Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update 54

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update Bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

To ek hi entry baaki thi dayan ki or Dayna ke roop me vo bhi ho gyi.
Nisha ruchi kamal ki character h is story ki.
Too good Bhai.
Kya kar rahi h Dayna or kya parinam hoga ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar

 

[KOHINOOR]

Mast update bhai
Maza aa gaya padhkar
Ab dekhte h ki ye dyna kya gul khilati h

 

[Fighter]

Gajab update bro

To abe y dayan b aa gyi or y sb iski wajah se ho rha tha pr fir b sawal y hi h ki y aatma mani k dibbe se kese nikli .......?

Conversation mast h

Waiting for next

 

[Raj]

BAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI .

BUT REALLY KAHU TOH KUCH BHI SAMAJH NAHI AA RAHA HAI KI HO KYA RAHA HAIPAHALE TOH ATMA MANI KI AAWAAJ PHIR USAME SE KALI SHAKTI KA NIKL KE SONAM ME SAMAHIT HONA .SONAM KE DWARA BOLE GAYE SABD.PHIR DYNA KA AANA.BAHUT SI BAATE HAIN JO CONFUSION PAIDA KAR RAHI HAI.AUR SABSE BADI BAAT KI AAP KI STORY YAHI PAR RUK GAYI HAI BHAI YE CONFUSION DOOR KARO AUR STORY KO AAGE BADHAO YAAR .NA KUCH SAMAJH AA RAHA HAI AUR NA HI MAJAA.
BAAKI AAP KI JAISI MARJI LIKHANA AAP KO JAIAE CHAHE LIKHO

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Rohan]

Raj bhai yeh mujhe bhi pata hai ki story abhi vahi ruki hue hai

Magar yeh update jaruri tha is story ke liye
Or next update me yeh sara khel khatam ho gaega
Or haa yeh atma mani bhi ek raaz hai
Or abhi to story 5 percent bhi sahi se nahi hue hai
Agar mein abhi hii raaz khol duga to age ki story me kuch bache ga hii nahi

Or agar apne update dhyaan se pada hoga to apko pata chala hoga ki
Is atma mani ke karan hii ek ladka mahakaal bana hai
Or mahakaal to rohan hai
To iska matlab ki rohan hii mahakaal bana is atma mani ke jariye
Magar kiu or kese vo bhi raaz hai
Yeh baat me kuch update me clear karna chahata tha
Magar apko story sahi se shamaj nahi aa rahi is bajase mein ne yeh raaz khol diya


Or rohan is atma mani se mahakaal kese bana or is atma mani me aise khon si shakti hai yeh bhi abhi raaz hai
Apko itna to pata chal gaya ki koi kali shakti hai isme
Magar abhi bhi bohot sii baate raaz hai




Jo ane wale update me clear hogi


Abhi next update me rahul ka mahakaal (rohan ) se samna hoga jisse yeh pata chal jayega ki rohan ka asli sach kya hai .


Abhi to yeh baat clear hue hai ki rohan hii mahakaal hai
Magar yeh baat abhi clear nahi hue ki agar rohan mahakaal hai to rahul khon hai


Jo 1 ya 2 update ke baad clear hogi





Agar aap sab bologe to mein age ke update me yey baat puri clear kar duga magar fir kahani ka plot fir mujhe change karna padega or story ke bohot sare update delete karne padege

Jisse kahani bohot hii jaldi khatam ho jaegi


Bohot se reader ne mujhe comment me kaha ki sunaina ko rohan se jaldi milao
Or isse bajase mujhe story ka first chapter jaldi khatam karna pada



Next update me rahul ka mahakaal se samna hoga


Or rahul jo do bhago mein divide hua tha
Or jo dusara bhag vaha se gayab ho gaya tha
Iska raaz bhi next 2 update me khulega

Thanks your friend
Rohan

 

[John Cena]

Next update kab milega?

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Raj bhai yeh mujhe bhi pata hai ki story abhi vahi ruki hue hai

Magar yeh update jaruri tha is story ke liye
Or next update me yeh sara khel khatam ho gaega
Or haa yeh atma mani bhi ek raaz hai
Or abhi to story 5 percent bhi sahi se nahi hue hai
Agar mein abhi hii raaz khol duga to age ki story me kuch bache ga hii nahi

Or agar apne update dhyaan se pada hoga to apko pata chala hoga ki
Is atma mani ke karan hii ek ladka mahakaal bana hai
Or mahakaal to rohan hai
To iska matlab ki rohan hii mahakaal bana is atma mani ke jariye
Magar kiu or kese vo bhi raaz hai
Yeh baat me kuch update me clear karna chahata tha
Magar apko story sahi se shamaj nahi aa rahi is bajase mein ne yeh raaz khol diya


Or rohan is atma mani se mahakaal kese bana or is atma mani me aise khon si shakti hai yeh bhi abhi raaz hai
Apko itna to pata chal gaya ki koi kali shakti hai isme
Magar abhi bhi bohot sii baate raaz hai




Jo ane wale update me clear hogi


Abhi next update me rahul ka mahakaal (rohan ) se samna hoga jisse yeh pata chal jayega ki rohan ka asli sach kya hai .


Abhi to yeh baat clear hue hai ki rohan hii mahakaal hai
Magar yeh baat abhi clear nahi hue ki agar rohan mahakaal hai to rahul khon hai


Jo 1 ya 2 update ke baad clear hogi





Agar aap sab bologe to mein age ke update me yey baat puri clear kar duga magar fir kahani ka plot fir mujhe change karna padega or story ke bohot sare update delete karne padege

Jisse kahani bohot hii jaldi khatam ho jaegi


Bohot se reader ne mujhe comment me kaha ki sunaina ko rohan se jaldi milao
Or isse bajase mujhe story ka first chapter jaldi khatam karna pada



Next update me rahul ka mahakaal se samna hoga


Or rahul jo do bhago mein divide hua tha
Or jo dusara bhag vaha se gayab ho gaya tha
Iska raaz bhi next 2 update me khulega

Thanks your friend
Rohan

Bhai Rohan
Yaar ye kahani aapki h aap ekdam apne hisab se likho.
Jitna aapne socha h utna hi update likho , do-char update idhar udhar ho sakte h lekin isse jyada nahi.
Or jaisa ki aapne kaha ki aisa agar hoga to kahani jald hi samapt ho jayegi to mai aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta.
Aap aaraam se step by step aage badho.
Hum har mod har kadam pr aapke sath h bhai.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

 

[anandsngh12]

Update Reading.....
Review will come in Tomorrow...
Aap apne hisab se likhte raho bhai
Kabhi kabhi idhar udhar hota rahta hai
Week ke sabhi din ek jaise to nahi jate na bhai hamari life me, vaise hi updates bhi hain
Kabhi best to kabhi mediam to kabhi average
Inse hatash hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai
ye sab life ka hi ek part hain

 

[Viraj Raj]

Behad Shandar Update Bhai
Aap apna best hi likhe or suspense me jo maja hai or kisi me kaha hai .

Waiting...