Romance Pyar Wali Love Story ~ Written By Love1994

[Aakash.]

Finally, you have posted the first update of the story. The hero of the story is lost in his own thoughts. Hearing Ratan Singh Chaudhary's name, the bus conductor stops speaking, meaning something is secret. The heroine has not yet entered the story.
Today's update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

 

[Assassin]

Excellent starting, waiting for another update

 

[Sona]

for new story

 

[Sona]

Update 1






Ticket....... Ticket....

Ticket

Haan bhai bol kit kaa ticket kaatun tera...?

Are hero bolega k Kimme...

Yeh bus conductor tha jo abhi mujhse ticket ke bare me puch raha tha..

Par uski bate sune bager mai apne hi khayalo me khoya hua tha..

Kuch der chup rehne ke bad
Mujhe hilate huwe..

Conductor- are oo majnu sapnya main tai bahaar likadd or bata kit jaaga tu...yaa ferr bus tai bahaar fainku tannne...

Uske is tarha se mujhe hilane ke wajah se mai apne khayalo se bahar aata hu...

Aur uske taraf dekhne lagta hu,
Ek to bat ye bhi thi ki wo mujhse haryanvi me puch raha tha jo mujhe 1% se jada nahi aati

Iske bad ek bar fir wo mujhse ticket ke bare me puchta hai.
Tab main bhi usko bata deta hu ki mujhe ****** gav ka ticket dedo..

Us gav ka Naam sunke is bar wo mujhe bahut ajib najro se dekhta hai.
Par fir wo mujhe mera ticket deke aage chala jata hai..

Aur mai bhi us bat ko ignore karte hue fir se beth jata hu..
Aur mere hath me jo ring thi usko mane apne jeb me rakh di..
Aur mobile me headphone laga ke windo se bahar dubte suraj ko dekhte huwe songs sunne laga..

Thodi der bad wo Conductor fir se sab ke ticket kat kar wapas aajata hai..
Aur mere baju me jo aadmi betha tha usko utha ke khud wahi beth jata hai..
Jiska mujhe pata tab laga jab usne mujhe ek bar fir se jor se hilaya..

Pahle toh mai usko dekh kar chonk gaya ki ye yaha kaise aaya..

Par bad me jab gusse me lal hui uski aankhe dekhta hu to usse thoda darrsa lagne lagta hai ki ab maine aisa kya kardiya jo yeh mujhe is tarha gusse me ghur ghur ke dekh raha hai..
But fir bhi darte darte usko puch hi leta hu..

Mai : k.. k.. Kya hua?

Conductor : kya hua??
Abe Yeh bat toh mujhe tujhse puchni chahiye ki tujhe kya hua hai
Pencho ticket mangu tab bhi aisa hi tha
Aur ab aake bat kar raha hoon tab bhi tu kahi khoya huwa hai.
Chore teri tabiyat to thik haina..

What the... Yeh to Hindi bhi bolta hai..
Sach kehta hoon bhai log jab aap kisi dusre state me travel kar rahe ho aur agar koi banda aap se kisi strange language me bat kare
Aur fir woh khud wapas aake hindi me bat kare toh shock to lagna hi hai...

Khair...

Main: ji aisi koi bat nahi hai
Woh actually mai abhi song sun raha tha toh aapki awaj nahi suni hongi..

Yeh bat usko maine headphones dikhate huwe boli jisko dekh kar usne aisa muh banaya jese usko meri bat samajh aayi ho.
Aur ab uske gusse wala chehra bhi thik ho gaya tha jisse mai kuch normal hote huwe aage bola..

Main: wese aap kya bat karna chate the

Conductor: kuch nahi bas yahi puchna tha ki tumko ******gav kyu jana hai.
Aur kiske yaha ja rahe ho..

Main(thoda ruk kar): woh main mere ek dost ki shadi mai Jaa raha hoon.
Par aap kyun puch rahe ho..

Woh: kuch nahi chore woh main usi gav ke baju wale gavse hu toh socha ki agar tum koi pehchan wale ke rishtedar nikle to hamara safar bhi bato bato mai kat jayega
Wese tumne bataya nahi ki tum kiske yaha Jaa rahe ho?

Pahle toh usko main dekhta raha ki Yeh apna kam chodh kar mujhse kyu itna janpehchan badha raha hai..
Par fir badme kuch soch kar maine bhi usko bata diya ki main
RATAN SINGH CHOUDHARY ji ke yaha Jaa raha hu..

Jinka Naam sunke uski aankhe itni badi hogai ke maano abhi nikal kar bahar aajayengi
Fir khud ko normal karte huwe woh bolta hai

Conductor: tu.. tu..m... tum choudhary sab ke yaha Jaa rahe ho..

Uske is sawal se maine Sirf apni gardan ha mai hiladi..

Conductor(man mai): kahi Yeh wahi to nahi..
Agar aisa hai to.......

Usko is tarha khamosh dekh kar main usse puchta hun

Main: kya huwa aise kya dekh rahe ho..

Meri bat se woh apne khayalo se bahar aajata hai par woh mujhse kuch nahi kehta jo mujhe thoda ajib lagta hai..
kyu ki jo aadmi abhi mujhse khud bate kar raha tha woh yuh choudhary ka Naam sunke achanak chup baith gaya..

Par is bat par jada dhyan naa dete huwe main bhi firse window ke bahar dekhne lagta hu..

Ab tak bahar andhera bhi chane laga tha..
Aise hi thodi der mai woh firse mujhse kuch kehta hai jisse mujhe ek jhatka lagta hai..

Conductor (kadak awaj mai): chal chore ab sahi se sach sach bata ki tu choudhay ke yaha kyu Jaa raha hai..

Uske is tarha se bat karne se mai thoda chonk to gaya tha ki Yeh firse kya Keh raha hai..
but fir bhi main normal tonn mai usse bat karta hu..

Main: bataya to tha ki main unke yaha dost ki shadi mai Jaa raha hu..

Conductor(gusse se): beta tu jis dost ki shadi ki bat kar raha hai naa woh koi ladka nahi ek ladki hai..
Aur itna toh mujhe yakin hohi gaya hai ki tu waha shadi mai nahi kisi aur hi kam se Jaa rahe ho..

To be continued...

Nice update waiting for next update

 

[Pta nhi]

Nice starting

 

[The Immortal]

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[The Immortal]

Update 1






Ticket....... Ticket....

Ticket

Haan bhai bol kit kaa ticket kaatun tera...?

Are hero bolega k Kimme...

Yeh bus conductor tha jo abhi mujhse ticket ke bare me puch raha tha..

Par uski bate sune bager mai apne hi khayalo me khoya hua tha..

Kuch der chup rehne ke bad
Mujhe hilate huwe..

Conductor- are oo majnu sapnya main tai bahaar likadd or bata kit jaaga tu...yaa ferr bus tai bahaar fainku tannne...

Uske is tarha se mujhe hilane ke wajah se mai apne khayalo se bahar aata hu...

Aur uske taraf dekhne lagta hu,
Ek to bat ye bhi thi ki wo mujhse haryanvi me puch raha tha jo mujhe 1% se jada nahi aati

Iske bad ek bar fir wo mujhse ticket ke bare me puchta hai.
Tab main bhi usko bata deta hu ki mujhe ****** gav ka ticket dedo..

Us gav ka Naam sunke is bar wo mujhe bahut ajib najro se dekhta hai.
Par fir wo mujhe mera ticket deke aage chala jata hai..

Aur mai bhi us bat ko ignore karte hue fir se beth jata hu..
Aur mere hath me jo ring thi usko mane apne jeb me rakh di..
Aur mobile me headphone laga ke windo se bahar dubte suraj ko dekhte huwe songs sunne laga..

Thodi der bad wo Conductor fir se sab ke ticket kat kar wapas aajata hai..
Aur mere baju me jo aadmi betha tha usko utha ke khud wahi beth jata hai..
Jiska mujhe pata tab laga jab usne mujhe ek bar fir se jor se hilaya..

Pahle toh mai usko dekh kar chonk gaya ki ye yaha kaise aaya..

Par bad me jab gusse me lal hui uski aankhe dekhta hu to usse thoda darrsa lagne lagta hai ki ab maine aisa kya kardiya jo yeh mujhe is tarha gusse me ghur ghur ke dekh raha hai..
But fir bhi darte darte usko puch hi leta hu..

Mai : k.. k.. Kya hua?

Conductor : kya hua??
Abe Yeh bat toh mujhe tujhse puchni chahiye ki tujhe kya hua hai
Pencho ticket mangu tab bhi aisa hi tha
Aur ab aake bat kar raha hoon tab bhi tu kahi khoya huwa hai.
Chore teri tabiyat to thik haina..

What the... Yeh to Hindi bhi bolta hai..
Sach kehta hoon bhai log jab aap kisi dusre state me travel kar rahe ho aur agar koi banda aap se kisi strange language me bat kare
Aur fir woh khud wapas aake hindi me bat kare toh shock to lagna hi hai...

Khair...

Main: ji aisi koi bat nahi hai
Woh actually mai abhi song sun raha tha toh aapki awaj nahi suni hongi..

Yeh bat usko maine headphones dikhate huwe boli jisko dekh kar usne aisa muh banaya jese usko meri bat samajh aayi ho.
Aur ab uske gusse wala chehra bhi thik ho gaya tha jisse mai kuch normal hote huwe aage bola..

Main: wese aap kya bat karna chate the

Conductor: kuch nahi bas yahi puchna tha ki tumko ******gav kyu jana hai.
Aur kiske yaha ja rahe ho..

Main(thoda ruk kar): woh main mere ek dost ki shadi mai Jaa raha hoon.
Par aap kyun puch rahe ho..

Woh: kuch nahi chore woh main usi gav ke baju wale gavse hu toh socha ki agar tum koi pehchan wale ke rishtedar nikle to hamara safar bhi bato bato mai kat jayega
Wese tumne bataya nahi ki tum kiske yaha Jaa rahe ho?

Pahle toh usko main dekhta raha ki Yeh apna kam chodh kar mujhse kyu itna janpehchan badha raha hai..
Par fir badme kuch soch kar maine bhi usko bata diya ki main
RATAN SINGH CHOUDHARY ji ke yaha Jaa raha hu..

Jinka Naam sunke uski aankhe itni badi hogai ke maano abhi nikal kar bahar aajayengi
Fir khud ko normal karte huwe woh bolta hai

Conductor: tu.. tu..m... tum choudhary sab ke yaha Jaa rahe ho..

Uske is sawal se maine Sirf apni gardan ha mai hiladi..

Conductor(man mai): kahi Yeh wahi to nahi..
Agar aisa hai to.......

Usko is tarha khamosh dekh kar main usse puchta hun

Main: kya huwa aise kya dekh rahe ho..

Meri bat se woh apne khayalo se bahar aajata hai par woh mujhse kuch nahi kehta jo mujhe thoda ajib lagta hai..
kyu ki jo aadmi abhi mujhse khud bate kar raha tha woh yuh choudhary ka Naam sunke achanak chup baith gaya..

Par is bat par jada dhyan naa dete huwe main bhi firse window ke bahar dekhne lagta hu..

Ab tak bahar andhera bhi chane laga tha..
Aise hi thodi der mai woh firse mujhse kuch kehta hai jisse mujhe ek jhatka lagta hai..

Conductor (kadak awaj mai): chal chore ab sahi se sach sach bata ki tu choudhay ke yaha kyu Jaa raha hai..

Uske is tarha se bat karne se mai thoda chonk to gaya tha ki Yeh firse kya Keh raha hai..
but fir bhi main normal tonn mai usse bat karta hu..

Main: bataya to tha ki main unke yaha dost ki shadi mai Jaa raha hu..

Conductor(gusse se): beta tu jis dost ki shadi ki bat kar raha hai naa woh koi ladka nahi ek ladki hai..
Aur itna toh mujhe yakin hohi gaya hai ki tu waha shadi mai nahi kisi aur hi kam se Jaa rahe ho..

To be continued...

Suru Mai padhte hue thoda ajeeb laga , Haryanvi language thoda Kam samjh aati , update Acha hai , Ratan Singh ke naam se conductor darr Gaya ya uski izzat karta? , Kya hero sach Mai sadi Mai ja Raha hai ? Well ye toh next update Mai clear Hoga ,
Sukriya itni request Karne par story start Karne ke liye

 

[Samir]

1st update posted

Aur thanks mere dost AP 316 ka jisne haryanvi dailoge me help ki thi

Are bawa Hariyanvi to meko bhi ni aati...
But movie and YouTube se bahut had tak shikh gya hai aapun...

Bahut badhiya update diya re ju ne...

Wese conductor conductor kam Gunda jyada lg rha hai

Wese ye hero shadi me party krne jaa rha hai...

Ya ladki ko udane

 

[Naina]

first of all for new story
Brilliant update.... great going

 

[Siraj Patel]

Excellent update bhai Bahut Shandar Starting hai kahani ki,
Ye conductor Gaon aur Ratan Singh Chaudhari ka naam sunkar kyun Chaunk Gaya Aakhir kya panga Hai wahan ka..?
Aur Conductor bata raha hai Hero jis dost ki shadi mein jaa raha hai woh koi ladka nahi balki ladki hai iska matlab Apna Hero Kahin shaadi wali ladki ko bhagane Ke Chakkar Mein To Nahi Ya Kuch Aur lafda Hai.....?
Khair inka jawab to samay hi dega,
Anyway Agaz bahut badhiya hai bhai.....

4 next update_____