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Rohan

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Excellent update brother keep posting
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Thanks for supporting bhai next update kuch gante me
 
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Update 65

rahul sukanya ko shantana dete hue bolta hai
rahul : tum dukhi mat ho sukanya koi na koi rasta me awasya nikal luga

aise hii sab bhojan karte hai or rahul bahar so jata hai ek dari bicha kar or dono maa beti ander kamre me so jati hai .

Ab aaagge

Raat me bahar ek khatiya bichakar so raha hota hai
tabi aadhi raat ke samay ko rahul ke pass ata hai
or rahul ke mathe ko chumkar bolta hai

shaks : rahul mujhe vishwas tha ki tum mayavi lok jarur aaoge
mein ne tumara mayavi lok me pata nahi kitni sadiyo se intzaar Kiya hai

shaks ( rahul ke chehre ko hath me lekar ) : mujhe visvaas tha ki tumara punar janam jaroor hoga yeh mayavilok ki dharti sukhi dharti aaj tumare dubara ane se khil utegi

shaks ( rahul ka vo manmohak pyara sa chehre dekhte hue us shaks ke asu aa jate hai ) : rahul kitne sadiyo se mein tume dubara dekhne ke kiye tarasi hu
magar rahul yeh ek mayavi lok hai yaha har kuch maya hai jisko tume shamajh na hoga mujhe pura visvaas hai ki tum jo Rohan or Sunaina ke baare me janne yaha aae ho vo tum jaan paoge

or dubara se vo shaks rahul ke chehre par ek kiss karke gayab ho jata hai

tabi rahul ki aakh khul jati hai.

rahul chora taraf dekhne lagta hai magar rahul ko koi dekhai nahi deta

rahul ( mann me ) : khon tha yaha kya koi mujh se baat kar raha tha abhi kya koi mujhe janta hai yaha

rahul man me sochte hue : aae nahi mera koi vegan hoga

fir rahul ko apna chehra thoda gila lagta hai

Rahul ( mann me hairani se ) : yeh mera chehra gila kese ho gaya kya kisi ne mujhe kiss kiya hai

yeh sab sochte hue rahul dubara neend ki aaghos mein chala jata hai

subha rahul ki awaaz ek surilee awaaz se khulti hai
jo ek madur aawaaz me bhagwan Shiv ki puja kar rahi hoti hai yeh or koi nahi sukanya thi jo mahadev ki puja kar rahi thi
Sukanya ke ghar ke bagal me hii ek mandir tha yaha sukanya hamesha mahadev ki puja karti thi magar rahul ka pata nahi kya mann hua

rahul bhi jaldi se naha donkar tyaar hota hai or us mandir ki taraf chal drta hai
jaise hii rahul mandir me apna per rakhta hai vaise hii anek ko ghantiya mandir ki bazane lagti hai jisse puja karte huee mandir ke pujari bhi hairan hojate hai sath sukanya jo mahadev ki puja kar rahi thi uski puje se man hatkar rahul ki taraf chala jata hai.

Jo bhi logh mandir mein puja kar rahe the aise ghantiya bajne se jab hairan ho jate hai
jabki rahul bhi hairan tha ki yeh sab kya ho raha hai

jaise hii rahul mandir ki seedi chadne lagta hai vaise vaise mandir ke Dipak me jalne lagte hai or vaha ke Dipak ka ujala us mandir ki sundarta ko or bada deta hai vo mandir aise chamakne lagta hai jaise koi divya prakash chamak raha ho
yeh divya prakash door door tak chamak raha tha

jaise hii rahul sab seedi Chad jata hai vaise vaha ka pujari rahul ke pass akar rahul se bolta hai

pujari : tum khon ho putra

rahul pehle pujari ko pranam karta hai or fir unka ashirvaad lekar bolta hai

rahul : pujari jii mera naam rahul hai or mein ne yaha se surilee awaz suno to me yaha a gaya

pujari pehle rahul ko dhyaan se dekhta hai fir bolta hai

pujari ( rahul ko ghoorte hue ) : mein ne pahle to tume yaha nahi dekha or tumare pehnabe de aisa lagta hai ki tum mayavi lok ke nahi ho

tabi piche se sukanya aati hai rahul ke is mandir me kadam rakhne se sukanya ke bhi chehre ka Tezz bohot jyada bad gaya tha
sukanya pujari se bolti

sukanya : pujari baba yeh is lok se nahi dharti lok se aya hai
Jo hume dristi ke atyachar se mukt kar bana chahata hai

pujari rahul ko goor kar : yeh ek manushye hai

sukanya : ha pujari baba hai to yeh ek manushya

pujari : to tum dharti lok se mayavilok kese aa gae kya tum bhi mayavi vidhya jante ho

rahul Sheetal mann se : nahi pujari jii mein koi mayavi vidhya nahi janta or fir rahul pujari ko puri baat bata deta hai jis ko sunkar pujari bhi hairan ho jate hai ( bas yeh nahi batata ki usko mata parvati ne yaha bheza hai kiu mata parvati ne rahul ko is bare me batane se mana kiya tha )

pujari : to tum Rohan or Sunaina ke baare mein yaha yaha janne aae ho
or isse iksha ( desire ) ne tume yaha bhez diya

pujari : vaise khon shaks tha jisne tume yaha bheza yaha ana kisi shadaran shaks ke liye mana hai

rahul sehazta se bolta hai : pujari jii mein yeh to nahi janta ki mujhe kis ne yaha bheza hai.
or maya se to mera door door tak ka nata nahi hai or mein yaha ke baare mein bhi kuch nahi janta

pujari : putra tum yaha ke baare mein nahi jante fir bhi yaha aa gae or dristi jaise shaktishali mayavi ko marne ki bhi sochi hai. Tum pata hai bina maya ke to tume yaha ka ek bacha bhi mar dega

Rahul : pujari jii marna or marna yeh to upar vale ke hath mein hai hum ya aap yeh nahi bata sakte ki khon kisko mar sakta hai or khon mar sakta hai

fir rahul ko dhyaan se dekhte hai or fir mushkurate hue bolte hai

pujari : achi baat hai tum baate achi kar lete ho putra
aao yaha aarti ho rahi hai tum bhi isme bhag lo or prasad khakar hii yaha se jana

tabi sukanya bolti hai bade pyaar se : pujari baba yeh yaha ki rani se milna chahate hai aap to har subha aarti ke baad rani ke pass jakar unko mahadev ka prasad dete hai jo aap kiu na rahul ko bhi sath lejakar unko rani se milva de

pujari mushkurakar : kiu nahi beti hum jarur rahul ko rani se milvaege

is mandir me aakar rahul ka mann bilkul Sheetal ho gaya tha na koi tention na koi vichaar magar or bhi bohot kuch tha is mandir me jo rahul ka nahi pata tha

fir dheere dheere mandir kar prakash dheere dheere lupt hone lag jata hai or fir kahi gayab ho jata hai.

or fir rahul aarti me bhag lekar mahadev ki aarti sunta hai or fir prasad khakar pujari ke sath rani ke mehal me chal deta hai

or vahi sukanya apne ghar chali jati hai .

raste me pujari rahul se bolta hai : putra tume dekhkar pata nahi mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tume mere purvaj jante hai

rahul : pata nahi pujari ji magar me to is mayavi lok me pehli baar aya hue or ha yeh ho sakta hai ki aapke purvaj dharti lok me aae ho to jarur dekha ho sakta hai magar yeh bhi shambhav nahi kiuki aap hii mujhe itne bade hai to us time mera janam bhi shambhav nahi hoga
haa punar janam jaror ho sakta hai jab apke purvaaj mujhe jante hoge

pujari ji mushkurate hue : haa yeh ho sakta hai kiuki hamara bhootkal hii hamare vartman ka nirman karta hai or hamare varman kaal se hii bhavisya kaal ka nirman hota hai.

iase hii baat karte hue rahul mahel pohoch jata hai

tabi jaise hii rahul aage badte hai ke sanik rahulbko rok deta hai

senik : aare yaha kaha ghusa jaa raha hai tuze pata nahi ki yeh raaj mehal hai yaha aise hii koi nahi aa sakta

tabi pujari baba : senik yeh hamare sath hai isko ane do

fir senik kuch nahi bolta kiuki yeh pujari mandir ki puja karne ke sath sath yaha ke raaj guru bhi the

senik pujari ko pranam karke rahul ko ander jane dete hai.

Jaise hii pujari ji rani ke kaksh me pohochte hai
rani unko dekhe hii pranam karti hai.

rani : raaj guru Keshri ko sumitra ka praman

Keshri : sada khuss raho putri

sumitra ki nazar jaise hii rahul par parti hai vaise hii muskurate hue bolti hai

sumitra : aao rahul yaha ashan ghiren ( baitho )

rahul shocked hokar : apko kese pata ki mera naam rahul hai

hairaan to raaj guru Keshri bhi the magar fir raaj guru Keshri mushkurate hue bolte hai

keshri : putra rahul yeh ek rani ke sath sath ek rishi kanya bhi hai is bajase unko rajya me khon hai or khon kis uddeshya se unse milne aya hai vo sab janti hai

rahul hairani se : aisa hai kya

or fir rahul or raaj guru Keshri rani sumitra ke kamre me ek ashan par baith jate hai

sumitra halki mushkurahat ke sath : to tum Rohan or Sunaina ki pram katha sunne aae ho

rahul : jii rani

sumitra : us khata ko jaane ke liye tume pehle dristi ka vadh karna hoga or jiska bharosa tum pehle hii sukanya ko dila chuke ho

rahul : magar mein dristi ko kese maar sakta hue or mein to dristi kya is mayavi lok ke baare mein bhi kisi ko nahi janta

sumitra ke chehre par ek alag hii Tezz tha yeh ek maya thi ya kuch or iska janna abhi baki tha : yeh to tumne pata hona chahiye ki tum dristi ko kese maroge kiuki dristi ko marne ka bharosa tumne sukanya ko dilaya hai or rahi janne ke baat to me is mayavi lok ke baare mein jo bhi pata hai vo mein tume bata deti hue
kiuki jabse mera janam hue hai tabse mein jitna jaan pai yeh mein bata deti hue to dhyaan se suno.


Sumitra : suna hai is lok mein Rohan or unki patni Sunaina ka shashan ya bhi kheh sakte ho ki unka raaz chalta tha jinhone anek rajyo ko milakar is mayavi lok ka nirman kiya tha har kiuki un rajyo par kisi na kisi rajyo par koi na koi dusman hamla kar deta tha or us rajya ki praja or us hamle me bohot nukhsan hota or vo rajya bhi kisi na kisi dushman ke hamle se dheere dheere kamjor ho jata tha or dusman is fyda uthakar us rajya or us Raja se cheen lete

isse rajao mein bohot khof tha is bajase sab rajao ne ek nirnay kiya ki hum sab rajkumar Rohan ke pass jaege us samay Rohan ek rajkumar the kiuki unka rajya ek bohot Vishal tha or taqatvaar bhi jispar koi dushman hamla karne se pehle hazaar baar sochta tha
sab raja rohan ke pass jakar apne rajya ki katha sunai

to Rohan ne bola ( sab rajao se ) : mein tumari koi madad nahi kar sakta kiuki tum hamare rajya se alag ho kiuki agar mei ek rajya ki raksha karuga to tumara koi dushman dusare rajya par hamla kar dega agar dusare rajyako bachauha to koi teesre rajya par humla kar dega
aise mein tumari madad kis prakar kar pauga

tabi ek raja ne bola : rajkumar koi to upay hoga jisse hum sab is hamle se bhi bach jae or humare rajya ki praja bhi is hamle se bachi rahe

rohan ( mushkurakar ) : iska ek upay hai ki mei saare rajyo ko milakar ek lok ka nirman kary or us par hamare pita ka shashan rahe jisse hamari saari sena is lok ki seema par tehnaat ho gaegi

Rohan ki yeh baat sunkar sab raja or rani khuss ho gaye

tabi Rohan ne kaha : magar isme ek shamasya hai

Tabi ek rani boli : kaise samasya

Rohan : itni vishal sena or lok ka nirman karne itna ashan nahi hoga kiuki uske liye aap sab ko meri adhinta shuikaar (mere adhin rehna ) karna hogi kiuki itni vishal sena ko raksha ke liye mujhe anek rajyo se kar bhi vasoolna hoga or aap mere pita ki agya ka palan karte hue aap sukhi purvak apna raaj chalate rahege

thodi khusar phusar karne ke baad saab raja or rani ne haa bol diya

uske baad kisi bhi dushman ka itna sahas nahi hua ki anek rajyo se bana yeh mayavi lok par koi hamla kar sake
or is lok ke raja rohan ke pita the jo ban mein Rohan ban gaya
sab khusi khusi apna rajya chalate or jis rajya par koi musibat aati to Rohan us rajya ki har tarah se madad karta or mayavi lok ki janta bhi or anek raja aise maharaaj pakar dhanya ho gaye the
aise hii din beethne lage or sab hasi khusi reh rahe the

Fir ek din aise khatna ghati ki jisne sab kuch uzad diya
pata chala kisi Rohan or Sunaina ek pahari se khud gaye or kisi or pata nahi chala ki vo kaha gaye
rohan ki mout se sab raja or unki phanta bohot dukhi thi
tabi

Kisi ne hamare lok par hamla kar diya
to sab raja or raniyo ne milkar mayavi lok ki raksha karte rahe is aash me ki Rohan or Sunaina vapis jaroor aaege

bina maharaaj ke mayavi lok ki sena kab tak tik har hamle se ladte rahe

aise hiii kuch saal bit gaye

tabi ek hamla hua or us hamle me mayavi lok ki halat bohot kharab hone lagi mayavilok ki sena mein hahakar machne laga
tabi ek ladki ne aakar apni shaktiyo se mayavi lok ki raksha ki

Or us ladki ne aakar sabhi rajao se kaha

Ladki ( sab rajao se ) : mein tumare maharaaj rohan ki badi bhan dayna hue or rohan kisi karye hetu bahar gaye hai or jab tak rohan nahi aa jata unhone mujhe is mayavi lok ka karya bhar shamalne ko kaha hai

tabi ek raja bola : hum kese maan le ki tum Rohan ki badi bhan ho kya pata hamare maharaaj rohan ki anupasti me yaha hamla karne aaeho

fir dayna ne rohan ki badi bhan hone ke kuch saboot diye jisse yeh vishwas ho gaya ki yeh dayna rohan ki badi bhan hai
fir dyna rohan ke absence me mayavilok ka karya bhar shamalne lagi

or koi bhi mayavilok par hamla karta dyna us shaks ko jaad sahit khatam kar deti

kiuki dyna mein na koi daya tha na koi achi bhawna

is time dyna is lok ki maharani hai or dristi uska sena pati
Magar dristi ne har rajyo ki ladkiyo par buri nazar rakhni chalu kar di
or jo ladki usko pasand aati or us ladki se sath balatkaar kar leta ya usse shadi kar leta
To ek din sabhi raja or rani iski suchana dene maharani dyna ke pass pohoch magar dyna ne ek na suni or kaha. Jabardasti shaadi karna or balatkar karna koi paap nahi hota yeh bolkar sab rajao ko vaha se bhez diya

rahul dyna ka naam sunkar chock gaya tha

or uski kahani or shaktiya ka varnan sunkar bhi hairan tha

rahul ( mann me) : to kya dyna sach me rohan ki badi bhan hai prerna ne to kaha tha ki dyna rohan se shadi karna chahati thi
Ye kaise ho sakta hai agar dyna rohan ki badi bhan hai to vo rohan se shadi kese kar sakti hai


RAHUL

tabi ek aawaaz aae jisse sunkar rahul fir hairaan ho gaya
rahul ne piche palat kar dekha
 
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Badiya or fantastic update bhai

Pehla point to yeh hai ki

Rahul ne sukanya ko vachan to de diya ki vo dristi ko mar dega magar rahul ke pass to koi mayavi shakti nahi hai to fir rahul us dristi ko kaise marega

Dusara vo shaks khon tha jisne raat mein rahul ko kiss kiya kya vo rahul ko janta tha ya iske pichebhi koi raaz hai

Third point yeh hai ki rahul ke pass mayavi shaktiya nahi hai to yeh dristi khon kaise marega

Fourth point yeh hai ki agar dyna rohan ki badi bhan hai to kya is time dyna hii yaha ki maharani hai

Or sonam bhi kahi gayab ho gai hai us dibbe ke karan

Ab dekhna yeh hai ki age kya hota hai

Apne bohot badiya update diya hai bhai apki mehnat kab liye tarif hai :applause::applause:

Vaise agar apne yeh bataya ki Rohan us pahadi se khud gaya tha to fir kya Rohan or Sunaina zinda hai ya mar gae yeh mera dout hai bhai kiuki apne kaha tha ki rahul hii rohan hai

Chalo is pata to ane wale update me hii chalega

Bhai ab story ko beech me chor kar mat jana story dubara se shamajh ne me bohot time lagta hai saare character dubara yaad karne padhte hai

Isse bajase abhi tak mein ne comment nahi kiya
Ab kuch update ate hue dekhe to review de diya

Ab regular update do bhai
 

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Raj Mr.X796 Chunmun Fighter sonukale Nisha1234 Abhaych Jitu kumar Aamir.2000 Rohini Arohi sharma Said ismail NOVA SHARMA Acme Mast fakir Jon123 Xfan ULTRA Anjana Naina Naughtyrishabh


Bhaiyo kaha ho mein ne story dubara shuru kar di or aap story hii nahi padh rahe ho kya baat hai
Story achi nahi lag rahi kya
Ok bro Sunday sham se start karta hun bro kyoki thoda pichhle updates bhi dekhna padega taki thoda revision bhi ho jaye
 
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Aur bhai ek bat aur kahana chahunga ki story dobara start hone pe thoda bahut readers bhul jaten hain story kahani ko yese main koi dobara start se padhna nahin chahega isliye ho sake to aap first page hi edit karke story ka summary likh dijiye to badi meharbani hogi
 

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Aur bhai ek bat aur kahana chahunga ki story dobara start hone pe thoda bahut readers bhul jaten hain story kahani ko yese main koi dobara start se padhna nahin chahega isliye ho sake to aap first page hi edit karke story ka summary likh dijiye to badi meharbani hogi

Thanks for supporting bhai
or story ke saare character first page par hai unke naam sahit

or aap update 50 se padege to apko sara yaad aa jaega

Vaise mayavilok ke baare me naya charecters aae hai jo saare charecters aapko update 50 se pathoge to yaad aa jaege


story abhi vaise jyada aage nahi gae hai abhi
fir bhi thoda review ke liye apko bata deta hue ki

shruru mein ek auraat apne do bacho ko lekar ja rahi hoti hai jiske piche koi rakshas bhag raha hota hai usme se dono bache us auraat se bichad jate hai jisme ek rahul hota hai or ek Sunaina

sunaina or rahul bhi ek dusare se alag ho jate hai kiuki us auraat ka ek bacha niche khai me gir jata hai or dusara koi gadi wale us bache ko bachane ke liye Lee jata hai
us auraat ka kya hua yeh pata nahi chalta

vahi Sunaina ek advance technology ki baap hoti hai or college me admission leti hai
sunaina bachpan se hii rohan se pyaar karti hai or uski har saho me bas rohan basa hota hai
Or vahi Sunaina apna admission karvane ek college me jati hai vahi usko sahil or roma mil jate hai or fir unki dosti ho jati hai aage chalkar
magar dheeere dheere sahil Sunaina ko pyaar karne lag jata hai or fir ek din usko purpose karta hai jisko Sunaina yeh bata kar mana kar deti hai ki vo rohan se pyaar karti hai
magar sahil se apni dost nahi torti or fir Sunaina ek hase me Sunaina ka ghar jal jata hai or is gusse me Sunaina us aadmi ko marne ke liye jisne usko mata pita ko mara tha uska badla lene Sunaina ek ghufiya agency ke cheif ke sath milkar desh2 par hamla kar dete hai or vaha magar vaha sab kamzorr padh jate hai or mahakaal sabki raksha karta hai or Sunaina ko dubara vaha se bhez deta hai or bad me Sunaina ko pata chalta hai ki Sunaina ke nakli mata pita jinda hai or Sunaina rohan ke ghar me rehne lag jati hai or bina rohan se mile or sochti hai ki Rohan ne hii usse yaha reh ko kaha hai

vahi raajlok ki sena Sunaina ke raksha ke liye Sunaina ki raksha karti hai

vahi rahul sonam se milta hai or rahul or sonam ka sex hota hai jisse sonam raajlok ka satya jaan jati hai jaha rahul ke punar janam rohan ke roop me hua tha
or rahul ke 8 sister hoti hai

sonali sabse jyada rahuul kobpyaar karti hai or uska dukh dard ka ehsas sabse pehle sonali ko ho jata hai or rahul bhi sonali ko sabse jyada pyaar karta hai

vahi payal jo rahul ki bhan hoti hai vo bhi rahul ka dard samazti hai

or ruchi or nisha bhi rahul ki hoti bhan hai or mazak masti karti rehti hai or I,me sabse aachi khasiyat yeh hoti hai ki or sabse se mazak masti or apni baato me sabko Mohit kar leti hai

vahi sonam ke ghar par kuch rakshas hamla kar dete hai jab sonam ko rahul or uski sab bhan kahi bhar gaye hue thi
magar vo rakshas kamyab nahi ho pate kiuki sonam ke ghar par ek dibba rakha hota hai jisse anek rakshas der jate hai or vaha se bhag jate hai magar isme sonam ke mata pita ko chot or dard hota hai or jab rahul sonam ko uske ghar chorta hai to vaha pata chalta hai ki sonam ke mata pita jhakmi hai or sab sonam ke mata pita se milte hai usse me vaha rakha hua vo dibba me se rahul ke ane se dyna Azad ho jati hai or sab ko nukahan pochane lagti hai or fir rahul ki sab behne dyna ko maar kar bhaga deti hai
or rahul apne ghar ke liye nikal jata hai


kahani abhi yahi tak hai

Agar koi dout ho to puch lena bhai mein ne puri story short me tume bata di

And thanks for supporting bhai
 

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