Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[Rock Arvind]

Waiting

 

[aka3829]

Meri MOD se gujarish he ki aisi story jinpar 2 mahine se ek bhi update na aaye unhe yahan se hata dena chahiye. Inhe sirf hum jaise readers ka majak udane ke liye yaha mat rakhiye ki hum un stories par waiting likhte rahe aur un writers ki story ke pages bhadate rahe. Plzzz meri aap sabhi readers ae bhi darkhwast he ki aisi kisi bhi story par baar 2 waiting na likhe jiske writer ko readers ke waiting ki keemat ka pata hi na ho. Aur aisi sabhi stories ka bhaiskaar karna chahiye jinme 2 mahine se lagatar usake writer ke dwara na to koi update diya jaye ya fir koi announcement kinjaye ki wo kab tak update dedega.

 

[gOlDy]

साथ ही अधूरी कहानियो के राइटर्स को नेगेटिव मार्किंग भी मिलनी चाहिए

 

[Rohan]

Meri MOD se gujarish he ki aisi story jinpar 2 mahine se ek bhi update na aaye unhe yahan se hata dena chahiye. Inhe sirf hum jaise readers ka majak udane ke liye yaha mat rakhiye ki hum un stories par waiting likhte rahe aur un writers ki story ke pages bhadate rahe. Plzzz meri aap sabhi readers ae bhi darkhwast he ki aisi kisi bhi story par baar 2 waiting na likhe jiske writer ko readers ke waiting ki keemat ka pata hi na ho. Aur aisi sabhi stories ka bhaiskaar karna chahiye jinme 2 mahine se lagatar usake writer ke dwara na to koi update diya jaye ya fir koi announcement kinjaye ki wo kab tak update dedega.

Akka bhai mujhe bhi dukh hai ki mein apni yeh story suru nahi kar paa raha hu
Itne sare waiting ke comment ane par bhi mein update nahi de pa raha hu iska mujhe dukh hai
Mein me aaj dekha ki waiting ke itne comment aye hue hai kiuki kafi time se mein ne xforum use nahi kar paya tha personal problem ke bajase
Readers ne itne waiting ke comment kiye magar mein update nahi de paya iska mujhe dukh hai
Magar mein ne pehle bhi bola tha ki meri story jarur puri hogi
Haa isme time jarur lag gaya hai

Magar new years se isme update ane jarur shuru ho jaege

 

[Rohan]

साथ ही अधूरी कहानियो के राइटर्स को नेगेटिव मार्किंग भी मिलनी चाहिए

Story ka new update tuesday ya Wednesday se ane shuru ho jaege
Or monday ko mein story likhna shuru karuga

Keep supporting
Rohan

 

[Rohan]

Bhai agar Iss Tarah se krna Hota h to story start hi MT kiya kro hum readers story ko sirf Padhte ni h connect ho jate h fir update na aane se jo vyakulta hoti h na Bardst ni hoti h hath jod k request h ki thoda jaldi jaldi update do or most important isko end jrur kro plzzzz

Yaar kya karu bhai pura time apni personal problem mein bizi tha mein or raat ko time milta to mind itna thak jata tha ki update likh nahi pa raha tha magar tuesday se update ane shuru ho jaege


Keep supporting
Rohan

 

[Lp143]

Yaar kya karu bhai pura time apni personal problem mein bizi tha mein or raat ko time milta to mind itna thak jata tha ki update likh nahi pa raha tha magar tuesday se update ane shuru ho jaege


Keep supporting
Rohan

Wait for next update

 

[Rohan]

Update 58

Car bahar nikalte hii apne normal tarike se chalne lagti hai

Sab car ko dekh rahe the or heeran the ke yeh khonsi car hai jo bohot stylish or sundar hai

Magar unme se kuch logh us car ko or usme baithi sunaina ko dekhkar goli chalana start kar dete hai or lagatar firing karne lag jate hai .

Ab aagee...

Magar isse us car mein koi fark nahi padta

Raste me sunaina tiger se

Sunaina : tiger navratri ka saman ate samay le lege sahil se milne ke baad

Tiger : jaise aap thik samjhe sister

Sunaina ( chidate hue ) : vaise tiger vaha roma Bhi hogi

Tiger ( mann me ) : yeh sister to mera picha hii nahi chorne wali roma ka naam lekar or pata nahi roma ka naam sunkar meri dharkane itni tezz kiu ho jati hai
Jab vo samne ati hai to aisa lagta hai ki bas mein usko dekhta rahu or jab door jati hai to aise lagta hai ki koi mere sarir se meri atma ko nikal kar le ja raha hai kya sach mein mujhe roma se pyaar ho gaya hai
Ya yeh sirf ek attraction hai
Roma ka vo pyara sa chehra jheel se akhe

Tabi
Sunaina tiger ko hilate hue

Sunaina ( katilana muskurahat ) : tiger kha kho gaye kahi firse roma ke baare me to nahi sochne lage

Tiger har bara jata hai or harbarate hue sunaina se bolta hai

Tiger : nahi sister bilkul nahi mein roma ke bare mein to bilkul nahi soch raha tha

Tabi
Car ek traffic me rukh jati hai or car ek car sunaina ke car ke bagal mein rukh jati hai

Sunaina or tiger bato mein lage hue the or udhar dusari car wala sunaina ko dekhkar muskurane lag jata hai

Us car mein karib 7 logh the

Ladka ( dusare ladke se ) : bhai dekh yeh ladki ( sunaina ) wahi hai jisne us din traffic par hamara accident karwaya tha

Ladka 2 : haa yaar yeh to vahi hai aaj isko nahi choege

Ladka 2 ladka 3 se : tu ek kaam kar sabse pehle iski tanki ka petrol nikal de jisse yeh bhag na paye nahi to us din ki tarha yeh dubara bhag jayegi

Or ladka 3 sunaina ki car ke pass jakar petrol ki tanki dekhne lag jata hai magar isko tanki nahi milti

Ladka 3 ( mann me sar khujate hue ) : bahanchod iski car mein to petrol ki tanki hii nahi hai

Vapas akar ladka 3 us ladke se
Ladka 3 : bhai iski car mein to petrol ki tabki hii nahi hai

Ladka 2 ( gusse mein ) : abe dhyaan se dekh har car mein petrol ki tanki hoti hai jisse car chalti hai
Bahanchod yeh koi new car thodi tha jise petrol ki tanki nahi hai abhi duniya itni bhi advance nahi hue hai

Magar isko kya pata ki yeh car kis khet ki muli hai

Ladka 3 : bhai sach mein petrol ki tanki nahi hai car mein

Ladka 1 : ek kaam kar tu iski car ka tayer panchar kar de

Ladka dubara sunaina ki car ke piche jata hai or sunaina ki car ki hawa nikal ne lag jata hai

Magar yeh kya us car ko jab us ladke ne dhyaan se dekha to us car ke tayar mein pehle se hii hawa bhi nahi thi

Ab ladka 3 ko gussa a jata hai

Ladka 3 ( mann me ) : bhanchod is car mein hawa bhi nahi hai petrol ki tanki bhi nahi hai
Udhar vo bhan ke. Lawde bol rahe hai car ki hawa nikal petrol ki tanki se petrol nikal

Or gusse mein vo ladka us car par kheech kar apna per ( leg ) marta hai jisse car ko gussa a jata hai or car ek pipe se uska leg pakar leti hai or tabi traffic signal green ho jata hai or vo ladka ghisarta hua gane lagta hai .

Ladka 3 ( chillate hue ) : are sallo bacho
Bhai bacha lo mujhe

Ladka 1 ( chillate hue ) : chuchu ( us ladke ka naam ) mein aa raha hue vo log sunaina ke car ke piche apni car bhagane lag jate hai or thodi door me vo car us ladke ko chor deti hai
Or kala dua uske chehre ( face ) par markar chali jati hai

Car ( man me ) : mujh se panga

Or tabi us ladke 3 ka dost bhi pohoch jata hai

Or ladka 1 ( ladka 3 se ) : chuchu tu thik hai na

Ladka 3 ( ladke se gusse mein ) : bhanchod ghanta thik hue
Ladka 3 apni pit ( back ) pakarte hue

Chuchu gusse me : aaaahhh puri pit chil gaye hai is ladki ko choruga nahi
Sala bhar mein gaya suraj bhai ka pyaar is ladki ko to choruga sala ulta latka ke balatkaar karuga iska

Ladka ( chuchu se ) : bhai tu tension mat le yeh kal se to college aaegi hii na kiuki kal se college shuru ho raha hai dekh lege usko college mein or kuch bhi karne se pehle hame suraj bhai se baat kar leni chahiye
Kiuki pura state unki pocket mein hai

Sab chuchu ko shamjate hue : ha bhai hume suraj bhai se baat kar leni chaiye pehle to chal doctor ke pass thodi dawai lagvane


Or sunaina ko is baare mein kuch pata nahi tha kiuki vo to tiger ko roma ka naam lekar cherne mein lagi hue thi

Or tabi sunaina us hospital mein pohoch jati hai jaha sahil admit tha

Or car ko park karke sahil ke pass chali jati hai
Sahil bed par leta hua tha or uske pass roma or nishant bhi baithe hue the

Or sahil sunaina ko dekhte hii uthne lag jata hai

Tabi

Sunaina ( door se hii ) : sahil late raho abhi tume uttne ki jaruraat nahi hai
Kiuki tume utne mein takleef hogi

Sahil ( mann me ) : kitni achi hai sunaina mere bare mein kitna sochti hai issi bajase to mujhe sunaina se pyar hua tha

Sahil ( dukhi mann se ) : magar ab kar bhi kya sakte hai ki sunaina kissi or se pyaar karti hai

Fir achanak sahil ki nazar roma par jati hai
Kiuki roma ne bhi uska bohot khayal rakha tha kadam kadam par uski help ki thi

Sahil ( muskurate hue mann me ) : chalo sunaina na sahi roma hi sahi.
Magar roma mujhe to apna dost manti hai kya vo mujhse pyaar karne ki ready hogi
Kya vo meri gf banegi
Mujhe pehle pata lagana hoga ki roma mere baare mein kya sochti hai

Sahil yahi soch raha tha

Vahi us ladko ki kismar thi ya kuch or kiuki vo ladke vahi hopital mein chuchu ko doctor ke pass dikane aae jaha sahil admit tha

Or vaha chuchu sunaina ko dekhte hii aag babula ho gaya


Tabi

 

[Asif khan]

UpdatchornaCar bahar nikalte hii apne normal tarike se chalne lagti hai

Sab car ko dekh rahe the or heeran the ke yeh khonsi car hai jo bohot stylish or sundar hai

Magar unme se kuch logh us car ko or usme baithi sunaina ko dekhkar goli chalana start kar dete hai or lagatar firing karne lag jate hai .

Ab aagee...

Magar isse us car mein koi fark nahi padta

Raste me sunaina tiger se

Sunaina : tiger navratri ka saman ate samay le lege sahil se milne ke baad

Tiger : jaise aap thik samjhe sister

Sunaina ( chidate hue ) : vaise tiger vaha roma Bhi hogi

Tiger ( mann me ) : yeh sister to mera picha hii nahi chorne wali roma ka naam lekar or pata nahi roma ka naam sunkar meri dharkane itni tezz kiu ho jati hai
Jab vo samne ati hai to aisa lagta hai ki bas mein usko dekhta rahu or jab door jati hai to aise lagta hai ki koi mere sarir se meri atma ko nikal kar le ja raha hai kya sach mein mujhe roma se pyaar ho gaya hai
Ya yeh sirf ek attraction hai
Roma ka vo pyara sa chehra jheel se akhe

Tabi
Sunaina tiger ko hilate hue

Sunaina ( katilana muskurahat ) : tiger kha kho gaye kahi firse roma ke baare me to nahi sochne lage

Tiger har bara jata hai or harbarate hue sunaina se bolta hai

Tiger : nahi sister bilkul nahi mein roma ke bare mein to bilkul nahi soch raha tha

Tabi
Car ek traffic me rukh jati hai or car ek car sunaina ke car ke bagal mein rukh jati hai

Sunaina or tiger bato mein lage hue the or udhar dusari car wala sunaina ko dekhkar muskurane lag jata hai

Us car mein karib 7 logh the

Ladka ( dusare ladke se ) : bhai dekh yeh ladki ( sunaina ) wahi hai jisne us din traffic par hamara accident karwaya tha

Ladka 2 : haa yaar yeh to vahi hai aaj isko nahi choege

Ladka 2 ladka 3 se : tu ek kaam kar sabse pehle iski tanki ka petrol nikal de jisse yeh bhag na paye nahi to us din ki tarha yeh dubara bhag jayegi

Or ladka 3 sunaina ki car ke pass jakar petrol ki tanki dekhne lag jata hai magar isko tanki nahi milti

Ladka 3 ( mann me sar khujate hue ) : bahanchod iski car mein to petrol ki tanki hii nahi hai

Vapas akar ladka 3 us ladke se
Ladka 3 : bhai iski car mein to petrol ki tabki hii nahi hai

Ladka 2 ( gusse mein ) : abe dhyaan se dekh har car mein petrol ki tanki hoti hai jisse car chalti hai
Bahanchod yeh koi new car thodi tha jise petrol ki tanki nahi hai abhi duniya itni bhi advance nahi hue hai

Magar isko kya pata ki yeh car kis khet ki muli hai

Ladka 3 : bhai sach mein petrol ki tanki nahi hai car mein

Ladka 1 : ek kaam kar tu iski car ka tayer panchar kar de

Ladka dubara sunaina ki car ke piche jata hai or sunaina ki car ki hawa nikal ne lag jata hai

Magar yeh kya us car ko jab us ladke ne dhyaan se dekha to us car ke tayar mein pehle se hii hawa bhi nahi thi

Ab ladka 3 ko gussa a jata hai

Ladka 3 ( mann me ) : bhanchod is car mein hawa bhi nahi hai petrol ki tanki bhi nahi hai
Udhar vo bhan ke. Lawde bol rahe hai car ki hawa nikal petrol ki tanki se petrol nikal

Or gusse mein vo ladka us car par kheech kar apna per ( leg ) marta hai jisse car ko gussa a jata hai or car ek pipe se uska leg pakar leti hai or tabi traffic signal green ho jata hai or vo ladka ghisarta hua gane lagta hai .

Ladka 3 ( chillate hue ) : are sallo bacho
Bhai bacha lo mujhe

Ladka 1 ( chillate hue ) : chuchu ( us ladke ka naam ) mein aa raha hue vo log sunaina ke car ke piche apni car bhagane lag jate hai or thodi door me vo car us ladke ko chor deti hai
Or kala dua uske chehre ( face ) par markar chali jati hai

Car ( man me ) : mujh se panga

Or tabi us ladke 3 ka dost bhi pohoch jata hai

Or ladka 1 ( ladka 3 se ) : chuchu tu thik hai na

Ladka 3 ( ladke se gusse mein ) : bhanchod ghanta thik hue
Ladka 3 apni pit ( back ) pakarte hue

Chuchu gusse me : aaaahhh puri pit chil gaye hai is ladki ko choruga nahi
Sala bhar mein gaya suraj bhai ka pyaar is ladki ko to choruga sala ulta latka ke balatkaar karuga iska

Ladka ( chuchu se ) : bhai tu tension mat le yeh kal se to college aaegi hii na kiuki kal se college shuru ho raha hai dekh lege usko college mein or kuch bhi karne se pehle hame suraj bhai se baat kar leni chahiye
Kiuki pura state unki pocket mein hai

Sab chuchu ko shamjate hue : ha bhai hume suraj bhai se baat kar leni chaiye pehle to chal doctor ke pass thodi dawai lagvane


Or sunaina ko is baare mein kuch pata nahi tha kiuki vo to tiger ko roma ka naam lekar cherne mein lagi hue thi

Or tabi sunaina us hospital mein pohoch jati hai jaha sahil admit tha

Or car ko park karke sahil ke pass chali jati hai
Sahil bed par leta hua tha or uske pass roma or nishant bhi baithe hue the

Or sahil sunaina ko dekhte hii uthne lag jata hai

Tabi

Sunaina ( door se hii ) : sahil late raho abhi tume uttne ki jaruraat nahi hai
Kiuki tume utne mein takleef hogi

Sahil ( mann me ) : kitni achi hai sunaina mere bare mein kitna sochti hai issi bajase to mujhe sunaina se pyar hua tha

Sahil ( dukhi mann se ) : magar ab kar bhi kya sakte hai ki sunaina kissi or se pyaar karti hai

Fir achanak sahil ki nazar roma par jati hai
Kiuki roma ne bhi uska bohot khayal rakha tha kadam kadam par uski help ki thi

Sahil ( muskurate hue mann me ) : chalo sunaina na sahi roma hi sahi.
Magar roma mujhe to apna dost manti hai kya vo mujhse pyaar karne ki ready hogi
Kya vo meri gf banegi
Mujhe pehle pata lagana hoga ki roma mere baare mein kya sochti hai

Sahil yahi soch raha tha

Vahi us ladko ki kismar thi ya kuch or kiuki vo ladke vahi hopital mein chuchu ko doctor ke pass dikane aae jaha sahil admit tha

Or vaha chuchu sunaina ko dekhte hii aag babula ho gaya


Tabi

Good update bahi
Plz ab story ko beech mai na chorna
Pehle hi sare characters bhool gay