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Friends rajeev sir ne update de diya hai type kar rahi hu.
Fantasy Pyar ki had paar- family loves forever (Incest, Magic, Romance, THRILLER)
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Update 51
Rahul 2 : mujhe sona didu gate kholne ko bol rahi hai.
Tabi sab dhakka dekar gaye khol dete hai.
Or samne ka nazara dekhkar sab shocked ho jate hai.
Kiuki vo rahul 2 vaha se achanak gayab ho jata hai
Or sonali rahul ko dekhti hai to rahul apna sir ( head ) pakar kar ro raha hota hai.
Us atma mani ki awaaz rahul ko bohot pareshan rahi thi.
Or sonali fata fat rahul ke pass jati hai.
Or rahul ko apni god me lita leti hai.
Sonali ( rahul se ) : betu tu itna ro ( carry ) kiu kar raha hai.
Pehle bhi tere head me itna dard hota tha jo tu bardast nahi kar pata tha.
Payal rahul ka head sehlate hue
Payal : rahul mat ro tere sir mein pata nahi kiu itna dard hota rehta hai.
Mujhe kabi shamaj nahi ata.
Iske piche kya vaja hai.
Rahul ki saari sister rahul ko is dard mein dekhkar rone lagti hai.
Tabi
Sonam ( prerna se ) : prerna didi yeh rahul ko kya hua hai.
Prerna : sonam mujhe bhi nahi pata ki rahul ko kya hua hai.
Tabi rani se raha nahi jata or achanak se rani bol deti hai.
Rani ( sonam se ) : beta mujhe raat mein tumare kamre se bohot bhayanak or darawani aawaaz aa rahi thi.
Jisko sunkar mere kaan fat rahe the.
Yeh baat sunte hi sonam ko kuch yaad aa jata hai.
Or sonam bhagte hue apne kamre mein jati hai.
To dekhti hai sonam ke room ka gate tuta hua hota hai.
Or bagal mein bohot saari rakh padi hoti hai.
Or us dibbe ke charo or om ka chakra bane hote hai.
Or uski roshni bhi bohot tezz hoti hai
Or usme se black colour ki roshni nikal rahi hoti hai.
Prerna ( chillate hue ) : sonam is dibbe mein kya hai.
Magar sonam ko khud nahi pata tha ki is dibbe mein kya hai.
Sonam : mujhe nahi pata prerna didi.
Prerna : to tumare pass yeh dibba kese aya.
Sonam haklate hue bolti hai.
Sonam ( haklate hue ) : yeh dibba to mujhe divya ne diya tha.
Prerna shocked hokar
Prerna ( chillate hue ) : kya magar kab or kese
Flashback
Update 5
Jab mahakaal sunglee lu ko mar deta hai.
Or veer ko bacha leta hai.
Tabi ek ladki mahakaal se chipak kar rone lagti hai.
Yeh mahakaal se dekha nahi jata or mahakaal us ladki ko ek dibba deta hai.
Vo ladki koi or nahi divya hii thi.
Jo apne rahul ko na dekhkar mahakaal ko pakar kar ro rahi thi.
Or mahakaal vaha se chala jata hai.
Divya us dibbe ko dekhkar bohot khuss hoti hai.
Ki uske pyaar ne apni nishani di hai jab tak rahul vapas nahi aa jata.
Or divya ka khusi ka thikana nahi hota kiuki divya pyaar jo karti thi apne rahul se
Or apne rahul ki koi bhi chiz kese mana kar sakti thi.
Or mahakaal ne to khud kaha tha ki rahul tumare pass dubara jarur vapis aaega .
Or jab tak nahi ata is dibbe ko shamal kar rakhna .
Or kabi is dibbe ko akela nahi chorna.
Magar divya ko kya pata tha mahakaal ne divya ko kya shamal kar rakhne ko diya tha.
Or kya tha usme.
Magar divya khuss thi ki vo is dibbe ke sahare apne pyaar or apne jaan apne rahul ka intzaar kar legi.
Magar niyati ko kuch or hii manjhur tha.
Shayad divya ko abhi or tadapna tha
Jiske sahare divya rahul ka vapas ane ka intzaar karna chahti thi
Shayad vo bhi niyati usse chin lena chahati thi.
Isliye jaise hii divya apni bhabhi ke sath hospital gayi
Veer ko admit karwane.
Kiuki veer ki halat bohot kharab thi.
Magar kuch time ke operation ke bad veer khatre se bahar a gaya.
Doctor ( divya se ) : abhi apke bhai veer ka operation hua hai .
Or vo thik hai kuch hii time mein unko hosh aa gayega.
Divya is baat se bohot khuss ho jati hai ki uska bhai veer thik hai.
Or divya apne bhabhi ke gale lagkar.
Divya : bhabhi veer thik hai ab rona band karo mahakaal ne veer ko bacha liya.
Or fir divya apne bhabhi ke ashu pohoch deti hai.
Bhabhi ( divya se ) : tere bajase hii to divya mahakaal yaha aya hai.
Or rahul ka sabse acha dost bhi to hai veer
To mahakaal ko veer ki madad karni hii thi.
Bhabhi roni se surat banate hue
Bhabhi : nahi to mein ne rahul ke sath jo kiya uske bajase mujhe lagne laga tha ki rahul mujhse bohot nafraat karega.
Bhabhi divya ka sir sehlate hue
Bhabhi ( divya se ) : magar mujhe khussi hai ki rahul ke man mein nafraat se jyada tere liye pyaar hai divya
Or itna pyaar ki vo kisi bhi apno ko chahe hum sab ne uske sath kitna bhi bura kiya ho
Fir bhi rahul tum ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta divya
rahul or veer ki dosti hii aise thi ki mahakaal ko ana hii pada veer ko bachane.
Bhabhi ( pyaar se ) : mujhe khussi hai ki rahul abhi bhi tuzse bohot pyaar karta hai
Apni jaan se bhi jyada.
Divya : mujhe pata hai bhabhi magar mujhe yeh bhi pata tha ki rahul khatre mein hai.
Uski jaan ko bachane ke liye yeh sab karna jaruri tha.
Nahi to vo logh mere rahul ko maar dete.
Divya ( bohot rote hue ) : or yeh mein dekh nahi pati .
Mujhe rahul se bicharna manjhur tha.
Magar rahul ko marta hua dekhna nahi.
Bhabhi ( divya se pyaar se ) : jo bhi hota hai divya ache ke liye hota hai.
Acha ab jaldi ja apne bhai veer ki medicine lekar aa mein jab tak veer se mil leti hue.
Divya haa mein garden hila deti hai.
Or medicine lene divya hospital ke bahar chemist par jane lagti hai.
Magar divya ko kya pata tha ki bahar divya ki mout uska intzaar kar rahi hai.
Or divya us dibbe ko apne sine se lagae hospital ke bahar jane lagti hai.
Divya ( mann me ) : pata hai rahul mein tumse itna pyaar karti hue ki din mere ek pal aisa nahi jata jab mein ne tumko I LOVE YOU or tumari tasveer ko apne sine se lagae nahi so jati jab tak mujhe chen nahi ata mere dil tume hamesha pyaar se dekhne pyaar karne ko bol rehta hai.
Divya ( MANN ME ): I LOVE U RAHUL
i love u so much.
Tumare bina to mera yeh sarir mout ke saman hai.
Magar mein kya karu tumari jaan ke liye mujhe apne pyaar ki kurbani deni hogi.
Or jaise hii divya medicine lekar jaise hii murti hai.
Tabi
Ek shaks apni car ke aage badi badi lohe ki keel lagakar full speed mein car ko bhagate hue divya ko takkar mar deta hai.
Or divya dard bhari cheekh ke sath bolti hai.
Divya : i love you rahul
I love you
Or udate hue door jakar girti hai.
Car bohot hii jyada speed mein thi jisse divya ka pura sarir khoon se latpat ho jata hai.
Tab bhi divya us dibbe ko apne sine se lagae vahi padi hue hoti hai.
Or apni akhiri saaash le rahi hoti hai.
Or us saah mein bhi divya apne pyaar apne jaan
Ko I LOVE YOU HII bol rahi hoti hai.
Divya apni akhri saah lete hue.
Divya : rahul i love u.
Or vo shaks jisne divya ko takkar mari thi.
Vo piche mudkar dekhta hai to divya ka koi bhi reaction nahi ata.
Shaks ( mann me ) : lagta hai mar gayi.
Jitni baar mein rahul ko marne jata hamesha usko mere se bacha leti thi.
Mere raste ka sabse bada pathar ban jayi thi yeh ( divya )
To isko raste se hatana hii pada.
Or vo shaks haste hue achanak se car lekar vaha se gayab ho jata hai.
Rahul 2 : mujhe sona didu gate kholne ko bol rahi hai.
Tabi sab dhakka dekar gaye khol dete hai.
Or samne ka nazara dekhkar sab shocked ho jate hai.
Kiuki vo rahul 2 vaha se achanak gayab ho jata hai
Or sonali rahul ko dekhti hai to rahul apna sir ( head ) pakar kar ro raha hota hai.
Us atma mani ki awaaz rahul ko bohot pareshan rahi thi.
Or sonali fata fat rahul ke pass jati hai.
Or rahul ko apni god me lita leti hai.
Sonali ( rahul se ) : betu tu itna ro ( carry ) kiu kar raha hai.
Pehle bhi tere head me itna dard hota tha jo tu bardast nahi kar pata tha.
Payal rahul ka head sehlate hue
Payal : rahul mat ro tere sir mein pata nahi kiu itna dard hota rehta hai.
Mujhe kabi shamaj nahi ata.
Iske piche kya vaja hai.
Rahul ki saari sister rahul ko is dard mein dekhkar rone lagti hai.
Tabi
Sonam ( prerna se ) : prerna didi yeh rahul ko kya hua hai.
Prerna : sonam mujhe bhi nahi pata ki rahul ko kya hua hai.
Tabi rani se raha nahi jata or achanak se rani bol deti hai.
Rani ( sonam se ) : beta mujhe raat mein tumare kamre se bohot bhayanak or darawani aawaaz aa rahi thi.
Jisko sunkar mere kaan fat rahe the.
Yeh baat sunte hi sonam ko kuch yaad aa jata hai.
Or sonam bhagte hue apne kamre mein jati hai.
To dekhti hai sonam ke room ka gate tuta hua hota hai.
Or bagal mein bohot saari rakh padi hoti hai.
Or us dibbe ke charo or om ka chakra bane hote hai.
Or uski roshni bhi bohot tezz hoti hai
Or usme se black colour ki roshni nikal rahi hoti hai.
Prerna ( chillate hue ) : sonam is dibbe mein kya hai.
Magar sonam ko khud nahi pata tha ki is dibbe mein kya hai.
Sonam : mujhe nahi pata prerna didi.
Prerna : to tumare pass yeh dibba kese aya.
Sonam haklate hue bolti hai.
Sonam ( haklate hue ) : yeh dibba to mujhe divya ne diya tha.
Prerna shocked hokar
Prerna ( chillate hue ) : kya magar kab or kese
Flashback
Update 5
Jab mahakaal sunglee lu ko mar deta hai.
Or veer ko bacha leta hai.
Tabi ek ladki mahakaal se chipak kar rone lagti hai.
Yeh mahakaal se dekha nahi jata or mahakaal us ladki ko ek dibba deta hai.
Vo ladki koi or nahi divya hii thi.
Jo apne rahul ko na dekhkar mahakaal ko pakar kar ro rahi thi.
Or mahakaal vaha se chala jata hai.
Divya us dibbe ko dekhkar bohot khuss hoti hai.
Ki uske pyaar ne apni nishani di hai jab tak rahul vapas nahi aa jata.
Or divya ka khusi ka thikana nahi hota kiuki divya pyaar jo karti thi apne rahul se
Or apne rahul ki koi bhi chiz kese mana kar sakti thi.
Or mahakaal ne to khud kaha tha ki rahul tumare pass dubara jarur vapis aaega .
Or jab tak nahi ata is dibbe ko shamal kar rakhna .
Or kabi is dibbe ko akela nahi chorna.
Magar divya ko kya pata tha mahakaal ne divya ko kya shamal kar rakhne ko diya tha.
Or kya tha usme.
Magar divya khuss thi ki vo is dibbe ke sahare apne pyaar or apne jaan apne rahul ka intzaar kar legi.
Magar niyati ko kuch or hii manjhur tha.
Shayad divya ko abhi or tadapna tha
Jiske sahare divya rahul ka vapas ane ka intzaar karna chahti thi
Shayad vo bhi niyati usse chin lena chahati thi.
Isliye jaise hii divya apni bhabhi ke sath hospital gayi
Veer ko admit karwane.
Kiuki veer ki halat bohot kharab thi.
Magar kuch time ke operation ke bad veer khatre se bahar a gaya.
Doctor ( divya se ) : abhi apke bhai veer ka operation hua hai .
Or vo thik hai kuch hii time mein unko hosh aa gayega.
Divya is baat se bohot khuss ho jati hai ki uska bhai veer thik hai.
Or divya apne bhabhi ke gale lagkar.
Divya : bhabhi veer thik hai ab rona band karo mahakaal ne veer ko bacha liya.
Or fir divya apne bhabhi ke ashu pohoch deti hai.
Bhabhi ( divya se ) : tere bajase hii to divya mahakaal yaha aya hai.
Or rahul ka sabse acha dost bhi to hai veer
To mahakaal ko veer ki madad karni hii thi.
Bhabhi roni se surat banate hue
Bhabhi : nahi to mein ne rahul ke sath jo kiya uske bajase mujhe lagne laga tha ki rahul mujhse bohot nafraat karega.
Bhabhi divya ka sir sehlate hue
Bhabhi ( divya se ) : magar mujhe khussi hai ki rahul ke man mein nafraat se jyada tere liye pyaar hai divya
Or itna pyaar ki vo kisi bhi apno ko chahe hum sab ne uske sath kitna bhi bura kiya ho
Fir bhi rahul tum ko dukh me nahi dekh sakta divya
rahul or veer ki dosti hii aise thi ki mahakaal ko ana hii pada veer ko bachane.
Bhabhi ( pyaar se ) : mujhe khussi hai ki rahul abhi bhi tuzse bohot pyaar karta hai
Apni jaan se bhi jyada.
Divya : mujhe pata hai bhabhi magar mujhe yeh bhi pata tha ki rahul khatre mein hai.
Uski jaan ko bachane ke liye yeh sab karna jaruri tha.
Nahi to vo logh mere rahul ko maar dete.
Divya ( bohot rote hue ) : or yeh mein dekh nahi pati .
Mujhe rahul se bicharna manjhur tha.
Magar rahul ko marta hua dekhna nahi.
Bhabhi ( divya se pyaar se ) : jo bhi hota hai divya ache ke liye hota hai.
Acha ab jaldi ja apne bhai veer ki medicine lekar aa mein jab tak veer se mil leti hue.
Divya haa mein garden hila deti hai.
Or medicine lene divya hospital ke bahar chemist par jane lagti hai.
Magar divya ko kya pata tha ki bahar divya ki mout uska intzaar kar rahi hai.
Or divya us dibbe ko apne sine se lagae hospital ke bahar jane lagti hai.
Divya ( mann me ) : pata hai rahul mein tumse itna pyaar karti hue ki din mere ek pal aisa nahi jata jab mein ne tumko I LOVE YOU or tumari tasveer ko apne sine se lagae nahi so jati jab tak mujhe chen nahi ata mere dil tume hamesha pyaar se dekhne pyaar karne ko bol rehta hai.
Divya ( MANN ME ): I LOVE U RAHUL
i love u so much.
Tumare bina to mera yeh sarir mout ke saman hai.
Magar mein kya karu tumari jaan ke liye mujhe apne pyaar ki kurbani deni hogi.
Or jaise hii divya medicine lekar jaise hii murti hai.
Tabi
Ek shaks apni car ke aage badi badi lohe ki keel lagakar full speed mein car ko bhagate hue divya ko takkar mar deta hai.
Or divya dard bhari cheekh ke sath bolti hai.
Divya : i love you rahul
I love you
Or udate hue door jakar girti hai.
Car bohot hii jyada speed mein thi jisse divya ka pura sarir khoon se latpat ho jata hai.
Tab bhi divya us dibbe ko apne sine se lagae vahi padi hue hoti hai.
Or apni akhiri saaash le rahi hoti hai.
Or us saah mein bhi divya apne pyaar apne jaan
Ko I LOVE YOU HII bol rahi hoti hai.
Divya apni akhri saah lete hue.
Divya : rahul i love u.
Or vo shaks jisne divya ko takkar mari thi.
Vo piche mudkar dekhta hai to divya ka koi bhi reaction nahi ata.
Shaks ( mann me ) : lagta hai mar gayi.
Jitni baar mein rahul ko marne jata hamesha usko mere se bacha leti thi.
Mere raste ka sabse bada pathar ban jayi thi yeh ( divya )
To isko raste se hatana hii pada.
Or vo shaks haste hue achanak se car lekar vaha se gayab ho jata hai.
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Nisha1234
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Readers rajeev sir ne aaj bas itna hii update likha tha
Itna kaam me hone ke baad bhi rajeev sir ne yeh update diya iske liye mein khud rajeev sir ko thanks bolti hue.
Byee god mujhe to update type karte hue rona aa gaya.
Pata nahi rajeev aise update likh kese leta hai.
Inki kahani mein pyaar , emosion , mazak , romance , sab kuch hota hai
Abhi shayad dukhbara scene chal raha hai story mein.
Is liye mein inki fan hu.
Keep support rajeev se
Or ache comment karna jisse mein unko dikha saku ki unke reader unko kitna miss kar rahe hai.
Jisse vo next update jaldi de sake.
Itna kaam me hone ke baad bhi rajeev sir ne yeh update diya iske liye mein khud rajeev sir ko thanks bolti hue.
Byee god mujhe to update type karte hue rona aa gaya.
Pata nahi rajeev aise update likh kese leta hai.
Inki kahani mein pyaar , emosion , mazak , romance , sab kuch hota hai
Abhi shayad dukhbara scene chal raha hai story mein.
Is liye mein inki fan hu.
Keep support rajeev se
Or ache comment karna jisse mein unko dikha saku ki unke reader unko kitna miss kar rahe hai.
Jisse vo next update jaldi de sake.
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Super nisha ji rajvir sir ki gair hajri me bi muje matlub hume update mil raha hai apko koti koti dhanyavaad thank you nisha ji aise hi unse contact banaye rakhe or hame update dete rahiyega
Update 46
Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h aapne ki kaise Sunaina ke mom-dad safe rahe.
Kaal ki entry bhi laajwab rahi.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h aapne ki kaise Sunaina ke mom-dad safe rahe.
Kaal ki entry bhi laajwab rahi.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
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