.
Or ruchi & nisha rahul ko pakarte hue kas kar gale laga leti hai.

Or ruchi & nisha ke gale lagate hii rahul ko atma mani ki aawaaz sunai dena band ho jati hai.
Or rahul normal hone lagta hai.

Payal hairaan hokar

Payal : jab bhi rahul ke sir mein dard hota hai vo ruchi & nisha ke kas ke gale lagane se kese thik ho jata hai
Iska kya karan ho sakta hai.

Sonali ( shocked) : yahi baat mujhe shamaj me nahi aati

Nisha acting karte hue

Nisha ( sonali se ) : sonali didi mere pass bohot saari khatarnak shaktiya hai
Jisse me rahul bhaiya ko thik kar deti hu.
Apne jadu se
Kiu ruchi

Ruchi bhi bacho ki tarha acting karte hue
Jaise chote bache bolte hai ki meine yeh kaam jadu se kiya hai vaise hii ruchi bhi bolti hai.


Ruchi : haa sonali didi hum ne bohot bada jadu sheekha hai


Sonali or payal ruchi & nisha ki baat sunte hii hasne lag jati hai.

Jiske karan nisha & ruchi apna muh bula lati hai.

Sonai ( nisha & ruchi se haste hue ) : to tume jadu ata hai
To ek kaam karo tum sonam ke kamre ko black kar do

Ruchi sonia se

Ruchi ( kuch jhooth mut ka mantar padhte hue ) : mera jadu aa ja sonam didi ka room black kar ja

Magar kuch nahi hota

Sonali tezz hasi ke sath lot pot ho jati hai.

Ruchi ( nisha ke kaan me ) : ab hamara popat ho gaya
Ab hum kya kare sonam didi ka room to black nahi hua.

Nisha ( ruchi ke kaan me ) : dekh abhi bol dete hai ki hamare jadu abhi traffic signal par fasa hua hai
Jald hii kaam karega


Nisha ( sonia se ): vo kya hai na didi abhi hamara jadu traffic signal par fasa hua hai jald hii hamara jadu kam karega or sonam didi ka room black ho jaega.

Payal ( haste hue ) : to tumara jadu abhi traffic me hai

Nisha & ruchi haa mein garden hila deti hai.

Jaise hota hai na chote bache apni baat ko sach karne ke liye bohot pyas karte hai vaise hii nisha & ruchi karti hai
Magar unko kya pata ki bade logh bade hii hote hai
Jo chote bacho ki haa mein haa mila dete hai.

Nisha ( darawani acting karte hue ) : haa payal didi hamara jadu bohot khatarnak hai par hamare desh me metro banne ke baad bhi traffic vaise hii hai isme koi bhi change nahi aya
Is bajase se traffic signal wale ne mere jadu par challan thok diya
Kiuki usne jaldi ke chakkar me traffic signal thor diya tha
Or bichare ke pass paise nahi the to abhi vo bichara jadu pitai kha raha hai
Jald hii vo vapas aaega.

Yeh baat sunkar sab tharrake mar kar hasne lag jate hai.
Or haste haste gir jate hai.

To nisha & ruchi apna muh bula kar bolti hai

Nisha & ruchi : haslo haslo jab mera jadu vapas aaega na is room ko black jarur karega.

Sonali ( apni hasi rokte hue ) : koi bhi nisha & ruchi par nhi hasega
Nahi to nisha us par bhi jadu kar degi kiu nisha

Nisha haa me garden hila deti hai.

Sonali ( rahul se ) : betu ab tera sar ka dard kesa hai.

Rahul : ab mein thik hu sona didu

Ab mujhe koi bhi aawaaz sunai nahi de rahi hai.

Sonia : yeh sonam or rani aunty kaha gayi hai.

Prachi jo rishab ka khayal rakh rahi hoti hai

Prachi ( sonia se ) : vo mom or sonam didi us kamre me gaye hai

Yeh baat prachi ne sonam ke kamre ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha

Or arvind niche ki police investigation kar raha hota hai.

Fir rahul or uski sister chal deti hai sonam ke room ki or

Jaise hii vo sab kamre me guste hai to dekte hai sara saman bikhara hua hota hai.
Or pura room black padh raha hota hai.

Ruchi ( mann me ) : yeh sonam didi ka room black kese parne laga kya sach me mere pass jadu hai

Ab ruchi fir se apni baat bolte hue

Ruchi (sonali se ) : didi dekhlo hamare jadu ne yeh sab kar diya or sonam didi ka room black padhne laga


Is baat par sab shocked ho jate hai.

Payal ( sonam se ) : sonam didi yeh tumara pura room black kiu padh raha hai.

Or sonam bhi charo taraf dekhti hai to sach me yeh pura room black padh raha hota hai.

Nisha ( darawani awaaz me ) : yeh sab mein ne or ruchi ne kiya hai

Sonali ruchi ki daat lagate hue
Bolti hai
Sonali : ab apni acting band kar nahi to ek thappad parega.

Or nisha & ruchi chup ho jati hai.



Sonam : mujhe nahi pata or pehle to kabi yeh nahi hua tha mujhe lagta hai yeh sab is dibbe ke karan ho raha hai.

Tabi
Rani ke piche se ek ladki nikali hai.
Or us ladki ki choti idhar udhar lehra rahi hoti hai.

Or pure kamre me ek aawaaz gunj rahi hoti hai.


Ragni pichasni samast sarv nasni roop rang mohini mithyu ki swamini dyni

Sonam( us ladki se ) : khon ho tum

Or vo ladki khudte hii diwaar par ulti chadne lag jati hai.

Or yeh dekh sab bohot ghabra jate hai.

Or prerna us ladki ko dekhkar shocked ho jate hai.

Prerna ( us ladki se ) : dynaa

Payal : prerna yeh dynaa khon hai.

Prerna : payal yeh dayan vansh ki sabse shakti shali dayan hai
Jo rohan ko apne pyaar mein fasana chahati thi.
Jisse yeh amar or azar ho jae

Yeh rohan se shadi karke uski shaktiya pana chahati thi
Magar sunaina ne aisa nahi hone diya or rohan ko apne pyaar ki kasam dekar
Dayna ko ek tilisimi duniya me bhej diya tha jaha se koi wapas nahi aa sakta tha.


Sonali ( gusse me ) : to yeh dyna yaha kiu aai hai
Yaha thodi iska rohan milega.

Prerna ( mann me ) : ab sonali ko kese batau ki usko rohan to nahi milega magar rahul to milega kiuki

Itna bolte hii prerna chup ho jati hai.

. magar nisha & ruchi to kamal ki thi serious mahol mein bhi mazak ka thadka laga deti thi.

Nisha ( dyna se ) : oooo lambe baal wali aunty hume bhi bata do ki yeh itne lambe or khubsuraat baal ka kya raaz hai.
Aap kahi shanti amla oil to nahi use karti apne baalo mein

Nisha apne baal dikate hue

Ruchi apne baal dikate hue

Ruchi : hum bhi shanti amla oil use karte hai apne hair mein magar hamare hair apse lambe nahi hai.

Yeh baat sunkar dyna apne baal ko lambe karke nisha or ruchi ko apne pass khech leti hai.

Dyna ( dono se ) : yeh hum dayan vanshi ki khudrati nishani hai jo hum dayan ko virasaat me mili hai

Or dyna fir se nisha ko kuch hii second me vapas vahi chor deti hai
Jaha se dyna ne nisha or ruchi ko pakra tha.

Prerna ( mann me ) : yeh dyna jarur koi bada khel khel rahi hai in ladkiyo ke sath
Mujhe kuch karna hoga nahi to yeh sab nast kar degi
Mujhe baba ko bulana hii hoga
Or prerna kuch mantra padhne lag jati hai.

Jab tak prerna mantra padti hai jab tak dekhte hai yeh dyna kya khel khel rahi hai.

Dyna ( sonali se ) : tum janna chahati ho na sonali ki rahul ke sath aisa kiu hota hai.
Iske piche kya raaz hai.
Uske sir mein itna dard kiu hota hai

Sonali : dyna kya tum janti ho
Ki mere betu ke sath aisa kiu hota hai.

Dyna haa mein garden hila deti hai.


Payal : to batao

Dyna : is dibbe ke bajase

Ruchi us dibbe ko dekhte hue

Ruchi : is dibbe ke bajase


Dynaa ( mushkurate hue ) : haa meri bhan
Yeh dibba tumare rahul bhaiya ko nukshan pohochana chahata hai.



Payal : par yeh dibba rahul ko nukshan kiu pohochaega
Or kya hai is dibbe me

Dyna ( mushkurate hue ) : tum khud hii khol kar dekh lo

Ruchi ( dyna se ) : lambe baal wali aunty agar humne is dibbe ko khola or isne hamare rahul bhaiya ko dubara nukshan pohochaya to


Dyna : nahi pohochaega kiuki is dibbe ke charo taraf om naam ke chakra bane hue hai.
Usse ke karan rahul ke sir me dard hota hai ( jhooth )

Or payal us dibbe ko kholne jati hai
Or us dibbe ko pakar leti hai

Or jaise hii payal us dibbe ko kholne wali hoti hai
Tabi prerna ke mantra pure ho jate hai

Or achanak ek shaks vaha aa jata hai.
Jo puri tarha daka hota hai jiska kuch bhi sahi se dikai nahi de raha hota hai.

Shaks ( chillate hue ) : nahi payal aisi kabi bhi galti mat karna nahi to tum apne rahul ko hamesha ke liye kho dogi

Us shaks ki baat sunte hii payal rukh jati hai.

Sonam ki nazar jaise hii us shaks par jati hai to sonam shocked ho jati hai
Kiuki sonam ko raajlok ka sach pata tha.

Sonam : kaal baba aap

Vahi dyna payal se

Dyna : payal yeh jhooth bol raha hai jaldi karo is dibbe ko kholo nahi to rahul ke sir mein dubara dard hone lagega.

Kaal : nahi payal rukh jao.

Payal dono ke beech mein fas jati hai.

Prerna ( payal se ) : yeh thik bol rahe hai payal is dibbe ko mat kholna

Or prerna ki baat sunkar payal rukh jati hai or us dibbe ko side me rakh deti hai.

Kiuki payal ko pata tha ki prerna kabi bhi rahul ka bura nahi chahegi
Kiuki prerna ne payal ki us time madad ki thi jab rahul beshosh tha or takleef me tha.

Payal ( prerna se ) : prerna didi is dibbe me aisa kya hai jisko kholne se tum mana kar rahi ho

Kaal : is dibbe me vo mahan shakti hai jiske karan ek ladka kaal par bijaya pakar mahakaal bana.

Agar tumne is dibbe ko khol diya to atma mani khud ba khud rahul mein samahit ho jayegi
Jiske liye abhi rahul shaksham nahi hai.
Or rahul ka sarir hamesha ke liye nast hokar khatam ho jayega.
Or kya kya hoga yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata
Kiuki is mahan shakti ko aaj tak mein khud bhi nahi paa saka.
To iske baare me mujhe or jyda kuch nahi pata

Is baat par rahul ki saari sister ka gussa satbe asman par pohoch jata hai kiuki yeh dyna rahul ko marna chahati thi
Or rahul ki saari sister dyna ka pitna ke liye age barti hai.

Vahi
Kaal is soch me hota hai ki yeh atma mani yaha kese aae.

Or prerna kaal ki baat shamaj jata hai.

Ab jo bhi baat hogi prerna or kaal ke beech vo mann me hogi jo kisi ko sunai nahi degi.

Prerna ( mann me kaal se ) : baba yeh arma mani mahakaal ne di thi

Kaal : magar kiu
Kya mahakaal ko pata nahi tha ki yeh sarvshakti hai.
Or isse kitna vinash ho shakta hai kai kali shaktiya is atma mani ko prapt karne ke liye jagrit ho jayegi
Agar asia ho gaya to fir uski kalpana bhi nahi ki ja shakti hai ki kitna vinash hoga
Is pure universe ka.

Prerna : yeh to mujhe nahi pata baba yeh atma mani rohan ( mahakaal ) ne divya ko kiu di.
Magar baba iske charo taraf om naam ke chakra kese bane hai.

Vahi dyna apni kali shaktiyo ko use karne lagti hai

 

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Update 51

Nisha1234 sabse pahle to aapka shukriya ki aapne Rohan bhai ki anupasthiti me update hum logon tk pahunchaya.
Bahut bahut dhanyavad.

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek se badhkar ek scene aa rahe h is story me.
Lekin jitne bhi aa rahe dil ko lubha ja rahe h.
Har ek character dil me ghar bana le raha h.
Sonom ki baaten abhi baki h lekin Divya ??
Kon tha vo shakhs jisne takkar mari ??
Kya naya mod legi ye kahani ??

Or iske liye ,
Aage ka intjar

Thanks rishab bhai for fantastic comment

Next update also posted
 

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Nexr update posted king bhai
 

Rohan

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Mast update bro

Dusre ka pta na chla abi pada situation mast descript kr rhe ho

Bro y aatma mani ka samjh nhi aaya yr ek to vo mahakal ne dya dusra usse om ka kavach hona fir b black power nikali us dibbe se

Or ab usne apna asar dikhna suru kr diya h



Waiting for next bro

Thanks fighter bhai for lovely comment next update also posted
 

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kamal ka character hai Nisha aur Ruchi ka sala serious mahol mei bhi comedy....:blahblah:
Ab ye Kaal baba kon hai...
aur Mahakal ne divya ko dibba kyu diya ye jldi se clear karo:bat:
 

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Shaks ( mann me ) : lagta hai mar gayi.
Jitni baar mein rahul ko marne jata hamesha usko mere se bacha leti thi.
Mere raste ka sabse bada pathar ban jayi thi yeh ( divya )
To isko raste se hatana hii pada.

Or vo shaks haste hue achanak se car lekar vaha se gayab ho jata hai.

Ab aageeee...........

Or vehi se sonam dekhti hai ki kisi ne divya ko takkar mar di hai.
To sonam scooty vahi chorkar bhagte hue divya chillati hue divya ke paas aati hai.

Magar divya ka koi bhi react na dekh dar jati hai.

Vahi
Logh bate kar rahe hote hai.

Logh 1 ( logh 2 se ) : to check kar yeh zinda hai ki nahi koi police ko phone karo.

Logh 2 : haa bhai koi police ko phone karo.

Sab logh ek dusare ko bol rahe hote hai ki police ko bulao or hospital lekar jao magar koi khud madad karne ke liye age nahi ata.

Yahi hamare desh ki bekar baat hai.

Or sonam divya ka sir apne god me rakh leti hai.

Sonam ( gusse me logo se ) : tum logh insaan nahi sehtaan ho sab ek dusare ko bol rahe ho ki police ko bulao , hospital lekar jao magar koi bhi madad karne age nahi ata.
Agar tumari bhan ya beti yaha aise hoti tab bhi aap aise hii bolte

Sharam ani chahiye aap sab ko ki ek insaan yaha mar raha hai or aap yeh dekh kar baate kar rahe ho ki yeh abhi mara ki nahi.

Sonam ki baat sunkar vaha khade sab logh apni garden niche kar lete hai.

Sonam ko pata tha ki divya rahul ko apni jaan se bhi jyada chahati hai.
Or itna pyaar karti hai jitna shayad vo khud bhi nahi karti thi.

Isliye sonam kabi rahul ke samne nahi aae kiuki agar aa jati to vo shayad vo apna pyaar ijhar karne se rokh nahi pati.

Or divya bhi janti thi ki sonam bhi rahul ko dilo jaan se chahti hai

Par kiu iska abhas na divya ko tha nahi sonam ko


Sonam ( rote hue divya se ) : divya aakhe kholo tume kuch nahi ho sakta
Mein tume kuch nahi hone dugi.

Magar divya koi bhi jawab nahi deti.

Sonam ( bohot tezz chillate hue ) : divya agar tume kuch ho gaya to rahul ka kya hoga tumne kabi socha hai.
Divya tume utna hii padega apne rahul ke liye apne pyaar ke liye.
Nahi to tume bhi pata hai jab rahul ko tumare bare mein pata chalega to vo bhi nahi jee ayega vo bhi jinda lash ban jayega divya
Tume utna hoga apne liye nahi to rahul ke liye.

Sonam : ut jao divya
Utt jao


Tabi achanak se sonam ki aawaaz us dibbe mein jati hai or us dibbe se nikal rahi black colour ki roshni divya ke ander shamahit hone lagti hai.

Or ek tezz zatake ke sath divya ek bohot gehari saas leti hai.

Divya ( gehari saash lete hue ) : rahul I LOVE YOU

rahul ke to bas tan man mein bas rahul or uska pyaar basa hua tha divya ki har saash bas rahul ka hii naam leti hai.


Magar rahul ko to kuch pata hii nahi tha ki divya kis musibat mein hai.
Rahul insaab bato se anjan tha.
Ki divya ke sath kya hua hai.

Agar rahul ko pata chal jata to pata nahi kya hota iski kalpana bhi nahi ki ja sakti hai.

Ya to rahul khud mar jata ya us shaks ko mar deta jisne divya ko marne ki kosis ki thi.

Or divya jaise hii sonam ko dekhti hai to usse rote hue bolti hai.

Divya ( sonam se ) : sonam ab tum ko hii rahul ko shamalna hai.
Ab tum hii ho jo rahul ke ander ki nafraat khatam karke uske ander pyaar ka sanchar kar sakti ho.
Tum rahul ko kuch mat batana ki mein ne rahul ko kiu chora or iske piche kya bajaye thi.
Agar rahul ko yeh baat pata chali to rahul akela hii us shaks se ladne chala jayega
Jisse mein rahul ko bacha rahi thi.
Or yeh mein abhi nahi hone de sakti.

Divya tezz sash lete hue sonam se

Divya : vada karo sonam ki tum rahul ko kuch nahi bataogi.
Or rahul ko itna pyaar karogi ki usko meri kabi yaad na aae.
Agar rahul ko meri yaad aaee to vo bas rota rahega ki divya ne mujhe kiu chora
Or sab se nafraat karne lagega

Vada karo sonam ki tum rahul ko itna pyaar karogi ki tumare samne vo kabi mujhe yaad na kare
Vada karo sonam.

Sonam ( rote hue ) : mein vada karti hue divya ki mein rahul ko kabi tumari kami mehsus nahi hone dugi.
Or rahul ko itna pyaar karugi ki jab rahul ko tumare bare mein pata chalega tab mera pyaar hii uski taqat banega.


Divya dibba sonam ko dete hue.

Divya ( sonam se dard ke sath ) : yeh dibba mujhe mahakaal ne diya hai.
Ab iski raksha tume karni hai.
Mujhe nahi pata ki isme kya hai.
Magar itna pata hai agar mahakaal ne yeh diya hai to isko bohot bada karan hoga.
Or jab tak vo karan pura nahi ho jata jab tak tume is dibbe ki raksha karni hogi.

Sonam ( divya se ) : divya vo khon hai jisse rahul ko khatra hai.

Divya ( rote hue ) : vooo insan nahi ek sehtan hai ek darinda hai tum nahi janti sonam ki vo aisa rakshas hai ki jiske ander na daya or bhawna na rehm kuch bhi nahi hai.

Sonam : khon hai vo

Divya ( rote hue ) : voooo .....Da........
Sonam : kya da divya


Divya : vooo

Is divya ka hand dheela padh jata hai or divya ek bohot gheeri nend mein chali jati hai.

Jaha na to dard hota hai na takleef jaha sirf rahul or uska pyaar hota hai.

Or us pyaar ke gheri neend mein divya chali jati hai.

Sonam rote hue chillati hai.

Sonam : divya tum mujhe chorkar nahi ja sakti
Please utt jao divya.

Magar ab divya ko kuch bhi sunai nahi de Raha tha.

Or sonam divya ko pakar kar samne wale hospital lekar chali jati hai.

Or fir hospital mein vahi drama shuru ho jata hai ki hum inko admit nahi kar sakte yeh police case hai.

Vahi divya apni saashe bohot tezz tezz le rahi hoti hai.

Sonam ( hospital staff se gusse me ) : tum sab ko to mein bad mein dekh lugi
Agar tumara pura hospital nahi band karwa diya to dekhna

Sonam IPS arvind ko phone karti hai.

Sonam ( rote hue ) : arvind bhaiya yeh logh divya ko admit nahi kar rahe
Uski halat bohot kharab hai.

Or sonam arvind ko puri baat bata deti hai.

Arvind : mein hu na sonam jaise neha meri bhan hai vaise tu bhi to meri bhan hai.
Or dheeraj rakho or meri baat karwao hospital staff se.

Or sonam arvind ki baat karwa deti hai.

Tab jakar vo hospital vale divya ko admit karte hai.

Or divya ko operation theater me le jate hai.
Vahi divya ki bhabhi jaise hii divya ko operation threater mein le jati hue dekhti hai.

To bhagte hue divya chillate hue opretion threater pohochti hai.

Bhabhi ( doctor se ) : yeh meri nanand hai doctor yeh to apne bhai veer ke liye medicine lene gai thi fir yeh sab kese hua.

Doctor : dekhiye inki halat bohot kharab hai
Kisi ne inko car se uda diya hai.
Or inka bachna bhi bohot muskhil hai.

Bhabhi rote hue us doctor ke leg pakar leti hai.

Bhabhi ( doctor se ) : please doctor meri nanand ko bacha lo
Apko jitna bhi paisa chahiye mein dugi
Mein apni saari jwellary bech dugi .
Agar veer ko yeh pata chala to pata nahi kya hoga.

Please doctor meri nanand ko bacha lo.

Doctor ( bhabhi se ) : dekhiye medam hum kosis kar sakte hai.
Baki sab bhagwan ke hath mein hai.

Or doctor ander operation karne chala jata hai.

Tabi piche se sonam aa rahi hoti hai.

Or bhabhi sonam ko dekhti hai.

Bhabhi ( sonam se ) : dekh na sonam divya ko kya ho gaya hai.
Yeh logh bol rahe hai ki kisi ne divya ko car se uda diya.

Or kuch der mein operation ho jata hai

Or doctor niche sir jhukaye bahar ate hai.

Bhabhi ( rote hue ) : kya hua doctor divya thik hai na.

Doctor : sorry she is going to coma.
Hum ab yeh nahi bata sakte ki yeh ( divya ) kab is gheri neend se utte gi.


Bhabhi ( chillate hue ) : nahi yeh nahi ho sakta.
Divyaaaaaaa


Yeh sunkar vahi pass ke cabin me leta hua veer ghabra jata hai.

Or veer ki halat to nahi thi ki chal sake magar divya ka naam u chillate hue sunkar
Fir bhi kosis karke bahar aa jata hai.

Or bahar ka nazara dekhta hai.


Next update mein yeh flash back bhi end ho jaega or fir shuru hoga atma mani ka khel


Next update subha deta hu .







Fantastic update rajeev sir


Flashback ko apne bohot hii ache tarike se dikaya hai

Divya ka pyaar rahul ke liye bohot sacha or pavitra hai


Har baat ko apne bohot hii khubsuraat tarike se dikaya hai.

Magar yeh khon hai jisne divya ko mar diya
Or divya kis khatre ki baat kar rahi thi


Kya vo shaks rahul ki hii famliy se hai ya koi bahar ka hai
Yeh baat to abhi clear nahi hue hai.


Or is dibbe ka kya raaz hai

Yeh bhi abhi shamaj nahi aae


Magar shayad ane wale update me yeh pata chale



Sorry rajeev sir mujhe time nahi mil raha apki story padhne ka kiuki mere may me IPCC ke paper ane wale hai.

Jo apko pata hai ki usme pass hona kitna jaruri hai


Magar fir bhi jaise hii time milta hai mein apko yeh wali story padhkar review karti hu.


Thanks rajeev sir for giving beautiful update.


Magar plzz divya ko mat marna kiuki sacha pyaar kabi marna nahi chahiye



 
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