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Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

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Ye wala update Maine bhi read ni Kia phr se full update do


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Koshish kijiye update likhne ki .
Ham to summary se bhi kaam chala lenge .
Awesome story


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Update 65

rahul sukanya ko shantana dete hue bolta hai
rahul : tum dukhi mat ho sukanya koi na koi rasta me awasya nikal luga

aise hii sab bhojan karte hai or rahul bahar so jata hai ek dari bicha kar or dono maa beti ander kamre me so jati hai .

Ab aaagge

Raat me bahar ek khatiya bichakar so raha hota hai
tabi aadhi raat ke samay ko rahul ke pass ata hai
or rahul ke mathe ko chumkar bolta hai

shaks : rahul mujhe vishwas tha ki tum mayavi lok jarur aaoge
mein ne tumara mayavi lok me pata nahi kitni sadiyo se intzaar Kiya hai

shaks ( rahul ke chehre ko hath me lekar ) : mujhe visvaas tha ki tumara punar janam jaroor hoga yeh mayavilok ki dharti sukhi dharti aaj tumare dubara ane se khil utegi

shaks ( rahul ka vo manmohak pyara sa chehre dekhte hue us shaks ke asu aa jate hai ) : rahul kitne sadiyo se mein tume dubara dekhne ke kiye tarasi hu
magar rahul yeh ek mayavi lok hai yaha har kuch maya hai jisko tume shamajh na hoga mujhe pura visvaas hai ki tum jo Rohan or Sunaina ke baare me janne yaha aae ho vo tum jaan paoge

or dubara se vo shaks rahul ke chehre par ek kiss karke gayab ho jata hai

tabi rahul ki aakh khul jati hai.

rahul chora taraf dekhne lagta hai magar rahul ko koi dekhai nahi deta

rahul ( mann me ) : khon tha yaha kya koi mujh se baat kar raha tha abhi kya koi mujhe janta hai yaha

rahul man me sochte hue : aae nahi mera koi vegan hoga

fir rahul ko apna chehra thoda gila lagta hai

Rahul ( mann me hairani se ) : yeh mera chehra gila kese ho gaya kya kisi ne mujhe kiss kiya hai

yeh sab sochte hue rahul dubara neend ki aaghos mein chala jata hai

subha rahul ki awaaz ek surilee awaaz se khulti hai
jo ek madur aawaaz me bhagwan Shiv ki puja kar rahi hoti hai yeh or koi nahi sukanya thi jo mahadev ki puja kar rahi thi
Sukanya ke ghar ke bagal me hii ek mandir tha yaha sukanya hamesha mahadev ki puja karti thi magar rahul ka pata nahi kya mann hua

rahul bhi jaldi se naha donkar tyaar hota hai or us mandir ki taraf chal drta hai
jaise hii rahul mandir me apna per rakhta hai vaise hii anek ko ghantiya mandir ki bazane lagti hai jisse puja karte huee mandir ke pujari bhi hairan hojate hai sath sukanya jo mahadev ki puja kar rahi thi uski puje se man hatkar rahul ki taraf chala jata hai.

Jo bhi logh mandir mein puja kar rahe the aise ghantiya bajne se jab hairan ho jate hai
jabki rahul bhi hairan tha ki yeh sab kya ho raha hai

jaise hii rahul mandir ki seedi chadne lagta hai vaise vaise mandir ke Dipak me jalne lagte hai or vaha ke Dipak ka ujala us mandir ki sundarta ko or bada deta hai vo mandir aise chamakne lagta hai jaise koi divya prakash chamak raha ho
yeh divya prakash door door tak chamak raha tha

jaise hii rahul sab seedi Chad jata hai vaise vaha ka pujari rahul ke pass akar rahul se bolta hai

pujari : tum khon ho putra

rahul pehle pujari ko pranam karta hai or fir unka ashirvaad lekar bolta hai

rahul : pujari jii mera naam rahul hai or mein ne yaha se surilee awaz suno to me yaha a gaya

pujari pehle rahul ko dhyaan se dekhta hai fir bolta hai

pujari ( rahul ko ghoorte hue ) : mein ne pahle to tume yaha nahi dekha or tumare pehnabe de aisa lagta hai ki tum mayavi lok ke nahi ho

tabi piche se sukanya aati hai rahul ke is mandir me kadam rakhne se sukanya ke bhi chehre ka Tezz bohot jyada bad gaya tha
sukanya pujari se bolti

sukanya : pujari baba yeh is lok se nahi dharti lok se aya hai
Jo hume dristi ke atyachar se mukt kar bana chahata hai

pujari rahul ko goor kar : yeh ek manushye hai

sukanya : ha pujari baba hai to yeh ek manushya

pujari : to tum dharti lok se mayavilok kese aa gae kya tum bhi mayavi vidhya jante ho

rahul Sheetal mann se : nahi pujari jii mein koi mayavi vidhya nahi janta or fir rahul pujari ko puri baat bata deta hai jis ko sunkar pujari bhi hairan ho jate hai ( bas yeh nahi batata ki usko mata parvati ne yaha bheza hai kiu mata parvati ne rahul ko is bare me batane se mana kiya tha )

pujari : to tum Rohan or Sunaina ke baare mein yaha yaha janne aae ho
or isse iksha ( desire ) ne tume yaha bhez diya

pujari : vaise khon shaks tha jisne tume yaha bheza yaha ana kisi shadaran shaks ke liye mana hai

rahul sehazta se bolta hai : pujari jii mein yeh to nahi janta ki mujhe kis ne yaha bheza hai.
or maya se to mera door door tak ka nata nahi hai or mein yaha ke baare mein bhi kuch nahi janta

pujari : putra tum yaha ke baare mein nahi jante fir bhi yaha aa gae or dristi jaise shaktishali mayavi ko marne ki bhi sochi hai. Tum pata hai bina maya ke to tume yaha ka ek bacha bhi mar dega

Rahul : pujari jii marna or marna yeh to upar vale ke hath mein hai hum ya aap yeh nahi bata sakte ki khon kisko mar sakta hai or khon mar sakta hai

fir rahul ko dhyaan se dekhte hai or fir mushkurate hue bolte hai

pujari : achi baat hai tum baate achi kar lete ho putra
aao yaha aarti ho rahi hai tum bhi isme bhag lo or prasad khakar hii yaha se jana

tabi sukanya bolti hai bade pyaar se : pujari baba yeh yaha ki rani se milna chahate hai aap to har subha aarti ke baad rani ke pass jakar unko mahadev ka prasad dete hai jo aap kiu na rahul ko bhi sath lejakar unko rani se milva de

pujari mushkurakar : kiu nahi beti hum jarur rahul ko rani se milvaege

is mandir me aakar rahul ka mann bilkul Sheetal ho gaya tha na koi tention na koi vichaar magar or bhi bohot kuch tha is mandir me jo rahul ka nahi pata tha

fir dheere dheere mandir kar prakash dheere dheere lupt hone lag jata hai or fir kahi gayab ho jata hai.

or fir rahul aarti me bhag lekar mahadev ki aarti sunta hai or fir prasad khakar pujari ke sath rani ke mehal me chal deta hai

or vahi sukanya apne ghar chali jati hai .

raste me pujari rahul se bolta hai : putra tume dekhkar pata nahi mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tume mere purvaj jante hai

rahul : pata nahi pujari ji magar me to is mayavi lok me pehli baar aya hue or ha yeh ho sakta hai ki aapke purvaj dharti lok me aae ho to jarur dekha ho sakta hai magar yeh bhi shambhav nahi kiuki aap hii mujhe itne bade hai to us time mera janam bhi shambhav nahi hoga
haa punar janam jaror ho sakta hai jab apke purvaaj mujhe jante hoge

pujari ji mushkurate hue : haa yeh ho sakta hai kiuki hamara bhootkal hii hamare vartman ka nirman karta hai or hamare varman kaal se hii bhavisya kaal ka nirman hota hai.

iase hii baat karte hue rahul mahel pohoch jata hai

tabi jaise hii rahul aage badte hai ke sanik rahulbko rok deta hai

senik : aare yaha kaha ghusa jaa raha hai tuze pata nahi ki yeh raaj mehal hai yaha aise hii koi nahi aa sakta

tabi pujari baba : senik yeh hamare sath hai isko ane do

fir senik kuch nahi bolta kiuki yeh pujari mandir ki puja karne ke sath sath yaha ke raaj guru bhi the

senik pujari ko pranam karke rahul ko ander jane dete hai.

Jaise hii pujari ji rani ke kaksh me pohochte hai
rani unko dekhe hii pranam karti hai.

rani : raaj guru Keshri ko sumitra ka praman

Keshri : sada khuss raho putri

sumitra ki nazar jaise hii rahul par parti hai vaise hii muskurate hue bolti hai

sumitra : aao rahul yaha ashan ghiren ( baitho )

rahul shocked hokar : apko kese pata ki mera naam rahul hai

hairaan to raaj guru Keshri bhi the magar fir raaj guru Keshri mushkurate hue bolte hai

keshri : putra rahul yeh ek rani ke sath sath ek rishi kanya bhi hai is bajase unko rajya me khon hai or khon kis uddeshya se unse milne aya hai vo sab janti hai

rahul hairani se : aisa hai kya

or fir rahul or raaj guru Keshri rani sumitra ke kamre me ek ashan par baith jate hai

sumitra halki mushkurahat ke sath : to tum Rohan or Sunaina ki pram katha sunne aae ho

rahul : jii rani

sumitra : us khata ko jaane ke liye tume pehle dristi ka vadh karna hoga or jiska bharosa tum pehle hii sukanya ko dila chuke ho

rahul : magar mein dristi ko kese maar sakta hue or mein to dristi kya is mayavi lok ke baare mein bhi kisi ko nahi janta

sumitra ke chehre par ek alag hii Tezz tha yeh ek maya thi ya kuch or iska janna abhi baki tha : yeh to tumne pata hona chahiye ki tum dristi ko kese maroge kiuki dristi ko marne ka bharosa tumne sukanya ko dilaya hai or rahi janne ke baat to me is mayavi lok ke baare mein jo bhi pata hai vo mein tume bata deti hue
kiuki jabse mera janam hue hai tabse mein jitna jaan pai yeh mein bata deti hue to dhyaan se suno.


Sumitra : suna hai is lok mein Rohan or unki patni Sunaina ka shashan ya bhi kheh sakte ho ki unka raaz chalta tha jinhone anek rajyo ko milakar is mayavi lok ka nirman kiya tha har kiuki un rajyo par kisi na kisi rajyo par koi na koi dusman hamla kar deta tha or us rajya ki praja or us hamle me bohot nukhsan hota or vo rajya bhi kisi na kisi dushman ke hamle se dheere dheere kamjor ho jata tha or dusman is fyda uthakar us rajya or us Raja se cheen lete

isse rajao mein bohot khof tha is bajase sab rajao ne ek nirnay kiya ki hum sab rajkumar Rohan ke pass jaege us samay Rohan ek rajkumar the kiuki unka rajya ek bohot Vishal tha or taqatvaar bhi jispar koi dushman hamla karne se pehle hazaar baar sochta tha
sab raja rohan ke pass jakar apne rajya ki katha sunai

to Rohan ne bola ( sab rajao se ) : mein tumari koi madad nahi kar sakta kiuki tum hamare rajya se alag ho kiuki agar mei ek rajya ki raksha karuga to tumara koi dushman dusare rajya par hamla kar dega agar dusare rajyako bachauha to koi teesre rajya par humla kar dega
aise mein tumari madad kis prakar kar pauga

tabi ek raja ne bola : rajkumar koi to upay hoga jisse hum sab is hamle se bhi bach jae or humare rajya ki praja bhi is hamle se bachi rahe

rohan ( mushkurakar ) : iska ek upay hai ki mei saare rajyo ko milakar ek lok ka nirman kary or us par hamare pita ka shashan rahe jisse hamari saari sena is lok ki seema par tehnaat ho gaegi

Rohan ki yeh baat sunkar sab raja or rani khuss ho gaye

tabi Rohan ne kaha : magar isme ek shamasya hai

Tabi ek rani boli : kaise samasya

Rohan : itni vishal sena or lok ka nirman karne itna ashan nahi hoga kiuki uske liye aap sab ko meri adhinta shuikaar (mere adhin rehna ) karna hogi kiuki itni vishal sena ko raksha ke liye mujhe anek rajyo se kar bhi vasoolna hoga or aap mere pita ki agya ka palan karte hue aap sukhi purvak apna raaj chalate rahege

thodi khusar phusar karne ke baad saab raja or rani ne haa bol diya

uske baad kisi bhi dushman ka itna sahas nahi hua ki anek rajyo se bana yeh mayavi lok par koi hamla kar sake
or is lok ke raja rohan ke pita the jo ban mein Rohan ban gaya
sab khusi khusi apna rajya chalate or jis rajya par koi musibat aati to Rohan us rajya ki har tarah se madad karta or mayavi lok ki janta bhi or anek raja aise maharaaj pakar dhanya ho gaye the
aise hii din beethne lage or sab hasi khusi reh rahe the

Fir ek din aise khatna ghati ki jisne sab kuch uzad diya
pata chala kisi Rohan or Sunaina ek pahari se khud gaye or kisi or pata nahi chala ki vo kaha gaye
rohan ki mout se sab raja or unki phanta bohot dukhi thi
tabi

Kisi ne hamare lok par hamla kar diya
to sab raja or raniyo ne milkar mayavi lok ki raksha karte rahe is aash me ki Rohan or Sunaina vapis jaroor aaege

bina maharaaj ke mayavi lok ki sena kab tak tik har hamle se ladte rahe

aise hiii kuch saal bit gaye

tabi ek hamla hua or us hamle me mayavi lok ki halat bohot kharab hone lagi mayavilok ki sena mein hahakar machne laga
tabi ek ladki ne aakar apni shaktiyo se mayavi lok ki raksha ki

Or us ladki ne aakar sabhi rajao se kaha

Ladki ( sab rajao se ) : mein tumare maharaaj rohan ki badi bhan dayna hue or rohan kisi karye hetu bahar gaye hai or jab tak rohan nahi aa jata unhone mujhe is mayavi lok ka karya bhar shamalne ko kaha hai

tabi ek raja bola : hum kese maan le ki tum Rohan ki badi bhan ho kya pata hamare maharaaj rohan ki anupasti me yaha hamla karne aaeho

fir dayna ne rohan ki badi bhan hone ke kuch saboot diye jisse yeh vishwas ho gaya ki yeh dayna rohan ki badi bhan hai
fir dyna rohan ke absence me mayavilok ka karya bhar shamalne lagi

or koi bhi mayavilok par hamla karta dyna us shaks ko jaad sahit khatam kar deti

kiuki dyna mein na koi daya tha na koi achi bhawna

is time dyna is lok ki maharani hai or dristi uska sena pati
Magar dristi ne har rajyo ki ladkiyo par buri nazar rakhni chalu kar di
or jo ladki usko pasand aati or us ladki se sath balatkaar kar leta ya usse shadi kar leta
To ek din sabhi raja or rani iski suchana dene maharani dyna ke pass pohoch magar dyna ne ek na suni or kaha. Jabardasti shaadi karna or balatkar karna koi paap nahi hota yeh bolkar sab rajao ko vaha se bhez diya

rahul dyna ka naam sunkar chock gaya tha

or uski kahani or shaktiya ka varnan sunkar bhi hairan tha

rahul ( mann me) : to kya dyna sach me rohan ki badi bhan hai prerna ne to kaha tha ki dyna rohan se shadi karna chahati thi
Ye kaise ho sakta hai agar dyna rohan ki badi bhan hai to vo rohan se shadi kese kar sakti hai


RAHUL

tabi ek aawaaz aae jisse sunkar rahul fir hairaan ho gaya
rahul ne piche palat kar dekha
Bahot shaandaar update dost
 

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Vaise dekhta hu shayad update me jaye thodi kosis karke dekhta hu vaise me phone me back up hai shayad usse kuch ho jaye
Ho jaye to achha hi h warna improvement points dikha ke ek update main likh do bhai
 

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Update 58

Car bahar nikalte hii apne normal tarike se chalne lagti hai

Sab car ko dekh rahe the or heeran the ke yeh khonsi car hai jo bohot stylish or sundar hai

Magar unme se kuch logh us car ko or usme baithi sunaina ko dekhkar goli chalana start kar dete hai or lagatar firing karne lag jate hai .

Ab aagee...

Magar isse us car mein koi fark nahi padta

Raste me sunaina tiger se

Sunaina : tiger navratri ka saman ate samay le lege sahil se milne ke baad

Tiger : jaise aap thik samjhe sister

Sunaina ( chidate hue ) : vaise tiger vaha roma Bhi hogi

Tiger ( mann me ) : yeh sister to mera picha hii nahi chorne wali roma ka naam lekar or pata nahi roma ka naam sunkar meri dharkane itni tezz kiu ho jati hai
Jab vo samne ati hai to aisa lagta hai ki bas mein usko dekhta rahu or jab door jati hai to aise lagta hai ki koi mere sarir se meri atma ko nikal kar le ja raha hai kya sach mein mujhe roma se pyaar ho gaya hai
Ya yeh sirf ek attraction hai

Roma ka vo pyara sa chehra jheel se akhe

Tabi
Sunaina tiger ko hilate hue

Sunaina ( katilana muskurahat ) : tiger kha kho gaye kahi firse roma ke baare me to nahi sochne lage

Tiger har bara jata hai or harbarate hue sunaina se bolta hai

Tiger : nahi sister bilkul nahi mein roma ke bare mein to bilkul nahi soch raha tha

Tabi
Car ek traffic me rukh jati hai or car ek car sunaina ke car ke bagal mein rukh jati hai

Sunaina or tiger bato mein lage hue the or udhar dusari car wala sunaina ko dekhkar muskurane lag jata hai

Us car mein karib 7 logh the

Ladka ( dusare ladke se ) : bhai dekh yeh ladki ( sunaina ) wahi hai jisne us din traffic par hamara accident karwaya tha

Ladka 2 : haa yaar yeh to vahi hai aaj isko nahi choege

Ladka 2 ladka 3 se : tu ek kaam kar sabse pehle iski tanki ka petrol nikal de jisse yeh bhag na paye nahi to us din ki tarha yeh dubara bhag jayegi

Or ladka 3 sunaina ki car ke pass jakar petrol ki tanki dekhne lag jata hai magar isko tanki nahi milti

Ladka 3 ( mann me sar khujate hue ) : bahanchod iski car mein to petrol ki tanki hii nahi hai

Vapas akar ladka 3 us ladke se
Ladka 3 : bhai iski car mein to petrol ki tabki hii nahi hai

Ladka 2 ( gusse mein ) : abe dhyaan se dekh har car mein petrol ki tanki hoti hai jisse car chalti hai
Bahanchod yeh koi new car thodi tha jise petrol ki tanki nahi hai abhi duniya itni bhi advance nahi hue hai

Magar isko kya pata ki yeh car kis khet ki muli hai :roflol:

Ladka 3 : bhai sach mein petrol ki tanki nahi hai car mein

Ladka 1 : ek kaam kar tu iski car ka tayer panchar kar de

Ladka dubara sunaina ki car ke piche jata hai or sunaina ki car ki hawa nikal ne lag jata hai

Magar yeh kya us car ko jab us ladke ne dhyaan se dekha to us car ke tayar mein pehle se hii hawa bhi nahi thi

Ab ladka 3 ko gussa a jata hai

Ladka 3 ( mann me ) : bhanchod is car mein hawa bhi nahi hai petrol ki tanki bhi nahi hai
Udhar vo bhan ke. Lawde bol rahe hai car ki hawa nikal petrol ki tanki se petrol nikal

Or gusse mein vo ladka us car par kheech kar apna per ( leg ) marta hai jisse car ko gussa a jata hai or car ek pipe se uska leg pakar leti hai or tabi traffic signal green ho jata hai or vo ladka ghisarta hua gane lagta hai .

Ladka 3 ( chillate hue ) : are sallo bacho
Bhai bacha lo mujhe

Ladka 1 ( chillate hue ) : chuchu ( us ladke ka naam ) mein aa raha hue vo log sunaina ke car ke piche apni car bhagane lag jate hai or thodi door me vo car us ladke ko chor deti hai
Or kala dua uske chehre ( face ) par markar chali jati hai

Car ( man me ) : mujh se panga

Or tabi us ladke 3 ka dost bhi pohoch jata hai

Or ladka 1 ( ladka 3 se ) : chuchu tu thik hai na

Ladka 3 ( ladke se gusse mein ) : bhanchod ghanta thik hue
Ladka 3 apni pit ( back ) pakarte hue

Chuchu gusse me : aaaahhh puri pit chil gaye hai is ladki ko choruga nahi
Sala bhar mein gaya suraj bhai ka pyaar is ladki ko to choruga sala ulta latka ke balatkaar karuga iska

Ladka ( chuchu se ) : bhai tu tension mat le yeh kal se to college aaegi hii na kiuki kal se college shuru ho raha hai dekh lege usko college mein or kuch bhi karne se pehle hame suraj bhai se baat kar leni chahiye
Kiuki pura state unki pocket mein hai

Sab chuchu ko shamjate hue : ha bhai hume suraj bhai se baat kar leni chaiye pehle to chal doctor ke pass thodi dawai lagvane


Or sunaina ko is baare mein kuch pata nahi tha kiuki vo to tiger ko roma ka naam lekar cherne mein lagi hue thi

Or tabi sunaina us hospital mein pohoch jati hai jaha sahil admit tha

Or car ko park karke sahil ke pass chali jati hai
Sahil bed par leta hua tha or uske pass roma or nishant bhi baithe hue the

Or sahil sunaina ko dekhte hii uthne lag jata hai

Tabi

Sunaina ( door se hii ) : sahil late raho abhi tume uttne ki jaruraat nahi hai
Kiuki tume utne mein takleef hogi

Sahil ( mann me ) : kitni achi hai sunaina mere bare mein kitna sochti hai issi bajase to mujhe sunaina se pyar hua tha

Sahil ( dukhi mann se ) : magar ab kar bhi kya sakte hai ki sunaina kissi or se pyaar karti hai

Fir achanak sahil ki nazar roma par jati hai
Kiuki roma ne bhi uska bohot khayal rakha tha kadam kadam par uski help ki thi

Sahil ( muskurate hue mann me ) : chalo sunaina na sahi roma hi sahi.
Magar roma mujhe to apna dost manti hai kya vo mujhse pyaar karne ki ready hogi
Kya vo meri gf banegi
Mujhe pehle pata lagana hoga ki roma mere baare mein kya sochti hai

Sahil yahi soch raha tha

Vahi us ladko ki kismar thi ya kuch or kiuki vo ladke vahi hopital mein chuchu ko doctor ke pass dikane aae jaha sahil admit tha

Or vaha chuchu sunaina ko dekhte hii aag babula ho gaya


Tabi
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Sahil yahi soch raha tha

Vahi us ladko ki kismar thi ya kuch or kiuki vo ladke vahi hopital mein chuchu ko doctor ke pass dikane aae jaha sahil admit tha

Or vaha chuchu sunaina ko dekhte hii aag babula ho gaya



Chalo chalte hai bhagwan lok ki taraf

Jaise hii rahul kisi ko apne samne dekhta hai vaise hii samne se mata parvati aa jati hai
Mata parvati rahul se : kya hua putra
Rahul samne dekhta hai to samne koi nahi hota

Rahul ( chock kar ) : mata abhi mere samne ek shaks khada tha abhi achanak gayab ho gaya
Mata parvati bade pyaar se : putra shayad tumara bharam hoga
Chalo jaldi bhojan ban gaya hai aaj mein apne hatho se tumko bhojan karugi

Vahi door se ganesh jii yeh baat sun lete hai ki unki mata is ladke ko bhojan khilaegi or ganesh jii bhagte hue mata parvati ke pass ate hai

Ganesh jii udas man se : mata aap is ladke ko bhojan khila rahi ho or aap ka putra to bhuka hai apko hamari koi bhi fikar nahi hai.

Mata parvati ( haste hue ) : putra tumare liye bhi to bohot sare modak humne banaye hai

Ganesh jii modak ka naam sunkar khusi se nachne lag jate hai

Ganesh jii khus hokar : sach mata

Fir mata parvati ganesh jii or rahul ko apne hato se bhojan khilati hai

Rahul jaise hii bhojan ka ek nivala mata parvati ke hatho se khata hai vaise hii rahul ka dil bhar jata hai or rahul ke akho se ashu tapakne jate hai jaise pure jaha ka pyaar aaj usko apni mata ke is nivale mein mil gaya tha

Kiuki aaj tak rahul ko itne itne pyaar se kisi ne khana nahi khilaya tha sirf sonali ko chor kar

Mata parvati : kya hua putra bhojan acha nahi laga



Rahul khuss hokar : nahi mata bhojan bohot swadisht hai magar pata nahi mere aakh ( eye ) se ashu rukh nahi rahe hao yeh to ek dhara ki tarha pata nahi behte jaa rahe hai aisa lag raha hai ki mujhe sab kuch mil gaya jiske liye shayad mein pata nahi kitne janmo se taras raha tha
Mein pyaar ko shamaj hii nahi paya ki pyaar kya hota hai or aaj tak isse anjan hu


Rahul mata parvati se puchte hue : mata kya apko pata hai pyaar kya hota hai
Kiuki mujhe aaj tak yeh pata hii nahi chala ki sacha pyaar kya hota hai
Meine hamesha logo ke mann mein nafraat , lalach , irsha or havas ke hii bhav dekhe hai.
Koi prani keisa bhi hota is kalyug mein pyaar ko chorkar aise bhaw ko prakat karta hai.
Is kalyug mein mein logo ke pyaar mein bhi lalach chupi hoti hai.
Jab hum usko pyaar karte ho tabi koi hume hume pyaar karta hai kya yahi pyaar hai .

Mata parvati shamaj jati hai ki ab vo samaj aa gaya hai jisme vo khud ke astitv matalb apne aap ko ko pehchanega
Ab usko us jagah bhejna hoga jaha ko dharti rahul ko apne astitv ko pura karne ke liye pukar rahi hai vo barso se rahul ke intzaar mein itne kast jhel rahi hai.

Mata parvati ( haste hue rahul ke gaal sehrate hue ) : ha bilkul mujhe pata hai putra ki pyaar kya hota hai

Rahul ( khuss hokar ) : to mata kya aap mujhe batao gi ki pyaar kya hota hai kaisa hota tha

Mata parvati ( kuch soche hue ) : nahi putra yeh shambhav nahi hai



Mata parvati : iska tume khud pata karna hoga or usko tume khud mehsus karna hoga

Rahul niraas ho jata hai

Mata parvati jab dekhti hai ki rahul niraas ho gaya hai

Mata parvati pyaar se : iske liye mein tume rasta jarur dikha sakti hue jaha tum ek aise prem ghata jaan paoge jo tumare astitv ko ek nayi pehchan degi or tumare mann mein utt rahe prashan ka jawab degi

Rahul : kese mata

Mata parvati : tume mayavi lok jana hoga vahi tume apne saare sawal ka jawab milega or rohan ke baare mein jaankari milegi

Rahul ( khuss hokar ) : sach mata

Rahul fir thoda niras hokar

Rahul : or mahakaal ke baare mein

Mata parvati : putra samay se pehle kuch shambhav nahi hota ek baat yaad rakhna samay se pehle agar tum kuch bhi janoge to usse tume sirf dard hii milega

Rahul : mata vo samay kab aaega

abhi tak to readers ka update nahi aya or yeh rahul samay ki baat kar raha hai. :roflol:


Mata parvati : uske liye tume intzaar karna hoga

Rahul rote hue : mata mere ghar vaha meri bhane dukhi hogi kiuki saare bhano ka mein hii akela bhai hue ( ab isme khus hona chahiye ki dukhi yeh to readers ke upar hai :roflol:) sab mujhe bohot pyaar karti hai magar aaj tak mein pyaar hii nahi shamaj paya ( yeh bolna kya chahata hai :roflol:jhatka to tab isse lagega jab yeh khuko vaha dekhe ga :roflol:)

Rahul rote hue : mata kya mein apne ghar mein sabko dekh sakta hue mujhe pata hai meri sonali didi ka haal to bohot bura hoga

Mata parvati : putra vaha sab thik hai agar tum pyaar ya rohan ke baare mein mein janna chahate ho to tume moh maya ka tyaag karna hoga or apne laksh ki or badna hoga

Rahul : fir bhi mata mein ek baar apne saare parivaar ko dekhna chahata hue

Ab yeh itna joor de hii raha hai to isko dusara rahul dika hii dete hai :roflol:


Mata parvati rahul ko ek dirashye se sab kuch dikate hue


Rahul ( chock kar ) : yeh mari tarha dikne wala shaks khon hai mata

Mata parvati : yeh tum hii to ho

Rahul pagalo ki tarha acting karte hue

Rahul : mata aisa jurm mat karo mein to yaha hue to yeh kon naya aa gaya mata yeh koi bhej rupiya hai jo mere ghar mein rahul bankar ghuss gaya hai .

Tabi rahul ko ek awaaz ati hai

Awaaz : abe ooo acting ki dukan sudhar ja kiuki vo tu hii hai


Rahul harbarate hue

Rahul idhar udhar dekhte hue : khon hai

Mata parvati : rahul meine kaha na tum jitna janoge utna hii tum shamaj nahi payoge isliye tum vo sab moh maya tyag do

Rahul ( mata parvati se ) : mata kaise tyaag du yeh moh maya vo sab meri bhane hai or vaha koi behrupiya ghuss gaya hai

Or aap bol rahi ho moh maya tyaag do rahul moh maya tyaag do

Mata parvati ( mann mein apne sir par hath rakhte hue ) : bhagto mein yahi problem hai jitne jankari mile usse khuss nahi hote or jankari janna chahate hai jaise is dharti log ke scientist chand tak tak pohoch ne ke baad bhi bhagwaan tak pohochna chahate hai .

Mata parvati ( dhaatte hue ) : tume mayavi lok jana hai

Rahul ( mann mein ) : ab fir koi sawal pucha to kahi mata mujhe mayavi lok na bheje jitna mil raha hai utna hii le leta hue
Baaki ka badme dekhege

( Mata parvati shamjha shamjha ke pareshan ho gae magar insaan to dhaatt kar hii samajta hai . :roflol:)
Ab yeh mat sochna ki insaab galtiyo ka ek putla hai .

Rahul haa mein garden hila deta hai.

Mata parvati kuch mantra padhkar ek shaks ko bulate hue .

Mata parvati ( rahul se ): putra yeh tume mayavi lok tak pohocha dega magar age ka safar tume akele hii pura karna hoga .

Rahul haa mein garden hilata hai

Or mata parvati ke charan ( per , leg ) chu kar ashirvaad leta hai


Mata parvati : sada khuss raho putra

Or nikal jata hai rahul apne sawalo or astitv ki talash karne mayavi lok

Jaise hii rahul mayavi lok pohochta hai.

Shaks : yaha se mayavi lok ki sima churu hoti hai.
Ab age ka safar apko khud hii pura karna padega

Or vo shaks vaha se bhagwaan lok chala jata hai.

Or rahul akele hii age chalne lag jata hai

Or jaise hii rahul mayavi lok ki dharti par apne charan rakhta hai vaise hii mayavi lok ki dharti mein jaan aa jati hai or sab ped phode khil utte hai har jagah se rahul ko ek aawaaz sunai dene lagti hai.


Pyaar ek paheli dard ki saheli zindagi to hai moh maya atma hii hai voh kaya.

Yeh awaaz sunte hii rahul ka sir ( head ) dard hone lagta hai or achanak ek tasveer bohot tezz ghumte lagti hai or ek jagah par rukh jati hai.

Jaha par ek ladki or ek ladka puri tarha khoon mein latpat the or ek veer ke the tarha lad rahe the. Charo taraf sirf mayavi sipahi hii khade the or ek shaks ne un dono ladke or ladki ko bandh rakha tha ek aag ki tarha jalti rassi se
Ladke ke muh se khoon ki dhaar tap tap ki awaaz lete hue gir rahi thi
Dono ladki or ladke ko na to mout ka koi bhey tha nahi dukh ki shikan bas dono ke chehre par kuch tha to vo khussi or sarir mein ek alokik tez tha

Ladke ki aakh se bhi khoon ki dhara beh rahi thi magar fir bhi khussi se

Ladka us larki se : tumara dard mujhe bardast nahi hota priye mere dil ke haazar tukre ho gaye hai aaj meine tume bohot dhuk diya hai
Tum jaha se chali jao

Ladki na to roo rahi thi or naa hi ashu baha rahi thi kiuki us ladki ko pata tha ki agar uske aakh se ek ashu bhi nikla to anarth ho jayega kiuki uska pyaar yeh bardast nahi kar payega or fir vo hoga jiski kissi ne koi kalpana bhi nahi ki hogi.

Ladki ( khussi se haste hue us ladke ko sehlate hue ) : tumara naam pata hai mein ne rohan kiu rakha hai

Ladka us ladki ke aakho mein dekhte hue ) : kiu


Ladki dard mein bhi haste hue : kiuki tum hamesha rote rehte ho

Ladki ( dard bhari awaaz se ) : are tum yeh kiu nahi samajhte ki


Pyaar ek paheli dard ki saheli zindagi to hai moh maya atma hii hai vo kaya

Tabi ek dusari ladki vaha se bhagte hue ati hai or piche se us shaks ke samne khadi ho jati hai jis shaks ne un ladki or us ladke rohan ko us aag ki bani rassi se pakad rakha tha

Ladki 2 ( us shaks se ): tumne mujhe dhoka diya kiu kiu kiu

Or vo ladki us shaks ke sine par ghuse marne lagti hai.

Or vo shaks apni sena mein se ek aadmi ko ishara karta hai or vo shaks us ladki ko pakar kar le jaa raha tha
Tabi

Ladki 2 us aadmi ka hath chudakar

Ladki 2 us shaks se rote hue : tum kya sochte ho tum apne makshad mein safal ho jaoge nahi tum kabi us makshad mein kamyab nahi ho sakte


Or uske baad vo ladki un dono ladka or ladki ko pakar kar apne seene se laga leti hai or in teeno ke sangam se ek tezz roshni nikalti hai or fir ek tezz vispot hota hai jisse aas pass ki sab sena khatam ho jati hai or vo roshni gayab ho jati hai.

Shaks jisne un ladko ladki ko pakra hua tha sirf vo bacha hota hai or ek do logh or

Shaks : nahi aisa nahi ho. Sakta mein dubara asafal nahi ho sakta

Or isse ke sath vo yaad khatam ho jati hai.

Uske aakh se aashu ki vishal dhara bheh rahi hoti hai.

Rahul bohot tezz chillane lag jata hai

Rahul ko aisa lagta hai ki uske sarir se atma kisi ne nikal kar apne kabje mein kar li ho

Rahul kya bol raha tha usko khud hii nahi pata tha.
Rahul : nahi tum mujhe chor kar nahi jaaa sakti sunaina hamare pyaar ka ant the nahi ho sakta vo to anant hai fir tum mujhe chor kar kiu chali gayi


Rahul apne vartman mein ate hue

Rahul ( shocked hokar ) : yeh sunaina khon hai yeh rohan khon hai kya inse mera koi ghera shamband hai or kya vo ladke or ladki or dusari ladki khon thi or vo shaks khon tha jisne usko aag ki rassiyo se pakar rakha tha


Or is paheli ka kya raaz hai kya matlab hai iska

Rahul : mujhe mata ne yaha kiu bheja hai
Kya isliye bheja hai ki mein rohan or sunaina ke baare mein jaan saku ya fir koi or hii makshad hai .

Rahul apni bhavnao ko kabu karke or apne ashu pohoch kar jaise hii khada hota hai or age badne lag jata hai

Vaise hii kuch achanak kuch aise hota hai ki rahul kuch shamaj hii nahi pata or

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khon hai yeh rohan khon hai kya inse mera koi ghera shamband hai or kya vo ladke or ladki or dusari ladki khon thi or vo shaks khon tha jisne usko aag ki rassiyo se pakar rakha tha

Or is paheli ka kya raaz hai kya matlab hai iska

Rahul : mujhe mata ne yaha kiu bheja hai
Kya isliye bheja hai ki mein rohan or sunaina ke baare mein jaan saku ya fir koi or hii makshad hai .

Rahul apni bhavnao ko kabu karke or apne ashu pohoch kar jaise hii khada hota hai or age badne lag jata hai

Vaise hii kuch achanak kuch aise hota hai ki rahul kuch shamaj hii nahi pata

Ab aageee

Chalo chalte hai dharti lok mein sonam ki taraf

Vahi sonam or prerna us box ko lekar divya ke pass jane lagte hai ek car mein baith kar magar us box ko pakre hue hone ke karan sonam ke ander azib vichar ane lagte hai or sonam ki harkate bhi azib hone lagti hai kabhi sonam hasne lagti hai to kabhi sonam ko gussa ane lagta hai kabhi dukh ki bhawnaye prakat hone lagti hai
Sonam apne aap ko shamalne ki bohot kosis karti hai kintu us box ke prabhav or usko pakre hone ke karan apne dimag ko istir ( control ) karna muskil hone lagta hai .
Prerna : sonam apne aap ko control karo kiuki is box ke jagrit hone se isme bohot nakaramakta ( nagetive ) shaktiya bhi jagrit ho gai hai jo kabhi nahi chahegi ki koi sacha insaan usko control kar sake kiuki hamesha yugo yugo se achai or burai me jung chalti a rahi hai or hamesha burai sachai par havi hone ki kosis karti hai or uska prahaar sabse jyada dimag par asar dalti hai tum sunaina ka prati roop hai tum yeh kar sakti ho kiuki ant mein hamesha achai ki jeet hoti hai or is box mein jo bhi hai vo tumko nukshan nahi pohocha sakta kiuki yeh box om naam bana hai magar iska asar tumarr dimag par ho sakta hai

Sonam apne dimag ko control karne ki kosis karte hue

Sonam : prerna didi me yeh janti hue magar is box ka prabav bohot jyada hai jiske karan isko control karna mushkil ho raha hai mein aisa kya karu jisse is box ko control karna asan ho sake

Prerna : sonam tumare ander pyaar or vishwas ki saktiya hai yeh mat bhulo apne man ko kabu mein karne ki kosis karo kiuki man ka sidha sambhand chandra ( moon ) se hota hai or moon ke ist dev mahadev hai jinhone moon ko apne sir par dharan kar rakha hai tum bas mahadev ko yaad karo vahi tumko is box ko control karne or isko divya tak pohochane mein madad karege

Sonam jaise hii mahadev apne man ko control karne ki vinti karne wali hoti hai vaise hii sonam ki nazar samne baithe driver par padti hai jisko dekhte hii sonam shocked ho jati hai
Kiuki vo driver bohot hii asib dikh raha tha uski akhe ek dam kali thi uske nakun ek aam insam ke mukable bohot bade or lambe the uska sar baal ( hair ) se nahi balki saap se bhara hua tha jisko dekhkar sonam ghabra jati hai.

Sonam : prerna yeh khon hai

Prerna ki nazar jaise hii us driver par padti hai vo bhi shocked ho jati hai fir prerna ko kuch aisa yaad ata hai jisse prerna or jyada gabra jati hai.

Sonam darte hue us driver se bolti hai

Sonam : khon ho tum

Tabi
Vo driver vahi baithe hue apni garden piche ki taraf ghumata hai or uske sar par jo saap the vo sonam ke ek dam pass a jate hai magar sonam ko koi nukshan nahi pohochane

Driver ( darawwni aawaaz me ) : mein hue aina jisko yeh box chaina hihihihi

Sonam ghabra jati hai or us box ko kas kar jakar leti hai
Jabse sonam ne achanak apne pyaar ka izhar rahul ko kiya tha tabi se yeh sab sonam ke saath ho raha tha kabi rakshak ka uske ghar mein ana is box ko dekhkar un rakshas ka ghabrana kuch rakshas ka marna ab yeh azib sa darawna sakhs pata nahi kaha se achanak aa gaya hai

Yeh sonam ke pyaar ki pariksha hai ya kuch or jiske baare mein sonam abhi bhi anjaan hai
Kya aisa kuch divya ke sath bhi hua hoga

Tabi prerna kuch bolne wali hoti hai ki sonam der ke maare us car de kud jati hai yeh sonam ne kiu kiya iska ahsaas bhi sonam ko nahi tha

Prerna ghabrate hue : ab mein kya karu

Prerna bhi us car se nikalne ki kosis karti hai magar nikal nahi pati koi uska rasta rok raha hota hai magar prerna shamaj nahi pati yeh khon hai

Or vo aina car ko rok kar car se niche utar jati
Prerna ( mann me ) : yeh sab car se niche utar rahe hai to mein kiu niche nahi utar pa rahi hue

Prerna bohot kosis karti hai magar asafal hoti hai prerna ( mann me ) : ab mein kya karu

Prerna abhi yahi soch rahi hoti hai ki prerna achanak apne aap ko apne kamre mein pati hai
Matlab prerna apne aap ko patal lok mein apne kamre mein pati hai.

Prerna : mein yaha kaise pohoch gai mein to dharti lok mein sonam ke pass thi

Patal lok

Jaise hii prerna patal lok mein kamre mein pohoch jati hai to dekhti hai ki koi uske kamre ka gate bohot tez khat khata raha hai
Or jaise hii prerna gate khoti hai to samne apne bade bhi aasur raaj ko pati hai

Jisko dekh kar prerna or ghabra jati hai .
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Patal lok

Jaise hii prerna patal lok mein kamre mein pohoch jati hai to dekhti hai ki koi uske kamre ka gate bohot tez khat khata raha hai
Or jaise hii prerna gate khoti hai to samne apne bade bhi aasur raaj ko pati hai

Jisko dekh kar prerna or ghabra jati hai .

Ab aageee

Asurraaj pyaar se : prerna meri pyaari bhan kabse mein gate khat khata raha hue tum jawab hii nahi de rahi thi

prerna achanak se apne bade bhai ke sawal se ghabra jati hai or haklate hue bolti hai

prerna haklate hue :. Bhaiya vo mein mahadev ki pooja kar rahi thi

asurraaj pyaar ka natak karte hue : acha to hamari pyaar choti bhan mahadev ki pooja kar rahi thi

prerna haa mein sar hila deti hai

prerna : bhaiya aap yaha kuch kaam tha

asurraaj : hamari bhan hamesha apne kamre me rehti hai bohot kam apne kamre se bahar nikalti hai kahi abhi tak hamari bhan humse naraz to nahi hai

aisa asuraaj ne isliye kaha kiuki bohot saalo tak asuraaj ne prerna ko apne kamre mein band kar rakha tha

Ab prerna kya batae ki prerna kamre mein isliye jyada rehti hai kiuki vo apne Rahul ke pass jyada samay tak reh sake

prerna : nahi bhaiya aise kuch nahi hai vo mujhe kamre mein rehna isliye jyada pasand hai kiuki mein hamesha mahadev ki seva karte rahu

assuraaj ( kuch soch kar bade pyaar se gale lagakar :
Acha prerna tumne dharti lok me jane ka koi upay socha jisse hum jaan sake ki Rohan ka janam dharti lok mein kis jagah hua hai or vaha jakar hum apni choti bhan ki shaadi Rohan se kara sake

prerna ko pata tha yeh pyaar to bas dikava hai asal mein uske bade bhai ka makshad kuch or hai.

prerna bhi kam shatir nahi thi kiuki thi to akhir assuraaj ki choti bhan hii

Prerna assuraaj ki baate sunkar rone ka natak karne lagti hai

Prerna rote hue : nahi bhaiya hume abhi tak dharti lok mein jane ka rasta nahi mila mein Rohan ke bina nahi reh sakti bhaiya kuch karo aap hii kuch kar sakte hoo

is baat par assur raaj ko bohot gussa ane laga magar assuraaj apne gusse ko control karte hue

assuraaj : prerna meri pyaari bhan tuze mahadev se dharti lok mein jane ka rasta puchna chahiye

prerna rone ka natak continue karte hue

Prerna : bhaiya mahadev ne abhi tak mujhe dharti lok mein jane ka rasta nahi bataya mein abhi bhi rooz pure din mahadev ki puja karti rehti hue magar abhi tak mujhe mahadev ne darshan nahi diye
bhaiya aap hii kuch upay nikaliye

assuraaj mann me : agar mere pass koi upay hota to muze tere se yeh pyaar ka natak nahi karna hota or vaha jakar us kachre ( Rohan ) ko saaf kar deta jisne aasuraaj ko

yeh sochte hii aasuraaj vaha se gusse mein nikal jata hai


or prerna apne kamre ko band karke Sonam ke pass kese jaye yeh sochne lagti hai

prerna mahadev ke vardan ke fal swaroop dharti lok to ja pati hai magar sonam ke pass jane me asafal rehti hai

prerna mann me : mein dharti lok mein ja pa rahi hue to sonam ke pass kiu nahi ja pa rahi hue mere saare prayaas ( kosis ) kiu asafal ho rahe hai kya sonam dharti lok mein nahi hai

prerna : sonam kaha ho tum mein tum tak kaise pohochu mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha

yahi sochkar prerna niras ho jati hai kiuki prerna ko sonam ka kuch pata nahi chal raha tha

vahi

dharti lok mein chalti hai rahul ki taraf

rahul jab sonam ke ghar se nikal raha tha to sab log ek taxi mein baith kar apne ghar jane lagte hai jaha rahul ki maa sab ka intzaar kar rahi thi

or raste me rahul ki sab bhan ek dusare se dyna ke baare me baat kar rahe the

payal : yeh dyna khon thi jo achanak se rahul ke piche hii pad gai thi or yeh achanak se kese aa gai.

sonali : mujhe lagta hai jaroor us dibbe me bohot bada raaz hai jisse abhi tak hum anjaan hai
or yeh sunte hii Nisha or ruchi apna natkhat pana kese chor sakti hai vo bhi Rai ka pahad banane me lag jati hai.

ruchi sonali se thodi darawani awaaz mein bolti hai

ruchi : sonali didi vo dibba koi samanye dibba nahi hai
vo dibba hazaro saalo se tarap raha hai vo dibba aisa dibba hai jisme us dyna ne kai logo ka khoon bhar rakha hai jisko pee pekar dyna apni pyaas bhujati hai

nishi ruchi ka sath dete hue darawani awaaz mein

nisha : ha didi iska pata hume pehle hii chal gaya tha ki dyna asal me koi dayan nahi Dracula hai jo hamare rahul bhaiya ka khoon pina chahati thi.

sonia sochte hue : agar us dibbe mein khonn bhara hua hai to vo rahul ka khoon kiu pina chahegi

Ruchi darawani awaaz mein : kiuki vo khoon pikar rahul bhaiya se apna badla lena chahati hai


Nisha or ruchi mien yahi ek khass baat thi ki vo apne baato mein sab ko Mohit kar leti thi
sonali bhi nisha ruchi ke baato me aa jati hai kiuki rahul ke sar ka dard nisha ruchi ke gale lagane se khatam hua tha jis bajase sonali sochti hai ki shayad nisha ruchi ko kuch pata hai
vahi rahul taxi mein aa kar so gaya tha thodi thakan ke bajase isliye rahul ko nisha or ruchi ka natak nahi pata chalta

sonali : tume kese pata ki us dibbe mein khoon bhara hua hai or dyna ko rahul ka khoon badla lene ke liye pina chahati hai.

richi or jyada darawani awaaz mein
ruchi : sonali didi apne acha sawal pucha hai

or ruchi sonali ki pit (back) thap thapane hue bolti hai

Ruchi : sonali didi yeh ek lambi kahani hai is kahani ka pata hume jab chala jab hume us dyna ka dande se mar rahe the tabhi hamare samne ek kahani aa gai jisko dekhkar hum bhi chock gaye the jiska pata na to sonam didi ko hai or na hii prerna didi ko or na hii uske baba ko hai .

Payal bhi ruchi or nisha ki baato mein aate hue

payal : aise khon si kahani kahani hai

payal , sonali , sonia sab us kahani ko sunne ke liye bohot utsuk the , vahi driver bhi bohot jaldi ruchi or nisha ki baato me aakar side mein car rok kar ruchi , nisha ke bolne ka intzaar karta hai
or rahul to sonili ki God mein sar rakhkar so raha tha.

ruchi : nisha vo kahani tu bta

nisha behad darawani acting karti hue

nisha : yeh kahani shuru hoti hai ek ganda nala se jaha koi bhi jata to vo kabhi vapis nahi ata tha

driver : aisa kiu aisa kya tha us ganda nala mein

ruchi darawani awaaz mein : kiuki vaha par jakar sab ka khoon khali ho jata tha kiuki jab sarir me khoon hii nahi bechega to insaan kese bachega

sab sakte mein ate hue

sonia : fir kya hua

nisha : yaha ke logh khoon khali hone ki baat sunkar dar gaye the isliye sab apne sath khoon ki botal lekar chalne ki sochi jisse vo gande nale ka rahasye ka pata laga sake

payal : aisa kiu

ruchi : logo ka aisa manna tha ki agar hamara khoon kholi hone lagega to hum us khoon ki botal se apna khoon chada lege

driver : gaon ke logh smart the.

nisha : magar unko kya pata tha ki vo khoon bhi us gande nale ko kam pad jayega or sab ki botal ka bhi khoon khali hone laga yeh dekh kar
sab apna apna khoon bachane mein lage hue the tabi ek shaks us gande naale ke samne khada ho gaya.

sonali : is kahani ka hamare rahul se kya sambandh

ruchi ( rote hue ) : kiuki us kahani mein jo shaks gande nalle ke samne khada tha vo koi or nahi hamare rahul bhaiya the jo gaon ke logo ka khoon khali hone se bachana chahate the magar us gande nalle ne hamare rahul bhaiya ka khoon bhi khali kar diya

sonali , payal, sonia, driver sab bhabuk ho gaye

sonali gusse me : us gande nalle ne mere betu ka khoon kese khali kar diya

ruchi or nisha rone ki acting karne lagi

payal masuiyat se : fir kya hua

fir nisha ne kuch aisa kaha jisse sab sadme mein aa gaye

nisha ( dukhi awaaz me ) : jab us gande naale ne rahul bhaiya ka khoon khali kiya to rahul bhaiya apna khoon khali hone se larkharane lage magar hamare rahul bhaiya ne girte samay us gande nalle me chupe us shaks ko dekh liya tha jisne hamare rahul bhaiya ka khoon khali kiya tha

sonali behad gusse me : khon tha vo shaks mujhe batao

ruchi rote hue : sonali didi vo shaks Dracula thi jisne hamare rahul bhaiya ka khoon khali kiya tha

sonia nam aakho se : kya khoon khali hone se hamara rahul mar gaya

nisha or ruchi sonali payal or sonia ke ashu pohochte hue

nisha : nahi didi hamare rahul bhaiya bohot smart the unhone pehle hi thodi door par khoon se bhara dram chupa rakha tha jisse unka khoon khali hone se pehle hii dubara se unhone apna khoon bhar liya

ruchi ( rote hue ): magar hamare rahul bhaiya ka ek baar khoon khali karne ke baad bhi us Dracula ko taras nahi aya va baar baar hamare rahul bhaiya ka khoon khali karti or hamare rahul bhaiya baar baar us dram se khoon bharte rahe or isse ka fyda utakar rahul bhaiya ne gaon walo ko gande nalle ke piche chupi Dracula ka asli sach bata diya or fir chupke se gaon walo ne us dyna ko mar diya

nisha : is ka badla lene vo Dracula dyna ka roop lekar is janam me hamare rahul bhaiya ko marne aae hai

Sonali magar us dibbe ka kya raaz hai

Ruchi : jab vo gaon wale us Dracula ko mar rahe the to Dracula ne marne se pehle sara khoon apni shakti se us dibbe me chupa diya tha jisse vo dubara janam lekar us dibbe me se khoon pee sake jab tak rahul bhaiya usko nahi mil jate isliye sonam didi ne bola tha ki us dibbe ke pass us dyna ko mat jane dena kiuki agar vo dubara us dibbe ke pass chali jati to vo saara khoon pikar fir hamare rahul bhiya ka bhi khoon khali kar deti

Tabi achanak rahul ki neend khul jati hai or vo sabse puchne lagta hai ki kya hum ghar pohoch gaye

Rahul ko dekhe hii saari bhan rahul ko gale laga leti hi or sonali to rahul ka chehra chumne lagti hai or bolti hai

Sonali : mere bhai ne pure gaon ka khoon khali hone se bacha liye
Or pure gaon walo ko ek naye zindagi di
Mujhe apne bhai par naaz hai .

rahul ko kuch samaj nahi ata or vo chup hii rehta hai.

or vo taxi chal padti hai or jake seedha rahul ke ghar rukhti hai

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Sonali : mere bhai ne pure gaon ka khoon khali hone se bacha liye
Or pure gaon walo ko ek naye zindagi di
Mujhe apne bhai par naaz hai .

rahul ko kuch samaj nahi ata or vo chup hii rehta hai.

or vo taxi chal padti hai or jake seedha rahul ke ghar rukhti hai

Chalo chalte hai Sunaina ki taraf

chucha jaise hii Sunaina ko dekhte hii goli chalata hai to uski gun se goli nahi nikalti

chucha ( gusse mein ) : isme se goli kaha gai

ek ladka : bhai isme se goli meine hi nikali hai kiuki abhi aap gusse me ho bhai

chucha : tume pata nahi hai isne hamare sath kya kiya tha isne hume traffic par thukvaya or isse bajase hume kitne din tak hospital me rehna pada
or aaj isne mujhe ghasite hue car se bandh kar door fek diya or isne hamare Suraj bhai ko bhi thappad mara fir bhi tum is ladki ko bachane chahate ho

ladka : bhai pehle hume Suraj bhai se baat karni chahiye kuch bhi karne se pehle agar gusse me humne isko mar diya to kahi Suraj bhai

Ladka chuche ke kande par hath rakhte hue : aap samaj sakte ho bhai me kya bol raha hue.

chucha : thik hai chalo fir

fir chucha apni patti vagera karva kar us hospital se nikal jata hai.

vahi sahil rona ke baare me soch raha hota hai ki Sunaina ko to uska pyaar Rohan mil gaya magar ab me Roma ko nahi chor sakta kiuki Roma bhi Sunaina ki tarha ek bohot achi ladki hai mein usse apne dilbki baat bol kar rahuga

sahil mann me : agar Roma ne bhi mujhe mana kar diya to nahi aisa nahi ho sakta magar mujhe pehle yeh janna hoga ki Roma ke man me mere liye kya hai
mein Roma sa college shuru hoti hii akele me baat karuga yaha sabke samne baat karna thik nahi hoga.
sahil aisa mann me vichar kar chup rahte hai

Vahi tiger baar baar Roma ko dekh raha tha tiger jab bhi Roma ko dekhta tha usme dil ne tarange utne lagti thi or uska dil tez tez dhak dhak karne lagta tha

Tiger ( mann me ) : I love you Roma mein tumse bohot pyar karta hue magar kehne ki mere ander himmat nahi hai pata nahi kiu meine jabse tume dekha tab se mere dil mein bechane hone lagi hai or jab tum mere pass hoti ho to mere dil bohot Tezz Tezz thak thak karne lagta hai aisa kiu hota hai muze pata nahi magar muze aisa lagta hai ki mein bas tume dekhta rahu dekhta rahu or dekhta hii rahu.

Tiger ko ghoorte hue aaj Roma ne dekh liya tha
roma ( mann me ) : yeh hamesha mujhe hii kiu dekhta rehta hai kya iske mann me koi baat hai jo mujhse kehna chahata hai.
aaj isse baat karke dekhti hue

Vahi Sunaina sahil ke pass baithe hue kehti hai nam akho se : sahil tum beech me kiu aae tumari halat ki jimmedaar mein hue tume beech me nahi ana chahiye tha sahil.
or yeh bolkar Sunaina ki aakho se ek do ashu gir jate hai.
sahil Sunaina ke vo ashu pohochte hue

sahil : Sunaina tum mujhe apna dost manti ho

sunaina haa mein garden hila ti hai
sahil : to apne aap ko dosh mat do or ek dost ka yeh farz hota hai ki vo apne dost ki har kaam me sahayata kare or uski raksha kare mein ne to bas apna kartavya nibhaya hai


sunaina : magar sahil yeh kaise dosti hai jisme tumne mujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan ki bhi parva nahi ki mujhe pata hai tum mujhe pyaar karte ho or mein ne us pyaar ko thukra diya fir bhi tumne meri jaan bachai jisne tumare pyaar ko thukra diya aisa kiu sahil kiu kiu

yeh bolkar Sunaina ke akho se ashu nikal jate hai.

sahil : kiuki tumne bhale hii mere pyaar ko nahi apnaya magar mein to tumse pyaar karta hue na.

sahil haste hue
sahil : or yeh mat bholo ki ek tarfa pyaar mein bohot taqat hoti hai kiuki vo kisi or mein nahi batta usme sirf mera hak hai sirf mera jo mujhse koi nahi cheen sakta

sunaina pyaar bhari aakho se : mujhe afsos hai ki mein tumara pyaar nahi apna payi par mujhe is baat ki khusi bhi hai ki mujhe itna pyaar karne wala dost mila

Nishant bhi dono ki baate sunkar thoda bhabuk ho jata hai or Sunaina ko apne gale lagakar bolta hai
nishant : mujhe afsos hai ki tumare jaise bahu nahi mili magar is baat ki khusi bhi hai ki mujhe tum jaise beti mil gayi kya tum meri beti banogi
sunaina : jii uncle


tabi sahil bolta hai : mujhe lagta hai ki khatra abhi tala nahi hai

Nishant : tum kis bare mein baat kar rahe ho beta

sahil : papa mein us hacker ke baare mein baat kar raha hue jisne hamare computer hack kiye the

nishant : ab yeh baat karke kya fyda tume pata hai vo sab mare gaye

sahil : Yeh mein janta hu papa magar mujhe lagta hai ki vo hacker abhi zinda hai jo itni badi sazis rach sakta hai vo itni jaldi nahi mar sakta abhi hum yeh nahi maan sakte ki khatra tal gaya hai humko thoda satark rehna chahiye

nishant : beta tum thik bol rahe ho vaise meine kuch aadmi laga rakhe hai jaldi hii hume jankari mil jaegi.

tabi doctor aa jate hai or sahil ka check up Kare hai
or sab se bolte hai ki
doctor : abhi sahil ki halat thodi thik hai magar recover hone mein thoda time lagega or ab sahil ko rest karne ke liye akela chor do

fir sab sahil se thodi baat karke bahar nikal jate hai

tabi
Nishant : Sunaina beta mujhe tum se akele mein kuch baat karni hai


or nishant Sunaina ko ek side le jate hai.

Ab tiger or Roma akele bache the
roma ( mann me ) : yahi sahi mouka hai tiger se baat karne ka

tabi roma tiger se bolti hai

roma tiger se : tiger mujhe tumse baat karni hai

tiger : haa roma bolo

roma tiger ko ghorte hue: tiger tume mujhe har time dekhte kiu rehte ho kya tume mujhse kuch bolna chahate ho

roma ke aise direct sawal se tiger ek dum se ghabra jata hai or tiger ko samaj me nahi ata ki kya bole

tabi roma: bolo tiger tume kuch kehna hai.
sunaina ko tiger ke dil ka haal pata tha magar Sunaina ne abhi tabi roma se baat nahi ki thi
ab dekhe hai tiger kya bolta hai
kya tiger sach bol dega ya fir jhoot
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