• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)

Do u like my story

  • Good

    Votes: 74 37.2%
  • Better

    Votes: 37 18.6%
  • Best

    Votes: 128 64.3%

  • Total voters
    199

Rohan

Active Member
1,870
8,974
159
Rohan bhai update ki kuch bhi samajh nahi a rahi kindly update reread kar ke post karein



Awesome update
Lakin bhai error to h
Suru main payal Mari thi last main sonali
PLEASE reedit Kar do




Bhai update mobile se type karne se kuch mistake ho gayi thi jisko dubara padhkar mein ne thik kar diya hai

Or payal galti se likh diya tha sonali mari thi kiuki Sonali ne hi apni frock utarkar payal or rahul ki thand se jaan bachane ki kosis ki thi or khud thand bardast kar rahi thi
 
Last edited:

Naik

Well-Known Member
21,400
77,226
258
Very very lovely update brother
 
  • Like
Reactions: Rohan and Iron Man

Naik

Well-Known Member
21,400
77,226
258
:congrats: for 300 pages
 
  • Like
Reactions: Rohan and Naina

Iron Man

Try and fail. But never give up trying
42,919
111,556
304
Update 68

rahul ....par kya doctor
doctor.....hum tumari is bhan (payal) ko nahi bacha paye

rahul.....yeh sunte hiiii didi didi bolte huye dubara behosh ho jata

doctor mann me .....inke mata pita kaise hai jinko apne bacho ki bilkul bhi parwa nahi hai koi apne bacho ko chorkar kaha ja sakta hai vo bhi itne chote bacho ko


Ab aaaageee

Doctor dubara se rahul ke upar pani dalte hai jisse rahul ko dubara se hoss ata hai magar hosh mein ane ke baad rahul sonali didi ko dekhte hii rahul rote hue masoon shakal ke sath bolta hai ....sonali didi utto na aap ko kta (kya) hua hai.

rahul dubara behosh ho jata hai aisa bohot baar hota hai doctor ko shamaj nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare
Vahi dusare kamre me raj in sab baato se befir hokar jyada nashe ke karan abhi bhi so raha tha or itni gehri neend me so raha tha ki usko apne bacho ki rone ki awaaz bhi sunai nahi de rahi thi aise khon se nafraat thi raj ko rahul se jo rahul ka rona bhi raj ko sunai nahi de raha tha .

Vahi rahul ko yeh baat sunkar Sadma lag gaya tha ki uski sonali didi mar gayi hai jis karan rahul baar baar behosh ho raha tha
rahul dubara se hosh me ata hai to rote hue bolta hai .... Didi utt jao na didi utt jao na didi

doctor rahul ke ashu pohochne hue bolta hai ......beta ab vo kabi nahi uttegi vo ab bhagwan ke pass chali gae hai vaha se koi vapis nahi a sakta

doctor ki yeh baat sunkar is baar rahul behosh nahi hua balki uski aakhe ek dam lal ho gaye itni lal ki vo ki ek baar to doctor bhi rahul ko dekhte hii bohot dar gaya
rahul ke chest par jo mahakaal ka Chitra bana tha vo uske hatho me aa gaya

rahul rote hue ...nahi meri didi mujhe chorkar bhagwan ke pass nahi ja sakti mein bhagwan se pratna karuga ki vo meri didi mujhe lauta de or agar unhone meri didi vapis nhi ki to mein bhi jivit nahi rahuga

rahul chillate hue .... Iske jimedaar sirf bhagwan hone

bahar subha ka time tha abhi bas 5 baje the halka ujala hona shuru hua tha

doctor nam aakho se .... Beta aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta jo ek baar bhagwan ke pass chala jata hai vo vahase kabi vapis nahi ata tum sukar manao ki tumari didi ne tume apni frock ki chaya se tumko or payal ko bacha liya nahi to tum bhi zinda nahi rehte aise bhayanak tufaan or barish mein

rahul jhallate hue ....nahi koi meri didi ko nahi le ja sakta mein jakar abhi apni didi ko bhagwan se vapis lata hue

Or rahul payal ko uttane ki kosis karta hai magar uta nahi pata apne chote hone ke karan

fir rahul rote hue apni puri shakti se utane ki kosis karta hai jisse sonali rahul ke chote chote hatho me aa jati hai magar rahul sonali se bohot chota tha jisse rahul ke hath dukhne lagte hai

or mahakaal ka Chitra rahul ke hatho me or gehra hone lagta hai jisse rahul ko itni se umar me ek Tezz dard ka samna karna padhta hai magar rahul ko us dard ki parwa kiye bina hii sonali ki utta ke jane lagta hai

doctor shocked tha ki rahul ne payal ko kaise utta liya itni choti si umar me

doctor hairan hokar ....beta tum apni didi ko kaha le ja rahe ho
or doctor bhi rahul ke piche jane ki kosis karta hai magar ghar ka gate achanak se band ho jata hai

rahul rote hue ....didi me apko bhagwan ke pass se vapis jarur lauga aap chinta mat karo apko mere hote hue kuch nahi ho sakta

rahul sonali ko utta kar is goan ke bane ek mandir mein lekar jane lagta hai raste mein pade hue kankar, kach or pathar rahul ke nange per hone ke bajase chubne lagte hai jisse rahul ke per se khoon nikalne lagta hai magar khoon nikalne se bhi rahul ko koi fark nahi padhta jaise rahul sare dukh dard bhool gaya tha jaise rahul ne is sansaar or duniya ko bhool gaya tha rahul ko to bas apni sonali didi hii dikhai de rahi thi rahul ka talwa pure khoon se latpat tha par rahul apni bhan ka chehara dekhkar ro raha tha is samay jyada tufaan or barish hone ke bajase koi bahar bhi nahi nikla tha jaise hii rahul mandir mein apna per rakhta hai mandir hilne lagta hai fir shant ho jata hai aisa lagta hai ki koi halka sa bhukamp aya ho rahul ke per ke nishan unke per mein se khoon nikalne ke vaja se mandir ki sheedi par bante jate hai har jagah anek ghantiyo ka shor bajne lagta hai rahul jaise jaise apne per (foot) mandir par rakhta hai vaise vaise mandir me ek Prakash phelne lagta hai or rahul ke piche se ek awaaz Tezz Tezz pure mandir mein sunai dene lagti hai


ANT MEIN ARAMB MEIN KALO KA KAAL MEIN MAHAKAAL MEIN

tabi kisi ki awaaz ati hai

samne se. (haste hue ) ...... Rohan
us awaz ka suwar aise tha jisse rahul bhi chakit ho jata tha or rahul us taraf dekhta hai.


Vahi rahul ke jane ke baad doctor soch me duba hota hai ki is bache ko kya ho gaya or yaha abhi kya ho raha tha

rahul ke kuch samay ke baad rahul ki baki bhan ko bhi hosh aa jata hai hala ki unki bhi tabiyaat abhi puri tarha se teek nahi thi
Par payal ne charo taraf dekha ki uski sonali didi or rahul yaha nahi hai

payal rote hue ......meri sonali didi or rahul kaha hai or aap khon ho

Fir nisha ne puri baat payal ko bta di ki yeh doctor yaha kese aai or kya hua tha

vahi ab subha ke 7 baj chuke the or raaj ki bhi neend khul gae thi
or raj ubasi lete hue kamre ke bahar nikalta hai

or payal ko awaz lagate hue bolta hai

Raj payal se ......payal mera pani garam karne ke liye rakh de mein jab tak brush wagera kar leta hue

raj ki awaaz sunkar payal nisha ruchi or vo doctor bahar ata hai.

or doctor ko dekhte hii raj chock jata hai

raj chockte hue .....are Sanju bhai aap yaha

doctor sanju bhi raj ko is ghar me dekhkar shocked ho jata hai .....raj tum yaha

raj Sanju ke pass ate hue ......kya baat hai sanju itni subha tum yaha sab ghar mein thik to hai na

sanju chirchirate hue ......ha mere ghar mein sab thik hai magar kal mein tumare ghar nahi ata to kuch thik nahi hota

raj yeh baat sunkar shocked ho jata hai or apni betiyo ko dekhne lagta hai fir bolta hai

raj hairan hokar ....tum bolna kya chahate hue sanju

sanju ghoorte hue .....raj tum kal kaha the

Raj hairan hokar ....mein to ghar par hii tha

sanju ghoorte hue .....par tum ghar par to nahi dekhe

raj nazre churate hue .....are yaar kal jyada pee li thi is bajase is kamre me bed par so raha tha

sanju.(gusse me )....... Itni pee koi thi ki apni beti or apne bete ka rona bhi nahi sunai diya unka dard nahi sunai diya tum jaise baap par to thukne ka mann karta hai
jisko apni beti or bete ki koi parwa na hokar daru ke nashe me aaram se so raha ho

raj gusse me ......sanju tamiz se baat karo

sanju gusse me ......tamiz se vo bhi tumse yaha tumari beti or beta mar rahe the or tum aram se so rahe the or tumse tamiz se baat karu agar mein kal nahi ata to shayad tumare koi beti zinda nahi hoti na hii beta jab bache ko shamal hii nahi sakte to paida kiu karte ho

yeh sunkar raj ko ek Sadma sa lagta hai

raj shocked hokar .....mujhe puri baat batao sanju

fir sanju kal raat se lekar subha tak ki puri baat bata deta hai

jisko sunkar raj ke pero tale jamin nikal jati hai or dharam se niche gir jata hai or uske aakho se ashu nikalne lagte hai

sanju raj ke pass jate hue uske kandhe par hath rakhte hue ......sukar manao ki sirf tumari ek beti hii mari hai . Baki sab bach gaye

yeh sunkar raj behosh ho jata hai



aaj raj vo baat yaad ati hai ki sonali raj ko kitna pyaar karti thi ek or baat yaad ati hai jab raj nashe ki halat me ghar aya tha gusse me

sonali raj ka chehra sehlate hue .... Papa aap itne gusse mein koo (kiu) ho

fir raj ke samne ek andhera chane lagta hai or samne sonali rote hue raj se bol rahi thi
sonali rote hue .... Papa apne mujhe mar diya mera kya kasur tha aap bohot bure ho papa aap bohot bure ho
ap rahul par itna gussa the ki apko mere rona bhi dikhai nahi diya mera dard bhi dikhaye nahi diya apke nashe ne meri zindagi leli
sonali gusse me ........aap meri mout ke jimmedar ho papa mein bahar tadapti rahi barish me bhegte rahi par apko kuch sunai nahi diya

sonali gusse me ....apne apni beti ko marne ke liye chor diya vo bhi tadpa tadpa kar mein darvaja khatkhatakar chillati rahi ki papa darvaja kholo papa mujhe bacha lo apni beti ko bacha lo magar apne meri baat nahi suni

Sonali raj ke seene par marte hue or rote hue ........kiu papa kiu apne apni beti ko kiu marne ke liye chor diya

raj rote hue .....muze maaf kardo beti mujhe maaf kar do
or isse jhatke se raj utt jata hai

Or rote hue bolne lagta hai mujhe maaf kardo beti mujhe maaf kardo vahi sonali ki ghabar se payal nisha or ruchi bhi sadme me chale gaye the ki unki sonali didi mar gayi hai

Magar payal apne aap ko shamalte hue bahar nikalti hai

Tabi piche se doctor....beti kaha ja rahi ho

Payal rote hue .....apne bhaiya ko dhoond ne

Nisha ruchi .....didi hum bhi apke sath chalege

Doctor ....beta tum bohot chote ho tum kaha dhoodo ge apne bhai ko mein bhi tumare sath chalta hue

Raj ........beti mein bhi chalta hue tumare sath

Payal kuch nahi bolti bahar nikal jati hai or uske sath baki sab nikal jate hai or payal ko dhoodne lagte hai kafi dhoondne ke baad bhi rahul ka kuch pata nahi chalta

tabi payal ko khoon ke nishan dikhai dete hai jo per ke jaise bane the yeh dekhte hii ruchi nisha sakte mein aa jati hai

Nisha rote hue payal se .....didi yeh khoon ke nishan kese hai kahi yeh hamare bhaiya ke khoon ke nishan to nahi kahi hamare bhaiya ko kuch ho to nahi gaya

Ruchi gusse me raj ke bas jakar ....yeh sab apke ke bajase hua hai agar mere rahul bhaiya ko kuch ho gaya to mein apko kabi. Maaf nahi karugi

raaj kuch nahi bolta bas rota rehta hai

raj bhale hii rahul se pyaar nahi karta tha magar sonali se bohot pyaar karta tha sonali ke mout ki ghabar sunakar raj admara sa ho gaya tha

Or sab us nishan ki taraf badne lagte hai jo kisi jungal ki taraf ja rahe the

nisha rote hue .... Yeh nishan jungal ki taraf kiu ja rahe hai kahi hamare rahul bhaiyo or sonali didi ko koi sher to nahi uta kar le gaya

is time payal badi thi to usko hii nisha or ruchi ko shamalna tha ek badi bhan ka farz nibhana tha
vaise to yeh farz raj ko nibhana chahiye tha magar payal nisha or ruchi ko shamal rahi thi



payal nisha ruchi ke ashu pohochne hue...rahul bhaiya ko kuch nahi hoga or na hii sonali didi ko sab thik ho jaega

ruchi as bhari aakho se.....didi sab thik ho jaega na

payal chup karate hue....ha ruchi sab thik ho gaega ab na mat thik hai

or fir sab aage chalne lagte hai or rahul ke khood bhare chote chote pero (foot) ka pucha karne lagte hai kuch door jakar jab sab samne dekhte hai to sadme me aa jati hai
Awesome update.
Bhai es update me kafi mistakes huyi hai likhne me kayi bar payal ko sonali aur sonaliko payal likh diye hai
 

Black water

Vasudhaiv Kutumbakam
5,857
21,061
188
Congratulations for 300 pages
Awesome update bhai
 
Last edited:

Iron Man

Try and fail. But never give up trying
42,919
111,556
304
:congrats: for complete 300 pages
 

Nisha1234

New Member
30
220
33
:congrats::congrats: For completing 300 page

Mein ne abhi apke saare update padhe bohot hii fantastic or mind-blowing update the sach me maza aa gaya magar kuch jagah spellings mistake lagi mujhe

rahul or uski bhan ka pyaar apne bohot acha dikhaya hai

or yeh mahakaal ke bare me janna intresting hoga ki yeh :laugh::laugh::laugh:mahakaal khon hai or rahul ke chest par iski tasveer kiu hai jo baar baar kuch hone par rahul ke hath me aa jati hai :laugh::laugh::laugh:

aisa kiu hota hai Rohan sir

or yeh dyna mayavi lok ki maharani ban gai hai par kaise ?? jaha tak mujhe yaad hai is dyna ki ruchi or nisha ke sath baki bhan ne dyna ki pitai ki thi jab us dibbe ka khel start hua tha
dyna maharani kaise bani yeh shayad age pata chale

magar yeh dyna ke sath khon hai jo dyna se baat kar rahi hai kya yeh bhi kuch janti hai

prerna pareshan hai ki Sonam kaha chali gaye
or prerna ne apni bhabhi dusala ki puri kahani bata di ab dekhte hai yeh dusala kya karegi

or yeh raj rahul se itni nafraat kiu karta hai
kya karan ho sakta hai koi to baja hogi

abhi bhi rahul ko yeh nahi pata ki rahul ki asli maa khon hai magar apne pichle update mein bataya tha ki rahul ki 8 bhan hai to confusion hai hai ki agar rahul ke 8 bhan hai to rahul ki yeh sab payal sonali ruchi nisha Sonia koi bhi rahul ki bhan nahi ho sakti kiu ki rahul ki asli maa to koi or hai

ya fir koi or baat hai

all over kahe to kamaal ki story hai

bas ab jaldi jaldi update dijiye


 
Top